
From nobody Mon Mar  3 09:42:44 2014
Return-Path: <bclaise@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 885FF1A0313; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 09:42:40 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -10.048
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-10.048 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id ZVeNkU0BwdZM; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 09:42:38 -0800 (PST)
Received: from aer-iport-3.cisco.com (aer-iport-3.cisco.com [173.38.203.53]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9BC9A1A0312; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 09:42:37 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=3420; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1393868555; x=1395078155; h=message-id:date:from:mime-version:to:subject:references: in-reply-to:content-transfer-encoding; bh=2rMa2rs9I0jlISm9Sgfv9BucZxWrx/cxrdcIrMD2rhU=; b=KBNaLJPCBe7zqWDo4e5/uuunKp5PF/mDyXDB6ArJN9pB/K3XGcZ6hc8k 2W8yji9PIZlFdcCxvEW+q0fEwpjs4EXW0y2LUyNUsPpQj2ZXAfz/BOGdK x+BggH7NaCHM3tS6oXMCMfXwIKJsZe7EVRqObmCWLqhcStrMfgy0/ZtAt I=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AhYFAOG+FFOQ/khN/2dsb2JhbABagwbBZIEkFnSCJgEBBDhAEQsOExYPCQMCAQIBRQYBDAgBARCHZcw6F44LVYQ4AQOYPIZKi2GDLTw
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.97,578,1389744000";  d="scan'208";a="2219650"
Received: from ams-core-4.cisco.com ([144.254.72.77]) by aer-iport-3.cisco.com with ESMTP; 03 Mar 2014 17:42:34 +0000
Received: from [10.61.192.27] ([10.61.192.27]) by ams-core-4.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s23HgXK4011782; Mon, 3 Mar 2014 17:42:33 GMT
Message-ID: <5314BF09.9020001@cisco.com>
Date: Mon, 03 Mar 2014 17:42:33 +0000
From: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.3.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com>, "<secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org>, "<iesg@ietf.org> IESG" <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-eman-framework.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-eman-framework.all@tools.ietf.org>
References: <523EEFE5-315C-4A49-B802-1F7C31B7ADD9@checkpoint.com>
In-Reply-To: <523EEFE5-315C-4A49-B802-1F7C31B7ADD9@checkpoint.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/0pPybIz7HGHL9OdeZmfhf3Bm3Is
Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-eman-framework-07
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 03 Mar 2014 17:42:40 -0000

Hi Yoav,

Thanks for your review.
Unfortunately, you have reviewed version 7 and we're now at version 15.
However, some of your comments were still applicable.
See in-line.
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> Although I am reviewing this for SECDIR, I have to begin with some editorial remarks. I don't know what tool was used, but it's producing a very ill-formatted draft. It's true that the RFC editor staff will get it right, but it is apparent that this is a combination of several sources. See for example section 2 for a jarring mixture of line lengths.  Or the broken-in-half artwork of Figure 1 at the bottom of page 14. When you do that, someone (that's the RFC editor) has to put your diagrams back together, an error-prone process that should be done by the authors.
>
> The middle of section 1 has a paragraph whose entire text is "Energy Management Documents Overview". Was this supposed to be the title to a subsection?
>
> The document also contains some parts that are supposed to be removed before publication, for example the URL to the issue tracker. Please add a label like "RFC EDITOR NOTE: REMOVE THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH" before this. They know to look for it, and we don't end up with things we didn't want in the draft.
>
> Speaking of issues, I followed that URL, and found that it is showing three open issues. Are these resolved?
>
> I confess to being totally ignorant of the subject matter, but reading through this I noticed something that surprised me. In section 3.1 there is this paragraph:
>          A simple device such as a light bulb can be switched on or off
>          only by switching its power supply.  More complex devices may
>          have the ability to switch off themselves or to bring
>          themselves to states in which they consume very little power.
> Is the "may" here appropriate? Don't these complex devices *require* that they switch themselves off rather than have their power switched off?
changed "may" to "will" to all cases.
>
> Finally, the security considerations section. The most important recommendation there is to use SNMPv3, because it includes authentication and privacy, unlike earlier versions. I agree with the recommendation, but it should be noted that authentication was part of SNMPv1 as well, although different mechanisms (not based on community strings) were only added in SNMPv3. "Privacy" is a loaded term with multiple meanings. In SNMP privacy simply means confidentiality, and it's preferable to use that term rather than "privacy" which today is no longer used interchangeably with confidentiality.
changed.

Version 16, addressing your comments, will be posted shortly.

Regards, Benoit
>
> The section does an OK job of enumerating the risks, but IMO downplays them. For example, "Unauthorized changes to the Energy Management Domain or business context of an Energy Object may result in misreporting or interruption of power."  There's no "may" about it. If an attacker can modify the energy management domain, then they can at least shut down the network.
>
> Yoav
>
>
>
>
> .
>


From nobody Mon Mar  3 11:07:52 2014
Return-Path: <clonvick@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9E4851A00AD; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 11:07:46 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -15.048
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.048 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id tET-mwG5LnJO; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 11:07:45 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mtv-iport-4.cisco.com (mtv-iport-4.cisco.com [173.36.130.15]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04CEB1A01E7; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 11:07:45 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=841; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1393873662; x=1395083262; h=date:from:to:subject:message-id:mime-version:content-id; bh=+o3CZ8J4eYy3A0S2b6l9BIaaJ8jHSoh9eB5fP8OsPXg=; b=Iw3MhZRsqCQDvJR/pkZ5Jk8wT1c2OjvSsu9iuiAGb94QIPKO8Aadi+Iy Wwpep1ECrK/kO8J5/l7G2rEFL6GYFZMiUabd8AhsHDjqUx5NtBIBWrthC gS+GWT/zYdj/ZqHPGc6L+2VmkpyGqtT3b2fok0ezFog7t1o5PWK4VRjzY 8=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AhIFAN7RFFOrRDoG/2dsb2JhbABagwbDCxZ0gmQCgX6ICsxDF5MYBIlLoRyDTg
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.97,579,1389744000"; d="scan'208";a="107472158"
Received: from mtv-core-1.cisco.com ([171.68.58.6]) by mtv-iport-4.cisco.com with ESMTP; 03 Mar 2014 19:07:42 +0000
Received: from sjc-xdm-112 (sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com [171.71.188.44]) by mtv-core-1.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s23J7fDq003054 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Mon, 3 Mar 2014 19:07:41 GMT
Date: Mon, 3 Mar 2014 11:07:41 -0800 (PST)
From: Chris Lonvick <clonvick@cisco.com>
To: iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg.all@tools.ietf.org
Message-ID: <alpine.LRH.2.00.1403031101470.22583@sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com>
User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (LRH 1167 2008-08-23)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII
Content-ID: <alpine.LRH.2.00.1403031103011.22583@sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com>
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/heUHnAGn6tzrBYXUQ6bCpsJlt7A
Subject: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 03 Mar 2014 19:07:46 -0000

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area 
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments 
just like any other last call comments.

This document looks to be well thought out and almost complete.  I would 
like to see a statement in the Security Considerations section that this 
specification adheres to the Security Considerations section of RFC 3315, 
and augments it by describing the disposition of unknown messages.

Other than that, the only very minor nit that I have is that the second 
and third paragraphs of the Security Considerations section are a single 
thought and should be combined.

Thanks,
Chris


From nobody Mon Mar  3 23:41:26 2014
Return-Path: <Tina.Tsou.Zouting@huawei.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0A7E31A03C3; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 23:41:18 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.747
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.747 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id yYWuKmO9qggs; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 23:41:14 -0800 (PST)
Received: from lhrrgout.huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [194.213.3.17]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C38581A03AC; Mon,  3 Mar 2014 23:41:12 -0800 (PST)
Received: from 172.18.7.190 (EHLO lhreml203-edg.china.huawei.com) ([172.18.7.190]) by lhrrg01-dlp.huawei.com (MOS 4.3.7-GA FastPath queued) with ESMTP id BEF08651; Tue, 04 Mar 2014 07:41:08 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from LHREML406-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.243) by lhreml203-edg.huawei.com (172.18.7.221) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 07:40:37 +0000
Received: from SZXEML452-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.82.67.195) by lhreml406-hub.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.243) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 07:41:03 +0000
Received: from szxeml557-mbs.china.huawei.com ([169.254.6.77]) by szxeml452-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.82.67.195]) with mapi id 14.03.0158.001; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 15:40:51 +0800
From: Tina TSOU <Tina.Tsou.Zouting@huawei.com>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@huawei.com>
Thread-Topic: SECDIR early review of draft-dunbar-armd-arp-nd-scaling-practices-07
Thread-Index: AQHPKfsc65F4O1ntVkqzN1q05nHFcJrAX++QgAAGE6CADsvlkP//o8EA
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 07:40:51 +0000
Message-ID: <FFA8BFED-259D-4483-8EA5-124F65A403AB@huawei.com>
References: <4A95BA014132FF49AE685FAB4B9F17F645CBE303@dfweml701-chm.china.huawei.com>
In-Reply-To: <4A95BA014132FF49AE685FAB4B9F17F645CBE303@dfweml701-chm.china.huawei.com>
Accept-Language: en-US, zh-CN
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_FFA8BFED259D44838EA5124F65A403ABhuaweicom_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Ea-ea6VErvk3FmS5-5O6ASSY5bg
Cc: "draft-dunbar-arms-arp-nd-scalling-practices.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-dunbar-arms-arp-nd-scalling-practices.all@tools.ietf.org>, "Org Iesg@Ietf." <iesg@ietf.org>, "Org Secdir@Ietf." <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR early review of draft-dunbar-armd-arp-nd-scaling-practices-07
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 07:41:18 -0000

--_000_FFA8BFED259D44838EA5124F65A403ABhuaweicom_
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64
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--_000_FFA8BFED259D44838EA5124F65A403ABhuaweicom_
Content-Type: text/html; charset="utf-8"
Content-ID: <2C09CB00D79B254E8EA872F577BA5AC2@huawei.com>
Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64

PGh0bWw+DQo8aGVhZD4NCjxtZXRhIGh0dHAtZXF1aXY9IkNvbnRlbnQtVHlwZSIgY29udGVudD0i
dGV4dC9odG1sOyBjaGFyc2V0PXV0Zi04Ij4NCjwvaGVhZD4NCjxib2R5IGRpcj0iYXV0byI+DQo8
ZGl2IHN0eWxlPSItd2Via2l0LXRleHQtc2l6ZS1hZGp1c3Q6IGF1dG87Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0i
Zm9udC1zaXplOiAxM3B0OyI+RGVhciBMaW5kYSw8L3NwYW4+PC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2IHN0eWxlPSIt
d2Via2l0LXRleHQtc2l6ZS1hZGp1c3Q6IGF1dG87Ij48YnI+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXYgc3R5bGU9
Ii13ZWJraXQtdGV4dC1zaXplLWFkanVzdDogYXV0bzsiPlRoZSBjaGFuZ2VzIGFyZSBPSyB0byBt
ZS48L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXYgc3R5bGU9Ii13ZWJraXQtdGV4dC1zaXplLWFkanVzdDogYXV0bzsiPjxi
cj4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iLXdlYmtpdC10ZXh0LXNpemUtYWRqdXN0OiBh
dXRvOyI+SW4gYWRkaXRpb24sIHQ8L3NwYW4+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9Ii13ZWJraXQtdGV4dC1zaXpl
LWFkanVzdDogYXV0bzsgYmFja2dyb3VuZC1jb2xvcjogcmdiYSgyNTUsIDI1NSwgMjU1LCAwKTsi
PmhlIHN1YmplY3QgZHJhZnQgcHJvdmlkZXMgYSBicmllZiBkZXNjcmlwdGlvbiBvZiBjb21tb24g
ZGF0YSBjZW50ZXIgbmV0d29yayBkZXNpZ25zIGZvciBjb250ZXh0LA0KIGV4YW1pbmVzIHRoZSBB
UlAvTkQgc2NhbGluZyBpc3N1ZXMgdGhhdCBhcmlzZSBpbiB0aGVzZSBkZXNpZ25zLCBhbmQgY29u
Y2x1ZGVzIHRoYXQgdGhlIGtleSBpc3N1ZSBpcyBwcm9jZXNzaW5nIGxvYWQgb24gdGhlIEwyL0wz
IGJvdW5kYXJ5IHJvdXRlcnMuIEl0IHRoZW4gcHJvY2VlZHMgdG8gZGVzY3JpYmUgc29tZSBwcmFj
dGljZXMgZm9yIHJlZHVjaW5nIHRoYXQgbG9hZC4gVGhlIGRlc2NyaXB0aW9uIGVtcGxveXMgYSBt
aXh0dXJlIG9mIGJhc2VzDQogZm9yIGl0cyBvcmdhbml6YXRpb246PGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KKGEpIG5l
dHdvcmsgZGVzaWduIGFwcHJvYWNoPGJyPg0KJm5ic3A7LS0gbGF5ZXIgMyB0byBhY2Nlc3Mgc3dp
dGNoZXMgb3IgVk1zIChzZWMuIDQpPGJyPg0KJm5ic3A7LS0gbGF5ZXIgMiBtZWFzdXJlcyAoc2Vj
LiA1LjEpPGJyPg0KJm5ic3A7LS0gc3RhdGljIEFSUC9ORCBlbnRyaWVzIG9uIHN3aXRjaGVzIChz
ZWMuIDUuMik8YnI+DQombmJzcDstLSBBUlAvTkQgcHJveHlpbmcgKHNlYy4gNS4zKTxicj4NCiZu
YnNwOy0tIG92ZXJsYXkgbW9kZWxzIChzZWMuIDYpPGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KKGIpIGluZGl2aWR1YWwg
Y2FzZXMgKHNlY3MuIDUuMS4xLCA1LjEuMiwgNS4xLjMpPGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KKGMpIElQdjQgQVJQ
IHZzLiBJUHY2IE5EIChpbnRlcnNwZXJzZWQgaW4gYWxsIHNlY3Rpb25zIG1lbnRpb25lZCBhYm92
ZSBleGNlcHQgc2VjLiA2LiBJbiBhZGRpdGlvbiwgc2VjLiA1LjQgZGlzY3Vzc2VzIG11bHRpY2Fz
dCBpc3N1ZXMgYW5kIGlzIHRodXMgc3BlY2lmaWNhbGx5IHJlbGF0ZWQgdG8gTkQuKTxicj4NCjxi
cj4NCkJlY2F1c2Ugb2YgdGhlIGRpZmZlcmVuY2VzIGJldHdlZW4gQVJQIGFuZCBORCBhbmQgcmVz
dWx0aW5nIGFwcGxpY2FiaWxpdHkgb2YgdGhlIGRpZmZlcmVudCBtZWFzdXJlcyBkZXNjcmliZWQg
aW4gc2VjdGlvbnMgNC02LCB0aGUgcmV2aWV3ZXIncyByZWNvbW1lbmRhdGlvbiB3b3VsZCBiZSB0
byByZW9yZ2FuaXplIHRoZSB0ZXh0IGJ5IHB1bGxpbmcgQVJQLXNwZWNpZmljIGFuZCBORC1zcGVj
aWZpYyBkaXNjdXNzaW9ucyBpbnRvIHNlcGFyYXRlIHNlY3Rpb25zDQogb2YgdGhlaXIgb3duIHJl
ZmVycmluZyBiYWNrIHRvIHRoZSByZW1haW5pbmcgdGV4dC4gSW4gdGhpcyB3YXkgc2VjLiA1LjQg
aW4gcGFydGljdWxhciB3b3VsZCBmaXQgbW9yZSBuZWF0bHkgaW50byB0aGUgZnJhbWV3b3JrLiBN
b3JlIGltcG9ydGFudGx5LCBpdCB3b3VsZCBiZWNvbWUgY2xlYXIgdGhhdCBzY2FsYWJpbGl0eSBv
ZiBJUHY2IE5EIG5lZWRzIG1vcmUgd29yay48YnI+DQo8YnI+DQpJdCBpcyBpbnRlcmVzdGluZyB0
byBub3RlIHRoYXQgaW1wcm92aW5nIHRoZSBzY2FsYWJpbGl0eSBvZiBORCBpcyBhIG1hdHRlciB1
bmRlciBhY3RpdmUgZGlzY3Vzc2lvbiBpbiA2bWFuIGFuZCB2Nm9wcyBidXQgcGFydGx5IGZyb20g
YSBkaWZmZXJlbnQgYW5nbGU6IGNvcGluZyB3aXRoIGJhdHRlcnktbGltaXRlZCBkZXZpY2VzIHRo
YXQgYXJlIG5vdCBhbHdheXMgYXdha2UuIEluZm9ybWF0aW9uYWwgcmVmZXJlbmNlcyB0byB0aGUg
cmVsZXZhbnQgZHJhZnRzDQogKGRyYWZ0LWNoYWtyYWJhcnRpLW5vcmRtYXJrLTZtYW4tZWZmaWNp
ZW50LW5kLTA1LCBkcmFmdC15b3VydGNoZW5rby1jb2xpdHRpLW5kLXJlZHVjZS1tdWx0aWNhc3Qt
MDAsIGFuZCBkcmFmdC12eW5ja2UtNm1hbi1tY2FzdC1ub3QtZWZmaWNpZW50LTAxKSBtYXkgYmUg
dXNlZnVsIHRvIGFkZC48YnI+DQo8YnI+DQpUaGUgU2VjdXJpdHkgQ29uc2lkZXJhdGlvbnMgc2Vj
dGlvbiBpcyBjdXJyZW50bHkganVzdCBhICdtb3RoZXJob29kJ3N0YXRlbWVudC4gU3BlY2lmaWMg
cG9pbnRzIGFyZSByYWlzZWQgaW4gdGhlIGJvZHkgb2YgdGhlIHRleHQsIHN1Y2ggYXMgdGhlIHJl
bGF0aW9uc2hpcCBvZiB0aGUgYmlkaXJlY3Rpb25hbCBuYXR1cmUgb2YgTkQgdG8gdGhlIGNvcnJl
Y3Qgb3BlcmF0aW9uIG9mIFNlTkQuIEFueSBzdWNoIHNwZWNpZmljIHBvaW50cyBzaG91bGQgYmUN
CiByZWZsZWN0ZWQgaW4gdGhlIFNlY3VyaXR5IENvbnNpZGVyYXRpb25zIHNlY3Rpb24gdG9vLjxi
cj4NCjxicj4NCk5pdHM8YnI+DQo9PT09PGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KLS0gU2VjdGlvbiA1LjEgc2VjdGlv
biBoZWFkZXI6IHMvQVBSL0FSUC88YnI+DQo8YnI+DQotLSBTZWN0aW9uIDcgZmlyc3QgYnVsbGV0
IGxhc3Qgc2VudGVuY2U6PGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KT0xEPGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KJnF1b3Q7IC4uLiAmbmJz
cDt0byBoYXZlIGNvbXByZWhlbnNpdmUgc3R1ZHkgaW4gbWFraW5nIHRob3NlIGNoYW5nZXMuJnF1
b3Q7PGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KTkVXPGJyPg0KPGJyPg0KJnF1b3Q7IC4uLiB0byBtYWtlIHRob3NlIGNo
YW5nZXMgb25seSBhZnRlciBjb21wcmVoZW5zaXZlIHN0dWR5LiZxdW90Ozxicj4NCjxicj4NCi0t
IFNlY3Rpb24gNyBzZWNvbmQgYnVsbGV0OiBzL0NyZWF0ZSBhbi9DcmVhdGUvPGJyPg0KPGJyPg0K
LS0gUmVmZXJlbmNlcyBuZWVkIHVwZGF0aW5nIHRvIG1vc3QgcmVjZW50IHZlcnNpb25zLjxicj4N
Cjwvc3Bhbj4NCjxkaXYgc3R5bGU9Ii13ZWJraXQtdGV4dC1zaXplLWFkanVzdDogYXV0bzsiPjxi
cj4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdiBzdHlsZT0iLXdlYmtpdC10ZXh0LXNpemUtYWRqdXN0OiBhdXRvOyI+
PGJyPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2IHN0eWxlPSItd2Via2l0LXRleHQtc2l6ZS1hZGp1c3Q6IGF1dG87
Ij5UaGFuayB5b3UsPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2IHN0eWxlPSItd2Via2l0LXRleHQtc2l6ZS1hZGp1c3Q6
IGF1dG87Ij5UaW5hPC9kaXY+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXYgc3R5bGU9Ii13ZWJraXQtdGV4dC1zaXpl
LWFkanVzdDogYXV0bzsiPjxicj4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGJsb2NrcXVvdGUgdHlwZT0iY2l0ZSIgc3R5
bGU9Ii13ZWJraXQtdGV4dC1zaXplLWFkanVzdDogYXV0bzsiPg0KPGRpdj4NCjxkaXYgY2xhc3M9
IldvcmRTZWN0aW9uMSI+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1z
aXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2Vy
aWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPGRp
dj4NCjxkaXYgc3R5bGU9ImJvcmRlcjpub25lO2JvcmRlci10b3A6c29saWQgI0I1QzRERiAxLjBw
dDtwYWRkaW5nOjMuMHB0IDBpbiAwaW4gMGluIj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxiPjxz
cGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTAuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O1RhaG9tYSZxdW90
OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7Ij5Gcm9tOjwvc3Bhbj48L2I+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZv
bnQtc2l6ZToxMC4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7VGFob21hJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMt
c2VyaWYmcXVvdDsiPiBMaW5kYSBEdW5iYXINCjxicj4NCjxiPlNlbnQ6PC9iPiBGcmlkYXksIEZl
YnJ1YXJ5IDIxLCAyMDE0IDU6MzIgUE08YnI+DQo8Yj5Ubzo8L2I+IFRpbmEgVFNPVTsgJzxhIGhy
ZWY9Im1haWx0bzpzZWNkaXJAaWV0Zi5vcmciPnNlY2RpckBpZXRmLm9yZzwvYT4nOyAnPGEgaHJl
Zj0ibWFpbHRvOmllc2dAaWV0Zi5vcmciPmllc2dAaWV0Zi5vcmc8L2E+JzsgJzxhIGhyZWY9Im1h
aWx0bzpkcmFmdC1kdW5iYXItYXJtZC1hcnAtbmQtc2NhbGluZy1wcmFjdGljZXNAdG9vbHMuaWV0
Zi5vcmciPmRyYWZ0LWR1bmJhci1hcm1kLWFycC1uZC1zY2FsaW5nLXByYWN0aWNlc0B0b29scy5p
ZXRmLm9yZzwvYT4nPGJyPg0KPGI+U3ViamVjdDo8L2I+IFJFOiBTRUNESVIgZWFybHkgcmV2aWV3
IG9mIGRyYWZ0LWR1bmJhci1hcm1kLWFycC1uZC1zY2FsaW5nLXByYWN0aWNlcy0wNzxvOnA+PC9v
OnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48bzpw
PiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250
LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1z
ZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj5UaW5hLA0KPG86cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0K
PHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1m
YW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMx
RjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwi
PjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkm
cXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj5QbGVhc2Ugc2VlIHRo
ZSBhdHRhY2hlZCAwOCB2ZXJzaW9uIGZvciB0aGUgY2hhbmdlcyB0byBhZGRyZXNzIHlvdXIgY29t
bWVudHMuIFBsZWFzZSBsZXQgbWUga25vdyBpZiB0aGV5IGFyZSBPSy4NCjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9z
cGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEu
MHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90
Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0i
TXNvTm9ybWFsIj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVv
dDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+VGhh
bmtzLCBMaW5kYTxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxz
cGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVv
dDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpw
Pjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPGRpdiBzdHlsZT0iYm9yZGVyOm5vbmU7Ym9yZGVyLXRvcDpz
b2xpZCAjQjVDNERGIDEuMHB0O3BhZGRpbmc6My4wcHQgMGluIDBpbiAwaW4iPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9
Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PGI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMC4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6
JnF1b3Q7VGFob21hJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDsiPkZyb206PC9zcGFuPjwv
Yj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjEwLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtUYWhvbWEm
cXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90OyI+IExpbmRhIER1bmJhcg0KPGJyPg0KPGI+U2Vu
dDo8L2I+IEZyaWRheSwgRmVicnVhcnkgMjEsIDIwMTQgNToyNyBQTTxicj4NCjxiPlRvOjwvYj4g
VGluYSBUU09VOyA8YSBocmVmPSJtYWlsdG86c2VjZGlyQGlldGYub3JnIj5zZWNkaXJAaWV0Zi5v
cmc8L2E+OyA8YSBocmVmPSJtYWlsdG86aWVzZ0BpZXRmLm9yZyI+DQppZXNnQGlldGYub3JnPC9h
PjsgPGEgaHJlZj0ibWFpbHRvOmRyYWZ0LWR1bmJhci1hcm1kLWFycC1uZC1zY2FsaW5nLXByYWN0
aWNlc0B0b29scy5pZXRmLm9yZyI+DQpkcmFmdC1kdW5iYXItYXJtZC1hcnAtbmQtc2NhbGluZy1w
cmFjdGljZXNAdG9vbHMuaWV0Zi5vcmc8L2E+PGJyPg0KPGI+U3ViamVjdDo8L2I+IFJFOiBTRUNE
SVIgZWFybHkgcmV2aWV3IG9mIGRyYWZ0LWR1bmJhci1hcm1kLWFycC1uZC1zY2FsaW5nLXByYWN0
aWNlcy0wNzxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0i
TXNvTm9ybWFsIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxz
cGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVv
dDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj5UaW5hLA0KPG86cD48L286
cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6
ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlm
JnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNs
YXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5
OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdE
Ij5UaGFuayB5b3UgdmVyeSBtdWNoIGZvciB0aGUgcmV2aWV3Lg0KPG86cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+
PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7
Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2Nv
bG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29O
b3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0Nh
bGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj5SZXBsaWVz
IGFyZSBpbnNlcnRlZCBiZWxvdzxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29O
b3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0Nh
bGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZu
YnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPGRpdiBzdHlsZT0iYm9yZGVyOm5vbmU7Ym9y
ZGVyLXRvcDpzb2xpZCAjQjVDNERGIDEuMHB0O3BhZGRpbmc6My4wcHQgMGluIDBpbiAwaW4iPg0K
PHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PGI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMC4wcHQ7Zm9u
dC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7VGFob21hJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDsiPkZyb206
PC9zcGFuPjwvYj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjEwLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVv
dDtUYWhvbWEmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90OyI+IFRpbmEgVFNPVSBbPGEgaHJl
Zj0ibWFpbHRvOlRpbmEuVHNvdS5ab3V0aW5nQGh1YXdlaS5jb20iPm1haWx0bzpUaW5hLlRzb3Uu
Wm91dGluZ0BodWF3ZWkuY29tPC9hPl0NCjxicj4NCjxiPlNlbnQ6PC9iPiBGcmlkYXksIEZlYnJ1
YXJ5IDE0LCAyMDE0IDk6MDggUE08YnI+DQo8Yj5Ubzo8L2I+IDxhIGhyZWY9Im1haWx0bzpzZWNk
aXJAaWV0Zi5vcmciPnNlY2RpckBpZXRmLm9yZzwvYT47IDxhIGhyZWY9Im1haWx0bzppZXNnQGll
dGYub3JnIj4NCmllc2dAaWV0Zi5vcmc8L2E+OyA8YSBocmVmPSJtYWlsdG86ZHJhZnQtZHVuYmFy
LWFybWQtYXJwLW5kLXNjYWxpbmctcHJhY3RpY2VzQHRvb2xzLmlldGYub3JnIj4NCmRyYWZ0LWR1
bmJhci1hcm1kLWFycC1uZC1zY2FsaW5nLXByYWN0aWNlc0B0b29scy5pZXRmLm9yZzwvYT48YnI+
DQo8Yj5TdWJqZWN0OjwvYj4gU0VDRElSIGVhcmx5IHJldmlldyBvZiBkcmFmdC1kdW5iYXItYXJt
ZC1hcnAtbmQtc2NhbGluZy1wcmFjdGljZXMtMDc8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8L2Rp
dj4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3A+DQo8
cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHls
ZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90
O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+RGVhciZuYnNwOyBhbGwsPG86cD48L286
cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVz
dGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2Fs
aWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPkkgaGF2ZSBy
ZXZpZXdlZCB0aGlzIGRvY3VtZW50IGFzIHBhcnQgb2YgdGhlIHNlY3VyaXR5IGRpcmVjdG9yYXRl
J3Mgb25nb2luZyBlZmZvcnQgdG8gZm9yIGVhcmx5IHJldmlldyBvZiBXRyBkcmFmdHMuJm5ic3A7
IFRoZXNlIGNvbW1lbnRzDQogd2VyZSB3cml0dGVuIHByaW1hcmlseSBmb3IgdGhlIGJlbmVmaXQg
b2YgdGhlIHNlY3VyaXR5IGFyZWEgZGlyZWN0b3JzLiZuYnNwOyBEb2N1bWVudCBlZGl0b3JzIGFu
ZCB3b3JraW5nIGdyb3VwIGNoYWlycyBzaG91bGQgdHJlYXQgdGhlc2UgY29tbWVudHMganVzdCBs
aWtlIGFueSBvdGhlciBjb21tZW50cy48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0i
TXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1z
aXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2Vy
aWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAg
Y2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9
ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtz
YW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPlNlY3Rpb24gMTo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bh
bj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48
c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1
b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+UGxlYXNlIGV4cGFuZCBU
b1IgdXBvbiBmaXJzdCBvY2N1cnJlbmNlLjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNz
PSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250
LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1z
ZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojNzAzMEEwIj5bTGluZGFdIFRvUiBpcyBhbHJlYWR5IGRlZmluZWQg
aW4gdGhlIFRlcm1pbm9sb2d5IHNlY3Rpb24uIElzIGl0IHN0aWxsIG5lY2Vzc2FyeSB0byBleHBh
bmQ/ICZuYnNwOzxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0
eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2Zv
bnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xv
cjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9y
bWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjEx
LjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVv
dDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+U2VjdGlvbiAyLCBwYWdlIDMvNDo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48
L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3Bh
biBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7
LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+Q291bGQgeW91IHBsZWFzZSBj
bGFyaWZ5IHRoZSBkaWZmZXJlbmNlIGJldHdlZW4gJnF1b3Q7bm9kZSZxdW90OyBhbmQgJnF1b3Q7
ZW5kIHN0YXRpb24mcXVvdDs/IEFyZSB0aGV5IHN5bm9ueW1zPzxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwv
cD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFu
IHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDss
JnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojNzAzMEEwIj5bTGluZGFdIE5vZGUgY2FuIGJl
IHN3aXRjaGVzL3JvdXRlcnMuIOKAnGVuZCBzdGF0aW9u4oCdIGRvZXNu4oCZdCByb3V0ZSBvciBm
b3J3YXJkIHRyYWZmaWMuIFBhY2tldHMgYXJlIHRlcm1pbmF0ZWQgYnkg4oCcZW5kIHN0YXRpb27i
gJ0uDQo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0i
dGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZh
bWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFG
NDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIg
c3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7
Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2Nv
bG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29O
b3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6
MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZx
dW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFz
cz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9u
dC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMt
c2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+U2VjdGlvbiA1LjEuMTo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bh
bj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48
c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1
b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286
cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVz
dGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2Fs
aWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPlNob3VsZG4n
dCBpdCBiZSBwb3NzaWJsZSB0byBhdm9pZCBORCBsb2FkIGJ5IHByb3BlciBzZXR0aW5nIG9mIHRo
ZSBSZWFjaGFibGVUaW1lIHZhcmlhYmxlPyAtLSBUaGlzIHdvdWxkbid0IHJlcXVpcmUgYW55IHBy
b3RvY29sDQogY2hhbmdlcy48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9y
bWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjEx
LjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVv
dDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9
Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQt
c2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNl
cmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiM3MDMwQTAiPltMaW5kYV0gRG8geW91IG1lYW4gY2hhbmdpbmcgdGhl
IHNldHRpbmcgb24gR3Vlc3RPUz8gVGhlIGlzc3VlIGlzIHRoYXQgbWFueSBHdWVzdCBPU3MgYXJl
IG91dCBvZiBuZXR3b3Jr4oCZcyBjb250cm9sLiBJZiBOZXR3b3JrIGNhbg0KIGNvbnRyb2wgR3Vl
c3QgT1PigJlzIGJlaGF2aW9yLCBtYW55IHRoaW5ncyBjYW4gYmUgZWFzaWVyLiA8bzpwPjwvbzpw
Pjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0
aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxp
YnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJz
cDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxp
Z246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1
b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxv
OnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0
ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFt
aWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0
OTdEIj5TZWN0aW9uIDUuMS4xOjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29O
b3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6
MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZx
dW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFz
cz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9u
dC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMt
c2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+U25vb3BpbmcgQVJQIHBhY2tldHMgcHJvYmFibHkg
bWVhbnMgaW5jcmVhc2VkIGxvYWQgKGEgZGlzYWR2YW50YWdlIHlvdSBkaWRuJ3QgbWVudGlvbiku
PG86cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQt
YWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6
JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiM3MDMwQTAi
PltMaW5kYV0geWVzLCBpdCBpbmNyZWFzZSB0aGUgbG9hZCwgYnV0IGluIGEgY29udHJvbGxlZCB3
YXkuIFNvIHRoZSByb3V0ZXJzIGNhbiBwcm9jZXNzIHRoZW0gd2l0aGluIGl0cyBjYXBhY2l0eS4g
U28sIGl0IGlzIG5vdCByZWFsbHkNCiBkaXNhZHZhbnRhZ2UuIDxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwv
cD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFu
IHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDss
JnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwv
c3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5
Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJp
JnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+U2VjdGlvbiA1LjEu
MTo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4
dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWls
eTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3
RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5
bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9u
dC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9y
OiMxRjQ5N0QiPldoZW4gYWRkcmVzcyByZXNvbHV0aW9uIGlzIG5lZWRlZCB0byBkZWxpdmVyIGEg
cGFja2V0LCBzb21lIHJvdXRlcnMganVzdCBkcm9wIHRoZSBwYWNrZXQgd2hlbiB0aGV5IGVuZ2Fn
ZSBpbiBBUlAgKHNlZQ0KPGEgaHJlZj0iaHR0cDovL3Rvb2xzLmlldGYub3JnL2h0bWwvcmZjNjI3
NCNzZWN0aW9uLTQuMi4zIj5odHRwOi8vdG9vbHMuaWV0Zi5vcmcvaHRtbC9yZmM2Mjc0I3NlY3Rp
b24tNC4yLjM8L2E+KS4gVGhlIHNhbWUgaXMgdHJ1ZSBmb3I8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+
DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBz
dHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZx
dW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+SVB2NiBORC48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwv
c3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5
Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJp
JnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8
L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246
anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7
Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiM3MDMwQTAiPltMaW5k
YV0gY29ycmVjdC4gVGhlIGJlaGF2aW9yIGlzIGRlc2NyaWJlZCBpbiB0aGUgc2Vjb25kIHBhcmFn
cmFwaCBvZiBTZWN0aW9uIDUuMS4yOjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJN
c29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJtc28tbWFyZ2luLXRvcC1hbHQ6YXV0byI+U29sdXRpb246IFRvIHBy
b3RlY3QgYSByb3V0ZXIgZnJvbSBiZWluZyBvdmVyYnVyZGVuZWQgYnkgcmVzb2x2aW5nIHRhcmdl
dCBNQUMgYWRkcmVzc2VzLCBvbmUgc29sdXRpb24gaXMgZm9yIHRoZSByb3V0ZXIgdG8gbGltaXQg
dGhlIHJhdGUgb2YgcmVzb2x2aW5nIHRhcmdldCBNQUMgYWRkcmVzc2VzIGZvciBpbmJvdW5kIHRy
YWZmaWMgd2hvc2UgdGFyZ2V0DQogaXMgbm90IGluIHRoZSByb3V0ZXLigJlzIEFSUC9ORCBjYWNo
ZS4gV2hlbiB0aGUgcmF0ZSBpcyBleGNlZWRlZCwgdGhlIGluY29taW5nIHRyYWZmaWMgd2hvc2Ug
dGFyZ2V0IGlzIG5vdCBpbiB0aGUgQVJQL05EIGNhY2hlIGlzIGRyb3BwZWQuDQo8bzpwPjwvbzpw
PjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxz
cGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVv
dDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpw
Pjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0
aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxp
YnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJz
cDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxp
Z246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1
b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPlNl
Y3Rpb24gODo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHls
ZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250
LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6
IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1h
bCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4w
cHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7
O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPldoaWxlIHRoaXMgZG9jdW1lbnQgZG9lcyBub3QgaW50cm9kdWNlIG5l
dyBpc3N1ZXMgaXRzZWxmLCBpdCBzaG91bGQgYXQgbGVhc3QgbWVudGlvbiBob3cgdGhlIHNhbWUg
QVJQL05EIGlzc3VlcyBtYXkgYmUgaW50ZW50aW9uYWxseQ0KIHRyaWdnZXJlZCBieSBhbiBhdHRh
Y2tlci4gRm9yIGV4YW1wbGUsIHlvdSBtYXkgcmVmZXJlbmNlIFJGQyA2NTgzPG86cD48L286cD48
L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlm
eSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJy
aSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7
PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWdu
Omp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90
O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj5bTGlu
ZGFdIFN1cmUuIFdpbGwgYWRkIGluIHRoZSBuZXcgdmVyc2lvbi4NCjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFu
PjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxz
cGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVv
dDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpw
Pjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0
aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxp
YnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+KiBOaXRzPG86
cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxp
Z246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1
b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxv
OnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0
ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFt
aWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0
OTdEIj5TZWN0aW9uIDQsIHBhZ2UgNDo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0i
TXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1z
aXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2Vy
aWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+Jmd0OyBUaGVyZSBhcmUgbm8gYWRkcmVzczxvOnA+PC9v
OnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1
c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0Nh
bGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj4mZ3Q7Jm5i
c3A7Jm5ic3A7Jm5ic3A7IHJlc29sdXRpb24gaXNzdWUgaW4gdGhpcyBkZXNpZ24uPG86cD48L286
cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVz
dGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2Fs
aWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5i
c3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFs
aWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZx
dW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj5S
ZXBsYWNlICZxdW90O2lzc3VlJnF1b3Q7IHdpdGggJnF1b3Q7aXNzdWVzJnF1b3Q7PG86cD48L286
cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVz
dGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2Fs
aWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiM3MDMwQTAiPltMaW5kYV0g
SW4gdGhlIGxhdGVzdCBkcmFmdCAoIDA3IHZlcnNpb246DQo8YSBocmVmPSJodHRwczovL2RhdGF0
cmFja2VyLmlldGYub3JnL2RvYy9kcmFmdC1kdW5iYXItYXJtZC1hcnAtbmQtc2NhbGluZy1wcmFj
dGljZXMvIj4NCmh0dHBzOi8vZGF0YXRyYWNrZXIuaWV0Zi5vcmcvZG9jL2RyYWZ0LWR1bmJhci1h
cm1kLWFycC1uZC1zY2FsaW5nLXByYWN0aWNlcy88L2E+KSwgaXQgaXMgYWxyZWFkeSBjaGFuZ2Vk
OjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0
LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5
OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdE
Ij48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHls
ZT0ibWFyZ2luLWxlZnQ6LjVpbiI+VGhlcmUgaXMgbm8gYWRkcmVzcyByZXNvbHV0aW9uIGlzc3Vl
IGluIHRoaXMgZGVzaWduLg0KPG86cD48L286cD48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBz
dHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtm
b250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29s
b3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05v
cm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZTox
MS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1
b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNz
PSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250
LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1z
ZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8
cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHls
ZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90
O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+U2VjdGlvbiA1LjEuMSwgcGFnZSA1Ojxv
OnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFs
aWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZx
dW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48
bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0i
dGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZh
bWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFG
NDk3RCI+JnF1b3Q7SXB2NiZxdW90OyAtJmd0OyAmcXVvdDtJUHY2JnF1b3Q7PG86cD48L286cD48
L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlm
eSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJy
aSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7
PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWdu
Omp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90
O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojNzAzMEEwIj5bTGlu
ZGEgXSBJbiB0aGUgbGF0ZXN0IGRyYWZ0ICgwNyB2ZXJzaW9uKSwgaXQgaXMgYWxyZWFkeSBjaGFu
Z2VkLg0KPG86cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9
InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1m
YW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMx
RjQ5N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwi
IHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0
O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztj
b2xvcjojMUY0OTdEIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNv
Tm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXpl
OjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYm
cXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+U2VjdGlvbiA1LjEuMjo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+
DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5Ij48c3BhbiBz
dHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJpJnF1b3Q7LCZx
dW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3Nw
YW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+
PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZx
dW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPlBsZWFzZSBleHBhbmQg
VU5BIChwb3NzaWJseSBpbiB0aGUgdGVybWlub2xvZ3kgc2VjdGlvbikgLS0geW91IHByb2JhYmx5
IG1lYW4gJnF1b3Q7VW5zb2xpY2l0ZWQuLiZxdW90OywgYnV0IHRoaXMgc2hvdWxkIGJlIGV4cGxp
Y2l0LjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0
ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFt
aWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojNzAz
MEEwIj5bTGluZGFdIGluIHRoZSBsYXRlc3QgZHJhZnQgKDA3IHZlcnNpb24pLCBVTkEgaXMgYWxy
ZWFkeSBsaXN0ZWQgdW5kZXIgdGhlIFRlcm1pbm9sb2d5IHNlY3Rpb24uDQo8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwv
c3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIiBzdHlsZT0idGV4dC1hbGlnbjpqdXN0aWZ5
Ij48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtDYWxpYnJp
JnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6IzcwMzBBMCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8
L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246
anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7
Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiM3MDMwQTAiPlRoYW5r
IHlvdSB2ZXJ5IG11Y2ggZm9yIHRoZSByZXZpZXcgYW5kIGNvbW1lbnRzLg0KPG86cD48L286cD48
L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlm
eSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJy
aSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiM3MDMwQTAiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7
PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWdu
Omp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90
O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xvcjojNzAzMEEwIj5MaW5k
YQ0KPG86cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRl
eHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1p
bHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5
N0QiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiIHN0
eWxlPSJ0ZXh0LWFsaWduOmp1c3RpZnkiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LXNpemU6MTEuMHB0O2Zv
bnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0NhbGlicmkmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90Oztjb2xv
cjojMUY0OTdEIj5UaGFuayB5b3UsPG86cD48L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1z
b05vcm1hbCIgc3R5bGU9InRleHQtYWxpZ246anVzdGlmeSI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6
ZToxMS4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7Q2FsaWJyaSZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlm
JnF1b3Q7O2NvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0QiPlRpbmE8bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvc3Bhbj48L3A+DQo8cCBjbGFz
cz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjExLjBwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTom
cXVvdDtBcmlhbCBVbmljb2RlIE1TJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDs7Y29sb3I6
IzFGNDk3RCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3NwYW4+PC9wPg0KPGRpdiBzdHlsZT0iYm9yZGVy
Om5vbmU7Ym9yZGVyLXRvcDpzb2xpZCAjQjVDNERGIDEuMHB0O3BhZGRpbmc6My4wcHQgMGluIDBp
biAwaW4iPg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PGI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZTox
MC4wcHQ7Zm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7VGFob21hJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVv
dDsiPkZyb206PC9zcGFuPjwvYj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1zaXplOjEwLjBwdDtmb250LWZh
bWlseTomcXVvdDtUYWhvbWEmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90OyI+IHNlY2RpciBb
PGEgaHJlZj0ibWFpbHRvOnNlY2Rpci1ib3VuY2VzQGlldGYub3JnIj5tYWlsdG86c2VjZGlyLWJv
dW5jZXNAaWV0Zi5vcmc8L2E+XQ0KPGI+T24gQmVoYWxmIE9mIDwvYj5NYXR0aGV3IExlcGluc2tp
PGJyPg0KPGI+U2VudDo8L2I+IEZyaWRheSwgRmVicnVhcnkgMTQsIDIwMTQgMjo1MiBBTTxicj4N
CjxiPlRvOjwvYj4gPGEgaHJlZj0ibWFpbHRvOnNlY2RpckBpZXRmLm9yZyI+c2VjZGlyQGlldGYu
b3JnPC9hPjsgPGEgaHJlZj0ibWFpbHRvOmllc2dAaWV0Zi5vcmciPg0KaWVzZ0BpZXRmLm9yZzwv
YT47IDxhIGhyZWY9Im1haWx0bzpkcmFmdC1ob3VzbGV5LXBraXgtb2lkcy5hbGxAdG9vbHMuaWV0
Zi5vcmciPmRyYWZ0LWhvdXNsZXktcGtpeC1vaWRzLmFsbEB0b29scy5pZXRmLm9yZzwvYT48YnI+
DQo8Yj5TdWJqZWN0OjwvYj4gW3NlY2Rpcl0gU0VDRElSIHJldmlldyBvZiBkcmFmdC1ob3VzbGV5
LXBraXgtb2lkczxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9zcGFuPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05v
cm1hbCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3A+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+
PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtc2l6ZTo5LjVwdDtmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtBcmlhbCZxdW90
OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7Ij5JIGhhdmUgcmV2aWV3ZWQgdGhpcyBkb2N1bWVudCBh
cyBwYXJ0IG9mIHRoZSBzZWN1cml0eSBkaXJlY3RvcmF0ZSdzIG9uZ29pbmcgZWZmb3J0IHRvIHJl
dmlldyBhbGwgSUVURiBkb2N1bWVudHMgYmVpbmcgcHJvY2Vzc2VkIGJ5IHRoZSBJRVNHLiAmbmJz
cDtUaGVzZSBjb21tZW50cyB3ZXJlIHdyaXR0ZW4gcHJpbWFyaWx5DQogZm9yIHRoZSBiZW5lZml0
IG9mIHRoZSBzZWN1cml0eSBhcmVhIGRpcmVjdG9ycy4gJm5ic3A7RG9jdW1lbnQgZWRpdG9ycyBh
bmQgd29ya2luZyBncm91cCBjaGFpcnMgc2hvdWxkIHRyZWF0IHRoZXNlIGNvbW1lbnRzIGp1c3Qg
bGlrZSBhbnkgb3RoZXIgbGFzdCBjYWxsIGNvbW1lbnRzLjwvc3Bhbj48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvcD4N
CjxkaXY+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2
Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LWZhbWlseTom
cXVvdDtBcmlhbCZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7Ij5UaGlzIGRvY3VtZW50IHJl
dHVybnMgY29udHJvbCBvZiB0aGUgUEtJWCBvYmplY3QgaWRlbnRpZmllciBhcmMgdG8gSUFOQS4g
VGhhdCBpcywgaXQgZXN0YWJsaXNoZXMgYSBuZXcgSUFOQSByZWdpc3RyeSBmb3IgT0lEcyBpbiB0
aGUgUEtJWCBhcmMgYW5kIHBvcHVsYXRlcyB0aGF0IHJlZ2lzdHJ5IHdpdGggdGhlIGV4aXN0aW5n
IE9JRA0KIGFzc2lnbm1lbnRzLiBGaW5hbGx5LCB0aGUgZG9jdW1lbnQgZXN0YWJsaXNoZXMgZXhw
ZXJ0IHJldmlldyBhcyB0aGUmbmJzcDtjcml0ZXJpYSZuYnNwO2ZvciZuYnNwO2Z1dHVyZSBhZGRp
dGlvbnMgdG8gdGhlIHJlZ2lzdHJ5IGFuZCBpbmNsdWRlcyZuYnNwO2d1aWRhbmNlJm5ic3A7dGhh
dCBmb3IgcmV2aWV3Ljwvc3Bhbj48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNs
YXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPHAg
Y2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0FyaWFsJnF1
b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDsiPkFmdGVyIHJldmlld2luZyB0aGUgZG9jdW1lbnQs
IEkgYWdyZWUgd2l0aCB0aGUgYXV0aG9yIHRoYXQgdGhpcyBkb2N1bWVudCBpbnRyb2R1Y2VzIG5v
IG5ldyBzZWN1cml0eSBjb25jZXJucy4mbmJzcDs8L3NwYW4+PG86cD48L286cD48L3A+DQo8L2Rp
dj4NCjxkaXY+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwv
ZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LWZhbWls
eTomcXVvdDtBcmlhbCZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7Ij5JIGZvdW5kIG5vIGlz
c3VlcyBpbiB0aGUgZG9jdW1lbnQgYW5kIEkgYmVsaWV2ZSBpdCBpcyByZWFkeSBmb3IgcHVibGlj
YXRpb24uPC9zcGFuPjxvOnA+PC9vOnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1z
b05vcm1hbCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8L286cD48L3A+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXY+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0i
TXNvTm9ybWFsIj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7QXJpYWwmcXVvdDssJnF1
b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90OyI+LS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLTwvc3Bh
bj48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxv
OnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+
PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0FyaWFsJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2Vy
aWYmcXVvdDsiPk5pdHM8L3NwYW4+PG86cD48L286cD48L3A+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXY+DQo8cCBj
bGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48bzpwPiZuYnNwOzwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxw
IGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtBcmlhbCZx
dW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNlcmlmJnF1b3Q7Ij5UaGUgYXV0aG9yIHNob3VsZCBjb25zaWRlciBp
bmNsdWRpbmcgYW4gZXhwYW5zaW9uIG9mIHRoZSZuYnNwO2Fjcm9ueW0mbmJzcDtTTUksIHdoaWNo
IGlzIHVzZWQgZnJlcXVlbnRseSBpbiB0aGUgZG9jdW1lbnQuIChJIGJlbGlldmUgaW4gdGhpcyBj
b250ZXh0IFNNSSA9IFN0cnVjdHVyZSBvZiBNYW5hZ2VtZW50IEluZm9ybWF0aW9uKTwvc3Bhbj48
bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxvOnA+
Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PHNw
YW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0FyaWFsJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYm
cXVvdDsiPkluIFNlY3Rpb24gMzo8L3NwYW4+PG86cD48L286cD48L3A+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXY+
DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iZm9udC1mYW1pbHk6JnF1b3Q7QXJp
YWwmcXVvdDssJnF1b3Q7c2Fucy1zZXJpZiZxdW90OyI+cy88L3NwYW4+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImNv
bG9yOmJsYWNrIj5iZSByZWxhdGVkIHRvIFguNTA5IGNlcnRpZmljYXRlL2JlIHJlbGF0ZWQgdG8g
WC41MDkgY2VydGlmaWNhdGVzLzwvc3Bhbj48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4N
CjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxvOnA+Jm5ic3A7PC9vOnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2
Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PHNwYW4gc3R5bGU9ImZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiZxdW90O0Fy
aWFsJnF1b3Q7LCZxdW90O3NhbnMtc2VyaWYmcXVvdDsiPkluIFNlY3Rpb24gMy4xOiZuYnNwOzwv
c3Bhbj48bzpwPjwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwi
PjxzcGFuIHN0eWxlPSJmb250LWZhbWlseTomcXVvdDtBcmlhbCZxdW90OywmcXVvdDtzYW5zLXNl
cmlmJnF1b3Q7Ij5zLzwvc3Bhbj48c3BhbiBzdHlsZT0iY29sb3I6YmxhY2siPnRvIHBvaW50cyB0
byB0aGlzIGRvY3VtZW50L3RvIHBvaW50IHRvIHRoaXMgZG9jdW1lbnQvPC9zcGFuPjxvOnA+PC9v
OnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8ZGl2Pg0KPHAgY2xhc3M9Ik1zb05vcm1hbCI+PG86cD4mbmJzcDs8
L286cD48L3A+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjxkaXY+DQo8cCBjbGFzcz0iTXNvTm9ybWFsIj48bzpwPiZuYnNw
OzwvbzpwPjwvcD4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPGRpdj4NCjxwIGNsYXNzPSJNc29Ob3JtYWwiPjxvOnA+Jm5i
c3A7PC9vOnA+PC9wPg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8L2Rpdj4NCjwvZGl2Pg0KPC9kaXY+DQo8L2Jsb2NrcXVv
dGU+DQo8YmxvY2txdW90ZSB0eXBlPSJjaXRlIiBzdHlsZT0iLXdlYmtpdC10ZXh0LXNpemUtYWRq
dXN0OiBhdXRvOyI+DQo8ZGl2PiZsdDtkcmFmdC1kdW5iYXItYXJtZC1hcnAtbmQtc2NhbGluZy1w
cmFjdGljZXMtMDguZG9jeCZndDs8L2Rpdj4NCjwvYmxvY2txdW90ZT4NCjxzdHlsZT48IS0tDQov
KiBGb250IERlZmluaXRpb25zICovDQpAZm9udC1mYWNlDQoJe2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OlNpbVN1bjsN
CglwYW5vc2UtMToyIDEgNiAwIDMgMSAxIDEgMSAxO30NCkBmb250LWZhY2UNCgl7Zm9udC1mYW1p
bHk6IkNhbWJyaWEgTWF0aCI7DQoJcGFub3NlLTE6MiA0IDUgMyA1IDQgNiAzIDIgNDt9DQpAZm9u
dC1mYWNlDQoJe2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiJBcmlhbCBVbmljb2RlIE1TIjsNCglwYW5vc2UtMToyIDEx
IDYgNCAyIDIgMiAyIDIgNDt9DQpAZm9udC1mYWNlDQoJe2ZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OkNhbGlicmk7DQoJ
cGFub3NlLTE6MiAxNSA1IDIgMiAyIDQgMyAyIDQ7fQ0KQGZvbnQtZmFjZQ0KCXtmb250LWZhbWls
eTpUYWhvbWE7DQoJcGFub3NlLTE6MiAxMSA2IDQgMyA1IDQgNCAyIDQ7fQ0KQGZvbnQtZmFjZQ0K
CXtmb250LWZhbWlseToiXEBTaW1TdW4iOw0KCXBhbm9zZS0xOjIgMSA2IDAgMyAxIDEgMSAxIDE7
fQ0KQGZvbnQtZmFjZQ0KCXtmb250LWZhbWlseToiXEBBcmlhbCBVbmljb2RlIE1TIjsNCglwYW5v
c2UtMToyIDExIDYgNCAyIDIgMiAyIDIgNDt9DQovKiBTdHlsZSBEZWZpbml0aW9ucyAqLw0KcC5N
c29Ob3JtYWwsIGxpLk1zb05vcm1hbCwgZGl2Lk1zb05vcm1hbA0KCXttYXJnaW46MGluOw0KCW1h
cmdpbi1ib3R0b206LjAwMDFwdDsNCglmb250LXNpemU6MTIuMHB0Ow0KCWZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiJU
aW1lcyBOZXcgUm9tYW4iLCJzZXJpZiI7fQ0KYTpsaW5rLCBzcGFuLk1zb0h5cGVybGluaw0KCXtt
c28tc3R5bGUtcHJpb3JpdHk6OTk7DQoJY29sb3I6Ymx1ZTsNCgl0ZXh0LWRlY29yYXRpb246dW5k
ZXJsaW5lO30NCmE6dmlzaXRlZCwgc3Bhbi5Nc29IeXBlcmxpbmtGb2xsb3dlZA0KCXttc28tc3R5
bGUtcHJpb3JpdHk6OTk7DQoJY29sb3I6cHVycGxlOw0KCXRleHQtZGVjb3JhdGlvbjp1bmRlcmxp
bmU7fQ0KcC5Nc29BY2V0YXRlLCBsaS5Nc29BY2V0YXRlLCBkaXYuTXNvQWNldGF0ZQ0KCXttc28t
c3R5bGUtcHJpb3JpdHk6OTk7DQoJbXNvLXN0eWxlLWxpbms6IkJhbGxvb24gVGV4dCBDaGFyIjsN
CgltYXJnaW46MGluOw0KCW1hcmdpbi1ib3R0b206LjAwMDFwdDsNCglmb250LXNpemU6OC4wcHQ7
DQoJZm9udC1mYW1pbHk6IlRhaG9tYSIsInNhbnMtc2VyaWYiO30NCnNwYW4uQmFsbG9vblRleHRD
aGFyDQoJe21zby1zdHlsZS1uYW1lOiJCYWxsb29uIFRleHQgQ2hhciI7DQoJbXNvLXN0eWxlLXBy
aW9yaXR5Ojk5Ow0KCW1zby1zdHlsZS1saW5rOiJCYWxsb29uIFRleHQiOw0KCWZvbnQtZmFtaWx5
OiJUYWhvbWEiLCJzYW5zLXNlcmlmIjt9DQpzcGFuLkVtYWlsU3R5bGUxOQ0KCXttc28tc3R5bGUt
dHlwZTpwZXJzb25hbDsNCglmb250LWZhbWlseToiQXJpYWwgVW5pY29kZSBNUyIsInNhbnMtc2Vy
aWYiOw0KCWNvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0Q7fQ0Kc3Bhbi5FbWFpbFN0eWxlMjANCgl7bXNvLXN0eWxlLXR5
cGU6cGVyc29uYWw7DQoJZm9udC1mYW1pbHk6IkNhbGlicmkiLCJzYW5zLXNlcmlmIjsNCgljb2xv
cjojMUY0OTdEO30NCnNwYW4uRW1haWxTdHlsZTIxDQoJe21zby1zdHlsZS10eXBlOnBlcnNvbmFs
Ow0KCWZvbnQtZmFtaWx5OiJDYWxpYnJpIiwic2Fucy1zZXJpZiI7DQoJY29sb3I6IzFGNDk3RDt9
DQpzcGFuLkVtYWlsU3R5bGUyMg0KCXttc28tc3R5bGUtdHlwZTpwZXJzb25hbC1yZXBseTsNCglm
b250LWZhbWlseToiQ2FsaWJyaSIsInNhbnMtc2VyaWYiOw0KCWNvbG9yOiMxRjQ5N0Q7fQ0KLk1z
b0NocERlZmF1bHQNCgl7bXNvLXN0eWxlLXR5cGU6ZXhwb3J0LW9ubHk7DQoJZm9udC1zaXplOjEw
LjBwdDt9DQpAcGFnZSBXb3JkU2VjdGlvbjENCgl7c2l6ZTo4LjVpbiAxMS4waW47DQoJbWFyZ2lu
OjEuMGluIDEuMjVpbiAxLjBpbiAxLjI1aW47fQ0KZGl2LldvcmRTZWN0aW9uMQ0KCXtwYWdlOldv
cmRTZWN0aW9uMTt9DQotLT48L3N0eWxlPg0KPC9ib2R5Pg0KPC9odG1sPg0K

--_000_FFA8BFED259D44838EA5124F65A403ABhuaweicom_--


From nobody Tue Mar  4 04:24:21 2014
Return-Path: <kivinen@iki.fi>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B76A41A004B for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:24:18 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.448
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.448 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id EjunPqyopi87 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:24:17 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail.kivinen.iki.fi (fireball.kivinen.iki.fi [IPv6:2001:1bc8:100d::2]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D003A1A0055 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:24:16 -0800 (PST)
Received: from fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s24COBTd015545 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:24:11 +0200 (EET)
Received: (from kivinen@localhost) by fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.12.11) id s24COBAv014535; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:24:11 +0200 (EET)
X-Authentication-Warning: fireball.kivinen.iki.fi: kivinen set sender to kivinen@iki.fi using -f
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Message-ID: <21269.50667.638391.555895@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:24:11 +0200
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailer: VM 8.2.0b under 24.3.1 (x86_64--netbsd)
X-Edit-Time: 6 min
X-Total-Time: 6 min
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Zv947_04ZGdiilcoOc2-Ut0d7Yc
Subject: [secdir] Link to the Security Area Review Tool.
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 12:24:18 -0000

The Secdir Area Review tool can be found at:

https://art.tools.ietf.org/tools/art/secdir/index.cgi/t=5467/welcome

One thing you can do there, is to mark yourself for being unavaible
for some time, i.e. if you are month or so on vacation you can mark
yourself of being away until specific time. Unless you are next in
rotation there is not really point of marking yourself away if you are
away only week or two. 

Btw, we currently go around the list of reviewers every 5-6 weeks.
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi


From nobody Tue Mar  4 04:37:55 2014
Return-Path: <kivinen@iki.fi>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 157C61A0055 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:37:53 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.438
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.438 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_FILL_THIS_FORM_SHORT=0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id nmu0_3P56lxC for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:37:50 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail.kivinen.iki.fi (fireball.kivinen.iki.fi [IPv6:2001:1bc8:100d::2]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D153C1A0103 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:37:49 -0800 (PST)
Received: from fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s24CbjCq022278 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:37:46 +0200 (EET)
Received: (from kivinen@localhost) by fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.12.11) id s24Cbj3F026975; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:37:45 +0200 (EET)
X-Authentication-Warning: fireball.kivinen.iki.fi: kivinen set sender to kivinen@iki.fi using -f
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Message-ID: <21269.51481.954107.59740@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:37:45 +0200
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: secdir@ietf.org
In-Reply-To: <21269.50667.638391.555895@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
References: <21269.50667.638391.555895@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
X-Mailer: VM 8.2.0b under 24.3.1 (x86_64--netbsd)
X-Edit-Time: 2 min
X-Total-Time: 2 min
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Jm84KG3E-mnnIHQTl0CV7E8tOUU
Subject: [secdir]  Link to the Security Area Review Tool.
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 12:37:53 -0000

Tero Kivinen writes:
> The Secdir Area Review tool can be found at:
> 
> https://art.tools.ietf.org/tools/art/secdir/index.cgi/t=5467/welcome

Forgot one important thing. The authentication email address and
password are normal tools.ietf.org accounts. I.e if you do not have
account already in there get one from https://tools.ietf.org/newlogin
site. The only thing is that the email address of the account and the
email address stored in the database must match, so if you cannot log
in with your tools.ietf.org account then the review database most
likely have some old address for you. In that case send me email
and I will fix the email address in the database.
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi


From nobody Tue Mar  4 04:54:24 2014
Return-Path: <smb@cs.columbia.edu>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 97AC81A0041 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:54:22 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.747
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.747 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id uib6clyzUnuc for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:54:21 -0800 (PST)
Received: from buckwheat.cc.columbia.edu (buckwheat.cc.columbia.edu [128.59.72.251]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D571D1A002A for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 04:54:20 -0800 (PST)
Received: from hazelnut (hazelnut.cc.columbia.edu [128.59.213.250]) by buckwheat.cc.columbia.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id s24Cq2Iw031758 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 07:54:17 -0500
Received: from hazelnut (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by hazelnut (Postfix) with ESMTP id 70C366C for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 07:54:17 -0500 (EST)
Received: from rambutan.cc.columbia.edu (rambutan.cc.columbia.edu [128.59.29.5]) by hazelnut (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5C80D6C for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 07:54:17 -0500 (EST)
Received: from dhcp-bb3d.meeting.ietf.org (dhcp-bb3d.meeting.ietf.org [31.133.187.61]) (user=smb2132 mech=PLAIN bits=0) by rambutan.cc.columbia.edu (8.14.4/8.14.3) with ESMTP id s24CsFR9014536 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=NOT) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 07:54:16 -0500 (EST)
From: "Steven M. Bellovin" <smb@cs.columbia.edu>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <6992E9CF-C0E0-4532-A116-4D434903B4EB@cs.columbia.edu>
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 12:53:54 +0000
To: secdir@ietf.org
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.2 \(1874\))
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1874)
X-No-Spam-Score: Local
X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 2.68 on 128.59.29.5
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/zhwpCiBw2RYBosDv7mgPuDcNSJk
Subject: [secdir] reference
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 12:54:22 -0000

@inproceedings{CL01,
        Author =3D {J. Camenisch and A. Lysyanskaya},
        Booktitle =3D {Proc. of Eurocrypt '01, LNCS 2045},
        Pages =3D {93-118},
        Publisher =3D {Springer-Verlag},
        Title =3D {An Efficient System for Non-transferable Anonymous =
Credentials with Optional Anonymity Revocation},
        Year =3D 2001}

There's a lot more in that vein in the crypto literature.

		--Steve Bellovin, https://www.cs.columbia.edu/~smb






From nobody Tue Mar  4 06:49:22 2014
Return-Path: <benl@google.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id EC76F1A0251 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 06:49:17 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.926
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.926 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FM_FORGED_GMAIL=0.622, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id gG_cYYECfkwH for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 06:49:15 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail-vc0-x231.google.com (mail-vc0-x231.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400c:c03::231]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1FCA31A01DA for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 06:49:15 -0800 (PST)
Received: by mail-vc0-f177.google.com with SMTP id if11so4393089vcb.36 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 04 Mar 2014 06:49:11 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=Wym0W2nypR2Uqn6ygs7eCLtDmtxcKyYrl6QB5u95YfQ=; b=MWETZ66Zf3N1VT5XYxrjNPrZ3iYwLgdXkwxk0dbXb0W7xAvPltZt6UcUcxK4kc/CuB 2gjhNIDBRlX9Vbtqgfm3KFbePemz4P7OmCWj3ah7KIhfzjl0W8Q0GselUP6uu9MVVNXb Jf5kMMpduHPmzlagMmrTN5dGLPYUKElhBcF7melXVzrYwOga59dk8NNd5WEs8gA/7fxS tzLxyyBWhgWfV1QeZ8qkMtdYIF6aRwjol10t/LVQbsVONBJRvPWAB6FWxfKA+bdkkI38 OqGfsXHqVxwnmi2YC2bQ0FSOGDMwmXah6EXEyAR4NjR7jo9ep5Bwef75aU64oxQByJDl 5Y1A==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date :message-id:subject:from:to:cc:content-type; bh=Wym0W2nypR2Uqn6ygs7eCLtDmtxcKyYrl6QB5u95YfQ=; b=ENYvmUEn3IBDwtJpfzLTf+u1hC/7E4efTSAQfaR36D/UU0U3QKAF6GNy25zNOWhRih HqG6qhvPMwUjgFPlt0iC3Z3qfiEmuVnldmIp+3cSPXdy+2bQy2/ccxypTZSkmrQQIU+K +3vUXh+8j+cyg8epxjq/3GHjVyO7ZscMmQEuuYdUsjxhspW0fJ+aDHsQom7tLh2jz92o QPgiTLn1M/6JonQXDFTTy35UL6l5IPKvrGEf76AsUx8RBPg56/5riFnMAIpbOu7BLRew KLrYkdNcP5pUPaHKvtE7UN+q81a1/l1Vg4bmfDRHqPxGfzqw+gjVJqi5eQkfAFBeVRCN srUw==
X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQk6lv1vY8zRxac1LnwO5ecZZI0oH7NdEQ0JyZ/WcftIanYV2fUcXNT9u0BGdHMeRAq6IbYm/DQhS97A0FyF+BtGfvr9j5bKvwjluG3kHspuH61GFyRimmZEYm6Tm+p8VjzNXXma/3diQP4LHFxxUdriA7kuQTzj8xAfI7a56PWXvEkP5AG1DeTzp3kev9zlHH/KLQ/z
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.58.100.100 with SMTP id ex4mr22357veb.2.1393944551615; Tue, 04 Mar 2014 06:49:11 -0800 (PST)
Received: by 10.52.230.105 with HTTP; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 06:49:11 -0800 (PST)
In-Reply-To: <6992E9CF-C0E0-4532-A116-4D434903B4EB@cs.columbia.edu>
References: <6992E9CF-C0E0-4532-A116-4D434903B4EB@cs.columbia.edu>
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 14:49:11 +0000
Message-ID: <CABrd9SRj=4Q+eLjHhGo+ZC=gfjGeqJehpgLfTncYswCUVWNxQA@mail.gmail.com>
From: Ben Laurie <benl@google.com>
To: "Steven M. Bellovin" <smb@cs.columbia.edu>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/VALCqLRs_S40ADb3YU-bT4q3Kl8
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] reference
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 14:49:18 -0000

On 4 March 2014 12:53, Steven M. Bellovin <smb@cs.columbia.edu> wrote:
> @inproceedings{CL01,
>         Author = {J. Camenisch and A. Lysyanskaya},
>         Booktitle = {Proc. of Eurocrypt '01, LNCS 2045},
>         Pages = {93-118},
>         Publisher = {Springer-Verlag},
>         Title = {An Efficient System for Non-transferable Anonymous Credentials with Optional Anonymity Revocation},
>         Year = 2001}
>
> There's a lot more in that vein in the crypto literature.

There's also selective disclosure, which is at least theoretically useful :-)

@inproceedings{DBLP:conf/spw/BangerterCL04,
  author    = {Endre Bangerter and
               Jan Camenisch and
               Anna Lysyanskaya},
  title     = {A Cryptographic Framework for the Controlled Release of
               Certified Data},
  booktitle = {Security Protocols Workshop},
  year      = {2004},
  pages     = {20-42},
  ee        = {http://dx.doi.org/10.1007/11861386_4},
  crossref  = {DBLP:conf/spw/2004},
  bibsource = {DBLP, http://dblp.uni-trier.de}
}


From nobody Tue Mar  4 06:58:19 2014
Return-Path: <smb@cs.columbia.edu>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 32DE01A0125 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 06:58:16 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.747
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.747 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id aiusZmVc6Pqr for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 06:58:14 -0800 (PST)
Received: from buckwheat.cc.columbia.edu (buckwheat.cc.columbia.edu [128.59.72.251]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C88941A00B9 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 06:58:13 -0800 (PST)
Received: from hazelnut (hazelnut.cc.columbia.edu [128.59.213.250]) by buckwheat.cc.columbia.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id s24EuR9i013513; Tue, 4 Mar 2014 09:58:10 -0500
Received: from hazelnut (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by hazelnut (Postfix) with ESMTP id EC8746C; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 09:58:09 -0500 (EST)
Received: from rambutan.cc.columbia.edu (rambutan.cc.columbia.edu [128.59.29.5]) by hazelnut (Postfix) with ESMTP id E1C1D6C; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 09:58:09 -0500 (EST)
Received: from [31.93.251.160] ([31.93.251.160]) (user=smb2132 mech=PLAIN bits=0) by rambutan.cc.columbia.edu (8.14.4/8.14.3) with ESMTP id s24Ew6pg016337 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 4 Mar 2014 09:58:08 -0500 (EST)
User-Agent: K-9 Mail for Android
In-Reply-To: <CABrd9SRj=4Q+eLjHhGo+ZC=gfjGeqJehpgLfTncYswCUVWNxQA@mail.gmail.com>
References: <6992E9CF-C0E0-4532-A116-4D434903B4EB@cs.columbia.edu> <CABrd9SRj=4Q+eLjHhGo+ZC=gfjGeqJehpgLfTncYswCUVWNxQA@mail.gmail.com>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
From: smb@cs.columbia.edu
Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 14:58:00 +0000
To: Ben Laurie <benl@google.com>
Message-ID: <e8d58e27-5bb6-4f77-a566-e004a5eb173c@email.android.com>
X-No-Spam-Score: Local
X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 2.68 on 128.59.29.5
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/SpLO7pdOklEi5Gu4qIb2PmLdJOc
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] reference
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 14:58:16 -0000

On March 4, 2014 2:49:11 PM GMT+00:00, Ben Laurie <benl@google.com> wrote:
>On 4 March 2014 12:53, Steven M. Bellovin <smb@cs.columbia.edu> wrote:
>> @inproceedings{CL01,
>>         Author = {J. Camenisch and A. Lysyanskaya},
>>         Booktitle = {Proc. of Eurocrypt '01, LNCS 2045},
>>         Pages = {93-118},
>>         Publisher = {Springer-Verlag},
>>         Title = {An Efficient System for Non-transferable Anonymous
>Credentials with Optional Anonymity Revocation},
>>         Year = 2001}
>>
>> There's a lot more in that vein in the crypto literature.
>
>There's also selective disclosure, which is at least theoretically
>useful :-)
>
>@inproceedings{DBLP:conf/spw/BangerterCL04,
>  author    = {Endre Bangerter and
>               Jan Camenisch and
>               Anna Lysyanskaya},
>  title     = {A Cryptographic Framework for the Controlled Release of
>               Certified Data},
>  booktitle = {Security Protocols Workshop},
>  year      = {2004},
>  pages     = {20-42},
>  ee        = {http://dx.doi.org/10.1007/11861386_4},
>  crossref  = {DBLP:conf/spw/2004},
>  bibsource = {DBLP, http://dblp.uni-trier.de}
>}

As I said, a lot more. 

A talk on some of these mechanisms might be a useful thing to schedule for Toronto. 

-- 
--Steve Bellovin, sending from a toy. 


From nobody Tue Mar  4 08:11:20 2014
Return-Path: <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E8D8C1A020F for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 08:11:18 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.447
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.447 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id FLxka7JX8JuP for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 08:11:10 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mercury.scss.tcd.ie (mercury.scss.tcd.ie [134.226.56.6]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 813831A01B0 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 08:10:26 -0800 (PST)
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mercury.scss.tcd.ie (Postfix) with ESMTP id 681FDBE33; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 16:10:22 +0000 (GMT)
X-Virus-Scanned: Debian amavisd-new at scss.tcd.ie
Received: from mercury.scss.tcd.ie ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (mercury.scss.tcd.ie [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 6kNjOKEBOr8u; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 16:10:21 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from [31.133.162.177] (dhcp-a2b1.meeting.ietf.org [31.133.162.177]) by mercury.scss.tcd.ie (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id E8424BE2F; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 16:10:20 +0000 (GMT)
Message-ID: <5315FAEC.8040807@cs.tcd.ie>
Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 16:10:20 +0000
From: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.3.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: smb@cs.columbia.edu, Ben Laurie <benl@google.com>
References: <6992E9CF-C0E0-4532-A116-4D434903B4EB@cs.columbia.edu> <CABrd9SRj=4Q+eLjHhGo+ZC=gfjGeqJehpgLfTncYswCUVWNxQA@mail.gmail.com> <e8d58e27-5bb6-4f77-a566-e004a5eb173c@email.android.com>
In-Reply-To: <e8d58e27-5bb6-4f77-a566-e004a5eb173c@email.android.com>
X-Enigmail-Version: 1.6
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/RylvgVBWAzOsgB3uUpr5JySeSXY
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] reference
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 16:11:19 -0000

On 03/04/2014 02:58 PM, smb@cs.columbia.edu wrote:
> A talk on some of these mechanisms might be a useful thing to schedule for Toronto. 

Sounds good. Was that the sound of you volunteering? :-)

S


> 


From nobody Tue Mar  4 08:16:52 2014
Return-Path: <smb@cs.columbia.edu>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 29C401A020F for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 08:16:51 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.447
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.447 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id RlArIBzJqK2p for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 08:16:49 -0800 (PST)
Received: from eloi.cs.columbia.edu (eloi.cs.columbia.edu [128.59.21.107]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5EAB21A01DA for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 08:16:49 -0800 (PST)
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by eloi.cs.columbia.edu (Postfix) with ESMTP id 99F00795F09; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 11:16:45 -0500 (EST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at eloi.cs.columbia.edu
Received: from eloi.cs.columbia.edu ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (eloi.cs.columbia.edu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id NJcGleqldDlP; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 11:16:44 -0500 (EST)
Received: from [10.9.0.182] (fireball.cs.columbia.edu [128.59.13.10]) by eloi.cs.columbia.edu (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 9127C795EFB; Tue,  4 Mar 2014 11:16:43 -0500 (EST)
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.2 \(1874\))
From: "Steven M. Bellovin" <smb@cs.columbia.edu>
In-Reply-To: <5315FAEC.8040807@cs.tcd.ie>
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 2014 16:16:40 +0000
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <B9E34EDF-D948-44C4-A94C-ADE5F232D147@cs.columbia.edu>
References: <6992E9CF-C0E0-4532-A116-4D434903B4EB@cs.columbia.edu> <CABrd9SRj=4Q+eLjHhGo+ZC=gfjGeqJehpgLfTncYswCUVWNxQA@mail.gmail.com> <e8d58e27-5bb6-4f77-a566-e004a5eb173c@email.android.com> <5315FAEC.8040807@cs.tcd.ie>
To: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1874)
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/LKyLvSP9RFWl2x9rNFR2BoVEe4o
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] reference
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 04 Mar 2014 16:16:51 -0000

On Mar 4, 2014, at 4:10 PM, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> =
wrote:

>=20
>=20
> On 03/04/2014 02:58 PM, smb@cs.columbia.edu wrote:
>> A talk on some of these mechanisms might be a useful thing to =
schedule for Toronto.=20
>=20
> Sounds good. Was that the sound of you volunteering? :-)

No, because I don't know if I'll be there.  Even if I were, it might pay =
to ask the CFRG chairs to find a sucker^h^h^h^h^h^hvolunteer, since I =
don't know that I know all of the lovely tricks that they've come up =
with.

		--Steve Bellovin, https://www.cs.columbia.edu/~smb





From nobody Wed Mar  5 08:07:04 2014
Return-Path: <sunqi@csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 584F61A0391; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 01:28:38 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: 1.793
X-Spam-Level: *
X-Spam-Status: No, score=1.793 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, FH_RELAY_NODNS=1.451, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_BRBL_LASTEXT=1.449, RDNS_NONE=0.793, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id IH4nYrApIE-b; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 01:28:34 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail.csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn (unknown [211.151.89.50]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4089F1A0392; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 01:28:24 -0800 (PST)
Received: from dhcp-a315.meeting.ietf.org (dhcp-a315.meeting.ietf.org [31.133.163.21]) (using TLSv1 with cipher AES128-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mail.csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn (Tsinghua University (Postfix)) with ESMTPSA id C73C114983BB; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 17:03:53 +0800 (CST)
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v1085)
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=Apple-Mail-31--907336436
From: Qi Sun <sunqi@csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn>
In-Reply-To: <3605A730-DFCA-4A9B-9A30-7FAE4A938CBA@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 5 Mar 2014 09:28:11 +0000
Message-Id: <0072CD75-BCD2-4759-A28E-92481E6D50D8@csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn>
References: <alpine.LRH.2.00.1403031101470.22583@sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com> <3605A730-DFCA-4A9B-9A30-7FAE4A938CBA@gmail.com>
To: Chris Lonvick <clonvick@cisco.com>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1085)
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Sz35PPOILvIixE4w7meIjvTtunE
X-Mailman-Approved-At: Wed, 05 Mar 2014 08:06:57 -0800
Cc: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg.all@tools.ietf.org, iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 05 Mar 2014 09:28:38 -0000

--Apple-Mail-31--907336436
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Content-Type: text/plain;
	charset=utf-8



Dear Chris,

Many thanks for your comments!=20

About the Security Considerations section, how about we add the =
following clarification:

OLD:
6.  Security Considerations

  As the relay agent will forward all unknown types of DHCPv6 messages,
  a malicious attacker can interfere with the relaying function by
  constructing fake DHCPv6 messages with arbitrary type code.  The same
  problem may happen in current DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 practice where the
  attacker constructs the fake DHCP message with a known type code.
  ...

NEW:
6.  Security Considerations

  This document creates no new security issues that are not already
  present in RFC3315.  By explicitly documenting the correct handling
  of unknown messages, this document, if implemented, reduces any
  security exposure that might result from incorrect handling of
  unknown messages.  The following issues are issues that could already
  be present with section 23 of [RFC3315], but we discuss them in
  detail here as guidance for implementors.

  As the relay agent will forward all unknown types of DHCPv6 messages,
  a malicious attacker can interfere with the relaying function by
  constructing fake DHCPv6 messages with arbitrary type code.  The same
  problem may happen in current DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 practice where the
  attacker constructs the fake DHCP message with a known type code.
  ...

Would that be OK?=20

Best Regards,
Qi
//Sorry if you received duplicate mails.



On 2014-3-3, at =E4=B8=8B=E5=8D=887:07, Chris Lonvick wrote:


> Hi,
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> This document looks to be well thought out and almost complete.  I =
would like to see a statement in the Security Considerations section =
that this specification adheres to the Security Considerations section =
of RFC 3315, and augments it by describing the disposition of unknown =
messages.
>=20
> Other than that, the only very minor nit that I have is that the =
second and third paragraphs of the Security Considerations section are a =
single thought and should be combined.
>=20
> Thanks,
> Chris
>=20


--Apple-Mail-31--907336436
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Content-Type: text/html;
	charset=utf-8

<html><head></head><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; =
-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; =
"><div><span class=3D"Apple-style-span" style=3D"border-collapse: =
separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'Heiti SC'; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: auto; text-indent: =
0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: =
auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; "><span =
class=3D"Apple-style-span" style=3D"border-collapse: separate; color: =
rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'Heiti SC'; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: =
auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; "><div =
style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; =
-webkit-line-break: after-white-space; =
"><br></div></span></span></div><div><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>Dear Chris,<br><font =
class=3D"Apple-style-span" color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>Many thanks for =
your comments!&nbsp;<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>About the Security Considerations section, =
how about we add the following clarification:<br><font =
class=3D"Apple-style-span" color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>OLD:<br>6. =
&nbsp;Security Considerations<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>&nbsp; As the relay agent will forward all =
unknown types of DHCPv6 messages,<br>&nbsp; a malicious attacker can =
interfere with the relaying function by<br>&nbsp; constructing fake =
DHCPv6 messages with arbitrary type code. &nbsp;The same<br>&nbsp; =
problem may happen in current DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 practice where =
the<br>&nbsp; attacker constructs the fake DHCP message with a known =
type code.<br>&nbsp; ...<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>NEW:<br>6. &nbsp;Security =
Considerations<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>&nbsp; This document creates no new =
security issues that are not already<br>&nbsp; present in RFC3315. =
&nbsp;By explicitly documenting the correct handling<br>&nbsp; of =
unknown messages, this document, if implemented, reduces any<br>&nbsp; =
security exposure that might result from incorrect handling of<br>&nbsp; =
unknown messages. &nbsp;The following issues are issues that could =
already<br>&nbsp; be present with section 23 of [RFC3315], but we =
discuss them in<br>&nbsp; detail here as guidance for =
implementors.<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>&nbsp; As the relay agent will forward all =
unknown types of DHCPv6 messages,<br>&nbsp; a malicious attacker can =
interfere with the relaying function by<br>&nbsp; constructing fake =
DHCPv6 messages with arbitrary type code. &nbsp;The same<br>&nbsp; =
problem may happen in current DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 practice where =
the<br>&nbsp; attacker constructs the fake DHCP message with a known =
type code.<br>&nbsp; ...<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>Would that be OK?&nbsp;<br><font =
class=3D"Apple-style-span" color=3D"#144fae"><br></font>Best =
Regards,<br>Qi</div><div>//Sorry if you received duplicate =
mails.<br><font class=3D"Apple-style-span" =
color=3D"#144fae"><br><br><br></font></div><div>On 2014-3-3, at =
=E4=B8=8B=E5=8D=887:07, Chris Lonvick wrote:<br><font =
class=3D"Apple-style-span" color=3D"#144fae"><br><br></font><blockquote =
type=3D"cite"><div>Hi,<br><br>I have reviewed this document as part of =
the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents =
being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for =
the benefit of the security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and =
WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call =
comments.<br><br>This document looks to be well thought out and almost =
complete. &nbsp;I would like to see a statement in the Security =
Considerations section that this specification adheres to the Security =
Considerations section of RFC 3315, and augments it by describing the =
disposition of unknown messages.<br><br>Other than that, the only very =
minor nit that I have is that the second and third paragraphs of the =
Security Considerations section are a single thought and should be =
combined.<br><br>Thanks,<br>Chris<br><br></div></blockquote></div><br></bo=
dy></html>=

--Apple-Mail-31--907336436--


From nobody Wed Mar  5 11:55:02 2014
Return-Path: <clonvick@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C587C1A0224; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 11:55:00 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -15.048
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.048 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id KNHkl7HtG5Yz; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 11:54:58 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mtv-iport-1.cisco.com (mtv-iport-1.cisco.com [173.36.130.12]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 192771A021C; Wed,  5 Mar 2014 11:54:58 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=3027; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1394049294; x=1395258894; h=date:from:to:cc:subject:in-reply-to:message-id: references:mime-version; bh=gPUe08TkaeEDGVzc+MpIppqOKxPZidgYgTuuF8uV1n0=; b=cnScUrYQ6fI10IKU+B005DKR7e0r+3tsq/KJ4sUVelM55YfVXJ4Tl2zM 5DvBVX/BQ1tUqKg5s9vFphnDXcGMzn4NHlpHO84bHlD3lHES297Y8SuAF MZt97Dbs4Rl0F3ITnjpWC5Z6IPjyb5XanJX0DKE42Suxza7bEZaBNf1oR c=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AgsFAOJ/F1OrRDoJ/2dsb2JhbABaDoJ4hBa+CYEaFnSCJQEBAQMBI1YQCQIYKgICVwaIBAeSI5wXoCcXjlEHgm+BSQSJS6Edgm5g
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.97,594,1389744000"; d="scan'208";a="104419680"
Received: from mtv-core-4.cisco.com ([171.68.58.9]) by mtv-iport-1.cisco.com with ESMTP; 05 Mar 2014 19:54:54 +0000
Received: from sjc-xdm-112 (sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com [171.71.188.44]) by mtv-core-4.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s25Jssvr029952 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Wed, 5 Mar 2014 19:54:54 GMT
Date: Wed, 5 Mar 2014 11:54:54 -0800 (PST)
From: Chris Lonvick <clonvick@cisco.com>
To: Qi Sun <sunqi@csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn>
In-Reply-To: <0072CD75-BCD2-4759-A28E-92481E6D50D8@csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn>
Message-ID: <alpine.LRH.2.00.1403051154270.17205@sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com>
References: <alpine.LRH.2.00.1403031101470.22583@sjc-xdm-112.cisco.com> <3605A730-DFCA-4A9B-9A30-7FAE4A938CBA@gmail.com> <0072CD75-BCD2-4759-A28E-92481E6D50D8@csnet1.cs.tsinghua.edu.cn>
User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (LRH 1167 2008-08-23)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: MULTIPART/MIXED; BOUNDARY="1202400444-2086425228-1394049294=:17205"
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/EPINhoAzMzAQpaR_Mf8QST1_tjY
Cc: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg.all@tools.ietf.org, iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 05 Mar 2014 19:55:01 -0000

  This message is in MIME format.  The first part should be readable text,
  while the remaining parts are likely unreadable without MIME-aware tools.

--1202400444-2086425228-1394049294=:17205
Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8BIT

Hi Qi,

That sounds reasonable.

Best regards,
Chris

On Wed, 5 Mar 2014, Qi Sun wrote:

> 
> 
> Dear Chris,
> 
> Many thanks for your comments!Â 
> 
> About the Security Considerations section, how about we add the following clarification:
> 
> OLD:
> 6. Â Security Considerations
> 
> Â  As the relay agent will forward all unknown types of DHCPv6 messages,
> Â  a malicious attacker can interfere with the relaying function by
> Â  constructing fake DHCPv6 messages with arbitrary type code. Â The same
> Â  problem may happen in current DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 practice where the
> Â  attacker constructs the fake DHCP message with a known type code.
> Â  ...
> 
> NEW:
> 6. Â Security Considerations
> 
> Â  This document creates no new security issues that are not already
> Â  present in RFC3315. Â By explicitly documenting the correct handling
> Â  of unknown messages, this document, if implemented, reduces any
> Â  security exposure that might result from incorrect handling of
> Â  unknown messages. Â The following issues are issues that could already
> Â  be present with section 23 of [RFC3315], but we discuss them in
> Â  detail here as guidance for implementors.
> 
> Â  As the relay agent will forward all unknown types of DHCPv6 messages,
> Â  a malicious attacker can interfere with the relaying function by
> Â  constructing fake DHCPv6 messages with arbitrary type code. Â The same
> Â  problem may happen in current DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 practice where the
> Â  attacker constructs the fake DHCP message with a known type code.
> Â  ...
> 
> Would that be OK?Â 
> 
> Best Regards,
> Qi
> //Sorry if you received duplicate mails.
> 
> 
> 
> On 2014-3-3, at ä¸‹åˆ7:07, Chris Lonvick wrote:
> 
>
>       Hi,
>
>       I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
>       were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Â Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last
>       call comments.
>
>       This document looks to be well thought out and almost complete. Â I would like to see a statement in the Security Considerations section that this
>       specification adheres to the Security Considerations section of RFC 3315, and augments it by describing the disposition of unknown messages.
>
>       Other than that, the only very minor nit that I have is that the second and third paragraphs of the Security Considerations section are a single thought and
>       should be combined.
>
>       Thanks,
>       Chris
> 
> 
> 
>
--1202400444-2086425228-1394049294=:17205--


From nobody Mon Mar 10 14:31:05 2014
Return-Path: <tlyu@mit.edu>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B46301A04B0; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 14:31:02 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -3.148
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.148 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id tX60tG1BaYrL; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 14:31:01 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu [18.7.68.36]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CD701A0146; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 14:31:00 -0700 (PDT)
X-AuditID: 12074424-f79e26d000000c70-6b-531e2f0fd78f
Received: from mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.43]) (using TLS with cipher AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id FE.84.03184.F0F2E135; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:30:55 -0400 (EDT)
Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id s2ALUnI7008478; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:30:54 -0400
Received: from cathode-dark-space.mit.edu (cathode-dark-space.mit.edu [18.18.1.96]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as tlyu@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id s2ALUlvm002403 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:30:48 -0400
Received: (from tlyu@localhost) by cathode-dark-space.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id s2ALUkq0025170; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:30:46 -0400 (EDT)
To: iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05.all@tools.ietf.org
From: Tom Yu <tlyu@MIT.EDU>
Date: Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:30:46 -0400
Message-ID: <ldvob1dkagp.fsf@cathode-dark-space.mit.edu>
Lines: 31
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFjrLIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrcuvLxdssGi+qMW6yzNZLWb8mchs 8WHhQxYHZo8lS34yeXy5/JktgCmKyyYlNSezLLVI3y6BK+P80eNMBTu5K44u2MDYwDifs4uR k0NCwETi1Jx9jBC2mMSFe+vZuhi5OIQEZjNJrJr5iRXC2cgo0TR5DwtIlZDAOSaJh136EIku oET/c7B2EYFMifNHjrKD2MICzhIPt5wHauDgYBOQlji6uAwkzCKgKtF58BEziM0rYCHRu30V mM0jwClxqGclI0RcUOLkzCdgu5gFtCRu/HvJNIGRbxaS1CwkqQWMTKsYZVNyq3RzEzNzilOT dYuTE/PyUot0zfVyM0v0UlNKNzGCQo3dRWUHY/MhpUOMAhyMSjy8B9/KBAuxJpYVV+YeYpTk YFIS5c3TkQsW4kvKT6nMSCzOiC8qzUktPsQowcGsJMK7Thwox5uSWFmVWpQPk5LmYFES5+07 KxEsJJCeWJKanZpakFoEk5Xh4FCS4F2pDdQoWJSanlqRlplTgpBm4uAEGc4DNHyOLsjw4oLE 3OLMdIj8KUZFKXHeBSAXCYAkMkrz4HphqeAVozjQK8K8K0HaeYBpBK77FdBgJqDBzcelQAaX JCKkpBoYJe/LvJcLS2ZOCC5fkHnT+d8phufS35+57e5fFGqw8LHy+2nCK82Tn9+cbi3IpXjV LHBHKVPH9ETDxWohtQ9neh8X4bwct+On8buHbq+/zMwwSbzCcrOSXaueszrPg5kphGuV/tyL sTcvMD4J1k9S5C3Xm/6nWf7HdjfNMmGdfVwKFsyTDhxTYinOSDTUYi4qTgQAfoHmEuACAAA=
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Q2ckBP21GYgPsh-vTDmq_rAwZ3k
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 10 Mar 2014 21:31:02 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: ready with nits

I believe the Security Considerations section of this document is
reasonable.

Query: I'm not very familiar with MPLS; is the handling of the Entropy
Label Indicator the only situation where a Label Switching Router
would need to inspect (as opposed to hash for load balancing) labels
below the top of the label stack?

I was confused by the explanation of why Label 7 (ELI) has meaning as
both an ordinary Special Label and an Extended Special Purpose Label
until I read RFC 6790.  Perhaps explain that looking for the ELI is
typically the only reason why a LSR would inspect the middle of the
label stack?

Re answer 6 of Section 3:

If an ingress LSR pushes ESPLs onto the label stack, any downstream
LSRs that do not understand ESPLs could erroneously use the ESPLs as
load balancing inputs.  Would it be a good idea to recommend that
ingress LSRs avoid pushing ESPLs onto the label stack if their policy
cannot tolerate variations in downstream load balancing caused by
inappropriate use of the ESPLs as load balancing inputs by downstream
LSRs that don't understand ESPLs?


From nobody Mon Mar 10 14:34:42 2014
Return-Path: <tlyu@mit.edu>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 51E8F1A04E9; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 14:34:41 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -3.148
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.148 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id F-78hI4tPBTd; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 14:34:40 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu [18.9.25.12]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B96D91A0146; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 14:34:39 -0700 (PDT)
X-AuditID: 1209190c-f794a6d000000c27-55-531e2fe909c5
Received: from mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.43]) (using TLS with cipher AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 08.AA.03111.9EF2E135; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:34:33 -0400 (EDT)
Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id s2ALYWsk008989; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:34:33 -0400
Received: from cathode-dark-space.mit.edu (cathode-dark-space.mit.edu [18.18.1.96]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as tlyu@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id s2ALYVoJ004566 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:34:32 -0400
Received: (from tlyu@localhost) by cathode-dark-space.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id s2ALYVN0025196; Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:34:31 -0400 (EDT)
To: iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels.all@tools.ietf.org
From: Tom Yu <tlyu@MIT.EDU>
Date: Mon, 10 Mar 2014 17:34:31 -0400
Message-ID: <ldviorlkaag.fsf@cathode-dark-space.mit.edu>
Lines: 34
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFjrDIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrftSXy7Y4PhvLYsTX2eyWcz4M5HZ 4sPChywOzB5Llvxk8vhy+TNbAFMUl01Kak5mWWqRvl0CV8b751fYCrp5Kg5O/srSwHiPs4uR g0NCwETi5jL5LkZOIFNM4sK99WxdjFwcQgKzmSS6fl5gBkkICWxklHhwXhEicY5J4uTafnYI p4tRYtf9f2wgVSICaRJzDl9jB7GFBXwkHi46xw6ygU1AWuLo4jKQMIuAqsSjLc9ZQWxeAQuJ BT13wVp5BDglevu6mSHighInZz5hAbGZBbQkbvx7yTSBkW8WktQsJKkFjEyrGGVTcqt0cxMz c4pTk3WLkxPz8lKLdA31cjNL9FJTSjcxggNNkmcH45uDSocYBTgYlXh4D7yVCRZiTSwrrsw9 xCjJwaQkypunIxcsxJeUn1KZkVicEV9UmpNafIhRgoNZSYR3nThQjjclsbIqtSgfJiXNwaIk ztt3ViJYSCA9sSQ1OzW1ILUIJivDwaEkwasPjCghwaLU9NSKtMycEoQ0EwcnyHAeoOHmIDW8 xQWJucWZ6RD5U4yKUuK8CnpACQGQREZpHlwvLBG8YhQHekWYVwCknQeYROC6XwENZgIa3Hxc CmRwSSJCSqqBUZpFZXZRc+jkuPUlGfYvFyTdbD0beeC8hmzlQstlFrMtw571GjtOb8yXfTYj s8359L73NnlcExVvHmk1O61+oKxXOvbTm2Zd6VdzfDN+bsyQZnAr0fcXW/9mg/GcqhXSuTYb KmXPqrrcfbrtWuzEdH0eZWHvAJXwOUlm8rdmTEq+tKdI6/sdJZbijERDLeai4kQA0BSblt8C AAA=
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/5DgLi6qXahDiwP9IYJ5bw43YakM
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05 (resend)
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 10 Mar 2014 21:34:41 -0000

[Sorry for the resend; I got the tools address for the draft wrong at
first.]

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: ready with nits

I believe the Security Considerations section of this document is
reasonable.

Query: I'm not very familiar with MPLS; is the handling of the Entropy
Label Indicator the only situation where a Label Switching Router
would need to inspect (as opposed to hash for load balancing) labels
below the top of the label stack?

I was confused by the explanation of why Label 7 (ELI) has meaning as
both an ordinary Special Label and an Extended Special Purpose Label
until I read RFC 6790.  Perhaps explain that looking for the ELI is
typically the only reason why a LSR would inspect the middle of the
label stack?

Re answer 6 of Section 3:

If an ingress LSR pushes ESPLs onto the label stack, any downstream
LSRs that do not understand ESPLs could erroneously use the ESPLs as
load balancing inputs.  Would it be a good idea to recommend that
ingress LSRs avoid pushing ESPLs onto the label stack if their policy
cannot tolerate variations in downstream load balancing caused by
inappropriate use of the ESPLs as load balancing inputs by downstream
LSRs that don't understand ESPLs?


From nobody Tue Mar 11 00:52:42 2014
Return-Path: <julien.ietf@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 566CE1A0139 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:40 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9,  DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id AuR0CJZa5gDl for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:39 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-ve0-x232.google.com (mail-ve0-x232.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400c:c01::232]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BEC751A0381 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:36 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-ve0-f178.google.com with SMTP id jw12so8082990veb.37 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:30 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:date:message-id:subject:from:to:content-type; bh=I3eNdwH73PZkePkVIU3Vk0pB155NU32wUZaitGTMQhw=; b=GmhAmTHGyvnqEWfSTiM6nCIMTqpBNd23E9kykUh6kdeLGbw3rkmm9muyCcYYkoWU2Y 8XF2yKB35OhgI/nbq59rPFXPXeCXeC2ji4QAiB7/xSGY32aKSmXzjpf5aVXlTKJnFVX3 OlKiFJ+JCdnrlIyDvE1R5zpfxk949/csJ77zchMcA44TVs2WNFstbaTHjuCMtBpAiC17 xlvLlg98LGxCzfrZguYZO+8nQXd8DJN0l3SyDPdF4nBtSGYv9mmZ3ELqvWUq0sVGRG0Y AWRDUC28UsovutdwVTi9juOjteoW8kphwnGL3Q8tIToNGHA5RZbRzD2S3UTUpEEbzpoz 1cjA==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.52.69.146 with SMTP id e18mr25526742vdu.15.1394524349768; Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:29 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by 10.52.173.204 with HTTP; Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:29 -0700 (PDT)
Date: Tue, 11 Mar 2014 00:52:29 -0700
Message-ID: <CAE_dhjtkuatSqwUiUVGyfds-SJi6eEZVusS4E9o8=wb4J1zxFg@mail.gmail.com>
From: Julien Laganier <julien.ietf@gmail.com>
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, draft-fairhurst-ipdvb-ule-iana.all@tools.ietf.org
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/4qi2vHS4UCjcoe6NPR7QMsWtxEU
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-fairhurst-ipdvb-ule-iana-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 11 Mar 2014 07:52:40 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: This document clarifies that the applicability of the IANA
registry for ULE's (Unidirectional Lightweight Encapsulation)  Next
Header Type [RFC4326] extends to ETSI's DVB (Digital Video
Broadcasting) Generic Stream Encapsulation (GSE) Protocol. As such
this document appears to have no security conditions.


From nobody Thu Mar 13 02:52:20 2014
Return-Path: <kivinen@iki.fi>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id EAD2A1A099B for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 13 Mar 2014 02:52:18 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.448
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.448 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id D4eftM8z0td4 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 13 Mar 2014 02:52:16 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail.kivinen.iki.fi (fireball.kivinen.iki.fi [IPv6:2001:1bc8:100d::2]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B014E1A09A8 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 13 Mar 2014 02:52:14 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2D9q5Hk027535 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 13 Mar 2014 11:52:05 +0200 (EET)
Received: (from kivinen@localhost) by fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.12.11) id s2D9q559016310; Thu, 13 Mar 2014 11:52:05 +0200 (EET)
X-Authentication-Warning: fireball.kivinen.iki.fi: kivinen set sender to kivinen@iki.fi using -f
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Message-ID: <21281.32709.464078.446082@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
Date: Thu, 13 Mar 2014 11:52:05 +0200
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: secdir@ietf.org
X-Edit-Time: 0 min
X-Total-Time: 0 min
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/pOp263dl1ajVJucGv82Ip0P3ihM
Subject: [secdir] Assignments
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
Reply-To: secdir-secretary@mit.edu
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 13 Mar 2014 09:52:19 -0000

Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Shawn Emery is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2014-03-27

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Shaun Cooley           T 2014-03-17 draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field-07
Alan DeKok             T 2014-03-17 draft-ietf-appsawg-xml-mediatypes-09
Steve Hanna            TR2013-10-16 draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib-10
Scott Kelly            TR2013-05-29 draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-14
Catherine Meadows      TR2014-02-17 draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
Adam Montville         T 2014-02-19 draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext-09
Yoav Nir               TR2014-02-24 draft-ietf-eman-framework-16
Radia Perlman          T 2014-02-24 draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-08
Zach Shelby            T 2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-04
Ondrej Sury            T 2014-02-27 draft-ietf-ippm-testplan-rfc2680-04
Brian Weis             T 2014-02-28 draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location-08
Tom Yu                 TR2014-01-17 draft-ietf-abfab-arch-12


For telechat 2014-04-03

Derek Atkins           T 2014-03-12 draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05
Sandy Murphy           T 2014-03-05 draft-melnikov-smime-msa-to-mda-04


For telechat 2014-04-10

Rob Austein            T 2014-03-24 draft-ietf-cdni-framework-10

Last calls and special requests:

Donald Eastlake          2014-03-24 draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-11
Jeffrey Hutzelman      E 2013-11-21 draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-05
Julien Laganier        E 2013-11-21 draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-11
Russ Mundy               2014-03-24 draft-mahalingam-dutt-dcops-vxlan-08
Sandy Murphy             2013-12-17 draft-ietf-netmod-iana-timezones-03
Vincent Roca             2014-02-25 draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01
Carl Wallace             2014-03-14 draft-drage-sipping-rfc3455bis-13
Brian Weis             E 2014-01-16 draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-11
Dacheng Zhang            2014-03-14 draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi


From nobody Fri Mar 14 03:32:55 2014
Return-Path: <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2257C1A00EF; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 03:32:50 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.747
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.747 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id jdVCnul1EN9h; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 03:32:46 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from lhrrgout.huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [194.213.3.17]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3A2D81A0100; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 03:32:45 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from 172.18.7.190 (EHLO lhreml204-edg.china.huawei.com) ([172.18.7.190]) by lhrrg01-dlp.huawei.com (MOS 4.3.7-GA FastPath queued) with ESMTP id BEO38095; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 10:32:37 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from LHREML402-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.241) by lhreml204-edg.china.huawei.com (172.18.7.223) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 10:31:29 +0000
Received: from nkgeml409-hub.china.huawei.com (10.98.56.40) by lhreml402-hub.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.241) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 10:32:12 +0000
Received: from NKGEML507-MBS.china.huawei.com ([169.254.6.209]) by nkgeml409-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.98.56.40]) with mapi id 14.03.0158.001; Fri, 14 Mar 2014 18:32:08 +0800
From: "Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)" <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
Thread-Index: Ac8/cKSE3IBqqIfsSWK0qV6GmzJeoQ==
Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2014 10:32:07 +0000
Message-ID: <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3D75B@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com>
Accept-Language: zh-CN, en-US
Content-Language: zh-CN
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [10.111.98.139]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3D75Bnkgeml507mbschi_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/lSr20ej1d2wEgpvlA1dhn_iiXfk
Cc: "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2014 10:32:50 -0000

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3D75Bnkgeml507mbschi_
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to for early review of WG drafts.  These comments were written prim=
arily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and=
 working group chairs should treat these comments just like any other comme=
nts.

This document specifies a SIP P-Private-Network-Indication P-header which i=
s able to contain a domain name to identify the organization that certain p=
rivate network traffics belong to and enable network nodes to process diffe=
rent traffics with different sets of rules.

There are some comments in the security considerations.

A: "The private network indication defined in this document MUST only be us=
ed in an environment where elements are trusted and where attackers do not =
have access to the protocol messages between those elements."

This sentence is not very accurate. In the examples discussed in the docume=
nt, the private traffics could be transported over public networks, where t=
hey can be "accessed" by attackers. In addition, there is no definition of =
"trust" or "trusted notes". I guess you are using the terms specified in RF=
C3324. If so, please mention it in section 3. When using the terms in RFC33=
24, I think this sentence could be changed to "The private network indicati=
on defined in this document MUST only be used in an environment where eleme=
nts are trusted and there are secure connections between those elements." O=
r even simpler, "The private network indication defined in this document MU=
ST only be used in the traffics transported between the elements which are =
mutually trusted."

B: "Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by using IP=
sec and sometimes by physical protection of the network."

Because we intend to provide confidentiality protection for the contents of=
 this header field, IPsec AH may not be suitable here. So, maybe we can cha=
nge this sentence to "Traffic protection between network elements can be ac=
hieved by using the security protocols such as IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or somet=
imes by physical protection of the network."

C: "A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST NOT b=
e used and the information MUST be removed from a request or response befor=
e it is forwarded to entities in the trust domain."

There is a concern about this sentence. If a device receives a message with=
 a invalid indication, should the device forwards it or just discards it?

D:  "There is a security risk if a private network indication is allowed to=
 propagate out of the trust domain where it was generated. In that case sen=
sitive information would be revealed by such a breach."

It would be good to clarify what kind information is sensitive and what kin=
d of risk will be caused by disclosing such information. The domain name of=
 an organization is public, right? I know the leak of the domain name is un=
desired. But I suggest making some discussions here.

E: "There is no automatic mechanism to learn the support for this specifica=
tion."

Maybe we can change this sentence to "However, how to learn such knowledge =
is out of scope."

Cheers

Dacheng

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3D75Bnkgeml507mbschi_
Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<html xmlns:v=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-micr=
osoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" =
xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http:=
//www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<head>
<meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3Dus-ascii"=
>
<meta name=3D"Generator" content=3D"Microsoft Word 12 (filtered medium)">
<style><!--
/* Font Definitions */
@font-face
	{font-family:SimSun;
	panose-1:2 1 6 0 3 1 1 1 1 1;}
@font-face
	{font-family:"Cambria Math";
	panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:SimSun;
	panose-1:2 1 6 0 3 1 1 1 1 1;}
/* Style Definitions */
p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal
	{margin:0cm;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	line-height:150%;
	layout-grid-mode:char;
	text-autospace:none;
	font-size:10.5pt;
	font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
a:link, span.MsoHyperlink
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:blue;
	text-decoration:underline;}
a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:purple;
	text-decoration:underline;}
pre
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	mso-style-link:"HTML \9884\8BBE\683C\5F0F Char";
	margin:0cm;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	font-size:12.0pt;
	font-family:SimSun;}
span.EmailStyle17
	{mso-style-type:personal-compose;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
	color:windowtext;}
span.HTMLChar
	{mso-style-name:"HTML \9884\8BBE\683C\5F0F Char";
	mso-style-priority:99;
	mso-style-link:"HTML \9884\8BBE\683C\5F0F";
	font-family:SimSun;}
.MsoChpDefault
	{mso-style-type:export-only;}
/* Page Definitions */
@page WordSection1
	{size:612.0pt 792.0pt;
	margin:72.0pt 90.0pt 72.0pt 90.0pt;}
div.WordSection1
	{page:WordSection1;}
--></style><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapedefaults v:ext=3D"edit" spidmax=3D"1026" />
</xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapelayout v:ext=3D"edit">
<o:idmap v:ext=3D"edit" data=3D"1" />
</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]-->
</head>
<body lang=3D"ZH-CN" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple" style=3D"text-justify-t=
rim:punctuation">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I have reviewed this document as part of the sec=
urity directorate's ongoing effort to for early review of WG drafts.&nbsp; =
These comments were written primarily for the
 benefit of the security area directors.&nbsp; Document editors and working=
 group chairs should treat these comments just like any other comments.<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">This document specifies a SIP P-Private-Network-=
Indication P-header which is able to contain a domain name to identify the =
organization that certain private network
 traffics belong to and enable network nodes to process different traffics =
with different sets of rules.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">There are some comments in the security consider=
ations.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">A: &#8220;The private network indication defined=
 in this document MUST only be used in an environment where elements are tr=
usted and where attackers do not have access
 to the protocol messages between those elements.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">This sentence is not very accurate. In the examp=
les discussed in the document, the private traffics could be transported ov=
er public networks, where they can be
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">accessed</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><span lan=
g=3D"EN-US"> by attackers. In addition, there is no definition of
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">trust</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> or
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">trusted notes</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><spa=
n lang=3D"EN-US">. I guess you are using the terms specified in RFC3324. If=
 so, please mention it in section 3. When using the
 terms in RFC3324, I think this sentence could be changed to &#8221;The pri=
vate network indication defined in this document MUST only be used in an en=
vironment where elements are trusted and there are secure connections betwe=
en those elements.&#8221; Or even simpler, &#8220;The
 private network indication defined in this document MUST only be used in t=
he traffics transported between the elements which are mutually trusted.&#8=
221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">B: &#8220;Traffic protection between network ele=
ments can be achieved by using IPsec and sometimes by physical protection o=
f the network.&#8221;&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Because we intend to provide confidentiality pro=
tection for the contents of this header field, IPsec AH may not be suitable=
 here. So, maybe we can change this sentence
 to </span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US">Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by using =
the security protocols such as IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or sometimes by physical=
 protection of the network.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">C: &#8220;A private network indication received =
from an untrusted node MUST NOT be used and the information MUST be removed=
 from a request or response before it is forwarded
 to entities in the trust domain.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">There is a concern about this sentence. If a dev=
ice receives a message with a invalid indication, should the device forward=
s it or just discards it?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">D: &nbsp;&#8220;There is a security risk if a pr=
ivate network indication is allowed to propagate out of the trust domain wh=
ere it was generated. In that case sensitive information
 would be revealed by such a breach.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">It would be good to clarify what kind informatio=
n is sensitive and what kind of risk will be caused by disclosing such info=
rmation. The domain name of an organization
 is public, right? I know the leak of the domain name is undesired. But I s=
uggest making some discussions here.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">E: &#8220;There is no automatic mechanism to lea=
rn the support for this specification.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Maybe we can change this sentence to &#8220;Howe=
ver, how to learn such knowledge is out of scope.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Cheers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Dacheng<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</body>
</html>

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3D75Bnkgeml507mbschi_--


From nobody Mon Mar 17 00:04:03 2014
Return-Path: <shcooley@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CD471A0030; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 00:04:00 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -15.048
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.048 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 01SHn0n3lKmG; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 00:03:57 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from rcdn-iport-9.cisco.com (rcdn-iport-9.cisco.com [173.37.86.80]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id F1C6C1A03A8; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 00:03:56 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=1499; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1395039829; x=1396249429; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id: content-transfer-encoding:mime-version; bh=cqlVAIhjToJHIh+uxC0hW3F/VeYaYCfQ2LkY56EpxfM=; b=Uy6VVXvJb8BB8Bx49pviuihsCaD7d77pRSMCNE3wqyIRvKnWkvpXni+u Zw/n46W0zzmZP8w8F3Hmvvcitdy0MRZahpiNs/Hxlns+dl4lbkUepjuFU U+iSKmfnWMUvMWwDxKDPQLtLGudwAFW8mnsfLuSF+xUmD0zCP2hkXeyXj 4=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AiMFAMSdJlOtJV2a/2dsb2JhbABZgwaBEsIHgRgWdIInAQR5EgEqC0smAQQBDQ2HcdIyF44VAgEBHjERgxqBFAEDiRqhW4MtgXI5
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.97,668,1389744000"; d="scan'208";a="307709908"
Received: from rcdn-core-3.cisco.com ([173.37.93.154]) by rcdn-iport-9.cisco.com with ESMTP; 17 Mar 2014 07:03:49 +0000
Received: from xhc-aln-x01.cisco.com (xhc-aln-x01.cisco.com [173.36.12.75]) by rcdn-core-3.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2H73m18005344 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=FAIL); Mon, 17 Mar 2014 07:03:49 GMT
Received: from xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com ([169.254.5.205]) by xhc-aln-x01.cisco.com ([173.36.12.75]) with mapi id 14.03.0123.003; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 02:03:48 -0500
From: "Shaun Cooley (shcooley)" <shcooley@cisco.com>
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
Thread-Index: Ac9BrCh2zAg7BhNeSsS1/SZjUWgivA==
Date: Mon, 17 Mar 2014 07:03:48 +0000
Message-ID: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [10.82.219.109]
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Of6Nykj-nkdnR-YGgHpAJ3hjd1M
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 17 Mar 2014 07:04:00 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.

This document defines an extension for SMTP called RRVS, along with a new M=
AIL header field called Require-Recipient-Valid-Since, that allows senders =
to indicate to receivers the last date when the sender confirmed the owners=
hip of the target mailbox with the intended recipient, with a goal of preve=
nting sensitive mail from being delivered to the wrong party if the ownersh=
ip of a mailbox has changed.

The document is easy to understand and covers several information disclosur=
e issues that might arise from abuse of the RRVS extension or matching head=
er.  I consider this document to be ready for publication with two small ni=
ts:

 - The suggested abuse countermeasures described in 14.1 should be reworded=
 to indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) implement counte=
rmeasures against RRVS probing.

 - The suggested use restrictions described in 14.2 should be reworded to i=
ndicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) accept any RRVS datet=
ime as valid for accounts that have only had a single owner, even if the RR=
VS datetime predates the creation of the target account.

-Shaun


From nobody Mon Mar 17 18:20:32 2014
Return-Path: <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 77CA31A045D for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 18:20:31 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.747
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.747 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id URKuDCsMvn5O for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 18:20:27 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from lhrrgout.huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [194.213.3.17]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9D70B1A0473 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 18:20:26 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from 172.18.7.190 (EHLO lhreml204-edg.china.huawei.com) ([172.18.7.190]) by lhrrg02-dlp.huawei.com (MOS 4.3.7-GA FastPath queued) with ESMTP id BCE04190; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 01:20:17 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from LHREML406-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.243) by lhreml204-edg.china.huawei.com (172.18.7.223) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 01:19:59 +0000
Received: from nkgeml405-hub.china.huawei.com (10.98.56.36) by lhreml406-hub.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.243) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 01:20:00 +0000
Received: from NKGEML507-MBS.china.huawei.com ([169.254.6.209]) by nkgeml405-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.98.56.36]) with mapi id 14.03.0158.001; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 09:19:56 +0800
From: "Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)" <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
Thread-Index: Ac8/cKSE3IBqqIfsSWK0qV6GmzJeoQC1326Q
Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 01:19:56 +0000
Message-ID: <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3DFEB@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com>
Accept-Language: zh-CN, en-US
Content-Language: zh-CN
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [10.111.98.139]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3DFEBnkgeml507mbschi_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/LNMtn6Z0zVPh2l9-3Bb9k_gUJhs
Subject: [secdir] FW: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 01:20:31 -0000

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3DFEBnkgeml507mbschi_
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable



From: Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)
Sent: Friday, March 14, 2014 6:32 PM
To: secdir@ietf.org
Cc: iesg@ietf.org; 'draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.=
ietf.org'
Subject: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to for early review of WG drafts.  These comments were written prim=
arily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and=
 working group chairs should treat these comments just like any other comme=
nts.

This document specifies a SIP P-Private-Network-Indication P-header which i=
s able to contain a domain name to identify the organization that certain p=
rivate network traffics belong to and enable network nodes to process diffe=
rent traffics with different sets of rules.

There are some comments in the security considerations.

A: "The private network indication defined in this document MUST only be us=
ed in an environment where elements are trusted and where attackers do not =
have access to the protocol messages between those elements."

This sentence is not very accurate. In the examples discussed in the docume=
nt, the private traffics could be transported over public networks, where t=
hey can be "accessed" by attackers. In addition, there is no definition of =
"trust" or "trusted notes". I guess you are using the terms specified in RF=
C3324. If so, please mention it in section 3. When using the terms in RFC33=
24, I think this sentence could be changed to "The private network indicati=
on defined in this document MUST only be used in an environment where eleme=
nts are trusted and there are secure connections between those elements." O=
r even simpler, "The private network indication defined in this document MU=
ST only be used in the traffics transported between the elements which are =
mutually trusted."

B: "Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by using IP=
sec and sometimes by physical protection of the network."

Because we intend to provide confidentiality protection for the contents of=
 this header field, IPsec AH may not be suitable here. So, maybe we can cha=
nge this sentence to "Traffic protection between network elements can be ac=
hieved by using the security protocols such as IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or somet=
imes by physical protection of the network."

C: "A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST NOT b=
e used and the information MUST be removed from a request or response befor=
e it is forwarded to entities in the trust domain."

There is a concern about this sentence. If a device receives a message with=
 a invalid indication, should the device forwards it or just discards it?

D:  "There is a security risk if a private network indication is allowed to=
 propagate out of the trust domain where it was generated. In that case sen=
sitive information would be revealed by such a breach."

It would be good to clarify what kind information is sensitive and what kin=
d of risk will be caused by disclosing such information. The domain name of=
 an organization is public, right? I know the leak of the domain name is un=
desired. But I suggest making some discussions here.

E: "There is no automatic mechanism to learn the support for this specifica=
tion."

Maybe we can change this sentence to "However, how to learn such knowledge =
is out of scope."

Cheers

Dacheng

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3DFEBnkgeml507mbschi_
Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<html xmlns:v=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-micr=
osoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" =
xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http:=
//www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<head>
<meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3Dus-ascii"=
>
<meta name=3D"Generator" content=3D"Microsoft Word 12 (filtered medium)">
<style><!--
/* Font Definitions */
@font-face
	{font-family:SimSun;
	panose-1:2 1 6 0 3 1 1 1 1 1;}
@font-face
	{font-family:"Cambria Math";
	panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:Calibri;
	panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:Tahoma;
	panose-1:2 11 6 4 3 5 4 4 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:SimSun;
	panose-1:2 1 6 0 3 1 1 1 1 1;}
/* Style Definitions */
p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal
	{margin:0cm;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	line-height:150%;
	layout-grid-mode:char;
	text-autospace:none;
	font-size:10.5pt;
	font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
a:link, span.MsoHyperlink
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:blue;
	text-decoration:underline;}
a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:purple;
	text-decoration:underline;}
pre
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	mso-style-link:"HTML \9884\8BBE\683C\5F0F Char";
	margin:0cm;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	font-size:12.0pt;
	font-family:SimSun;}
span.HTMLChar
	{mso-style-name:"HTML \9884\8BBE\683C\5F0F Char";
	mso-style-priority:99;
	mso-style-link:"HTML \9884\8BBE\683C\5F0F";
	font-family:SimSun;}
span.EmailStyle19
	{mso-style-type:personal;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
	color:windowtext;}
span.EmailStyle20
	{mso-style-type:personal-reply;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
	color:#1F497D;}
.MsoChpDefault
	{mso-style-type:export-only;
	font-size:10.0pt;}
@page WordSection1
	{size:612.0pt 792.0pt;
	margin:72.0pt 90.0pt 72.0pt 90.0pt;}
div.WordSection1
	{page:WordSection1;}
--></style><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapedefaults v:ext=3D"edit" spidmax=3D"1026" />
</xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapelayout v:ext=3D"edit">
<o:idmap v:ext=3D"edit" data=3D"1" />
</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]-->
</head>
<body lang=3D"ZH-CN" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple" style=3D"text-justify-t=
rim:punctuation">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"line-height:150%;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"line-height:150%;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt">
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm =
0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"line-height:normal;layout-grid-mode:both;te=
xt-autospace:ideograph-numeric ideograph-other">
<b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&=
quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D=
"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Z=
hangdacheng (Dacheng)
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, March 14, 2014 6:32 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> secdir@ietf.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> iesg@ietf.org; 'draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all=
@tools.ietf.org'<br>
<b>Subject:</b> secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-i=
nd-05<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I =
have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing e=
ffort to for early review of WG drafts.&nbsp; These comments were written p=
rimarily for the benefit of the security area
 directors.&nbsp; Document editors and working group chairs should treat th=
ese comments just like any other comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Th=
is document specifies a SIP P-Private-Network-Indication P-header which is =
able to contain a domain name to identify the organization that certain pri=
vate network traffics belong to and enable
 network nodes to process different traffics with different sets of rules.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Th=
ere are some comments in the security considerations.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">A:=
 &#8220;The private network indication defined in this document MUST only b=
e used in an environment where elements are trusted and where attackers do =
not have access to the protocol messages between
 those elements.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&n=
bsp;&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Th=
is sentence is not very accurate. In the examples discussed in the document=
, the private traffics could be transported over public networks, where the=
y can be
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">accessed</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><span lan=
g=3D"EN-US"> by attackers. In addition, there is no definition of
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">trust</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> or
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">trusted notes</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><spa=
n lang=3D"EN-US">. I guess you are using the terms specified in RFC3324. If=
 so, please mention it in section 3. When using the
 terms in RFC3324, I think this sentence could be changed to &#8221;The pri=
vate network indication defined in this document MUST only be used in an en=
vironment where elements are trusted and there are secure connections betwe=
en those elements.&#8221; Or even simpler, &#8220;The
 private network indication defined in this document MUST only be used in t=
he traffics transported between the elements which are mutually trusted.&#8=
221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">B:=
 &#8220;Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by usin=
g IPsec and sometimes by physical protection of the network.&#8221;&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Be=
cause we intend to provide confidentiality protection for the contents of t=
his header field, IPsec AH may not be suitable here. So, maybe we can chang=
e this sentence to
</span><span style=3D"font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
">Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by using the =
security protocols such as IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or sometimes by physical pro=
tection of the network.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">C:=
 &#8220;A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST N=
OT be used and the information MUST be removed from a request or response b=
efore it is forwarded to entities in the trust
 domain.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Th=
ere is a concern about this sentence. If a device receives a message with a=
 invalid indication, should the device forwards it or just discards it?<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">D:=
 &nbsp;&#8220;There is a security risk if a private network indication is a=
llowed to propagate out of the trust domain where it was generated. In that=
 case sensitive information would be revealed by
 such a breach.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">It=
 would be good to clarify what kind information is sensitive and what kind =
of risk will be caused by disclosing such information. The domain name of a=
n organization is public, right? I know
 the leak of the domain name is undesired. But I suggest making some discus=
sions here.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">E:=
 &#8220;There is no automatic mechanism to learn the support for this speci=
fication.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Ma=
ybe we can change this sentence to &#8220;However, how to learn such knowle=
dge is out of scope.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Ch=
eers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o=
:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Da=
cheng<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</body>
</html>

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3DFEBnkgeml507mbschi_--


From nobody Mon Mar 17 21:18:07 2014
Return-Path: <radiaperlman@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7EA1B1A03FC; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:18:02 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.999
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.999 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id I-RjoElpeoly; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:18:00 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-la0-x236.google.com (mail-la0-x236.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4010:c03::236]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E4F51A0364; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:18:00 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-la0-f54.google.com with SMTP id mc6so4366674lab.13 for <multiple recipients>; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:17:51 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:date:message-id:subject:from:to:content-type; bh=iTnPGD51TnsxEVIKIBA7WdYzVtnbDSdtCZkXiKH0MF4=; b=CtwVJ+JM6Sb/hzpwTMddKEbNXWWFv4kcgraXa1b6jcoyTsXBuXxGd3fqeC0MviucND XmNwYSeJfw67zwsmVCDy3up9XPnzDGxQfs8SNFbTaUGi3V8e8pexgu8lEUsOR8ClQBcl OWmeDkAxgX7GaBOVYnm8NZq28lvpziU/DmCpnKyR3Y7GzRL0BSFcy+pyoikfMdQ9s75b hV16PaODKYusFjuS5ZtkORHY1+U0tpGqiAnN2OaAQlgugE9pjuZ2MSl5BRo/jVPgVKSm BAgwHovA9IPfsfuo4Jn5HcNKdO7Og+2VIY35tGPKYPs/NVcdy6gPd7u1PtQl6X754hnc y0ig==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.112.164.5 with SMTP id ym5mr80204lbb.48.1395116271389; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:17:51 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by 10.112.199.2 with HTTP; Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:17:51 -0700 (PDT)
Date: Mon, 17 Mar 2014 21:17:51 -0700
Message-ID: <CAFOuuo4wkvJduL2-6NOyzB_Bv5QrETMwONgC2aVdcFwzRQ-Njg@mail.gmail.com>
From: Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com>
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>,  draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source.all@tools.ietf.org
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=001a11c26818c6d1a304f4d9d112
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Flb-Zgha9y54Oj4AtK2dBxwd0vA
Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 04:18:02 -0000

--001a11c26818c6d1a304f4d9d112
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1

On Tue, Dec 17, 2013 at 7:11 PM, Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com>wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> This document combines mobile IPv6 with multicast.  It's unnecessarily
difficult to read.  There should be a section upfront expanding all the
acronyms, at the very least.  For instance, MLD, PMIPv6, PIM, MAG, HNP.
 Some of these (like MAG) are expanded in the text the first time they are
used, but most are not, and people aren't necessarily going to remember it
because of seeing it once, and there's no downside to having a section in
the introduction called "acronyms".

It also wouldn't hurt to explain "proxy mobile IPv6 domains"  (not just
expand the acronym PMIPv6).

I admit I don't completely understand this document, because I didn't want
to have to read all the other documents that this thing assumes you
understand, but I think I get the general idea.

I think the security considerations section covers most of the downsides,
but it doesn't talk about how multicast in general can amplify DOS packets.
 And with mobility, there are two problems with having a proxy sending the
multicast (unless it's tunneled, which would be OK).  If packets with an IP
source address can come from a different location, then loops won't be
detected (the security considerations section mentions that), but also,
it's harder for the infrastructure to filter out packets from forged IP
addresses.

Radia

--001a11c26818c6d1a304f4d9d112
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<div dir=3D"ltr"><br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><br><div class=3D"gmail=
_quote">On Tue, Dec 17, 2013 at 7:11 PM, Radia Perlman <span dir=3D"ltr">&l=
t;<a href=3D"mailto:radiaperlman@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">radiaperlman@=
gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><pre style=3D"margin-right:=
1.75em;font-size:15px;overflow:auto;margin-left:1.75em;background-color:rgb=
(247,247,247);padding:0.25em;border:1px solid rgb(215,215,215)">
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate&#39;s=20
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the=20
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat=20
these comments just like any other last call comments.</pre></div></blockqu=
ote><div>This document combines mobile IPv6 with multicast. =A0It&#39;s unn=
ecessarily difficult to read. =A0There should be a section upfront expandin=
g all the acronyms, at the very least. =A0For instance, MLD, PMIPv6, PIM, M=
AG, HNP. =A0Some of these (like MAG) are expanded in the text the first tim=
e they are used, but most are not, and people aren&#39;t necessarily going =
to remember it because of seeing it once, and there&#39;s no downside to ha=
ving a section in the introduction called &quot;acronyms&quot;.</div>
<div><br></div><div>It also wouldn&#39;t hurt to explain &quot;proxy mobile=
 IPv6 domains&quot; =A0(not just expand the acronym PMIPv6).</div><div><br>=
</div><div>I admit I don&#39;t completely understand this document, because=
 I didn&#39;t want to have to read all the other documents that this thing =
assumes you understand, but I think I get the general idea.</div>
<div><br></div><div>I think the security considerations section covers most=
 of the downsides, but it doesn&#39;t talk about how multicast in general c=
an amplify DOS packets. =A0And with mobility, there are two problems with h=
aving a proxy sending the multicast (unless it&#39;s tunneled, which would =
be OK). =A0If packets with an IP source address can come from a different l=
ocation, then loops won&#39;t be detected (the security considerations sect=
ion mentions that), but also, it&#39;s harder for the infrastructure to fil=
ter out packets from forged IP addresses.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Radia</div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div></div></=
div>

--001a11c26818c6d1a304f4d9d112--


From nobody Tue Mar 18 04:16:16 2014
Return-Path: <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 273261A03C9; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 04:16:10 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -99.783
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-99.783 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_BL_SPAMCOP_NET=1.347, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_SORBS_WEB=0.77, USER_IN_WHITELIST=-100] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 9ODWqw9oNI7n; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 04:16:08 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from asmtp5.iomartmail.com (asmtp5.iomartmail.com [62.128.201.176]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8660D1A06A8; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 04:16:08 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from asmtp5.iomartmail.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by asmtp5.iomartmail.com (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id s2IBFxHe030545; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 11:15:59 GMT
Received: from 950129200 (108.26.90.92.rev.sfr.net [92.90.26.108]) (authenticated bits=0) by asmtp5.iomartmail.com (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id s2IBFqJw030437 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=NO); Tue, 18 Mar 2014 11:15:57 GMT
From: "Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: "'Tom Yu'" <tlyu@MIT.EDU>
References: <ldviorlkaag.fsf@cathode-dark-space.mit.edu>
In-Reply-To: <ldviorlkaag.fsf@cathode-dark-space.mit.edu>
Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 11:15:52 -0000
Message-ID: <013c01cf429b$70b72a90$52257fb0$@olddog.co.uk>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0
Thread-Index: AQHqkxBwphpOBtuABjYo2lKAwgzvvZqwDANA
Content-Language: en-gb
X-TM-AS-MML: disable
X-TM-AS-Product-Ver: IMSS-7.1.0.1576-7.5.0.1017-20572.005
X-TM-AS-Result: No--9.101-10.0-31-10
X-imss-scan-details: No--9.101-10.0-31-10
X-TMASE-MatchedRID: +f/wAVSGjuhxtRSiTWsxtfHkpkyUphL9MhomkrNJ+uzNQVzhfYY5so9/ 6wlLhvp4L81jVSVU6+iCbJKOlWLydZ+/3E8wlr+Dde4BwMgBa9OrzMdPEAIrFjAVXG2j6Yswakc q2RAHKcok/TQmrPGEgNZwCHB4c2lu1OGXhAFLw8vCz1ymGcrCUYEcpMn6x9cZi2g8XzxCDfvg9L It2OdOa5KrGRECKhSO8JwrmyXfpoNCl9DEsHnSbbMjW/sniEQKpw/gqzLticlIjvA1/YS+0bliD 6D5Idq7YaIwvoCNtbMo6ikEEzC7Af+JqEYbBLbNSDkh6bW+bccsleOknNBI05soi2XrUn/JyeMt MD9QOgCk8oKXKhRLPI2j49Ftap9EOwBXM346/+w+2PP2xW2k7pcpEZ0AmOH27WhLu0LiBHZJG8u y1zCyHwqZuffWhtd5
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/qaqKIeXKKlTSJu7EWyt5LMTbymY
Cc: iesg@ietf.org, draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels.all@tools.ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05 (resend)
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
Reply-To: adrian@olddog.co.uk
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 11:16:10 -0000

Hi Tom,

> Summary: ready with nits
> 
> I believe the Security Considerations section of this document is
> reasonable.
> 
> Query: I'm not very familiar with MPLS; is the handling of the Entropy
> Label Indicator the only situation where a Label Switching Router
> would need to inspect (as opposed to hash for load balancing) labels
> below the top of the label stack?

Welcome to the wonderful world of MPLS, and thanks for your review.

RFC 6790 Section 4.3 says 
   In any case, reserved labels MUST NOT be used as
   keys for the load-balancing function.
but it is recognised that some implementations might currently be hashing the
label stack without inspection.

So, the technically correct answer is that every reserved label (aka special
purpose label) is such a case, and (since no-one knows what labels will show up
in the stack) it means that all labels used for hashing must be inspected.

> I was confused by the explanation of why Label 7 (ELI) has meaning as
> both an ordinary Special Label and an Extended Special Purpose Label
> until I read RFC 6790.  Perhaps explain that looking for the ELI is
> typically the only reason why a LSR would inspect the middle of the
> label stack?

Well, this is being changed (somewhat in the face of mutterings from two of the
authors) so that 7 is reserved in the extended range. Hence, no need to explain
or discuss :-)

> Re answer 6 of Section 3:
> 
> If an ingress LSR pushes ESPLs onto the label stack, any downstream
> LSRs that do not understand ESPLs could erroneously use the ESPLs as
> load balancing inputs.  Would it be a good idea to recommend that
> ingress LSRs avoid pushing ESPLs onto the label stack if their policy
> cannot tolerate variations in downstream load balancing caused by
> inappropriate use of the ESPLs as load balancing inputs by downstream
> LSRs that don't understand ESPLs?

You are right about that.
The LSR would spot the XL and know that it was a special purpose label and so
would not use it.
But it would not know that the XL meant that the next label was also a special
purpose label and so would include that label in the hash.

And, indeed, this is what the answer to Question 6 observes. And the answer also
notes that reordering may occur in these situations (perhaps we thought it
obvious that if you don't want reordering to occur you had better avoid this
situation?). I think that also in our minds is that this whole piece of work is
considerably future-sighted. we don't anticipate the first extended special
purpose label being assigned for a number of years, so this document enables
hardware to be built and deployed that will be proof against the introduction of
ESPLs when they roll up.

Thanks,
Adrian


From nobody Tue Mar 18 12:00:53 2014
Return-Path: <superuser@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E06411A06E8; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:48 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.999
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.999 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id b8x582PCoMRa; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:45 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-pd0-x22b.google.com (mail-pd0-x22b.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400e:c02::22b]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 09DCD1A07EC; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:38 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-pd0-f171.google.com with SMTP id r10so7511881pdi.30 for <multiple recipients>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:30 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=bR45UXVM2jNZex83wrEVQUdPvXNaPTDj2qBHmb5nvt4=; b=nqYoD2+aW3PuYI1tz6mPpUU+a1dkkvnoOd3KnXozK/FigBvA/Tj52RAZ4/ctltoFDz /vc3kUf3qCGL9DyS9wxGu8vRhimL+2D99YyhuYEGAkvU9C+FMfPvP/xwqzowLVslCs2h dB8Br29ssY6Ctd6AwW3j4E1wsagF4OkjOQyNFWzbeG9S1Y8dTUfEPUHEGagmCnhHHFLt KBp1Vdzc4XYeHIEPJIWkfRmQKrIUpw0q1PBJtY6eqLBClhVuEsK2cS5yIgYyEFSDaMko Iquyvrzt7vuCMGZnz8m6PJyHyt7MJ1HX22QMd9l0hlMste5Ngc7lHz9Tvl5mmxetFPhc k6cA==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.66.144.200 with SMTP id so8mr35402591pab.15.1395169230692; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:30 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by 10.66.220.102 with HTTP; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:30 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 12:00:30 -0700
Message-ID: <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com>
From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
To: "Shaun Cooley (shcooley)" <shcooley@cisco.com>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=047d7b6d928465a77c04f4e62625
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/_icI-ILCk1H9xIFrG582vNvf7JY
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 19:00:49 -0000

--047d7b6d928465a77c04f4e62625
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1

Barry, what's your take on these? I'm still under the impression that
Security Considerations shouldn't include normative language, but the
opinions on this seem to vary from one person and one week to the next.

Otherwise, they appear reasonable to me.

-MSK


On Mon, Mar 17, 2014 at 12:03 AM, Shaun Cooley (shcooley) <
shcooley@cisco.com> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> This document defines an extension for SMTP called RRVS, along with a new
> MAIL header field called Require-Recipient-Valid-Since, that allows senders
> to indicate to receivers the last date when the sender confirmed the
> ownership of the target mailbox with the intended recipient, with a goal of
> preventing sensitive mail from being delivered to the wrong party if the
> ownership of a mailbox has changed.
>
> The document is easy to understand and covers several information
> disclosure issues that might arise from abuse of the RRVS extension or
> matching header.  I consider this document to be ready for publication with
> two small nits:
>
>  - The suggested abuse countermeasures described in 14.1 should be
> reworded to indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to)
> implement countermeasures against RRVS probing.
>
>  - The suggested use restrictions described in 14.2 should be reworded to
> indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) accept any RRVS
> datetime as valid for accounts that have only had a single owner, even if
> the RRVS datetime predates the creation of the target account.
>
> -Shaun
>

--047d7b6d928465a77c04f4e62625
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Barry, what&#39;s your take on these? I&#39;m still u=
nder the impression that Security Considerations shouldn&#39;t include norm=
ative language, but the opinions on this seem to vary from one person and o=
ne week to the next.<br>
<br></div>Otherwise, they appear reasonable to me.<br><br>-MSK<br></div><di=
v class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Mon, Mar 17, =
2014 at 12:03 AM, Shaun Cooley (shcooley) <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"=
mailto:shcooley@cisco.com" target=3D"_blank">shcooley@cisco.com</a>&gt;</sp=
an> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">I have reviewed this document as part of the=
 security directorate&#39;s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents bei=
ng processed by the IESG. =A0These comments were written primarily for the =
benefit of the security area directors. =A0Document editors and WG chairs s=
hould treat these comments just like any other last call comments.<br>

<br>
This document defines an extension for SMTP called RRVS, along with a new M=
AIL header field called Require-Recipient-Valid-Since, that allows senders =
to indicate to receivers the last date when the sender confirmed the owners=
hip of the target mailbox with the intended recipient, with a goal of preve=
nting sensitive mail from being delivered to the wrong party if the ownersh=
ip of a mailbox has changed.<br>

<br>
The document is easy to understand and covers several information disclosur=
e issues that might arise from abuse of the RRVS extension or matching head=
er. =A0I consider this document to be ready for publication with two small =
nits:<br>

<br>
=A0- The suggested abuse countermeasures described in 14.1 should be reword=
ed to indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) implement coun=
termeasures against RRVS probing.<br>
<br>
=A0- The suggested use restrictions described in 14.2 should be reworded to=
 indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) accept any RRVS dat=
etime as valid for accounts that have only had a single owner, even if the =
RRVS datetime predates the creation of the target account.<br>

<span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888"><br>
-Shaun<br>
</font></span></blockquote></div><br></div>

--047d7b6d928465a77c04f4e62625--


From nobody Tue Mar 18 23:12:23 2014
Return-Path: <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C339B1A0545 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:12:06 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.747
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.747 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id V6Pyx3kjjYOX for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:11:50 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from lhrrgout.huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [194.213.3.17]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id DBDF51A0505 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:11:47 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from 172.18.7.190 (EHLO lhreml203-edg.china.huawei.com) ([172.18.7.190]) by lhrrg02-dlp.huawei.com (MOS 4.3.7-GA FastPath queued) with ESMTP id BCF19597; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 06:11:38 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from LHREML404-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.218) by lhreml203-edg.huawei.com (172.18.7.221) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 06:11:25 +0000
Received: from NKGEML410-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.98.56.41) by lhreml404-hub.china.huawei.com (10.201.5.218) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.158.1; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 06:11:36 +0000
Received: from NKGEML507-MBS.china.huawei.com ([169.254.6.209]) by nkgeml410-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.98.56.41]) with mapi id 14.03.0158.001; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 14:11:29 +0800
From: "Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)" <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
To: Shida Schubert <shida@ntt-at.com>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
Thread-Index: Ac8/cKSE3IBqqIfsSWK0qV6GmzJeoQDCTf/wAB7RpQAAERnJwA==
Date: Wed, 19 Mar 2014 06:11:28 +0000
Message-ID: <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com>
References: <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3E42D@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com> <398D4FFF-FB13-4686-B7CB-F621912BF5BB@ntt-at.com>
In-Reply-To: <398D4FFF-FB13-4686-B7CB-F621912BF5BB@ntt-at.com>
Accept-Language: zh-CN, en-US
Content-Language: zh-CN
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [10.111.98.139]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91nkgeml507mbschi_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/wrrPcVipqp5XwEf9mVXXZOhwhK0
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 19 Mar 2014 06:12:07 -0000

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91nkgeml507mbschi_
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Hi, very happy that you like the comments. About comment D.  Your descripti=
on about the sensitive information is good. So, could you please in to the =
document when updating it? ^_^

Cheers

Dacheng

From: Shida Schubert [mailto:shida@ntt-at.com]
Sent: Wednesday, March 19, 2014 1:58 PM
To: Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)
Cc: draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-=
05


Dear Dacheng;



From: Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)
Sent: Friday, March 14, 2014 6:32 PM
To: secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
Cc: iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>; 'draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-=
network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-netw=
ork-ind.all@tools.ietf.org>'
Subject: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to for early review of WG drafts.  These comments were written prim=
arily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and=
 working group chairs should treat these comments just like any other comme=
nts.

This document specifies a SIP P-Private-Network-Indication P-header which i=
s able to contain a domain name to identify the organization that certain p=
rivate network traffics belong to and enable network nodes to process diffe=
rent traffics with different sets of rules.

There are some comments in the security considerations.

A: "The private network indication defined in this document MUST only be us=
ed in an environment where elements are trusted and where attackers do not =
have access to the protocol messages between those elements."

This sentence is not very accurate. In the examples discussed in the docume=
nt, the private traffics could be transported over public networks, where t=
hey can be"accessed" by attackers. In addition, there is no definition of "=
trust" or "trusted notes". I guess you are using the terms specified in RFC=
3324. If so, please mention it in section 3. When using the terms in RFC332=
4, I think this sentence could be changed to "The private network indicatio=
n defined in this document MUST only be used in an environment where elemen=
ts are trusted and there are secure connections between those elements." Or=
 even simpler, "The private network indication defined in this document MUS=
T only be used in the traffics transported between the elements which are m=
utually trusted."

Many thanks for suggestion, I will reflect the changes when updating the dr=
aft.



B: "Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by using IP=
sec and sometimes by physical protection of the network."

Because we intend to provide confidentiality protection for the contents of=
 this header field, IPsec AH may not be suitable here. So, maybe we can cha=
nge this sentence to "Traffic protection between network elements can be ac=
hieved by using the security protocols such as IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or somet=
imes by physical protection of the network."

Again, sounds great. Thanks for the suggestion.



C: "A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST NOT b=
e used and the information MUST be removed from a request or response befor=
e it is forwarded to entities in the trust domain."

There is a concern about this sentence. If a device receives a message with=
 a invalid indication, should the device forwards it or just discards it?

As you sated the concern is valid, why should you receive the header from a=
n untrusted node. It is very likely an attempt to compromise the public or =
private network.

We could change it to:
"A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST NOT be u=
sed and the information MUST be removed from a request or response before i=
t is forwarded to entities in the trust domain. Additionally local policies=
 may be in place that ensure that all requests entering the trust domain fo=
r private network indication from untrusted nodes with a private network in=
dication will be discarded."



D:  "There is a security risk if a private network indication is allowed to=
 propagate out of the trust domain where it was generated. In that case sen=
sitive information would be revealed by such a breach."

It would be good to clarify what kind information is sensitive and what kin=
d of risk will be caused by disclosing such information. The domain name of=
 an organization is public, right? I know the leak of the domain name is un=
desired. But I suggest making some discussions here.


The indication may reveal information about the identity of the caller, i,e=
, the organisation that he belongs to. That is sensitive information. It al=
so reveals to the outside world that there is a set of rules that this call=
 is subject to that is different then the rules that apply to public traffi=
c. That is sensitive information too.



E: "There is no automatic mechanism to learn the support for this specifica=
tion."

Maybe we can change this sentence to "However, how to learn such knowledge =
is out of scope."

 Great! we will :-)

 Many Thanks!

 Shida



Cheers

Dacheng


--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91nkgeml507mbschi_
Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<html xmlns:v=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-micr=
osoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" =
xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http:=
//www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<head>
<meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3Dus-ascii"=
>
<meta name=3D"Generator" content=3D"Microsoft Word 12 (filtered medium)">
<style><!--
/* Font Definitions */
@font-face
	{font-family:SimSun;
	panose-1:2 1 6 0 3 1 1 1 1 1;}
@font-face
	{font-family:"Cambria Math";
	panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:Calibri;
	panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:Tahoma;
	panose-1:2 11 6 4 3 5 4 4 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:SimSun;
	panose-1:2 1 6 0 3 1 1 1 1 1;}
/* Style Definitions */
p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal
	{margin:0cm;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	font-size:12.0pt;
	font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
a:link, span.MsoHyperlink
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:blue;
	text-decoration:underline;}
a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:purple;
	text-decoration:underline;}
p.MsoAcetate, li.MsoAcetate, div.MsoAcetate
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	mso-style-link:"\6279\6CE8\6846\6587\672C Char";
	margin:0cm;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	font-size:9.0pt;
	font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
span.apple-converted-space
	{mso-style-name:apple-converted-space;}
span.Char
	{mso-style-name:"\6279\6CE8\6846\6587\672C Char";
	mso-style-priority:99;
	mso-style-link:\6279\6CE8\6846\6587\672C;
	font-family:SimSun;}
span.EmailStyle20
	{mso-style-type:personal-reply;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
	color:#1F497D;}
.MsoChpDefault
	{mso-style-type:export-only;
	font-size:10.0pt;}
@page WordSection1
	{size:612.0pt 792.0pt;
	margin:72.0pt 90.0pt 72.0pt 90.0pt;}
div.WordSection1
	{page:WordSection1;}
--></style><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapedefaults v:ext=3D"edit" spidmax=3D"1026" />
</xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapelayout v:ext=3D"edit">
<o:idmap v:ext=3D"edit" data=3D"1" />
</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]-->
</head>
<body lang=3D"ZH-CN" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Hi, very h=
appy that you like the comments. About comment D. &nbsp;Your description ab=
out the sensitive information is good. So, could you please in
 to the document when updating it? ^_^<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Cheers<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Dacheng<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt">
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm =
0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;"> Shida Schubert [mailto:shida@ntt-at.com]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, March 19, 2014 1:58 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)<br>
<b>Cc:</b> draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org<=
br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-netwo=
rk-ind-05<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Dear Dacheng;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"line-height:15.75pt"><span lang=3D"EN-US" s=
tyle=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&q=
uot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10=
.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt;z-index:auto">
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm =
0cm 0cm">
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.=
0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;</span></s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma=
&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Zhangdacheng
 (Dacheng)<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br>
<b>Sent:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Friday, Marc=
h 14, 2014 6:32 PM<br>
<b>To:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a href=3D"mai=
lto:secdir@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">secdir@ietf.org</span></a=
><br>
<b>Cc:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a href=3D"mai=
lto:iesg@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">iesg@ietf.org</span></a>; '=
<a href=3D"mailto:draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ie=
tf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-netwo=
rk-ind.all@tools.ietf.org</span></a>'<br>
<b>Subject:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>secdir re=
view of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05</span><span lang=3D=
"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"line-height:15.75pt"><span lang=3D"EN-US" s=
tyle=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">I have reviewed this docume=
nt as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to for early review=
 of WG drafts.&nbsp; These comments were written primarily for the benefit =
of the security area directors.&nbsp; Document
 editors and working group chairs should treat these comments just like any=
 other comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">This document specifies a S=
IP P-Private-Network-Indication P-header which is able to contain a domain =
name to identify the organization that certain private network traffics bel=
ong to and enable network nodes to process
 different traffics with different sets of rules.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">There are some comments in =
the security considerations.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">A: &#8220;The private netwo=
rk indication defined in this document MUST only be used in an environment =
where elements are trusted and where attackers do not have access to the pr=
otocol messages between those elements.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">This sentence is not very a=
ccurate. In the examples discussed in the document, the private traffics co=
uld be transported over public networks, where they can be</span><span styl=
e=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">accessed</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt=
;font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span><span class=3D"apple-converted-space"><s=
pan lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;</span></span><span lan=
g=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">by
 attackers. In addition, there is no definition of<span class=3D"apple-conv=
erted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-famil=
y:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">tru=
st</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</span>=
<span class=3D"apple-converted-space"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-si=
ze:10.5pt">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5=
pt">or<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span style=
=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US"=
 style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">trusted
 notes</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:SimSun">&#8221;</s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">. I guess you are using=
 the terms specified in RFC3324. If so, please mention it in section 3. Whe=
n using the terms in RFC3324, I think this sentence
 could be changed to &#8221;The private network indication defined in this =
document MUST only be used in an environment where elements are trusted and=
 there are secure connections between those elements.&#8221; Or even simple=
r, &#8220;The private network indication defined in
 this document MUST only be used in the traffics transported between the el=
ements which are mutually trusted.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Many thanks for suggestion, I w=
ill reflect the changes when updating the draft.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt;z-index:auto">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">B: &#8220;Traffic protectio=
n between network elements can be achieved by using IPsec and sometimes by =
physical protection of the network.&#8221;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">Because we intend to provid=
e confidentiality protection for the contents of this header field, IPsec A=
H may not be suitable here. So, maybe we can change this sentence to<span c=
lass=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span style=3D"font-size=
:10.5pt;font-family:SimSun">&#8220;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"fon=
t-size:10.5pt">Traffic
 protection between network elements can be achieved by using the security =
protocols such as IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or sometimes by physical protection o=
f the network.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Again, sounds great. Thanks for=
 the suggestion.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt;z-index:auto">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">C: &#8220;A private network=
 indication received from an untrusted node MUST NOT be used and the inform=
ation MUST be removed from a request or response before it is forwarded to =
entities in the trust domain.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">There is a concern about th=
is sentence. If a device receives a message with a invalid indication, shou=
ld the device forwards it or just discards it?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">As you sated the concern is val=
id, why should you receive the header from an untrusted node. It is very li=
kely an attempt to compromise the public or private network.<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">We could change it to:<br>
&#8220;A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST NO=
T be used and the information MUST be removed from a request or response be=
fore it is forwarded to entities in the trust domain.&nbsp;<i>Additionally =
local policies may be in place that ensure
 that all requests entering the trust domain for private network indication=
 from untrusted nodes with a private network indication will be discarded.<=
/i>&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt;z-index:auto">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">D: &nbsp;&#8220;There is a =
security risk if a private network indication is allowed to propagate out o=
f the trust domain where it was generated. In that case sensitive informati=
on would be revealed by such a breach.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">It would be good to clarify=
 what kind information is sensitive and what kind of risk will be caused by=
 disclosing such information. The domain name of an organization is public,=
 right? I know the leak of the domain
 name is undesired. But I suggest making some discussions here.<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">The indication may reveal infor=
mation about the identity of the caller, i,e, the organisation that he belo=
ngs to. That is sensitive information. It also reveals to the outside world=
 that there is a set of rules that this
 call is subject to that is different then the rules that apply to public t=
raffic. That is sensitive information too.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt;z-index:auto">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">E: &#8220;There is no autom=
atic mechanism to learn the support for this specification.&#8221;<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">Maybe we can change this se=
ntence to &#8220;However, how to learn such knowledge is out of scope.&#822=
1;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;Great! we will :-)<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;Many Thanks!&nbsp;<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;Shida<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt;z-index:auto">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">Cheers<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;line-height:15.75pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt">Dacheng<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</body>
</html>

--_000_C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91nkgeml507mbschi_--


From nobody Wed Mar 19 05:51:46 2014
Return-Path: <shida@ntt-at.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 50E481A04A6 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:17:06 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.9
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.9 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_HELO_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id lGfo0CvnO-mW for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:17:01 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from gator4135.hostgator.com (gator4135.hostgator.com [192.185.4.147]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id CD0371A0505 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:17:00 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from [50.184.77.69] (port=61319 helo=[192.168.1.24]) by gator4135.hostgator.com with esmtpsa (TLSv1:AES128-SHA:128) (Exim 4.80.1) (envelope-from <shida@ntt-at.com>) id 1WQ9o1-0004aU-0N; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 01:16:49 -0500
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_6E2E00DA-1034-4D33-8640-D70772D957E1"
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.2 \(1874\))
From: Shida Schubert <shida@ntt-at.com>
In-Reply-To: <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2014 23:16:42 -0700
Message-Id: <76FEA635-5720-4947-9123-AF3F224BCBC1@ntt-at.com>
References: <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3E42D@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com> <398D4FFF-FB13-4686-B7CB-F621912BF5BB@ntt-at.com> <C72CBD9FE3CA604887B1B3F1D145D05E7BC3EC91@nkgeml507-mbs.china.huawei.com>
To: "Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)" <zhangdacheng@huawei.com>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1874)
X-AntiAbuse: This header was added to track abuse, please include it with any abuse report
X-AntiAbuse: Primary Hostname - gator4135.hostgator.com
X-AntiAbuse: Original Domain - ietf.org
X-AntiAbuse: Originator/Caller UID/GID - [47 12] / [47 12]
X-AntiAbuse: Sender Address Domain - ntt-at.com
X-BWhitelist: no
X-Source-IP: 50.184.77.69
X-Source: 
X-Source-Args: 
X-Source-Dir: 
X-Source-Sender: ([192.168.1.24]) [50.184.77.69]:61319
X-Source-Auth: shida@agnada.com
X-Email-Count: 1
X-Source-Cap: c3NoaWRhO3NzaGlkYTtnYXRvcjQxMzUuaG9zdGdhdG9yLmNvbQ==
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/ANuREEsZFEh9bjB2sYME8znLkcQ
X-Mailman-Approved-At: Wed, 19 Mar 2014 05:51:45 -0700
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 19 Mar 2014 06:17:06 -0000

--Apple-Mail=_6E2E00DA-1034-4D33-8640-D70772D957E1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Content-Type: text/plain;
	charset=windows-1252


Dear Decheng;

 I am glad the description is acceptable.. I will make the change and =
submit the=20
doc over the next few days.=20

 Thanks again for reviewing and providing constructive/valuable =
feedback!=20
=20
 Shida


On Mar 18, 2014, at 11:11 PM, Zhangdacheng (Dacheng) =
<zhangdacheng@huawei.com> wrote:

> Hi, very happy that you like the comments. About comment D.  Your =
description about the sensitive information is good. So, could you =
please in to the document when updating it? ^_^
> =20
> Cheers
> =20
> Dacheng
> =20
> From: Shida Schubert [mailto:shida@ntt-at.com]=20
> Sent: Wednesday, March 19, 2014 1:58 PM
> To: Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)
> Cc: draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: Re: secdir review of =
draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
> =20
> =20
> Dear Dacheng;=20
> =20
> =20
> =20
> From: Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)=20
> Sent: Friday, March 14, 2014 6:32 PM
> To: secdir@ietf.org
> Cc: iesg@ietf.org; =
'draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org'
> Subject: secdir review of =
draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05
> =20
> =20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to for early review of WG drafts.  These comments were =
written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  =
Document editors and working group chairs should treat these comments =
just like any other comments.
> =20
> This document specifies a SIP P-Private-Network-Indication P-header =
which is able to contain a domain name to identify the organization that =
certain private network traffics belong to and enable network nodes to =
process different traffics with different sets of rules.
> =20
> There are some comments in the security considerations.
> =20
> A: =93The private network indication defined in this document MUST =
only be used in an environment where elements are trusted and where =
attackers do not have access to the protocol messages between those =
elements.=94
>  =20
> This sentence is not very accurate. In the examples discussed in the =
document, the private traffics could be transported over public =
networks, where they can be=93accessed=94 by attackers. In addition, =
there is no definition of =93trust=94 or =93trusted notes=94. I guess =
you are using the terms specified in RFC3324. If so, please mention it =
in section 3. When using the terms in RFC3324, I think this sentence =
could be changed to =94The private network indication defined in this =
document MUST only be used in an environment where elements are trusted =
and there are secure connections between those elements.=94 Or even =
simpler, =93The private network indication defined in this document MUST =
only be used in the traffics transported between the elements which are =
mutually trusted.=94
> =20
> Many thanks for suggestion, I will reflect the changes when updating =
the draft.=20
>=20
>=20
> =20
> B: =93Traffic protection between network elements can be achieved by =
using IPsec and sometimes by physical protection of the network.=94=20
> =20
> Because we intend to provide confidentiality protection for the =
contents of this header field, IPsec AH may not be suitable here. So, =
maybe we can change this sentence to =93Traffic protection between =
network elements can be achieved by using the security protocols such as =
IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or sometimes by physical protection of the network.=94=

> =20
> Again, sounds great. Thanks for the suggestion.=20
>=20
>=20
> =20
> C: =93A private network indication received from an untrusted node =
MUST NOT be used and the information MUST be removed from a request or =
response before it is forwarded to entities in the trust domain.=94
> =20
> There is a concern about this sentence. If a device receives a message =
with a invalid indication, should the device forwards it or just =
discards it?
> =20
> As you sated the concern is valid, why should you receive the header =
from an untrusted node. It is very likely an attempt to compromise the =
public or private network.
> =20
> We could change it to:
> =93A private network indication received from an untrusted node MUST =
NOT be used and the information MUST be removed from a request or =
response before it is forwarded to entities in the trust domain. =
Additionally local policies may be in place that ensure that all =
requests entering the trust domain for private network indication from =
untrusted nodes with a private network indication will be discarded.=94
>=20
>=20
> =20
> D:  =93There is a security risk if a private network indication is =
allowed to propagate out of the trust domain where it was generated. In =
that case sensitive information would be revealed by such a breach.=94
> =20
> It would be good to clarify what kind information is sensitive and =
what kind of risk will be caused by disclosing such information. The =
domain name of an organization is public, right? I know the leak of the =
domain name is undesired. But I suggest making some discussions here.
> =20
> =20
> The indication may reveal information about the identity of the =
caller, i,e, the organisation that he belongs to. That is sensitive =
information. It also reveals to the outside world that there is a set of =
rules that this call is subject to that is different then the rules that =
apply to public traffic. That is sensitive information too.
> =20
>=20
>=20
> E: =93There is no automatic mechanism to learn the support for this =
specification.=94
> =20
> Maybe we can change this sentence to =93However, how to learn such =
knowledge is out of scope.=94
> =20
>  Great! we will :-)
> =20
>  Many Thanks!=20
> =20
>  Shida
>=20
>=20
> =20
> Cheers
> =20
> Dacheng


--Apple-Mail=_6E2E00DA-1034-4D33-8640-D70772D957E1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Content-Type: text/html;
	charset=windows-1252

<html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html =
charset=3Dwindows-1252"></head><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; =
-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: =
after-white-space;"><div><br></div><div>Dear =
Decheng;</div><div><br></div><div>&nbsp;I am glad the description is =
acceptable.. I will make the change and submit the&nbsp;</div><div>doc =
over the next few days.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>&nbsp;Thanks =
again for reviewing and providing constructive/valuable =
feedback!&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp;Shida</div><div><br></div=
><br><div><div>On Mar 18, 2014, at 11:11 PM, Zhangdacheng (Dacheng) =
&lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:zhangdacheng@huawei.com">zhangdacheng@huawei.com</a>&gt; =
wrote:</div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote =
type=3D"cite"><div lang=3D"ZH-CN" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple" =
style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; =
font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; =
line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div class=3D"WordSection1" =
style=3D"page: WordSection1;"><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; =
font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Hi, very happy that you like the =
comments. About comment D. &nbsp;Your description about the sensitive =
information is good. So, could you please in to the document when =
updating it? ^_^<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">&nbsp;</span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, =
125);">Cheers<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">&nbsp;</span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, =
125);">Dacheng<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">&nbsp;</span></div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt;"><div><div =
style=3D"border-style: solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, =
223); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0cm 0cm;"><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: =
Tahoma, sans-serif;">From:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;"><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Shida Schubert [<a =
href=3D"mailto:shida@ntt-at.com" style=3D"color: purple; =
text-decoration: underline;">mailto:shida@ntt-at.com</a>]<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br><b>Sent:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Wednesday, March 19, 2014 =
1:58 PM<br><b>To:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Zhangdacheng =
(Dacheng)<br><b>Cc:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf=
.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;">draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.or=
g</a><br><b>Subject:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Re: secdir review of =
draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05<o:p></o:p></span></div></d=
iv></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; =
font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Dear =
Dacheng;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: =
rgb(31, 73, 125);">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div style=3D"border-style: none =
none none solid; border-left-color: blue; border-left-width: 1.5pt; =
padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt; z-index: auto;"><div><div style=3D"border-style:=
 solid none none; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); =
border-top-width: 1pt; padding: 3pt 0cm 0cm;"><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: =
Tahoma, sans-serif;">From:</span></b><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">&nbsp;</span></span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, =
sans-serif;">Zhangdacheng (Dacheng)<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br><b>Sent:</b><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Friday, March 14, 2014 6:32 =
PM<br><b>To:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;"><span style=3D"color: =
purple;">secdir@ietf.org</span></a><br><b>Cc:</b><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;"><span style=3D"color: purple;">iesg@ietf.org</span></a>; '<a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf=
.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: underline;"><span =
style=3D"color: =
purple;">draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind.all@tools.ietf.org</=
span></a>'<br><b>Subject:</b><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>secdir review of =
draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-05</span><span lang=3D"EN-US"=
 style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">I have reviewed this =
document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to for =
early review of WG drafts.&nbsp; These comments were written primarily =
for the benefit of the security area directors.&nbsp; Document editors =
and working group chairs should treat these comments just like any other =
comments.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; =
font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: =
justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">This document specifies a SIP =
P-Private-Network-Indication P-header which is able to contain a domain =
name to identify the organization that certain private network traffics =
belong to and enable network nodes to process different traffics with =
different sets of rules.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">There are some comments in =
the security considerations.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">A: =93The private network =
indication defined in this document MUST only be used in an environment =
where elements are trusted and where attackers do not have access to the =
protocol messages between those elements.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">This sentence is not very accurate. In the =
examples discussed in the document, the private traffics could be =
transported over public networks, where they can be</span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=93</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">accessed</span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=94</span><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">by attackers. In addition, there is no definition of<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=93</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">trust</span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=94</span><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">or<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span=
 style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=93</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">trusted notes</span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=94</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">. I guess you are using the =
terms specified in RFC3324. If so, please mention it in section 3. When =
using the terms in RFC3324, I think this sentence could be changed to =
=94The private network indication defined in this document MUST only be =
used in an environment where elements are trusted and there are secure =
connections between those elements.=94 Or even simpler, =93The private =
network indication defined in this document MUST only be used in the =
traffics transported between the elements which are mutually =
trusted.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Many thanks for suggestion, I =
will reflect the changes when updating the =
draft.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US"><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt; z-index: auto;"><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">B: =93Traffic protection between network =
elements can be achieved by using IPsec and sometimes by physical =
protection of the network.=94&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">Because we intend to provide =
confidentiality protection for the contents of this header field, IPsec =
AH may not be suitable here. So, maybe we can change this sentence =
to<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: SimSun;">=93</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">Traffic protection between =
network elements can be achieved by using the security protocols such as =
IPsec ESP [RFC2406] or sometimes by physical protection of the =
network.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Again, sounds great. Thanks for =
the suggestion.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt; z-index: auto;"><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">C: =93A private network indication received =
from an untrusted node MUST NOT be used and the information MUST be =
removed from a request or response before it is forwarded to entities in =
the trust domain.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">There is a concern about =
this sentence. If a device receives a message with a invalid indication, =
should the device forwards it or just discards =
it?<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">As you sated the concern is =
valid, why should you receive the header from an untrusted node. It is =
very likely an attempt to compromise the public or private =
network.<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">We could change it to:<br>=93A private =
network indication received from an untrusted node MUST NOT be used and =
the information MUST be removed from a request or response before it is =
forwarded to entities in the trust domain.&nbsp;<i>Additionally local =
policies may be in place that ensure that all requests entering the =
trust domain for private network indication from untrusted nodes with a =
private network indication will be =
discarded.</i>=94<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt; z-index: auto;"><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">D: &nbsp;=93There is a security risk if a =
private network indication is allowed to propagate out of the trust =
domain where it was generated. In that case sensitive information would =
be revealed by such a breach.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">It would be good to clarify what kind =
information is sensitive and what kind of risk will be caused by =
disclosing such information. The domain name of an organization is =
public, right? I know the leak of the domain name is undesired. But I =
suggest making some discussions here.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">The indication may reveal information about =
the identity of the caller, i,e, the organisation that he belongs to. =
That is sensitive information. It also reveals to the outside world that =
there is a set of rules that this call is subject to that is different =
then the rules that apply to public traffic. That is sensitive =
information too.<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US"><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt; z-index: auto;"><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">E: =93There is no automatic =
mechanism to learn the support for this =
specification.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">Maybe we can change this =
sentence to =93However, how to learn such knowledge is out of =
scope.=94<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;Great! we will =
:-)<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm =
0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;Many =
Thanks!&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', =
serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;</span></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;Shida<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US"><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt; z-index: auto;"><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt;">Cheers<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times =
New Roman', serif; text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm =
0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; =
text-align: justify; line-height: 15.75pt;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-size: =
10.5pt;">Dacheng</span></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockqu=
ote></div><br></body></html>=

--Apple-Mail=_6E2E00DA-1034-4D33-8640-D70772D957E1--


From nobody Wed Mar 19 19:10:30 2014
Return-Path: <kivinen@iki.fi>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C9C171A043A for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 19:10:26 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.448
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.448 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id i0T2dES6kM-0 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 19:10:22 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail.kivinen.iki.fi (fireball.kivinen.iki.fi [IPv6:2001:1bc8:100d::2]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E1C971A033D for <secdir@ietf.org>; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 19:10:21 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2K2AAiN000678 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 04:10:10 +0200 (EET)
Received: (from kivinen@localhost) by fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.12.11) id s2K2AASm012128; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 04:10:10 +0200 (EET)
X-Authentication-Warning: fireball.kivinen.iki.fi: kivinen set sender to kivinen@iki.fi using -f
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Message-ID: <21290.19970.388690.352606@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 04:10:10 +0200
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: secdir@ietf.org
X-Edit-Time: 1 min
X-Total-Time: 0 min
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/AxR2xmyKmku8TlUv7ycXgBu3qn0
Subject: [secdir] Assignments
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
Reply-To: secdir-secretary@mit.edu
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 02:10:27 -0000

Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Dan Harkins is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2014-03-27

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Alan DeKok             T 2014-03-17 draft-ietf-appsawg-xml-mediatypes-09
Donald Eastlake        T 2014-03-24 draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-11
Steve Hanna            TR2013-10-16 draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib-10
Scott Kelly            TR2013-05-29 draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-14
Catherine Meadows      TR2014-02-17 draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
Adam Montville         T 2014-02-19 draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext-09
Yoav Nir               TR2014-02-24 draft-ietf-eman-framework-16
Zach Shelby            T 2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-04
Ondrej Sury            T 2014-02-27 draft-ietf-ippm-testplan-rfc2680-04
Brian Weis             T 2014-02-28 draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location-09
Tom Yu                 TR2014-01-17 draft-ietf-abfab-arch-12


For telechat 2014-04-03

Derek Atkins           T 2014-03-12 draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-06
Sandy Murphy           T 2014-03-05 draft-melnikov-smime-msa-to-mda-04


For telechat 2014-04-10

Rob Austein            T 2014-03-24 draft-ietf-cdni-framework-10

Last calls and special requests:

Shawn Emery            E 2014-03-27 draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08
Dorothy Gellert          2014-04-01 draft-ietf-pcp-dhcp-09
Tobias Gondrom           2014-03-27 draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-07
Phillip Hallam-Baker     2014-04-01 draft-ietf-trill-esadi-06
Steve Hanna              2014-03-28 draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-loss-conceal-10
Jeffrey Hutzelman      E 2013-11-21 draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-05
Julien Laganier        E 2013-11-21 draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-11
Russ Mundy               2014-03-24 draft-mahalingam-dutt-dcops-vxlan-08
Sandy Murphy             2013-12-17 draft-ietf-netmod-iana-timezones-03
Vincent Roca             2014-02-25 draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01
Carl Wallace             2014-03-14 draft-drage-sipping-rfc3455bis-13
Brian Weis             E 2014-01-16 draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-11
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi


From nobody Wed Mar 19 23:32:09 2014
Return-Path: <shcooley@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id DB8691A04AA; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 23:32:07 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -10.047
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-10.047 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id oRg_J7tTS_IF; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 23:32:05 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from alln-iport-6.cisco.com (alln-iport-6.cisco.com [173.37.142.93]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6BC2A1A04A7; Wed, 19 Mar 2014 23:32:05 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=13235; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1395297117; x=1396506717; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:references: in-reply-to:mime-version; bh=91rF7iTzbe3SnqEytKXvl7hjaookA4DfAtQmp/hzHXo=; b=OQFymO5i1/tTBPivx+uvu/P5oiBUA/4dgTl7MPVCyZRPVeTt205e6F/3 asvLSslduPOa3UmFBGqyboluHk0X+2wUs4BFm9JKaktL6t8Y/RDyH+8vL farikCnGvmm+CnRW0/c+8dxjldaudq8iXNjoiIzfjcc1PPk76n5pmgRxQ 8=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: Ao4FALSKKlOtJV2c/2dsb2JhbABagkJEO1fCToEbFnSCJQEBAQQtTBACAQgRBAEBCwsSByERFAkIAQEEDgUIh10DEch3DYclF4xNgUUCAQEeMQYBCoMagRQEhV6QfI5VhUiDLYFyOQ
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos; i="4.97,692,1389744000"; d="scan'208,217"; a="28901678"
Received: from rcdn-core-5.cisco.com ([173.37.93.156]) by alln-iport-6.cisco.com with ESMTP; 20 Mar 2014 06:31:56 +0000
Received: from xhc-rcd-x12.cisco.com (xhc-rcd-x12.cisco.com [173.37.183.86]) by rcdn-core-5.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2K6VulI032601 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=FAIL); Thu, 20 Mar 2014 06:31:56 GMT
Received: from xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com ([169.254.5.98]) by xhc-rcd-x12.cisco.com ([173.37.183.86]) with mapi id 14.03.0123.003; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:31:55 -0500
From: "Shaun Cooley (shcooley)" <shcooley@cisco.com>
To: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
Thread-Index: Ac9BrCh2zAg7BhNeSsS1/SZjUWgivABWhUsAAD8+2bA=
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 06:31:55 +0000
Message-ID: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [10.19.187.28]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737xmbalnx10ciscoc_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/HW05EbltMVhW5xyPHsEhZoNAcRA
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 06:32:08 -0000

--_000_187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737xmbalnx10ciscoc_
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="Windows-1252"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

While RFC 3552 (=93Guidelines for Writing RFC Text on Security Consideratio=
ns=94) does not specify whether or not Security Considerations should inclu=
de normative language, both of the examples in section 6 (SMTP and VRRP) in=
clude normative language:

- 6.1.1.2 =96 two uses of SHOULD NOT
- 6.1.1.3 =96 two uses of SHOULD
- 6.1.1.7 =96 two uses of SHOULD
- 6.2.1.1 =96 one use of SHOULD
- 6.2.1.2 =96 one use of RECOMMENDED
- 6.2.1.3 =96 two uses of RECOMMENDED

I don=92t see why we wouldn=92t want to include normative language in the S=
ecurity Considerations =96 especially SHOULD.  The definition from BCP14/RF=
C2119 of =93there may exist valid reasons in particular circumstances to ig=
nore a particular item, but the full implications must be understood and ca=
refully weighed before choosing a different course=94 seems like exactly wh=
at the Security Considerations are getting at: =93the authors thought about=
 this, and suggest you do X, unless you have a specific reason and fully un=
derstand the implications of not following the authors=92 suggestion=94.

EKR =96 care to weigh in?

MSK =96 Seeing that you are more or less in agreement with adding the norma=
tive language, I=92ll split this discussion to a new thread if this goes mo=
re than  two (or so) replies on this thread.

-Shaun

From: Murray S. Kucherawy [mailto:superuser@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, March 18, 2014 12:01 PM
To: Shaun Cooley (shcooley)
Cc: secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.al=
l@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field

Barry, what's your take on these? I'm still under the impression that Secur=
ity Considerations shouldn't include normative language, but the opinions o=
n this seem to vary from one person and one week to the next.
Otherwise, they appear reasonable to me.

-MSK

On Mon, Mar 17, 2014 at 12:03 AM, Shaun Cooley (shcooley) <shcooley@cisco.c=
om<mailto:shcooley@cisco.com>> wrote:
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.

This document defines an extension for SMTP called RRVS, along with a new M=
AIL header field called Require-Recipient-Valid-Since, that allows senders =
to indicate to receivers the last date when the sender confirmed the owners=
hip of the target mailbox with the intended recipient, with a goal of preve=
nting sensitive mail from being delivered to the wrong party if the ownersh=
ip of a mailbox has changed.

The document is easy to understand and covers several information disclosur=
e issues that might arise from abuse of the RRVS extension or matching head=
er.  I consider this document to be ready for publication with two small ni=
ts:

 - The suggested abuse countermeasures described in 14.1 should be reworded=
 to indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) implement counte=
rmeasures against RRVS probing.

 - The suggested use restrictions described in 14.2 should be reworded to i=
ndicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) accept any RRVS datet=
ime as valid for accounts that have only had a single owner, even if the RR=
VS datetime predates the creation of the target account.

-Shaun


--_000_187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737xmbalnx10ciscoc_
Content-Type: text/html; charset="Windows-1252"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<html xmlns:v=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-micr=
osoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" =
xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http:=
//www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<head>
<meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3DWindows-1=
252">
<meta name=3D"Generator" content=3D"Microsoft Word 15 (filtered medium)">
<style><!--
/* Font Definitions */
@font-face
	{font-family:"Cambria Math";
	panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;}
@font-face
	{font-family:Calibri;
	panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4;}
/* Style Definitions */
p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal
	{margin:0in;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	font-size:12.0pt;
	font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
a:link, span.MsoHyperlink
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:blue;
	text-decoration:underline;}
a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed
	{mso-style-priority:99;
	color:purple;
	text-decoration:underline;}
p.MsoListParagraph, li.MsoListParagraph, div.MsoListParagraph
	{mso-style-priority:34;
	margin-top:0in;
	margin-right:0in;
	margin-bottom:0in;
	margin-left:.5in;
	margin-bottom:.0001pt;
	font-size:12.0pt;
	font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
span.hoenzb
	{mso-style-name:hoenzb;}
span.EmailStyle18
	{mso-style-type:personal;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
	color:#1F497D;}
span.EmailStyle19
	{mso-style-type:personal-compose;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
	color:windowtext;}
.MsoChpDefault
	{mso-style-type:export-only;
	font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";}
@page WordSection1
	{size:8.5in 11.0in;
	margin:1.0in 1.0in 1.0in 1.0in;}
div.WordSection1
	{page:WordSection1;}
--></style><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapedefaults v:ext=3D"edit" spidmax=3D"1026" />
</xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapelayout v:ext=3D"edit">
<o:idmap v:ext=3D"edit" data=3D"1" />
</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]-->
</head>
<body lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><a name=3D"_MailEndCompose"><span style=3D"font-size=
:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497=
D">While RFC 3552 (=93Guidelines for Writing RFC Text on Security Considera=
tions=94) does not specify whether or not Security Considerations
 should include normative language, both of the examples in section 6 (SMTP=
 and VRRP) include normative language:<o:p></o:p></span></a></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">- 6.1.1.2 =96 two uses of=
 SHOULD NOT<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">- 6.1.1.3 =96 two uses of=
 SHOULD<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">- 6.1.1.7 =96 two uses of=
 SHOULD<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">- 6.2.1.1 =96 one use of =
SHOULD<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">- 6.2.1.2 =96 one use of =
RECOMMENDED<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">- 6.2.1.3 =96 two uses of=
 RECOMMENDED<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I don=92t see why we woul=
dn=92t want to include normative language in the Security Considerations =
=96 especially SHOULD.&nbsp; The definition from BCP14/RFC2119 of =93<i>the=
re
 may exist valid reasons in particular circumstances to ignore a particular=
 item, but the full implications must be understood and carefully weighed b=
efore choosing a different course</i>=94 seems like exactly what the Securi=
ty Considerations are getting at:
 =93the authors thought about this, and suggest you do X, unless you have a=
 specific reason and fully understand the implications of not following the=
 authors=92 suggestion=94.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">EKR =96 care to weigh in?=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">MSK =96 Seeing that you a=
re more or less in agreement with adding the normative language, I=92ll spl=
it this discussion to a new thread if this goes more than &nbsp;two
 (or so) replies on this thread.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-Shaun<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-=
size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Murray=
 S. Kucherawy [mailto:superuser@gmail.com]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, March 18, 2014 12:01 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Shaun Cooley (shcooley)<br>
<b>Cc:</b> secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-f=
ield.all@tools.ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-bottom:12.0pt">Barry, what's your ta=
ke on these? I'm still under the impression that Security Considerations sh=
ouldn't include normative language, but the opinions on this seem to vary f=
rom one person and one week to the next.<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Otherwise, they appear reasonable to me.<br>
<br>
-MSK<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-bottom:12.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">On Mon, Mar 17, 2014 at 12:03 AM, Shaun Cooley (shco=
oley) &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shcooley@cisco.com" target=3D"_blank">shcooley@=
cisco.com</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
<blockquote style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0i=
n 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-right:0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I have reviewed this document as part of the securit=
y directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed=
 by the IESG. &nbsp;These comments were written primarily for the benefit o=
f the security area directors. &nbsp;Document
 editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last=
 call comments.<br>
<br>
This document defines an extension for SMTP called RRVS, along with a new M=
AIL header field called Require-Recipient-Valid-Since, that allows senders =
to indicate to receivers the last date when the sender confirmed the owners=
hip of the target mailbox with the
 intended recipient, with a goal of preventing sensitive mail from being de=
livered to the wrong party if the ownership of a mailbox has changed.<br>
<br>
The document is easy to understand and covers several information disclosur=
e issues that might arise from abuse of the RRVS extension or matching head=
er. &nbsp;I consider this document to be ready for publication with two sma=
ll nits:<br>
<br>
&nbsp;- The suggested abuse countermeasures described in 14.1 should be rew=
orded to indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) implement c=
ountermeasures against RRVS probing.<br>
<br>
&nbsp;- The suggested use restrictions described in 14.2 should be reworded=
 to indicate that operators SHOULD (or are RECOMMENDED to) accept any RRVS =
datetime as valid for accounts that have only had a single owner, even if t=
he RRVS datetime predates the creation
 of the target account.<br>
<span style=3D"color:#888888"><br>
<span class=3D"hoenzb">-Shaun</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
</blockquote>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
</div>
</div>
</body>
</html>

--_000_187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737xmbalnx10ciscoc_--


From nobody Thu Mar 20 01:36:59 2014
Return-Path: <superuser@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 46E671A07C9; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:54 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.999
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.999 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id eb_Hmw4jXeFq; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:52 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-pd0-x22e.google.com (mail-pd0-x22e.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400e:c02::22e]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id DE2D81A0654; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:51 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-pd0-f174.google.com with SMTP id y13so603074pdi.5 for <multiple recipients>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:43 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=WIu74Gm2jsspMJsJGvqkManN7Mb9aeLdnQR2nnzJmfE=; b=wBih1gp+lg+yVJ0udBnKc4XWdRqJa3OIG1vXHOE5ayTUCoBLI9hjWJJlIcF1loy/fq oBuGK3fvMLLy0/Yvw86tR50aW2KM9+AWjAqZb9TkkaT68MsTxHG7lYn7kqtDH3Avz570 IbbdZcVkUJROkuPuQtaRwY0a91updPelPpF9M/JiqOMgZFvO3rU+nvhiz7jzS7e5e2oM tSuvh+bViAzPw7N8NvHAnzGy9+1UzPVQp9HZaXVvEfTy4o3xK4IaEQ7tBDhq5jB8kch+ f6nqaLRGKvPoxPanout+fpgrpYuLiXxgpR1Ex4/0Cegzuo6cuhYmxPyn611cZseyTP/w andw==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.68.196.202 with SMTP id io10mr23196420pbc.149.1395304603096;  Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:43 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by 10.66.220.102 with HTTP; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:42 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 01:36:42 -0700
Message-ID: <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com>
From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
To: "Shaun Cooley (shcooley)" <shcooley@cisco.com>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=e89a8fb208a6389b4204f505ab6a
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/n0Z_tdZnEXaIMcV0fbel0VD2uJ8
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 08:36:54 -0000

--e89a8fb208a6389b4204f505ab6a
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1

On Wed, Mar 19, 2014 at 11:31 PM, Shaun Cooley (shcooley) <
shcooley@cisco.com> wrote:

>  While RFC 3552 ("Guidelines for Writing RFC Text on Security
> Considerations") does not specify whether or not Security Considerations
> should include normative language, both of the examples in section 6 (SMTP
> and VRRP) include normative language:
>
>
>
> - 6.1.1.2 - two uses of SHOULD NOT
>
> - 6.1.1.3 - two uses of SHOULD
>
> - 6.1.1.7 - two uses of SHOULD
>
> - 6.2.1.1 - one use of SHOULD
>
> - 6.2.1.2 - one use of RECOMMENDED
>
> - 6.2.1.3 - two uses of RECOMMENDED
>
>
>
> I don't see why we wouldn't want to include normative language in the
> Security Considerations - especially SHOULD.  The definition from
> BCP14/RFC2119 of "*there may exist valid reasons in particular
> circumstances to ignore a particular item, but the full implications must
> be understood and carefully weighed before choosing a different course*"
> seems like exactly what the Security Considerations are getting at: "the
> authors thought about this, and suggest you do X, unless you have a
> specific reason and fully understand the implications of not following the
> authors' suggestion".
>
>
>
I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119 language
ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or which
document's development cycle brought it up, but my general recollection is
that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability having
to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.  It would appear this
opinion has formed since RFC3552 was published, since obviously there's a
conflict between them.  But like I said, it does seem to vary depending on
who and when one is asking.  Could also be the person(s) who told me this
are actually plain wrong.

I'm happy to take direction from the sponsoring AD on this one.

-MSK

--e89a8fb208a6389b4204f505ab6a
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<div dir=3D"ltr">On Wed, Mar 19, 2014 at 11:31 PM, Shaun Cooley (shcooley) =
<span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shcooley@cisco.com" target=3D"_blan=
k">shcooley@cisco.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><=
div class=3D"gmail_quote">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">





<div link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple" lang=3D"EN-US">
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><a name=3D"144de30640979d15__MailEndCompose"><span s=
tyle=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&q=
uot;;color:#1f497d">While RFC 3552 (&ldquo;Guidelines for Writing RFC Text =
on Security Considerations&rdquo;) does not specify whether or not Security=
 Considerations
 should include normative language, both of the examples in section 6 (SMTP=
 and VRRP) include normative language:<u></u><u></u></span></a></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d"><u></u>&nbsp;<u></u></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">- 6.1.1.2 &ndash; two use=
s of SHOULD NOT<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">- 6.1.1.3 &ndash; two use=
s of SHOULD<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">- 6.1.1.7 &ndash; two use=
s of SHOULD<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">- 6.2.1.1 &ndash; one use=
 of SHOULD<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">- 6.2.1.2 &ndash; one use=
 of RECOMMENDED<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">- 6.2.1.3 &ndash; two use=
s of RECOMMENDED<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d"><u></u>&nbsp;<u></u></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d">I don&rsquo;t see why we =
wouldn&rsquo;t want to include normative language in the Security Considera=
tions &ndash; especially SHOULD.&nbsp; The definition from BCP14/RFC2119 of=
 &ldquo;<i>there
 may exist valid reasons in particular circumstances to ignore a particular=
 item, but the full implications must be understood and carefully weighed b=
efore choosing a different course</i>&rdquo; seems like exactly what the Se=
curity Considerations are getting at:
 &ldquo;the authors thought about this, and suggest you do X, unless you ha=
ve a specific reason and fully understand the implications of not following=
 the authors&rsquo; suggestion&rdquo;.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1f497d"><br></span></p></div></di=
v></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I can&#39;t recall the exact reason why =
it&#39;s been said that RFC2119 language ought not be used in Security Cons=
iderations (or similar) prose, or which document&#39;s development cycle br=
ought it up, but my general recollection is that those words were intended =
to convey aspects of interoperability having to do with protocol elements, =
and not otherwise.&nbsp; It would appear this opinion has formed since RFC3=
552 was published, since obviously there&#39;s a conflict between them.&nbs=
p; But like I said, it does seem to vary depending on who and when one is a=
sking.&nbsp; Could also be the person(s) who told me this are actually plai=
n wrong.&nbsp; <br>
<br>I&#39;m happy to take direction from the sponsoring AD on this one.<br>=
<br></div><div>-MSK <br></div></div><br></div></div>

--e89a8fb208a6389b4204f505ab6a--


From nobody Thu Mar 20 03:59:12 2014
Return-Path: <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8B0681A06C3; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 03:59:08 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.447
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.447 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 0ppqZnebJVhT; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 03:59:07 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mercury.scss.tcd.ie (mercury.scss.tcd.ie [134.226.56.6]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 992EF1A08B5; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 03:59:04 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mercury.scss.tcd.ie (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6EA8EBE51; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:58:55 +0000 (GMT)
X-Virus-Scanned: Debian amavisd-new at scss.tcd.ie
Received: from mercury.scss.tcd.ie ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (mercury.scss.tcd.ie [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id Ag9Sk4quK3lc; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:58:54 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from [10.87.48.12] (unknown [86.46.29.72]) by mercury.scss.tcd.ie (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 18BA1BE4D; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:58:54 +0000 (GMT)
Message-ID: <532AC9ED.80108@cs.tcd.ie>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:58:53 +0000
From: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.3.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>,  "Shaun Cooley (shcooley)" <shcooley@cisco.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com>
X-Enigmail-Version: 1.6
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/xUM4CyGD_1PNJDd-ts7jER29xJs
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:59:08 -0000

On 03/20/2014 08:36 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy wrote:
> I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119 language
> ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or which
> document's development cycle brought it up, but my general recollection is
> that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability having
> to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.  It would appear this
> opinion has formed since RFC3552 was published, since obviously there's a
> conflict between them.  But like I said, it does seem to vary depending on
> who and when one is asking.  Could also be the person(s) who told me this
> are actually plain wrong.
> 
> I'm happy to take direction from the sponsoring AD on this one.

I'm sure you'll get that.

FWIW, from my POV there should be no magical interactions between
RFC section headings and RFC 2119. You should do what makes sense
and is more clear for the reader. That can and often does include
using e.g. a 2119 MUST in the security considerations section.

In other words, I figure the folklore you describe above ought be
ignored and/or corrected. I do not believe that's written down
anywhere in an RFC or IESG statement, if you find it is, please let
me know and I'll try get it fixed.

S.



From nobody Thu Mar 20 04:05:10 2014
Return-Path: <alexey.melnikov@isode.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 14C701A08C5; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 04:05:08 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.548
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.548 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id VKTj--dECAZE; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 04:05:04 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from waldorf.isode.com (waldorf.isode.com [62.3.217.251]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9DFFF1A08BE; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 04:05:02 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1395313492; d=isode.com; s=selector; i=@isode.com; bh=bEGSu7rqBuC56EU6AUm1Q2Qej2NXXZ4Cq+9DJnQlPiY=; h=From:Sender:Reply-To:Subject:Date:Message-ID:To:Cc:MIME-Version: In-Reply-To:References:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding: Content-ID:Content-Description; b=xJz9DXdY8ALrBGBs4PxE2/TAOgXFbPAxkARvlKp7q8Isn8ZkCA/tPUbHUShUVc7Jz+qog3 3RCnGm29m9FA1MXf04em6UpP9aMveXdRlGRHHetWkrPBQrmmANXcFCFEDd+ekKpnBDT2tK 47AW41VKWHCcGtZzYorrDsoBqMlxZhM=;
Received: from [192.168.0.7] (cpc5-nmal20-2-0-cust24.19-2.cable.virginm.net [92.234.84.25])  by waldorf.isode.com (submission channel) via TCP with ESMTPA  id <UyrLUwAIP1mT@waldorf.isode.com>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 11:04:52 +0000
Message-ID: <532ACB96.1090806@isode.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 11:05:58 +0000
From: Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.3.0
To: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>, "Shaun Cooley (shcooley)" <shcooley@cisco.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com> <532AC9ED.80108@cs.tcd.ie>
In-Reply-To: <532AC9ED.80108@cs.tcd.ie>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/PALqVTXuNun0g8kyEh7_OGXPh0o
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 11:05:08 -0000

On 20/03/2014 10:58, Stephen Farrell wrote:
> On 03/20/2014 08:36 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy wrote:
>> I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119 language
>> ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or which
>> document's development cycle brought it up, but my general recollection is
>> that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability having
>> to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.  It would appear this
>> opinion has formed since RFC3552 was published, since obviously there's a
>> conflict between them.  But like I said, it does seem to vary depending on
>> who and when one is asking.  Could also be the person(s) who told me this
>> are actually plain wrong.
>>
>> I'm happy to take direction from the sponsoring AD on this one.
> I'm sure you'll get that.
>
> FWIW, from my POV there should be no magical interactions between
> RFC section headings and RFC 2119. You should do what makes sense
> and is more clear for the reader. That can and often does include
> using e.g. a 2119 MUST in the security considerations section.
>
> In other words, I figure the folklore you describe above ought be
> ignored and/or corrected.
Agreed.
> I do not believe that's written down
> anywhere in an RFC or IESG statement,
I don't think so either.

I think the main argument against RFC 2119 language in Security 
Considerations sections is that people are not going to read them while 
implementing specs (and they might only read them later when considering 
security aspects). But I think this is nonsense.
> if you find it is, please let me know and I'll try get it fixed.


From nobody Thu Mar 20 07:53:10 2014
Return-Path: <barryleiba@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C9B0E1A0747; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 07:53:03 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.278
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.278 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, FM_FORGED_GMAIL=0.622, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id Me52zLE-eN-H; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 07:53:02 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-qg0-x232.google.com (mail-qg0-x232.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400d:c04::232]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D03A71A046A; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 07:53:01 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-qg0-f50.google.com with SMTP id q108so2890084qgd.9 for <multiple recipients>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 07:52:52 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject :from:to:cc:content-type; bh=AxOLkFsZ0EKrDr7y6OCj6d4HoFQCRaWylemD2pldIbI=; b=HVHk3pDasI31dt5Ozc8HvhBUKGn2byMdxjagWy841HRmd02SDCMNSqcGNKkgbASid2 osRMvCNzvBELFy/L2iKUzXihvxJMPmtoWXnDhlpaReBfMAH0a89e6oCk+4EFOvfLGAhV Bdt0lKWVA3pQBZd7uKlLIQlwSSGMQVaUKltcySDGQgb0JUv/6rxgAMe2kain6E/j+/Ui MlPoQHTJzcaRlT4I+p5+A26Exalbzgg2XHYAYwWfGShcVbWY/hNSg15C+eUk9TiZ9rqE 02uiRTCq3Va8T9b/nsGa8rkfue+nSCoknEr5p6qqLT0owXRYOZLqOlXkaXn/CWc6rsFb wN4w==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.140.84.39 with SMTP id k36mr2217576qgd.51.1395327172554; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 07:52:52 -0700 (PDT)
Sender: barryleiba@gmail.com
Received: by 10.224.42.136 with HTTP; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 07:52:52 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:52:52 -0400
X-Google-Sender-Auth: AiX5y1zFo-_nefIoIFI237IYv10
Message-ID: <CALaySJLLNoMW=d0078kBOQw0vby-VW3q6A5EbEb9UtiVCk=jfw@mail.gmail.com>
From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
To: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/nPVdnfFB6X_ojWwpSeM3FK10-xA
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 14:53:04 -0000

>> While RFC 3552 ("Guidelines for Writing RFC Text on Security
>> Considerations") does not specify whether or not Security Considerations
>> should include normative language, both of the examples in section 6 (SMTP
>> and VRRP) include normative language:

First, let's please separate "2119 key words" from "normative
language", and be sure we don't fall under the mistaken impression
that language isn't normative unless it's in all caps.  If a Security
considerations section says, "Farble attack is possible if you don't
wiffle, so it's essential that servers wiffle," that's a normative
requirement for servers to wiffle, whether or not the magic word
<strike>"please"</strike> "MUST" is used.

Now...

> I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119 language
> ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or which
> document's development cycle brought it up, but my general recollection is
> that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability having
> to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.

That's the silliest thing I've ever heard.[1]

May I disabuse y'all of that idea forthwith?  Yes?  Good.  Thank you.

The document tells us how to implement the protocol.  The whole
document does, from the tippy-top of the Introduction head to the
soles of the References feet.  Normative stuff can appear anywhere,
and if it makes sense to put some in the Security Considerations
section, then that's where we should put it.

Now, I *would* have an issue with the organization of the document if
protocol elements were defined only in the Security Considerations,
and there might be times when security aspects should be normatively
specified where the protocol elements were defined, and only
highlighted in the Security Considerations, or whatnot.  But that's a
question of organization of a particular document.  This document is
well organized, and I have no issues with that.

So if you (for whatever value of "you", which here seems like Shaun,
with Murray in basic agreement) think that the normative language in
the Security Considerations is not sufficiently clear or strong, and
would benefit from some 2119 key words, make it so.  Do it with care
and thought, but don't have any silly ideas that 2119 key words don't
belong in security considerations sections.  They belong where they
are needed, and not where they aren't.

> I'm happy to take direction from the sponsoring AD on this one.

So let it be written; so let it be done.

Barry

[1] Actually, not really: I've heard some pretty damnfool things in my
life, some far sillier than any of us can imagine.  But a little
hyperbole never hurt an argument.


From nobody Thu Mar 20 10:39:56 2014
Return-Path: <superuser@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id ECB3A1A0912; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:49 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.999
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.999 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id MiFRAfaL9cRL; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:48 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-pd0-x233.google.com (mail-pd0-x233.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400e:c02::233]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2B8D81A0743; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:48 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-pd0-f179.google.com with SMTP id w10so1234475pde.10 for <multiple recipients>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:39 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=v24+VobgA3OnnBqz9SPgW5aOfNY1/7Ldu/lVFm4xBc4=; b=Nx0whxOkDsSLsNTtoP7nezDIgH8c+COU3myIUpcLsxcbqj7efVjjqvl4aVUrectv+o TKv6UaF3gz7PWNdcDrEnJYT58bmUQyUQuUJhG1HRpw2poUqfT8dnVI6eH2heb9oBfcsa zzEdvNAxx1pnqTJYhBdMHup3FudZRczP7WttdDuRwKw1B2fp8WkmLXQWMG8E/6e6Ardq ueUHET1uWw5t9WOUfVq1Bs1RJWCBuk4skwPA56Io1DtXC4KgKWLArc+gKf0qpsaDGHuG BFNvVXiOxQPElnRqrk3hv+6NUT55kL4QDSEdvzZ9Wyh35Ljpx3hauPVBZgqUmlNmeaaa 5gFQ==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.68.196.202 with SMTP id io10mr26439093pbc.149.1395337179225;  Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:39 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by 10.66.220.102 with HTTP; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:39 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <CALaySJLLNoMW=d0078kBOQw0vby-VW3q6A5EbEb9UtiVCk=jfw@mail.gmail.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com> <CALaySJLLNoMW=d0078kBOQw0vby-VW3q6A5EbEb9UtiVCk=jfw@mail.gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 10:39:39 -0700
Message-ID: <CAL0qLwYLZ58icuUz2y8naHKNyGsqx6nDCs3Q5DGRXG_4jJy6Ag@mail.gmail.com>
From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=e89a8fb208a6e8e34c04f50d40dc
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/-633fETygopC338MqqwglITHnts
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 17:39:50 -0000

--e89a8fb208a6e8e34c04f50d40dc
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1

On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:52 AM, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>wrote:

>
> > I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119 language
> > ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or which
> > document's development cycle brought it up, but my general recollection
> is
> > that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability
> having
> > to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.
>
> That's the silliest thing I've ever heard.[1]
>
> May I disabuse y'all of that idea forthwith?  Yes?  Good.  Thank you.
>
[...]
>

Given that Shaun's original comment identified these as nits: "What mighty
contests arise from trivial things."

I've made his changes in the next version, which I'll post after the
telechat unless you want them sooner.  The only other pending change is a
language tweak in IANA Considerations that came up during their review of
that section.

-MSK

--e89a8fb208a6e8e34c04f50d40dc
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<div dir=3D"ltr">On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:52 AM, Barry Leiba <span dir=3D"=
ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:barryleiba@computer.org" target=3D"_blank">barry=
leiba@computer.org</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div=
 class=3D"gmail_quote">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><br><div class=3D"">
&gt; I can&#39;t recall the exact reason why it&#39;s been said that RFC211=
9 language<br>
&gt; ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or wh=
ich<br>
&gt; document&#39;s development cycle brought it up, but my general recolle=
ction is<br>
&gt; that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability h=
aving<br>
&gt; to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.<br>
<br>
</div>That&#39;s the silliest thing I&#39;ve ever heard.[1]<br>
<br>
May I disabuse y&#39;all of that idea forthwith? =A0Yes? =A0Good. =A0Thank =
you. <br></blockquote><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0=
 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
[...]<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Given that Shaun&#39;s original c=
omment identified these as nits: &quot;What mighty contests arise from triv=
ial things.&quot;<br><br>I&#39;ve made his changes in the next version, whi=
ch I&#39;ll post after the telechat unless you want them sooner.=A0 The onl=
y other pending change is a language tweak in IANA Considerations that came=
 up during their review of that section.<br>
<br>-MSK<br></div></div></div></div>

--e89a8fb208a6e8e34c04f50d40dc--


From nobody Thu Mar 20 12:23:22 2014
Return-Path: <barryleiba@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E8DDE1A0410; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:23:20 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -0.677
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.677 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, FM_FORGED_GMAIL=0.622, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, J_CHICKENPOX_14=0.6, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id BPyNdmW3Nat3; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:23:19 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-qa0-x234.google.com (mail-qa0-x234.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400d:c00::234]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9899C1A034F; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:23:19 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-qa0-f52.google.com with SMTP id m5so1382375qaj.39 for <multiple recipients>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:23:10 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject :from:to:cc:content-type; bh=ly0t2Vk8qPp5nAvbF8nHE1Us6tzllmiA5mtbafgW4dM=; b=dZtFQea43bNjR5LGThTv14f8cztXIGtYAuRsIDXhIs6idorcMajgm8G7z5bcki2e3s f8HBlmAekYByiC7bevS4T+3fMbTYOTcGalTBjDkgqqu123b9tNCD7cleUAya/2kiSCOZ LQxD+Whl+poTrtgDeM72YwAv3MqFPe9cofGD8QzTqaTKWZVtQrlN5YKYk9juSixW2egr wLKSjo1rCM9pXaDygq7cJ74L4TTyYTD//Gv+uZOXPDN+0AZ72Hfp1hfaV2kNmq4kVOdM Q78N8C/YkoEspHsl2EM06jBUub1va3My0JlJiM0AnyliCS/8m3/MLA4hV3Xpc9Wkzd/a Ruww==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.224.157.7 with SMTP id z7mr52974695qaw.37.1395343390400; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:23:10 -0700 (PDT)
Sender: barryleiba@gmail.com
Received: by 10.224.42.136 with HTTP; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:23:10 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <CAL0qLwYLZ58icuUz2y8naHKNyGsqx6nDCs3Q5DGRXG_4jJy6Ag@mail.gmail.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com> <CALaySJLLNoMW=d0078kBOQw0vby-VW3q6A5EbEb9UtiVCk=jfw@mail.gmail.com> <CAL0qLwYLZ58icuUz2y8naHKNyGsqx6nDCs3Q5DGRXG_4jJy6Ag@mail.gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:23:10 -0400
X-Google-Sender-Auth: gZL6kGrYJV5yAvA4R0sfBtBjohk
Message-ID: <CALaySJJfXEdKQt_g1YpMtEG=PdM1FFoAOkUiJvvTYAM+Zy5yoA@mail.gmail.com>
From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
To: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=089e0160a3d01fe75304f50eb359
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/m-6QXVyJFe3rZURsXFNqdevFuos
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 19:23:21 -0000

--089e0160a3d01fe75304f50eb359
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1

Go aheand and post now, so the IESG is reviewing the very latest version.
 T'anks.

b

On Thursday, March 20, 2014, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
wrote:

> On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:52 AM, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org<javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','barryleiba@computer.org');>
> > wrote:
>
>>
>> > I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119 language
>> > ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or
>> which
>> > document's development cycle brought it up, but my general recollection
>> is
>> > that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability
>> having
>> > to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.
>>
>> That's the silliest thing I've ever heard.[1]
>>
>> May I disabuse y'all of that idea forthwith?  Yes?  Good.  Thank you.
>>
> [...]
>>
>
> Given that Shaun's original comment identified these as nits: "What mighty
> contests arise from trivial things."
>
> I've made his changes in the next version, which I'll post after the
> telechat unless you want them sooner.  The only other pending change is a
> language tweak in IANA Considerations that came up during their review of
> that section.
>
> -MSK
>

--089e0160a3d01fe75304f50eb359
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Go aheand and post now, so the IESG is reviewing the very latest version. =
=A0T&#39;anks.<div><br></div><div>b<br><br>On Thursday, March 20, 2014, Mur=
ray S. Kucherawy &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:superuser@gmail.com">superuser@gmail=
.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr">On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:5=
2 AM, Barry Leiba <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"javascript:_e(%7B%7D,&#3=
9;cvml&#39;,&#39;barryleiba@computer.org&#39;);" target=3D"_blank">barrylei=
ba@computer.org</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><br><div>
&gt; I can&#39;t recall the exact reason why it&#39;s been said that RFC211=
9 language<br>
&gt; ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or wh=
ich<br>
&gt; document&#39;s development cycle brought it up, but my general recolle=
ction is<br>
&gt; that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability h=
aving<br>
&gt; to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.<br>
<br>
</div>That&#39;s the silliest thing I&#39;ve ever heard.[1]<br>
<br>
May I disabuse y&#39;all of that idea forthwith? =A0Yes? =A0Good. =A0Thank =
you. <br></blockquote><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0=
 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
[...]<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Given that Shaun&#39;s original c=
omment identified these as nits: &quot;What mighty contests arise from triv=
ial things.&quot;<br><br>I&#39;ve made his changes in the next version, whi=
ch I&#39;ll post after the telechat unless you want them sooner.=A0 The onl=
y other pending change is a language tweak in IANA Considerations that came=
 up during their review of that section.<br>

<br>-MSK<br></div></div></div></div>
</blockquote></div>

--089e0160a3d01fe75304f50eb359--


From nobody Thu Mar 20 12:29:10 2014
Return-Path: <superuser@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C9DEC1A077C; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:29:09 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.399
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.399 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, J_CHICKENPOX_14=0.6, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id IkDVU7r4SF5l; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:29:08 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-pa0-x22e.google.com (mail-pa0-x22e.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400e:c03::22e]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8A3FA1A0894; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:29:08 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-pa0-f46.google.com with SMTP id kp14so1385077pab.33 for <multiple recipients>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:28:59 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=z//zhonvrP1dwciXgfV12JvGDh0TWYnDjDmOkPJFeNg=; b=ZTG+aJYK8EK7rrKkqsSwHKime7AXqDPze/7R5vsGyetuKMlxJn47Bs2so/m11wKc9W XmpykkrOYpGr5o12O2Z9CoCwDXFVVdIv4KjU7MPMdZGCwUS6swshjLL+FXZkqEVxIJJa EVoiAUyydcblKt3QR8UPbhevrGm75nnSPHeTuKmTSPS84J5M14ixnpuGsc/rW3Qa77Gy tIoWyuOyGUQ4FZHA4qSs79xM2fbS7Yi15fxHTEd4l5ELx7ORuiiZOUdx7My3eAuVHIYA 4wLDTgEcCkBiaAWL+TiolOjukrmS6BwaHDVTTAGmqssqzaJyYO5C7ExcKAUPwUifN9VU rZIg==
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Received: by 10.66.118.71 with SMTP id kk7mr48545115pab.14.1395343739598; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:28:59 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by 10.66.220.102 with HTTP; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:28:59 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <CALaySJJfXEdKQt_g1YpMtEG=PdM1FFoAOkUiJvvTYAM+Zy5yoA@mail.gmail.com>
References: <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CAE6A@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYqNKmVH8ruEGBoh3A8h04hazda3X2q6ONuQHC4penTCQ@mail.gmail.com> <187A7B1DA239514F9146FC78B19AADE30B6CC737@xmb-aln-x10.cisco.com> <CAL0qLwYNLuUfYCmwV8dnohZEu_yX9Z883dJoMeo+HPis027gDQ@mail.gmail.com> <CALaySJLLNoMW=d0078kBOQw0vby-VW3q6A5EbEb9UtiVCk=jfw@mail.gmail.com> <CAL0qLwYLZ58icuUz2y8naHKNyGsqx6nDCs3Q5DGRXG_4jJy6Ag@mail.gmail.com> <CALaySJJfXEdKQt_g1YpMtEG=PdM1FFoAOkUiJvvTYAM+Zy5yoA@mail.gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 12:28:59 -0700
Message-ID: <CAL0qLwa66svgGee2JCDMzkBi21FoQ3=Jk2hAd35rpTP5dAefgg@mail.gmail.com>
From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=e89a8ffbad05f03caa04f50ec7f6
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/6hKHZy5igdlE5t-LKwSD2UWDyKk
Cc: "draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rrvs-header-field
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 19:29:10 -0000

--e89a8ffbad05f03caa04f50ec7f6
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1

Done.


On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 12:23 PM, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>wrote:

> Go aheand and post now, so the IESG is reviewing the very latest version.
>  T'anks.
>
> b
>
>
> On Thursday, March 20, 2014, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:52 AM, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>wrote:
>>
>>>
>>> > I can't recall the exact reason why it's been said that RFC2119
>>> language
>>> > ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or
>>> which
>>> > document's development cycle brought it up, but my general
>>> recollection is
>>> > that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability
>>> having
>>> > to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.
>>>
>>> That's the silliest thing I've ever heard.[1]
>>>
>>> May I disabuse y'all of that idea forthwith?  Yes?  Good.  Thank you.
>>>
>> [...]
>>>
>>
>> Given that Shaun's original comment identified these as nits: "What
>> mighty contests arise from trivial things."
>>
>> I've made his changes in the next version, which I'll post after the
>> telechat unless you want them sooner.  The only other pending change is a
>> language tweak in IANA Considerations that came up during their review of
>> that section.
>>
>> -MSK
>>
>

--e89a8ffbad05f03caa04f50ec7f6
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<div dir=3D"ltr">Done.<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><br><div cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote">On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 12:23 PM, Barry Leiba <span dir=
=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:barryleiba@computer.org" target=3D"_blank">b=
arryleiba@computer.org</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Go aheand and post now, so the IESG is revie=
wing the very latest version. =A0T&#39;anks.<span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font co=
lor=3D"#888888"><div>
<br></div></font></span><div><span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888"=
>b</font></span><div><div class=3D"h5"><br><br>On Thursday, March 20, 2014,=
 Murray S. Kucherawy &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:superuser@gmail.com" target=3D"_=
blank">superuser@gmail.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br>

<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr">On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:5=
2 AM, Barry Leiba <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a>barryleiba@computer.org</a>&gt;<=
/span> wrote:<br>

<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote">
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><br><div>
&gt; I can&#39;t recall the exact reason why it&#39;s been said that RFC211=
9 language<br>
&gt; ought not be used in Security Considerations (or similar) prose, or wh=
ich<br>
&gt; document&#39;s development cycle brought it up, but my general recolle=
ction is<br>
&gt; that those words were intended to convey aspects of interoperability h=
aving<br>
&gt; to do with protocol elements, and not otherwise.<br>
<br>
</div>That&#39;s the silliest thing I&#39;ve ever heard.[1]<br>
<br>
May I disabuse y&#39;all of that idea forthwith? =A0Yes? =A0Good. =A0Thank =
you. <br></blockquote><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0=
 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
[...]<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Given that Shaun&#39;s original c=
omment identified these as nits: &quot;What mighty contests arise from triv=
ial things.&quot;<br><br>I&#39;ve made his changes in the next version, whi=
ch I&#39;ll post after the telechat unless you want them sooner.=A0 The onl=
y other pending change is a language tweak in IANA Considerations that came=
 up during their review of that section.<br>


<br>-MSK<br></div></div></div></div>
</blockquote></div></div></div>
</blockquote></div><br></div>

--e89a8ffbad05f03caa04f50ec7f6--


From nobody Thu Mar 20 15:58:20 2014
Return-Path: <kewisch@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 215971A0930; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:58:16 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.999
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.999 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id z-8TEYA98XwL; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:58:14 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-bk0-x22d.google.com (mail-bk0-x22d.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4008:c01::22d]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 84CFA1A0920; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:58:13 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-bk0-f45.google.com with SMTP id na10so119171bkb.32 for <multiple recipients>; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:58:03 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:references :in-reply-to:content-type; bh=jeaOCeUwzKJjTSdvFrsVYMZa2IhKbr05893N5xV7PRw=; b=0Y58dcJ4v2wyzVTmL+VlsXrEcDqVAbtwt4KNtXPHPzAIhRFWdx6vgFTVJmN0DgtKOC O0IjLsLY9pyk2R6KsXleImoyUP1bOhO39Ci3fw2QmFMhlFLzOAb4r9OJ62/0yCY+Pkto G6MDVM6NXtTEUOSn+cwg/wNDjaDzs6va64ByqMRYc2D1QnDHCEMbGudSMa37MrL0OsH6 erWTK6eusOH/QxyYlRltWKQJw574f8+RDZB/OT0S7JeRsagXAqqEwFIkviCFt1Pjb4NE HsZvNDAEoK/V3kYtO9cS2uc3+OwpK22FP9kfTy+N4CRArbhCw8AiJ3j8Hrt3FBg8Tcge +pfg==
X-Received: by 10.204.81.14 with SMTP id v14mr24662970bkk.3.1395356283871; Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:58:03 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from [192.168.2.104] (p5DC1549E.dip0.t-ipconnect.de. [93.193.84.158]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPSA id c15sm3417762bky.13.2014.03.20.15.58.02 for <multiple recipients> (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Thu, 20 Mar 2014 15:58:03 -0700 (PDT)
Message-ID: <532B727A.9060500@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 23:58:02 +0100
From: Philipp Kewisch <kewisch@gmail.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.9; rv:28.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/28.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: "Klaas Wierenga (kwiereng)" <kwiereng@cisco.com>,  "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>,  "draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal.all@tools.ietf.org>
References: <894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com>
In-Reply-To: <894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------000000020609080709090205"
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/p7cPdKY4ElMQ9OH5ulMmXvww6q0
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 22:58:16 -0000

This is a multi-part message in MIME format.
--------------000000020609080709090205
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

Hi Klaas,

thank you for your corrections. Here is my feedback:
> - Paragraph 3 (converting from iCal to jCal):
>
> The  text looks very much like production rules, why not give ABNF? (Ah wait, now that I have read the full document I see that that appears in Appendix B, I think you should at least point to Appendix B here)
The ABNF is considered informative, I was told for jCard that not too
much weight should be put into it. Nevertheless, I am happy to mention
it if you like. How is this for the introduction to section 3?

OLD
   This section describes how iCalendar data is converted to jCal using
   a simple mapping between the iCalendar data model and JSON elements.
NEW
   This section describes how iCalendar data is converted to jCal using
   a simple mapping between the iCalendar data model and JSON elements.
   Aside from the formal description in this section, an informative ABNF is
   specified in Appendix B.
END

> - Paragraph 3.4 and onwards
>
> It is unclear to me when you write for example "Each individual iCalendar property is represented in jCal by …" whether you really mean to write: "Each individual iCalendar property MUST be represented in jCal by…." 
> I assume you want to be normative in specifying the format?

Thanks, I've changed it (almost) as you suggested.

OLD
   Each individual iCalendar property is represented in jCal by an array
   with three fixed elements, followed by one or more additional
   elements, depending on if the property is a multi-value property as
   described in Section 3.1.2 of [RFC5545].
NEW
   In jCal, each individual iCalendar property MUST be represented by an
   array with three fixed elements, followed by one or more additional
   elements, depending on if the property is a multi-value property as
   described in Section 3.1.2 of [RFC5545].
END

> - Paragraph 9.2 should RFC4627 not be a normative rather than informative reference?
Yes, indeed. I've changed this and also updated references to rfc7159.
While doing this I noticed that we referenced a regex that was in
rfc4627 but no longer in rfc7159. I've made some changes:

OLD
   With this in mind, a parser for JSON data should be used for jCal
   that is aware of the security implications.  For example, the use of
   JavaScript's eval() function is only allowed using the regular
   expression in Section 6 of [RFC4627].  A native parser with full
   awareness of the JSON format should be preferred.
NEW
   With this in mind, a parser for JSON data should be used for jCal that
   is aware of the security implications. For example, the use of
   JavaScript's eval() function is considered an unacceptable security
   risk, as described in [RFC7159], Section 12. A native parser with full
   awareness of the JSON format should be preferred.
END

Regards,
Philipp

--------------000000020609080709090205
Content-Type: text/html; charset=windows-1252
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

<html>
  <head>
    <meta content="text/html; charset=windows-1252"
      http-equiv="Content-Type">
    <link href="chrome://translator/skin/floatingPanel.css"
      type="text/css" rel="stylesheet">
  </head>
  <body bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
    Hi Klaas,<br>
    <br>
    thank you for your corrections. Here is my feedback:<br>
    <blockquote
      cite="mid:894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com"
      type="cite">
      <pre wrap="">- Paragraph 3 (converting from iCal to jCal):

The  text looks very much like production rules, why not give ABNF? (Ah wait, now that I have read the full document I see that that appears in Appendix B, I think you should at least point to Appendix B here)</pre>
    </blockquote>
    The ABNF is considered informative, I was told for jCard that not
    too much weight should be put into it. Nevertheless, I am happy to
    mention it if you like. How is this for the introduction to section
    3?<br>
    <br>
    OLD<br>
       This section describes how iCalendar data is converted to jCal
    using<br>
       a simple mapping between the iCalendar data model and JSON
    elements.<br>
    NEW<br>
       This section describes how iCalendar data is converted to jCal
    using<br>
       a simple mapping between the iCalendar data model and JSON
    elements.<br>
       Aside from the formal description in this section, an informative
    ABNF is<br>
       specified in Appendix B.<br>
    END<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
      cite="mid:894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com"
      type="cite">
      <pre wrap="">
- Paragraph 3.4 and onwards

It is unclear to me when you write for example "Each individual iCalendar property is represented in jCal by …" whether you really mean to write: "Each individual iCalendar property MUST be represented in jCal by…." 
I assume you want to be normative in specifying the format?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Thanks, I've changed it (almost) as you suggested.<br>
    <br>
    OLD<br>
       Each individual iCalendar property is represented in jCal by an
    array<br>
       with three fixed elements, followed by one or more additional<br>
       elements, depending on if the property is a multi-value property
    as<br>
       described in Section 3.1.2 of [RFC5545].<br>
    NEW<br>
       In jCal, each individual iCalendar property MUST be represented
    by an<br>
       array with three fixed elements, followed by one or more
    additional<br>
       elements, depending on if the property is a multi-value property
    as<br>
       described in Section 3.1.2 of [RFC5545].<br>
    END<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
      cite="mid:894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com"
      type="cite">
      <pre wrap="">
- Paragraph 9.2 should RFC4627 not be a normative rather than informative reference?</pre>
    </blockquote>
    Yes, indeed. I've changed this and also updated references to
    rfc7159. While doing this I noticed that we referenced a regex that
    was in rfc4627 but no longer in rfc7159. I've made some changes:<br>
    <br>
    OLD<br>
       With this in mind, a parser for JSON data should be used for jCal<br>
       that is aware of the security implications.  For example, the use
    of<br>
       JavaScript's eval() function is only allowed using the regular<br>
       expression in Section 6 of [RFC4627].  A native parser with full<br>
       awareness of the JSON format should be preferred.<br>
    NEW<br>
       With this in mind, a parser for JSON data should be used for jCal
    that<br>
       is aware of the security implications. For example, the use of<br>
       JavaScript's eval() function is considered an unacceptable
    security<br>
       risk, as described in [RFC7159], Section 12. A native parser with
    full <br>
       awareness of the JSON format should be preferred.<br>
    END<br>
    <blockquote
      cite="mid:894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com"
      type="cite">
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Regards,<br>
    Philipp<br>
    <div style="bottom: auto; left: 10px; right: auto; top: 144px;
      display: none;" class="translator-theme-default"
      id="translator-floating-panel">
      <div title="Click to translate"
        id="translator-floating-panel-button"></div>
    </div>
  </body>
</html>

--------------000000020609080709090205--


From nobody Fri Mar 21 00:40:07 2014
Return-Path: <kwiereng@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5D1451A069E; Fri, 21 Mar 2014 00:39:58 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -15.048
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.048 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.547, SPF_PASS=-0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 7RosjJzfnTdA; Fri, 21 Mar 2014 00:39:56 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from rcdn-iport-6.cisco.com (rcdn-iport-6.cisco.com [173.37.86.77]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8F3AF1A067E; Fri, 21 Mar 2014 00:39:56 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=3180; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1395387587; x=1396597187; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:references: in-reply-to:content-transfer-encoding:mime-version; bh=VkvL3YQexO5aVfR77wQ9C1BSIrEzzgb7bkX8US+B9tE=; b=XXDTjG1Wm925XQ7vmBd6TgOmGQUHHsd/ITEKDe97M5Bj2t9poAdJQ0qR 5kbkwk4RLzBIVLarIcb2OvnFQ6jDCGHU+roxgwkGxJEwk22hELkR0sIuC uaG2L5JvlYTCzZi6tpCq8Wm/hsUqP1q0vnEzDVghQ4Gj6oNTuDdudAWbs A=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AhMFAHfrK1OtJV2Z/2dsb2JhbABZgwbDYoESFnSCJQEBAQMBeQULAgEIGC4hESUCBA4Fh2UDCQjIOQ2HGReMTYFlMweDJIEUBJZcgW2MaIVJgy0
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.97,702,1389744000"; d="scan'208";a="311899959"
Received: from rcdn-core-2.cisco.com ([173.37.93.153]) by rcdn-iport-6.cisco.com with ESMTP; 21 Mar 2014 07:39:47 +0000
Received: from xhc-aln-x02.cisco.com (xhc-aln-x02.cisco.com [173.36.12.76]) by rcdn-core-2.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2L7dlK6006584 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=FAIL); Fri, 21 Mar 2014 07:39:47 GMT
Received: from xmb-aln-x12.cisco.com ([169.254.7.194]) by xhc-aln-x02.cisco.com ([173.36.12.76]) with mapi id 14.03.0123.003; Fri, 21 Mar 2014 02:39:46 -0500
From: "Klaas Wierenga (kwiereng)" <kwiereng@cisco.com>
To: Philipp Kewisch <kewisch@gmail.com>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09
Thread-Index: AQHPMjcJwgX+osJyDEaPL10iZVgG5ZrrDxQAgAA99DU=
Date: Fri, 21 Mar 2014 07:39:46 +0000
Message-ID: <A11D43D3-00D1-44DF-814A-31F7B56DB7AF@cisco.com>
References: <894C08E3-0017-4830-9C8F-930CCEB5B2E2@cisco.com>, <532B727A.9060500@gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <532B727A.9060500@gmail.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="Windows-1252"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Qib1F8LC-vZaUo7h3anVBH7XKAA
Cc: "draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal.all@tools.ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 21 Mar 2014 07:39:58 -0000

Hi Philipp,

Looks good to me!

Klaas

Sent from my iPhone

> On 20 mrt. 2014, at 23:58, "Philipp Kewisch" <kewisch@gmail.com> wrote:
>=20
> Hi Klaas,
>=20
> thank you for your corrections. Here is my feedback:
>> - Paragraph 3 (converting from iCal to jCal):
>>=20
>> The  text looks very much like production rules, why not give ABNF? (Ah =
wait, now that I have read the full document I see that that appears in App=
endix B, I think you should at least point to Appendix B here)
> The ABNF is considered informative, I was told for jCard that not too muc=
h weight should be put into it. Nevertheless, I am happy to mention it if y=
ou like. How is this for the introduction to section 3?
>=20
> OLD
>    This section describes how iCalendar data is converted to jCal using
>    a simple mapping between the iCalendar data model and JSON elements.
> NEW
>    This section describes how iCalendar data is converted to jCal using
>    a simple mapping between the iCalendar data model and JSON elements.
>    Aside from the formal description in this section, an informative ABNF=
 is
>    specified in Appendix B.
> END
>=20
>> - Paragraph 3.4 and onwards
>>=20
>> It is unclear to me when you write for example "Each individual iCalenda=
r property is represented in jCal by =85" whether you really mean to write:=
 "Each individual iCalendar property MUST be represented in jCal by=85."=20
>> I assume you want to be normative in specifying the format?
>=20
> Thanks, I've changed it (almost) as you suggested.
>=20
> OLD
>    Each individual iCalendar property is represented in jCal by an array
>    with three fixed elements, followed by one or more additional
>    elements, depending on if the property is a multi-value property as
>    described in Section 3.1.2 of [RFC5545].
> NEW
>    In jCal, each individual iCalendar property MUST be represented by an
>    array with three fixed elements, followed by one or more additional
>    elements, depending on if the property is a multi-value property as
>    described in Section 3.1.2 of [RFC5545].
> END
>=20
>> - Paragraph 9.2 should RFC4627 not be a normative rather than informativ=
e reference?
> Yes, indeed. I've changed this and also updated references to rfc7159. Wh=
ile doing this I noticed that we referenced a regex that was in rfc4627 but=
 no longer in rfc7159. I've made some changes:
>=20
> OLD
>    With this in mind, a parser for JSON data should be used for jCal
>    that is aware of the security implications.  For example, the use of
>    JavaScript's eval() function is only allowed using the regular
>    expression in Section 6 of [RFC4627].  A native parser with full
>    awareness of the JSON format should be preferred.
> NEW
>    With this in mind, a parser for JSON data should be used for jCal that
>    is aware of the security implications. For example, the use of
>    JavaScript's eval() function is considered an unacceptable security
>    risk, as described in [RFC7159], Section 12. A native parser with full=
=20
>    awareness of the JSON format should be preferred.
> END
>=20
> Regards,
> Philipp


From nobody Mon Mar 24 17:28:00 2014
Return-Path: <bew@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 377141A0012; Mon, 24 Mar 2014 17:27:56 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -14.511
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-14.511 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id aHZLR5q2IbWB; Mon, 24 Mar 2014 17:27:54 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mtv-iport-2.cisco.com (mtv-iport-2.cisco.com [173.36.130.13]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9CEFF1A000F; Mon, 24 Mar 2014 17:27:54 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=2849; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1395707274; x=1396916874; h=from:content-transfer-encoding:subject:date:message-id: cc:to:mime-version; bh=AbFXxX2D0R/Xb0g2FIWq5c02NmQMgaSBB1aWbZYYPlA=; b=Ejs9zvSdVIWGASmaXSkpms9mX5R7F3EM8oAupgtfYiYmkRGbSqayFXcO 9QQ+u5Ge2NdkGa4vUx77N4G2ItbkmZnDDWn8FL68JJHeF6/o3r5HfvScc 9LbUknFJBt/j9N4RxL4lZbNoLIYUObB4sCVxL74O14GLe/jn5kRJdD9fu A=;
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: AhAFANvMMFOrRDoI/2dsb2JhbABQCYMGqwGZB4EjFnSCZj8tfRQBLYddzy0Xjh9bgyuBFASJUo54hkyLZYNNHQ
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="4.97,723,1389744000"; d="scan'208";a="108933493"
Received: from mtv-core-3.cisco.com ([171.68.58.8]) by mtv-iport-2.cisco.com with ESMTP; 25 Mar 2014 00:27:53 +0000
Received: from [10.154.161.202] ([10.154.161.202]) by mtv-core-3.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2P0RrmD006732 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=NO); Tue, 25 Mar 2014 00:27:53 GMT
From: Brian Weis <bew@cisco.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Date: Mon, 24 Mar 2014 17:27:53 -0700
Message-Id: <20EA5EFD-036D-4924-A206-849FE0B5B0BE@cisco.com>
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 6.6 \(1510\))
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1510)
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/FgWQN5TN-bYZsrafKthOGhhGvYI
Cc: draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-ecrit-trustworthy-location-09
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 00:27:56 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document identifies a number of threats and attacks when location =
data associated with an IP-based emergency services emergency service =
call. Three types of adversaries are identified, however only threats =
from malicious end host adversaries are addressed in this document. That =
is, adversaries which are themselves malicious, with or without the the =
awareness of the owner. Two types of threats from malicious hosts are =
discussed: location spoofing, where an adversary provides false location =
information in an emergency call; and identity spoofing, where a false =
network access identity or caller identity is claimed.

The document is useful and generally ready to publish. But I have the =
following suggestions that would improve reader comprehension.

Section 3 describes three "Solutions", which are perhaps better termed =
"Techniques to Mitigate Threats". I say this because each "Solution" =
lists caveats in the use of each technique, and there seems to be extant =
threats in each case. This is not a criticism of the proposed solutions, =
but rather a recognition that the document clearly states in each case =
that there are factors not in control of the LIS and/or Location =
Recipient that can reduce the trustworthiness of the location and/or =
identity information. So they are more properly mitigations, not =
solutions.

With the above comment in mind, the Abstract seems to overclaim a bit =
when it says "This document describes how to convey location in a manner =
that is inherently secure and reliable." It might be better to say =
something like "This document describes techniques that improve the =
reliability and security of location information conveyed in a IP-based =
emergency services emergency service call."

Section 5 "Security Considerations" contains a lot of good additional =
information on the consequences to attacks on emergency services, but =
for a document limiting itself to threats from hosts attacking the =
system I'm not sure why it discusses denial of service attacks to the =
infrastructure and attacks on the mapping architecture. This section =
could be clearer if this discussion was either removed or its relevance =
made clearer.

The definition for "Target" in Section 1.1 is a particularly important =
definition for this document but the definition is not actually present. =
It would benefit from a brief explanation of the term rather than just a =
pointer to RFC 3693!

Brian=


From nobody Tue Mar 25 06:12:16 2014
Return-Path: <adam@stoicsecurity.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 873381A011D for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 06:12:10 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.601
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.601 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=unavailable
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id vPkhObEB-oca for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 06:12:09 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-oa0-f52.google.com (mail-oa0-f52.google.com [209.85.219.52]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id EC8901A0110 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 06:12:08 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-oa0-f52.google.com with SMTP id l6so502367oag.25 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 06:12:07 -0700 (PDT)
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:from:content-type:content-transfer-encoding :subject:message-id:date:to:mime-version; bh=pRtRfFXDm0Wv8ynmGLtqOvSi6XdmjmBw/VsHsj4xtV0=; b=EdCy8qw42HbOj0eUkE7Wk7H4iYHP8dz+6mSJbTSLWl4dX/1KeI9WMGwcLBXotkvVpi N+C7PKbXMLlw2yRpjcS52LTcltrZXvfT7XxvIOi75DY5YDC8bzz87A4mFbVjhzqWvE66 wa5679c0cTvVkld/9x8IwTI8oZhUzpQxX2vN1LLrg2g/PHPM8kFr0sMWwFAlh0tinitq /RtO5hN6liTL7vTtV5WCPCfnc1lbK6UNm21ipfLtY05mGSpMUo/6zq1ShGGTCnGbKh/X vk8Y9+qo3RR40PBf4G2qCjPBec4f9xqXMp1l4vl/pD6RExvfzHSNT/teWZAWXPLegpvH f9wg==
X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQl9Dhvx4IE+TS3FJE3RMHJZiCv4OgT6p0nEFLeo+tdBpG47YkJ9kOXaA4y4bSqBuBZC/VMC
X-Received: by 10.182.33.35 with SMTP id o3mr58028558obi.15.1395753127617; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 06:12:07 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from ?IPv6:2602:306:3406:4f00:b9ff:6038:d65a:97ce? ([2602:306:3406:4f00:b9ff:6038:d65a:97ce]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPSA id m7sm30262700obo.7.2014.03.25.06.12.06 for <multiple recipients> (version=TLSv1 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-RC4-SHA bits=128/128); Tue, 25 Mar 2014 06:12:06 -0700 (PDT)
From: Adam Montville <adam@stoicsecurity.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <BBAA6390-DE3D-47C3-BF0F-AEE5838EBA64@stoicsecurity.com>
Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 08:12:04 -0500
To: iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext.all@tools.ietf.org
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.2 \(1874\))
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1874)
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/vpxXGXbD94g0YT6Myh3WyBTpGNo
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext-09
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 13:12:10 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =
 These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.
This draft is ready. =20
One non-blocking suggestion comes to mind.  It would be to add =
subsection references in draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext Section 9 (Security =
Considerations) to RFC5040 and RFC5042.  Such references might better =
describe how use of ULP Buffer addresses for the Remote Peer buffer =
addressing by Atomic Operations satisfies the security model described =
in RFC5042.
Regards,
Adam=


From nobody Tue Mar 25 13:13:36 2014
Return-Path: <ynir@checkpoint.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6A11A1A00CA; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 05:31:47 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -5.012
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.012 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_40=-0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id b3ujPT_mvFzr; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 05:31:46 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from smtp.checkpoint.com (smtp.checkpoint.com [194.29.34.68]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2E4701A00BE; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 05:31:45 -0700 (PDT)
x-m-msg: CPCHECK
Received: from DAG-EX10.ad.checkpoint.com ([194.29.34.150]) by smtp.checkpoint.com (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id s2PCVdfI003495; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 14:31:39 +0200
Received: from IL-EX10.ad.checkpoint.com ([169.254.2.26]) by DAG-EX10.ad.checkpoint.com ([169.254.3.228]) with mapi id 14.03.0123.003; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 14:31:40 +0200
From: Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com>
To: "<secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org>, "<iesg@ietf.org> IESG" <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-eman-framework.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-eman-framework.all@tools.ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: SECDIR review of draft-ietf-eman-framework-16
Thread-Index: Ac9IDP3a75Lz8KTcRSikp8TKfFQCWQ==
Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 12:31:38 +0000
Message-ID: <4613980CFC78314ABFD7F85CC30277213AFB6E5E@IL-EX10.ad.checkpoint.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [91.90.139.62]
x-kse-antivirus-interceptor-info: scan successful
x-kse-antivirus-info: Clean
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/R4UuYG6pcmb_75H-50S2H0_ByiU
X-Mailman-Approved-At: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 08:13:08 -0700
Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-eman-framework-16
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 12:31:47 -0000

Hi

I have now reviewed version -16.  The formatting problems are still present=
.

I think the security considerations does an OK job of enumerating the risks=
. It could use some stronger language, but the information is there.

Yoav=20


From nobody Tue Mar 25 14:17:41 2014
Return-Path: <shanna@juniper.net>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C12351A0236; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 14:17:33 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.601
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.601 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id FZnVlRxbt4vx; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 14:17:26 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from am1outboundpool.messaging.microsoft.com (am1ehsobe004.messaging.microsoft.com [213.199.154.207]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 10D7A1A0231; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 14:17:25 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail5-am1-R.bigfish.com (10.3.201.237) by AM1EHSOBE026.bigfish.com (10.3.207.148) with Microsoft SMTP Server id 14.1.225.22; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:24 +0000
Received: from mail5-am1 (localhost [127.0.0.1])	by mail5-am1-R.bigfish.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4B834140111;	Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:24 +0000 (UTC)
X-Forefront-Antispam-Report: CIP:157.56.240.101; KIP:(null); UIP:(null); IPV:NLI; H:BL2PRD0510HT005.namprd05.prod.outlook.com; RD:none; EFVD:NLI
X-SpamScore: -22
X-BigFish: VPS-22(zz9371I542I1432I4015Izz1f42h2148h208ch1ee6h1de0h1fdah2073h2146h1202h1e76h2189h1d1ah1d2ah21bch1fc6hzdchz1de098h1033IL8275dh1de097hz2fh109h2a8h839h944hd24hf0ah1220h1288h12a5h12a9h12bdh137ah13b6h1441h1504h1537h153bh162dh1631h1758h18e1h1946h19b5h19ceh1ad9h1b0ah224fh1d07h1d0ch1d2eh1d3fh1dc1h1de9h1dfeh1dffh1fe8h1ff5h2216h22d0h2336h2461h2487h24d7h2516h2545h255eh25cch25f6h2605h262fh268bh9a9j1155h)
Received-SPF: pass (mail5-am1: domain of juniper.net designates 157.56.240.101 as permitted sender) client-ip=157.56.240.101; envelope-from=shanna@juniper.net; helo=BL2PRD0510HT005.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ; .outlook.com ; 
X-Forefront-Antispam-Report-Untrusted: SFV:NSPM; SFS:(10009001)(6009001)(428001)(164054003)(13464003)(199002)(189002)(51704005)(377454003)(81342001)(74876001)(56816005)(69226001)(74316001)(92566001)(74366001)(90146001)(20776003)(63696002)(97186001)(97336001)(79102001)(2201001)(77982001)(59766001)(49866001)(81686001)(81816001)(80976001)(47976001)(4396001)(50986001)(47736001)(33646001)(83322001)(46102001)(54316002)(19580395003)(56776001)(76482001)(98676001)(93136001)(19580405001)(53806001)(51856001)(2656002)(87936001)(76176001)(86362001)(47446002)(74502001)(74662001)(94946001)(66066001)(31966008)(95416001)(93516002)(54356001)(81542001)(85852003)(80022001)(87266001)(85306002)(74706001)(83072002)(94316002)(95666003)(65816001)(76576001)(76786001)(76796001)(24736002); DIR:OUT; SFP:1101; SCL:1; SRVR:BLUPR05MB740; H:BLUPR05MB737.namprd05.prod.outlook.com; FPR:FEBCC4DE.D12570A.73D35DB7.44D1D1A1.20290; MLV:sfv; PTR:InfoNoRecords; A:1;  MX:1; LANG:en; 
Received: from mail5-am1 (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by mail5-am1 (MessageSwitch) id 1395782242696912_5231; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:22 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from AM1EHSMHS002.bigfish.com (unknown [10.3.201.243])	by mail5-am1.bigfish.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A40EE3E0116;	Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:22 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from BL2PRD0510HT005.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (157.56.240.101) by AM1EHSMHS002.bigfish.com (10.3.207.102) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.16.227.3; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:22 +0000
Received: from BLUPR05MB740.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.141.208.28) by BL2PRD0510HT005.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.255.100.40) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.16.423.0; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:22 +0000
Received: from BLUPR05MB737.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.141.208.17) by BLUPR05MB740.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.141.208.28) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 15.0.898.11; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:20 +0000
Received: from BLUPR05MB737.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ([10.141.208.17]) by BLUPR05MB737.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ([10.141.208.17]) with mapi id 15.00.0898.005; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:20 +0000
From: Stephen Hanna <shanna@juniper.net>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib.all@tools.ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: secdir review of draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib-11
Thread-Index: Ac7LmPjydxpNTDH1RCq+bXu7cbCCRR81Jwcg
Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:19 +0000
Message-ID: <dd06c63fdda6443a9b612d7270c75017@BLUPR05MB737.namprd05.prod.outlook.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [66.129.239.11]
x-forefront-prvs: 01613DFDC8
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-OriginatorOrg: juniper.net
X-FOPE-CONNECTOR: Id%0$Dn%*$RO%0$TLS%0$FQDN%$TlsDn%
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/KadlfUkBy0mnrpkzI0AByTfuy4Q
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib-11
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:17:34 -0000

I have reviewed the latest version of this document as part of
the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF
documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were
written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Neither of my comments below seems to have been addressed. In
addition, I did notice a few more typos that have been added
to the Security Considerations section:

* "destine" should be "destined"

* "does specifies" should be "does specify"

* "but these cases will vary dependent" should be "these cases
   will vary depending"

Other than these typos, the document looks fine from a security
perspective. In fact, I'm happy to see more and better commentary
in the Security Considerations section.

Thanks,

Steve

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Stephen Hanna
> Sent: Thursday, October 17, 2013 8:29 PM
> To: The IESG; secdir@ietf.org; 'draft-ietf-manet-smf-
> mib.all@tools.ietf.org'
> Subject: secdir review of draft-ietf-manet-smf-mib-08
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> While I am not an expert in SNMP, SMF, or MANET, I found this
> document to be well-written and easy to understand. More relevant
> to this review, the security of the protocol is adequate and
> the Security Considerations section is exemplary.
>=20
> I did notice two typos:
>=20
> * In the Security Considerations section, the commentary on
>   smfConfiguredOpMode includes the words "this writable
>   configuration objects define". This should end in "object
>   define", I think.
>=20
> * In the Security Considerations section, the commentary on
>   smfNhdpRssaMesgTLVIncluded includes the words "the the".
>   Of course, that should be just "the".
>=20
> With these corrections, I think the document is ready to publish.
>=20
> Thanks,
>=20
> Steve



From nobody Tue Mar 25 15:21:30 2014
Return-Path: <tlyu@mit.edu>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1A4DD1A0242; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 15:21:23 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.611
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.611 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id XgdgC7Ida9dz; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 15:21:21 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu [18.9.25.14]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9EA4A1A0168; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 15:21:20 -0700 (PDT)
X-AuditID: 1209190e-f79ee6d000000c40-7f-5332015f297e
Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) (using TLS with cipher AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-3.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id EC.A7.03136.F5102335; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 18:21:19 -0400 (EDT)
Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id s2PMLHm9021716; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 18:21:18 -0400
Received: from cathode-dark-space.mit.edu (cathode-dark-space.mit.edu [18.18.1.96]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as tlyu@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id s2PMLE8E002246 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 25 Mar 2014 18:21:15 -0400
Received: (from tlyu@localhost) by cathode-dark-space.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id s2PMLDEC017657; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 18:21:13 -0400 (EDT)
To: iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-abfab-arch.all@tools.ietf.org
From: Tom Yu <tlyu@MIT.EDU>
Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 18:21:13 -0400
Message-ID: <ldvsiq5apie.fsf@cathode-dark-space.mit.edu>
Lines: 22
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFjrLIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrBvPaBRscHEJl8XaNadYLGb8mchs 8WHhQxYHZo8lS34yeXy5/JktgCmKyyYlNSezLLVI3y6BK+P34YKCoxwVj95fZG1g/M7WxcjJ ISFgInFo0TZmCFtM4sK99UBxLg4hgdlMEtc6PzFBOBsZJVqWH2OEcM4xSUw+uxEq08Uo0f9g I1i/iICPxMZJc5lAbGEBU4nnz6YDxTk42ASkJY4uLgMJswioSrx6d4cdxOYVsJB4ueEYWDmP AKdE7+GprBBxQYmTM5+wgNjMAloSN/69ZJrAyDcLSWoWktQCRqZVjLIpuVW6uYmZOcWpybrF yYl5ealFusZ6uZkleqkppZsYwaEmybeD8etBpUOMAhyMSjy8EyYYBguxJpYVV+YeYpTkYFIS 5f33ByjEl5SfUpmRWJwRX1Sak1p8iFGCg1lJhPfDPaAcb0piZVVqUT5MSpqDRUmcV55DO1hI ID2xJDU7NbUgtQgmK8PBoSTBu5TBKFhIsCg1PbUiLTOnBCHNxMEJMpwHaDgLSA1vcUFibnFm OkT+FKOilDivKUhCACSRUZoH1wtLBa8YxYFeEebtBaniAaYRuO5XQIOZgAaHN+mBDC5JREhJ NTAuT08p0BabvWy7aG9DSWHGY/7VgpwJlie/7r4UdlLw9sLPC1NSuE8/W3Q0VHfyhAb9/1+r 3P2kJ+x40CXfcvOD+kHHxV3bbP53vdWxfXtdqu5ZkqtAaLt+T5eizcJq48aPxdsmCG2dtmnG RaWDD1IlU/dGfBFVa3tZFPPO5q+D/K7Qr517msuVWIozEg21mIuKEwFTYjEt4AIAAA==
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/7VVJrBgSv2isNJRYi1CyovTnMko
Subject: [secdir] secdir re-review of draft-ietf-abfab-arch-12
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Mar 2014 22:21:23 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: ready with nits

The Security Considerations (section 5) no longer has the placeholder
text from the -10 version.  The text describing the detailed security
properties of the various communication channels appears to be gone,
possibly replaced by summaries in section 4.  Other items listed in
the "to be addressed" paragraph from -10 appear to have been covered
by new text.

I'm not sure whether the removed text describing the security
properties of the communication channels was completely redundant with
text in section 4, but some of it seems close, so the current state
might be good enough.  What is the authors' belief about that?

There appears to be a author's query labeled [CREF1]; has that
question been resolved?


From nobody Tue Mar 25 21:15:51 2014
Return-Path: <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B13221A00A9; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:15:48 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.75
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.75 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_ENVFROM_END_DIGIT=0.25, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id izqils48BIt8; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:15:47 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-oa0-x22e.google.com (mail-oa0-x22e.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4003:c02::22e]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9195E1A0083; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:15:47 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-oa0-f46.google.com with SMTP id i7so1841844oag.33 for <multiple recipients>; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:15:46 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=mime-version:from:date:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type;  bh=WKE4EzcF9FpcOqGO089ejH5reLiXEQfQhp5yT9zTy9U=; b=i52DP0Lx3ytr+a/RCmLWCwvqgKeO1bPRKWKNiKxFzcOWTAeMEyd/Aj9w4RMuz90K4l zLaOXJQABAeZpwy5GCCa8CQCWtZFtJ0ZlE869uLViithmscc5w8y3pIThjyu0lM+R+1P TB990Ma9wACIxgvasPtd63Qal06sfrxekQotxGOTaXUq8kuvBf3AzgUpdcNRAFW5TsL7 q7zZG6RBB9P7bAuP+GZV8h6P+12AYCA50B4764Dwxdsg+zQnNieepL563cc2hOmpIevT XdVc2TVleR9afRkgxAjuTWFlKmxpTvI0qeeU4qhzKYqhOjHGV1InKymL8yDCjPlsg/1D JvvQ==
X-Received: by 10.182.220.7 with SMTP id ps7mr35536983obc.23.1395807346210; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:15:46 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Received: by 10.76.23.138 with HTTP; Tue, 25 Mar 2014 21:15:26 -0700 (PDT)
From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:15:26 -0400
Message-ID: <CAF4+nEFH=KK_aOGfm_SLfhGOu+DjG10npCremtqQDC=SLvz4GA@mail.gmail.com>
To: "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos@tools.ietf.org
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/QVHv0xTvTL_4mCobXMZmpOxgoOk
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Subject: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-11
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 04:15:49 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

This draft specifies Quality of Service options for Proxy Mobile IPv6
along with appropriate new status codes and other protocol
considerations. These options are carried in Proxy Binding Update
messages to which a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement is sent in response.

The Security Considerations section refers to earlier RFCs (5213 and
7077). There earlier RFCs do appear to provide adequate security for
the messages involved. And, on thinking about it, I tend to agree with
the assertion that "The quality of service option when included in
these signaling messages does not require additional security
considerations." If it were me, I would add a few words about how, if
the Proxy Binding Update/Acknowledgement protocol is not secured, you
can do worse things than change the quality of service. However, while
the Security Considerations section feels quite minimal, it does
appear to be adequate.

Thanks,
Donald
=============================
 Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
 d3e3e3@gmail.com


From nobody Wed Mar 26 00:27:59 2014
Return-Path: <jouni.nospam@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C69E41A02A8; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:27:57 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9,  DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, FREEMAIL_REPLY=1, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id Tl8yVsgNB3eH; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:27:56 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-la0-x22c.google.com (mail-la0-x22c.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4010:c03::22c]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1C14A1A008A; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:27:55 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-la0-f44.google.com with SMTP id hr13so1181997lab.17 for <multiple recipients>; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:27:54 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113;  h=content-type:mime-version:subject:from:in-reply-to:date:cc :content-transfer-encoding:message-id:references:to; bh=Wehb/WqxFq0NZt0b7nQ8alTWc1KMs12dWEHIKEwGhuE=; b=qAz7YkxYUeAruYFcMhrwm2bwQQPREexB3oHOJpkyDwqazsRlXaCEurwxQdIQdoAya2 mHcNJDt7GwhdqMHcf+3UMIlGzIEg9Ygu8c1F4CFJkJCJhC3Lnn+2L/KtDFi7c0yUL+Bc EROq1O+K/CABQXEXLJ2tskgko+/kgmElGhyhwVfAGa4WN3M6iTUQDg2LDUGEz6nPd7oG 3MlaomfX1W4A+z28dw+Nc8+9p+LyN0tgWnLCsc8cynptR8ouy+U3xxj7Z5I4p2lH3SBF QEP1nhcgAWxOJQ0mC57TnC5IIJSBy4sMjblvHIeaEyHtCLX26jXgRgPA0K9SkBgbuAhd HiaQ==
X-Received: by 10.152.172.103 with SMTP id bb7mr160666lac.49.1395818874203; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:27:54 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from [188.117.15.107] ([188.117.15.107]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPSA id jm3sm4864238lbc.29.2014.03.26.00.27.50 for <multiple recipients> (version=TLSv1 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-RC4-SHA bits=128/128); Wed, 26 Mar 2014 00:27:51 -0700 (PDT)
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 6.6 \(1510\))
From: Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAF4+nEFH=KK_aOGfm_SLfhGOu+DjG10npCremtqQDC=SLvz4GA@mail.gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 09:27:49 +0200
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Message-Id: <1B841F73-3460-436D-AF64-19ED3901771D@gmail.com>
References: <CAF4+nEFH=KK_aOGfm_SLfhGOu+DjG10npCremtqQDC=SLvz4GA@mail.gmail.com>
To: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1510)
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/ZbaRyZS8r_DuJ3QIEKtIsUK27_o
Cc: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-11
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 07:27:58 -0000

Donald,

Thanks for the review. I agree what you say but I think an extra warning
is not necessary. If an operator deliberately turns off the signaling
security, he would probably do so regardless of any warning.

- Jouni



On Mar 26, 2014, at 6:15 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> This draft specifies Quality of Service options for Proxy Mobile IPv6
> along with appropriate new status codes and other protocol
> considerations. These options are carried in Proxy Binding Update
> messages to which a Proxy Binding Acknowledgement is sent in response.
> 
> The Security Considerations section refers to earlier RFCs (5213 and
> 7077). There earlier RFCs do appear to provide adequate security for
> the messages involved. And, on thinking about it, I tend to agree with
> the assertion that "The quality of service option when included in
> these signaling messages does not require additional security
> considerations." If it were me, I would add a few words about how, if
> the Proxy Binding Update/Acknowledgement protocol is not secured, you
> can do worse things than change the quality of service. However, while
> the Security Considerations section feels quite minimal, it does
> appear to be adequate.
> 
> Thanks,
> Donald
> =============================
> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
> d3e3e3@gmail.com


From nobody Wed Mar 26 08:37:44 2014
Return-Path: <aland@deployingradius.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BAFB11A0306; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 08:37:40 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.9
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.9 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id Rya9RdthCRbZ; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 08:37:35 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from power.freeradius.org (power.freeradius.org [88.190.25.44]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 21A8F1A016A; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 08:37:35 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by power.freeradius.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 74E6E224014F; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 16:37:33 +0100 (CET)
X-Virus-Scanned: Debian amavisd-new at power.freeradius.org
Received: from power.freeradius.org ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (power.freeradius.org [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id MyNn+lunxR6d; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 16:37:33 +0100 (CET)
Received: from Thor.local (bas1-ottawa11-1176224686.dsl.bell.ca [70.27.195.174]) by power.freeradius.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 772F32240082; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 16:37:32 +0100 (CET)
Message-ID: <5332F43B.7040404@deployingradius.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 11:37:31 -0400
From: Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com>
User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.24 (Macintosh/20100228)
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, IESG IESG <iesg@ietf.org>,  draft-ietf-appsawg-xml-mediatypes.all@tools.ietf.org
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/NyrfvTNriY-dhO6hRITShY7BZMA
Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-xml-mediatypes
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 15:37:41 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Section 2.2:

   UTF-32 has four potential serializations, of which only two (UTF-32BE
   and UTF-32LE) are given names in in [UNICODE].  Support for the
   various serializations varies widely, and security concerns about
   their use have been raised.

- It would be good to have a reference for the security concerns, or
perhaps a little more discussion.

Section 3

   Other MIME agents will not be XML-aware, and thus cannot know
   anything about the XML encoding declaration.  Not only do they lack
   one of the three sources of information about encoding, they are also
   less likely to be aware of or responsive to this spec.

- it may be useful to discuss how an XML-unware MIME agent will handle
the XML documents.  e.g. do they usually pass the document through
unaltered?  Do they mangle the document, changing it's meaning?  Are
there recommendations for what they should do?

   Some MIME agents, such as proxies and transcoders, both consume and
   produce MIME entities.

- it may be use to have recommendations for what MIME agents should do
(or not) when they want to proxy XML messages, without examining them.

Section 10

   Security considerations will vary by domain of use.  For example, XML
   medical records will have much more stringent privacy and security
   considerations than XML library metadata.  Similarly, use of XML as a
   parameter marshalling syntax necessitates a case by case security
   review.

- it would be good to make recommendations here.  e.g. standards for XML
medical records SHOULD have limitations on which external XML libraries
can be used.  A few paragraphs earlier, this section has the following text:

    Thus,
   the security of any XML document is vitally dependent on all of the
   documents recursively referenced by that document.

- the only way to ensure security of XML records is to control which
documents they reference.  This doesn't matter much for some situations,
where the possible attacks are minor.  It can matter enormously for more
critical situations, like medical records.

   XML may also have some of the same security concerns as plain text.
   Like plain text, XML can contain escape sequences that, when
   displayed, have the potential to change the display processor
   environment in ways that adversely affect subsequent operations.
   Possible effects include, but are not limited to, locking the
   keyboard, changing display parameters so subsequent displayed text is
   unreadable, or even changing display parameters to deliberately
   obscure or distort subsequent displayed material so that its meaning
   is lost or altered.  Display processors SHOULD either filter such
   material from displayed text or else make sure to reset all important
   settings after a given display operation is complete.

- I would suggest changing the SHOULD to a MUST.  The display processor
MUST by default filter such material, or be sure to reset all settings.
 The filter MAY be administratively controlled.  i.e. the user can turn
it off.

   As such, the ability to program keys
   SHOULD be blocked either by filtering or by disabling the ability to
   program keys entirely.

- the same comment as above applies here

   However, even non-
   recursive expansions may cause problems with the finite computing
   resources of computers, if they are performed many times.  For
   example, consider the case where XML-entity A consists of 100 copies
   of XML-entity B, which in turn consists of 100 copies of XML-entity
   C, and so on.

- it would be good to make specific recommendations here.  e.g. XML
processors SHOULD administratively limit the number of XML entities they
will process from one document.  This limitation SHOULD be configurable.
 Where possible, the XML processors may also prompt the end user when
this limit is reached, to see if they should continue processing the
document.


From nobody Wed Mar 26 15:39:15 2014
Return-Path: <prvs=1551fcbe4=schmidt@informatik.haw-hamburg.de>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3EE4D1A03D9; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 14:07:12 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.56
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.56 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HELO_EQ_DE=0.35, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id AnrWvUIy5HHQ; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 14:07:09 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mx6.haw-public.haw-hamburg.de (mx6.haw-public.haw-hamburg.de [141.22.6.3]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BC94E1A03D1; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 14:07:08 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mailgate.informatik.haw-hamburg.de ([141.22.30.74]) by mail6.is.haw-hamburg.de with ESMTP/TLS/ADH-AES256-SHA; 26 Mar 2014 22:07:06 +0100
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mailgate.informatik.haw-hamburg.de (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6FDE310679D7; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 22:07:06 +0100 (CET)
Received: from mailgate.informatik.haw-hamburg.de ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (mailgate.informatik.haw-hamburg.de [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id 21793-09; Wed, 26 Mar 2014 22:07:05 +0100 (CET)
Received: from [141.22.28.186] (unknown [141.22.28.186]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES128-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mailgate.informatik.haw-hamburg.de (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 2A2BC10679CF;  Wed, 26 Mar 2014 22:07:04 +0100 (CET)
Message-ID: <53334175.8080807@informatik.haw-hamburg.de>
Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 22:07:01 +0100
From: "Thomas C. Schmidt" <schmidt@informatik.haw-hamburg.de>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.4.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com>,  "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>,  draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source.all@tools.ietf.org
References: <CAFOuuo4wkvJduL2-6NOyzB_Bv5QrETMwONgC2aVdcFwzRQ-Njg@mail.gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <CAFOuuo4wkvJduL2-6NOyzB_Bv5QrETMwONgC2aVdcFwzRQ-Njg@mail.gmail.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
X-Virus-Scanned: by amavisd-new at informatik.haw-hamburg.de
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/dqAebyg0IRwXWGcHkWYkPdyBQls
X-Mailman-Approved-At: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 15:39:13 -0700
Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 21:07:12 -0000

Dear Radia,

thanks for your review and please apologize our late reply.

Please see answers inline.

On 18.03.2014 05:17, Radia Perlman wrote:
>
>
>
> On Tue, Dec 17, 2013 at 7:11 PM, Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com
> <mailto:radiaperlman@gmail.com>> wrote:
>
>     I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>     ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>     IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>     security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>     these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> This document combines mobile IPv6 with multicast.  It's unnecessarily
> difficult to read.  There should be a section upfront expanding all the
> acronyms, at the very least.  For instance, MLD, PMIPv6, PIM, MAG, HNP.
>   Some of these (like MAG) are expanded in the text the first time they
> are used, but most are not, and people aren't necessarily going to
> remember it because of seeing it once, and there's no downside to having
> a section in the introduction called "acronyms".
>

I'm sorry that reading was troublesome. We have taken up your suggestion 
to add the list of acronyms. However, this draft builds on two rather 
large subject areas, Multicast and Mobility Management. Retelling only 
the core ideas of the protocols involved in this work would extend the 
document to a rather unpleasant volume ...

> It also wouldn't hurt to explain "proxy mobile IPv6 domains"  (not just
> expand the acronym PMIPv6).
>

Proxy Mobile IPv6 Domain = region of PMIPv6 deployment ... this is a 
very common term in our area. Considering the target audience of this 
document ( i.e., people who deploy or implement PMIPv6), I would rather 
not burden the document with corresponding explanations.

> I admit I don't completely understand this document, because I didn't
> want to have to read all the other documents that this thing assumes you
> understand, but I think I get the general idea.
>
> I think the security considerations section covers most of the
> downsides, but it doesn't talk about how multicast in general can
> amplify DOS packets.  And with mobility, there are two problems with
> having a proxy sending the multicast (unless it's tunneled, which would
> be OK).  If packets with an IP source address can come from a different
> location, then loops won't be detected (the security considerations
> section mentions that), but also, it's harder for the infrastructure to
> filter out packets from forged IP addresses.
>

The issue you raise (changing source IP addresses) is present at the 
early MIPv4 protocol. In contrast, mobile senders in PMIPv6 tunnel their 
packets to a mobility anchor, the LMA, and thus never need to change 
their source address. Consequently, there is no additional threat 
introduced from topologically invalid or unstable IP addresses. Ingress 
or egress filtering can be applied with PMIPv6 just as in the fixed 
Internet.

Changes to the document as described above will be part of the next 
submission.

Best regards,

Thomas
-- 

Prof. Dr. Thomas C. Schmidt
° Hamburg University of Applied Sciences                   Berliner Tor 7 °
° Dept. Informatik, Internet Technologies Group    20099 Hamburg, Germany °
° http://www.haw-hamburg.de/inet                   Fon: +49-40-42875-8452 °
° http://www.informatik.haw-hamburg.de/~schmidt    Fax: +49-40-42875-8409 °


From nobody Thu Mar 27 04:23:05 2014
Return-Path: <kivinen@iki.fi>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id CA3BE1A064D for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 04:23:03 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -0.012
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.012 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_20=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id n2YfVW2K7BKP for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 04:23:00 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail.kivinen.iki.fi (fireball.kivinen.iki.fi [IPv6:2001:1bc8:100d::2]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E9321A064B for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 04:22:59 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.14.5) with ESMTP id s2RBMt9K012973 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 13:22:55 +0200 (EET)
Received: (from kivinen@localhost) by fireball.kivinen.iki.fi (8.14.7/8.12.11) id s2RBMtVU001018; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 13:22:55 +0200 (EET)
X-Authentication-Warning: fireball.kivinen.iki.fi: kivinen set sender to kivinen@iki.fi using -f
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Message-ID: <21300.2575.72550.808757@fireball.kivinen.iki.fi>
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 13:22:55 +0200
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: secdir@ietf.org
X-Edit-Time: 1 min
X-Total-Time: 0 min
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/C_OEskS303wmxKKffvcgTNHU8po
Subject: [secdir] Assignments
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
Reply-To: secdir-secretary@mit.edu
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 11:23:04 -0000

Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Leif Johansson is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2014-03-27

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Scott Kelly            TR2013-05-29 draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-14
Catherine Meadows      TR2014-02-17 draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
Zach Shelby            T 2013-08-30 draft-kaplan-insipid-session-id-04
Ondrej Sury            T 2014-02-27 draft-ietf-ippm-testplan-rfc2680-04


For telechat 2014-04-03

Derek Atkins           T 2014-03-12 draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-06
Sandy Murphy           T 2014-03-05 draft-melnikov-smime-msa-to-mda-04


For telechat 2014-04-10

Rob Austein            T 2014-03-24 draft-ietf-cdni-framework-10

Last calls and special requests:

Shawn Emery            E 2014-03-27 draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08
Dorothy Gellert          2014-04-01 draft-ietf-pcp-dhcp-09
Tobias Gondrom           2014-03-27 draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-07
Phillip Hallam-Baker     2014-04-01 draft-ietf-trill-esadi-06
Steve Hanna              2014-03-28 draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-loss-conceal-10
Dan Harkins              2014-04-08 draft-ietf-idr-aigp-16
David Harrington         2014-04-03 draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04
Sam Hartman              2014-04-08 draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-ldp-mac-opt-11
Paul Hoffman             2014-04-07 draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv-07
Jeffrey Hutzelman      E 2013-11-21 draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-05
Jeffrey Hutzelman        2014-04-09 draft-ietf-mpls-psc-updates-03
Chris Inacio             2014-04-07 draft-ietf-opsec-lla-only-07
Julien Laganier        E 2013-11-21 draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-11
Russ Mundy               2014-03-24 draft-mahalingam-dutt-dcops-vxlan-08
Sandy Murphy             2013-12-17 draft-ietf-netmod-iana-timezones-03
Vincent Roca             2014-02-25 draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01
Carl Wallace             2014-03-14 draft-drage-sipping-rfc3455bis-13
Brian Weis             E 2014-01-16 draft-ietf-radext-dynamic-discovery-11
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi


From nobody Thu Mar 27 07:34:22 2014
Return-Path: <ietfdbh@comcast.net>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 81BEB1A071A for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 07:34:21 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -0.111
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.111 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_40=-0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id evPsAoIXoKFm for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 07:34:20 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from QMTA11.westchester.pa.mail.comcast.net (qmta11.westchester.pa.mail.comcast.net [IPv6:2001:558:fe14:44:76:96:59:211]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E686C1A06C1 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 07:34:19 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from omta20.westchester.pa.mail.comcast.net ([76.96.62.71]) by QMTA11.westchester.pa.mail.comcast.net with comcast id icDn1n0011YDfWL5BeaHMP; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 14:34:17 +0000
Received: from JV6RVH1 ([67.189.237.137]) by omta20.westchester.pa.mail.comcast.net with comcast id ieaH1n00R2yZEBF3geaH4c; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 14:34:17 +0000
From: "ietfdbh" <ietfdbh@comcast.net>
To: <draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation.all@tools.ietf.org>, <iesg@ietf.org>,  <secdir@ietf.org>
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 10:34:02 -0400
Message-ID: <018e01cf49c9$99a2a120$cce7e360$@comcast.net>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0
Thread-Index: Ac9JxVzucOfxmxC2RyKubfXNixV2gA==
Content-Language: en-us
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=comcast.net; s=q20140121; t=1395930857; bh=l4VzVqXh/2WeB0Apmgcet79533vSXivRMxd8fphAEVQ=; h=Received:Received:From:To:Subject:Date:Message-ID:MIME-Version: Content-Type; b=s769DnLayzF1Z2+IL9QCF86XVTYumlcYepFa51APssVORXcRFGLwAJfrWEvbygqh5 j5fJbzJ21yaD+ygCHPxkyOixAzFtu5KHtB4vz6FHtOu+4nHYrbSLUvmb2OEdnal3cA 1yQpv2TJ7Mjto97qUiJtH5G3gxFbTbjYt6IAb6bmmMB9EhW7gwKmyWVOw63CsF+L6i JBMKDXig9JFyhQVkWAVZe3v6heOr1mxUk3rdI0bCSs3YBNe2VmxmPhHstBCuZZEVfc 6tpehpFYYS+rjYp36FfV0XtmQGz11jM5AfVTt9MfPLSMawFtghkw8N7mCE/1wkDXSH spAFWNXGXKR7Q==
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/TnmzcjCFKWj6nWhuzRCwLbDU_oA
Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 14:34:21 -0000

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document reserves the highest-valued 32-bit AS number for an unknown
future use.
>From a security standpoint, since it says don't use it, and doesn't say what
it will be used for in the future, it creates no new security issues. When a
special use is standardized for this AS number, then associated security
risk presumably will be documented.
The document tells operators not to use this reserved value, but tells
implementers they should not consider its use to be a protocol error.
This is equivalent to having a reserved bit in a message format, but this
relates to an IANA registration so needs separate documentation.

I'm a bit surprised the document has an intended status of Informational,
but is being requested in the shepherd writeup to be published as PS or BCP.
Reviewers might assume this only requires the level of review associated
with an Informational doc rather than PS or BCP.

The document is well-written and ready to advance.

David Harrington
ietfdbh@comcast.net
+1-603-828-1401


From nobody Thu Mar 27 14:48:40 2014
Return-Path: <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B71AC1A06F6; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 14:48:37 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.909
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.909 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id yIbg1J87pdec; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 14:48:31 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from ccs.nrl.navy.mil (mx0.ccs.nrl.navy.mil [132.250.118.211]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id DA9FB1A03DA; Thu, 27 Mar 2014 14:48:30 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from ashurbanipal.fw5540.net (fw5540.nrl.navy.mil [132.250.196.100]) by ccs.nrl.navy.mil (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id s2RLmRF9018702 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=NOT); Thu, 27 Mar 2014 17:48:28 -0400
From: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_444A3BA6-0CCC-44A0-A744-4D52479BCF3E"
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 17:48:27 -0400
Message-Id: <05273ED7-A4DE-4A14-8754-BC228FC036F6@nrl.navy.mil>
To: secdir@ietf.org, iesg@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dmm-requirements.all@tools.ietf.org
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.2 \(1874\))
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1874)
X-CCS-MailScanner: No viruses found.
X-CCS-MailScanner-Info: See: http://www.nrl.navy.mil/ccs/support/email
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/C7F2H-ed54Xv2xWGoDVUnmI8_mo
Subject: [secdir] review of draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-15
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2014 21:48:38 -0000

--Apple-Mail=_444A3BA6-0CCC-44A0-A744-4D52479BCF3E
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Content-Type: text/plain;
	charset=us-ascii

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The authors have not only implemented the changes I suggested but have
improved on my suggestions, so I have no further recommendations.


Sorry, Anthony, that I missed your email.  I need to set up some sort of =
alert system to
notify me of replies to my reviews.

Cathy

Catherine Meadows
Naval Research Laboratory
Code 5543
4555 Overlook Ave., S.W.
Washington DC, 20375
phone: 202-767-3490
fax: 202-404-7942
email: catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil


--Apple-Mail=_444A3BA6-0CCC-44A0-A744-4D52479BCF3E
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Content-Type: text/html;
	charset=us-ascii

<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;">I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's<br>ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the<br>IESG. &nbsp;These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the<br>security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs should treat<br>these comments just like any other last call comments.<div><br></div><div>The authors have not only implemented the changes I suggested but have</div><div>improved on my suggestions, so I have no further recommendations.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Sorry, Anthony, that I missed your email. &nbsp;I need to set up some sort of alert system to</div><div>notify me of replies to my reviews.</div><div><br></div><div>Cathy</div><div><br><div apple-content-edited="true">
<span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; font-size: 12px; border-spacing: 0px;">Catherine Meadows<br>Naval Research Laboratory<br>Code 5543<br>4555 Overlook Ave., S.W.<br>Washington DC, 20375<br>phone: 202-767-3490<br>fax: 202-404-7942<br>email:&nbsp;<a href="mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil">catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a></span>

</div>
<br></div></body></html>
--Apple-Mail=_444A3BA6-0CCC-44A0-A744-4D52479BCF3E--


From nobody Fri Mar 28 11:35:00 2014
Return-Path: <new-work-bounces@ietf.org>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietf.org
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 639D01A0979; Fri, 28 Mar 2014 11:32:31 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=ietf.org; s=ietf1; t=1396031551; bh=elKZaep/DOLU42rccRcNFbrcN6vrhzG6Ygm1IKcCjwY=; h=MIME-Version:From:To:Message-ID:Date:Subject:Reply-To:List-Id: List-Unsubscribe:List-Archive:List-Post:List-Help:List-Subscribe: Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding:Sender; b=b/EGzEJk9uL6SWeQiYrhONDc0R9kss0nT9/m6pMec4aH0r7XJoe1H8TyBIgyIFvAv HCFkcKsfReXcVhFkLCxLW/+nDXK+gPEd+VJ+E5s9s8Bjolb6hzFgfoWtp+vMQXe0Ju 4HGHqQAv30BsSwz7Ln7HznHKg9GjAaodRwwY1cHU=
X-Original-To: new-work@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: new-work@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 845A51A0959; Fri, 28 Mar 2014 11:32:27 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.9
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.9 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id hk1KE8_Hswlp; Fri, 28 Mar 2014 11:32:25 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E12DC1A0961; Fri, 28 Mar 2014 11:32:25 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
From: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
To: new-work@ietf.org
X-Test-IDTracker: no
X-IETF-IDTracker: 5.2.0
Auto-Submitted: auto-generated
Precedence: bulk
Message-ID: <20140328183225.28807.36480.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
Date: Fri, 28 Mar 2014 11:32:25 -0700
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/new-work/Iae-RpUof8rQnlYIm_D6PVnrtAE
X-BeenThere: new-work@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Errors-To: new-work-bounces@ietf.org
Sender: "new-work" <new-work-bounces@ietf.org>
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/vgjOJpEYVJeMH47efoFhY159bGA
X-Mailman-Approved-At: Fri, 28 Mar 2014 11:34:57 -0700
Subject: [secdir] [new-work] WG Review: DiffServ Applied to RTP Transports (dart)
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
Reply-To: iesg@ietf.org
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 28 Mar 2014 18:32:31 -0000

A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Real-time Applications
and Infrastructure Area. The IESG has not made any determination yet. The
following draft charter was submitted, and is provided for informational
purposes only. Please send your comments to the IESG mailing list (iesg
at ietf.org) by 2014-04-07.

DiffServ Applied to RTP Transports (dart)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Proposed WG

Chairs:
  Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>

Technical advisors:
  Martin Stiemerling <mls.ietf@gmail.com>

Assigned Area Director:
  Richard Barnes <rlb@ipv.sx>

Mailing list
  Address: dart@ietf.org
  To Subscribe: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dart
  Archive: http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/dart/

Charter:

DART - DiffServ Applied to Real-time Transports

Differentiated Services (DiffServ) and DiffServ code points (DSCP) can be
used in some situations to provide quality of service (QoS). Packets with
different markings can be reordered, which can cause poor interaction
with a transport protocol that is sensitive to reordering. When RTP
streams or other real-time media (sub-)flows are used with different DSCP
values with the same transport 5-tuple, there may be transport protocol
interactions. There are also environments where the DSCP markings are
removed or remarked.

This WG will write a document that explains the limitations that exist
with DiffServ when used with RTP in general as well in the specific
RTCWeb cases. The WG will coordinate with relevant WGs, including TSVWG,
AVTCORE, MMUSIC, CLUE, RTCWEB, and RMCAT.

Milestones:
Aug 2014 - Send Informational draft to IESG on DiffServ usage
consideration

Milestones:


_______________________________________________
new-work mailing list
new-work@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/new-work


From nobody Sun Mar 30 13:45:03 2014
Return-Path: <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id F0BB41A08D5 for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 13:45:01 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: 0.053
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=0.053 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_05=-0.5, HELO_MISMATCH_COM=0.553] autolearn=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id IEw2PiX2Qrte for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 13:45:00 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from hoffman.proper.com (IPv6.Hoffman.Proper.COM [IPv6:2605:8e00:100:41::81]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id AE2711A07D7 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 13:45:00 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from [10.20.30.90] (50-1-98-175.dsl.dynamic.sonic.net [50.1.98.175]) (authenticated bits=0) by hoffman.proper.com (8.14.8/8.14.7) with ESMTP id s2UKitbQ010514 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=NO) for <secdir@ietf.org>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 13:44:57 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from paul.hoffman@vpnc.org)
X-Authentication-Warning: hoffman.proper.com: Host 50-1-98-175.dsl.dynamic.sonic.net [50.1.98.175] claimed to be [10.20.30.90]
From: Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <6FF53033-2513-4672-8EE1-52483DE6F114@vpnc.org>
Date: Sun, 30 Mar 2014 13:44:54 -0700
To: secdir <secdir@ietf.org>
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.2 \(1874\))
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1874)
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/Heq67q87cPrImJGxFDWhSGswcC0
Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 30 Mar 2014 20:45:02 -0000

This draft describes adding a TTL to MPLS LSP pings. There are no =
significant security considerations to this protocol addition. The =
Security Considerations section talks about the possibility of a DoS =
based on this new attribute, but also acknowledges that the the same DoS =
was already possible. So: no security concerns at all.

--Paul Hoffman=


From nobody Sun Mar 30 15:31:03 2014
Return-Path: <shawn.emery@oracle.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 945451A07DF; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 15:31:00 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.21
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.21 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id CSBB-AR_7uwj; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 15:30:58 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from aserp1040.oracle.com (aserp1040.oracle.com [141.146.126.69]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8F0381A0344; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 15:30:58 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from acsinet22.oracle.com (acsinet22.oracle.com [141.146.126.238]) by aserp1040.oracle.com (Sentrion-MTA-4.3.2/Sentrion-MTA-4.3.2) with ESMTP id s2UMUnI0007780 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=OK); Sun, 30 Mar 2014 22:30:52 GMT
Received: from aserz7022.oracle.com (aserz7022.oracle.com [141.146.126.231]) by acsinet22.oracle.com (8.14.4+Sun/8.14.4) with ESMTP id s2UMUmeu003920 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Sun, 30 Mar 2014 22:30:49 GMT
Received: from abhmp0008.oracle.com (abhmp0008.oracle.com [141.146.116.14]) by aserz7022.oracle.com (8.14.4+Sun/8.14.4) with ESMTP id s2UMUmBJ003917; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 22:30:48 GMT
Received: from [10.159.126.144] (/10.159.126.144) by default (Oracle Beehive Gateway v4.0) with ESMTP ; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 15:30:48 -0700
Message-ID: <53389B18.9060305@oracle.com>
Date: Sun, 30 Mar 2014 16:30:48 -0600
From: Shawn M Emery <shawn.emery@oracle.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; SunOS i86pc; rv:17.0) Gecko/20140222 Thunderbird/17.0.6
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: secdir@ietf.org
References: <52DEB7D6.6050308@oracle.com>
In-Reply-To: <52DEB7D6.6050308@oracle.com>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------030306010200060501040800"
X-Source-IP: acsinet22.oracle.com [141.146.126.238]
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/9o3I_Y2UcjY-4xUK544KpY4Eiyc
Cc: iesg@ietf.org, draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 30 Mar 2014 22:31:00 -0000

This is a multi-part message in MIME format.
--------------030306010200060501040800
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This experimental draft describes a way for TCP to include data in the SYN and SYN-ACK
exchanges when establishing an initial connection.  As you've probably already guessed
there are number security ramifications with this feature.  One is that the server
applications receive the SYN packet before the three-way handshake is complete.
This opens up various DoS attacks that would otherwise be thwarted by TCP filtering,
receive queues, etc.

The proposed solution against such attacks involves a server derived MAC that the client
requests during a TCP connection establishment.  The client subsequently uses this MAC in
subsequent three-way handshakes with the server.

The security considerations section does exist and reiterates the DoS attacks that this
protocol opens.  To help prevent DoS attacks the server keeps track of pending requests
and compares this against PendingFastOpenRequests in order to limit resources taken by
an attacker.  If the limit is exceeded then the protocol reverts to regular TCP, which
has the traditional techniques to thwart SYN floods.  The section goes on to state that another
possible attack would be to trick a number of servers to send a large response to an unsuspecting
host.  It prescribes that the server could not respond with data until the handshake completes.
I believe the various risks associated with this protocol are outlined in the draft and provides
sufficient techniques for mitigating against such attacks.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

s/cause firewall/causing firewall/
s/case it may/cases it may/

Shawn.
--


--------------030306010200060501040800
Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit

<html>
  <head>
    <meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html;
      charset=ISO-8859-1">
  </head>
  <body text="#000000" bgcolor="#FFFFFF">
    <br>
    <div class="moz-forward-container">
      <meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html;
        charset=ISO-8859-1">
      <div class="moz-forward-container">
        <pre>I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This experimental draft describes a way for TCP to include data in the SYN and SYN-ACK
exchanges when establishing an initial connection.  As you've probably already guessed
there are number security ramifications with this feature.  One is that the server
applications receive the SYN packet before the three-way handshake is complete.
This opens up various DoS attacks that would otherwise be thwarted by TCP filtering,
receive queues, etc.

The proposed solution against such attacks involves a server derived MAC that the client
requests during a TCP connection establishment.  The client subsequently uses this MAC in
subsequent three-way handshakes with the server.  

The security considerations section does exist and reiterates the DoS attacks that this
protocol opens.  To help prevent DoS attacks the server keeps track of pending requests
and compares this against PendingFastOpenRequests in order to limit resources taken by
an attacker.  If the limit is exceeded then the protocol reverts to regular TCP, which
has the traditional techniques to thwart SYN floods.  The section goes on to state that another
possible attack would be to trick a number of servers to send a large response to an unsuspecting
host.  It prescribes that the server could not respond with data until the handshake completes.
I believe the various risks associated with this protocol are outlined in the draft and provides
sufficient techniques for mitigating against such attacks.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

<meta charset="utf-8">s/cause firewall/causing firewall/
s/<meta charset="utf-8">case it may/<meta charset="utf-8">cases it may/

Shawn.
--
</pre>
      </div>
    </div>
  </body>
</html>

--------------030306010200060501040800--


From nobody Mon Mar 31 03:22:03 2014
Return-Path: <michael.scharf@alcatel-lucent.com>
X-Original-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: secdir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 79ABE1A096E for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 23:49:12 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -6.899
X-Spam-Level: 
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.899 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id d0ccyg72Tq0a for <secdir@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 23:49:10 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from hoemail2.alcatel.com (hoemail2.alcatel.com [192.160.6.149]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0B6F91A0444 for <secdir@ietf.org>; Sun, 30 Mar 2014 23:49:09 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from fr712usmtp2.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com (h135-239-2-42.lucent.com [135.239.2.42]) by hoemail2.alcatel.com (8.13.8/IER-o) with ESMTP id s2V6n2Ic006178 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=FAIL); Mon, 31 Mar 2014 01:49:06 -0500 (CDT)
Received: from FR711WXCHHUB02.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com (fr711wxchhub02.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com [135.239.2.112]) by fr712usmtp2.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com (GMO) with ESMTP id s2V6n1l9030910 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES128-SHA bits=128 verify=FAIL); Mon, 31 Mar 2014 08:49:02 +0200
Received: from FR712WXCHMBA15.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com ([169.254.7.224]) by FR711WXCHHUB02.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com ([135.239.2.112]) with mapi id 14.02.0247.003; Mon, 31 Mar 2014 08:49:01 +0200
From: "Scharf, Michael (Michael)" <michael.scharf@alcatel-lucent.com>
To: Shawn M Emery <shawn.emery@oracle.com>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08
Thread-Index: AQHPTGgGVJ4kIXErBE2cItqpXr9aeJr6wCKo
Date: Mon, 31 Mar 2014 06:49:00 +0000
Message-ID: <655C07320163294895BBADA28372AF5D26343D@FR712WXCHMBA15.zeu.alcatel-lucent.com>
References: <52DEB7D6.6050308@oracle.com>,<53389B18.9060305@oracle.com>
In-Reply-To: <53389B18.9060305@oracle.com>
Accept-Language: de-DE, en-US
Content-Language: de-DE
X-MS-Has-Attach: 
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: 
x-originating-ip: [155.132.188.47]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_655C07320163294895BBADA28372AF5D26343DFR712WXCHMBA15zeu_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/hwRz45DZfUJWTRmOH2jrpKAwDKg
X-Mailman-Approved-At: Mon, 31 Mar 2014 03:22:01 -0700
Cc: "draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen.all@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08
X-BeenThere: secdir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: Security Area Directorate <secdir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/>
List-Post: <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir>, <mailto:secdir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 31 Mar 2014 06:49:12 -0000

--_000_655C07320163294895BBADA28372AF5D26343DFR712WXCHMBA15zeu_
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Hi Shawn,

Many thanks for your early SECDIR review!

I'll then move the document forward to the AD/IESG.

Best regards

Michael


________________________________
Von: Shawn M Emery [shawn.emery@oracle.com]
Gesendet: Montag, 31. M=E4rz 2014 00:30
An: secdir@ietf.org
Cc: draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen.all@tools.ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org
Betreff: Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08



I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This experimental draft describes a way for TCP to include data in the SYN =
and SYN-ACK
exchanges when establishing an initial connection.  As you've probably alre=
ady guessed
there are number security ramifications with this feature.  One is that the=
 server
applications receive the SYN packet before the three-way handshake is compl=
ete.
This opens up various DoS attacks that would otherwise be thwarted by TCP f=
iltering,
receive queues, etc.

The proposed solution against such attacks involves a server derived MAC th=
at the client
requests during a TCP connection establishment.  The client subsequently us=
es this MAC in
subsequent three-way handshakes with the server.

The security considerations section does exist and reiterates the DoS attac=
ks that this
protocol opens.  To help prevent DoS attacks the server keeps track of pend=
ing requests
and compares this against PendingFastOpenRequests in order to limit resourc=
es taken by
an attacker.  If the limit is exceeded then the protocol reverts to regular=
 TCP, which
has the traditional techniques to thwart SYN floods.  The section goes on t=
o state that another
possible attack would be to trick a number of servers to send a large respo=
nse to an unsuspecting
host.  It prescribes that the server could not respond with data until the =
handshake completes.
I believe the various risks associated with this protocol are outlined in t=
he draft and provides
sufficient techniques for mitigating against such attacks.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

s/cause firewall/causing firewall/
s/case it may/cases it may/

Shawn.
--


--_000_655C07320163294895BBADA28372AF5D26343DFR712WXCHMBA15zeu_
Content-Type: text/html; charset="iso-8859-1"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

<html dir=3D"ltr">
<head>
<meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3Diso-8859-=
1">
<style id=3D"owaParaStyle" type=3D"text/css">P {margin-top:0;margin-bottom:=
0;}</style>
</head>
<body ocsi=3D"0" fpstyle=3D"1" bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF">
<div style=3D"direction: ltr;font-family: Tahoma;color: #000000;font-size: =
10pt;">Hi Shawn,<br>
<br>
Many thanks for your early SECDIR review!<br>
<br>
I'll then move the document forward to the AD/IESG.<br>
<br>
Best regards<br>
<br>
Michael<br>
<br>
<br>
<div style=3D"font-family: Times New Roman; color: #000000; font-size: 16px=
">
<hr tabindex=3D"-1">
<div style=3D"direction: ltr;" id=3D"divRpF870846"><font color=3D"#000000" =
face=3D"Tahoma" size=3D"2"><b>Von:</b> Shawn M Emery [shawn.emery@oracle.co=
m]<br>
<b>Gesendet:</b> Montag, 31. M=E4rz 2014 00:30<br>
<b>An:</b> secdir@ietf.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen.all@tools.ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org<br>
<b>Betreff:</b> Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen-08<br>
</font><br>
</div>
<div></div>
<div><br>
<div class=3D"moz-forward-container">
<div class=3D"moz-forward-container">
<pre>I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's=0A=
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.=0A=
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security=0A=
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these=0A=
comments just like any other last call comments.=0A=
=0A=
This experimental draft describes a way for TCP to include data in the SYN =
and SYN-ACK=0A=
exchanges when establishing an initial connection.  As you've probably alre=
ady guessed=0A=
there are number security ramifications with this feature.  One is that the=
 server=0A=
applications receive the SYN packet before the three-way handshake is compl=
ete.=0A=
This opens up various DoS attacks that would otherwise be thwarted by TCP f=
iltering,=0A=
receive queues, etc.=0A=
=0A=
The proposed solution against such attacks involves a server derived MAC th=
at the client=0A=
requests during a TCP connection establishment.  The client subsequently us=
es this MAC in=0A=
subsequent three-way handshakes with the server.  =0A=
=0A=
The security considerations section does exist and reiterates the DoS attac=
ks that this=0A=
protocol opens.  To help prevent DoS attacks the server keeps track of pend=
ing requests=0A=
and compares this against PendingFastOpenRequests in order to limit resourc=
es taken by=0A=
an attacker.  If the limit is exceeded then the protocol reverts to regular=
 TCP, which=0A=
has the traditional techniques to thwart SYN floods.  The section goes on t=
o state that another=0A=
possible attack would be to trick a number of servers to send a large respo=
nse to an unsuspecting=0A=
host.  It prescribes that the server could not respond with data until the =
handshake completes.=0A=
I believe the various risks associated with this protocol are outlined in t=
he draft and provides=0A=
sufficient techniques for mitigating against such attacks.=0A=
=0A=
General comments:=0A=
=0A=
None.=0A=
=0A=
Editorial comments:=0A=
=0A=
s/cause firewall/causing firewall/=0A=
s/case it may/cases it may/=0A=
=0A=
Shawn.=0A=
--=0A=
</pre>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</body>
</html>

--_000_655C07320163294895BBADA28372AF5D26343DFR712WXCHMBA15zeu_--

