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Wearing shepherd hat...

I assume you'll have an updated document posted soon. Please work with =
Simon and make sure he's satisfied with the updates.

On Aug 31, 2013, at 2:21 PM, Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org> =
wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's=20
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the=20
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat=20=

> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> This (informational) document list a set of features a 3GPP device is
> supposed to be compliant with.  The document contain pointers to other
> protocols/specifications which contains the real security
> considerations for those protocols.  As such, I don't think there =
could
> be any significant security issue with this document.  Hence my take
> is that the document is Ready with nits (see below).
>=20
> A notable point is that there is no discussion or references to IPSec
> in the document, nor any of the IPv6 "bugs" (e.g., RFC 5722 and RFC
> 6946).  There may be other document that could be referenced that =
would
> lead to improved security, but it is hard to list them all.
>=20
> This document seems related to draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis which
> describe another IPv6 profile for 3GPP hosts.  The utility of having
> two different IPv6 profiles for 3GPP hosts could be discussed, but it
> is only a security issue in the marginal sense that complexity often
> leads to poor security.
>=20
> The security considerations of this document is only pointers to
> the security considerations of RFC3316bis, RFC6459, and RFC6092 which
> feels underwhelming to me -- especially since the RFC3316bis security
> consideration is for the particular profile that RFC3316bis defines.
> The security considerations of RFC3316bis wouldn't automatically apply
> to the profile defined by draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile since
> the profiles are different.
>=20
> Other notes:
>=20
> * The document uses RFC 2119 language "for precision", although I =
don't
>  understand what it means for an Informational document to contain
>  MUST languages.
>=20
> * The document really really should reference RFC 2460.
>=20
> * The security consideration contains normative text (REQ#34) that
>  typically go into the core part of a document.
>=20
> * I found REQ#32 a bit too generalized.  I believe it is common for
>  applications to be aware of whether connections are over IPv4 or IPv6
>  and behave differently.
>> REQ#32:  Applications MUST be independent of the underlying IP
>>      address family. This means applications must be IP version
>>      agnostic.
>=20
> /Simon

If at first the idea is not absurd, then there is no hope for it. =20
Albert Einstein





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Dear Simon,

Please see inline.

Cheers,
Med

>-----Message d'origine-----
>De=A0: Simon Josefsson [mailto:simon@josefsson.org]
>Envoy=E9=A0: samedi 31 ao=FBt 2013 23:21
>=C0=A0: secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-
>profile.all@tools.ietf.org
>Objet=A0: secdir review of draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile-04
>
>I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
>This (informational) document list a set of features a 3GPP device is
>supposed to be compliant with.  The document contain pointers to other
>protocols/specifications which contains the real security
>considerations for those protocols.  As such, I don't think there could
>be any significant security issue with this document.  Hence my take
>is that the document is Ready with nits (see below).

[Med] Thanks for the review.

>
>A notable point is that there is no discussion or references to IPSec

[Med] IPsec is not explicitly mentioned in this document as it is discussed=
 in these two references cited in the "Security Considerations" section: rf=
c3316bis and rfc6092. Is there any particular change you want us make in th=
e "Security Considerations" section? Thanks.

>in the document, nor any of the IPv6 "bugs" (e.g., RFC 5722 and RFC
>6946).  There may be other document that could be referenced that would
>lead to improved security, but it is hard to list them all.

[Med] We didn't included explicit references to RFC5722 and RFC6980 as thos=
e are already cited in rfc3316bis. "Security Considerations" refers explici=
tly to rfc3316bis. Is there any particular change you want us to make in "S=
ecurity Considerations" section? Thanks.

>
>This document seems related to draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis which
>describe another IPv6 profile for 3GPP hosts.  The utility of having
>two different IPv6 profiles for 3GPP hosts could be discussed, but it
>is only a security issue in the marginal sense that complexity often
>leads to poor security.
>
>The security considerations of this document is only pointers to
>the security considerations of RFC3316bis, RFC6459, and RFC6092 which
>feels underwhelming to me -- especially since the RFC3316bis security
>consideration is for the particular profile that RFC3316bis defines.
>The security considerations of RFC3316bis wouldn't automatically apply
>to the profile defined by draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile since
>the profiles are different.

[Med] The relationship between the two documents is explained in the introd=
uction; in particular:

   This document defines a different profile than the one for general
   connection to IPv6 mobile networks defined in
   [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis]; in particular:

   o  It lists an extended list of required features while
      [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] identifies issues and explains how to
      implement basic IPv6 features in a cellular context.

   o  It identifies also features to ensure IPv4 service delivery over
      an IPv6-only transport.

Because of this difference, this document points to the security considerat=
ions of rfc3316bis security section and to RFC6092 because Cellular Devices=
 with LAN capabilities are within the scope of this document.=20

>
>Other notes:
>
>* The document uses RFC 2119 language "for precision", although I don't
>  understand what it means for an Informational document to contain
>  MUST languages.

[Med] This use is not specific to this document; see for example: http://to=
ols.ietf.org/html/rfc6092#section-1.2. A note was added to the document to =
explain this usage.

>
>* The document really really should reference RFC 2460.

[Med] Done.

>
>* The security consideration contains normative text (REQ#34) that
>  typically go into the core part of a document.

[Med] I made this change:

OLD:
   The security considerations identified in [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis]
   and [RFC6459] are to be taken into account.

   REQ#34:  If the cellular device provides LAN features, it SHOULD be
          compliant with the security requirements specified in
          [RFC6092].

NEW:
   The security considerations identified in [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis]
   and [RFC6459] are to be taken into account.

   Security-related considerations that apply when the cellular device
   provides LAN features are specified in [RFC6092]. =20

RFC6092 is already called out in the core part of the document.

>
>* I found REQ#32 a bit too generalized.  I believe it is common for
>  applications to be aware of whether connections are over IPv4 or IPv6
>  and behave differently.
>   >REQ#32:  Applications MUST be independent of the underlying IP
>   >       address family. This means applications must be IP version
>   >       agnostic.
>

[Med] I agree this is a too generalized requirements. We have it on purpose=
 to encourage applications devs to avoid making assumptions on the underlyi=
ng available connectivity. FWIW, our teams tested devices that support IPv6=
 connectivity... but that embed applications which are broken when IPv6 con=
nectivity is enabled (e.g., ip address literals). An education effort is st=
ill needed to avoid this kind of brokenness.=20

>/Simon

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You wrote:

> >A notable point is that there is no discussion or references to IPSec
> 
> [Med] IPsec is not explicitly mentioned in this document as it is
> discussed in these two references cited in the "Security
> Considerations" section: rfc3316bis and rfc6092. Is there any
> particular change you want us make in the "Security Considerations"
> section? Thanks.

No -- that was a general observation.  However both rfc3316bis and
rfc6092 are informative references in your document, so what you say
above combined with...

> >in the document, nor any of the IPv6 "bugs" (e.g., RFC 5722 and RFC
> >6946).  There may be other document that could be referenced that
> >would lead to improved security, but it is hard to list them all.
> 
> [Med] We didn't included explicit references to RFC5722 and RFC6980
> as those are already cited in rfc3316bis. "Security Considerations"
> refers explicitly to rfc3316bis. Is there any particular change you
> want us to make in "Security Considerations" section? Thanks.

...what you say here makes it sounds as if rfc3316bis should be a
normative reference to me.  It seems like reading rfc3316bis is
essential to get a good understanding of this document.

> >This document seems related to draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis which
> >describe another IPv6 profile for 3GPP hosts.  The utility of having
> >two different IPv6 profiles for 3GPP hosts could be discussed, but it
> >is only a security issue in the marginal sense that complexity often
> >leads to poor security.
> >
> >The security considerations of this document is only pointers to
> >the security considerations of RFC3316bis, RFC6459, and RFC6092 which
> >feels underwhelming to me -- especially since the RFC3316bis security
> >consideration is for the particular profile that RFC3316bis defines.
> >The security considerations of RFC3316bis wouldn't automatically
> >apply to the profile defined by
> >draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile since the profiles are
> >different.
> 
> [Med] The relationship between the two documents is explained in the
> introduction; in particular:
> 
>    This document defines a different profile than the one for general
>    connection to IPv6 mobile networks defined in
>    [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis]; in particular:
> 
>    o  It lists an extended list of required features while
>       [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] identifies issues and explains how
> to implement basic IPv6 features in a cellular context.
> 
>    o  It identifies also features to ensure IPv4 service delivery over
>       an IPv6-only transport.
> 
> Because of this difference, this document points to the security
> considerations of rfc3316bis security section and to RFC6092 because
> Cellular Devices with LAN capabilities are within the scope of this
> document.

OK.

> >Other notes:
> >
> >* The document uses RFC 2119 language "for precision", although I
> >don't
> >  understand what it means for an Informational document to contain
> >  MUST languages.
> 
> [Med] This use is not specific to this document; see for example:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6092#section-1.2. A note was added to
> the document to explain this usage.

OK.

> >* The document really really should reference RFC 2460.
> 
> [Med] Done.

Thanks.  Having a normative reference to 2460 also takes care of my
concern about not referring to RFC 5722 and RFC 6946.

> [Med] I made this change:
> 
> OLD:
>    The security considerations identified in
> [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] and [RFC6459] are to be taken into
> account.
> 
>    REQ#34:  If the cellular device provides LAN features, it SHOULD be
>           compliant with the security requirements specified in
>           [RFC6092].
> 
> NEW:
>    The security considerations identified in
> [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] and [RFC6459] are to be taken into
> account.
> 
>    Security-related considerations that apply when the cellular device
>    provides LAN features are specified in [RFC6092].  
> 
> RFC6092 is already called out in the core part of the document.

Thanks, this seems clearer to me.

> >* I found REQ#32 a bit too generalized.  I believe it is common for
> >  applications to be aware of whether connections are over IPv4 or
> > IPv6 and behave differently.
> >   >REQ#32:  Applications MUST be independent of the underlying IP
> >   >       address family. This means applications must be IP version
> >   >       agnostic.
> >
> 
> [Med] I agree this is a too generalized requirements. We have it on
> purpose to encourage applications devs to avoid making assumptions on
> the underlying available connectivity. FWIW, our teams tested devices
> that support IPv6 connectivity... but that embed applications which
> are broken when IPv6 connectivity is enabled (e.g., ip address
> literals). An education effort is still needed to avoid this kind of
> brokenness. 

I understand and completely agree!

/Simon

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I reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=20
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These=20
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area=20
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments=20
just like any other last call comments.

This document provides a framework to allow the development of=20
protocol extensions to support Generalized Multi-Protocol Label=20
Switching (GMPLS) and Path Computation Element (PCE) control of=20
Optical Transport Networks (OTN) as specified in ITU-T Recommendation=20
G.709. It's part of a group of four documents pertaining to G.709
that are all proceeding through the IESG.

Because I know little about GMPLS, PCE, OTN, or G.709, I found
this document to be a bit hard to understand. Probably if I read
all the references, I might understand it better. I'm afraid that
I don't have time for that.

I did review the Security Considerations section and found it
to be easy to understand. This section states that the threats
posed by an enhanced OTN control plane are no greater than the
threats posed by the existing, simpler OTN control plane. That
seems reasonable. In addition, the Security Considerations
section points to RFC 5920, which contains a thorough analysis
of the threats that may be mounted against MPLS/GMPLS networks
and the countermeasures that may be employed against these
threats. The threats and countermeasures described in RFC 5920
seem to be broad enough to encompass any additional issues
raised by this document.

My conclusion is that, within my limited scope of understanding
of this document, the Security Considerations section is adequate
and there are no troubling issues from a security perspective.

Thanks,

Steve



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Hi Simon,

Ok to move rfc3316bis to the normative references.=20

I implemented all the changes we agreed. FWIW, I will send you a message wh=
en the new revision is available online.

Many thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Cheers,
Med

>-----Message d'origine-----
>De=A0: Simon Josefsson [mailto:simon@josefsson.org]
>Envoy=E9=A0: lundi 2 septembre 2013 16:31
>=C0=A0: BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
>Cc=A0: secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-
>profile.all@tools.ietf.org
>Objet=A0: Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile-04
>
>You wrote:
>
>> >A notable point is that there is no discussion or references to IPSec
>>
>> [Med] IPsec is not explicitly mentioned in this document as it is
>> discussed in these two references cited in the "Security
>> Considerations" section: rfc3316bis and rfc6092. Is there any
>> particular change you want us make in the "Security Considerations"
>> section? Thanks.
>
>No -- that was a general observation.  However both rfc3316bis and
>rfc6092 are informative references in your document, so what you say
>above combined with...
>
>> >in the document, nor any of the IPv6 "bugs" (e.g., RFC 5722 and RFC
>> >6946).  There may be other document that could be referenced that
>> >would lead to improved security, but it is hard to list them all.
>>
>> [Med] We didn't included explicit references to RFC5722 and RFC6980
>> as those are already cited in rfc3316bis. "Security Considerations"
>> refers explicitly to rfc3316bis. Is there any particular change you
>> want us to make in "Security Considerations" section? Thanks.
>
>...what you say here makes it sounds as if rfc3316bis should be a
>normative reference to me.  It seems like reading rfc3316bis is
>essential to get a good understanding of this document.
>
>> >This document seems related to draft-ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis which
>> >describe another IPv6 profile for 3GPP hosts.  The utility of having
>> >two different IPv6 profiles for 3GPP hosts could be discussed, but it
>> >is only a security issue in the marginal sense that complexity often
>> >leads to poor security.
>> >
>> >The security considerations of this document is only pointers to
>> >the security considerations of RFC3316bis, RFC6459, and RFC6092 which
>> >feels underwhelming to me -- especially since the RFC3316bis security
>> >consideration is for the particular profile that RFC3316bis defines.
>> >The security considerations of RFC3316bis wouldn't automatically
>> >apply to the profile defined by
>> >draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile since the profiles are
>> >different.
>>
>> [Med] The relationship between the two documents is explained in the
>> introduction; in particular:
>>
>>    This document defines a different profile than the one for general
>>    connection to IPv6 mobile networks defined in
>>    [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis]; in particular:
>>
>>    o  It lists an extended list of required features while
>>       [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] identifies issues and explains how
>> to implement basic IPv6 features in a cellular context.
>>
>>    o  It identifies also features to ensure IPv4 service delivery over
>>       an IPv6-only transport.
>>
>> Because of this difference, this document points to the security
>> considerations of rfc3316bis security section and to RFC6092 because
>> Cellular Devices with LAN capabilities are within the scope of this
>> document.
>
>OK.
>
>> >Other notes:
>> >
>> >* The document uses RFC 2119 language "for precision", although I
>> >don't
>> >  understand what it means for an Informational document to contain
>> >  MUST languages.
>>
>> [Med] This use is not specific to this document; see for example:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6092#section-1.2. A note was added to
>> the document to explain this usage.
>
>OK.
>
>> >* The document really really should reference RFC 2460.
>>
>> [Med] Done.
>
>Thanks.  Having a normative reference to 2460 also takes care of my
>concern about not referring to RFC 5722 and RFC 6946.
>
>> [Med] I made this change:
>>
>> OLD:
>>    The security considerations identified in
>> [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] and [RFC6459] are to be taken into
>> account.
>>
>>    REQ#34:  If the cellular device provides LAN features, it SHOULD be
>>           compliant with the security requirements specified in
>>           [RFC6092].
>>
>> NEW:
>>    The security considerations identified in
>> [I-D.ietf-v6ops-rfc3316bis] and [RFC6459] are to be taken into
>> account.
>>
>>    Security-related considerations that apply when the cellular device
>>    provides LAN features are specified in [RFC6092].
>>
>> RFC6092 is already called out in the core part of the document.
>
>Thanks, this seems clearer to me.
>
>> >* I found REQ#32 a bit too generalized.  I believe it is common for
>> >  applications to be aware of whether connections are over IPv4 or
>> > IPv6 and behave differently.
>> >   >REQ#32:  Applications MUST be independent of the underlying IP
>> >   >       address family. This means applications must be IP version
>> >   >       agnostic.
>> >
>>
>> [Med] I agree this is a too generalized requirements. We have it on
>> purpose to encourage applications devs to avoid making assumptions on
>> the underlying available connectivity. FWIW, our teams tested devices
>> that support IPv6 connectivity... but that embed applications which
>> are broken when IPv6 connectivity is enabled (e.g., ip address
>> literals). An education effort is still needed to avoid this kind of
>> brokenness.
>
>I understand and completely agree!
>
>/Simon

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On 25 July 2013 17:02, Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi> wrote:

> Ben Laurie             T 2013-07-25 draft-ietf-emu-crypto-bind-04


I managed to miss this one, and I see it has now timed out, but perhaps
worth mentioning, even at this late date, that the existence of this I-D
seems to suggest that the protocols they're attempting to fix are badly
broken and should never have been standardised!

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Ben Laurie <benl@google.com> writes:

> On 25 July 2013 17:02, Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi> wrote:
>
>     Ben Laurie =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 T 2013-07-25 dra=
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> I managed to miss this one, and I see it has now timed out, but perhaps w=
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> suggest that the protocols they're attempting to fix are badly broken and
> should never have been standardised!

That was a fight we lost a long time ago.  This happened so long ago Jeff
Schiller was still SecAD.

-derek
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

The Security Consideration section of this draft is fine, considering
how high-level this document is, but I think there are some problems
in the rest of the document as indicated below.

This high-level document describes a general architecture for a
reputation-based service and a model for requesting reputation-related
data over the Internet.

Minor Problems:

Section 1:
  The last sentence of the first paragraph could be read to imply that
lack of authentication is the primary cause of spam. In this era of
botnets, I don't think that's true. Perhaps "... leads to spam,
phishing, and other attacks." should say "... makes spam, phishing,
and other attacks even easier than they would otherwise be." or
something like that.

Section 4.1.1:
  My guess is that the values of a "Rating" are floating point in the
range 0.0 to 1.0 but it doesn't actually say that... If so, why isn't
the example "1.0" said to indicate "exact agreement" or the like
instead of "strong agreement"? Would 2.0 indicate "very strong
agreement".

Section 4.2:
  It appears that "Reputon" and "Response Set" are the same thing. Is
that true? If so, my personal opinion is that, while the word
"Reputon" may be cute, it should just be tossed as superfluous.

Section 5:
  This section seems in some ways like the heart of the document but
is also seems a bit blurry. Even at a high level, I would think that
there could be an explicit cardinality associated with these bullet
items. That is, it should say for each (or for all in the case it is
the same for all of them) if they can be omitted, whether or not they
must occur at least once, and if they can occur multiple times.
  Is "application context" the same as what quality is being rated? I
would think not. For example, couldn't the application be "restaurant
recommendation" and then couldn't there be, say, four ratings, one for
food quality, one for price, one for decor, and one for service? If
so, why isn't what the rating measures an additional bullet item or
part of the rating score item? On the other hand, the rating score
item says "overall rating score" implying there can only be one...

Section 6:
  Suddenly, in this section, for the first time, we have the
capitalized word "Target". Why isn't this defined in Section 4 on
terminology and definitions? I suppose it means something like the
pair of identity of the entity being rated and the application
context?

Trivia:

Section 1:
  In paragraph 3 the definition of "reputation" uses the word
"estimation" in an uncommon way that might confuse some readers. I
think it could use something like the word "esteem" instead. The word
"opinion" could also be used but would require minor corresponding
changes. This occurs within quoted text that looks like it is copied
from somewhere else. If so, shouldn't that source be referenced?

Section3:
  The Figure 1 footer should be on the same page as the figure.

Section 4.1:
  In the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph at the end of page 7, I
would strongly prefer "specify" to "define" but that might be a
personal quirk.

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Review instructions and related resources are at:
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Sandy Murphy is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2013-09-12

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Dave Cridland          T 2013-08-29 draft-ietf-repute-email-identifiers-09
Alan DeKok             T 2013-08-29 draft-ietf-repute-media-type-11
Phillip Hallam-Baker   TR2013-09-02 draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-19
Paul Hoffman           TR2013-07-16 draft-ivov-xmpp-cusax-07
Jeffrey Hutzelman      T 2013-09-03 draft-ietf-mpls-targeted-mldp-04
Leif Johansson         T 2013-09-03 draft-ietf-pim-rfc4601-update-survey-report-02
Vincent Roca           T 2013-08-21 draft-ietf-mpls-tp-mip-mep-map-09
Sam Weiler             T 2013-08-17 draft-ietf-homenet-arch-10


For telechat 2013-09-26

Carl Wallace           T 2013-08-16 draft-ietf-dime-overload-reqs-11

Last calls and special requests:

Rob Austein              2012-09-20 draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-11
Rob Austein              2013-08-29 draft-ietf-netext-update-notifications-08
Dave Cridland            -          draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-23
Dave Cridland            -          draft-dunbar-armd-arp-nd-scaling-practices-07
Alan DeKok               2013-03-30 draft-ietf-roll-terminology-12
Dan Harkins              2013-09-02 draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11
Sam Hartman              2013-09-03 draft-ietf-mediactrl-call-flows-13
Jeffrey Hutzelman        2013-07-16 draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-04
Jeffrey Hutzelman        -          draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-04
Scott Kelly              2013-09-16 draft-kelsey-intarea-mesh-link-establishment-05
Tero Kivinen             2013-09-24 draft-cotton-rfc4020bis-01
Warren Kumari            2013-09-19 draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-security-options-06
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-08
Julien Laganier          2013-09-17 draft-ietf-ccamp-swcaps-update-03
Ben Laurie               2013-09-23 draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-03
Matt Lepinski            2013-09-24 draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05
Catherine Meadows        2013-09-23 draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14
Alexey Melnikov          -          draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-05
Alexey Melnikov          2013-09-23 draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-impl-survey-results-02
Kathleen Moriarty        2013-10-01 draft-resnick-retire-std1-00
Ondrej Sury              2013-08-16 draft-nandakumar-rtcweb-stun-uri-06
David Waltermire         -          draft-ietf-repute-considerations-02
Sam Weiler               2013-04-26 draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses-13
Brian Weis               -          draft-ietf-radext-dtls-06
Glen Zorn                2012-11-27 draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-05
Glen Zorn                2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-03
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document is an implementation report for PIM-SM to provide 
supporting documentation for progressing PIM-SM to Internet Standard.

Note: I am in no way an expert on multicast.

Nit: The document is inconsistent when it comes to spelling out 
abbreviations, eg RP is never spelled out.

The only other comment I have is that the security considerations
section says "no implications" while 2.4 argues for the removal of 
PMBR which features in the security implications section of RFC4601. 

I don't know if the removal of PMBR makes things better or worse
but the security considerations section maybe should provide a
word or two of comment on this.

	Cheers Leif



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Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

--

This document refers to [RFC6371] and [RFC6941] for detailed security
discussions. I have no problem with that. However I have two comments:

1/ It says:
   "Implementations therefore are required to offer security mechanisms
    for OAM.  Deployments are strongly advised to use such mechanisms."
These sentences do not use the RFC2119 key words. Is that deliberate?

2/ I really have problems understanding the following claim:
   "Mixing of per-node and per-interface OAM on a single node is not
   advised as OAM message leakage could be the result."
Can you be more explicit in the I-D? It's important since it's probably not
discussed in [RFC6371] and [RFC6941].


Minor comments:

** MEP is used without being defined. 


Cheers,


  Vincent

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Hi Vincent,

Thanks for your time.

> This document refers to [RFC6371] and [RFC6941] for detailed security
> discussions. I have no problem with that. However I have two comments:
> 
> 1/ It says:
>    "Implementations therefore are required to offer security mechanisms
>     for OAM.  Deployments are strongly advised to use such mechanisms."
> These sentences do not use the RFC2119 key words. Is that deliberate?

Yes.
This is an Informational and Design Considerations document, not a protocol
spec.
The normal English language seemed perfectly fine for conveying the consensus of
the WG.

> 2/ I really have problems understanding the following claim:
>    "Mixing of per-node and per-interface OAM on a single node is not
>    advised as OAM message leakage could be the result."
> Can you be more explicit in the I-D? It's important since it's probably not
> discussed in [RFC6371] and [RFC6941].

It seemed to the authors (and the WG - in fact, I recall this text coming from
the WG review) that an implementation that attempts to handle per interface OAM
and per node OAM is almost certain to get confused and send the wrong OAM
messages at the wrong time.

I would not go as far as to suggest that the quoted text is particularly
important, and the only way I can think to clarify it would be by adding "unless
an implementation is particularly well designed and tested."

> Minor comments:
> 
> ** MEP is used without being defined.

You're right! 
Amazed that it slipped through. Thanks.

Cheers,
Adrian


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Hi Donald, thanks for your comments.  Replies inline.

On Tue, Sep 3, 2013 at 7:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> Minor Problems:
>
> Section 1:
>   The last sentence of the first paragraph could be read to imply that
> lack of authentication is the primary cause of spam. In this era of
> botnets, I don't think that's true. Perhaps "... leads to spam,
> phishing, and other attacks." should say "... makes spam, phishing,
> and other attacks even easier than they would otherwise be." or
> something like that.
>

OK.

Section 4.1.1:
>   My guess is that the values of a "Rating" are floating point in the
> range 0.0 to 1.0 but it doesn't actually say that... If so, why isn't
> the example "1.0" said to indicate "exact agreement" or the like
> instead of "strong agreement"? Would 2.0 indicate "very strong
> agreement".
>

Right, the range is actually spelled out in the media-type document, where
ABNF is provided.  I'll add that here as well.


> Section 5:
>   This section seems in some ways like the heart of the document but
> is also seems a bit blurry. Even at a high level, I would think that
> there could be an explicit cardinality associated with these bullet
> items. That is, it should say for each (or for all in the case it is
> the same for all of them) if they can be omitted, whether or not they
> must occur at least once, and if they can occur multiple times.
>

I've added "at least the following data" since a basic response will
include all of those.  Additional values might be present in a response
within a given application space.  This is spelled out more normatively in
the media-type document.


>   Is "application context" the same as what quality is being rated? I
> would think not. For example, couldn't the application be "restaurant
> recommendation" and then couldn't there be, say, four ratings, one for
> food quality, one for price, one for decor, and one for service? If
> so, why isn't what the rating measures an additional bullet item or
> part of the rating score item? On the other hand, the rating score
> item says "overall rating score" implying there can only be one...
>

In your hypothetical example, the application context would be
"restaurant", and the assertions possible would be "food-quality", "price",
"decor", and "service".  A different rating would be returned for each of
those, as requested by the client.


>
> Section 6:
>   Suddenly, in this section, for the first time, we have the
> capitalized word "Target". Why isn't this defined in Section 4 on
> terminology and definitions? I suppose it means something like the
> pair of identity of the entity being rated and the application
> context?
>

We don't use "Target" anywhere else, but rather use "subject", so I've
changed it to that and de-capitalized all of them.  There's no need to
introduce a new term so late in the document.


> Trivia:
>
> Section 1:
>   In paragraph 3 the definition of "reputation" uses the word
> "estimation" in an uncommon way that might confuse some readers. I
> think it could use something like the word "esteem" instead. The word
> "opinion" could also be used but would require minor corresponding
> changes. This occurs within quoted text that looks like it is copied
> from somewhere else. If so, shouldn't that source be referenced?
>

I got it from a dictionary, namely
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/reputation. It looks like that's
based on the 2013 Random House dictionary.  I'll add a citation.


>
> Section3:
>   The Figure 1 footer should be on the same page as the figure.
>

Is there a way to force that in xml2rfc?


>
> Section 4.1:
>   In the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph at the end of page 7, I
> would strongly prefer "specify" to "define" but that might be a
> personal quirk.
>

Done.

Thanks again,

-MSK

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<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi Donald, thanks for your comments.=A0 Replies inline.<br=
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013 at 7:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:d3e=
3e3@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">d3e3e3@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Minor Problems:<br>
<br>
Section 1:<br>
=A0 The last sentence of the first paragraph could be read to imply that<br=
>
lack of authentication is the primary cause of spam. In this era of<br>
botnets, I don&#39;t think that&#39;s true. Perhaps &quot;... leads to spam=
,<br>
phishing, and other attacks.&quot; should say &quot;... makes spam, phishin=
g,<br>
and other attacks even easier than they would otherwise be.&quot; or<br>
something like that.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>OK.<br><br></div><=
blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px=
 #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
Section 4.1.1:<br>
=A0 My guess is that the values of a &quot;Rating&quot; are floating point =
in the<br>
range 0.0 to 1.0 but it doesn&#39;t actually say that... If so, why isn&#39=
;t<br>
the example &quot;1.0&quot; said to indicate &quot;exact agreement&quot; or=
 the like<br>
instead of &quot;strong agreement&quot;? Would 2.0 indicate &quot;very stro=
ng<br>
agreement&quot;.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Right, the range is ac=
tually spelled out in the media-type document, where ABNF is provided.=A0 I=
&#39;ll add that here as well. <br></div></div><div class=3D"gmail_quote">
<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" styl=
e=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<br>
Section 5:<br>
=A0 This section seems in some ways like the heart of the document but<br>
is also seems a bit blurry. Even at a high level, I would think that<br>
there could be an explicit cardinality associated with these bullet<br>
items. That is, it should say for each (or for all in the case it is<br>
the same for all of them) if they can be omitted, whether or not they<br>
must occur at least once, and if they can occur multiple times.<br></blockq=
uote><div><br></div><div>I&#39;ve added &quot;at least the following data&q=
uot; since a basic response will include all of those.=A0 Additional values=
 might be present in a response within a given application space.=A0 This i=
s spelled out more normatively in the media-type document.<br>
</div><div>=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0=
 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
=A0 Is &quot;application context&quot; the same as what quality is being ra=
ted? I<br>
would think not. For example, couldn&#39;t the application be &quot;restaur=
ant<br>
recommendation&quot; and then couldn&#39;t there be, say, four ratings, one=
 for<br>
food quality, one for price, one for decor, and one for service? If<br>
so, why isn&#39;t what the rating measures an additional bullet item or<br>
part of the rating score item? On the other hand, the rating score<br>
item says &quot;overall rating score&quot; implying there can only be one..=
.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>In your hypothetical example, the app=
lication context would be &quot;restaurant&quot;, and the assertions possib=
le would be &quot;food-quality&quot;, &quot;price&quot;, &quot;decor&quot;,=
 and &quot;service&quot;.=A0 A different rating would be returned for each =
of those, as requested by the client.<br>
=A0 <br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;=
border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<br>
Section 6:<br>
=A0 Suddenly, in this section, for the first time, we have the<br>
capitalized word &quot;Target&quot;. Why isn&#39;t this defined in Section =
4 on<br>
terminology and definitions? I suppose it means something like the<br>
pair of identity of the entity being rated and the application<br>
context?<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>We don&#39;t use &quot;Target&=
quot; anywhere else, but rather use &quot;subject&quot;, so I&#39;ve change=
d it to that and de-capitalized all of them.=A0 There&#39;s no need to intr=
oduce a new term so late in the document.<br>
<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;bord=
er-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<br>
Trivia:<br>
<br>
Section 1:<br>
=A0 In paragraph 3 the definition of &quot;reputation&quot; uses the word<b=
r>
&quot;estimation&quot; in an uncommon way that might confuse some readers. =
I<br>
think it could use something like the word &quot;esteem&quot; instead. The =
word<br>
&quot;opinion&quot; could also be used but would require minor correspondin=
g<br>
changes. This occurs within quoted text that looks like it is copied<br>
from somewhere else. If so, shouldn&#39;t that source be referenced?<br></b=
lockquote><div><br></div><div>I got it from a dictionary, namely <a href=3D=
"http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/reputation">http://dictionary.refer=
ence.com/browse/reputation</a>. It looks like that&#39;s based on the 2013 =
Random House dictionary.=A0 I&#39;ll add a citation.<br>
=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;b=
order-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<br>
Section3:<br>
=A0 The Figure 1 footer should be on the same page as the figure.<br></bloc=
kquote><div><br></div><div>Is there a way to force that in xml2rfc?<br>=A0<=
br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;borde=
r-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">

<br>
Section 4.1:<br>
=A0 In the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph at the end of page 7, I<br>
would strongly prefer &quot;specify&quot; to &quot;define&quot; but that mi=
ght be a<br>
personal quirk.<br>
</blockquote></div><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">Done.<br><br></div>=
<div class=3D"gmail_extra">Thanks again,<br><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_e=
xtra">-MSK<br></div></div>

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Hi Murray,

Thanks, for the response. It looks good.

On Sat, Sep 7, 2013 at 5:57 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Donald, thanks for your comments.  Replies inline.
>
> On Tue, Sep 3, 2013 at 7:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Minor Problems:
>>
>> Section 1:
>>   The last sentence of the first paragraph could be read to imply that
>> lack of authentication is the primary cause of spam. In this era of
>> botnets, I don't think that's true. Perhaps "... leads to spam,
>> phishing, and other attacks." should say "... makes spam, phishing,
>> and other attacks even easier than they would otherwise be." or
>> something like that.
>
>
> OK.
>
>> Section 4.1.1:
>>   My guess is that the values of a "Rating" are floating point in the
>> range 0.0 to 1.0 but it doesn't actually say that... If so, why isn't
>> the example "1.0" said to indicate "exact agreement" or the like
>> instead of "strong agreement"? Would 2.0 indicate "very strong
>> agreement".
>
>
> Right, the range is actually spelled out in the media-type document, where
> ABNF is provided.  I'll add that here as well.
>
>>
>> Section 5:
>>   This section seems in some ways like the heart of the document but
>> is also seems a bit blurry. Even at a high level, I would think that
>> there could be an explicit cardinality associated with these bullet
>> items. That is, it should say for each (or for all in the case it is
>> the same for all of them) if they can be omitted, whether or not they
>> must occur at least once, and if they can occur multiple times.
>
>
> I've added "at least the following data" since a basic response will include
> all of those.  Additional values might be present in a response within a
> given application space.  This is spelled out more normatively in the
> media-type document.
>
>>
>>   Is "application context" the same as what quality is being rated? I
>> would think not. For example, couldn't the application be "restaurant
>> recommendation" and then couldn't there be, say, four ratings, one for
>> food quality, one for price, one for decor, and one for service? If
>> so, why isn't what the rating measures an additional bullet item or
>> part of the rating score item? On the other hand, the rating score
>> item says "overall rating score" implying there can only be one...
>
>
> In your hypothetical example, the application context would be "restaurant",
> and the assertions possible would be "food-quality", "price", "decor", and
> "service".  A different rating would be returned for each of those, as
> requested by the client.
>
>>
>>
>> Section 6:
>>   Suddenly, in this section, for the first time, we have the
>> capitalized word "Target". Why isn't this defined in Section 4 on
>> terminology and definitions? I suppose it means something like the
>> pair of identity of the entity being rated and the application
>> context?
>
>
> We don't use "Target" anywhere else, but rather use "subject", so I've
> changed it to that and de-capitalized all of them.  There's no need to
> introduce a new term so late in the document.
>
>>
>> Trivia:
>>
>> Section 1:
>>   In paragraph 3 the definition of "reputation" uses the word
>> "estimation" in an uncommon way that might confuse some readers. I
>> think it could use something like the word "esteem" instead. The word
>> "opinion" could also be used but would require minor corresponding
>> changes. This occurs within quoted text that looks like it is copied
>> from somewhere else. If so, shouldn't that source be referenced?
>
>
> I got it from a dictionary, namely
> http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/reputation. It looks like that's
> based on the 2013 Random House dictionary.  I'll add a citation.
>
>> Section3:
>>   The Figure 1 footer should be on the same page as the figure.
>
>
> Is there a way to force that in xml2rfc?

I don't know. I use nroff where it is simple to do such things.

>> Section 4.1:
>>   In the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph at the end of page 7, I
>> would strongly prefer "specify" to "define" but that might be a
>> personal quirk.
>
>
> Done.

Thanks,
Donald
=============================
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> Thanks again,
>
> -MSK

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Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

--

Most pseudowire Emulation Edge-to-Edge (PWE3) encapsulations mandate
the use of the Control Word (CW) to carry information essential to
the emulation, to inhibit Equal-Cost Multipath (ECMP) behavior, and
to discriminate Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM)
from Pseudowire (PW) packets.  However, some encapsulations treat the
Control Word as optional.  As a result, implementations of the CW,
for encapsulations for which it is optional, vary by equipment
manufacturer, equipment model and service provider network.
Similarly, Virtual Circuit Connectivity Verification (VCCV) supports
three Control Channel (CC) types and multiple Connectivity
Verification (CV) Types.  This flexibility has led to reports of
interoperability issues within deployed networks and associated
drafts to attempt to remedy the situation.  This survey of the PW/
VCCV user community was conducted to determine implementation trends.
The survey and results are presented in this document.

As the document is a survey of what existing implementations do in this 
area, I agree with editors that it doesn't introduce new security concerns.
Editors also clarified that they took precautions to ensure the validity 
of the sample and the data, in particular they verified email addresses 
of respondents and that they are representing different companies, not 
including equipment vendors.
I don't have any concerns about security considerations for this document.

With no disrespect to document editors, the WG and the shepherding AD, I 
am however concerns that this document doesn't contain information that 
is useful for publishing as an RFC. I would be happy to be proven wrong 
on this.

Best Regards,
Alexey

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

This document describes the limitations of the existing Diameter overload
mechanisms and provides requirements for new overload management
mechanisms.  The document is very well written and clear.  I had just two
comments:

1) The last sentence of Requirement 13 is a bit hard to parse.

2) Requirement 31 requires indication of overload at specified
granularities (realm, application, node).  Should overload status
mechanisms have similar granularity requirements (see requirements 10 or
24)?



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Hi Carl,

Thanks for taking the time to look at this and provide comments.

For your first comment, we think it would be fine to drop the last =
sentence of requirement 13 to avoid confusion.  It is not necessary.

For your second, are you asking if the load levels in req 24 should have =
granularity requirements?  It may make sense for a load metric to have =
similar granularity to the overload information, but the thinking was =
that the load metric may be used in different ways and we did not want =
to constrain it.

I'm a bit lost on how requirement 10 would relate to this though.  Can =
you please elaborate a bit on the question?

Thanks!

Eric


On Sep 8, 2013, at 13:46 , Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> =
wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the =
IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area
> directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments =
just
> like any other last call comments.
>=20
> This document describes the limitations of the existing Diameter =
overload
> mechanisms and provides requirements for new overload management
> mechanisms.  The document is very well written and clear.  I had just =
two
> comments:
>=20
> 1) The last sentence of Requirement 13 is a bit hard to parse.
>=20
> 2) Requirement 31 requires indication of overload at specified
> granularities (realm, application, node).  Should overload status
> mechanisms have similar granularity requirements (see requirements 10 =
or
> 24)?
>=20
>=20


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On 9/9/13 8:41 PM, "Eric McMurry" <emcmurry@computer.org> wrote:

>Hi Carl,
>
>Thanks for taking the time to look at this and provide comments.
>
>For your first comment, we think it would be fine to drop the last
>sentence of requirement 13 to avoid confusion.  It is not necessary.
>
>For your second, are you asking if the load levels in req 24 should have
>granularity requirements?  It may make sense for a load metric to have
>similar granularity to the overload information, but the thinking was
>that the load metric may be used in different ways and we did not want to
>constrain it.
>
>I'm a bit lost on how requirement 10 would relate to this though.  Can
>you please elaborate a bit on the question?

Requirement 31 states:

"The solution MUST allow Diameter nodes to indicate overload with
sufficient granularity to allow clients to take action based on the
overloaded resources without unreasonably forcing available capacity to go
unused.  The solution MUST support specification of overload information
with granularities of at least "Diameter node", "realm", and "Diameter
application", and MUST allow extensibility for others to be added in the
future."

Requirement 10 states:

"Consumers of overload information MUST be able to determine when the
overload condition improves or ends"

My question was, must consumers of overload information be able to
determine when the overload condition <for some specified granularity>
improves or ends?   Requirement 10 seems to be addressing a type of action
a client may take based on granular information provided under requirement
31.  

More or less the same question applied to 24 as well, maybe not as an
action following overload as in requirement 10 but perhaps as an action
with similar granular needs.


>
>Thanks!
>
>Eric
>
>
>On Sep 8, 2013, at 13:46 , Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> wrote:
>
>> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
>>area
>> directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
>>just
>> like any other last call comments.
>> 
>> This document describes the limitations of the existing Diameter
>>overload
>> mechanisms and provides requirements for new overload management
>> mechanisms.  The document is very well written and clear.  I had just
>>two
>> comments:
>> 
>> 1) The last sentence of Requirement 13 is a bit hard to parse.
>> 
>> 2) Requirement 31 requires indication of overload at specified
>> granularities (realm, application, node).  Should overload status
>> mechanisms have similar granularity requirements (see requirements 10 or
>> 24)?
>> 
>> 
>



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>
>
>
>The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That is, the
>overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some granularity,
>and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the granularity. We
>don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the granularity
>of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution from
>offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it would
>involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one condition
>and starting another.)

Got it.  Thanks.  



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Folks,

So if I got it right, the last sentence of the Req13 will be removed and
the Req31 stays as it is now.

This would be fine with me.

- JOuni

On Sep 10, 2013, at 4:27 AM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> wrote:

>> 
>> 
>> 
>> The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That is, the
>> overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some granularity,
>> and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the granularity. We
>> don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the granularity
>> of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution from
>> offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it would
>> involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one condition
>> and starting another.)
> 
> Got it.  Thanks.  
> 
> 


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that matches what I came away with.  How would you like us to address =
that?


On Sep 9, 2013, at 22:22 , Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> =
wrote:

>=20
> Folks,
>=20
> So if I got it right, the last sentence of the Req13 will be removed =
and
> the Req31 stays as it is now.
>=20
> This would be fine with me.
>=20
> - JOuni
>=20
> On Sep 10, 2013, at 4:27 AM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> =
wrote:
>=20
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>> The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That is, =
the
>>> overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some =
granularity,
>>> and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the granularity. =
We
>>> don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the =
granularity
>>> of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution =
from
>>> offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it =
would
>>> involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one =
condition
>>> and starting another.)
>>=20
>> Got it.  Thanks. =20
>>=20
>>=20
>=20


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I would note down the change but implement/submit a revision after we =
get
the rest of the IESG comments (the doc is in next week's telechat). =
That's
because ADs (and others) are now reading the -11.

- Jouni


On Sep 10, 2013, at 6:24 AM, Eric McMurry <emcmurry@computer.org> wrote:

> that matches what I came away with.  How would you like us to address =
that?
>=20
>=20
> On Sep 9, 2013, at 22:22 , Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> =
wrote:
>=20
>>=20
>> Folks,
>>=20
>> So if I got it right, the last sentence of the Req13 will be removed =
and
>> the Req31 stays as it is now.
>>=20
>> This would be fine with me.
>>=20
>> - JOuni
>>=20
>> On Sep 10, 2013, at 4:27 AM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> =
wrote:
>>=20
>>>>=20
>>>>=20
>>>>=20
>>>> The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That =
is, the
>>>> overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some =
granularity,
>>>> and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the =
granularity. We
>>>> don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the =
granularity
>>>> of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution =
from
>>>> offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it =
would
>>>> involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one =
condition
>>>> and starting another.)
>>>=20
>>> Got it.  Thanks. =20
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>=20
>=20


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Actually, it might be better to quickly publish a new version (as 
opposed to me writing down a RFC editor note), because the IESG is still 
busy reading the document for this Thursday telechat.

Regards, Benoit
> I would note down the change but implement/submit a revision after we get
> the rest of the IESG comments (the doc is in next week's telechat). That's
> because ADs (and others) are now reading the -11.
>
> - Jouni
>
>
> On Sep 10, 2013, at 6:24 AM, Eric McMurry <emcmurry@computer.org> wrote:
>
>> that matches what I came away with.  How would you like us to address that?
>>
>>
>> On Sep 9, 2013, at 22:22 , Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Folks,
>>>
>>> So if I got it right, the last sentence of the Req13 will be removed and
>>> the Req31 stays as it is now.
>>>
>>> This would be fine with me.
>>>
>>> - JOuni
>>>
>>> On Sep 10, 2013, at 4:27 AM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That is, the
>>>>> overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some granularity,
>>>>> and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the granularity. We
>>>>> don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the granularity
>>>>> of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution from
>>>>> offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it would
>>>>> involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one condition
>>>>> and starting another.)
>>>> Got it.  Thanks.
>>>>
>>>>
>
>


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes (or updates) the process for early allocation
of code points by IANA from registries for which "Specification
Required", "RFC Required", "IETF Review", or "Standards Action"
policies apply.

One of the big problems with early allocations is that the
implementations using those numbers will never really go away, even if
the numbers are later changed (i.e. changed from private number space
to real allocations). At least with this kind of early real
allocations, the implementations could use the real numbers and be
interoperable with the RFC versions.

The security considerations section do cover the denial of service
attacks against IANA (depletion of code space by early allocations,
and process overload of IANA itself).

I do not have any comments for this document, and I think it is ready. 
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi

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okay Benoit.  I'll do that this morning.

Thanks,

Eric


On Sep 10, 2013, at 1:10 , Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> wrote:

> Actually, it might be better to quickly publish a new version (as =
opposed to me writing down a RFC editor note), because the IESG is still =
busy reading the document for this Thursday telechat.
>=20
> Regards, Benoit
>> I would note down the change but implement/submit a revision after we =
get
>> the rest of the IESG comments (the doc is in next week's telechat). =
That's
>> because ADs (and others) are now reading the -11.
>>=20
>> - Jouni
>>=20
>>=20
>> On Sep 10, 2013, at 6:24 AM, Eric McMurry <emcmurry@computer.org> =
wrote:
>>=20
>>> that matches what I came away with.  How would you like us to =
address that?
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>> On Sep 9, 2013, at 22:22 , Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> =
wrote:
>>>=20
>>>> Folks,
>>>>=20
>>>> So if I got it right, the last sentence of the Req13 will be =
removed and
>>>> the Req31 stays as it is now.
>>>>=20
>>>> This would be fine with me.
>>>>=20
>>>> - JOuni
>>>>=20
>>>> On Sep 10, 2013, at 4:27 AM, Carl Wallace =
<carl@redhoundsoftware.com> wrote:
>>>>=20
>>>>>>=20
>>>>>>=20
>>>>>> The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That =
is, the
>>>>>> overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some =
granularity,
>>>>>> and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the =
granularity. We
>>>>>> don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the =
granularity
>>>>>> of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution =
from
>>>>>> offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it =
would
>>>>>> involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one =
condition
>>>>>> and starting another.)
>>>>> Got it.  Thanks.
>>>>>=20
>>>>>=20
>>=20
>>=20
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On Sep 9, 2013, at 8:07 PM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> =
wrote:

>=20
> On 9/9/13 8:41 PM, "Eric McMurry" <emcmurry@computer.org> wrote:
>>=20

[...]

>> I'm a bit lost on how requirement 10 would relate to this though.  =
Can
>> you please elaborate a bit on the question?
>=20
> Requirement 31 states:
>=20
> "The solution MUST allow Diameter nodes to indicate overload with
> sufficient granularity to allow clients to take action based on the
> overloaded resources without unreasonably forcing available capacity =
to go
> unused.  The solution MUST support specification of overload =
information
> with granularities of at least "Diameter node", "realm", and "Diameter
> application", and MUST allow extensibility for others to be added in =
the
> future."
>=20
> Requirement 10 states:
>=20
> "Consumers of overload information MUST be able to determine when the
> overload condition improves or ends"
>=20
> My question was, must consumers of overload information be able to
> determine when the overload condition <for some specified granularity>
> improves or ends?   Requirement 10 seems to be addressing a type of =
action
> a client may take based on granular information provided under =
requirement
> 31. =20
>=20

The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That is, the =
overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some granularity, =
and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the granularity. We =
don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the granularity =
of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution from =
offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it would =
involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one condition =
and starting another.)


> More or less the same question applied to 24 as well, maybe not as an
> action following overload as in requirement 10 but perhaps as an =
action
> with similar granular needs.

Since 24 talks of "load" rather than "overload", we assumed your =
question concerned whether "load" needed the same or similar =
granularities to "overload". Did you mean something different?

Thanks!

Ben.


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On Sep 9, 2013, at 10:22 PM, Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> =
wrote:

>=20
> Folks,
>=20
> So if I got it right, the last sentence of the Req13 will be removed =
and
> the Req31 stays as it is now.
>=20
> This would be fine with me.
>=20

That is my understanding. Or more precisely, the last sentence of Req13 =
will be removed, and nothing else will change.


> - JOuni
>=20
> On Sep 10, 2013, at 4:27 AM, Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> =
wrote:
>=20
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>> The intent was that the overload condition has granularity. That is, =
the
>>> overloaded node indicates an overload condition with some =
granularity,
>>> and later ends it. The act of ending doesn't change the granularity. =
We
>>> don't have an explicit requirement to be able to change the =
granularity
>>> of an existing condition. (Although we do not prevent a solution =
from
>>> offering that ability--but I suspect if the solution did that, it =
would
>>> involve multiple concurrent overload conditions, or ending one =
condition
>>> and starting another.)
>>=20
>> Got it.  Thanks. =20
>>=20
>>=20
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.


Even though this is an architecture document, I think it deserves some 
AD attention.


First: it seems odd to set an expectation for (near) 
zero-configuration:

    It is not practical to expect home users to configure their networks.
    Thus the assumption of this document is that the homenet is as far  as
    possible self-organising and self-configuring, i.e. it should
    function without pro-active management by the residential user.

and then decline to give any guidance about, arguably, the most 
important security choice in the document:

    This document takes no position on [whether 'default allow' or
    'default deny'] mode is the default, but assumes
    the choice for the homenet to use either mode would be available.


I found the "Name spaces" section (3.7.3) a bit confusing, in part 
because it doesn't specifically name DNS at the start of the section, 
even though the details below clearly point to DNS (IDNA, possible 
conflicts with dotless TLDs).  Perhaps the second paragraph of 3.7.4, 
explaining that there are some non-DNS alternatives under 
consideration, should be moved up?  Furthermore, there are some 
particular assertions in both 3.7.3 and 3.7.4 that need to be 
reconsidered:

-- "When DNS is used as the homenet name service, it includes both a
    resolving service and an authoritative service."  Does it
    necessarily?

-- "The name space(s) should be served authoritatively by the
    homenet..."   Why is that necessary?  (Indeed, there is text in
    3.7.4 that seems to conflict with this.)

-- There is a recommendation to support DNSSEC on the authoritative
    server side (in 3.7.4).  Shouldn't there be a similar
    recommendation on the resolver side?





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Hi Sam, thanks for the review. Inline...

On Sep 11, 2013, at 4:53 AM, Samuel Weiler wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
>=20
> Even though this is an architecture document, I think it deserves some =
AD attention.
>=20
>=20
> First: it seems odd to set an expectation for (near) =
zero-configuration:
>=20
>   It is not practical to expect home users to configure their =
networks.
>   Thus the assumption of this document is that the homenet is as far  =
as
>   possible self-organising and self-configuring, i.e. it should
>   function without pro-active management by the residential user.
>=20
> and then decline to give any guidance about, arguably, the most =
important security choice in the document:
>=20
>   This document takes no position on [whether 'default allow' or
>   'default deny'] mode is the default, but assumes
>   the choice for the homenet to use either mode would be available.

Homenet's focus is on the interior of the home network. RFC 6204 already =
tackled the egress ("WAN Port") facing the ISP within v6ops, along with =
the painful process of this particular issue. Perhaps we should make =
that more clear in this document.

>=20
>=20
> I found the "Name spaces" section (3.7.3) a bit confusing, in part =
because it doesn't specifically name DNS at the start of the section, =
even though the details below clearly point to DNS (IDNA, possible =
conflicts with dotless TLDs).  Perhaps the second paragraph of 3.7.4, =
explaining that there are some non-DNS alternatives under consideration, =
should be moved up?  Furthermore, there are some particular assertions =
in both 3.7.3 and 3.7.4 that need to be reconsidered:
>=20
> -- "When DNS is used as the homenet name service, it includes both a
>   resolving service and an authoritative service."  Does it
>   necessarily?
>=20
> -- "The name space(s) should be served authoritatively by the
>   homenet..."   Why is that necessary?  (Indeed, there is text in
>   3.7.4 that seems to conflict with this.)
>=20
> -- There is a recommendation to support DNSSEC on the authoritative
>   server side (in 3.7.4).  Shouldn't there be a similar
>   recommendation on the resolver side?

Good points, but I'll let my DNS-hat-wearing co-chair chime in on these.

Thanks,

- Mark=

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Sam,

Following on from Mark's comments:

> -- "When DNS is used as the homenet name service, it includes both a
>  resolving service and an authoritative service."  Does it
>  necessarily?

A Homenet that is not currently connected to the Internet still needs to be=
 able to function, so (when DNS is used) authoritative local name service a=
nd a service for resolution of those local names are both needed.

> -- "The name space(s) should be served authoritatively by the
>  homenet..."   Why is that necessary?  (Indeed, there is text in
>  3.7.4 that seems to conflict with this.)

One reason is simply to prevent names only intended to be known internally =
from being shared with externally maintained authoritative servers.

The other is the "disconnected homenet" mentioned above.

Can you please indicate which text you believe is in conflict?

> -- There is a recommendation to support DNSSEC on the authoritative
>  server side (in 3.7.4).  Shouldn't there be a similar
>  recommendation on the resolver side?

That (short) paragraph is not specific to authoritative servers, it applies=
 to the entire section.  The example of cache-poisoning further indicates i=
ts applicability to recursive resolution.

kind regards,

Ray







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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

The document has been produced as part of a proposal to upgrade SPF to
standards track recognizing the state of deployment experience.



Minor issues.

1.1.3 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-19#section-1.1.3>.
 MAIL FROM Definition


I found this section completely opaque and very confusing. It should not be
necessary to hunt through other specs to find a definition. Particularly
since the referenced specs do not give an explicit definition for the term
as used and the references point to the whole spec rather than a particular
section.

The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except that
no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a mail
receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same time.
This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track
proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the
SPF document should address the question of dual use.


8.7 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-19#section-8.7>.
 Permerror


"This signals an error condition that

   definitely requires operator intervention to be resolved."


I cannot imagine a circumstance which definitely requires a human to be
involved in mail delivery.

11.2 <http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-19#section-11.2>.
 SPF-Authorized Email May Contain Other False Identities

   Do not construe the "MAIL FROM" and "HELO" identity authorizations to
   provide more assurance than they do.


Document has quasi normative language that should be worded as statements
of fact rather than as direction.

-- 
Website: http://hallambaker.com/

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8=
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<span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.800000190734863px"=
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iv><div><br></div><div>Minor issues.</div><div><br></div><div><pre class=3D=
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<a class=3D"" name=3D"section-1.1.3" href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/html/dra=
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on:none">1.1.3</a>.  MAIL FROM Definition</h4></span></pre></div><div><br><=
/div>
<div>I found this section completely opaque and very confusing. It should n=
ot be necessary to hunt through other specs to find a definition. Particula=
rly since the referenced specs do not give an explicit definition for the t=
erm as used and the references point to the whole spec rather than a partic=
ular section.</div>
<div><br></div><div>The Security Considerations section is adequate for the=
 purpose except that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about=
 DKIM and how a mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF pol=
icy at the same time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a =
standards track proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Tr=
ack. Thus the SPF document should address the question of dual use.</div>
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<a class=3D"" name=3D"section-8.7" href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft=
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uot;</h3></span><span style=3D"font-size:1em;font-family:arial">This signal=
s an error condition that</span></pre>
<pre class=3D"" style=3D"font-size:1em;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;col=
or:rgb(0,0,0)">   definitely requires operator intervention to be resolved.=
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ietf-spfbis-4408bis-19#section-11.2" style=3D"color:black;text-decoration:n=
one">11.2</a>.  SPF-Authorized Email May Contain Other False Identities</h3=
>
</span>

   Do not construe the &quot;MAIL FROM&quot; and &quot;HELO&quot; identity =
authorizations to
   provide more assurance than they do.</pre></div><div><br></div><div>Docu=
ment has quasi normative language that should be worded as statements of fa=
ct rather than as direction.</div><div><br></div>-- <br>Website: <a href=3D=
"http://hallambaker.com/">http://hallambaker.com/</a><br>

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Hi Phillip,

I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait for the 
SPFBIS WG to address the other issues.

At 05:07 11-09-2013, Phillip Hallam-Baker wrote:
>I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
>like any other last call comments.
>
>The document has been produced as part of a proposal to upgrade SPF 
>to standards track recognizing the state of deployment experience.
>
>Minor issues.
>
>1.1.3.  MAIL FROM Definition
>
>I found this section completely opaque and very confusing. It should 
>not be necessary to hunt through other specs to find a definition. 
>Particularly since the referenced specs do not give an explicit 
>definition for the term as used and the references point to the 
>whole spec rather than a particular section.

I am commenting on the following paragraph only:

>The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose 
>except that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about 
>DKIM and how a mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and 
>SPF policy at the same time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM 
>is already a standards track proposal and SPF is only now being 
>promoted to Standards Track. Thus the SPF document should address 
>the question of dual use.

There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about 
how to interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same 
time ( http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc 
).  The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.

>8.7.  Permerror
>
>"
>
>This signals an error condition that
>
>    definitely requires operator intervention to be resolved."
>
>I cannot imagine a circumstance which definitely requires a human to 
>be involved in mail delivery.
>
>
>11.2.  SPF-Authorized Email May Contain Other False Identities
>
>    Do not construe the "MAIL FROM" and "HELO" identity authorizations to
>    provide more assurance than they do.
>
>Document has quasi normative language that should be worded as 
>statements of fact rather than as direction.
>
>--
>Website: http://hallambaker.com/


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On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> wrote:

> I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait for the SPFBIS WG
> to address the other issues.
>

Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to the spfbis list?  I haven't
seen it.


>
>  The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except
>> that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a
>> mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same
>> time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track
>> proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the
>> SPF document should address the question of dual use.
>>
>
> There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how to
> interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time (
> http://www.ietf.org/**proceedings/87/minutes/**minutes-87-dmarc<http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc>).  The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.
>

DKIM has no intrinsic policy component.   Are we actually talking about
ADSP here?

Assuming we are, I think the best we could do is to note that it's possible
for ADSP and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one could be a "pass"
while the other could be a "fail", meaning the receiving MTA now has one
"reject" instruction and one "accept" instruction.  The receiving ADMD will
have to make a decision about which one ought to get precedence.

-MSK

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<div dir=3D"ltr">On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <span dir=3D"=
ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sm+ietf@elandsys.com" target=3D"_blank">sm+ietf@=
elandsys.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">I am responding to the comment about DKIM on=
ly and wait for the SPFBIS WG to address the other issues.<br></blockquote>
<div><br></div><div>Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to the spfb=
is list?=A0 I haven&#39;t seen it.<br>=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gma=
il_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-lef=
t:1ex">

<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except that=
 no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a mail=
 receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same time=
. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track prop=
osal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the SPF do=
cument should address the question of dual use.<br>

</blockquote>
<br>
There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how to =
interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time ( <a href=
=3D"http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc" target=3D"=
_blank">http://www.ietf.org/<u></u>proceedings/87/minutes/<u></u>minutes-87=
-dmarc</a> ). =A0The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.=
<br>
</blockquote><div><br></div><div>DKIM has no intrinsic policy component. =
=A0 Are we actually talking about ADSP here?<br><br></div><div>Assuming we =
are, I think the best we could do is to note that it&#39;s possible for ADS=
P and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one could be a &quot;pass&qu=
ot; while the other could be a &quot;fail&quot;, meaning the receiving MTA =
now has one &quot;reject&quot; instruction and one &quot;accept&quot; instr=
uction.=A0 The receiving ADMD will have to make a decision about which one =
ought to get precedence.<br>
<br></div><div>-MSK<br></div></div></div></div>

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On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>wrote:

> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> wrote:
>
>> I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait for the SPFBIS WG
>> to address the other issues.
>>
>
> Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to the spfbis list?  I haven't
> seen it.
>

The draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis.all@tools.ietf.org doesn't cover it? I
thought that was the point.




>
>>  The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except
>>> that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a
>>> mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same
>>> time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track
>>> proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the
>>> SPF document should address the question of dual use.
>>>
>>
>> There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how
>> to interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time (
>> http://www.ietf.org/**proceedings/87/minutes/**minutes-87-dmarc<http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc>).  The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.
>>
>
> DKIM has no intrinsic policy component.   Are we actually talking about
> ADSP here?
>

If a message has a DKIM signature and it is valid for the sending domain
then that is strong evidence that the owner of the domain intended to send
it. Hence DKIM Signature overlaps with SPF policy.

Regardless RFC 5617 is standards track and it is a part of DKIM and the SPF
document should probably mention it as well.



> Assuming we are, I think the best we could do is to note that it's
> possible for ADSP and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one could be
> a "pass" while the other could be a "fail", meaning the receiving MTA now
> has one "reject" instruction and one "accept" instruction.  The receiving
> ADMD will have to make a decision about which one ought to get precedence.
>

I suspect that the answer is that SPF will take precedence simply because
the MailFROM will be received and acted upon before the MTA has enough
information to act on DKIM information. An MTA that decides email is spam
on the basis of SPF is likely to drop the connection or tar pit it. I doubt
it is going to bother to check a DKIM signature.

-- 
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><br><div class=3D"gmail=
_quote">On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <span dir=3D"l=
tr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:superuser@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">superuser@=
gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"im">On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at=
 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sm+ietf@eland=
sys.com" target=3D"_blank">sm+ietf@elandsys.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div class=3D"i=
m">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait fo=
r the SPFBIS WG to address the other issues.<br>
</blockquote>
<div><br></div></div><div>Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to th=
e spfbis list?=A0 I haven&#39;t seen it.<br></div></div></div></div></block=
quote><div><br></div><div>The <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis.a=
ll@tools.ietf.org">draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis.all@tools.ietf.org</a> doesn&#=
39;t cover it? I thought that was the point.</div>
<div><br></div><div><br></div><div>=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quot=
e" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-colo=
r:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"lt=
r"><div class=3D"gmail_extra">
<div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div></div><div class=3D"im"><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;bo=
rder-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">

<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">
The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except that=
 no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a mail=
 receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same time=
. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track prop=
osal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the SPF do=
cument should address the question of dual use.<br>


</blockquote>
<br>
There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how to =
interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time ( <a href=
=3D"http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc" target=3D"=
_blank">http://www.ietf.org/<u></u>proceedings/87/minutes/<u></u>minutes-87=
-dmarc</a> ). =A0The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.=
<br>

</blockquote><div><br></div></div><div>DKIM has no intrinsic policy compone=
nt. =A0 Are we actually talking about ADSP here?<br></div></div></div></div=
></blockquote><div><br></div><div>If a message has a DKIM signature and it =
is valid for the sending domain then that is strong evidence that the owner=
 of the domain intended to send it. Hence DKIM Signature overlaps with SPF =
policy.=A0</div>
<div><br></div><div>Regardless RFC 5617 is standards track and it is a part=
 of DKIM and the SPF document should probably mention it as well.</div><div=
><br></div><div>=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:=
0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);=
border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div=
></div><div>Assuming we are, I think the best we could do is to note that i=
t&#39;s possible for ADSP and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one =
could be a &quot;pass&quot; while the other could be a &quot;fail&quot;, me=
aning the receiving MTA now has one &quot;reject&quot; instruction and one =
&quot;accept&quot; instruction.=A0 The receiving ADMD will have to make a d=
ecision about which one ought to get precedence.</div>
</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I suspect that the answe=
r is that SPF will take precedence simply because the MailFROM will be rece=
ived and acted upon before the MTA has enough information to act on DKIM in=
formation. An MTA that decides email is spam on the basis of SPF is likely =
to drop the connection or tar pit it. I doubt it is going to bother to chec=
k a DKIM signature.=A0</div>
</div><div><br></div>-- <br>Website: <a href=3D"http://hallambaker.com/">ht=
tp://hallambaker.com/</a><br>
</div></div>

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On Wed, 11 Sep 2013, Ray Bellis wrote:

>> -- "The name space(s) should be served authoritatively by the
>>  homenet..."   Why is that necessary?  (Indeed, there is text in
>>  3.7.4 that seems to conflict with this.)
...
> Can you please indicate which text you believe is in conflict?

Sure.

in 3.7.3:

"The name space(s) should be served authoritatively by the
    homenet, most likely by a server resident on the CER."

in 3.7.4

"One approach ... is to run an authoritative
    name service on the CER and a secondary resolving name service
    provided by the ISP or perhaps a cloud-based third party."

The former I see as more prescriptive (you should do X) and the latter 
as just a suggestion (one idea is X).

I was challenging the prescription.  The quotes are necessarily in 
conflict, but they seem to carry very different force.

>> -- There is a recommendation to support DNSSEC on the authoritative
>>  server side (in 3.7.4).  Shouldn't there be a similar
>>  recommendation on the resolver side?
>
> That (short) paragraph is not specific to authoritative servers, it 
> applies to the entire section.  The example of cache-poisoning 
> further indicates its applicability to recursive resolution.

That is not clear from the text.  I read "it is desirable
    to support appropriate name service security methods, including
    DNSSEC." and interpreted as shown above.

-- Sam


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On Sep 11, 2013, at 11:17 AM, Samuel Weiler <weiler@watson.org> wrote:
> I was challenging the prescription.  The quotes are necessarily in confli=
ct, but they seem to carry very different force.

Actually they aren't in conflict.   3.7.3 is saying "you need an authoritat=
ive name server on the local net."   3.7.4 is saying "if you want names to =
be resolved externally, one way to make this work would be to set up second=
aries on external servers."  In fact, the solution that I've seen discussed=
 recently is to have the master on the local network be a hidden master, so=
 that the only published authoritative servers for the zone would be the se=
condaries.   But the architecture document rightly avoids prescribing that =
solution.


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On 11 Sep 2013, at 16:39, Ted Lemon <Ted.Lemon@nominum.com>
 wrote:

> Actually they aren't in conflict.   3.7.3 is saying "you need an authorit=
ative name server on the local net."   3.7.4 is saying "if you want names t=
o be resolved externally, one way to make this work would be to set up seco=
ndaries on external servers."  In fact, the solution that I've seen discuss=
ed recently is to have the master on the local network be a hidden master, =
so that the only published authoritative servers for the zone would be the =
secondaries.   But the architecture document rightly avoids prescribing tha=
t solution.

I think the confusion is caused by the use of the phrase "secondary resolvi=
ng name service" in 3.7.4

Ted is (correctly, I think) taking the intent of that to mean a secondary _=
authoritative_ service, but us DNS heads think of "resolving" as what stubs=
 and recursive servers do.

Tim - can you please clarify the intent?

Ray


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On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 7:33 AM, Phillip Hallam-Baker <hallam@gmail.com>wrote:

> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>wrote:
>
>> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com>wrote:
>>
>>> I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait for the SPFBIS
>>> WG to address the other issues.
>>>
>>
>> Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to the spfbis list?  I
>> haven't seen it.
>>
>
> The draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis.all@tools.ietf.org doesn't cover it? I
> thought that was the point.
>

I'm pretty sure it's authors, shepherds, and co-chairs only, not the whole
WG.


>
>
>
>
>>
>>>  The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except
>>>> that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a
>>>> mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same
>>>> time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track
>>>> proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the
>>>> SPF document should address the question of dual use.
>>>>
>>>
>>> There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how
>>> to interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time (
>>> http://www.ietf.org/**proceedings/87/minutes/**minutes-87-dmarc<http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc>).  The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.
>>>
>>
>> DKIM has no intrinsic policy component.   Are we actually talking about
>> ADSP here?
>>
>
> If a message has a DKIM signature and it is valid for the sending domain
> then that is strong evidence that the owner of the domain intended to send
> it. Hence DKIM Signature overlaps with SPF policy.
>

Ah, I see where you're going now.


>
> Regardless RFC 5617 is standards track and it is a part of DKIM and the
> SPF document should probably mention it as well.
>

ADSP has seen so little adoption that I think it would actually be a
mistake to pay it any homage here.  I think your point above about DKIM
proper is the more interesting one.


>
>
>
>> Assuming we are, I think the best we could do is to note that it's
>> possible for ADSP and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one could be
>> a "pass" while the other could be a "fail", meaning the receiving MTA now
>> has one "reject" instruction and one "accept" instruction.  The receiving
>> ADMD will have to make a decision about which one ought to get precedence.
>>
>
> I suspect that the answer is that SPF will take precedence simply because
> the MailFROM will be received and acted upon before the MTA has enough
> information to act on DKIM information. An MTA that decides email is spam
> on the basis of SPF is likely to drop the connection or tar pit it. I doubt
> it is going to bother to check a DKIM signature.
>

Right, I had forgotten about this as well.  I shouldn't reply to SecDir
without being appropriately caffeinated.

It's not necessarily the case that an SPF failure will be acted upon before
DKIM even gets evaluated.  Though that is clearly for many installations
the optimal use because you don't have to deal with the body, any MTA that
wants to give DKIM due consideration as well will have to store the SPF
result and then decide on it later.  And there are sites that do prefer it
that way, not the least of which is the entire DMARC community.

This draft is already worded such that one can merely observe the SPF
result and record it rather than enacting it as soon as possible, possibly
using it as one input to a larger equation.  This use case could bolster
that argument by providing an example, and could even be done without
naming DKIM specifically.  Of course, the downside is that the receiver has
to deal with accepting the body.  As long as the tradeoff is made clear (if
it isn't already), we might consider adding it.

-MSK

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<div dir=3D"ltr">On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 7:33 AM, Phillip Hallam-Baker <spa=
n dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:hallam@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">hal=
lam@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div clas=
s=3D"gmail_quote">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr">On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 9:4=
3 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:superuser=
@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">superuser@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>

<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div class=3D"im"><bl=
ockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-lef=
t-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padd=
ing-left:1ex">
<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <span di=
r=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sm+ietf@elandsys.com" target=3D"_blank">sm+=
ietf@elandsys.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait fo=
r the SPFBIS WG to address the other issues.<br>

</blockquote>
<div><br></div></div><div>Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to th=
e spfbis list?=A0 I haven&#39;t seen it.<br></div></div></div></div></block=
quote><div><br></div></div><div>The <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-spfbis-440=
8bis.all@tools.ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis.all@to=
ols.ietf.org</a> doesn&#39;t cover it? I thought that was the point.</div>
</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I&#39;m pretty sure it&#=
39;s authors, shepherds, and co-chairs only, not the whole WG.<br>=A0<br></=
div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-lef=
t:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div=
 class=3D"im">
<div><br></div><div><br></div><div>=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quot=
e" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-colo=
r:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"lt=
r">
<div class=3D"gmail_extra">
<div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div></div><div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote=
" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color=
:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">

<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">
The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except that=
 no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a mail=
 receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same time=
. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track prop=
osal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the SPF do=
cument should address the question of dual use.<br>



</blockquote>
<br>
There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how to =
interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time ( <a href=
=3D"http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc" target=3D"=
_blank">http://www.ietf.org/<u></u>proceedings/87/minutes/<u></u>minutes-87=
-dmarc</a> ). =A0The dual use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.=
<br>


</blockquote><div><br></div></div><div>DKIM has no intrinsic policy compone=
nt. =A0 Are we actually talking about ADSP here?<br></div></div></div></div=
></blockquote><div><br></div></div><div>If a message has a DKIM signature a=
nd it is valid for the sending domain then that is strong evidence that the=
 owner of the domain intended to send it. Hence DKIM Signature overlaps wit=
h SPF policy.</div>
</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ah, I see where you&#39;=
re going now.<br>=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"ma=
rgin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"lt=
r"><div class=3D"gmail_extra">
<div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div>=A0</div>Regardless RFC 5617 is standards t=
rack and it is a part of DKIM and the SPF document should probably mention =
it as well.</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>ADSP has seen=
 so little adoption that I think it would actually be a mistake to pay it a=
ny homage here.=A0 I think your point above about DKIM proper is the more i=
nteresting one.<br>
=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;b=
order-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"=
gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div class=3D"im"><div><br></div><d=
iv>=A0</div>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-=
left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;p=
adding-left:1ex">
<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div=
></div><div>Assuming we are, I think the best we could do is to note that i=
t&#39;s possible for ADSP and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one =
could be a &quot;pass&quot; while the other could be a &quot;fail&quot;, me=
aning the receiving MTA now has one &quot;reject&quot; instruction and one =
&quot;accept&quot; instruction.=A0 The receiving ADMD will have to make a d=
ecision about which one ought to get precedence.</div>

</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div></div><div>I suspect that the=
 answer is that SPF will take precedence simply because the MailFROM will b=
e received and acted upon before the MTA has enough information to act on D=
KIM information. An MTA that decides email is spam on the basis of SPF is l=
ikely to drop the connection or tar pit it. I doubt it is going to bother t=
o check a DKIM signature.=A0</div>
</div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Right, I had forgotten a=
bout this as well.=A0 I shouldn&#39;t reply to SecDir without being appropr=
iately caffeinated.<br><br></div><div>It&#39;s not necessarily the case tha=
t an SPF failure will be acted upon before DKIM even gets evaluated.=A0 Tho=
ugh that is clearly for many installations the optimal use because you don&=
#39;t have to deal with the body, any MTA that wants to give DKIM due consi=
deration as well will have to store the SPF result and then decide on it la=
ter.=A0 And there are sites that do prefer it that way, not the least of wh=
ich is the entire DMARC community.<br>
<br></div><div>This draft is already worded such that one can merely observ=
e the SPF result and record it rather than enacting it as soon as possible,=
 possibly using it as one input to a larger equation.=A0 This use case coul=
d bolster that argument by providing an example, and could even be done wit=
hout naming DKIM specifically.=A0 Of course, the downside is that the recei=
ver has to deal with accepting the body.=A0 As long as the tradeoff is made=
 clear (if it isn&#39;t already), we might consider adding it.<br>
<br>-MSK<br></div><div><br></div></div></div></div>

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On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy
<superuser@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> wrote:
>>
>> I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait for the SPFBIS WG
>> to address the other issues.
>
>
> Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to the spfbis list?  I haven't
> seen it.
>
>>
>>
>>> The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except
>>> that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and how a
>>> mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy at the same
>>> time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a standards track
>>> proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to Standards Track. Thus the SPF
>>> document should address the question of dual use.
>>
>>
>> There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how to
>> interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time (
>> http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc ).  The dual use
>> can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.
>
>
> DKIM has no intrinsic policy component.   Are we actually talking about ADSP
> here?
>
> Assuming we are, I think the best we could do is to note that it's possible
> for ADSP and SPF to yield conflicting policy results; one could be a "pass"
> while the other could be a "fail", meaning the receiving MTA now has one
> "reject" instruction and one "accept" instruction.  The receiving ADMD will
> have to make a decision about which one ought to get precedence.
>
>

ADSP should be relegated to historical. Very little implementation on
the publishing side and even less validation on the receiving side. We
(all of the usual suspects in this space) made compromises to get it
out the door and we collectively got it wrong.

Having said that, I could live with some kind of note in the SPFbis
doc along the lines of what Murray suggests.

Mike

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On 9/11/2013 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy wrote:
> I am commenting on the following paragraph only:
>
>> The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose except
>> that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about DKIM and
>> how a mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and SPF policy
>> at the same time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM is already a
>> standards track proposal and SPF is only now being promoted to
>> Standards Track. Thus the SPF document should address the question of
>> dual use.
>
> There was a BoF at the last IETF meeting to discuss proposals about how
> to interpret the presence of DKIM and/or SPF policy at the same time (
> http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/87/minutes/minutes-87-dmarc ).  The dual
> use can be addressed as part of the DMARC effort.


At the level of a fully-integrated email anti-abuse system, concern 
about possible SPF and DKIM presence and interaction effects is, of 
course, essential.

However SPF is only a component technology.  It's specification is not 
the place for discussing higher-level interaction effects.

By way of example, imagine the specification for an automobile tire 
being expected to talk about design and operations issues when the tire 
is linked to 3 siblings and a suspension system, and a motor and... 
That's an important topic, but the tire spec is wrong venue.

d/


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Yaron Sheffer is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2013-09-12

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Dave Cridland          T 2013-08-29 draft-ietf-repute-email-identifiers-09
Alan DeKok             T 2013-08-29 draft-ietf-repute-media-type-12
Sam Hartman            T 2013-09-03 draft-ietf-mediactrl-call-flows-13
Jeffrey Hutzelman      T 2013-09-03 draft-ietf-mpls-targeted-mldp-04

Last calls and special requests:

Rob Austein              2012-09-20 draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-11
Rob Austein              2013-08-29 draft-ietf-netext-update-notifications-08
Dave Cridland            -          draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-23
Dave Cridland            -          draft-dunbar-armd-arp-nd-scaling-practices-07
Alan DeKok               2013-03-30 draft-ietf-roll-terminology-12
Dan Harkins              2013-09-02 draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11
Jeffrey Hutzelman        2013-07-16 draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-04
Jeffrey Hutzelman        -          draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-04
Scott Kelly              2013-09-16 draft-kelsey-intarea-mesh-link-establishment-05
Warren Kumari            2013-09-19 draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-security-options-06
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-08
Julien Laganier          2013-09-17 draft-ietf-ccamp-swcaps-update-03
Ben Laurie               2013-09-23 draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-03
Matt Lepinski            2013-09-24 draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05
Catherine Meadows        2013-09-23 draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14
Alexey Melnikov          -          draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-05
Kathleen Moriarty        2013-10-01 draft-resnick-retire-std1-01
Sandy Murphy             2013-09-20 draft-ietf-6man-ext-transmit-03
Yoav Nir                 -          draft-ietf-dime-app-design-guide-19
Magnus Nystrom           2013-09-24 draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-08
Radia Perlman            2013-09-24 draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02
Vincent Roca             2013-09-24 draft-ietf-mmusic-duplication-grouping-03
Joe Salowey              2013-09-23 draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-threats-06
Ondrej Sury              2013-08-16 draft-nandakumar-rtcweb-stun-uri-07
David Waltermire         -          draft-ietf-repute-considerations-02
Sam Weiler               2013-04-26 draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses-13
Brian Weis               -          draft-ietf-radext-dtls-06
Glen Zorn                2012-11-27 draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-05
Glen Zorn                2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-03
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.=0A=0AFrom the abstract: "This document defines =
the mesh link establishment (MLE) protocol for establishing and configuring=
 secure radio links in IEEE 802.15.4 radio mesh networks." It defines a UDP=
-based protocol to configure radio links, facilitate network-wide changes t=
o radio parameters, and detect neighboring devices.=0A=0AThe protocol is in=
tended for IEEE 802.15.4 mesh networks, and it re-uses features from this l=
ink-layer protocol. I haven't been keeping up with this IEEE effort, so whe=
n I opened the draft I was a complete noob. =0A=0AI have comments/questions=
 about 3 things in the document:=0A=0A1) The protocol mostly relies on the =
security mechanisms of 802.15.4, except that it adds an anti-replay mechani=
sm. This mechanism requires a a message recipient to send a challenge to a =
newly-heard neighbor, and for that neighbor to return the same challenge. T=
he challenge is defined as a TLV. Although RFC4086 is referenced for challe=
nge generation, no minimum challenge length is specified. Does that mean a =
one-byte random challenge is okay? Since the text also says "A new value MU=
ST be chosen for each Challenge TLV transmitted", you probably want to spec=
ify a reasonable minimum length.=0A=0A2) Section 5 says "MLE security MUST =
NOT use any key that is being used by the link (or any other) layer." I thi=
nk the point you're trying to make is that because of CCM, key re-use is po=
tentially toxic. It might be good to explicitly state this.=0A=0A3) Prior t=
o the text just referenced, it says, "If MLE security is in use each device=
 MUST maintain an outgoing MLE frame counter for use in securing outgoing p=
ackets in compliance with [CCM].  This MAY be the same frame counter used f=
or securing 802.15.4 frames; in this case the same counter value MUST NOT b=
e used for securing both an 802.15.4 message and an MLE message."=0A=0AMayb=
e I'm just missing it, but I don't understand the need for MUST NOT here. S=
ince they must have different keys, what harm results from using the same c=
ounter value in distinct protocols?=0A=0A=0A--Scott=0A


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Thanks for your review.

Comments in line; all edits to appear in -04 rev.

On Aug 31, 2013, at 11:46 AM 8/31/13, ietfdbh <ietfdbh@comcast.net> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoi=
ng
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments ju=
st
> like any other last call comments.
>=20
> The document describes a change to the values of DHCPv6 Options for Solic=
it
> and Information timeout values (SOL_MAX_RT and INF_MAX_RT).
>=20
> I am not very knowledgeable about DHCPv6 options, but I have a few
> questions.
> 1) section 6 says " the client MUST process an included SOL_MAX_RT option
> and/or an included INF_MAX_RT option"; this could be interpreted as OR ev=
en
> if both are present. Hopefully no implementer would make that choice, but
> they could claim compliance if they did.=20
> It would be tighter to say they MUST process SOL-MAX-RT and MUST process
> INF_MAX_RT ...

Another artifact of adding INF_MAX_RT to the document.  Thanks for the sugg=
ested text, which I've used

> 2) section 7 says " A DHCPv6 client MUST include the SOL_MAX_RT option co=
de
> in an Option Request option [RFC3315] in any message it sends."  Is this
> really required for every message?

Hm.  This text is actually somewhat redundant as RFC 3315 is authoritative =
as to when the Option Request option is sent.  Changed to:

  A DHCPv6 client MUST include the SOL_MAX_RT option code in any Option
  Request option [RFC3315] it sends as required by RFC 3315.

> 3) if #2 is true, then section 8 seems to have some unnecessary
> conditionals. "the server will send option SOL_MAX_RT and INF_MAX_RT only=
 if
> .... the client requested those options ...". Doesn't section 7 say the
> client is REQUIRED to request these options?

I think the text as it stands is appropriate for clarity regarding interope=
ration with non-compliant clients.  Otherwise, an implementor might interpr=
et the text as requiring that the server send the options even if the clien=
t has not requested them.

> 4) similar to question #3, in section 8 paragraph 2, the server responds =
to
> " a client that has included the SOL_MAX_RT option code in  an Option
> Request option"; doesn't section 7 REQUIRE that the client include this?
> Ditto for paragraph 3 and INF_MAX_RT?

Previous answer applies here, as well.

> 5) In security considerations, the potential security **impact** of a
> malicious server setting a high value isn't discussed.

OK. Added:

   ...which may cause an undue delay in a client completing its DHCPv6
   protocol transaction in the case no other valid response is received.

> 6) On a related note to #5, are there operational considerations if a DHC=
Pv6
> server choose to set an arbitrarily high value? Could there be economic
> benefit for a server to do this, leading some requesters to use a differe=
nt
> server either for load-balancing or servicing only priority customers? Wh=
at
> impact could such behavior create in a network that an operator should
> consider?

I can't think of any other impacts.  If you feel strongly about the issue, =
we can poll the dhc WG for their thoughts.

> 7) In IANA considerations, you define OPTION_SOL_MAX_RT and
> OPTION_INF_MAX_RT, but discussion of sending these options in sections 7 =
and
> 8 don't mention these codes; they refer only to SOL_MAX_RT and SOL_MAX_RT=
. I
> don't know much about registering DHCP options; is this correct?

Section 7 uses the phrases "SOL_MAX_RT option code" and "INF_MAX_RT option =
code, which would be considered equivalent to OPTION_SOL_MAX_RT and OPTON_I=
NF_MAX_RT.  Section 8 uses the phrases "SOL_MAX_RT option" and "INF_MAX_RT =
option" to refer to the options themselves, not just the option codes.  I t=
hink the text is correct in all cases.

- Ralph

>=20
> David Harrington
> ietfdbh@comcast.net
> +1-603-828-1401
>=20
>=20


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Be ye not afraid...
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's=20
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the=20
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat=20
these comments just like any other last call comments.


Summary for Security AD: Nothing to see here, move along...

General summary:


This document could do with a careful reading for nits and similar.
It also use a large number of acronyms that are not defined in it -- =
e.g: ODUflex, GFP-F, ODUk.=20
While there may be really well known in some spheres, I have *no* idea =
what they mean.
Please explain / expand them, or (probably much easier) simply say: =
"Familiarity with GMPLS and <whatever> is expected, especially =
[References]".


The Security Considerations section contains:
"New types of information to be conveyed regard OTN containers and =
hierarchies and from a security standpoint this memo does not introduce =
further risks with respect to the information that can be currently =
conveyed via GMPLS protocols."
I had a really hard time parsing this sentence -- I agree that this =
does't seem to introduce any new security issues, but the sentence seems =
to missing some words. Or something.


Some nits:

draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ospf-g709v3-07 is now =
draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ospf-g709v3-08
=20
draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11 is now =
draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-12

Section 1:
O: extensions need to support [G.709-2012] is provided in [OTN-FWK].
P:  extensions needed to support [G.709-2012] is provided in [OTN-FWK].
C: s/need/needed/

Section 2.  G.709 Mapping and Multiplexing Capabilities

O: The digital OTN layered structure is comprised of digital path layer
   (ODU) and digital section layer (OTU)
P: The digital OTN layered structure is comprised of the digital path =
layer
   (ODU) and the digital section layer (OTU)

O:  needs to be advertised and signaled, what is already there in GMPLS =
and what is missing.
P: needs to be advertised and signaled, what already exists GMPLS and =
what is missing.


3.  Tributary Slot Granularity

O:  ITU-T recommendation defines two types of Tributary Slot (TS)
C: Which ITU-T recommendation? Reference.

O: - If both ends of a link are new cards supporting both 1.25Gbps TS
      and 2.5Gbps TS, then the link will work with 1.25Gbps TS.
C: Throughout this section you reference "new" and "old" cards. I think =
you need better names or simply removed the words "new" and "old". I =
could presumably go to my vendor and buy a card that only supports =
2.5Gbps tomorrow and that would be "new" for me.


3.2.  Control Plane considerations
O:  In case they cannot, A will compute an alternate path from itself to =
Z (see figure 4).
P: If not, A will compute an alternate path from itself to Z (see figure =
4).
or
P:  If they cannot, A will compute an alternate path from itself to Z =
(see figure 4).
or
P:  In the case that they cannot, A will compute an alternate path from =
itself to Z (see figure 4).

O: Moreover, also TS granularity information needs to be signaled.
P: Moreover, TS granularity information also needs to be signaled.

O: the signaling to permit node C (see figure 5) choose the right one
P: the signaling to permit node C (see figure 5) to choose the right one

O: towards D. In case the full ERO is provided in the signaling with
P: towards D. In the case that the full ERO is provided in the signaling =
with
or
P: towards D. In cases where the full ERO is provided in the signaling =
with=20

(I stopped here)=20

W



--
I once absend-mindedly ordered Three Mile Island dressing in a =
restaurant and, with great presence of mind, they brought Thousand =
Island Dressing and a bottle of chili sauce.
    -- Terry Pratchett



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On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 12:35 PM, Murray S. Kucherawy
<superuser@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 7:33 AM, Phillip Hallam-Baker <hallam@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>>
>>> On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 6:22 AM, S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> I am responding to the comment about DKIM only and wait for the SPFBIS
>>>> WG to address the other issues.
>>>
>>>
>>> Was the SecDir review for this draft posted to the spfbis list?  I
>>> haven't seen it.
>>
>>
>> The draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis.all@tools.ietf.org doesn't cover it? I
>> thought that was the point.
>
>
> I'm pretty sure it's authors, shepherds, and co-chairs only, not the whole
> WG.

It also includes the sponsoring AD.

Thanks,
Donald
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Subject: [secdir] [new-work] WG Review: DTLS In Constrained Environments (dice)
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A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Security Area. The IESG
has not made any determination yet. The following draft charter was
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DTLS In Constrained Environments (dice)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Proposed WG

Assigned Area Director:
  Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>

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Charter:

The Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP) can be used to manipulate
resources on a device in constrained environments secured by Datagram
Transport Layer Security (DTLS, RFC 6347).  The DTLS In Constrained
Environments (DICE) working group focuses on supporting the use of DTLS
Transport-Layer Security in these environments.  

The first task of the working group is to define a DTLS profile that is
suitable for Internet of Things applications and is reasonably
implementable on many constrained devices.  

The second task of the working group is to define how DTLS record layer
can be used to transmit multicast messages securely.  Security for these
multicast messages is needed in many Internet of Things environments, as
some messages are commonly multicast among a set of receivers. Session
keys are needed in order to use the DTLS record layer in this way.
Changes to the DTLS handshake to support this may be needed in future but
are not part of the initial charter for DICE wg.

The third task of the working group is to investigate practical issues
around the DTLS handshake in constrained environments. Many current
systems end up fragmenting messages, and the re-transmission and
re-ordering of handshake messages results in significant complexity and
reliability problems. Additional reliability mechanisms for transporting
DTLS handshake messages are required as they will ensure that handling of
re-ordered messages needs to be done only once in a single place in the
stack. The DICE working group may also look at alternative TLS transports
in cooperation with the TLS WG.

The DTLS state machine should not be modified and key management
(including for multicast security) and multi-cast session setup are out
the scope for the initial work.  

The DICE working group will work closely with the TLS, CoRE and LWIG
working groups.

Milestones:

TBD
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Subject: [secdir] [new-work] WG Review: Active Queue Management and Packet Scheduling	(aqm)
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A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Transport Area. The
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Active Queue Management and Packet Scheduling (aqm)
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Current Status: Proposed WG

Assigned Area Director:
  Martin Stiemerling <mls.ietf@gmail.com>

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Charter:

  Internet routers, lower-layer switches, end-host operating
  systems, device drivers, and many types of additional
  middleboxes include memory buffers in which they implement
  queues to hold packets that require processing or otherwise
  need to wait for forwarding to the next hop.

  The queues are intended to absorb bursts of traffic that may
  naturally occur, and avoid unneccessary losses.  However, queues
  also cause latency and jitter in the eventual arrival times of
  packets.  This can create issues and complications for interactive
  applications.

  Extremely large unmanaged buffers have been noticed in some
  software and equipment.  When these buffers fill, interactive
  applications and other traffic can be severely impacted or
  completely broken, due to high and potentially oscillating delays.
  
  The Active Queue Management and Packet Scheduling working group
  (AQM) works on algorithms for managing queues in order to:

  (1) minimize standing queues, helping to reduce delay for
  interactive applications

  (2) help flow sources control their sending rates without
  unnecessary losses, e.g. through ECN

  (3) consider the merits of various techniques to protect flows
  from negative impacts of other more aggressive or misbehaving
  flows

  (4) help avoid global synchronization of flows sharing a
  bottleneck

  The AQM working group will produce documents that cover the
  design, use, configuration, and monitoring of algorithms for
  managing queues in Internet devices and software. The scope
  includes both how to best configure existing equipment and
  software, as well as recommendations on designing new equipment
  and software.

  The AQM working group will also publish algorithm specifications
  that are found to be broadly applicable and beneficial.  Evaluating
  these algorithms shall be done in coordination with the Internet
  Congestion Control Research Ground (ICCRG), and related IETF Working 
  Groups, such as the RTP Media Congestion Avoidance Techniques Working 
  Group (RMCAT), in order to select and assess the relevant criteria, 
  scenarios, and metrics.

  The working group will also explore the merits of whether to
  isolate flows, and mechanisms for performing this function.  Note
  that isolation and potentially policing of flows implies some policy
  beyond what is required to simply minimize queues.  This topic
  requires significant attention in the working group.

  AQM algorithms do not have to be implemented universally in order
  to be effective.  Specifications will aid in producing proper
  implementations that avoid potential ambiguities and corner cases.
  "Interoperability" of algorithms and implementations of them is
  not the reason for creating these specifications; correctness is
  the primary motivation.
  
  The working group will not make changes to existing IETF protocols,
  but the working group may use ECN, Diffserv, and other mechanisms
  maintained by the TSVWG working group. Since the implementation of
  these mechanisms is likely to be entwined with AQM algorithms, there
  is expected to be close coordination between the TSVWG and AQM groups. 

  Many AQM algorithms have been proposed in academic literature, but
  a smaller number are widely implemented and deployed.  The goal of the
  working group is to produce recommendations that will actually be used,
  and algorithms that will actually be implemented, deployed in
equipment,
  and enabled.  Towards these ends, the group actively encourages
  participation from operators and implementers. Furthermore, the group
  will jointly work with the Routing and Internet Area in order to
  involve vendors of networking equipment in the development of the
  AQM mechanisms. 

  Wider research and evaluation of AQM mechanisms shall be
  coordinated with the IRTF/ICCRG, and significant participation in this
  WG from the academic and research community is highly desirable, when
  it is directly relevant to implementation and deployment.
  
  Combined Queue Management / Packet Scheduling algorithms are in-scope, 
  provided their benefit have been evaluated against the established 
  requirements for an AQM algorithm. It is expected that some classes of 
  algorithms will focus on software implementations, while others on 
  existing or new hardware deployments, and algorithms may be specific 
  to distinct scenarios.

Milestones:
  Jan 2014 - Submit AQM recommendations to IESG for publication,
obsoleting RFC 2309
  Jul 2014 - Submit AQM algorithm evaluation guidelines to IESG for
publication as Informational
  Dec 2014 - Submit first algorithm specification to IESG for publication
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Subject: [secdir] [new-work] WG Review: IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e	(6tisch)
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A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Internet Area. The IESG
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IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e (6tisch)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Proposed WG

Chairs:
  Pascal Thubert <pthubert@cisco.com>
  Thomas Watteyne <watteyne@eecs.berkeley.edu>

Assigned Area Director:
  Ted Lemon <ted.lemon@nominum.com>


Charter:

6TiSCH: "IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e".

Background/Introduction:
------------------------

Low-power and Lossy Networks (LLNs) interconnect a possibly large
number of resource-constrained nodes to form a wireless mesh
network. The 6LoWPAN, ROLL and CoRE IETF Working Groups have defined
protocols at various layers of the protocol stack, including an IPv6
adaptation layer, a routing protocol and a web transfer protocol. This
protocol stack has been used with IEEE802.15.4 low-power radios.

The IEEE802.15.4e Timeslotted Channel Hopping (TSCH) is a recent
amendment to the Medium Access Control (MAC) portion of the
IEEE802.15.4 standard. TSCH is the emerging standard for industrial
automation and process control LLNs, with a direct inheritance from
WirelessHART and ISA100.11a.  Defining IPv6 over TSCH, 6TiSCH is a key
to enable the further adoption of IPv6 in industrial standards and the
convergence of Operational Technology (OT) with Information Technology
(IT).

The nodes in a IEEE802.15.4e TSCH network communicate by following a
Time Division Multiple Access (TDMA) schedule. A timeslot in this
schedule provides a unit of bandwidth that is allocated for
communication between neighbor nodes. The allocation can be programmed
such that the predictable transmission pattern matches the traffic.
This avoids idle listening, and extends battery lifetime for
constrained nodes.  Channel-hopping improves reliability in the
presence of narrow-band interference and multi-path fading.

These techniques enable a new range of use cases for LLNs, including:

- Control loops in a wireless process control network, in which high
  reliability and a fully deterministic behavior are required.

- Service Provider networks transporting data from different
  independent clients, and for which an operator needs flow isolation
  and traffic shaping.

- Networks comprising energy harvesting nodes, which require an
  extremely low and predictable average power consumption.

IEEE802.15.4e only defines the link-layer mechanisms. It does not
define how the network communication schedule is built and matched to
the traffic requirements of the network.

Description of Working Group:
-----------------------------

The Working Group will focus on enabling IPv6 over the TSCH mode of
the IEEE802.15.4e standard. The extent of the problem space for the WG
is one or more LLNs, eventually federated through a common backbone
link via one or more LLN Border Routers (LBRs).

Initially, the WG will limit its scope to distributed routing over a
static schedule. In that case, a node's schedule can be either
preconfigured, or learnt by a node when joining the network, but it
remains unchanged after the node has joined a network. The Routing
Protocol for LLNs (RPL) is used on the resulting network.

The WG will interface with other appropriate groups in the IETF
Internet, Operations and Management, Routing and Security areas.

Work Items:
-----------

The group will:

1. Produce "6TiSCH architecture" to describe the design of 6TiSCH
   networks.  This document will highlight the different architectural
   blocks and signalling flows, including the operation of the network
   in the presence of multiple LBRs. Initially, the document will
   focus on distributed routing operation over a static TSCH schedule.

2. Produce an Information Model containing the management requirements
   of a 6TiSCH node. This includes describing how an entity can manage
   the TSCH schedule on a 6TiSCH node, and query timeslot information
   from that node. A data model mapping for an existing protocol (such
   as Concise Binary Object Representation (CBOR) over the Constrained
   Application Protocol (CoAP)) will be provided.

3. Produce "Minimal 6TiSCH Configuration" defining how to build a
   6TiSCH network using the Routing Protocol for LLNs (RPL) and a
   static TSCH schedule.  It is expected that RPL and the Objective
   Function 0 (OF0) will be reused as-is.  The work will include a
   best practice configuration for RPL and OF0 operation over the
   static schedule. Based on that experience the group may produce a
   requirements draft for OF0 extensions, to be studied in ROLL.

Non-milestone work items:
-------------------------

The Working Group may maintain a number of running, often-respun
documents, that evolve as the technology is refined for work items
that do not affect the milestone work items:

- implementers guide: this document will collect clarifying
  information based on input from implementers, in particular as it
  becomes available from interoperability events. This guide will
  contain information about test harnesses used for interoperability
  testing.

- coexistence guide: this document will provide information on how
  6TiSCH can be operated in an environment shared with other protocols
  that use the same or a similar TSCH MAC, and/or operate on the same
  frequency band.

The WG will welcome requirements for dynamic timeslot operation, for
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This is a report on changes to draft-worley-service-example (to
produce draft-worley-service-example-14) in response to the SECDIR
review by Stephen Kent.

> Date: Thu, 22 Aug 2013 11:51:28 -0400
> From: Stephen Kent <kent@bbn.com>

> This document describes how to provide music on old (MOH) in a VoIp 
> environment, an obviously critical capability needed to preserve feature 
> compatibility with the PSTN. Callers who are not subjected to MOH might 
> otherwise not be exposed to classical music, in many contexts, a tragic 
> outcome.

Unfortunately, the real market driver for MOH is businesses that want
to play ads to you while you are waiting on hold to talk to a human.
Creating a facility to allow these businesses to do what they want
might be considered as violating the "Do no evil." principle, but it
does seem to be critical in the marketplace.

> I was surprised to see that all the references to RFCs (normative
> and informative) use labels other than RFC numbers. This an unusual
> convention that I hope the RFC editor will fix.

Personally, I find it a lot more convenient to tag RFCs by their
topics than their numbers, as I don't remember the numbers of more
than a handful of RFCs.  Nonetheless, using RFC numbers as tags is the
convention these days, and I've updated the draft to do the same.

> It is hard to overstate the importance of appropriate security 
> mechanisms for this critical aspect of VoIP. Consistent with this 
> observation, the Security Considerations section of this document 
> consists of just one paragraph. The paragraph addresses one security 
> concern, i.e., the ability of the UA of a caller to filter incoming 
> media based on the address of the source of the media. The design in 
> this document provides the source address of the MOH server, via SDP (in 
> a re-INVITE), to the caller who is on hold, and thus satisfies this concern.
> 
> In a more serious vein, I'd like to see the Security Considerations 
> section mention whether UAs are expected to use SDP and SIP security 
> mechanisms for MOH, IF these mechanisms were employed for the original 
> call. Another paragraph could be added to discuss the desirability of 
> maintaining an equivalent level of security when a caller is switched 
> over to MOH, and to cite the relevant RFCs, or to explain why this is 
> not appropriate.

I've expanded the draft in this regard.  The new text is:

    5.  Security Considerations

    5.1.  SIP (signaling) security

       The executing UA and the MOH server will usually be within the same
       administrative domain and the SIP signaling path between them will
       lie entirely within that domain.  In this case, the administrator of
       the domain should configure the UA and server to apply to to the
       dialog between them a level of security that is appropriate for the
       administrative domain.

       If the executing UA and the MOH server are not within the same
       administrative domain, the SIP signaling between them should be at
       least as secure as the SIP signaling between the executing UA and the
       remote UA.  Thus, the MOH server should support all of the SIP
       security facilities that are supported by the executing UA, and the
       executing UA should use in its dialog with the MOH server all SIP
       security facilities that are used in its dialog with the remote UA.

    5.2.  RTP (media) security

       The RTP for the MOH media will pass directly between the MOH server
       and the remote UA, and thus may pass outside the administrative
       domain of the executing UA.  While it is uncommon for the contents of
       the MOH media to be sensitive (and the remote UA will not usually be
       generating RTP when it is on-hold), the MOH RTP should be at least as
       secure as the RTP between the executing UA and the remote UA.  In
       order to make this possible, the MOH server should support all of the
       RTP security facilities that are supported by the executing UA.

       It is possible that the remote UA and the MOH server support an RTP
       security facility that the executing UA does not support, and that it
       is desirable to use this facility for the MOH RTP.  To enable this,
       the executing UA should the SDP between the remote UA and the MOH
       server completely, not omitting elements that it does not understand.

    5.3.  Media filtering

       Some UAs filter incoming RTP based on the address of origin as a
       media security measure.  The remote UA in the original dialog may use
       this media filtering, and if the executing UA does not update the SDP
       to inform the remote UA of the source address of the MOH media, the
       remote UA may not render the MOH media.  Note that the executing UA
       has no means for detecting that the remote UA uses media filtering,
       so the executing UA must assume that any remote UA uses media
       filtering.

       The technique described in this document ensures that any UA that
       should render MOH media will be informed of the source address of the
       media via the SDP that it receives.  This allows such UAs to filter
       media without interfering with MOH operation.

Dale

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Hi Phillip,
At 05:07 11-09-2013, Phillip Hallam-Baker wrote:
>Minor issues.
>
>1.1.3.  MAIL FROM Definition
>
>I found this section completely opaque and very confusing. It should 
>not be necessary to hunt through other specs to find a definition. 
>Particularly since the referenced specs do not give an explicit 
>definition for the term as used and the references point to the 
>whole spec rather than a particular section.

The text below is to address the comment about Section 1.1.3 (credits 
to Rolf E. Sonneveld):

1.1.3.  MAIL FROM Definition

    This document uses "MAIL FROM" to refer to RFC5321.MailFrom (reverse-path).
    The RFC5321.MailFrom is defined in Section 4.4 of RFC 5598 as an end-to-end
    string that specifies an email address for receiving return control
    information, such as returned messages.

>The Security Considerations section is adequate for the purpose 
>except that no mention is made anywhere in the specification about 
>DKIM and how a mail receiver should interpret presence of DKIM and 
>SPF policy at the same time. This is a legitimate concern since DKIM 
>is already a standards track proposal and SPF is only now being 
>promoted to Standards Track. Thus the SPF document should address 
>the question of dual use.

I commented about the above in my previous reply.

>8.7.  Permerror
>"This signals an error condition that definitely requires operator 
>intervention to be resolved."
>
>I cannot imagine a circumstance which definitely requires a human to 
>be involved in mail delivery.

These are permanent DNS errors or SPF record errors.  For example, if 
an SPF record requires too many DNS lookups, someone has to change 
the record to make the error go away.

The definitely was intended to distinguish from cases such as a DNS 
SERVFAIL that may or may not be permanent, but are temperrors in 
SPF.  In the case of ambiguity about if an error is temporary or 
permanent, it's treated in the design as assumed to be temporary.

>11.2.  SPF-Authorized Email May Contain Other False Identities
>
>    Do not construe the "MAIL FROM" and "HELO" identity authorizations to
>    provide more assurance than they do.
>
>Document has quasi normative language that should be worded as 
>statements of fact rather than as direction.

The following change is proposed is response to the above:

    The "MAIL FROM" and "HELO" identity authorizations do not provide assurance
    about the authorization/authenticity of other identities used in the
    message.

Regards,
S. Moonesamy (as document shepherd)  


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

This document is about allowing a sender of a multicast stream to advertise
that it will be sending duplicate streams offset in time, so that receivers
can receive multiple copies...so that if packets are lost they will
hopefully receive it from the later stream(s).

>From a security point of view, there's no reason to complain.  However, I'm
really dubious about what this will be used for, and whether this is the
best way to solve the problem.  How does one cope with loss?  For
instance...
a) request retransmissions of specific missing pieces, perhaps not from the
original source, but from a redistribution point (e.g., zillions of
scalable reliable multicast protocols that were talked about/published
years ago)
b) send forward error correction so that the data can be reconstructed
(e.g., Digital Fountain)
c) cope with glitches on your video when in rare cases, e.g., network
topology changes, some data gets lost

I'm not sure multicast is used so much anyway.  What are the applications
today?  It seems like most video is individual on-demand rather than
multicast.  And if there were some sort of multicast thing (like a sporting
event), it seems like any combination of a), b), and c) above would be
preferable to multicasting everything multiple times.

A specific comment:  In the security considerations section it says "the
SDP description needs to be integrity protected..."  Is this MUST be?
 SHOULD be?

Radia

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px=
">I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate&#39;s o=
ngoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =A0=
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area =
directors. =A0Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments ju=
st like any other last call comments.</span><br>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></span=
></div><div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">Thi=
s document is about allowing a sender of a multicast stream to advertise th=
at it will be sending duplicate streams offset in time, so that receivers c=
an receive multiple copies...so that if packets are lost they will hopefull=
y receive it from the later stream(s).</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></span=
></div><div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">Fro=
m a security point of view, there&#39;s no reason to complain. =A0However, =
I&#39;m really dubious about what this will be used for, and whether this i=
s the best way to solve the problem. =A0How does one cope with loss? =A0For=
 instance...</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">a) request=
 retransmissions of specific missing pieces, perhaps not from the original =
source, but from a redistribution point (e.g., zillions of scalable reliabl=
e multicast protocols that were talked about/published years ago)</span></d=
iv>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">b) send fo=
rward error correction so that the data can be reconstructed (e.g., Digital=
 Fountain)</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;fon=
t-size:13px">c) cope with glitches on your video when in rare cases, e.g., =
network topology changes, some data gets lost</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></span=
></div><div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">I&#=
39;m not sure multicast is used so much anyway. =A0What are the application=
s today? =A0It seems like most video is individual on-demand rather than mu=
lticast. =A0And if there were some sort of multicast thing (like a sporting=
 event), it seems like any combination of a), b), and c) above would be pre=
ferable to multicasting everything multiple times.</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></span=
></div><div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">A s=
pecific comment: =A0In the security considerations section it says &quot;th=
e SDP description needs to be integrity protected...&quot; =A0Is this MUST =
be? =A0SHOULD be?</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></span=
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ia</span></div></div>

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Hi Radia,

On Sep 18, 2013, at 9:20 AM, Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoi=
ng effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These =
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area direct=
ors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like =
any other last call comments.
>=20
> This document is about allowing a sender of a multicast stream to adverti=
se that it will be sending duplicate streams offset in time, so that receiv=
ers can receive multiple copies...so that if packets are lost they will hop=
efully receive it from the later stream(s).
>=20
> From a security point of view, there's no reason to complain.  However, I=
'm really dubious about what this will be used for, and whether this is the=
 best way to solve the problem.  How does one cope with loss?  For instance=
...
> a) request retransmissions of specific missing pieces, perhaps not from t=
he original source, but from a redistribution point (e.g., zillions of scal=
able reliable multicast protocols that were talked about/published years ag=
o)
> b) send forward error correction so that the data can be reconstructed (e=
.g., Digital Fountain)
> c) cope with glitches on your video when in rare cases, e.g., network top=
ology changes, some data gets lost

You are right, there are several different ways to deal with packet loss fo=
r both multicast and unicast. Retransmission, FEC, error concealment are al=
l options. But the main use case for duplication is when there is a network=
 outage for a period of time (i.e., bursty packet losses) like a route fail=
ure, hardware failure, etc. and all the packets transmitted during the outa=
ge will likely get lost until the route is repaired (could be 50 ms or 1 s =
or longer). Ret, FEC cannot deal with such outages. Concealment is not an o=
ption in most critical video apps, either. Duplication is a simple alternat=
ive. It has been deployed, it works and it is proven for this use case.

>=20
> I'm not sure multicast is used so much anyway.  What are the applications=
 today?  It seems like most video is individual on-demand rather than multi=
cast. =20

heard IPTV?

> And if there were some sort of multicast thing (like a sporting event), i=
t seems like any combination of a), b), and c) above would be preferable to=
 multicasting everything multiple times.

We deployed all options you listed above as well as duplication. As I said,=
 they provide resiliency in different use cases.

>=20
> A specific comment:  In the security considerations section it says "the =
SDP description needs to be integrity protected..."  Is this MUST be?  SHOU=
LD be?

I dont think it deserves a 2119 keyword, there. Unless you have a strong ob=
jection, I prefer to keep it as it is.

many thanks.
-acbegen

>=20
> Radia


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Do not be alarmed.  I have reviewed this document as part of the security d=
irectorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by=
 the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the se=
curity area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these c=
omments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: The document is ready for publication

This informational document provides guidance on extending Diameter applica=
tions and on creating new ones. It contains advice such as to re-use existi=
ng commands and AVPs, considerations for adding and deleting commands and A=
VPs, and accounting.

Section 5.11 talks about Diameter security mechanisms: (D)TLS or IPsec. Som=
e might dislike that it still mentions IKEv1. I'm not sure why this section=
 is necessary at all, as these security mechanisms apply to the base protoc=
ol rather than any particular extension.

There is a 2-page section dealing with registration considerations, but onl=
y a very short paragraph for security considerations. That section pretty m=
uch says that extensions may be related to security functionality, but the =
document does not give guidance on enhancing Diameter with respect to secur=
ity. I agree that this is OK, and new security functionality should specify=
 its own considerations. I do wonder, though, whether it makes sense to inc=
lude advice about the content in new data and applications as it relates to=
 security, specifically as it relates to data leakage or data aggregation o=
r user privacy.


Nit:

Second sentence in the security considerations section:
OLD:
 Although such an extension may related to security functionality,
NEW:
 Although such an extension may be related to security functionality,

Yoav=

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Thanks Yoav,

I'll make sure the authors provide enough reasoning if they intend =
keeping IKEv1 in the document.

We also try to figure out whether expanding security considerations on =
the points you mention would be justified within the context of this =
document.

- Jouni

On Sep 18, 2013, at 2:10 PM, Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com> wrote:

> Do not be alarmed.  I have reviewed this document as part of the =
security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being =
processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the =
benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs =
should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> Summary: The document is ready for publication
>=20
> This informational document provides guidance on extending Diameter =
applications and on creating new ones. It contains advice such as to =
re-use existing commands and AVPs, considerations for adding and =
deleting commands and AVPs, and accounting.
>=20
> Section 5.11 talks about Diameter security mechanisms: (D)TLS or =
IPsec. Some might dislike that it still mentions IKEv1. I'm not sure why =
this section is necessary at all, as these security mechanisms apply to =
the base protocol rather than any particular extension.
>=20
> There is a 2-page section dealing with registration considerations, =
but only a very short paragraph for security considerations. That =
section pretty much says that extensions may be related to security =
functionality, but the document does not give guidance on enhancing =
Diameter with respect to security. I agree that this is OK, and new =
security functionality should specify its own considerations. I do =
wonder, though, whether it makes sense to include advice about the =
content in new data and applications as it relates to security, =
specifically as it relates to data leakage or data aggregation or user =
privacy.
>=20
>=20
> Nit:
>=20
> Second sentence in the security considerations section:
> OLD:
> Although such an extension may related to security functionality,
> NEW:
> Although such an extension may be related to security functionality,
>=20
> Yoav


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There seems to be some reviews that have been hanging in for there for
long time, it would be nice to get those reviews done at some point
(Cridland, DeKok, Hutzelman, Laganier, Waltermire, Weiler, Weis,
Zorn). Even if the review does not have deadline (i.e. it is early
assignment) the reviews should be done in few weeks time.

Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Dave Cridland is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2013-09-26

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Rob Austein            T 2013-08-29 draft-ietf-netext-update-notifications-08
Dan Harkins            T 2013-09-02 draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-12
David Harrington       TR2013-09-03 draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-05
Julien Laganier        T 2013-09-17 draft-ietf-ccamp-swcaps-update-03
Ondrej Sury            T 2013-08-16 draft-nandakumar-rtcweb-stun-uri-07
Tina TSOU              TR2013-08-16 draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-07


For telechat 2013-10-10

Rob Austein            T 2012-09-20 draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-11
Glen Zorn              T 2013-09-27 draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-callflows-06

Last calls and special requests:

Derek Atkins             2013-10-01 draft-ietf-siprec-architecture-08
Rob Austein              2013-10-16 draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03
Dave Cridland            -          draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-23
Dave Cridland            -          draft-dunbar-armd-arp-nd-scaling-practices-07
Alan DeKok               2013-03-30 draft-ietf-roll-terminology-12
Donald Eastlake          2013-10-10 draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07
Jeffrey Hutzelman        2013-07-16 draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-04
Jeffrey Hutzelman        -          draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-04
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-security-options-06
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-08
Ben Laurie               2013-09-23 draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-03
Matt Lepinski            2013-09-24 draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05
Catherine Meadows        2013-09-23 draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14
Alexey Melnikov          -          draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-05
Kathleen Moriarty        2013-10-01 draft-resnick-retire-std1-01
Sandy Murphy             2013-09-20 draft-ietf-6man-ext-transmit-03
Magnus Nystrom           2013-09-24 draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-08
Vincent Roca             2013-09-24 draft-ietf-mmusic-duplication-grouping-03
Joe Salowey              2013-09-23 draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-threats-06
Yaron Sheffer            2013-09-26 draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-use-cases-07
Ondrej Sury              2013-09-27 draft-ietf-ecrit-psap-callback-10
Tina TSOU                2013-09-27 draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07
Carl Wallace             2013-09-30 draft-ietf-hip-reload-instance-08
David Waltermire         -          draft-ietf-repute-considerations-02
David Waltermire         2013-09-30 draft-ietf-intarea-flow-label-balancing-01
Sam Weiler               2013-04-26 draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses-13
Sam Weiler               2013-09-30 draft-ietf-opsec-ip-options-filtering-05
Brian Weis               -          draft-ietf-radext-dtls-06
Brian Weis               2013-09-30 draft-ietf-p2psip-drr-10
Klaas Wierenga           2013-09-30 draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-10
Tom Yu                   2013-10-01 draft-ietf-sidr-origin-ops-21
Glen Zorn                2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-03
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kivinen@iki.fi

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document lists use cases of telepresence scenarios (a.k.a. 
videoconferencing, for those of us are not following).

I agree with the authors that such use cases do not need to include 
security considerations. There is often a fine line between use cases 
(or "problem statement") and requirements, and IMO requirements should 
include security issues or security expectations. But this document 
seems to be squarely on the use cases side of this line, and is fine as-is.

Thanks,
      Yaron


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This ID describes a method by which service providers for Virtual =
Private LANs can use multicast trees for routing
muilticast messages to customers in VPLS.  This extends RFC's  4761 =
"Virtual Private LAN Service using
BGP for Auto-Discovery and Signaling" and 4762, "Virtual Private LAN =
Services
over MPLS Label Distribution Protocol (LDP) Signaling".  In these RFC's, =
the ingress Provider Edge Device (ingress PE)
replicates a copy of the message for each relevant exit PE.  This can =
become a performance bottleneck when the
number of recipients is large.  This ID addresses this problem.

This ID addresses mainly internal network management, and so, as the =
authors point out in the Security Considerations Section,
it does not introduce many security problems other than already =
discussed in those RFC's, which are mainly addressed by the
security features of BGP, upon which the protocols rely.  The main =
security issue introduced by this draft is that neither
BGP nor VPLS provide for secrecy of the multicast tree data.  However, =
as the authors point out, providing such security
is the responsibility of the Service Provider managing the LAN, and this =
is beyond the scope of VPLS.

I do not think any modifications or extensions need to be made to the =
security section, but I have a couple of other questions:

This ID is described as being intended for use with RFC's 4761 and 4762, =
but when I checked on 4761 in the ID tracker,
it said that it is updated by 4762, although 4762 itself says nothing =
about this.  In that case, is there any reason to provide support for =
4761?  Or was this an error in the ID tracker?

Likewise, the ID refers to both 4761 and 4762 for definitions of terms.  =
What happens if the two RFC's don't agree on
a definition?  Should one default to 4762, or to the RFC the implementer =
is using?  According to RFC 4762, the protocol
defined by the two RFC's, although they perform similar functions, are =
independent and incompatible, so this could
make possibly a difference.


Cathy Meadows


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  I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

  This document contains a list of terms and definitions.  It has no
security considerations.

  Alan DeKok.

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Cathy,

Thank you for the review.

The only update I can see, which only shows in
the tools page and not the datatracker, is by
RFC5462, and given the subject matter of RFC5462
the only change can be the renaming of the EXP
bits to TC bits. This is well known in the MPLS
community, and enhances rather than diminishes
security. There were a few people that
felt inclined to do production network experiments
with these distinctly non-experimental bits and the
purpose of RFC5462, was to stop that happening.
There is no implication for this draft.

- Stewart



On 22/09/2013 23:50, Yakov Rekhter wrote:
> Cathy,
>
>> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>
>>
>> This ID describes a method by which service providers for Virtual
>> Private LANs can use multicast trees for routing
>> muilticast messages to customers in VPLS.  This extends RFC's
>> 4761 "Virtual Private LAN Service using
>> BGP for Auto-Discovery and Signaling" and 4762, "Virtual Private LAN Services
>> over MPLS Label Distribution Protocol (LDP) Signaling".  In these RFC's, the
>> ingress Provider Edge Device (ingress PE)
>> replicates a copy of the message for each relevant exit PE.  This can become
>> a performance bottleneck when the
>> number of recipients is large.  This ID addresses this problem.
>>
>> This ID addresses mainly internal network management, and so, as the authors
>> point out in the Security Considerations Section,
>> it does not introduce many security problems other than already discussed in
>> those RFC's, which are mainly addressed by the
>> security features of BGP, upon which the protocols rely.  The main security
>> issue introduced by this draft is that neither
>> BGP nor VPLS provide for secrecy of the multicast tree data.  However, as the
>> authors point out, providing such security
>> is the responsibility of the Service Provider managing the LAN, and this
>> is beyond the scope of VPLS.
>>
>> I do not think any modifications or extensions need to be made to the
>> security section, but I have a couple of other questions:
>>
>> This ID is described as being intended for use with RFC's 4761 and 4762, but
>> when I checked on 4761 in the ID tracker,
>> it said that it is updated by 4762, although 4762 itself says nothing
>> about this.  In that case, is there any reason to provide support for
>> 4761?  Or was this an error in the ID tracker?
> If indeed the ID tracker said that 4761 is updated by 4762, then this
> indeed is an error in the ID tracker.
>
>> Likewise, the ID refers to both 4761 and 4762 for definitions of terms.  What
>> happens if the two RFC's don't agree on
>> a definition?  Should one default to 4762, or to the RFC the implementer
>> is using?  According to RFC 4762, the protocol
>> defined by the two RFC's, although they perform similar functions,
>> are independent and incompatible, so this could
>> make possibly a difference.
> To the RFC the implementer is using.
>
> Yakov.
>
> .
>


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Cathy,

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
> 
> 
> This ID describes a method by which service providers for Virtual 
> Private LANs can use multicast trees for routing
> muilticast messages to customers in VPLS.  This extends RFC's  
> 4761 "Virtual Private LAN Service using
> BGP for Auto-Discovery and Signaling" and 4762, "Virtual Private LAN Services
> over MPLS Label Distribution Protocol (LDP) Signaling".  In these RFC's, the 
> ingress Provider Edge Device (ingress PE)
> replicates a copy of the message for each relevant exit PE.  This can become 
> a performance bottleneck when the
> number of recipients is large.  This ID addresses this problem.
> 
> This ID addresses mainly internal network management, and so, as the authors 
> point out in the Security Considerations Section,
> it does not introduce many security problems other than already discussed in 
> those RFC's, which are mainly addressed by the
> security features of BGP, upon which the protocols rely.  The main security 
> issue introduced by this draft is that neither
> BGP nor VPLS provide for secrecy of the multicast tree data.  However, as the
> authors point out, providing such security
> is the responsibility of the Service Provider managing the LAN, and this 
> is beyond the scope of VPLS.
> 
> I do not think any modifications or extensions need to be made to the 
> security section, but I have a couple of other questions:
> 
> This ID is described as being intended for use with RFC's 4761 and 4762, but 
> when I checked on 4761 in the ID tracker,
> it said that it is updated by 4762, although 4762 itself says nothing 
> about this.  In that case, is there any reason to provide support for 
> 4761?  Or was this an error in the ID tracker?

If indeed the ID tracker said that 4761 is updated by 4762, then this
indeed is an error in the ID tracker.

> Likewise, the ID refers to both 4761 and 4762 for definitions of terms.  What
> happens if the two RFC's don't agree on
> a definition?  Should one default to 4762, or to the RFC the implementer 
> is using?  According to RFC 4762, the protocol
> defined by the two RFC's, although they perform similar functions, 
> are independent and incompatible, so this could
> make possibly a difference.

To the RFC the implementer is using.

Yakov.


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Hello,

Today W3C Advisory Committee Representatives received a Proposal to revise  
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Document description of Activity Proposals [1]). This proposal includes a  
draft charter for the  Web Application Security Working Group and the XML  
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   http://www.w3.org/2013/07/webappsec-charter.html
   http://www.w3.org/2013/02/xmlsec-charter.html

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I wasn't sure what was changing here so I asked, and Coralie
helpfully answered:

"The XML Security group has completed its Recommendations and
is re-chartered for maintenance only.

WebAppSec adds deliverables: an extended version of the Content
Security Policy specification, already in progress, and new
Recommendations on Secure Mixed Content and Lighweight
Isolated / Safe Content."

Cheers,
S.

On 09/23/2013 12:10 PM, Coralie Mercier wrote:
> 
> Hello,
> 
> Today W3C Advisory Committee Representatives received a Proposal to
> revise the Security Activity [0] (see the W3C Process
> Document description of Activity Proposals [1]). This proposal includes
> a draft charter for the  Web Application Security Working Group and the
> XML Security Working Group:
>   http://www.w3.org/2013/07/webappsec-charter.html
>   http://www.w3.org/2013/02/xmlsec-charter.html
> 
> As part of ensuring that the community is aware of proposed work at W3C,
> this draft charter is public during the Advisory
> Committee review period.
> 
> W3C invites public comments through 2013-10-21 on the proposed charter.
> Please send comments to public-new-work@w3.org, which has a public archive:
>   http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-new-work/
> 
> Other than comments sent in formal responses by W3C Advisory Committee
> Representatives, W3C cannot guarantee a response to comments. If you
> work for a W3C Member [2], please coordinate your comments with your
> Advisory Committee Representative. For example, you may wish to make
> public comments via this list and have your Advisory Committee
> Representative refer to it from his or her formal review comments.
> 
> If you should have any questions or need further information, please
> contact Wendy Seltzer, Team contact <wseltzer@w3.org>.
> 
> Thank you,
> 
> Coralie Mercier, W3C Communications
> 
> [0] https://www.w3.org/Security/
> [1] http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/activities#ActivityCreation
> [2] http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Member/List
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  I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's=0A=
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.=0A=
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security=0A=
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these=0A=
comments just like any other last call comments.=0A=
=0A=
Draft draft-ietf-6man-ext-transmit-03 describes some of the problems of=0A=
deployment of new IPv6 extension header types.  It updates RFC 2460 and=0A=
RFC 2780 to clarify how extension headers, particularly unrecognized=0A=
extension headers, should be treated by intermediate nodes.  It also=0A=
creates a new IANA registry for extension headers.=0A=
=0A=
The security considerations section discusses mandated behavior for=0A=
firewalls in particular, but without explaining the security=0A=
implications of that mandated behavior.  The section also mentions the=0A=
possibility of exercising previously unused code paths and slow=0A=
deployment.  Section 1 and 2.1 do a better job of describing the=0A=
potential safety problem of accepting unknown extenstion header types=0A=
and the connectivity problem of dropping them.=0A=
=0A=
RFC 4727 security considerations section speaks of the security=0A=
concerns of experimental values that would apply to unrecognized=0A=
extension headers as well.  RFC6564 mentions the potential for a=0A=
covert channel through forwarded unrecognized extension headers.  The=0A=
security considerations section here would be improved by using or=0A=
referring to those sorts of discussions.=0A=
=0A=
Aside from the security considerations section, I puzzled over many=0A=
parts of this document.  I am not an IPv6 implementers (or of anything=0A=
else), but I believe that some of the language would be ambiguous in=0A=
implementing this draft.=0A=
=0A=
standardized vs standard vs experimental=0A=
----------------------------------------=0A=
=0A=
The draft text says "standardized" in many places where it appears it=0A=
means "published in an IETF specification", and in other places where it=0A=
appears it means "an extension header defined as a standard".  Sometimes=0A=
"standardized" and "experimental" seem to be mutually exclusive.=0A=
Sometimes "experimental" seems to be one of the set of "standardized'=0A=
extensions.=0A=
=0A=
That language should be cleared up.=0A=
=0A=
I read this presuming that "standard/standardized" and "experimental"=0A=
mean "defined in an IETF Standards Track RFC" and "defined in an IETF=0A=
Experimental RFC".  That should be clearer.=0A=
=0A=
"by default" and "configuration" and "policy"=0A=
--------------------------------------------=0A=
=0A=
Section 2.1 says:=0A=
=0A=
I found the text concerning configuration of policy to discard unrecognize=
=0A=
extensions and default behavior to be unclear:=0A=
=0A=
The section starts with:=0A=
=0A=
                                                       Exceptionally, if=0A=
   this node is designed to examine extension headers for any reason,=0A=
   such as firewalling, it MUST recognise and deal appropriately with=0A=
   all standardised IPv6 extension header types =0A=
=0A=
and then=0A=
=0A=
   RFC 2460 requires destination hosts to discard packets containing=0A=
   unrecognised extension headers.  However, intermediate forwarding=0A=
   nodes SHOULD NOT do this by default,=0A=
=0A=
and then=0A=
=0A=
   Experimental IPv6 extension headers, including types 253 and 254=0A=
   defined by [RFC3692] and [RFC4727], SHOULD be treated in the same way=0A=
   as standardised extension headers, but they MAY be dropped by=0A=
   default.=0A=
=0A=
The text "SHOULD NOT do this by default" and "MAY be dropped by=0A=
default" sound inconsistent to me.=0A=
=0A=
=0A=
The text goes on to say:=0A=
=0A=
   Forwarding nodes MUST be configurable to allow packets containing=0A=
   unrecognised extension headers, but such packets MAY be dropped by=0A=
   default.=0A=
=0A=
The text "SHOULD NOT do this by default" and "MAY be dropped by=0A=
default" sound inconsistent to me.=0A=
=0A=
I'm not clear of the intent.  The first paragraph above, I believe, is=0A=
arguing against having a hard coded response to unrecognized extension=0A=
headers.  The later text mandating configurability is intended, I=0A=
believe, to force/allow the operator to make a deliberate choice.  But=0A=
then allowing the configuration to have a default that would drop=0A=
unrecognized extension headers seems to me to return to the situation=0A=
the first paragraph warns against.=0A=
=0A=
=0A=
=0A=
IANA considerations section=0A=
---------------------------=0A=
=0A=
   IANA is requested to clearly mark in the Assigned Internet Protocol  =0A=
   Numbers registry those values which are also IPv6 Extension Header=0A=
   types defined by an IETF action, for example by adding an extra=0A=
   column to indicate this.=0A=
=0A=
I believe "an IETF action" is unclear.  By RFC5237, these fields in the=0A=
current registry are presently assigned by "IESG Approval or Standards=0A=
Action".  I don't know that you want IESG Approval (which requires no=0A=
RFC) for new extension types.  If I'm right that you expect standard=0A=
extension headers to be defined in Standrads Track RFCs and experimental=0A=
extension headers to be defined in Experimental RFCs, I believe that you=0A=
want "Standards Action or IETF Review".  But I'm not an expert in IANA=0A=
registries, you probably should get another opinion.=0A=
=0A=
   Additionally, IANA is requested to replace the existing empty IPv6=0A=
   Next Header Types registry by an IPv6 Extension Header Types=0A=
   registry.=0A=
=0A=
Given that the new registry has a new name, there is no need to replace=0A=
the existing registry with the renamed registry.  True, it is empty=0A=
except for a reference to the protocol numbers registry, but there are=0A=
references in documentation etc. to the Next Header Types registry that=0A=
would become dangling references.  Might as well leave it.=0A=
=0A=
Section 4.2 of RFC5226 has an explicit template for "What to Put in=0A=
Documents That Create a Registry".  The information in this section=0A=
covers most of what is needed, but not all.  It would be easiest to just=0A=
follow the template.=0A=
=0A=
Section 2.1 says=0A=
=0A=
                                                 Packets containing=0A=
   standardised and undeprecated Routing Headers SHOULD be forwarded by=0A=
   default.  At the time of writing, these include Type 2 [RFC6275],=0A=
   Type 3 [RFC6554],=0A=
=0A=
I am not certain what the new extension header IANA registry should=0A=
say in this case.  The protocol numbers registry lists only the type=0A=
43, with routing types in a subregistry of the Internet Protocol=0A=
Version 6 (IPv6) Parameters registry.=0A=
=0A=
The IPv6 parameters registry also shows that some of the registered=0A=
options for Destination Options and Hop-by-Hop Options are Standards=0A=
Track and some are Experimental, so I'm not sure what the registry=0A=
entries should say for those extension headers.  That's particularly=0A=
important given the encouragement to use these Destination Options in=0A=
lieu of creating new extension headers.  Not that it looks like anyone=0A=
is paying any attention to that advice.=0A=
=0A=
=0A=
Quibbles=0A=
-------=0A=
=0A=
Section 1 says:=0A=
=0A=
             This document focuses on clarifying how the header chain=0A=
   should be traversed in the current IPv6 architecture.=0A=
=0A=
I don't believe that this document changes how the header chain is=0A=
traversed, but how unrecognzied headers are treated.=0A=
=0A=
=0A=
In section 3 Security Considerations=0A=
=0A=
                                     In particular, packets containing=0A=
   standard extension headers are only to be discarded as a result of a=0A=
   configurable policy.=0A=
=0A=
This disagrees with Section 2.1, which says that =0A=
=0A=
                                            The default configuration=0A=
   SHOULD allow all standardised extension headers.=0A=
=0A=
=0A=
and=0A=
=0A=
   Forwarding nodes MUST be configurable to allow packets containing=0A=
   unrecognised extension headers, but such packets MAY be dropped by=0A=
   default.=0A=
=0A=
which both seem to allow discarding without an explicit configuration=0A=
to discard.=0A=
=0A=
In Section 3=0A=
=0A=
   will need to take account of them. =0A=
=0A=
I think you mean "take them into account".=0A=
=0A=
--Sandy=0A=
=0A=
Based on checking RFC4727, RFC3692, RFC6564, RFC2460, RFC5237, RFC2780, RFC=
5226, IANA registry for Assigned Internet Protocol Numbers, RFC6275, RFC655=
4, and IANA registry for Destination Options and Hop-by-Hop Options.  So I =
could easily be confused.=0A=

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A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Internet Area. The IESG
has not made any determination yet. The following draft charter was
submitted, and is provided for informational purposes only. Please send
your comments to the IESG mailing list (iesg at ietf.org) by 2013-10-03.

 IPv6 over Networks of Resource-constrained Nodes (6lo)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Proposed WG

Chairs:
  Ulrich Herberg <ulrich@herberg.name>
  Samita Chakrabarti <samita.chakrabarti@ericsson.com>

Technical advisors:
  Ralph Droms <rdroms.ietf@gmail.com>

Assigned Area Director:
  Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net>

Mailing list
  Address: 6lo@ietf.org
  To Subscribe: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lo
  Archive: http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/6lo/current/maillist.html

Charter:

6lo focuses on Internet Area work that is needed for constrained node
networks with the characteristics of:
* limited power, memory and processing resources
* hard upper bounds on state, code space and processing cycles
* optimization of energy and network bandwidth usage
* lack of some layer 2 services like complete device connectivity and
  broadcast/multicast

Specifically, 6lo will work on:

1. IPv6-over-foo adaptation layer specifications using 6LoWPAN
technologies
(RFC4944, RFC6282, RFC6775) for link layer technologies of interest in
constrained node networks

2. Related MIB modules

3. Specifications, such as header compression, that are applicable to
more
than one adaptation layer specification

4. Maintenance and informational documents required for the existing IETF
specifications in this space.

Only specifications targeting constrained node networks are in scope. 6lo
will work closely with the 6man working group, which will continue to
work on IP-over-foo documents outside the constrained node network space
and will continue to be the focal point for IPv6 maintenance. For
adaptation layer specifications that do not have implications on IPv6
architecture, 6man will be notified about 6lo's working group last call.
Specifications that might have such an impact (e.g., by using IPv6
addresses in a specific way or by introducing new ND options) will be
closely coordinated with 6man, and/or specific parts will be fanned out
to 6man documents. Beyond 6man, 6lo will also coordinate with LWIG and
INTAREA.

6lo works on small, focused pieces of Internet Area work. 6lo does not
take on larger cross-layer efforts. The working group will continue to
reuse existing protocols and mechanisms whenever reasonable and possible.

Security and management work that is not specific to the link layers
being
worked on is out of scope. Work related to routing is out of scope. 6lo
will coordinate closely with the working groups in other areas that focus
on constrained node networks, such as ROLL (RTG) and CoRE (APP).

Milestones:

TBD
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The MBONE Deployment (mboned) working group in the Operations and
Management Area of the IETF is undergoing rechartering. The IESG has not
made any determination yet. The following draft charter was submitted,
and is provided for informational purposes only. Please send your
comments to the IESG mailing list (iesg at ietf.org) by 2013-10-03.

MBONE Deployment (mboned)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Active WG

Chairs:
  Greg Shepherd <gjshep@gmail.com>
  Leonard Giuliano <lenny@juniper.net>

Technical advisors:
  Scott Bradner <sob@harvard.edu>

Assigned Area Director:
  Joel Jaeggli <joelja@bogus.com>

Mailing list
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  Archive: http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mboned

Charter:

The MBONE Deployment Working Group is a forum for coordinating the
deployment, engineering, and operation of multicast routing protocols and
procedures in the global Internet, inter-domain and single domain. This
activity will include, but not be limited to:

- Document deployment of multicast routing in the global Internet.

- Receive regular reports on the current state of the deployment of
multicast technology. Create "practice and experience" documents that
capture the experience of those who have deployed and are deploying
various multicast technologies.

- Based on reports and other information, provide feedback to other
relevant working groups.

- Develop mechanisms and procedures for sharing operational information
to aid in operation of the multicast backbones and interconnects.

- Analyze the need for IPv4 - IPv6 multicast transition solutions

- Develop tools, extend protocols and provide operational and
implementation advice that assists in multicast administration,
diagnostics, troubleshooting and deployment between/within native and
non-native environments.

- Development of routing and group membership protocols is out of scope.
This working group may develop requirements and assist in review and
feedback of documents in other working groups responsible for such
protocols.

Goals and Milestones

Nov 2013    	Submit multicast transport guidelines for congestion control
to IESG
Nov 2013    	Submit Mtracev2 to IESG for Proposed Standards
Nov 2013        Submit Overview of Multicast in the Data Center to IESG
for Informational




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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.


This draft discusses considerations for providers and consumers of reputati=
on data systems targeted at traffic sources. This draft focuses primarily o=
n email reputation systems, but provides guidance that is generally applica=
ble to other traffic sources.


After reviewing this informational document I have a few nits and some mino=
r security-related concerns. This document is not ready as there are a few =
points that need to be addressed.



Areas of concern:



Since reputation data is tied to identifiable traffic sources, should there=
 be privacy considerations discussed in this document?



Section 1: Introduction, Paragraph 1: The last sentence refers to "several =
operational concepts appear to be common to all of these", but it is not cl=
ear what "common to all of these" means.  Rating methods? Services? Problem=
 domains? Something else?



Section 3: Evolution, Paragraph 3:



There is no evidence presented to justify the claim that the problem space =
is reduced by focusing on good actors as compared to bad actors. The author=
 makes the claim that there are "vastly more IP addresses and email address=
es used by bad actors to generate problematic traffic than are used by good=
 actors to generate desirable traffic." I'd like to see some statistics fro=
m one or more reputable studies (no humor intended) that defend this perspe=
ctive.



There is discussion that "manually edited whitelists" have shown some promi=
sing results. It doesn't seem like this will scale well in the face of the =
larger IPv6 address space and new GTLDs. Some discussion on this would be u=
seful.



Section 4: Reputation Clients:



The text "For operational clients, this should prompt balanced and comparat=
ive, rather than unilateral, use of the service" is confusing. I believe th=
is is recommending to use multiple services in a balanced and comparative a=
pproach instead of using a single service, but it doesn't read this way.



Section 5: Reputation Service Providers:



In paragraph 1 the text references "answer as many of the questions identif=
ied in Section 4<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-repute-consideration=
s-02#section-4> as possible", but it is not clear what the referenced "ques=
tions" are.



In paragraph 3 the text asserts that "Reputations should be based on accura=
te identifiers, i.e., some property of the content under analysis that is d=
ifficult to falsify." Is there a general litmus test that can be applied he=
re? Human verification? Automatable verification mechanisms? Is there a min=
imum suggested/required practice?



Section 6: Security Considerations:



While the statement in this section is true, the document doesn't introduce=
 any new security issues, I was hoping for a summary of the security issues=
 discussed in the earlier subject matter with suggestions of security mecha=
nisms that should be considered for use to address these concerns.



Some examples:

*         Discuss using mechanisms to authenticate RSP services and to prov=
ide integrity and confidentiality over exchanged data. Is there a need for =
mutual authentication of clients and servers?

*         The case in Section 4, paragraph 2 is a significant security cons=
ideration. Discuss communication mechanisms that enable RSPs to communicate=
 end-of-life for their services to differentiate from malicious activity. C=
ould this be handled using DNS SRV records? If the service is no longer ann=
ounced, this could signal end-of-life for the service. If this is too speci=
fic for the scope of the document, a more general discussion could be inclu=
ded describing the characteristics of any acceptable solution.



A few nits:



Abstract:

s/reputation systems is has become/reputation systems has become/



Section 4: Reputation Clients:

s/whether the reported reputation a scalar/whether the reported reputation =
is a scalar/

s/capability to effect local overrides/capability to affect local overrides=
/

s/One choice is to query and cross-referencing multiple RSPs/One choice is =
to query and cross-reference multiple RSPs/



Section 5: Reputation Service Providers

s/found in a validated domain-level signature is./found in a validated doma=
in-level signature is verifiable./

s/For example, it shoudl be possible for the reply to/For example, it shoul=
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rocessed by the IESG.&nbsp; These comments were written primarily for the b=
enefit of the security area directors.&nbsp; Document
 editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last=
 call comments.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This draft discusses considerations for providers an=
d consumers of reputation data systems targeted at traffic sources. This dr=
aft focuses primarily on email reputation systems, but provides guidance th=
at is generally applicable to other
 traffic sources.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">After reviewing this informational document I hav=
e a few nits and some minor security-related concerns. This document is not=
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Areas of concern:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Since reputation data is tied to identifiable tra=
ffic sources, should there be privacy considerations discussed in this docu=
ment?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 1: Introduction, Paragraph 1: The last se=
ntence refers to &#8220;several operational concepts appear to be common to=
 all of these&#8221;, but it is not clear what &#8220;common to all of thes=
e&#8221; means.&nbsp; Rating methods? Services? Problem domains?
 Something else?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 3: Evolution, Paragraph 3:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">There is no evidence presented to justify the cla=
im that the problem space is reduced by focusing on good actors as compared=
 to bad actors. The author makes the claim that there are &#8220;vastly mor=
e IP addresses and email addresses used
 by bad actors to generate problematic traffic than are used by good actors=
 to generate desirable traffic.&#8221; I&#8217;d like to see some statistic=
s from one or more reputable studies (no humor intended) that defend this p=
erspective.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">There is discussion that &#8220;manually edited w=
hitelists&#8221; have shown some promising results. It doesn&#8217;t seem l=
ike this will scale well in the face of the larger IPv6 address space and n=
ew GTLDs. Some discussion on this would be useful.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 4: Reputation Clients:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">The text &#8220;For operational clients, this sho=
uld prompt balanced and comparative, rather than unilateral, use of the ser=
vice&#8221; is confusing. I believe this is recommending to use multiple se=
rvices in a balanced and comparative approach
 instead of using a single service, but it doesn&#8217;t read this way.<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 5: Reputation Service Providers:<o:p></o:=
p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">In paragraph 1 the text references &#8220;answer =
as many of the questions identified in
<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-repute-considerations-02#s=
ection-4">
<span style=3D"color:windowtext;text-decoration:none">Section 4</span></a> =
as possible&#8221;, but it is not clear what the referenced &#8220;question=
s&#8221; are.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">In paragraph 3 the text asserts that &#8220;Reput=
ations should be based on accurate identifiers, i.e., some property of the =
content under analysis that is difficult to falsify.&#8221; Is there a gene=
ral litmus test that can be applied here? Human
 verification? Automatable verification mechanisms? Is there a minimum sugg=
ested/required practice?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 6: Security Considerations:<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">While the statement in this section is true, the =
document doesn&#8217;t introduce any new security issues, I was hoping for =
a summary of the security issues discussed in the earlier subject matter wi=
th suggestions of security mechanisms that
 should be considered for use to address these concerns.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Some examples:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-=
list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-family:Symbol"><span style=3D"mso-=
list:Ignore">&middot;<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;"=
>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]>Discuss using mechanisms to authenticate RSP=
 services and to provide integrity and confidentiality over exchanged data.=
 Is there a need for mutual authentication of clients and servers?<o:p></o:=
p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-=
list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-family:Symbol"><span style=3D"mso-=
list:Ignore">&middot;<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;"=
>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]>The case in Section 4, paragraph 2 is a sign=
ificant security consideration. Discuss communication mechanisms that enabl=
e RSPs to communicate end-of-life for their services to differentiate from =
malicious activity. Could this be
 handled using DNS SRV records? If the service is no longer announced, this=
 could signal end-of-life for the service. If this is too specific for the =
scope of the document, a more general discussion could be included describi=
ng the characteristics of any acceptable
 solution.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">A few nits:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Abstract:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">s/reputation systems is has become/reputation sys=
tems has become/<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 4: Reputation Clients:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">s/whether the reported reputation a scalar/whethe=
r the reported reputation is a scalar/<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">s/capability to effect local overrides/capability=
 to affect local overrides/<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">s/One choice is to query and cross-referencing mu=
ltiple RSPs/One choice is to query and cross-reference multiple RSPs/<o:p><=
/o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Section 5: Reputation Service Providers<o:p></o:p=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">s/found in a validated domain-level signature is.=
/found in a validated domain-level signature is verifiable./<o:p></o:p></p>
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
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mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.


This informational ID describes applying the IPv6 flow label to enhance lay=
er 3/4 load distribution for large server farms. The security consideration=
s in this document build upon the security considerations discussed in RFC6=
437.



The document is ready for publication.

I have no additional security concerns beyond those listed in the document.

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's=20
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the=20
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat=20
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document discusses a threat model for BGP Path Security.   The  docume=
nt contains a lot of good information, but I found it hard to follow in pla=
ces =20
Some issues:

1.   I found it difficult to link the threats in section 3 to the attacks i=
n section 4.   This is more of a consistency of terminology issue and is pr=
obably just a nit.=20
2.   The attacks in sections 4.1, 4.2, and 4.3 seem to be largely discounte=
d as out of scope, yet they seem to impact the goals of PATHSEC.   Is it as=
sumed that there are countermeasures in place such as link protection betwe=
en RGP peers?    If other countermeasures besides PATHSEC are expected to b=
e in place this should probably be mentioned in the security considerations=
. =20
3.   I found the argument against not including 'route leakage' a bit weak =
since the documents seems to be able to define what it means.   Wouldn't 'r=
oute leakage' be a mechanism to realize one or more of the threats in secti=
on 3? =20


Thanks,

Joe


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Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =
 These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document defines an optional extension to RELOAD to support Relay =
Peer Routing (RPR) mode (as opposed to Symmetric Recursive Routing =
(SRR). The document is straightforward and clear, but with respect to =
the security considerations a few comments:

- I am surprised that there is no discussion on the relay peer being the =
single (or few) point of failure,  and thus becoming an interesting =
target for DoS attacks: the relay peer acts as a hub for all traffic =
coming from the peers that have it as their relay. Especially when there =
is a limited number of relays it becomes attractive to bring the relay =
down.=20

- The other thing I wonder about is why there is the need to trust the =
relay, why is this different from the DRR case (apart from the =
observation in my previous comment)? It seems that the system would work =
just fine without the explicit trust in the relay peer, in fact, the way =
I understand it every peer in the overlay can in principle act as a =
relay peer (I imagine a scenario where the relay peer acts as the =
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Hi Chris,

Thanks for the review, I missed it earlier.  responses inline below:


On Jul 24, 2013, at 9:44 AM, Chris Lonvick <clonvick@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> Overall the document is well written and I found it to be complete. Since=
 the document is a bit on the long side, I focused on sections 1 through 3,=
 and 7.  I scanned sections 4, 5, and 6.  I did not review the Appendixes. =
 I did have a couple of issues that I want to raise:
>=20
> In Section 3.6.1, point #2 says that the TEAP packet is to be "ignored" i=
f the other fields are "wrong".
> - What does "wrong" mean?

[Joe] Wrong means inconsistent with the rest of the specification.  new tex=
t:

"The entire TEAP packet will be ignored if other fields (version, length, f=
lags, etc.) are inconsistent with this specification."

> - Also, I'd like to see some more clarification of what is expected from =
the carrier protocol if the TEAP packet is "ignored".  Wouldn't the carrier=
 protocol just attempt redelivery if it doesn't get some sort of acknowldeg=
ement of the delivery of the TEAP packet?
>=20

[Joe] Yes, this is aligned with the behavior in RFC 3748.  THis will result=
 in a timeout and termination of the conversation.=20

> Section 3.8 (second paragraph) says:
>  >  TEAP implementations SHOULD have
>  > a configuration where authentication fails if mutual authentication
>  > cannot be achieved.
> My personal feeling is that the SHOULD should be replaced with a MUST, bu=
t I acknowledge that is an implementation detail.  I then went looking for =
a discussion of this in the Security Considerations section and found 7.1 o=
n "Mutual Authentication and Integrity Protection".  However I couldn't fin=
d anything in that section on Mutual Authentication.  Would you please add =
some discussion to that section on the problems that could arise if an impl=
ementation does not have mutual authentication?
>=20

[Joe] The terminology in this section is misleading.  It states peers must =
mutually authenticate the server and the rest of the section should refer t=
o server authentication new text:

 "Several TEAP services including server unauthenticated provisioning,
  PAC provisioning, certificate provisioning and channel binding depend
  on the peer trusting the TEAP server.  Peers MUST=20
  authenticate the server before these peer services are used.

  TEAP peers MUST track whether server authentication has taken place.
  Server authentication results if the peer trusts the provided server
  certificate. Typically this involves both
  validating the certificate to a trust anchor and confirming the
  entity named by the certificate is the intended server.  Server
  authentication also results when the procedures of Section 3.3 are
  used to resume a session in which the the peer and server was
  previously mutually authenticated.  Alternatively, if an inner EAP
  method providing mutual authentication and an Extended Master Session
  Key (EMSK) is executed and cryptographic binding with the EMSK
  compound MAC is present (Section 4.2.13), then the session is
  mutually authenticated and peer services can be used. =20

  TEAP implementations SHOULD NOT use peer services by default unless the
  session is server authenticated.  TEAP peer implementations MUST have
  a configuration where authentication fails if server authentication
  cannot be achieved.

  An additional complication arises when a tunnel method authenticates
  multiple parties such as authenticating both the peer machine and the
  peer user to the EAP server.  Depending on how authentication
  is achieved, only some of these parties may have confidence in it.
  For example if a strong shared secret is used to mutually
  authenticate the user and the EAP server, the machine may not have
  confidence that the EAP server is the authenticated party if the
  machine cannot trust the user not to disclose the shared secret to an
  attacker.  In these cases, the parties who participate in the
  authentication need to be considered when evaluating whether to use
  peer services. "

>=20
> I also found a few nits that you may want to look at.
>=20
> You mostly use "Type-Length-Value" but you have one instance of "Type Len=
gth Value".
>=20
> Section 3.1 says,
>   > MUST use a version field set to 1.
> Throughout section 4 you sometimes use "set to 1", and sometimes use "set=
 to zero (0)", and in a few cases "set to (1)".  This inconsistency just se=
t my OCD value to one (1).  ;-)
>=20
> Section 3.3
>   > If the server ignores the
>   > request, it proceeds with termination of the tunnel and send the
>   > clear text EAP Success or Failure message based on the Status field
>   > of the peer's Request-Action TLV.
> Maybe:
>   If the server ignores the
>   request, it proceeds with termination of the tunnel and sends the
> or "will send".
>=20
> Typo in section 3.8.4
>   > after it has succ;essfully authenticated the server and established
>=20
> Section 7
>   > greater.  The threat model used for the security evaluation of TEAP
>   > is defined in the EAP [RFC3748].
> Maybe just "defined in EAP [RFC3748].", or "defined in the security consi=
deration section in EAP [[RFC3748]."
>=20
>=20

[Joe] Thanks, I'll address these.=20

> Regards,
> Chris


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Sandy,

Thanks again for the extensive review. We have a new version out:

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-ext-transmit

There's also a htmlized version available at:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6man-ext-transmit-04

A diff from the previous version is available at:
http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6man-ext-transmit-04

Now some direct responses to your review:

On 24/09/2013 10:50, Murphy, Sandra wrote:
...

> The security considerations section discusses mandated behavior for
> firewalls in particular, but without explaining the security
> implications of that mandated behavior.  

A new paragraph has been added.

...

> 
> RFC 4727 security considerations section speaks of the security
> concerns of experimental values that would apply to unrecognized
> extension headers as well.  RFC6564 mentions the potential for a
> covert channel through forwarded unrecognized extension headers.  The
> security considerations section here would be improved by using or
> referring to those sorts of discussions.

OK

> 
> Aside from the security considerations section, I puzzled over many
> parts of this document.  I am not an IPv6 implementers (or of anything
> else), but I believe that some of the language would be ambiguous in
> implementing this draft.
> 
> standardized vs standard vs experimental
> ----------------------------------------
> 
> The draft text says "standardized" in many places where it appears it
> means "published in an IETF specification", and in other places where it
> appears it means "an extension header defined as a standard".  

I think that comes to the same thing. Some extension headers are hidden
in broader specs, others have stand-alone RFCs.

> Sometimes
> "standardized" and "experimental" seem to be mutually exclusive.
> Sometimes "experimental" seems to be one of the set of "standardized'
> extensions.

That, unfortunately, is reality. RFC5201 is an Experimental RFC that defines
an extension header. RFC4727 is a Proposed Standard RFC that defines values
for experimental use. RFC3692 is a BCP that does the same (and, I think, makes
the assignment for RFC5201 illegal, if you're picky).

> That language should be cleared up.
> 
> I read this presuming that "standard/standardized" and "experimental"
> mean "defined in an IETF Standards Track RFC" and "defined in an IETF
> Experimental RFC".  That should be clearer.

We've defined and tried to clarify the terminology, but the confusion is intrinsic
to the existing RFCs. We've attempted to be consistent, at least.

> "by default" and "configuration" and "policy"
> --------------------------------------------
> 
> Section 2.1 says:
> 
> I found the text concerning configuration of policy to discard unrecognize
> extensions and default behavior to be unclear:
> 
> The section starts with:
> 
>                                                        Exceptionally, if
>    this node is designed to examine extension headers for any reason,
>    such as firewalling, it MUST recognise and deal appropriately with
>    all standardised IPv6 extension header types 
> 
> and then
> 
>    RFC 2460 requires destination hosts to discard packets containing
>    unrecognised extension headers.  However, intermediate forwarding
>    nodes SHOULD NOT do this by default,
> 
> and then
> 
>    Experimental IPv6 extension headers, including types 253 and 254
>    defined by [RFC3692] and [RFC4727], SHOULD be treated in the same way
>    as standardised extension headers, but they MAY be dropped by
>    default.
> 
> The text "SHOULD NOT do this by default" and "MAY be dropped by
> default" sound inconsistent to me.

Yes, those ideas are squeezed into too few words.
> 
> 
> The text goes on to say:
> 
>    Forwarding nodes MUST be configurable to allow packets containing
>    unrecognised extension headers, but such packets MAY be dropped by
>    default.
> 
> The text "SHOULD NOT do this by default" and "MAY be dropped by
> default" sound inconsistent to me.
> 
> I'm not clear of the intent.  

What we are trying to do is reconcile the IPv6 architecture that *requires"
all forwarding nodes to allow all extension headers with the firewall role
that requires firewalls to drop suspect packets. We've tuned the language.
There is a logical cascade here:

All nodes MUST recognise all valid extension headers
  Firewalls MUST NOT discard extension headers without good reason
  (expressed as SHOULD NOT discard valid headers by default)
     Except that firewalls MAY discard experimental/unrecognised headers by default.


> The first paragraph above, I believe, is
> arguing against having a hard coded response to unrecognized extension
> headers.  The later text mandating configurability is intended, I
> believe, to force/allow the operator to make a deliberate choice.  But
> then allowing the configuration to have a default that would drop
> unrecognized extension headers seems to me to return to the situation
> the first paragraph warns against.

That's not intended, but we're ttrying to be realistic about what firewall
vendors are likely to set as defaults.  We don't think they would allow
experimental values through by default, whatever we wrote.

> 
> IANA considerations section
> ---------------------------
> 
>    IANA is requested to clearly mark in the Assigned Internet Protocol  
>    Numbers registry those values which are also IPv6 Extension Header
>    types defined by an IETF action, for example by adding an extra
>    column to indicate this.
> 
> I believe "an IETF action" is unclear.  By RFC5237, these fields in the
> current registry are presently assigned by "IESG Approval or Standards
> Action".  

IANA didn't query this, but you are right. We didn't put "Standards Action"
because of experimental values. We need to put "Standards Action or
IESG Approval" to match RFC5226.

> I don't know that you want IESG Approval (which requires no
> RFC) for new extension types.  If I'm right that you expect standard
> extension headers to be defined in Standrads Track RFCs and experimental
> extension headers to be defined in Experimental RFCs, I believe that you
> want "Standards Action or IETF Review".  But I'm not an expert in IANA
> registries, you probably should get another opinion.
> 
>    Additionally, IANA is requested to replace the existing empty IPv6
>    Next Header Types registry by an IPv6 Extension Header Types
>    registry.
> 
> Given that the new registry has a new name, there is no need to replace
> the existing registry with the renamed registry.  True, it is empty
> except for a reference to the protocol numbers registry, but there are
> references in documentation etc. to the Next Header Types registry that
> would become dangling references.  Might as well leave it.

Good catch, but I think leaving it empty is also misleading. We have now
asked IANA to insert a pointer to redirect the dangling reference.

> 
> Section 4.2 of RFC5226 has an explicit template for "What to Put in
> Documents That Create a Registry".  The information in this section
> covers most of what is needed, but not all.  It would be easiest to just
> follow the template.

I'll check, but I think that following IANA's comments we have
covered everthinng now.

> 
> Section 2.1 says
> 
>                                                  Packets containing
>    standardised and undeprecated Routing Headers SHOULD be forwarded by
>    default.  At the time of writing, these include Type 2 [RFC6275],
>    Type 3 [RFC6554],
> 
> I am not certain what the new extension header IANA registry should
> say in this case.  The protocol numbers registry lists only the type
> 43, with routing types in a subregistry of the Internet Protocol
> Version 6 (IPv6) Parameters registry.

Yes, they don't seem to belong here.

> 
> The IPv6 parameters registry also shows that some of the registered
> options for Destination Options and Hop-by-Hop Options are Standards
> Track and some are Experimental, so I'm not sure what the registry
> entries should say for those extension headers.  That's particularly
> important given the encouragement to use these Destination Options in
> lieu of creating new extension headers.  Not that it looks like anyone
> is paying any attention to that advice.

The option headers themselves are standards track, being built into RFC2460.
We really don't want to dive into individual options in this document.
Admittedly, firewall developers may feel they have to do so, but we can't
legislate everything.

> 
> Quibbles
> -------
> 
> Section 1 says:
> 
>              This document focuses on clarifying how the header chain
>    should be traversed in the current IPv6 architecture.
> 
> I don't believe that this document changes how the header chain is
> traversed, but how unrecognzied headers are treated.

Correct.

> 
> 
> In section 3 Security Considerations
> 
>                                      In particular, packets containing
>    standard extension headers are only to be discarded as a result of a
>    configurable policy.
> 
> This disagrees with Section 2.1, which says that 
> 
>                                             The default configuration
>    SHOULD allow all standardised extension headers.
> 
> 
> and
> 
>    Forwarding nodes MUST be configurable to allow packets containing
>    unrecognised extension headers, but such packets MAY be dropped by
>    default.
> 
> which both seem to allow discarding without an explicit configuration
> to discard.

For headers unknown to the firewall, yes. We don't seriously expect anything
else as a factory default.

> 
> In Section 3
> 
>    will need to take account of them. 
> 
> I think you mean "take them into account".

OK

> 
> --Sandy
> 
> Based on checking RFC4727, RFC3692, RFC6564, RFC2460, RFC5237, RFC2780, RFC5226, IANA registry for Assigned Internet Protocol Numbers, RFC6275, RFC6554, and IANA registry for Destination Options and Hop-by-Hop Options.  So I could easily be confused.
> 


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For telechat 2013-09-26

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Rob Austein            T 2013-08-29 draft-ietf-netext-update-notifications-08
Dan Harkins            T 2013-09-02 draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-12
David Harrington       TR2013-09-03 draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-05
Julien Laganier        T 2013-09-17 draft-ietf-ccamp-swcaps-update-03
Ondrej Sury            T 2013-08-16 draft-nandakumar-rtcweb-stun-uri-07
Tina TSOU              TR2013-08-16 draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-07


For telechat 2013-10-10

Rob Austein            T 2012-09-20 draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-11
Glen Zorn              T 2013-09-27 draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-callflows-06

Last calls and special requests:

Derek Atkins             2013-10-01 draft-ietf-siprec-architecture-08
Rob Austein              2013-10-16 draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03
Dave Cridland            -          draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-24
Dave Cridland            -          draft-dunbar-armd-arp-nd-scaling-practices-07
Dave Cridland            2013-10-03 draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14
Alan DeKok               2013-10-18 draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-03
Donald Eastlake          2013-10-10 draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07
Jeffrey Hutzelman        2013-07-16 draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-04
Jeffrey Hutzelman        -          draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-04
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-security-options-06
Julien Laganier          -          draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-08
Ben Laurie               2013-09-23 draft-ietf-idr-rfd-usable-03
Matt Lepinski            2013-09-24 draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05
Alexey Melnikov          -          draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-06
Kathleen Moriarty        2013-10-01 draft-resnick-retire-std1-01
Magnus Nystrom           2013-09-24 draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-reqts-08
Vincent Roca             2013-09-24 draft-ietf-mmusic-duplication-grouping-03
Ondrej Sury              2013-09-27 draft-ietf-ecrit-psap-callback-10
Tina TSOU                2013-09-27 draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07
Carl Wallace             2013-09-30 draft-ietf-hip-reload-instance-08
Sam Weiler               2013-04-26 draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses-13
Sam Weiler               2013-09-30 draft-ietf-opsec-ip-options-filtering-05
Brian Weis               -          draft-ietf-radext-dtls-06
Brian Weis               2013-09-30 draft-ietf-p2psip-drr-10
Tom Yu                   2013-10-01 draft-ietf-sidr-origin-ops-21
Glen Zorn                2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-03
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Dear all,
I have re-reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

Draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-07 has addressed my review comments on=
 draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-06. Thank you for the effort from the=
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Thank you,
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The INtermediary-safe SIP session ID (insipid) working group in the
Real-time Applications and Infrastructure Area of the IETF is undergoing
rechartering. The IESG has not made any determination yet. The following
draft charter was submitted, and is provided for informational purposes
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INtermediary-safe SIP session ID (insipid)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Active WG

Chairs:
  Gonzalo Salgueiro <gsalguei@cisco.com>
  Keith Drage <keith.drage@alcatel-lucent.com>

Assigned Area Director:
  Gonzalo Camarillo <gonzalo.camarillo@ericsson.com>

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Charter:

An end-to-end session identifier in SIP-based multimedia communication
networks refers to the ability for endpoints, intermediate devices,
and management and monitoring system to identify and correlate SIP
messages and dialogs of the same higher-level end-to-end
"communication session" across multiple SIP devices, hops, and
administrative domains.  Unfortunately, there are a number of factors
that contribute to the fact that the current dialog identifiers
defined in SIP are not suitable for end-to-end session
identification. Perhaps the most important factor worth describing is
that in real-world deployments of Back-to-Back User Agents (B2BUAs)
devices like Session Border Controllers (SBC) often change the call
identifiers (e.g., the From-tag and To-tag that are used in
conjunction with the Call-ID header to make the dialog-id) as the
session signaling passes through.
  
An end-to-end session identifier should allow the possibility to
identify the communication session from the point of origin, passing
through any number of intermediaries, to the ultimate point of
termination. It should have the same aim as the From-tag, To-tag and
Call-ID conjunction, but should not be mangled by intermediaries.

A SIP end-to-end session identifier has been considered as possible
solution of different use cases like troubleshooting, billing, session
recording, media and signaling correlation, and so forth.  Some of
these requirements come from other working groups within the RAI area
(e.g., SIPRec).  Moreover, other standards organizations have
identified the need for SIP and H.323 to carry the same "session ID"
value so that it is possible to identify a call end-to-end even when
performing inter working between protocols.

Troubleshooting SIP signalling end-to-end becomes impractical as
networks grow and become interconnected, including connection via
transit networks, because the path that SIP signalling will take
between clients cannot be predicted and the signalling volume and
geographical spread are too large.

This group will focus on two documents:

The first document will specify a SIP identifier that has the same aim
as the From-tag, To-tag and Call-ID conjunction, but is less likely to
be mangled by intermediaries.  In doing this work, the group will pay
attention to the privacy implications of a "session ID", for example
considering the possibility to make it intractable for nodes to
correlate "session IDs" generated by the same user for different
sessions.

The second document will define an indicator that can be added to the
SIP protocol to indicate that signalling should be logged. The
indicator will typically be applied as part of network testing
controlled by the network operator and not used in regular client
signalling.  However, such marking can be carried end-to-end including
the SIP terminals, even if a session originates and terminates in
different networks.

Milestones:
  Dec 2012 - Requirements and use cases for new identifier sent to IESG
(as informational)
  Feb 2013 - Specification of the new identifier sent to the IESG (PS)
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Dear all,
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.

Draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07 provides extensions to the emerg=
ency services architecture described in other documents to allow emergency =
services calling to proceed even when the caller is unauthenticated and una=
uthorized. The draft is particularly relevant to mobile devices, where such=
 a situation is most likely to arise. It assumes separate entities provide =
network access and process calls at the application level, and based on tha=
t, deals with three cases, not necessarily mutually exclusive:
   -- no access authentication;
   -- no application service provider reachable;
   -- subscribed application service provider reachable but ordinary
      service denied because of zero credit balance or other reasons.
Full understanding of this document required review of RFC 5069 (security r=
equirements specifically for emergency call marking and mapping), RFC 6443,=
 the emergency calling framework, and RFC 6881, a BCP specifying requiremen=
ts for various components of the emergency calling system beginning with th=
e subscriber device.

The draft states that it is forward-looking, and is input for other SDOs. O=
ne example of this is the reliance on DHCP provisioning, which is at this p=
oint little-implemented in cellular devices.

General remark: the document is very heavy on abbreviations, which makes se=
rious demands on the novice reader at some points. The terminology and abbr=
eviations are introduced quite properly at the beginning of the document, b=
ut the authors might still ease the reader's task by spelling out at least =
the less-used abbreviations either whenever used (if only two or three time=
s) or perhaps once per section.

General assessment: The document is basically ready, but lacks a statement =
of the specific points in RFCs 6443 and 6881 that need to be changed due to=
 lack of authentication or authorization. As a result, the NASP and NAA sec=
tions are unmotivated.

Editorial: Section 7 in a few places does not quite seem to say what I thin=
k it means, hence the following suggestions:

Suggestion, sec. 7, fourth para, first sentence:
Currently: "We only illustrate a possible model."
Suggested: "We illustrate just one possible model for obtaining the destina=
tion addresses to which emergency callers should be restricted in the NAA c=
ase."

In the next sentence, missing some words: "... as well
    as the address of the LoST server itself."
       ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Suggestion, sec. 7, fifth para, first sentence:
Currently: "For the ZBP case the additional aspect of fraud has to be consi=
dered."
Suggested: "The additional aspect of fraud also has to be considered for th=
e ZBP case."


Typos:

Typo, sec. 5, first bullet: devices -> device

Typo, sec. 7, second para, last sentence: lead -> led

Typo, sec. 7, third para, fourth line: fraudulent -> fraudulently

Thank you,
Tina


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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I have reviewed this document as part of the securit=
y directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed=
 by the IESG.&nbsp; These comments were written primarily for the benefit o=
f the security area directors.&nbsp; Document
 editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last=
 call comments.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07 provides =
extensions to the emergency services architecture described in other docume=
nts to allow emergency services calling to proceed even when the caller is =
unauthenticated and unauthorized.
 The draft is particularly relevant to mobile devices, where such a situati=
on is most likely to arise. It assumes separate entities provide network ac=
cess and process calls at the application level, and based on that, deals w=
ith three cases, not necessarily
 mutually exclusive:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; -- no access authentication;<o:p></o:p>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; -- no application service provider reac=
hable;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; -- subscribed application service provi=
der reachable but ordinary<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; service denied becaus=
e of zero credit balance or other reasons.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Full understanding of this document required review =
of RFC 5069 (security requirements specifically for emergency call marking =
and mapping), RFC 6443, the emergency calling framework, and RFC 6881, a BC=
P specifying requirements for various
 components of the emergency calling system beginning with the subscriber d=
evice.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The draft states that it is forward-looking, and is =
input for other SDOs. One example of this is the reliance on DHCP provision=
ing, which is at this point little-implemented in cellular devices.<o:p></o=
:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">General remark: the document is very heavy on abbrev=
iations, which makes serious demands on the novice reader at some points. T=
he terminology and abbreviations are introduced quite properly at the begin=
ning of the document, but the authors
 might still ease the reader's task by spelling out at least the less-used =
abbreviations either whenever used (if only two or three times) or perhaps =
once per section.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">General assessment: The document is basically ready,=
 but lacks a statement of the specific points in RFCs 6443 and 6881 that ne=
ed to be changed due to lack of authentication or authorization. As a resul=
t, the NASP and NAA sections are unmotivated.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Editorial: Section 7 in a few places does not quite =
seem to say what I think it means, hence the following suggestions:<o:p></o=
:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Suggestion, sec. 7, fourth para, first sentence:<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Currently: &quot;We only illustrate a possible model=
.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Suggested: &quot;We illustrate just one possible mod=
el for obtaining the destination addresses to which emergency callers shoul=
d be restricted in the NAA case.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In the next sentence, missing some words: &quot;... =
as well<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; as the address of the LoST server=
 itself.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^<=
o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Suggestion, sec. 7, fifth para, first sentence:<o:p>=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Currently: &quot;For the ZBP case the additional asp=
ect of fraud has to be considered.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Suggested: &quot;The additional aspect of fraud also=
 has to be considered for the ZBP case.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Typos:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Typo, sec. 5, first bullet: devices -&gt; device<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Typo, sec. 7, second para, last sentence: lead -&gt;=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Typo, sec. 7, third para, fourth line: fraudulent -&=
gt; fraudulently<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Tina<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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Joe,

>    Some issues:
>
> 1.   I found it difficult to link the threats in section 3 to the attacks in section 4.   This is more of a consistency of terminology issue and is probably just a nit.
There is not  1-to-1 correspondence between threats and attacks. So, for 
each attacks in
Section 4, there may be more than one threat that is motivated and 
capable of effecting
the attack.
> 2.   The attacks in sections 4.1, 4.2, and 4.3 seem to be largely discounted as out of scope, yet they seem to impact the goals of PATHSEC.   Is it assumed that there are countermeasures in place such as link protection between RGP peers?    If other countermeasures besides PATHSEC are expected to be in place this should probably be mentioned in the security considerations.
The text in 4.1, 4.2, and 4.3 does not say that those attacks are out of 
scope. In 4.1,
there is little text because the attacks are not specific to the 
RPKI/PATHSEC context.
Countermeasures are generic for IP and TCP layer attacks, as noted in 
the requirements
doc. In 4.2 and 4.3 we give a number of examples of these classes of 
attacks, which
is what this doc is intended to do. (Recall, it is not a requirements doc.)
> 3.   I found the argument against not including 'route leakage' a bit weak since the documents seems to be able to define what it means.   Wouldn't 'route leakage' be a mechanism to realize one or more of the threats in section 3?
There is not yet an accepted definition of route leak that represents a 
violation of BGP
specs. The GROW WG is supposed to look into this issue. If it develops a 
suitable proposal, then IDR may elect to modify the BGP spec to address 
the concern.  If IDR does so, SIDR's charter could be modified to 
develop countermeasures for the concern. But, for now, this is out of 
scope. So I disagree with the comment that the argument is weak. Also, 
your use of the term "threat" in the last sentence above is not 
consistent with the way the term is defined and used in Section 3; you 
seem to have switched "threat" and "attack" as well as section numbers.

Steve
