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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com>
To: "Xialiang (Frank)" <frank.xialiang@huawei.com>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>
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Hi Frank,
Thanks for your review and comments.

On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved here,
it seems unlikely that operators will begin an upgrade
during a DoS attack when they know it's in-progress, IMO.
Others should chime-in if they have other rationale or opinions.

On #4, That's the draft date, not the expiration date.
see below,
Al
doc shepherd

Benchmarking Working Group                                  Sarah Banks
Internet Draft                                           VSS Monitoring
Intended status: Informational                        Fernando Calabria
Expires: November 30, 2015                                Cisco Systems
                                                           Gery Czirjak
                                                          Ramdas Machat
                                                       Juniper Networks
                                                           May 30, 2015

ISSU Benchmarking Methodology
draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

From: Xialiang (Frank) [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com]
Sent: Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM
To: secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org
Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comment.

This draft specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures designed =
to characterize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject =
to an ISSU event.

I have the following comments:

1.       Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test=
 when the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?

2.       In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility check=
s and verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention that the=
 device should verify the authenticity and integrity of its download. I.e. =
verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/CRL for the used signature. And t=
hat a system must not load unverified code;

3.       even in a test environment all deployed software components must b=
e verified (e.g. using signatures);

4.       Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015

Recommendation:  Ready With Issues

B.R.
Frank

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n1><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courie=
r New";color:black'>Hi Frank,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><sp=
an style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>Thanks =
for your review and comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><sp=
an style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;f=
ont-family:"Courier New";color:black'>On #1, DoS attacks: since human contr=
ol is involved here,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=
=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>it seems unlike=
ly that operators will begin an upgrade<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMso=
Normal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:blac=
k'>during a DoS attack when they know it&#8217;s in-progress, IMO.<o:p></o:=
p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-fami=
ly:"Courier New";color:black'>Others should chime-in if they have other rat=
ionale or opinions.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=
=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:=
p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-fami=
ly:"Courier New";color:black'>On #4, That&#8217;s the draft date, not the e=
xpiration date.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'fo=
nt-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>see below,<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family=
:"Courier New";color:black'>Al<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><s=
pan style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>doc sh=
epherd<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:1=
1.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p=
 class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New=
";color:black'>Benchmarking Working Group&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; Sarah Banks<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>Internet D=
raft&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; VSS Monitoring<o:p></o:p></span></p><p clas=
s=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";col=
or:black'>Intended status: Informational&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Fernando Calabria<o:p></o:p></span></p><p clas=
s=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";col=
or:black'>Expires: November 30, 2015&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
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p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal=
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U Benchmarking Methodology<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'>draft-ietf=
-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D=
'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p><=
/span></p><div style=3D'border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0i=
n 0in 0in 4.0pt'><div><div style=3D'border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.=
0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=3DMsoNormal align=3Dleft style=3D't=
ext-align:left'><b><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sa=
ns-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tah=
oma","sans-serif"'> Xialiang (Frank) [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com] <br=
><b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM<br><b>To:</b> secdir@ietf.org;=
 iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<br><b>Subject:</b> S=
ecdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></d=
iv><p class=3DMsoNormal align=3Dleft style=3D'text-align:left'><o:p>&nbsp;<=
/o:p></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'>I =
have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's&nbsp;ongo=
ing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the&nbsp;IESG. &=
nbsp;These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the&nbsp;secu=
rity area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs should treat&nbsp=
;these comments just like any other last call comment.<o:p></o:p></span></p=
><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:=
ZH-CN'>This draft specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures de=
signed to characterize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), s=
ubject to an ISSU event.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span st=
yle=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DM=
soNormal><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'>I have the following co=
mments:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'margin-le=
ft:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><=
span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><span style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>1=
.<span style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:=
ZH-CN'>Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test w=
hen the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3D=
MsoPlainText style=3D'margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><s=
pan style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"=
'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span=
 style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'>In the software download stage, in ad=
dition to compatibility checks and verification of checksums, we should als=
o explicitly mention that the device should verify the authenticity and int=
egrity of its download. I.e. verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/CRL =
for the used signature. And that a system must not load unverified code;<o:=
p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText style=3D'margin-left:.25in;text-=
indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D'=
mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><span style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style=
=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </sp=
an></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'>even =
in a test environment all deployed software components must be verified (e.=
g. using signatures);<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText style=3D=
'margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !suppo=
rtLists]><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><span style=3D'mso-list=
:Ignore'>4.<span style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D'mso-fareast=
-language:ZH-CN'>Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN'><o:=
p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'mso-fareast-la=
nguage:ZH-CN'>Recommendation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues<o:p></o:p></span></p>=
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Thank you Frank for your review and Al for addressing # 1 and # 4 ..

In regards to # 2 and #3


We also saw and considered how  verifications like the authenticity of a SW=
 package may be a concern , even more,   nowadays,  with emerging SDN  like=
 implementations ,

Unfortunately   not all the vendors nor even software specific operating sy=
stems  within vendors,  have =93consistent  implementations" of  Digital Si=
gnatures nor  Certificates and do not make these checks a mandatory task  b=
efore performing a Software upgrade.

Because of it  we tried to address it with a =91generic=92 statement on Sec=
tions 3.1 and 3.2 that basically read:

"Internal compatibility
   verification may be performed by the software running on the DUT, to
   verify the checksum of the files downloaded as well as any other
   pertinent checks. Depending upon vendor implementation, these
   mechanisms may extend to include verification that the downloaded
   module(s) =85"

=97

Internal compatibility verification may be
   performed by the software running on the DUT, as part of the upgrade
   process itself, to verify the checksum of the files downloaded as
   well as any other pertinent checks=85.



The authors of this document understand  how these are real issues / concer=
ns on managing an operating a  Software   environment, ,  but we do not bel=
ieve that an specific ISSU  document should addresses them in  detail

-Fernando







From: <MORTON>, "ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com<mailto:acmorton@att.com>>
Date: Wednesday, July 1, 2015 at 8:08 AM
To: "Xialiang (Frank)" <frank.xialiang@huawei.com<mailto:frank.xialiang@hua=
wei.com>>, "secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org<mailt=
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ailto:iesg@ietf.org>>, "draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft=
-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org=
<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>>
Subject: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

Hi Frank,
Thanks for your review and comments.

On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved here,
it seems unlikely that operators will begin an upgrade
during a DoS attack when they know it=92s in-progress, IMO.
Others should chime-in if they have other rationale or opinions.

On #4, That=92s the draft date, not the expiration date.
see below,
Al
doc shepherd

Benchmarking Working Group                                  Sarah Banks
Internet Draft                                           VSS Monitoring
Intended status: Informational                        Fernando Calabria
Expires: November 30, 2015                                Cisco Systems
                                                           Gery Czirjak
                                                          Ramdas Machat
                                                       Juniper Networks
                                                           May 30, 2015

ISSU Benchmarking Methodology
draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

From: Xialiang (Frank) [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com]
Sent: Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM
To: secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>; iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf=
.org>; draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-m=
eth.all@ietf.org>
Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comment.

This draft specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures designed =
to characterize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject =
to an ISSU event.

I have the following comments:

1.       Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test=
 when the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?

2.       In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility check=
s and verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention that the=
 device should verify the authenticity and integrity of its download. I.e. =
verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/CRL for the used signature. And t=
hat a system must not load unverified code;

3.       even in a test environment all deployed software components must b=
e verified (e.g. using signatures);

4.       Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015

Recommendation:  Ready With Issues

B.R.
Frank

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Thank you Frank for your review and Al for addressing # 1 and # 4 ..</div>
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<div>In regards to # 2 and #3&nbsp;</div>
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<div>We also saw and considered how &nbsp;verifications like the authentici=
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<div>Because of it &nbsp;we tried to address it with a =91generic=92 statem=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved =
here,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">during a DoS attack when they know it=92s in-progres=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">On #4, That=92s the draft date, not the expiration d=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
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r New'; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Benchmarking Working Group&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Sarah Banks<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Internet Draft&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; VSS Monito=
ring<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Intended status: Informational&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Fernando Calabria<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Expires: November 30, 2015&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp; Cisco Systems<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Ger=
y Czirjak<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Ramdas Ma=
chat<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Juniper Networks<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;May=
 30, 2015<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">ISSU Benchmarking Methodology<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in =
4.0pt">
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" align=3D"left" style=3D"text-align:left"><b><span st=
yle=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">From:</span></b><=
span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;"> Xialiang =
(Frank) [<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com">mailto:frank.xialiang=
@huawei.com</a>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>; <a href=
=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org">
iesg@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org=
">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" align=3D"left" style=3D"text-align:left"><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">I have re=
viewed this document as part of the security directorate's&nbsp;ongoing eff=
ort to review all IETF documents being processed by the&nbsp;IESG. &nbsp;Th=
ese comments were written primarily for the benefit
 of the&nbsp;security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs =
should treat&nbsp;these comments just like any other last call comment.<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">This draf=
t specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures designed to charac=
terize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject to an ISS=
U event.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">I have th=
e following comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test when =
the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility checks and =
verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention that the devic=
e should verify the authenticity and
 integrity of its download. I.e. verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/=
CRL for the used signature. And that a system must not load unverified code=
;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">even in a test environment all deployed software components must be veri=
fied (e.g. using signatures);<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">4.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">Recommend=
ation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">B.R.<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">Frank<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
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Hi Frank,
	Thanks for your review! To add to what Fernando discussed below, =
for your points 2 and 3, we came to this conclusion not only because =
vendors don't have consistency in implementation, but also because =
customers with that running code weren't asking for it either. Often, =
they're downloading the code via login from the vendors' site - this =
doesn't mitigate your points, but it sheds some light on why perhaps =
they're not as concerned about it. I echo Fer's thoughts though, that we =
feel it's as covered as it could be with the section of the draft he =
quotes below - that the operator performing the ISSU should ensure the =
veracity of the code before installing it.

	Finally, I too share Al's thought, that a DDOS wouldn't likely =
be underway before an ISSU starts. A DDOS could, in theory, start after =
the ISSU starts, but then, any number of corner cases could occur when =
an ISSU starts, and that part might be a whole new draft. :) IMHO this =
is unlikely, and I'm not moved to cover it in the draft, however, if you =
have suggestions, we're willing to review them.

Thanks
Sarah


> On Jul 1, 2015, at 5:59 AM, Fernando Calabria (fcalabri) =
<fcalabri@cisco.com> wrote:
>=20
>=20
> Thank you Frank for your review and Al for addressing # 1 and # 4 ..
>=20
> In regards to # 2 and #3=20
>=20
>=20
> We also saw and considered how  verifications like the authenticity of =
a SW package may be a concern , even more,   nowadays,  with emerging =
SDN  like implementations ,=20
>=20
> Unfortunately   not all the vendors nor even software specific =
operating systems  within vendors,  have =93consistent  implementations" =
of  Digital Signatures nor  Certificates and do not make these checks a =
mandatory task  before performing a Software upgrade.
>=20
> Because of it  we tried to address it with a =91generic=92 statement =
on Sections 3.1 and 3.2 that basically read:
>=20
> "Internal compatibility
>    verification may be performed by the software running on the DUT, =
to
>    verify the checksum of the files downloaded as well as any other
>    pertinent checks. Depending upon vendor implementation, these
>    mechanisms may extend to include verification that the downloaded
>    module(s) =85"
>=20
> =97
>=20
> Internal compatibility verification may be
>    performed by the software running on the DUT, as part of the =
upgrade
>    process itself, to verify the checksum of the files downloaded as
>    well as any other pertinent checks=85.
>=20
>=20
>=20
> The authors of this document understand  how these are real issues / =
concerns on managing an operating a  Software   environment, ,  but we =
do not believe that an specific ISSU  document should addresses them in  =
detail=20
>=20
> -Fernando=20
>=20
>=20
>=20
>=20
>=20
>=20
>=20
> From: <MORTON>, "ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com =
<mailto:acmorton@att.com>>
> Date: Wednesday, July 1, 2015 at 8:08 AM
> To: "Xialiang (Frank)" <frank.xialiang@huawei.com =
<mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com>>, "secdir@ietf.org =
<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>>, =
"iesg@ietf.org <mailto:iesg@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org =
<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>, "draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org =
<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>" =
<draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org =
<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>>
> Subject: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01
>=20
> Hi Frank,
> Thanks for your review and comments.
> =20
> On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved here,
> it seems unlikely that operators will begin an upgrade
> during a DoS attack when they know it=92s in-progress, IMO.
> Others should chime-in if they have other rationale or opinions.
> =20
> On #4, That=92s the draft date, not the expiration date.
> see below,
> Al
> doc shepherd
> =20
> Benchmarking Working Group                                  Sarah =
Banks
> Internet Draft                                           VSS =
Monitoring
> Intended status: Informational                        Fernando =
Calabria
> Expires: November 30, 2015                                Cisco =
Systems
>                                                            Gery =
Czirjak
>                                                           Ramdas =
Machat
>                                                        Juniper =
Networks
>                                                            May 30, =
2015
>                      =20
> ISSU Benchmarking Methodology
> draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01
> =20
> From: Xialiang (Frank) [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com =
<mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com>]=20
> Sent: Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM
> To: secdir@ietf.org <mailto:secdir@ietf.org>; iesg@ietf.org =
<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org =
<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>
> Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01
> =20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. =
 These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comment.
> =20
> This draft specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures =
designed to characterize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test =
(DUT), subject to an ISSU event.
> =20
> I have the following comments:
> 1.       Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and =
test when the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?
> 2.       In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility =
checks and verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention =
that the device should verify the authenticity and integrity of its =
download. I.e. verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/CRL for the =
used signature. And that a system must not load unverified code;
> 3.       even in a test environment all deployed software components =
must be verified (e.g. using signatures);
> 4.       Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015
> =20
> Recommendation:  Ready With Issues
> =20
> B.R.
> Frank


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<html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html =
charset=3Dwindows-1252"></head><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; =
-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" =
class=3D"">Hi Frank,<div class=3D""><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" =
style=3D"white-space:pre">	</span>Thanks for your review! To add to =
what Fernando discussed below, for your points 2 and 3, we came to this =
conclusion not only because vendors don't have consistency in =
implementation, but also because customers with that running code =
weren't asking for it either. Often, they're downloading the code via =
login from the vendors' site - this doesn't mitigate your points, but it =
sheds some light on why perhaps they're not as concerned about it. I =
echo Fer's thoughts though, that we feel it's as covered as it could be =
with the section of the draft he quotes below - that the operator =
performing the ISSU should ensure the veracity of the code before =
installing it.</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D""><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre">	=
</span>Finally, I too share Al's thought, that a DDOS wouldn't likely be =
underway before an ISSU starts. A DDOS could, in theory, start after the =
ISSU starts, but then, any number of corner cases could occur when an =
ISSU starts, and that part might be a whole new draft. :) IMHO this is =
unlikely, and I'm not moved to cover it in the draft, however, if you =
have suggestions, we're willing to review them.</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Thanks</div><div =
class=3D"">Sarah</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""><div><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">On Jul 1, 2015, at 5:59 AM, Fernando Calabria (fcalabri) =
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:fcalabri@cisco.com" =
class=3D"">fcalabri@cisco.com</a>&gt; wrote:</div><br =
class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=3D""><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">Thank you Frank for your review and Al for =
addressing # 1 and # 4 ..</div></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">In =
regards to # 2 and #3&nbsp;</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: =
normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: =
0px;" class=3D"">We also saw and considered how &nbsp;verifications like =
the authenticity of a SW package may be a concern , even more, &nbsp; =
nowadays, &nbsp;with emerging SDN &nbsp;like implementations =
,&nbsp;</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: =
14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; =
letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: =
start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">Unfortunately &nbsp; not all =
the vendors nor even software specific operating systems &nbsp;within =
vendors, &nbsp;have =93consistent &nbsp;implementations" of =
&nbsp;Digital Signatures nor &nbsp;Certificates and do not make these =
checks a mandatory task &nbsp;before performing a Software =
upgrade.</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: =
14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; =
letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: =
start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">Because of it &nbsp;we tried =
to address it with a =91generic=92 statement on Sections 3.1 and 3.2 =
that basically read:</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D"">"Internal compatibility</div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">&nbsp; =
&nbsp;verification may be performed by the software running on the DUT, =
to</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; =
font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; =
letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: =
start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; =
widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D"">&nbsp; &nbsp;verify the checksum of the files downloaded as =
well as any other</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: =
normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: =
0px;" class=3D"">&nbsp; &nbsp;pertinent checks. Depending upon vendor =
implementation, these</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">&nbsp; &nbsp;mechanisms may =
extend to include verification that the downloaded</div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D"">&nbsp; &nbsp;module(s) =85"</div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div=
 style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D"">=97</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: =
normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: =
0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><div class=3D"">Internal =
compatibility verification may be</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp; =
&nbsp;performed by the software running on the DUT, as part of the =
upgrade</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp; &nbsp;process itself, to verify the =
checksum of the files downloaded as</div><div class=3D"">&nbsp; =
&nbsp;well as any other pertinent checks=85.</div></div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: =
normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: =
0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div=
 style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">The =
authors of this document understand &nbsp;how these are real issues / =
concerns on managing an operating a &nbsp;Software &nbsp; environment, , =
&nbsp;but we do not believe that an specific ISSU &nbsp;document should =
addresses them in &nbsp;detail&nbsp;</div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div=
 style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" =
class=3D"">-Fernando&nbsp;</div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; =
orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: =
none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: =
normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: =
0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div=
 style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: =
normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: =
normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; =
text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: =
auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; =
font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: =
normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; =
text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: =
normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: =
0px;" class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant: =
normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: =
normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; =
text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: =
0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><div =
style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt; text-align: left; =
border-width: 1pt medium medium; border-style: solid none none; padding: =
3pt 0in 0in; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223);" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-weight: bold;" class=3D"">From:<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span>&lt;MORTON&gt;, =
"ALFRED C (AL)" &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:acmorton@att.com" style=3D"color: =
purple; text-decoration: underline;" =
class=3D"">acmorton@att.com</a>&gt;<br class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-weight: bold;" class=3D"">Date:<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span>Wednesday, July 1, =
2015 at 8:08 AM<br class=3D""><span style=3D"font-weight: bold;" =
class=3D"">To:<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span>"Xialiang (Frank)" =
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com" style=3D"color: purple; =
text-decoration: underline;" class=3D"">frank.xialiang@huawei.com</a>&gt;,=
 "<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; =
text-decoration: underline;" class=3D"">secdir@ietf.org</a>" &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;" class=3D"">secdir@ietf.org</a>&gt;, "<a =
href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;" class=3D"">iesg@ietf.org</a>" &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;" class=3D"">iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;, "<a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org" style=3D"color: =
purple; text-decoration: underline;" =
class=3D"">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a>" &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org" style=3D"color: =
purple; text-decoration: underline;" =
class=3D"">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br =
class=3D""><span style=3D"font-weight: bold;" class=3D"">Subject:<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span>RE: Secdir review of =
draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<br class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div xmlns:v=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" =
xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" =
xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" =
xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" =
xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40" class=3D""><div lang=3D"EN-US" =
link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple" class=3D""><div class=3D"WordSection1" =
style=3D"page: WordSection1;"><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">Hi Frank,<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">Thanks for your review and comments.<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D""><o:p class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" class=3D"">On #1, =
DoS attacks: since human control is involved here,<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">it seems unlikely that operators will begin =
an upgrade<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in =
0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: 'Courier New';" class=3D"">during a DoS attack when they =
know it=92s in-progress, IMO.<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" class=3D"">Others =
should chime-in if they have other rationale or opinions.<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D""><o:p class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" class=3D"">On #4, =
That=92s the draft date, not the expiration date.<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">see below,<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">Al<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" class=3D"">doc =
shepherd<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D""><o:p class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" =
class=3D"">Benchmarking Working =
Group&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Sarah Banks<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">Internet =
Draft&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; VSS Monitoring<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
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'Courier New';" class=3D"">Intended status: =
Informational&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp; Fernando Calabria<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div =
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10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" class=3D"">Expires:=
 November 30, =
2015&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Cisco Systems<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
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sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Gery =
Czirjak<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
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;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Ramdas =
Machat<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
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nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Juniper Networks<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;May 30, 2015<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courier New';" =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">ISSU Benchmarking Methodology<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D"">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
'Courier New';" class=3D""><o:p class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"border-style: none none none solid; border-left-color: blue; =
border-left-width: 1.5pt; padding: 0in 0in 0in 4pt;" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><div style=3D"border-style: solid none none; =
border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); border-top-width: 1pt; padding: =
3pt 0in 0in;" class=3D""><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: left; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" =
class=3D""><b class=3D""><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: =
Tahoma, sans-serif;" class=3D"">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: =
10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Xialiang (Frank) [<a =
href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com" style=3D"color: purple; =
text-decoration: underline;" =
class=3D"">mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com</a>]<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br class=3D""><b =
class=3D"">Sent:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 =
PM<br class=3D""><b class=3D"">To:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;" class=3D"">secdir@ietf.org</a>;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org" style=3D"color: purple; text-decoration: =
underline;" class=3D"">iesg@ietf.org</a>;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org" style=3D"color: =
purple; text-decoration: underline;" =
class=3D"">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a><br class=3D""><b =
class=3D"">Subject:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Secdir review of =
draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: left; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><o:p class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D"">I =
have reviewed this document as part of the security =
directorate's&nbsp;ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being =
processed by the&nbsp;IESG. &nbsp;These comments were written primarily =
for the benefit of the&nbsp;security area directors. &nbsp;Document =
editors and WG chairs should treat&nbsp;these comments just like any =
other last call comment.<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: =
10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
class=3D""><o:p class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: =
0in 0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D"">This draft specifies a =
set of common methodologies and procedures designed to characterize the =
overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject to an ISSU =
event.<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D""><o:p =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D"">I have the following =
comments:<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in =
0in 0.0001pt 0.25in; text-align: justify; text-indent: -0.25in; =
font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
class=3D""><span class=3D"">1.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; =
font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: =
normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman';" =
class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span></span></span><span =
class=3D"">Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and =
test when the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt =
0.25in; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in;" class=3D""><span class=3D""><span =
class=3D"">2.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: =
'Times New Roman';" class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span></span></span><span =
class=3D"">In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility =
checks and verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention =
that the device should verify the authenticity and integrity of its =
download. I.e. verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/CRL for the =
used signature. And that a system must not load unverified code;<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt =
0.25in; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in;" class=3D""><span class=3D""><span =
class=3D"">3.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: =
'Times New Roman';" class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span></span></span><span =
class=3D"">even in a test environment all deployed software components =
must be verified (e.g. using signatures);<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt =
0.25in; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in;" class=3D""><span class=3D""><span =
class=3D"">4.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; =
font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: =
'Times New Roman';" class=3D"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span></span></span><span =
class=3D"">Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D""><o:p =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D"">Recommendation: &nbsp;Ready =
With Issues<o:p class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in =
0in 0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D""><o:p =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in =
0.0001pt; text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span class=3D"">B.R.<o:p =
class=3D""></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; =
text-align: justify; font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;" class=3D""><span =
class=3D"">Frank</span></div></div></div></div></div></span></div></blockq=
uote></div><br class=3D""></div></body></html>=

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Hello,

Today W3C Advisory Committee Representatives received a Proposal to revise  
the XML Activity [0] (see the W3C Process
Document description of Activity Proposals [1]):
   http://www.w3.org/XML/2015/05/activity-proposal.html

This proposal includes draft charters for the following XML Activity  
working groups:
Efficient XML Interchange Working Group
XML Query Working Group
XML Core Working Group
XML Processing Model Working Group
XSLT Working Group
XForms Working Group

As part of ensuring that the community is aware of proposed work at W3C,  
this draft charter is public during the Advisory Committee review period.

W3C invites public comments through 2015-07-30 on the proposed charter.  
Please send comments to public-new-work@w3.org, which has a public archive:
   http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-new-work/

Other than comments sent in formal responses by W3C Advisory Committee  
Representatives, W3C cannot guarantee a response to comments. If you work  
for a W3C Member [2], please coordinate your comments with your Advisory  
Committee Representative. For example, you may wish to make public  
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refer to it from his or her formal review comments.

If you should have any questions or need further information, please  
contact Liam Quin, XML Activity Lead <liam@w3.org>.

Thank you,

Coralie Mercier, Acting Head of W3C Marketing & Communications


[0] http://www.w3.org/XML/Activity
[1] http://www.w3.org/2014/Process-20140801/#ActivityCreation
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A new IETF working group has been proposed in the Applications and
Real-Time Area. The IESG has not made any determination yet. The
following draft charter was submitted, and is provided for informational
purposes only. Please send your comments to the IESG mailing list (iesg
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Label Generation Rules (lager)
------------------------------------------------
Current Status: Proposed WG

Chairs:
  Scott Hollenbeck <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
  Marc Blanchet <Marc.Blanchet@viagenie.ca>

Assigned Area Director:
  Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>

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Charter:

Domain registries, particularly those implementing IDNA (RFC 5890 
et.al), usually maintain a set of criteria (or "ruleset") that governs 
permissible labels allowed for registration, such as [IANAIDNTABLES]. 
These rulesets are commonly a mixture of eligible code points along 
with contextual criteria that must be met concerning the positioning of 
certain code points. Some registries also specify rules regarding 
variant labels and how they are to be handled. Domain registries 
commonly need to share these rules, but there is no interoperable format 
that can be used that can support many common use cases. This group 
seeks to produce such a format, which will enable re-use and simpler 
implementation of rulesets in registries.

A comprehensive format specification has been developed, named Label
Generation Rules, primarily to support the rules to be used for the 
DNS Root Zone [Davies]. This group will use this specification as a 
starting point to develop a common XML language that provides a superset 
of functionality of current specifications
[RFC 3743, RFC 4290, et.al], along with other known use cases. This 
single format is expected to supersede existing formats, and form the 
basis for future rulesets used at different levels of the DNS hierarchy.

Work items:
- Standard Track Specification of the Label Generation Rules

References:
[Davies] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-davies-idntables/
[IANAIDNTABLES] https://www.iana.org/domains/idn-tables

Milestones:
  Dec 2015 - Send the Label Generation Rules specification to the IESG


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comment.

This document describes use cases and sometimes existing deployed code
on handling "markdown" text. As such, the document introduces no new
security considerations, and the Security Considerations section points
to other documents that further document the respective markdown
variants and their own security considerations.

Recommendation:  Ready with Issues

I wanted to point out two use cases (or existing deployed code?)
that uses some features that might be considered a security issue.

2.1 talks about filesystem "extended attributes" and suggests to add a
     resource named "variant". This name might be a little too generic to
     only apply to markdown and might cause a name spaec collision that
     could potentially be a security risk. If this is a use case without
     deployed code, I would recommend renaming this resource to something
     more specific, eg "markdown-varient". If it describes actual code,
     then I guess that ship has sailed.

2.4 talks about MIME aware clients saving a "batch script" to disk for
     later execution. These kind of "autorun" or "preview" features are
     a security nightmare, so here too I would hope this has not yet been
     coded. And if not, to reconsider not supporting such a feature.

Paul


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,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thank you =
for the detailed feedbacks. It helps me understand your consideration and d=
ecision more clear. I think&nbsp; we all agree with the importance
 of authenticity and integrity verification for SW package. <o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Since the =
test method aims to mimic the real network application, and the complexity =
and risks of real network will cause the &nbsp;unverified SW package
 quite possible, so I suggest to consider the related test steps. <o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Of course,=
 you can make the test steps to be optional, not mandatory, due to the real=
ity.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
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family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Anyway, it=
=A1=AFs just my suggestion, you can decide by your own.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
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family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">B.R.<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
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family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Frank<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
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=CE=CC=E5">=B7=A2=BC=FE=C8=CB<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5"> Sarah B=
anks [mailto:sbanks@encrypted.net]
<br>
</span><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5">=B7=A2=
=CB=CD=CA=B1=BC=E4<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></span></b><span lang=3D"EN-=
US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5"> 2015</span><span s=
tyle=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5">=C4=EA<span lang=3D"EN-U=
S">7</span>=D4=C2<span lang=3D"EN-US">2</span>=C8=D5<span lang=3D"EN-US">
 1:39<br>
</span><b>=CA=D5=BC=FE=C8=CB<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></b><span lang=3D"=
EN-US"> Fernando Calabria (fcalabri)<br>
</span><b>=B3=AD=CB=CD<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US"=
> ALFRED MORTON; Xialiang (Frank); secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ie=
tf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<br>
</span><b>=D6=F7=CC=E2<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US"=
> Re: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></span></span=
></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Hi Frank,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span class=3D"apple-tab-span"><span lang=3D"EN-US">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>
</span><span lang=3D"EN-US">Thanks for your review! To add to what Fernando=
 discussed below, for your points 2 and 3, we came to this conclusion not o=
nly because vendors don't have consistency in implementation, but also beca=
use customers with that running code
 weren't asking for it either. Often, they're downloading the code via logi=
n from the vendors' site - this doesn't mitigate your points, but it sheds =
some light on why perhaps they're not as concerned about it. I echo Fer's t=
houghts though, that we feel it's
 as covered as it could be with the section of the draft he quotes below - =
that the operator performing the ISSU should ensure the veracity of the cod=
e before installing it.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span class=3D"apple-tab-span"><span lang=3D"EN-US">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>
</span><span lang=3D"EN-US">Finally, I too share Al's thought, that a DDOS =
wouldn't likely be underway before an ISSU starts. A DDOS could, in theory,=
 start after the ISSU starts, but then, any number of corner cases could oc=
cur when an ISSU starts, and that
 part might be a whole new draft. :) IMHO this is unlikely, and I'm not mov=
ed to cover it in the draft, however, if you have suggestions, we're willin=
g to review them.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Thanks<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Sarah<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<blockquote style=3D"margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">On Jul 1, 2015, at 5:59 AM, Fer=
nando Calabria (fcalabri) &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:fcalabri@cisco.com">fcalabr=
i@cisco.com</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><br>
Thank you Frank for your review and Al for addressing # 1 and # 4 ..<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">In regards to # 2 and #3=
&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">We also saw and consider=
ed how &nbsp;verifications like the authenticity of a SW package may be a c=
oncern , even more, &nbsp; nowadays, &nbsp;with emerging SDN &nbsp;like imp=
lementations
 ,&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Unfortunately &nbsp; not=
 all the vendors nor even software specific operating systems &nbsp;within =
vendors, &nbsp;have =A1=B0consistent &nbsp;implementations&quot; of &nbsp;D=
igital Signatures
 nor &nbsp;Certificates and do not make these checks a mandatory task &nbsp=
;before performing a Software upgrade.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Because of it &nbsp;we t=
ried to address it with a =A1=AEgeneric=A1=AF statement on Sections 3.1 and=
 3.2 that basically read:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&quot;Internal compatibi=
lity<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;verificatio=
n may be performed by the software running on the DUT, to<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;verify the =
checksum of the files downloaded as well as any other<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;pertinent c=
hecks. Depending upon vendor implementation, these<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;mechanisms =
may extend to include verification that the downloaded<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;module(s) =
=A1=AD&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">=A1=AA<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Internal compatibility v=
erification may be<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;performed b=
y the software running on the DUT, as part of the upgrade<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;process its=
elf, to verify the checksum of the files downloaded as<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp; &nbsp;well as any=
 other pertinent checks=A1=AD.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The authors of this docu=
ment understand &nbsp;how these are real issues / concerns on managing an o=
perating a &nbsp;Software &nbsp; environment, , &nbsp;but we do not believe=
 that
 an specific ISSU &nbsp;document should addresses them in &nbsp;detail&nbsp=
;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">-Fernando&nbsp;<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm =
0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:<span class=3D"a=
pple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D=
"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&=
lt;MORTON&gt;, &quot;ALFRED
 C (AL)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:acmorton@att.com"><span style=3D"color:=
purple">acmorton@att.com</span></a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date:<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></b>Wednesday, J=
uly 1, 2015 at 8:08 AM<br>
<b>To:<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></b>&quot;Xialiang=
 (Frank)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com"><span style=
=3D"color:purple">frank.xialiang@huawei.com</span></a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=
=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">secdir@ietf.org</s=
pan></a>&quot;
 &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">secdir=
@ietf.org</span></a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org"><span styl=
e=3D"color:purple">iesg@ietf.org</span></a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ies=
g@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">iesg@ietf.org</span></a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org"><span styl=
e=3D"color:purple">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</span></a>&quot; =
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org"><span style=
=3D"color:purple">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</span></a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></b>RE: Secdi=
r review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Hi Frank,</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5=
pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Thanks for your review and comments.</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-se=
rif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved here,</s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibr=
i&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">it seems unlikely that operators will begin an upgrade</span=
><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&q=
uot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">during a DoS attack when they know it=A1=AFs in-progress, IM=
O.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;C=
alibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Others should chime-in if they have other rationale or opini=
ons.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">On #4, That=A1=AFs the draft date, not the expiration date.<=
/span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">see below,</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.=
5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Al</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font=
-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">doc shepherd</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:1=
0.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Benchmarking Working Group&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; Sarah Banks</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10=
.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Internet Draft&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; VSS Monitoring</sp=
an><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri=
&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Intended status: Informational&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Fernando Calabria</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-se=
rif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">Expires: November 30, 2015&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p; Cisco Systems</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Gery Czirja=
k</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Ramdas Machat</sp=
an><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri=
&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
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sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Juniper Networks</span><span lang=
=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;=
sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;May 30, 201=
5</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibr=
i&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
ier New&quot;">ISSU Benchmarking Methodology</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quo=
t;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
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e=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
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raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Cour=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.=
0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;</span></s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma=
&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Xialiang
 (Frank) [<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com"><span style=3D"color=
:purple">mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com</span></a>]<span class=3D"apple-c=
onverted-space">&nbsp;</span><br>
<b>Sent:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Tuesday, Jun=
e 30, 2015 9:29 PM<br>
<b>To:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a href=3D"mai=
lto:secdir@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">secdir@ietf.org</span></a=
>;<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a href=3D"mailto:iesg=
@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">iesg@ietf.org</span></a>;<span clas=
s=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-=
issu-meth.all@ietf.org"><span style=3D"color:purple">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-m=
eth.all@ietf.org</span></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b><span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Secdir re=
view of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"fo=
nt-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">I have reviewed this document as part of =
the security directorate's&nbsp;ongoing effort to review all IETF
 documents being processed by the&nbsp;IESG. &nbsp;These comments were writ=
ten primarily for the benefit of the&nbsp;security area directors. &nbsp;Do=
cument editors and WG chairs should treat&nbsp;these comments just like any=
 other last call comment.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">This draft specifies a set of common meth=
odologies and procedures designed to characterize the overall
 behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject to an ISSU event.<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">I have the following comments:<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<div style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;text-indent:-18.0pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&qu=
ot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">1.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-siz=
e:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span class=3D"apple-converted=
-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Should
 the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test when the DUT i=
s under network DDoS attacks?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;text-indent:-18.0pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&qu=
ot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">2.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-siz=
e:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span class=3D"apple-converted=
-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">In
 the software download stage, in addition to compatibility checks and verif=
ication of checksums, we should also explicitly mention that the device sho=
uld verify the authenticity and integrity of its download. I.e. verify sign=
atures on signed code and OCSP/CRL
 for the used signature. And that a system must not load unverified code;<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;text-indent:-18.0pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&qu=
ot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">3.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-siz=
e:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span class=3D"apple-converted=
-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">even
 in a test environment all deployed software components must be verified (e=
.g. using signatures);<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph;text-indent:-18.0pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&qu=
ot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">4.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-siz=
e:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span class=3D"apple-converted=
-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;=
font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Nits:
 this draft has expired on May-30, 2015<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Recommendation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">B.R.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Cali=
bri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Frank<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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First, I apologize for the late review. It appears that you may have
already had a secdir review from the revision notes, but I could not find
the review in my archive.

In general it seems the document is in good shape and understandable. I
think the document is ready with nits.  Here are a few minor issues:

1) it might be useful to add something about what is in scope and out of
scope for this document.  What I have in mind is to state the assumption
that the TZ data has been securely transmitted from the contributors to the
publishers to the root provider with its integrity intact and that the
servers are expected to maintain the integrity of the data.

2) It might be useful to qualify the 3rd paragraph as applicable when
discovery is done through DNS SRV records.

Cheers,

Joe

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<div dir=3D"ltr">First, I apologize for the late review. It appears that yo=
u may have already had a secdir review from the revision notes, but I could=
 not find the review in my archive. =C2=A0=C2=A0<div><br></div><div>In gene=
ral it seems the document is in good shape and understandable. I think the =
document is ready with nits.=C2=A0 Here are a few minor issues:</div><div><=
br></div><div>1) it might be useful to add something about what is in scope=
 and out of scope for this document.=C2=A0 What I have in mind is to state =
the assumption that the TZ data has been securely transmitted from the cont=
ributors to the publishers to the root provider with its integrity intact a=
nd that the servers are expected to maintain the integrity of the data.=C2=
=A0</div><div><br></div><div>2) It might be useful to qualify the 3rd parag=
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Hi Joe,

On 7/2/15 7:19 AM, Joseph Salowey wrote:
> First, I apologize for the late review. It appears that you may have
> already had a secdir review from the revision notes, but I could not
> find the review in my archive.

The document did already receive a review several months ago, but thank
you anyway for your comments.
>
> In general it seems the document is in good shape and understandable.
> I think the document is ready with nits.  Here are a few minor issues:
>
> 1) it might be useful to add something about what is in scope and out
> of scope for this document.  What I have in mind is to state the
> assumption that the TZ data has been securely transmitted from the
> contributors to the publishers to the root provider with its integrity
> intact and that the servers are expected to maintain the integrity of
> the data.

I think what you are asking for is clearly stated in the converse
already in the Introduction as follows:

>    This specification defines a time zone data distribution service
>    protocol that allows for fast, reliable and accurate delivery of tim=
e
>    zone data and leap second information to client systems.=20

>
> 2) It might be useful to qualify the 3rd paragraph as applicable when
> discovery is done through DNS SRV records.

Perhaps you can provide some small amount of text as to what you are
suggesting, keeping in mind that it's rather late in the day for this
document.

Regards,

Eliot

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    Hi Joe,<br>
    <br>
    <div class=3D"moz-cite-prefix">On 7/2/15 7:19 AM, Joseph Salowey
      wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
cite=3D"mid:CAOgPGoAOvUTOPBSWjzt7Boh7Lgos2FgO9BmmwMZyBVQd=3DaB04w@mail.gm=
ail.com"
      type=3D"cite">
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tf-8">
      <div dir=3D"ltr">First, I apologize for the late review. It appears=

        that you may have already had a secdir review from the revision
        notes, but I could not find the review in my archive.<br>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    The document did already receive a review several months ago, but
    thank you anyway for your comments.<br>
    <blockquote
cite=3D"mid:CAOgPGoAOvUTOPBSWjzt7Boh7Lgos2FgO9BmmwMZyBVQd=3DaB04w@mail.gm=
ail.com"
      type=3D"cite">
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        </div>
        <div>In general it seems the document is in good shape and
          understandable. I think the document is ready with nits.=C2=A0 =
Here
          are a few minor issues:</div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>1) it might be useful to add something about what is in
          scope and out of scope for this document.=C2=A0 What I have in =
mind
          is to state the assumption that the TZ data has been securely
          transmitted from the contributors to the publishers to the
          root provider with its integrity intact and that the servers
          are expected to maintain the integrity of the data. <br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    I think what you are asking for is clearly stated in the converse
    already in the Introduction as follows:<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">=C2=A0=C2=A0 This specification defines a t=
ime zone
      data distribution service<br>
      =C2=A0=C2=A0 protocol that allows for fast, reliable and accurate d=
elivery
      of time<br>
      =C2=A0=C2=A0 zone data and leap second information to client system=
s.=C2=A0</blockquote>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite=3D"mid:CAOgPGoAOvUTOPBSWjzt7Boh7Lgos2FgO9BmmwMZyBVQd=3DaB04w@mail.gm=
ail.com"
      type=3D"cite">
      <div dir=3D"ltr">
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>2) It might be useful to qualify the 3rd paragraph as
          applicable when discovery is done through DNS SRV records.<br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Perhaps you can provide some small amount of text as to what you are
    suggesting, keeping in mind that it's rather late in the day for
    this document.<br>
    <br>
    Regards,<br>
    <br>
    Eliot<br>
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Hi Frank,
Thank you for your comments.
  #1
I agree with Al. ISSU upgrade is a manual procedure, and usually operators =
would well prepare for this event. Given this an ISSU upgrade during the Do=
S attack is very unlikely done by Operators.
#2, #3
It is a valid concern, since the images are huge and bulky, running into in=
tegrity and corruption issues are very likely. I conquer with Fernando on h=
is response. This has been addressed in section 3.1.


-Ramdas

From: "Fernando Calabria (fcalabri)" <fcalabri@cisco.com<mailto:fcalabri@ci=
sco.com>>
Date: Wednesday, July 1, 2015 at 6:29 PM
To: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com<mailto:acmorton@att.com>>, "X=
ialiang (Frank)" <frank.xialiang@huawei.com<mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.co=
m>>, "secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secd=
ir@ietf.org>>, "iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:=
iesg@ietf.org>>, "draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-=
bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<mailt=
o:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01


Thank you Frank for your review and Al for addressing # 1 and # 4 ..

In regards to # 2 and #3


We also saw and considered how  verifications like the authenticity of a SW=
 package may be a concern , even more,   nowadays,  with emerging SDN  like=
 implementations ,

Unfortunately   not all the vendors nor even software specific operating sy=
stems  within vendors,  have =93consistent  implementations" of  Digital Si=
gnatures nor  Certificates and do not make these checks a mandatory task  b=
efore performing a Software upgrade.

Because of it  we tried to address it with a =91generic=92 statement on Sec=
tions 3.1 and 3.2 that basically read:

"Internal compatibility
   verification may be performed by the software running on the DUT, to
   verify the checksum of the files downloaded as well as any other
   pertinent checks. Depending upon vendor implementation, these
   mechanisms may extend to include verification that the downloaded
   module(s) =85"

=97

Internal compatibility verification may be
   performed by the software running on the DUT, as part of the upgrade
   process itself, to verify the checksum of the files downloaded as
   well as any other pertinent checks=85.



The authors of this document understand  how these are real issues / concer=
ns on managing an operating a  Software   environment, ,  but we do not bel=
ieve that an specific ISSU  document should addresses them in  detail

-Fernando







From: <MORTON>, "ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com<mailto:acmorton@att.com>>
Date: Wednesday, July 1, 2015 at 8:08 AM
To: "Xialiang (Frank)" <frank.xialiang@huawei.com<mailto:frank.xialiang@hua=
wei.com>>, "secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org<mailt=
o:secdir@ietf.org>>, "iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org<m=
ailto:iesg@ietf.org>>, "draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft=
-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org=
<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org>>
Subject: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

Hi Frank,
Thanks for your review and comments.

On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved here,
it seems unlikely that operators will begin an upgrade
during a DoS attack when they know it=92s in-progress, IMO.
Others should chime-in if they have other rationale or opinions.

On #4, That=92s the draft date, not the expiration date.
see below,
Al
doc shepherd

Benchmarking Working Group                                  Sarah Banks
Internet Draft                                           VSS Monitoring
Intended status: Informational                        Fernando Calabria
Expires: November 30, 2015                                Cisco Systems
                                                           Gery Czirjak
                                                          Ramdas Machat
                                                       Juniper Networks
                                                           May 30, 2015

ISSU Benchmarking Methodology
draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

From: Xialiang (Frank) [mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com]
Sent: Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM
To: secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>; iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf=
.org>; draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-m=
eth.all@ietf.org>
Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comment.

This draft specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures designed =
to characterize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject =
to an ISSU event.

I have the following comments:

1.       Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test=
 when the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?

2.       In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility check=
s and verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention that the=
 device should verify the authenticity and integrity of its download. I.e. =
verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/CRL for the used signature. And t=
hat a system must not load unverified code;

3.       even in a test environment all deployed software components must b=
e verified (e.g. using signatures);

4.       Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015

Recommendation:  Ready With Issues

B.R.
Frank

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<div>Hi Frank,</div>
<div><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"></span>Thank =
you for your comments.</div>
<div>&nbsp;<span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"> </span=
>#1&nbsp;</div>
<div><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"></span>I agre=
e with Al. ISSU upgrade is a manual procedure, and usually operators would =
well prepare for this event. Given this an ISSU upgrade during the DoS atta=
ck is very unlikely done by Operators.</div>
<div><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"></span></div>
<div><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"></span>#2, #3=
</div>
<div><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"></span>It is =
a valid concern, since the images are huge and bulky, running into integrit=
y and corruption issues are very likely. I conquer with Fernando on his res=
ponse. This has been addressed in section
 3.1.&nbsp;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre"></span>&nbsp;=
</div>
<div>-Ramdas</div>
<div><br>
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>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday, July 1, 2015 at 6:=
29 PM<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">To: </span>&quot;MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)&quo=
t; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:acmorton@att.com">acmorton@att.com</a>&gt;, &quot;=
Xialiang (Frank)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com">fra=
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 &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a h=
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iesg@ietf.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bm=
wg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a>&quot;
 &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org">draft-ietf-b=
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<div>
<div><br>
Thank you Frank for your review and Al for addressing # 1 and # 4 ..</div>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>In regards to # 2 and #3&nbsp;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>We also saw and considered how &nbsp;verifications like the authentici=
ty of a SW package may be a concern , even more, &nbsp; nowadays, &nbsp;wit=
h emerging SDN &nbsp;like implementations ,&nbsp;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Unfortunately &nbsp; not all the vendors nor even software specific op=
erating systems &nbsp;within vendors, &nbsp;have =93consistent &nbsp;implem=
entations&quot; of &nbsp;Digital Signatures nor &nbsp;Certificates and do n=
ot make these checks a mandatory task &nbsp;before performing a Software up=
grade.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Because of it &nbsp;we tried to address it with a =91generic=92 statem=
ent on Sections 3.1 and 3.2 that basically read:</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>&quot;Internal compatibility</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;verification may be performed by the software running on =
the DUT, to</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;verify the checksum of the files downloaded as well as an=
y other</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;pertinent checks. Depending upon vendor implementation, t=
hese</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;mechanisms may extend to include verification that the do=
wnloaded</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;module(s) =85&quot;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>=97</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>
<div>Internal compatibility verification may be</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;performed by the software running on the DUT, as part of =
the upgrade</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;process itself, to verify the checksum of the files downl=
oaded as</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;well as any other pertinent checks=85.</div>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>The authors of this document understand &nbsp;how these are real issue=
s / concerns on managing an operating a &nbsp;Software &nbsp; environment, =
, &nbsp;but we do not believe that an specific ISSU &nbsp;document should a=
ddresses them in &nbsp;detail&nbsp;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>-Fernando&nbsp;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
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C (AL)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:acmorton@att.com">acmorton@att.com</a>&g=
t;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday, July 1, 2015 at 8:=
08 AM<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">To: </span>&quot;Xialiang (Frank)&quot; &l=
t;<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com">frank.xialiang@huawei.com</a=
>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&quot; &=
lt;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a hre=
f=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&quot;
 &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=
=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-met=
h.all@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.al=
l@ietf.org">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>RE: Secdir review of draft=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Hi Frank,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Thanks for your review and comments.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">On #1, DoS attacks: since human control is involved =
here,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">it seems unlikely that operators will begin an upgra=
de<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">during a DoS attack when they know it=92s in-progres=
s, IMO.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Others should chime-in if they have other rationale =
or opinions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">On #4, That=92s the draft date, not the expiration d=
ate.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">see below,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Al<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">doc shepherd<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Benchmarking Working Group&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Sarah Banks<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Internet Draft&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; VSS Monito=
ring<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Intended status: Informational&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Fernando Calabria<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">Expires: November 30, 2015&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp; Cisco Systems<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Ger=
y Czirjak<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Ramdas Ma=
chat<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
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nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Juniper Networks<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;May=
 30, 2015<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">ISSU Benchmarking Methodology<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: 'Courie=
r New'; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" align=3D"left" style=3D"text-align:left"><b><span st=
yle=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">From:</span></b><=
span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;"> Xialiang =
(Frank) [<a href=3D"mailto:frank.xialiang@huawei.com">mailto:frank.xialiang=
@huawei.com</a>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, June 30, 2015 9:29 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>; <a href=
=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org">
iesg@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org=
">draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth.all@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Secdir review of draft-ietf-bmwg-issu-meth-01<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" align=3D"left" style=3D"text-align:left"><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">I have re=
viewed this document as part of the security directorate's&nbsp;ongoing eff=
ort to review all IETF documents being processed by the&nbsp;IESG. &nbsp;Th=
ese comments were written primarily for the benefit
 of the&nbsp;security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs =
should treat&nbsp;these comments just like any other last call comment.<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">This draf=
t specifies a set of common methodologies and procedures designed to charac=
terize the overall behavior of a Device Under Test (DUT), subject to an ISS=
U event.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">I have th=
e following comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in=
;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">Should the ISSU test methodology include the verification and test when =
the DUT is under network DDoS attacks?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">In the software download stage, in addition to compatibility checks and =
verification of checksums, we should also explicitly mention that the devic=
e should verify the authenticity and
 integrity of its download. I.e. verify signatures on signed code and OCSP/=
CRL for the used signature. And that a system must not load unverified code=
;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">even in a test environment all deployed software components must be veri=
fied (e.g. using signatures);<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText" style=3D"margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso=
-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><span s=
tyle=3D"mso-list:Ignore">4.<span style=3D"font-style: normal; font-variant:=
 normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-fam=
ily: 'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-C=
N">Nits: this draft has expired on May-30, 2015<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">Recommend=
ation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">B.R.<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN">Frank<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
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Brian,

Thank you very much for your review. I submitted revised version (-06, no=
t -05, sorry for unfixed nits).

On 2015-06-26 05:18, Brian Weis (bew) wrote:
> 1. Describing a resource consumption threat ("excessive layer-2
> broadcasting=93) resulting from a man-in-the-middle modifying policy
> sent within an option. If there is a suggested mitigation (e.g., a
> means of integrity protecting the DHCPv6 traffic between the client
> and server) this would be worth noting. But I=92m not sure if there
> any available mitigation in a ROLL environment.

I added some text on network level protection case in addition to use of =
DHCPv6 security, including filter on the border router in a ROLL network.

> 2. Making a requirement that a server implementation choose
> reasonable policy values. This might be more useful if it were
> phrased as a threat, something like =93Server implementations need to
> take care in setting reasonable bounds for each parameter in order to
> avoid overloading the network."

Thanks. I used your text with 'server and client implementations.'

> 3. Making a requirement that the "DHCP server or the network itself
> shall be trusted by some means including network access control or
> DHCP authentication=94.  Is this this =93shall=94 intended to be an RFC
> 2119  =93MUST=94?

No. I think making secure network properly to use DHCPv6 option is just a=
 generic requirement and it's beyond the scope of this document.

Best Regards,

Yusuke


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For telechat 2015-07-09

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Shaun Cooley           T 2015-07-02 draft-ietf-appsawg-text-markdown-08
Chris Lonvick          TR2015-06-09 draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14
Matthew Miller         T 2015-06-11 draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-07
Takeshi Takahashi      T 2015-07-03 draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-06
Sean Turner            T 2015-06-29 draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-active-leasequery-03
David Waltermire       T 2015-06-29 draft-ietf-pcp-authentication-12
Sam Weiler             T 2015-06-29 draft-ietf-pcp-proxy-08


For telechat 2015-08-05

Tina TSOU              T 2015-06-24 draft-ietf-dane-ops-13

Last calls and special requests:

John Bradley             2015-07-08 draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04
Dave Cridland            2015-07-27 draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Alan DeKok               2015-07-09 draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6-10
Donald Eastlake          2015-07-13 draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-address-generation-privacy-07
Shawn Emery              2015-07-10 draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Tobias Gondrom         E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-11
Olafur Gudmundsson       2015-07-29 draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-05
Zach Shelby              2014-06-06 draft-housley-implementer-obligations-02
Hannes Tschofenig        2015-07-07 draft-wkumari-dhc-capport-13
Carl Wallace             2015-06-29 draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-10
Tom Yu                   2015-07-02 draft-ietf-grow-filtering-threats-06
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Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
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This document is ready for publication.

[summary of this document]

This document analyzes the threats of IS-IS protocol.
It first summarizes the current state of the IS-IS protocol, with special
focus on key usage and key management (in section 2), and then analyzes the
security gaps in order to identify security requirements (in section 3).

In the summary of the current state of the protocol (section 2), it already
mentioned the threats of the protocol, i.e. replay attack and spoofing
attack, for each of the three message types of IS-IS protocol.
Section 3 summarizes, organizes, and develops the threat analysis and
provides candidate direction to cope with the threats by listing
requirements and by listing related I-D works.

[minor comment]

As mentioned in the security consideration section, this draft does not
modify any of the existing protocols.
It thus does not produce any new security concerns.
So, the security consideration section seems adequate.
The authors could consider citing RFC 5310 in Section 5, since I feel like
that this draft does not discuss all the content of the consideration
section of the rfc (it does discuss major parts of the section, though).

Cheers,
Take




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Let me add one more comment here.
We could probably discourage the use of HMAC-MD5, and encourage the use of
HMAC-SHA family instead.

Take

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Takeshi Takahashi [mailto:takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp]
> Sent: Friday, July 3, 2015 1:10 PM
> To: 'draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis.all@tools.ietf.org'
> Cc: 'iesg@ietf.org'; 'secdir@ietf.org'; 'karp-chairs@tools.ietf.org'
> Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
other
> last call comments.
> 
> This document is ready for publication.
> 
> [summary of this document]
> 
> This document analyzes the threats of IS-IS protocol.
> It first summarizes the current state of the IS-IS protocol, with special
focus
> on key usage and key management (in section 2), and then analyzes the
security
> gaps in order to identify security requirements (in section 3).
> 
> In the summary of the current state of the protocol (section 2), it
already
> mentioned the threats of the protocol, i.e. replay attack and spoofing
attack,
> for each of the three message types of IS-IS protocol.
> Section 3 summarizes, organizes, and develops the threat analysis and
provides
> candidate direction to cope with the threats by listing requirements and
by
> listing related I-D works.
> 
> [minor comment]
> 
> As mentioned in the security consideration section, this draft does not
modify
> any of the existing protocols.
> It thus does not produce any new security concerns.
> So, the security consideration section seems adequate.
> The authors could consider citing RFC 5310 in Section 5, since I feel like
that
> this draft does not discuss all the content of the consideration section
of
> the rfc (it does discuss major parts of the section, though).
> 
> Cheers,
> Take
> 



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These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security =
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document explores the topic of Network Reconnaissance in IPv6 =
networks. It analyzes the feasibility of address-scan attacks in IPv6 =
networks in different scenarios and proposes comments to mitigate to =
certain issues.=20
Follows are two comments:
1) There are overlaps in the contents of the security consideration and =
conclusions. Maybe it is reasonable to integrate the the conclusions =
into security considerations. In addition, the security consideration =
section is normally about the new issues or concerns raised by the =
proposed work. However, this memo does not propose any new mechanism and =
so introduce no security vulnerability. I suggest the authors clarify =
this in the security consideration section.=20
2) There is a very big section and a lot of short sections. I suggest to =
combine sections 4-14 into a single one to make the lengths of different =
sections more balanced.=20
Anyway,  the  analysis in this work is quite extensive. I really enjoy =
reading it. I think this document is nearly ready for publication with =
some tiny modifications.=20
Cheers
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face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: 14px;"><br></font><div><div><font =
face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: 14px;">I have reviewed this document =
as part of the security directorate=A1=AFs&nbsp;ongoing effort to review =
all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.&nbsp;These comments were =
written primarily for the benefit of the security&nbsp;area directors. =
&nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs should treat these&nbsp;comments =
just like any other last call comments.</font></div><div><font =
face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: 14px;"><br></font></div><div><pre =
style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; white-space: pre-wrap;"><font =
face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: 14px;">This document explores the =
topic of Network Reconnaissance in IPv6 networks. It analyzes the =
feasibility of address-scan attacks in IPv6 networks in different =
scenarios and proposes comments to mitigate to certain issues. =
</font></pre><pre style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; white-space: =
pre-wrap;"><font face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: 14px;">Follows are =
two comments:</font></pre><pre style=3D"word-wrap: break-word;"><font =
face=3D"Times"><span style=3D"font-size: 14px; white-space: =
pre-wrap;">1) There are overlaps in the contents of the security =
consideration and conclusions. Maybe it is reasonable to integrate the =
the conclusions into security considerations. In addition, the security =
consideration section is normally about the new issues or concerns =
raised by the proposed work. However, this memo does not propose any new =
mechanism and so introduce no security vulnerability. I suggest the =
authors clarify this in the security consideration section. =
</span></font></pre><div><font face=3D"Times"><span style=3D"font-size: =
14px;">2) There is a very big section and a lot of short sections. I =
suggest to combine sections 4-14 into a single one to make the lengths =
of different sections more balanced.&nbsp;</span></font></div><pre =
style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; white-space: pre-wrap;"><font =
face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: 14px;">Anyway,  the  analysis in this =
work is quite extensive. I really enjoy reading it. I think this =
document is nearly ready for publication with some tiny modifications. =
</font></pre><pre style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; white-space: =
pre-wrap;"><font face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: =
14px;">Cheers</font></pre><pre style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; =
white-space: pre-wrap;"><font face=3D"Times" style=3D"font-size: =
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On Wed, Jul 1, 2015 at 10:57 PM, Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> wrote:

>  Hi Joe,
>
> On 7/2/15 7:19 AM, Joseph Salowey wrote:
>
> First, I apologize for the late review. It appears that you may have
> already had a secdir review from the revision notes, but I could not find
> the review in my archive.
>
>
> The document did already receive a review several months ago, but thank
> you anyway for your comments.
>
>
>  In general it seems the document is in good shape and understandable. I
> think the document is ready with nits.  Here are a few minor issues:
>
>  1) it might be useful to add something about what is in scope and out of
> scope for this document.  What I have in mind is to state the assumption
> that the TZ data has been securely transmitted from the contributors to the
> publishers to the root provider with its integrity intact and that the
> servers are expected to maintain the integrity of the data.
>
>
> I think what you are asking for is clearly stated in the converse already
> in the Introduction as follows:
>
>    This specification defines a time zone data distribution service
>    protocol that allows for fast, reliable and accurate delivery of time
>    zone data and leap second information to client systems.
>
>
> [Joe]  I'm OK with this.


>
>  2) It might be useful to qualify the 3rd paragraph as applicable when
> discovery is done through DNS SRV records.
>
>
> Perhaps you can provide some small amount of text as to what you are
> suggesting, keeping in mind that it's rather late in the day for this
> document.
>
>
[Joe] Sure, how about:

 "A malicious attacker with access to the DNS server data, or able to get
spoofed answers cached in a recursive resolver, can potentially cause
clients to connect to any server chosen by the attacker. When performing
DNS SRV based discovery in the absence of a secure DNS option, clients
SHOULD check that the..."




> Regards,
>
>
>

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quo=
te">On Wed, Jul 1, 2015 at 10:57 PM, Eliot Lear <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a hr=
ef=3D"mailto:lear@cisco.com" target=3D"_blank">lear@cisco.com</a>&gt;</span=
> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
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  <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    Hi Joe,<span class=3D""><br>
    <br>
    <div>On 7/2/15 7:19 AM, Joseph Salowey
      wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">
     =20
      <div dir=3D"ltr">First, I apologize for the late review. It appears
        that you may have already had a secdir review from the revision
        notes, but I could not find the review in my archive.<br>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br></span>
    The document did already receive a review several months ago, but
    thank you anyway for your comments.<span class=3D""><br>
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">
      <div dir=3D"ltr">
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>In general it seems the document is in good shape and
          understandable. I think the document is ready with nits.=C2=A0 He=
re
          are a few minor issues:</div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>1) it might be useful to add something about what is in
          scope and out of scope for this document.=C2=A0 What I have in mi=
nd
          is to state the assumption that the TZ data has been securely
          transmitted from the contributors to the publishers to the
          root provider with its integrity intact and that the servers
          are expected to maintain the integrity of the data. <br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br></span>
    I think what you are asking for is clearly stated in the converse
    already in the Introduction as follows:<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">=C2=A0=C2=A0 This specification defines a tim=
e zone
      data distribution service<br>
      =C2=A0=C2=A0 protocol that allows for fast, reliable and accurate del=
ivery
      of time<br>
      =C2=A0=C2=A0 zone data and leap second information to client systems.=
=C2=A0</blockquote><span class=3D"">
    <br></span></div></blockquote><div>[Joe] =C2=A0I&#39;m OK with this.=C2=
=A0</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin=
:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204)=
;border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D=
"#000000"><span class=3D"">
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">
      <div dir=3D"ltr">
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>2) It might be useful to qualify the 3rd paragraph as
          applicable when discovery is done through DNS SRV records.<br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br></span>
    Perhaps you can provide some small amount of text as to what you are
    suggesting, keeping in mind that it&#39;s rather late in the day for
    this document.<br>
    <br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>[Joe] Sure, how about:</div>=
<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:13.194443702697754px"><br></=
span></div><div><span style=3D"color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:13.19444370269775=
4px">=C2=A0&quot;A malicious attacker with access to the DNS server data, o=
r able to</span>=C2=A0<span style=3D"color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:13.19444370=
2697754px">get spoofed answers cached in a recursive resolver, can potentia=
lly=C2=A0</span><font color=3D"#000000" size=3D"2">cause clients to connect=
 to any server chosen by the attacker.=C2=A0</font><font color=3D"#000000">=
When</font><font color=3D"#000000" size=3D"2">=C2=A0performing DNS SRV base=
d discovery in </font><span style=3D"font-size:13.194443702697754px;color:r=
gb(0,0,0)">the absence of a secure DNS option, clients SHOULD check that th=
e...&quot;</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:13.194443702697754px;c=
olor:rgb(0,0,0)"><br></span></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:13.19444370=
2697754px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><br></span></div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote c=
lass=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1p=
x;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1=
ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    Regards,<br>
    <br><br>
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: document is ready for publication (with mild reservation).

My thanks to the document editors for producing a readable document.

Mild reservation: when I look at the use cases for PCP Proxy in this 
document (e.g. a consumer router doing NAT, connected to hotel NAT, 
connected to carrier NAT), it's hard to imagine that operational 
environment often fitting within the description of PCP's "simple 
threat model" (RFC6887, section 18.1).  And once you reject the 
simplifying assumptions in that "simple threat model", RFC6877 says 
PCP needs a security mechanism (section 18.2 of RFC6877).  Maybe this 
document should explicity reinforce that need, perhaps citing and 
blocking on draft-ietf-pcp-authentication?


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft provides guidance on how to process Unicode string nicknames.

The security considerations section does exist and refers to the PRECIS
framework's security consideration in relation to this draft's use of the
string class "FreeformClass" and visually similar characters.  UTS #39
is also referenced for security considerations of Unicode characters in
general and of visually similar characters.  I agree that the references
adequately covers considerations for nicknames in Unicode strings.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

None.

Shawn.
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Dear Samuel,

Many thanks for the review.=20

FWIW, PCP auth is not cited in this document because we followed the same a=
pproach as in RFC6887 and RFC6970.=20

Blocking on draft-ietf-pcp-authentication is not justified IMHO because the=
 proxy can be enabled with ACLs enabled at the client, server and the netwo=
rk in between.=20

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De=A0: Samuel Weiler [mailto:weiler@watson.org]
> Envoy=E9=A0: lundi 6 juillet 2015 02:54
> =C0=A0: secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-pcp-proxy@tools.ietf.o=
rg
> Objet=A0: secdir review of draft-ietf-pcp-proxy-08
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> Summary: document is ready for publication (with mild reservation).
>=20
> My thanks to the document editors for producing a readable document.
>=20
> Mild reservation: when I look at the use cases for PCP Proxy in this
> document (e.g. a consumer router doing NAT, connected to hotel NAT,
> connected to carrier NAT), it's hard to imagine that operational
> environment often fitting within the description of PCP's "simple
> threat model" (RFC6887, section 18.1).  And once you reject the
> simplifying assumptions in that "simple threat model", RFC6877 says
> PCP needs a security mechanism (section 18.2 of RFC6877).  Maybe this
> document should explicity reinforce that need, perhaps citing and
> blocking on draft-ietf-pcp-authentication?


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(adding the hybi list)

It seems to me that this effectively adding an actor (the intermediary) 
, and defining (not as explicitly as I think it needs to be) protocol 
mechanics for that actor in ways that the base specification did not 
anticipate.

I'm not comfortable that the consequences of these new mechanics 
(specifically - that the intermediary can directly participate in the 
extension negotiations, and change the results) are well understood. The 
additions to the text you propose will certainly help point out that 
there might be some, and the message that the endpoint won't have 
insight into how its messages are handled beyond the intermediary needs 
to be prominent.

But I wonder if the mechanics of an intermediary _changing the protocol 
signalling_ is something the working group should explicitly work on 
writing down?

RjS

On 6/30/15 3:42 AM, Takeshi Yoshino wrote:
> Thank you for review, Robert.
>
> On Thu, Jun 25, 2015 at 6:18 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com 
> <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>> wrote:
>
>     I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>     ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>     IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>     security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>     these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
>     Summary: Ready with issues
>
>     (fwiw, I also reviewed up through version -24).
>
>     Section 7 (Intermediaries) should be more explicit that it's talking about an intermediary doing compression on one side and not (or doing different compression) on the other.
>     (If that's not what it's trying to set up, please clarify).
>
> OK. So, I'd like to change the text as follows:
>
> When an intermediary proxies ... Per-message Compression of messages 
> received from one peer, and then forward the messages to the other 
> peer, if the intermediary ...
>
>     It's not clear from reading RFC6455 that the idea of intermediaries changing the contents of the websocket extension negotiation mechanism was considered - have I missed the text in that RFC that discusses that?
>     Are there other extensions that suggest similar behavior? It's not immediately clear that the protocol mechanics do the right thing when the different negotiations on each side of the proxy fail differently.
>
> It's not well discussed in RFC6455. Right. AFAIK, there's no such 
> extension defined, yet.
>
> I understand that this text (intermediary section in the I-D) works 
> just not to disallow change of compression but there's nothing in 
> RFC6455 that guarantees that such transformation doesn't cause any 
> issue with other infrastructure of the WebSocket protocol.
>
> I believe that unless any extension that interferes with the other 
> negotiated extensions (e.g. counting the number of negotiated 
> extensions, relying on PMCE, etc.), the core WebSocket protocol 
> (things defined in RFC6455) should work. If such an extension is 
> introduced, it would be just considered to be incompatible with PMCEs, 
> or that extension should describe how to coordinate with change on 
> PMCE in the intermediaries section of its RFC.
>
> I think this is more reasonable than prohibiting change on Per-message 
> Compression by intermediaries.
>
>     This also seems to put an endpoint in a position where it has no say on what an intermediary does with the traffic on the other side of it. Is that worth discussing in the document?
>
> Ah, right. Maybe some text like:
>
> "It's not guaranteed that the PMCE which an endpoint has negotiated in 
> the opening handshake is preserved in the whole path to the peer 
> endpoint."
>
>     It would be good to point to, or provide, a discussion of how the extension negotiation mechanism in WebSockets is meant to be protected.
>
>
> As a general discussion to cover other extensions (if they want. by 
> referring to this to-be-RFC) like the section defining terms to 
> complement RFC6455 [1]?
>
> [1] 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3


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    (adding the hybi list)<br>
    <br>
    It seems to me that this effectively adding an actor (the
    intermediary) , and defining (not as explicitly as I think it needs
    to be) protocol mechanics for that actor in ways that the base
    specification did not anticipate.<br>
    <br>
    I'm not comfortable that the consequences of these new mechanics
    (specifically - that the intermediary can directly participate in
    the extension negotiations, and change the results) are well
    understood. The additions to the text you propose will certainly
    help point out that there might be some, and the message that the
    endpoint won't have insight into how its messages are handled beyond
    the intermediary needs to be prominent. <br>
    <br>
    But I wonder if the mechanics of an intermediary _changing the
    protocol signalling_ is something the working group should
    explicitly work on writing down?<br>
    <br>
    RjS<br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix"><br>
      On 6/30/15 3:42 AM, Takeshi Yoshino wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAH9hSJYdb95V48jvuGAg5ymjhaaAbcYcuv=+OiTFnJ+PRyRNuQ@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div class="gmail_extra">
          <div class="gmail_quote">Thank you for review, Robert.</div>
          <div class="gmail_quote"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jun 25, 2015 at 6:18 AM,
            Robert Sparks <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                href="mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com" target="_blank">rjsparks@nostrum.com</a>&gt;</span>
            wrote:<br>
            <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px
0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
                <pre>I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with issues

(fwiw, I also reviewed up through version -24).

Section 7 (Intermediaries) should be more explicit that it's talking about an intermediary doing compression on one side and not (or doing different compression) on the other.
(If that's not what it's trying to set up, please clarify).
</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>OK. So, I'd like to change the text as follows:</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>
              <div>When an intermediary proxies ... Per-message
                Compression of messages received from one peer, and then
                forward the messages to the other peer, if the
                intermediary ...</div>
            </div>
            <div>Â <br>
            </div>
            <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px
0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
                <pre>It's not clear from reading RFC6455 that the idea of intermediaries changing the contents of the websocket extension negotiation mechanism was considered - have I missed the text in that RFC that discusses that?
Are there other extensions that suggest similar behavior? It's not immediately clear that the protocol mechanics do the right thing when the different negotiations on each side of the proxy fail differently.
</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>It's not well discussed in RFC6455. Right. AFAIK,
              there's no such extension defined, yet.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I understand that this text (intermediary section in
              the I-D) works just not to disallow change of compression
              but there's nothing in RFC6455 that guarantees that such
              transformation doesn't cause any issue with other
              infrastructure of the WebSocket protocol.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I believe that unless any extension that interferes
              with the other negotiated extensions (e.g. counting the
              number of negotiated extensions, relying on PMCE, etc.),
              the core WebSocket protocol (things defined in RFC6455)
              should work. If such an extension is introduced, it would
              be just considered to be incompatible with PMCEs, or that
              extension should describe how to coordinate with change on
              PMCE in the intermediaries section of its RFC.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I think this is more reasonable than prohibiting change
              on Per-message Compression by intermediaries.</div>
            <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px
0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
                <pre>This also seems to put an endpoint in a position where it has no say on what an intermediary does with the traffic on the other side of it. Is that worth discussing in the document?</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>Ah, right. Maybe some text like:</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>"It's not guaranteed that the PMCE which an endpoint
              has negotiated in the opening handshake is preserved in
              the whole path to the peer endpoint."</div>
            <div>Â </div>
            <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px
0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000">
                <pre>It would be good to point to, or provide, a discussion of how the extension negotiation mechanism in WebSockets is meant to be protected.</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>As a general discussion to cover other extensions (if
              they want. by referring to this to-be-RFC) like the
              section defining terms to complement RFC6455 [1]?</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>[1] <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3">https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3</a></div>
            <div>Â </div>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
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Hi, Dacheng,

Thanks so much for your feedback! Please find my comments in-line....

On 07/05/2015 10:46 AM, Dacheng wrote:
> 
> Follows are two comments:
> 
> 1) There are overlaps in the contents of the security consideration
> and conclusions. 

It would seem that we could move the "Conclusions" section as Section
3.6? (Tim?)
Some overlap is usually fine, anyway -- particularly with the Intro and
Sec Cons sections...


> Maybe it is reasonable to integrate the the
> conclusions into security considerations. In addition, the security
> consideration section is normally about the new issues or concerns
> raised by the proposed work. However, this memo does not propose any
> new mechanism and so introduce no security vulnerability. I suggest
> the authors clarify this in the security consideration section.

How about changing the fist sentence of the Sec Cons section to:
" This document explores the topic of Network Reconnaissance in IPv6
   networks, but does not introduce any new security issues."

  -- although one might argue that we do introduce new *concerns*.


> 2) There is a very big section and a lot of short sections. I suggest
> to combine sections 4-14 into a single one to make the lengths of
> different sections more balanced.

The sections have been split on a "topic" rather than "length" basis.
While the length is unbalanced, it makes it easy to reference each
specific reconnaissance technique (e.g., from the table earlier in the
document).

Thanks!

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Hi Take,

Thanks for your  review and comments. Shall address both your comments in t=
he next update i.e.,
a. Ref. to 5310 in Section 4
b.  Shall recommend usage of RFC 5310 instead of RFC 5304 (HMAC-MD5)

" In view of openly published attack vectors, as noted in Section 1 of  [RF=
C5310] on HMAC-MD5 cryptographic authentication mechanism,=20
   IS-IS deployments SHOULD use HMAC-SHA family [RFC5310]  instead of HMAC-=
MD5 [RFC5304] for protecting IS-IS PDUs."

Please suggest if the above is sufficient to address #b (or happy to consid=
er better text).  Thx!

--
Uma C.

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Subject: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04

Let me add one more comment here.
We could probably discourage the use of HMAC-MD5, and encourage the use of =
HMAC-SHA family instead.

Take

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Takeshi Takahashi [mailto:takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp]
> Sent: Friday, July 3, 2015 1:10 PM
> To: 'draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis.all@tools.ietf.org'
> Cc: 'iesg@ietf.org'; 'secdir@ietf.org'; 'karp-chairs@tools.ietf.org'
> Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
>=20
> Hello,
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security=20
> area directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like=20
> any
other
> last call comments.
>=20
> This document is ready for publication.
>=20
> [summary of this document]
>=20
> This document analyzes the threats of IS-IS protocol.
> It first summarizes the current state of the IS-IS protocol, with=20
> special
focus
> on key usage and key management (in section 2), and then analyzes the
security
> gaps in order to identify security requirements (in section 3).
>=20
> In the summary of the current state of the protocol (section 2), it
already
> mentioned the threats of the protocol, i.e. replay attack and spoofing
attack,
> for each of the three message types of IS-IS protocol.
> Section 3 summarizes, organizes, and develops the threat analysis and
provides
> candidate direction to cope with the threats by listing requirements=20
> and
by
> listing related I-D works.
>=20
> [minor comment]
>=20
> As mentioned in the security consideration section, this draft does=20
> not
modify
> any of the existing protocols.
> It thus does not produce any new security concerns.
> So, the security consideration section seems adequate.
> The authors could consider citing RFC 5310 in Section 5, since I feel=20
> like
that
> this draft does not discuss all the content of the consideration=20
> section
of
> the rfc (it does discuss major parts of the section, though).
>=20
> Cheers,
> Take
>=20



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Hi Uma,

The proposed sentence is fine to me, thank you for addressing my comments.

Regards,
Take



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Uma Chunduri [mailto:uma.chunduri@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, July 7, 2015 4:56 AM
> To: Takeshi Takahashi; draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis.all@tools.ietf.org
> Cc: iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; karp-chairs@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
> 
> Hi Take,
> 
> Thanks for your  review and comments. Shall address both your comments in
the
> next update i.e., a. Ref. to 5310 in Section 4 b.  Shall recommend usage
of
> RFC 5310 instead of RFC 5304 (HMAC-MD5)
> 
> " In view of openly published attack vectors, as noted in Section 1 of
> [RFC5310] on HMAC-MD5 cryptographic authentication mechanism,
>    IS-IS deployments SHOULD use HMAC-SHA family [RFC5310]  instead of
HMAC-MD5
> [RFC5304] for protecting IS-IS PDUs."
> 
> Please suggest if the above is sufficient to address #b (or happy to
consider
> better text).  Thx!
> 
> --
> Uma C.
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Takeshi Takahashi [mailto:takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp]
> Sent: Friday, July 03, 2015 6:40 AM
> To: draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis.all@tools.ietf.org
> Cc: iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; karp-chairs@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
> 
> Let me add one more comment here.
> We could probably discourage the use of HMAC-MD5, and encourage the use of
> HMAC-SHA family instead.
> 
> Take
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Takeshi Takahashi [mailto:takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp]
> > Sent: Friday, July 3, 2015 1:10 PM
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> > Cc: 'iesg@ietf.org'; 'secdir@ietf.org'; 'karp-chairs@tools.ietf.org'
> > Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
> >
> > Hello,
> >
> > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing
> > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> > These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
> > area directors.
> > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
> > any
> other
> > last call comments.
> >
> > This document is ready for publication.
> >
> > [summary of this document]
> >
> > This document analyzes the threats of IS-IS protocol.
> > It first summarizes the current state of the IS-IS protocol, with
> > special
> focus
> > on key usage and key management (in section 2), and then analyzes the
> security
> > gaps in order to identify security requirements (in section 3).
> >
> > In the summary of the current state of the protocol (section 2), it
> already
> > mentioned the threats of the protocol, i.e. replay attack and spoofing
> attack,
> > for each of the three message types of IS-IS protocol.
> > Section 3 summarizes, organizes, and develops the threat analysis and
> provides
> > candidate direction to cope with the threats by listing requirements
> > and
> by
> > listing related I-D works.
> >
> > [minor comment]
> >
> > As mentioned in the security consideration section, this draft does
> > not
> modify
> > any of the existing protocols.
> > It thus does not produce any new security concerns.
> > So, the security consideration section seems adequate.
> > The authors could consider citing RFC 5310 in Section 5, since I feel
> > like
> that
> > this draft does not discuss all the content of the consideration
> > section
> of
> > the rfc (it does discuss major parts of the section, though).
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Take
> >



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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's effort =
to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.

These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area =
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just=
 like any other last call comment.



This document communicates the presence of a captive portal in a WiFi netwo=
rk using DHCP and RAs.



Recommendation:  Ready



The motivation of the document makes sense, namely to avoid interception of=
 traffic, and the document is an easy extension to already available mechan=
isms (RA/DHCP). I was expecting to see a reference to Hotspot 2.0, which ai=
ms to make the interaction between hotspot providers and end devices more i=
ntelligent (but covers a much larger scope).


Minor nit:

In Section 4 you write:


"This document defines two DHCP Captive-Portal options, one for IPv6

   and one for IPv6."



It should of course read "..., one for IPv4 and one for IPv6."



Ciao

Hannes



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echanisms (RA/DHCP). I was expecting to see a reference to Hotspot 2.0, whi=
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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First, thanks again for all your reviews, they really do
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Kathleen and I have noticed that the percentage of dropped
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with nits

Consider adding text to the Introduction mentioning malicious activity
as a possible cause of these unexpected traffic flows, rather than
leaving it toward the end of the document in the Security
Considerations.

The Security Considerations (Section 6) text describes possible
malicious activity by an AS to deliberately cause unexpected traffic
flow through another AS.  Although the first paragraph of the Security
Considerations says "The objective of this document is to inform on this
potential routing security issue", there appears to be no prior mention
in this document of possibility of maliciously induced unexpected
traffic flow.  The current Introduction characterizes the unexpected
traffic flows primarily as side effects of filtering or other
configuration, but appears not to include the possibility of a malicious
cause.

Editorial:

In the second paragraph of Section 1: "While BGP" should be "Although
BGP", to avoid implying dependency or temporal coincidence.

In the first two paragraphs of Section 3.1, "his" should be "its".
Please avoid the unnecessary use of gendered pronouns.

In the first paragraph of Section 3.2, delete "data" from "as much data
information as possible".

For the title of Section 4, consider dropping one instance of the word
"traffic".

In the last paragraph of Section 4.1, in the sentence "...neighboring
AS... opposes the peering agreement", consider replacing "opposes" with
"contravenes", "infringes", or another synonym.


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Hi,

I have re-reviewed this document. Overall, a lot of very good changes 
have been made.
I appreciate the additions to the Security Considerations section. Both 
of those are well
written and give appropriate guidance.

I went back and re-read what I had asked about discussing multicast as a 
malicious
attack vector. My apologies, but I didn't make myself clear. I was 
asking about what
would happen if a device on the Internet were to start sending multicast 
packets to
the 6LBR attempting to get it to forward them to the 6LNs. I'm thinking 
that would
cause a great deal of overhead processing on the 6LBR and perhaps 
overwhelm the
Bluetooth network. Is there a way to prevent or mitigate that?

Best regards,
Chris

On 6/3/15 6:23 PM, Chris Lonvick wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> Overall, the document is well written and explains the concepts well.
>
> I saw that a "test interface" is defined in Section 2.1.  I would like
> to see some guidance in the Security Considerations section about this.
> Hopefully the guidance will describe how the interface is secured, or
> that it can be secured by an operator.
>
> Multicast is mentioned several times throughout the document mostly
> saying that the Bluetooth LE link layer does not support it.  I
> would like to see this addressed in the Security Considerations section
> as well to alert implementers and operators that this may be a point
> of attack.  Any guidance on how to prevent an active, malicious denial
> of service attack using multicast would be appreciated.
>
<remainder elided for brevity>


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Tom,

Thanks a lot for your review. Comments inline.

Pierre.


> On 07 Jul 2015, at 21:10, Tom Yu <tlyu@MIT.EDU> wrote:
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the =
IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
> area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
> comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> Summary: Ready with nits
>=20
> Consider adding text to the Introduction mentioning malicious activity
> as a possible cause of these unexpected traffic flows, rather than
> leaving it toward the end of the document in the Security
> Considerations.
>=20
> The Security Considerations (Section 6) text describes possible
> malicious activity by an AS to deliberately cause unexpected traffic
> flow through another AS.  Although the first paragraph of the Security
> Considerations says "The objective of this document is to inform on =
this
> potential routing security issue", there appears to be no prior =
mention
> in this document of possibility of maliciously induced unexpected
> traffic flow.  The current Introduction characterizes the unexpected
> traffic flows primarily as side effects of filtering or other
> configuration, but appears not to include the possibility of a =
malicious
> cause.


We agree. However, we got feedback in the past that the same technical =
situation can occur without malicious intent and so were asked to reword
the draft without implying malicious intent. We heard at the mic =
=E2=80=9CI=E2=80=99ve done it and I am not evil=E2=80=9D, =E2=80=9CThis =
is traffic engineering, not an attack=E2=80=9D.

Still, we were recommended to put this explanation in the security =
consideration section because, well, it can also happen due to malicious =
intent
(gaining reach for cheap through another party's network).

I=E2=80=99m afraid that by changing this again, I=E2=80=99d be starting =
another revolution (in the mathematical sense) here=E2=80=A6 but what =
about:


Introduction:

OLD: The objective of this draft is to shed light on possible side =
effects associated with more specific prefix filtering. This document =
presents examples of such side effects and discusses approaches towards =
solutions to the problem.

NEW:  The objective of this draft is to shed light on possible side =
effects associated with such more specific prefix filtering.
Such actions can be explained by traffic engineering action, =
misconfiguration, or malicious intent.
This document presents examples of such side effects and discusses =
approaches towards solutions to the problem.


>=20
> Editorial:
>=20
> In the second paragraph of Section 1: "While BGP" should be "Although
> BGP", to avoid implying dependency or temporal coincidence.
>=20
> In the first two paragraphs of Section 3.1, "his" should be "its".
> Please avoid the unnecessary use of gendered pronouns.
>=20
> In the first paragraph of Section 3.2, delete "data" from "as much =
data
> information as possible".
>=20
> For the title of Section 4, consider dropping one instance of the word
> "traffic".
>=20
> In the last paragraph of Section 4.1, in the sentence "...neighboring
> AS... opposes the peering agreement", consider replacing "opposes" =
with
> "contravenes", "infringes", or another synonym.


Thank you !

Cheers,

Pierre.




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style=3D"font-family: Times; font-size: 13px;" =
class=3D"">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"font-family: Times; font-size: =
13px;" class=3D"">The objective of this draft is to shed light on =
possible side effects associated with such more specific prefix =
filtering.</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-family: Times; =
font-size: 13px;" class=3D"">Such actions can be explained by traffic =
engineering action, misconfiguration, or malicious intent</span><span =
style=3D"font-family: Times; font-size: 13px;" =
class=3D"">.</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-family: Times; =
font-size: 13px;" class=3D"">This document presents examples of such =
side effects and discusses approaches towards solutions to the =
problem.</span></div><div><br class=3D""></div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">Editorial:<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">In the second =
paragraph of Section 1: "While BGP" should be "Although<br =
class=3D"">BGP", to avoid implying dependency or temporal =
coincidence.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">In the first two paragraphs of =
Section 3.1, "his" should be "its".<br class=3D"">Please avoid the =
unnecessary use of gendered pronouns.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">In =
the first paragraph of Section 3.2, delete "data" from "as much data<br =
class=3D"">information as possible".<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">For =
the title of Section 4, consider dropping one instance of the word<br =
class=3D"">"traffic".<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">In the last paragraph =
of Section 4.1, in the sentence "...neighboring<br class=3D"">AS... =
opposes the peering agreement", consider replacing "opposes" with<br =
class=3D"">"contravenes", "infringes", or another synonym.<br =
class=3D""></div></blockquote><br class=3D""></div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Thank you !</div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Cheers,&nbsp;</div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Pierre.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><br class=3D""></div></body></html>=

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On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 3:47 AM, Hannes Tschofenig
<Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's effor=
t
> to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security are=
a
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments ju=
st
> like any other last call comment.
>


Thank you for the review....


>
>
> This document communicates the presence of a captive portal in a WiFi
> network using DHCP and RAs.
>
>
>
> Recommendation:  Ready
>
>
>
> The motivation of the document makes sense, namely to avoid interception =
of
> traffic, and the document is an easy extension to already available
> mechanisms (RA/DHCP). I was expecting to see a reference to Hotspot 2.0,
> which aims to make the interaction between hotspot providers and end devi=
ces
> more intelligent (but covers a much larger scope).

I originally had this as an editor's note:
https://github.com/wkumari/draft-wkumari-dhc-capport/blob/de293471faef56251=
7978b709aaca762d1d78dbe/README.md

"[ Ed note: This solution is somewhat similar / complements 802.11u /
   WiFi Passpoint Online Sign-up, but is much simpler, easier to deploy,
   and works on wired as well ]
"

I spent some time looking at the Hotspot 2.0 stuff, but after slogging
through much 4 color glossy type material it seemed that it more
allowed you to use different reaming providers / snap a RADIUS
connection back to another provider. I even spent some $$$ on
purchasing a spec, which I found largely unintelligible.
So, I decided to remove the vague / editorial note... :-)

If you happen to have any suggested text I'm happy to stick it in...


>
>
>
> Minor nit:
>
>
>
> In Section 4 you write:
>
>
>
> =E2=80=9CThis document defines two DHCP Captive-Portal options, one for I=
Pv6
>
>    and one for IPv6.=E2=80=9D
>
>
>
> It should of course read =E2=80=9C=E2=80=A6, one for IPv4 and one for IPv=
6.=E2=80=9D


Thanks. I've fixed it in the editor version.

W

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I don't think the execution is relevant when it was obviously a bad
idea in the first place.
This is like putting rabid weasels in your pants, and later expressing
regret at having chosen those particular rabid weasels and that pair
of pants.
   ---maf

On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 3:47 AM, Hannes Tschofenig
<Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's effor=
t
> to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security are=
a
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments ju=
st
> like any other last call comment.
>
>
>
> This document communicates the presence of a captive portal in a WiFi
> network using DHCP and RAs.
>
>
>
> Recommendation:  Ready
>
>
>
> The motivation of the document makes sense, namely to avoid interception =
of
> traffic, and the document is an easy extension to already available
> mechanisms (RA/DHCP). I was expecting to see a reference to Hotspot 2.0,
> which aims to make the interaction between hotspot providers and end devi=
ces
> more intelligent (but covers a much larger scope).
>
>
>
> Minor nit:
>
>
>
> In Section 4 you write:
>
>
>
> =E2=80=9CThis document defines two DHCP Captive-Portal options, one for I=
Pv6
>
>    and one for IPv6.=E2=80=9D
>
>
>
> It should of course read =E2=80=9C=E2=80=A6, one for IPv4 and one for IPv=
6.=E2=80=9D
>
>
>
> Ciao
>
> Hannes
>
>
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--=20
I don't think the execution is relevant when it was obviously a bad
idea in the first place.
This is like putting rabid weasels in your pants, and later expressing
regret at having chosen those particular rabid weasels and that pair
of pants.
   ---maf


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Hello,

We have a request for a security person to assist with DHCP work early on.
This is specific to IPv6.  Is anyone interested to volunteer?

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Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Sam Hartman is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2015-07-09

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Chris Lonvick          TR2015-06-09 draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14
Sean Turner            T 2015-06-29 draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-active-leasequery-03
Carl Wallace           T 2015-06-29 draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-11
David Waltermire       T 2015-06-29 draft-ietf-pcp-authentication-13


For telechat 2015-08-05

Tina TSOU              T 2015-06-24 draft-ietf-dane-ops-13


For telechat 2015-08-19

Dan Harkins            T 2015-08-05 draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-07

Last calls and special requests:

John Bradley             2015-07-08 draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04
Dave Cridland            2015-07-27 draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Alan DeKok               2015-07-09 draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6-10
Donald Eastlake          2015-07-13 draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-address-generation-privacy-07
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Tobias Gondrom         E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-11
Olafur Gudmundsson       2015-07-29 draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-05
Phillip Hallam-Baker     2015-07-20 draft-ietf-dime-4over6-provisioning-03
Steve Hanna              2015-08-04 draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-02
Zach Shelby              2014-06-06 draft-housley-implementer-obligations-02
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ments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors=
. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any =
other last call comments that arrive in timely manner, and not significantl=
y belated.

I've found this document well-written. I believe it is ready for publicatio=
n modulo some small issues that can hopefully be addressed prior to publica=
tion:


**** Technical *****

* Meta: I would have liked to find (if anything, in an appendix) the ration=
ale for he changes being proposed by this document. Since the changes are s=
aid to originate on operational experience, I think that codifying the less=
ons (problems found, and a rationale for the workarounds). There seems to b=
e a bit of this throughout the document, but not for most of the changes pr=
oposed.


* Section 4.8, page 8:
> Therefore, when a TLS client
>    authenticates the TLS server via a TLSA record with usage DANE-EE(3),
>    CT checks SHOULD NOT be performed.

What are the valid reasons for performing th CT checks? If there are not an=
y, why not make this requirement a "MUST NOT" instead?


* Section 5.1, page 10:
> Servers SHOULD NOT rely on
>    "DANE-EE(3) Cert(0) Full(0)" TLSA records to publish authentication
>    data for raw public keys.

Same here.


* Section 7, page 17:
>    Though CNAMEs are illegal on the right hand side of most indirection
>    records, such as MX and SRV records, they are supported by some
>    implementations.  For example, if the MX or SRV host is a CNAME
>    alias, some implementations may "chase" the CNAME.  If they do, they
>    SHOULD use the target hostname as the preferred TLSA base domain as
>    described above (and if the TLSA records are found there, use the
>    CNAME expanded domain also in SNI and certificate name checks).

If CNAMES on the right hand side of most indirection records are illegal, w=
hy trying to process them in the first place?



* Section 9, page 21:
> This order SHOULD be configurable by the MTA
>    administrator.=20

Please expand "MTA". Also, why make the explanation mail-specific?


* Section 13, page 26:
>    The signature validity period for TLSA records should also not be too
>    long.  Signed DNSSEC records can be replayed by an MiTM attacker
>    provided the signatures have not yet expired.=20

Please expand "MiTM".



**** Nits *****

Section 1.1, Page 4:
>       difficult to host multiple Customer Domains at the same IP-
>       addressed based TLS service endpoint (i.e., "secure virtual
>       hosting").

s/addressed based/address-based/


Section 4.2, page 8:
> Publication of the server
>    certificate or public key (digest) in a TLSA record in a DNSSEC
>    signed zone by the domain owner assures the TLS client that the
>    certificate is not an unauthorized certificate issued by a rogue CA
>    without the domain owner's consent.

Avoiding the double-negation improves clarity... i.e., please change to "..=
.is an authorized certificate issued by a rogue CA
    without the domain owner's consent"


* Section 5.1, page 9:

>    With DANE-EE(3) servers that know all the connecting clients are
>    making use of DANE, they need not employ SNI

I'm having trouble parsing this sentence... could you please take a look an=
d tweak it if necessary?


Thank you,
Tina


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Thanks for the review, Tina.

Just reponding to one point:

Section 4.2, page 8:
> > Publication of the server
> >    certificate or public key (digest) in a TLSA record in a DNSSEC
> >    signed zone by the domain owner assures the TLS client that the
> >    certificate is not an unauthorized certificate issued by a rogue CA
> >    without the domain owner's consent.
>
> Avoiding the double-negation improves clarity... i.e., please change to
> "...is an authorized certificate issued by a rogue CA
>     without the domain owner's consent"
>

You're right that it's best to avoid double negatives, but this actually
isn't one, and your suggestion changes the meaning completely.  Using
parentheses to show the word groupings, this is not saying that "the
certificate is (not an unauthorized certificate) issued by a rogue CA".
  It's saying that "the certificate is not (an unauthorized certificate
issued by a rogue CA)".  And this really is the best way to say that.  I
can't think of a way to reword it that isn't clunky and awkward.

Barry

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Thanks for the review, Tina.<div><br></div><div>Just reponding to one point=
:<br><br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;borde=
r-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Section 4.2, page 8:<br>
&gt; Publication of the server<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 certificate or public key (digest) in a TLSA record in a =
DNSSEC<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 signed zone by the domain owner assures the TLS client th=
at the<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 certificate is not an unauthorized certificate issued by =
a rogue CA<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 without the domain owner&#39;s consent.<br>
<br>
Avoiding the double-negation improves clarity... i.e., please change to &qu=
ot;...is an authorized certificate issued by a rogue CA<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 without the domain owner&#39;s consent&quot;<br>
</blockquote><div><br></div><div>You&#39;re right that it&#39;s best to avo=
id double negatives, but this actually isn&#39;t one, and your suggestion c=
hanges the meaning completely.=C2=A0 Using parentheses to show the word gro=
upings, this is not saying that &quot;the certificate is (not an unauthoriz=
ed certificate) issued by a rogue CA&quot;. =C2=A0=C2=A0It&#39;s saying tha=
t &quot;the certificate is not (an unauthorized certificate issued by a rog=
ue CA)&quot;.=C2=A0 And this really is the best way to say that.=C2=A0 I ca=
n&#39;t think of a way to reword it that isn&#39;t clunky and awkward.</div=
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On Fri, Jul 10, 2015 at 03:42:06AM +0000, Tina TSOU wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments that arrive in timely manner, and not
> significantly belated.

Note that -13 has been published in the mean time and addresses at least
one of the concerns:

If it reasonable to ask you to glance over the diff from -12 to
-13 to see whether that introduces new issues or resolves any of
the ones you listed?

> * Section 9, page 21:
> > This order SHOULD be configurable by the MTA
> >    administrator. 
> 
> Please expand "MTA". Also, why make the explanation mail-specific?

This text was modified in -13 to not mention MTAs.

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Hi Catherine,

Thanks for the review.

> However, what needs to be go in the Security Considerations Section is a =
discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and possible mit=
igation.  The information about DHCP security risks is useful, but not of p=
rimary importance.

Agree with this comment. The  draft is defining some new information elemen=
ts that are carried between the DHCP entities and any new security consider=
ations are around exposing that data to third parties.


"The information elements that this draft is exposing is the client=92s acc=
ess-network information. These pertains to the access network to which the =
client is attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Ethernet=85et=
c), Access Point Identity (Name, BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these =
information elements to  has no implication on the end-user security. But, =
in deployments where this information is considered secure and when such th=
reat cannot be mitigated using the currently available security tools, then=
 the administrators have to consider disabling this capability on the DHCP =
entities."


Is this sufficient ?


Regards
Sri




From: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.me=
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Date: Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.


This draft specifies the format and mechanisms used for encoding network id=
entifiers in DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 by defining new access identifier options an=
d sub-options.
The Security Considerations section gives a discussion of the security risk=
s in using DHCP and their mitigation.  However, what needs to be go in the =
Security Considerations
Section is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and=
 possible mitigation.  The information about DHCP security risks is useful,=
 but not of primary importance.

My impression is that this document gives formats for presenting fields who=
se use is already discussed in previous RFC=92s, e.g. RFC3315, in which cas=
e there are no new
security considerations.  If that is so, then the Security Considerations S=
ection should
include (preferably begin with) a statement to the effect that, since this =
document only gives instructions for formatting and encoding fields whose u=
se has already been specified
in these previous RFC=92s, it presents no additional security consideration=
s beyond what is covered in those RFCs.  If that is not the case, you shoul=
d say what new security risks are introduced
by *this* draft, e.g. does it enable a use of DHCP that was not possible be=
fore and could cause a new type of security risk if DHCP was used without a=
uthentication?

Recommendation:  Ready With Issues

Cathy Meadows


Catherine Meadows
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<div>Hi Catherine,</div>
<div><br>
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<div>Thanks for the review.</div>
<div><br>
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<div>&gt; However, what needs to be go in the Security Considerations Secti=
on is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and poss=
ible mitigation. &nbsp;The information about DHCP security risks is useful,=
 but not of primary importance.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Agree with this comment. The &nbsp;draft is defining some new informat=
ion elements that are carried between the DHCP entities and any new securit=
y considerations are around exposing that data to third parties.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>
<div>&quot;The information elements that this draft is exposing is the clie=
nt=92s access-network information. These pertains to the access network to =
which the client is attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Eth=
ernet=85etc), Access Point Identity (Name,
 BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these information elements to &nbsp;ha=
s no implication on the end-user security. But, in deployments where this i=
nformation is considered secure and when such threat cannot be mitigated us=
ing the currently available security
 tools, then the administrators have to consider disabling this capability =
on the DHCP entities.&quot;</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Is this sufficient ?</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Regards</div>
<div>Sri</div>
<div><br>
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a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:=
56 AM<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">To: </span>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-i=
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ess-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a =
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f.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>Catherine Meadows &lt;<a href=
=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil">catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</=
a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>secdir review of draft-iet=
f-dhc-access-network-identifier-08<br>
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aft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-=
network-identifier.all@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Resent-Date: </span>Thursday, June 25, 201=
5 at 7:56 AM<br>
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<div style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line=
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's&nbsp;<b=
r>
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the&nbsp;<br=
>
IESG. &nbsp;These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the&nb=
sp;<br>
security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs should treat&=
nbsp;<br>
these comments just like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
<br>
This draft specifies the format and mechanisms used for encoding network id=
entifiers in DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 by defining new access identifier options an=
d sub-options.<br>
The Security Considerations section gives a discussion of the security risk=
s in using DHCP and their mitigation. &nbsp;However, what needs to be go in=
 the Security Considerations<br>
Section is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and=
 possible mitigation. &nbsp;The information about DHCP security risks is us=
eful, but not of primary importance.<br>
<br>
My impression is that this document gives formats for presenting fields who=
se use is already discussed in previous RFC=92s, e.g. RFC3315, in which cas=
e there are no new<br>
security considerations. &nbsp;If that is so, then the Security Considerati=
ons Section should<br>
include (preferably begin with) a statement to the effect that, since this =
document only gives instructions for formatting and encoding fields whose u=
se has already been specified<br>
in these previous RFC=92s, it presents no additional security consideration=
s beyond what is covered in those RFCs. &nbsp;If that is not the case, you =
should say what new security risks are introduced<br>
by *this* draft, e.g. does it enable a use of DHCP that was not possible be=
fore and could cause a new type of security risk if DHCP was used without a=
uthentication?<br>
<br>
Recommendation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Cathy Meadows</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
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rine Meadows<br>
Naval Research Laboratory<br>
Code 5543<br>
4555 Overlook Ave., S.W.<br>
Washington DC, 20375<br>
phone: 202-767-3490<br>
fax: 202-404-7942<br>
email:&nbsp;<a href=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil">catherine.mea=
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Something happened at "elements to  has no".

The IETF is a strange place these days with all of the pervasive monitoring=
 concerns :). If people can capture relay traffic (since we're only adding =
this now there), there's a lot more that they can monitor. Ah well.

And, actually the RFC 3315 IPsec requirements for relay traffic can apply h=
ere:

21.1. Security of Messages Sent Between Servers and Relay Agents

   Relay agents and servers that exchange messages securely use the
   IPsec mechanisms for IPv6 [7].  If a client message is relayed

IPsec should also hide this information from pervasive monitoring (though h=
ow much IPsec is in use is an open question). Note also that as this is rel=
ay to server (or relay to relay) communication, one would hope that most SP=
s have taken measures to 'secure' this traffic either by using IPsec or VPN=
s.


-          Bernie

From: Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)
Sent: Friday, July 10, 2015 12:20 PM
To: Catherine Meadows; draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.i=
etf.org; secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org
Subject: Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-08

Hi Catherine,

Thanks for the review.

> However, what needs to be go in the Security Considerations Section is a =
discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and possible mit=
igation.  The information about DHCP security risks is useful, but not of p=
rimary importance.

Agree with this comment. The  draft is defining some new information elemen=
ts that are carried between the DHCP entities and any new security consider=
ations are around exposing that data to third parties.


"The information elements that this draft is exposing is the client's acces=
s-network information. These pertains to the access network to which the cl=
ient is attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Ethernet...etc)=
, Access Point Identity (Name, BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these in=
formation elements to  has no implication on the end-user security. But, in=
 deployments where this information is considered secure and when such thre=
at cannot be mitigated using the currently available security tools, then t=
he administrators have to consider disabling this capability on the DHCP en=
tities."


Is this sufficient ?


Regards
Sri




From: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.me=
adows@nrl.navy.mil>>
Date: Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM
To: "draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:dra=
ft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-dhc-=
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etwork-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>>, "secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf=
.org>" <secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>>, "iesg@ietf.org<mailto:ies=
g@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>
Cc: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.mead=
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Subject: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-08
Resent-From: <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.n=
avy.mil>>
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aft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@ietf.org>>
Resent-Date: Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.


This draft specifies the format and mechanisms used for encoding network id=
entifiers in DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 by defining new access identifier options an=
d sub-options.
The Security Considerations section gives a discussion of the security risk=
s in using DHCP and their mitigation.  However, what needs to be go in the =
Security Considerations
Section is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and=
 possible mitigation.  The information about DHCP security risks is useful,=
 but not of primary importance.

My impression is that this document gives formats for presenting fields who=
se use is already discussed in previous RFC's, e.g. RFC3315, in which case =
there are no new
security considerations.  If that is so, then the Security Considerations S=
ection should
include (preferably begin with) a statement to the effect that, since this =
document only gives instructions for formatting and encoding fields whose u=
se has already been specified
in these previous RFC's, it presents no additional security considerations =
beyond what is covered in those RFCs.  If that is not the case, you should =
say what new security risks are introduced
by *this* draft, e.g. does it enable a use of DHCP that was not possible be=
fore and could cause a new type of security risk if DHCP was used without a=
uthentication?

Recommendation:  Ready With Issues

Cathy Meadows


Catherine Meadows
Naval Research Laboratory
Code 5543
4555 Overlook Ave., S.W.
Washington DC, 20375
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fax: 202-404-7942
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Something happened at &#8=
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&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">elements to &nbsp;has no</span><span st=
yle=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&qu=
ot;;color:#1F497D">&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The IETF is a strange pla=
ce these days with all of the pervasive monitoring concerns :). If people c=
an capture relay traffic (since we&#8217;re only adding this now
 there), there&#8217;s a lot more that they can monitor. Ah well.<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">And, actually the RFC 331=
5 IPsec requirements for relay traffic can apply here:<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-autospace:none"><span style=3D"font-si=
ze:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">21.1. Security of Messages S=
ent Between Servers and Relay Agents<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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ze:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ze:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; Relay agents an=
d servers that exchange messages securely use the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-autospace:none"><span style=3D"font-si=
ze:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; IPsec mechanism=
s for IPv6 [7].&nbsp; If a client message is relayed<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">IPsec should also hide th=
is information from pervasive monitoring (though how much IPsec is in use i=
s an open question). Note also that as this is relay to
 server (or relay to relay) communication, one would hope that most SPs hav=
e taken measures to &#8216;secure&#8217; this traffic either by using IPsec=
 or VPNs.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:=
&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Bernie<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Sri Gund=
avelli (sgundave)
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, July 10, 2015 12:20 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Catherine Meadows; draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@=
tools.ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; iesg@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifi=
er-08<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Hi Catherine,<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Thanks for the review.<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; However, what needs to=
 be go in the Security Considerations Section is a discussion of the securi=
ty risks raised by *this* document and possible mitigation.
 &nbsp;The information about DHCP security risks is useful, but not of prim=
ary importance.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Agree with this comment. Th=
e &nbsp;draft is defining some new information elements that are carried be=
tween the DHCP entities and any new security considerations are
 around exposing that data to third parties.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&quot;The information eleme=
nts that this draft is exposing is the client&#8217;s access-network inform=
ation. These pertains to the access network to which the client is
 attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Ethernet&#8230;etc), A=
ccess Point Identity (Name, BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these infor=
mation elements to &nbsp;has no implication on the end-user security. But, =
in deployments where this information is considered
 secure and when such threat cannot be mitigated using the currently availa=
ble security tools, then the administrators have to consider disabling this=
 capability on the DHCP entities.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Is this sufficient ?<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Sri<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,=
&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Catherine Meadows &lt;<a href=3D"mailto=
:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil">catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier=
.all@tools.ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.iet=
f.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identif=
ier.all@tools.ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.=
ietf.org</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"m=
ailto:iesg@ietf.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@iet=
f.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>Catherine Meadows &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.na=
vy.mil">catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-0=
8<br>
<b>Resent-From: </b>&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil">c=
atherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Resent-To: </b>&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-ident=
ifier.all@ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@ietf.org</=
a>&gt;<br>
<b>Resent-Date: </b>Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">I have reviewed this docume=
nt as part of the security directorate's&nbsp;<br>
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the&nbsp;<br=
>
IESG. &nbsp;These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the&nb=
sp;<br>
security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs should treat&=
nbsp;<br>
these comments just like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
<br>
This draft specifies the format and mechanisms used for encoding network id=
entifiers in DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 by defining new access identifier options an=
d sub-options.<br>
The Security Considerations section gives a discussion of the security risk=
s in using DHCP and their mitigation. &nbsp;However, what needs to be go in=
 the Security Considerations<br>
Section is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and=
 possible mitigation. &nbsp;The information about DHCP security risks is us=
eful, but not of primary importance.<br>
<br>
My impression is that this document gives formats for presenting fields who=
se use is already discussed in previous RFC&#8217;s, e.g. RFC3315, in which=
 case there are no new<br>
security considerations. &nbsp;If that is so, then the Security Considerati=
ons Section should<br>
include (preferably begin with) a statement to the effect that, since this =
document only gives instructions for formatting and encoding fields whose u=
se has already been specified<br>
in these previous RFC&#8217;s, it presents no additional security considera=
tions beyond what is covered in those RFCs. &nbsp;If that is not the case, =
you should say what new security risks are introduced<br>
by *this* draft, e.g. does it enable a use of DHCP that was not possible be=
fore and could cause a new type of security risk if DHCP was used without a=
uthentication?<br>
<br>
Recommendation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Cathy Meadows<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
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> =93Exposing these information elements to < > "

Strange =85 it disappeared.

I was debating which Govt/Organization :) to point to, but then got distrac=
ted.


Regards
Sri


From: "Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com<mailto:volz@cisco.com>>
Date: Friday, July 10, 2015 at 9:27 AM
To: Sri Gundavelli <sgundave@cisco.com<mailto:sgundave@cisco.com>>
Cc: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.mead=
ows@nrl.navy.mil>>, "draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.iet=
f.org<mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>" =
<draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-i=
etf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>>, "secdir@ietf.org<ma=
ilto:secdir@ietf.org>" <secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>>, "iesg@iet=
f.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>
Subject: RE: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-08

Something happened at =93elements to  has no=94.

The IETF is a strange place these days with all of the pervasive monitoring=
 concerns :). If people can capture relay traffic (since we=92re only addin=
g this now there), there=92s a lot more that they can monitor. Ah well.

And, actually the RFC 3315 IPsec requirements for relay traffic can apply h=
ere:

21.1. Security of Messages Sent Between Servers and Relay Agents

   Relay agents and servers that exchange messages securely use the
   IPsec mechanisms for IPv6 [7].  If a client message is relayed

IPsec should also hide this information from pervasive monitoring (though h=
ow much IPsec is in use is an open question). Note also that as this is rel=
ay to server (or relay to relay) communication, one would hope that most SP=
s have taken measures to =91secure=92 this traffic either by using IPsec or=
 VPNs.


-          Bernie

From: Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)
Sent: Friday, July 10, 2015 12:20 PM
To: Catherine Meadows; draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.i=
etf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>=
; secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>; iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.o=
rg>
Subject: Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-08

Hi Catherine,

Thanks for the review.

> However, what needs to be go in the Security Considerations Section is a =
discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and possible mit=
igation.  The information about DHCP security risks is useful, but not of p=
rimary importance.

Agree with this comment. The  draft is defining some new information elemen=
ts that are carried between the DHCP entities and any new security consider=
ations are around exposing that data to third parties.


"The information elements that this draft is exposing is the client=92s acc=
ess-network information. These pertains to the access network to which the =
client is attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Ethernet=85et=
c), Access Point Identity (Name, BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these =
information elements to  has no implication on the end-user security. But, =
in deployments where this information is considered secure and when such th=
reat cannot be mitigated using the currently available security tools, then=
 the administrators have to consider disabling this capability on the DHCP =
entities."


Is this sufficient ?


Regards
Sri




From: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.me=
adows@nrl.navy.mil>>
Date: Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM
To: "draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:dra=
ft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-dhc-=
access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-n=
etwork-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>>, "secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf=
.org>" <secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>>, "iesg@ietf.org<mailto:ies=
g@ietf.org>" <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>>
Cc: Catherine Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.mead=
ows@nrl.navy.mil>>
Subject: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-08
Resent-From: <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.n=
avy.mil>>
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aft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@ietf.org>>
Resent-Date: Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.


This draft specifies the format and mechanisms used for encoding network id=
entifiers in DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 by defining new access identifier options an=
d sub-options.
The Security Considerations section gives a discussion of the security risk=
s in using DHCP and their mitigation.  However, what needs to be go in the =
Security Considerations
Section is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and=
 possible mitigation.  The information about DHCP security risks is useful,=
 but not of primary importance.

My impression is that this document gives formats for presenting fields who=
se use is already discussed in previous RFC=92s, e.g. RFC3315, in which cas=
e there are no new
security considerations.  If that is so, then the Security Considerations S=
ection should
include (preferably begin with) a statement to the effect that, since this =
document only gives instructions for formatting and encoding fields whose u=
se has already been specified
in these previous RFC=92s, it presents no additional security consideration=
s beyond what is covered in those RFCs.  If that is not the case, you shoul=
d say what new security risks are introduced
by *this* draft, e.g. does it enable a use of DHCP that was not possible be=
fore and could cause a new type of security risk if DHCP was used without a=
uthentication?

Recommendation:  Ready With Issues

Cathy Meadows


Catherine Meadows
Naval Research Laboratory
Code 5543
4555 Overlook Ave., S.W.
Washington DC, 20375
phone: 202-767-3490
fax: 202-404-7942
email: catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil<mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri=
, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">The IETF is a strange place these d=
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 relay traffic (since we=92re only adding
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, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">And, actually the RFC 3315 IPsec re=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-autospace:none"><span style=3D"font-si=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-autospace:none"><span style=3D"font-si=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri=
, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">IPsec should also hide this informa=
tion from pervasive monitoring (though how much IPsec is in use is an open =
question). Note also that as this is
 relay to server (or relay to relay) communication, one would hope that mos=
t SPs have taken measures to =91secure=92 this traffic either by using IPse=
c or VPNs.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri=
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y: Tahoma, sans-serif;"> Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, July 10, 2015 12:20 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Catherine Meadows; <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-netwo=
rk-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org">
draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D=
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secdir@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:iesg@ietf.org">iesg@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifi=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">&gt; However, what needs to be go in the Sec=
urity Considerations Section is a discussion of the security risks raised b=
y *this* document and possible mitigation.
 &nbsp;The information about DHCP security risks is useful, but not of prim=
ary importance.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">Agree with this comment. The &nbsp;draft is =
defining some new information elements that are carried between the DHCP en=
tities and any new security considerations
 are around exposing that data to third parties.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">&quot;The information elements that this dra=
ft is exposing is the client=92s access-network information. These pertains=
 to the access network to which the client
 is attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Ethernet=85etc), Ac=
cess Point Identity (Name, BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these inform=
ation elements to &nbsp;has no implication on the end-user security. But, i=
n deployments where this information is
 considered secure and when such threat cannot be mitigated using the curre=
ntly available security tools, then the administrators have to consider dis=
abling this capability on the DHCP entities.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">Is this sufficient ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">Sri<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Cali=
bri, sans-serif; color: black;">From:
</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif=
; color: black;">Catherine Meadows &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@=
nrl.navy.mil">catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier=
.all@tools.ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.iet=
f.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identif=
ier.all@tools.ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.=
ietf.org</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"m=
ailto:iesg@ietf.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:iesg@iet=
f.org">iesg@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>Catherine Meadows &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.na=
vy.mil">catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier-0=
8<br>
<b>Resent-From: </b>&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil">c=
atherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Resent-To: </b>&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-ident=
ifier.all@ietf.org">draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@ietf.org</=
a>&gt;<br>
<b>Resent-Date: </b>Thursday, June 25, 2015 at 7:56 AM<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">I have reviewed this document as part of the=
 security directorate's&nbsp;<br>
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the&nbsp;<br=
>
IESG. &nbsp;These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the&nb=
sp;<br>
security area directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG chairs should treat&=
nbsp;<br>
these comments just like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
<br>
This draft specifies the format and mechanisms used for encoding network id=
entifiers in DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 by defining new access identifier options an=
d sub-options.<br>
The Security Considerations section gives a discussion of the security risk=
s in using DHCP and their mitigation. &nbsp;However, what needs to be go in=
 the Security Considerations<br>
Section is a discussion of the security risks raised by *this* document and=
 possible mitigation. &nbsp;The information about DHCP security risks is us=
eful, but not of primary importance.<br>
<br>
My impression is that this document gives formats for presenting fields who=
se use is already discussed in previous RFC=92s, e.g. RFC3315, in which cas=
e there are no new<br>
security considerations. &nbsp;If that is so, then the Security Considerati=
ons Section should<br>
include (preferably begin with) a statement to the effect that, since this =
document only gives instructions for formatting and encoding fields whose u=
se has already been specified<br>
in these previous RFC=92s, it presents no additional security consideration=
s beyond what is covered in those RFCs. &nbsp;If that is not the case, you =
should say what new security risks are introduced<br>
by *this* draft, e.g. does it enable a use of DHCP that was not possible be=
fore and could cause a new type of security risk if DHCP was used without a=
uthentication?<br>
<br>
Recommendation: &nbsp;Ready With Issues <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;">Cathy Meadows<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calib=
ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span class=3D"apple-style-span"><span style=3D"font=
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serif; color: black;"><br>
<span class=3D"apple-style-span">Naval Research Laboratory</span><br>
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Hiya,

On 10/07/15 17:27, Bernie Volz (volz) wrote:
> IPsec should also hide this information from pervasive monitoring
> (though how much IPsec is in use is an open question). Note also that
> as this is relay to server (or relay to relay) communication, one
> would hope that most SPs have taken measures to 'secure' this traffic
> either by using IPsec or VPNs.

Do we have any data as to whether or not such protection does
get deployed? I'd not be surprised if there's not much public,
but if there were it'd be good to know.

I also believe we have had reported cases where pieces of
the network infrastructure of various kinds of operator have
been targeted for PM purposes, so while yes, it is really
strange that someone would want to do that, it seems to be
a real, and not notional, threat.

Ta,
S.


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> * Meta: I would have liked to find (if anything, in an appendix) the
> rationale for he changes being proposed by this document. Since the changes
> are said to originate on operational experience, I think that codifying
> the lessons (problems found, and a rationale for the workarounds). There
> seems to be a bit of this throughout the document, but not for most of
> the changes proposed.

I'll reread the draft and see where additional rationale text might
usefully be added.  Specific pointers to such places, if anyone
has any in mind, would be great.

> * Section 4.8, page 8:
> > Therefore, when a TLS client
> > authenticates the TLS server via a TLSA record with usage DANE-EE(3),
> > CT checks SHOULD NOT be performed.
> 
> What are the valid reasons for performing th CT checks? If there are not
> any, why not make this requirement a "MUST NOT" instead?

CT checks are designed to help keep public CAs honest (detect
surreptitiously misissued certificates).  With DANE-EE(3), no public
CA is involved, so CT (for the X.509 WebPKI) is logically out of
scope.  

If there is some day a CT for DNSSEC (or just DANE records validated
via DNSSEC), then this new CT might be applicable to keep registries
from signing rogue DS RRs, rogue evidence of non-existence of DS
RRs or rogue absense of delegation of a domain.  The present the
experimental CT does not apply to DNSSEC.  Also see changes in
the CT language in -13.

> * Section 5.1, page 10:
> > Servers SHOULD NOT rely on
> > "DANE-EE(3) Cert(0) Full(0)" TLSA records to publish authentication
> > data for raw public keys.

I am open to MUST NOT, if that's better.  

Note that the impact of such inadvisable reliance, is that some
clients capable of using raw public keys (but also capable of
handling certificate chains) might choose to not do so.  And other
clients, that support only raw public keys, might go the extra mile
and support extracing the public key from a "3 0 0" record, assuming
they can parse X.509 certificates (part of the rationale for RPK
is to allow clients to shed such code).

So using "3 0 0" reduces opportunities to use RPK, and might fail
to interoperate with RPK-only DANE clients that don't go the extra
mile to support "3 0 0" (e.g. they may lack code to parse X.509
certificates).  Is that enough reason to say "MUST NOT rely"?

Is 2119 language appropriate here, we're not telling servers to
not publish "3 0 0", rather we're telling them that if they do,
they can't (must not) expect RPK to work.  Is "MUST NOT rely"
or "SHOULD NOT rely" a suitable means to say that, or should
this be downcased to non-normative english text?

> * Section 7, page 17:
>
> >    Though CNAMEs are illegal on the right hand side of most indirection
> >    records, such as MX and SRV records, they are supported by some
> >    implementations.  For example, if the MX or SRV host is a CNAME
> >    alias, some implementations may "chase" the CNAME.  If they do, they
> >    SHOULD use the target hostname as the preferred TLSA base domain as
> >    described above (and if the TLSA records are found there, use the
> >    CNAME expanded domain also in SNI and certificate name checks).
> 
> If CNAMES on the right hand side of most indirection records are illegal,
> why trying to process them in the first place?

Because this "illegal" configuration is both widely supported, and
actually practiced, sometimes by accident.  There are a lot of
domains with boiler-plate records configured by naive registrars
or users along the lines of:

	example.com.	IN A 192.0.2.1
	example.com.	IN MX 0 mail.example.com.
	; Note, no explicit mail.example.com RRsets
	*.example.com   IN CNAME example.com.

What this amounts to is that that the MX host for example.com is
mail.example.com which is in turn a CNAME right back to example.com.
Most MTAs seem to support this, RFCs notwithstanding.

So the draft explains what to do when such records are supported.
(A concession to the fact that MX hosts that are CNAMES are illegal
in theory, but not in practice).

> * Section 9, page 21:
> > This order SHOULD be configurable by the MTA
> >    administrator. 
> 
> Please expand "MTA". Also, why make the explanation mail-specific?

Fixed in -13.

> * Section 13, page 26:
> >    The signature validity period for TLSA records should also not be too
> >    long.  Signed DNSSEC records can be replayed by an MiTM attacker
> >    provided the signatures have not yet expired. 
> 
> Please expand "MiTM".

This was done in the introduction, but I notice a case difference
(MiTM vs MITM).  This should probably be made consistent in the
final version.  Queued for -14.

> Section 1.1, Page 4:
> >       difficult to host multiple Customer Domains at the same IP-
> >       addressed based TLS service endpoint (i.e., "secure virtual
> >       hosting").
> 
> s/addressed based/address-based/

Thanks, queued for -14.

> * Section 5.1, page 9:
> 
> >    With DANE-EE(3) servers that know all the connecting clients are
> >    making use of DANE, they need not employ SNI
> 
> I'm having trouble parsing this sentence... could you please take a look and tweak it if necessary?

This was changed in -13:

   If a server uses just DANE-EE(3) TLSA records, and all its clients
   are DANE clients, the server need not employ SNI (i.e., they may
   ignore the client's SNI message) even when the server is known via
   multiple domain names that would otherwise require separate
   certificates.

I notice a singular/plural mismatch above, so in -14 I've queued-up

    s/they may/it may/.

Is the final result better?

-- 
	Viktor.


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On Sat, 11 Jul 2015, Viktor Dukhovni wrote:

>> * Section 4.8, page 8:
>>> Therefore, when a TLS client
>>> authenticates the TLS server via a TLSA record with usage DANE-EE(3),
>>> CT checks SHOULD NOT be performed.
>>
>> What are the valid reasons for performing th CT checks? If there are not
>> any, why not make this requirement a "MUST NOT" instead?

CT auditors log EE-certs. Checking the CT logs also provides a way to
signal rogue EE-certs to the original webserver via a gossip/client
protocol. So I would not say Usage 3 should never check the CT logs.

> CT checks are designed to help keep public CAs honest (detect
> surreptitiously misissued certificates).

It's a litte more than just that:

    Certificate transparency aims to mitigate the problem of misissued
    certificates by providing publicly auditable, append-only, untrusted
    logs of all issued certificates.  The logs are publicly auditable so
    that it is possible for anyone to verify the correctness of each log
    and to monitor when new certificates are added to it.


>  With DANE-EE(3), no public
> CA is involved, so CT (for the X.509 WebPKI) is logically out of
> scope.

I don't think that whether or not public/private CA's are in used in
the TLSA record matters. A client that wants to confirm an EE-cert
via DNSSEC _and_ CT should be able to do so.

>> * Section 5.1, page 10:
>>> Servers SHOULD NOT rely on
>>> "DANE-EE(3) Cert(0) Full(0)" TLSA records to publish authentication
>>> data for raw public keys.
>
> I am open to MUST NOT, if that's better.
>
> Note that the impact of such inadvisable reliance, is that some
> clients capable of using raw public keys (but also capable of
> handling certificate chains) might choose to not do so.  And other
> clients, that support only raw public keys, might go the extra mile
> and support extracing the public key from a "3 0 0" record, assuming
> they can parse X.509 certificates (part of the rationale for RPK
> is to allow clients to shed such code).

You keep trying to force different policies for raw public keys versus
(possibly throw away) x509 container based public keys. Because we know
software will only upgrade over a very long slow time, we know there
is going to be a substantial amount of time when "basically" raw keys
will go into a throw-away x509 container. Therefor, as I said before,
it is not wise to differentiate between the two. An EE-cert could be
a raw public key in disguise purely for compatibility reasons.

> So using "3 0 0" reduces opportunities to use RPK, and might fail
> to interoperate with RPK-only DANE clients that don't go the extra
> mile to support "3 0 0" (e.g. they may lack code to parse X.509
> certificates).  Is that enough reason to say "MUST NOT rely"?
>
> Is 2119 language appropriate here, we're not telling servers to
> not publish "3 0 0", rather we're telling them that if they do,
> they can't (must not) expect RPK to work.  Is "MUST NOT rely"
> or "SHOULD NOT rely" a suitable means to say that, or should
> this be downcased to non-normative english text?

No, I think you should not try to dictate the local policy behaviour.

> This was changed in -13:
>
>   If a server uses just DANE-EE(3) TLSA records, and all its clients
>   are DANE clients, the server need not employ SNI (i.e., they may
>   ignore the client's SNI message) even when the server is known via
>   multiple domain names that would otherwise require separate
>   certificates.

I am confused. If DANE is only talking about how to verify a certain
certificate received over TLS, I do not think this document should
modify the TLS protocol with respect to SNI. It's out of scope.

Paul


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On Sun, Jul 12, 2015 at 10:54:07PM -0400, Paul Wouters wrote:

> >>What are the valid reasons for performing th CT checks? If there are not
> >>any, why not make this requirement a "MUST NOT" instead?
> 
> CT auditors log EE-certs. Checking the CT logs also provides a way to
> signal rogue EE-certs to the original webserver via a gossip/client
> protocol. So I would not say Usage 3 should never check the CT logs.

DANE-EE(3) certs are often self-signed, and there's no way to
control the "spam" problem on the CT logs with DANE-EE(3).
Furthermore such a certificate is only ever "rogue" if DNSSEC is
compromised to publish rogue TLSA RRs.  So the "CA" we're keeping
honest is the zone signing the TLSA RRset.  I don't believe we have
a CT specification for that yet.

> >CT checks are designed to help keep public CAs honest (detect
> >surreptitiously misissued certificates).
> 
> It's a litte more than just that:
> 
>    Certificate transparency aims to mitigate the problem of misissued
>    certificates by providing publicly auditable, append-only, untrusted
>    logs of all issued certificates.  The logs are publicly auditable so
>    that it is possible for anyone to verify the correctness of each log
>    and to monitor when new certificates are added to it.

Well, with DANE-EE(3) there is no X.509 trusted issuer to keep
honest.  With "3 1 1" an attacker can replace anything in the
certificate other than the public key, giving an astronomical number
of potential certificates to that match the TLSA RRset and might
be logged.  It makes no sense to log the "certificate" it is just
excess baggage.  The TLSA RRset, with DS/DNSKEY/RRSIG records all
the way back to the root ZONE make a lot more sense here, but there
is no CT spec for that I am aware of.

> > With DANE-EE(3), no public
> >CA is involved, so CT (for the X.509 WebPKI) is logically out of
> >scope.
> 
> I don't think that whether or not public/private CA's are in used in
> the TLSA record matters. A client that wants to confirm an EE-cert
> via DNSSEC _and_ CT should be able to do so.

Perhaps if it were possible, but I'm afraid it is not.  From the
CT FAQ:

    Each CT log will have the power to choose which CAs it accepts
    certificates from. This could lead to a situation where a Root
    Certificate is trusted by one or more browsers, but is not
    permitted to submit newly issued certs to any of the trusted
    CT logs. How can we ensure that this sort of situation doesn't
    happen?

    We recommend that all logs accept a liberal list of CAs including
    at least the Apple, Microsoft and Opera roots. The CA check is
    for anti-spam and attribution only, so we do not foresee this
    becoming a problem in practice.

Thus CT logs will not accept self-signed, domain-issued, ...
certificates.  Since CT is just keeping the public CAs honest, and
DANE-EE(3) or DANE-TA(2) with a private CA do not use public CAs,
CT simply does not apply.

> >So using "3 0 0" reduces opportunities to use RPK, and might fail
> >to interoperate with RPK-only DANE clients that don't go the extra
> >mile to support "3 0 0" (e.g. they may lack code to parse X.509
> >certificates).  Is that enough reason to say "MUST NOT rely"?
> >
> >Is 2119 language appropriate here, we're not telling servers to
> >not publish "3 0 0", rather we're telling them that if they do,
> >they can't (must not) expect RPK to work.  Is "MUST NOT rely"
> >or "SHOULD NOT rely" a suitable means to say that, or should
> >this be downcased to non-normative english text?
> 
> No, I think you should not try to dictate the local policy behaviour.

You're misreading the text.  It is warning server operators that
"3 0 0" is less suitable for serving RPK clients (if that's what
the server wants) than "3 1 X" is.  This is true, because clients
that want to deal with just keys would have to support extracing
those from a "3 0 0" RRset, where-as with "3 1 X" the key or its
digest is right there.  Thus no local policy is dictated, rather
server operators are advised to be conservative in what they send.

> >This was changed in -13:
> >
> >  If a server uses just DANE-EE(3) TLSA records, and all its clients
> >  are DANE clients, the server need not employ SNI (i.e., they may
> >  ignore the client's SNI message) even when the server is known via
> >  multiple domain names that would otherwise require separate
> >  certificates.
> 
> I am confused. If DANE is only talking about how to verify a certain
> certificate received over TLS, I do not think this document should
> modify the TLS protocol with respect to SNI. It's out of scope.

You're confused.  The server is free to ignore the client's SNI
extension when it has a single certificate that works for all hosted
domains, because clients authenticate the server via the certificate
or key digest, and don't care about what name is in the certificate.
We're not modifying TLS, we're explaining that the server is free
to ignore the client's SNI extension.

-- 
	Viktor.


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On Mon, 13 Jul 2015, Viktor Dukhovni wrote:

>> CT auditors log EE-certs. Checking the CT logs also provides a way to
>> signal rogue EE-certs to the original webserver via a gossip/client
>> protocol. So I would not say Usage 3 should never check the CT logs.
>
> DANE-EE(3) certs are often self-signed, and there's no way to
> control the "spam" problem on the CT logs with DANE-EE(3).

You don't know what audit logs will use for policies. Perhaps some
audit logs will be dedicated to only self-signed certs. I do not
think the dane document should dictate CT behaviour.

> Furthermore such a certificate is only ever "rogue" if DNSSEC is
> compromised to publish rogue TLSA RRs.

Not if they use a CT log for prepublishing somehow. Although that is
unlikely to happen with SCT's without a CA, I still think you should
not make those decisions on this document.

>> I don't think that whether or not public/private CA's are in used in
>> the TLSA record matters. A client that wants to confirm an EE-cert
>> via DNSSEC _and_ CT should be able to do so.
>
> Perhaps if it were possible, but I'm afraid it is not.  From the
> CT FAQ:

> Thus CT logs will not accept self-signed, domain-issued, ...

The CT FAQ is not an IETF document.

> You're misreading the text.  It is warning server operators that
> "3 0 0" is less suitable for serving RPK clients (if that's what

We disagree on the concept of "RPK" clients.

>> I am confused. If DANE is only talking about how to verify a certain
>> certificate received over TLS, I do not think this document should
>> modify the TLS protocol with respect to SNI. It's out of scope.
>
> You're confused.  The server is free to ignore the client's SNI
> extension when it has a single certificate that works for all hosted
> domains, because clients authenticate the server via the certificate
> or key digest, and don't care about what name is in the certificate.
> We're not modifying TLS, we're explaining that the server is free
> to ignore the client's SNI extension.

How is that not modifying TLS server behaviour?

Paul


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On Sun, Jul 12, 2015 at 11:37:07PM -0400, Paul Wouters wrote:

> >DANE-EE(3) certs are often self-signed, and there's no way to
> >control the "spam" problem on the CT logs with DANE-EE(3).
> 
> You don't know what audit logs will use for policies. Perhaps some
> audit logs will be dedicated to only self-signed certs. I do not
> think the dane document should dictate CT behaviour.

The problem is that the CT documents are otherwise liable to dictate
DANE behaviour.  For example, require SCTs in DANE-EE validated
certs.  That would be unfortunate.  This document notes that the
present experimental CT in RFC 6962 is inapplicable to DANE.

CT logs that record leaf certificates would be essentially useless,
A rogue TLSA RRset with a "3 1 1" binding will work regardless of
the certificate content, just based on the public key.  A misissued
TLSA RRset will bind a certificate that contains no information as
to which domain was compromised.  Here's a certificate with an
empty subject and issuer name, what will the CT log make of that?

-----BEGIN CERTIFICATE-----
MIIBRjCB7aADAgECAgkAleIk6aMkXRwwCgYIKoZIzj0EAwIwADAeFw0xNTA3MTMw
MzUwNTlaFw0xNTA4MTIwMzUwNTlaMAAwWTATBgcqhkjOPQIBBggqhkjOPQMBBwNC
AAR50eOHUyMeHOMJNZTIXuj4QBJRbQrOLbYIftmZwzatO3/rG5BRyuUIfTQnzAq5
3K7A1pfq4hfseiOfT6prKKIVo1AwTjAdBgNVHQ4EFgQU7GD7zL/aLrBUaQIIKksc
cc6or+0wHwYDVR0jBBgwFoAU7GD7zL/aLrBUaQIIKksccc6or+0wDAYDVR0TBAUw
AwEB/zAKBggqhkjOPQQDAgNIADBFAiBr51OuJXf8N4Z79rStIXCIuYm6drChz39G
RBWvumsuhgIhANoW5K3bSqIFpIp2aXzH2PiiSgxnC3T9Mp5O70tXGS4L
-----END CERTIFICATE-----

And yet it will match

    _25._tcp.smtp.example.com. IN TLSA 3 1 1 20041CBFD6570C48ACD8D526572137B9090E8037D115FB3C21218D9E9992A9C2

The *only* way to do CT for DANE TLSA is to do CT for DNS, and there
is no CT for DNS in RFC 6962.

> >Furthermore such a certificate is only ever "rogue" if DNSSEC is
> >compromised to publish rogue TLSA RRs.
> 
> Not if they use a CT log for prepublishing somehow. Although that is
> unlikely to happen with SCT's without a CA, I still think you should
> not make those decisions on this document.

It is not a policy decision, it is just logic.  The impossible
cannot be done.

> >You're confused.  The server is free to ignore the client's SNI
> >extension when it has a single certificate that works for all hosted
> >domains, because clients authenticate the server via the certificate
> >or key digest, and don't care about what name is in the certificate.
> >We're not modifying TLS, we're explaining that the server is free
> >to ignore the client's SNI extension.
> 
> How is that not modifying TLS server behaviour?

It is not modifying the TLS protocol, servers are already free to
ignore SNI and return whatever certificate chain they please.  This
document explains that with DANE-EE(3) this yields results that
are satisfactory to the client.

As for modifying TLS, we're for example mandating the transmission
of self-signed roots with DANE-TA(2), and that too is within the
realm of what TLS can do, we're just defining a behaviour profile
that makes DANE-TA(2) work (it does not otherwise).

-- 
	Viktor.


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Thank you. Responses below.

On Jul 1, 2015, at 3:17 PM, Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca> wrote:

>=20
> Sorry for the typo :)
>=20
> Paul
>=20
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> Date: Wed, 1 Jul 2015 18:15:10
> From: Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca>
> To: iesg@ietf.org, secdir@ietf.org,
>    draft-ietf-appsawg-text-markdown-use-casas.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: Secdir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-text-markdown-use-cases
>=20
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
> area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
> comments just like any other last call comment.
>=20
> This document describes use cases and sometimes existing deployed code
> on handling "markdown" text. As such, the document introduces no new
> security considerations, and the Security Considerations section =
points
> to other documents that further document the respective markdown
> variants and their own security considerations.
>=20
> Recommendation:  Ready with Issues
>=20
> I wanted to point out two use cases (or existing deployed code?)
> that uses some features that might be considered a security issue.
>=20
> 2.1 talks about filesystem "extended attributes" and suggests to add a
>     resource named "variant". This name might be a little too generic =
to
>     only apply to markdown and might cause a name spaec collision that
>     could potentially be a security risk. If this is a use case =
without
>     deployed code, I would recommend renaming this resource to =
something
>     more specific, eg "markdown-varient". If it describes actual code,
>     then I guess that ship has sailed.

It does describe some actual code.

I can change the text to:
{{
The variant identifier itself should be stored in a resource with a name =
including the term =93variant=94 (possibly including other decorations =
to avoid namespace collisions).
}}

How is that?

>=20
> 2.4 talks about MIME aware clients saving a "batch script" to disk for
>     later execution. These kind of "autorun" or "preview" features are
>     a security nightmare, so here too I would hope this has not yet =
been
>     coded. And if not, to reconsider not supporting such a feature.

The purpose of this section was to suggest that if, for example, =
=93pandoc=94 is the recipient=92s preferred Markdown processor, and the =
recipient receives Markdown content in some other variant that pandoc =
supports (let=92s say original Markdown), then the recipient can send =
the Markdown through pandoc with the markdown_strict option; the =
recipient does not need to have or use Gruber=92s original Markdown.pl =
implementation to get at what the sender wanted. It is not necessary for =
the recipient to have millions of different Markdown implementations, =
only that it has one (or a small handful) of implementations that are =
good enough for the purpose.

There was significant discussion on apps-discuss (see around October =
2014?) about how it is bad for the sender to be able to specify specific =
processing instructions, e.g., command-line commands or options that get =
sent directly to a command interpreter. So, that approach was jettisoned =
at that time.

The text in Section 2.4 says:

This strategy is to **translate** the processing instructions **inferred =
from** the [parameters] into a sequence of commands in the **local =
convention**, storing those commands in a batch script [=85] that are =
**appropriate (and safe) for the local system**.


(Emphasis mine.) I think those emphasized parts capture the point that =
whatever code gets executed has to be appropriate and safe for the local =
system.

I am happy to reword this paragraph somehow, but if that is seen as =
necessary, I would appreciate a counterproposal.



A parenthetical note: Section 2.5 of text-markdown-use-cases (=93Process =
the Markdown=94) is a bit ambiguous. The point is to process the =
Markdown before the recipient sees it. Thus if you are composing an =
e-mail in Markdown, the point would be that your sending MUA (or an =
intermediary) would convert it to HTML before recipients receive the =
e-mail. However, your Markdown-aware sending MUA could save drafts in =
Markdown before the message is sent.

Proposed text:
{{
2.5. Process the Markdown In Advance

This strategy is to process the Markdown into the formal markup, before =
a recipient receives it, which eliminates ambiguities. Once the Markdown =
is processed into (for example) valid XHTML, an application can save a =
file as "doc.xhtml" or can send MIME content as application/xhtml+xml =
with no further loss of metadata. While unambiguous, this process may =
not be reversible.
}}

Thanks,

Sean


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On Mon, 13 Jul 2015, Sean Leonard wrote:

>> 2.1 talks about filesystem "extended attributes" and suggests to add a
>>     resource named "variant". This name might be a little too generic to
>>     only apply to markdown and might cause a name spaec collision that
>>     could potentially be a security risk. If this is a use case without
>>     deployed code, I would recommend renaming this resource to something
>>     more specific, eg "markdown-varient". If it describes actual code,
>>     then I guess that ship has sailed.
>
> It does describe some actual code.
>
> I can change the text to:
> {{
> The variant identifier itself should be stored in a resource with a name including the term variant (possibly including other decorations to avoid namespace collisions).
> }}
>
> How is that?

Perfect.

>> 2.4 talks about MIME aware clients saving a "batch script" to disk for
>>     later execution. These kind of "autorun" or "preview" features are
>>     a security nightmare, so here too I would hope this has not yet been
>>     coded. And if not, to reconsider not supporting such a feature.
>
> The purpose of this section was to suggest that if, for example, pandoc is the recipients preferred Markdown processor, and the recipient receives Markdown content in some other variant that pandoc supports (lets say original Markdown), then the recipient can send the Markdown through pandoc with the markdown_strict option; the recipient does not need to have or use Grubers original Markdown.pl implementation to get at what the sender wanted. It is not necessary for the recipient to have millions of different Markdown implementations, only that it has one (or a small handful) of implementations that are good enough for the purpose.
>
> There was significant discussion on apps-discuss (see around October 2014?) about how it is bad for the sender to be able to specify specific processing instructions, e.g., command-line commands or options that get sent directly to a command interpreter. So, that approach was jettisoned at that time.
>
> The text in Section 2.4 says:
>
> This strategy is to **translate** the processing instructions **inferred from** the [parameters] into a sequence of commands in the **local convention**, storing those commands in a batch script [] that are **appropriate (and safe) for the local system**.
>
>
> (Emphasis mine.) I think those emphasized parts capture the point that whatever code gets executed has to be appropriate and safe for the local system.
>
> I am happy to reword this paragraph somehow, but if that is seen as necessary, I would appreciate a counterproposal.

No that's fine. If you already had that discussion, and this is the
outcome of that, that is good enough for me. Although perhaps an
additional warning in the Security Section could be used to clarify
this a little more.

> A parenthetical note: Section 2.5 of text-markdown-use-cases (Process the Markdown) is a bit ambiguous. The point is to process the Markdown before the recipient sees it. Thus if you are composing an e-mail in Markdown, the point would be that your sending MUA (or an intermediary) would convert it to HTML before recipients receive the e-mail. However, your Markdown-aware sending MUA could save drafts in Markdown before the message is sent.
>
> Proposed text:
> {{
> 2.5. Process the Markdown In Advance
>
> This strategy is to process the Markdown into the formal markup, before a recipient receives it, which eliminates ambiguities. Once the Markdown is processed into (for example) valid XHTML, an application can save a file as "doc.xhtml" or can send MIME content as application/xhtml+xml with no further loss of metadata. While unambiguous, this process may not be reversible.
> }}

Sounds good too.

Paul


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On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 1:02 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> wrote:

>  (adding the hybi list)
>

Hi Robert,

Sorry for delay.


>
> It seems to me that this effectively adding an actor (the intermediary) ,
> and defining (not as explicitly as I think it needs to be) protocol
> mechanics for that actor in ways that the base specification did not
> anticipate.
>
>
Done more archaeology...

This text originates from the intermediaries section introduced on update
between
draft-tyoshino-hybi-websocket-perframe-deflate-06 and
draft-ietf-hybi-websocket-perframe-compression-00

I couldn't find the original proposal which led to this text from my mail
box. I thought someone made one on HyBi, but only found my comment on
publish of -00.

As far as I remember, we initially didn't intend to add any requirement,
expectation, etc. to the main (RFC 6455) spec by this spec. The text now
looks like an additional requirements to complement the main spec just
unexpectedly (unexpectedly at least for me). I added this text just to note
a fact that when one wants to change compression, handshake should be also
altered appropriately, otherwise, it doesn't work. Maybe the following
texts in RFC 6455 have a similar role.

   o  As control frames cannot be fragmented, an intermediary MUST NOT ...

   o  An intermediary MUST NOT change the fragmentation of a message if ...

   o  An intermediary MUST NOT change the fragmentation of any message ...


> I'm not comfortable that the consequences of these new mechanics
> (specifically - that the intermediary can directly participate in the
> extension negotiations, and change the results) are well understood.
>

Did you mean "not well understood"?


> The additions to the text you propose will certainly help point out that
> there might be some, and the message that the endpoint won't have insight
> into how its messages are handled beyond the intermediary needs to be
> prominent.
>

Yeah. But now I'm wondering if it's in the scope of protocol
standardization or not. Seems the text should be changed to look like a
warning (don't do this or your stack won't work) as discussed above.


>
> But I wonder if the mechanics of an intermediary _changing the protocol
> signalling_ is something the working group should explicitly work on
> writing down?
>
>
I've been viewing the PMCE from the view point of a browser developer. Like
fragmentation, permessage-deflate is also just a transport-level thing
which is invisible/transparent to the final user of the communication (e.g.
JavaScript using the WebSocket API). My comments are based on this idea.
But with your comment, I just noticed that it's not trivial.

Actually, the extensions under use is exposed to the user of the protocol
via _Extensions in Use_. We should have been aware of that.


> RjS
>
>
> On 6/30/15 3:42 AM, Takeshi Yoshino wrote:
>
>  Thank you for review, Robert.
>
>  On Thu, Jun 25, 2015 at 6:18 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>
> wrote:
>
>>  I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>
>> Summary: Ready with issues
>>
>> (fwiw, I also reviewed up through version -24).
>>
>> Section 7 (Intermediaries) should be more explicit that it's talking about an intermediary doing compression on one side and not (or doing different compression) on the other.
>> (If that's not what it's trying to set up, please clarify).
>>
>>  OK. So, I'd like to change the text as follows:
>
>  When an intermediary proxies ... Per-message Compression of messages
> received from one peer, and then forward the messages to the other peer, if
> the intermediary ...
>
>
>>  It's not clear from reading RFC6455 that the idea of intermediaries changing the contents of the websocket extension negotiation mechanism was considered - have I missed the text in that RFC that discusses that?
>> Are there other extensions that suggest similar behavior? It's not immediately clear that the protocol mechanics do the right thing when the different negotiations on each side of the proxy fail differently.
>>
>>  It's not well discussed in RFC6455. Right. AFAIK, there's no such
> extension defined, yet.
>
>  I understand that this text (intermediary section in the I-D) works just
> not to disallow change of compression but there's nothing in RFC6455 that
> guarantees that such transformation doesn't cause any issue with other
> infrastructure of the WebSocket protocol.
>
>  I believe that unless any extension that interferes with the other
> negotiated extensions (e.g. counting the number of negotiated extensions,
> relying on PMCE, etc.), the core WebSocket protocol (things defined in
> RFC6455) should work. If such an extension is introduced, it would be just
> considered to be incompatible with PMCEs, or that extension should describe
> how to coordinate with change on PMCE in the intermediaries section of its
> RFC.
>
>  I think this is more reasonable than prohibiting change on Per-message
> Compression by intermediaries.
>
>>  This also seems to put an endpoint in a position where it has no say on what an intermediary does with the traffic on the other side of it. Is that worth discussing in the document?
>>
>>  Ah, right. Maybe some text like:
>
>  "It's not guaranteed that the PMCE which an endpoint has negotiated in
> the opening handshake is preserved in the whole path to the peer endpoint."
>
>
>>  It would be good to point to, or provide, a discussion of how the extension negotiation mechanism in WebSockets is meant to be protected.
>>
>>
>  As a general discussion to cover other extensions (if they want. by
> referring to this to-be-RFC) like the section defining terms to complement
> RFC6455 [1]?
>
>  [1]
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3
>
>
>
>

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On T=
ue, Jul 7, 2015 at 1:02 AM, Robert Sparks <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"=
mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com" target=3D"_blank">rjsparks@nostrum.com</a>&gt;=
</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px=
 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-=
left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
 =20
   =20
 =20
  <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    (adding the hybi list)<br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Hi Rob=
ert,</div><div><br></div><div>Sorry for delay.</div><div>=C2=A0</div><block=
quote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-w=
idth:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding=
-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    <br>
    It seems to me that this effectively adding an actor (the
    intermediary) , and defining (not as explicitly as I think it needs
    to be) protocol mechanics for that actor in ways that the base
    specification did not anticipate.<br>
    <br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Done more=C2=A0archaeology..=
.</div><div><br></div><div>This text originates from the intermediaries sec=
tion introduced on update between</div><div>draft-tyoshino-hybi-websocket-p=
erframe-deflate-06 and</div><div>draft-ietf-hybi-websocket-perframe-compres=
sion-00</div><div><br></div><div>I couldn&#39;t find the original proposal =
which led to this text from my mail box. I thought someone made one on HyBi=
, but only found my comment on publish of -00.</div><div><br></div><div>As =
far as I remember, we initially didn&#39;t intend to add any requirement, e=
xpectation, etc. to the main (RFC 6455) spec by this spec. The text now loo=
ks like an additional requirements to complement the main spec just unexpec=
tedly (unexpectedly at least for me). I added this text just to note a fact=
 that when one wants to change compression, handshake should be also altere=
d appropriately, otherwise, it doesn&#39;t work. Maybe the following texts =
in RFC 6455 have a similar role.</div><div><br></div><div><div>=C2=A0 =C2=
=A0o =C2=A0As control frames cannot be fragmented, an intermediary MUST NOT=
 ...</div><div><br></div><div>=C2=A0 =C2=A0o =C2=A0An intermediary MUST NOT=
 change the fragmentation of a message if ...</div><div><br></div><div>=C2=
=A0 =C2=A0o =C2=A0An intermediary MUST NOT change the fragmentation of any =
message ...</div></div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" s=
tyle=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rg=
b(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#F=
FFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    I&#39;m not comfortable that the consequences of these new mechanics
    (specifically - that the intermediary can directly participate in
    the extension negotiations, and change the results) are well
    understood. </div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Did you mean &quot;n=
ot well understood&quot;?</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_=
quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-=
color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcol=
or=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">The additions to the text you propose will =
certainly
    help point out that there might be some, and the message that the
    endpoint won&#39;t have insight into how its messages are handled beyon=
d
    the intermediary needs to be prominent. <br></div></blockquote><div><br=
></div><div>Yeah. But now I&#39;m wondering if it&#39;s in the scope of pro=
tocol standardization or not. Seems the text should be changed to look like=
 a warning (don&#39;t do this or your stack won&#39;t work) as discussed ab=
ove.</div><div>=C2=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"m=
argin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204=
,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" te=
xt=3D"#000000">
    <br>
    But I wonder if the mechanics of an intermediary _changing the
    protocol signalling_ is something the working group should
    explicitly work on writing down?<br>
    <br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I&#39;ve been viewing the PM=
CE from the view point of a browser developer. Like fragmentation, permessa=
ge-deflate is also just a transport-level thing which is invisible/transpar=
ent to the final user of the communication (e.g. JavaScript using the WebSo=
cket API). My comments are based on this idea. But with your comment, I jus=
t noticed that it&#39;s not trivial.</div><div><br></div><div>Actually, the=
 extensions under use is exposed to the user of the protocol via _Extension=
s in Use_. We should have been aware of that.</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockq=
uote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-wi=
dth:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-=
left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    RjS<div><div class=3D"h5"><br>
    <div><br>
      On 6/30/15 3:42 AM, Takeshi Yoshino wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">
      <div dir=3D"ltr">
        <div class=3D"gmail_extra">
          <div class=3D"gmail_quote">Thank you for review, Robert.</div>
          <div class=3D"gmail_quote"><br>
          </div>
          <div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Thu, Jun 25, 2015 at 6:18 AM,
            Robert Sparks <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rjsparks@=
nostrum.com" target=3D"_blank">rjsparks@nostrum.com</a>&gt;</span>
            wrote:<br>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>I have reviewed this document as part of the security =
directorate&#39;s=20
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the=20
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat=20
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with issues

(fwiw, I also reviewed up through version -24).

Section 7 (Intermediaries) should be more explicit that it&#39;s talking ab=
out an intermediary doing compression on one side and not (or doing differe=
nt compression) on the other.
(If that&#39;s not what it&#39;s trying to set up, please clarify).
</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>OK. So, I&#39;d like to change the text as follows:</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>
              <div>When an intermediary proxies ... Per-message
                Compression of messages received from one peer, and then
                forward the messages to the other peer, if the
                intermediary ...</div>
            </div>
            <div>=C2=A0<br>
            </div>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>It&#39;s not clear from reading RFC6455 that the idea =
of intermediaries changing the contents of the websocket extension negotiat=
ion mechanism was considered - have I missed the text in that RFC that disc=
usses that?
Are there other extensions that suggest similar behavior? It&#39;s not imme=
diately clear that the protocol mechanics do the right thing when the diffe=
rent negotiations on each side of the proxy fail differently.
</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>It&#39;s not well discussed in RFC6455. Right. AFAIK,
              there&#39;s no such extension defined, yet.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I understand that this text (intermediary section in
              the I-D) works just not to disallow change of compression
              but there&#39;s nothing in RFC6455 that guarantees that such
              transformation doesn&#39;t cause any issue with other
              infrastructure of the WebSocket protocol.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I believe that unless any extension that interferes
              with the other negotiated extensions (e.g. counting the
              number of negotiated extensions, relying on PMCE, etc.),
              the core WebSocket protocol (things defined in RFC6455)
              should work. If such an extension is introduced, it would
              be just considered to be incompatible with PMCEs, or that
              extension should describe how to coordinate with change on
              PMCE in the intermediaries section of its RFC.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I think this is more reasonable than prohibiting change
              on Per-message Compression by intermediaries.</div>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>This also seems to put an endpoint in a position where=
 it has no say on what an intermediary does with the traffic on the other s=
ide of it. Is that worth discussing in the document?</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>Ah, right. Maybe some text like:</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>&quot;It&#39;s not guaranteed that the PMCE which an endpo=
int
              has negotiated in the opening handshake is preserved in
              the whole path to the peer endpoint.&quot;</div>
            <div>=C2=A0</div>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>It would be good to point to, or provide, a discussion=
 of how the extension negotiation mechanism in WebSockets is meant to be pr=
otected.</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>As a general discussion to cover other extensions (if
              they want. by referring to this to-be-RFC) like the
              section defining terms to complement RFC6455 [1]?</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>[1] <a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi=
-permessage-compression-24#section-3" target=3D"_blank">https://tools.ietf.=
org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3</a></div>
            <div>=C2=A0</div>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
  </div></div></div>

</blockquote></div><br></div></div>

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For telechat 2015-08-06

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
John Bradley           T 2015-07-08 draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04
Jeffrey Hutzelman      T 2015-07-23 draft-ietf-sidr-rfc6490-bis-04


For telechat 2015-08-20

Dan Harkins            T 2015-08-05 draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-07

Last calls and special requests:

Dave Cridland            2015-07-27 draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Alan DeKok               2015-07-09 draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6-10
Donald Eastlake          2015-07-13 draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-address-generation-privacy-07
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Tobias Gondrom         E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-11
Olafur Gudmundsson       2015-07-29 draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-05
Phillip Hallam-Baker     2015-07-20 draft-ietf-dime-4over6-provisioning-03
Steve Hanna              2015-08-04 draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-02
Sam Hartman              2015-07-23 draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05
Paul Hoffman             2015-07-27 draft-ietf-dime-ovli-08
Christian Huitema        2015-08-11 draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
Chris Inacio             2015-07-29 draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-07
Zach Shelby              2014-06-06 draft-housley-implementer-obligations-02
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments =
just
like any other last call comments.

The document proposes to reserve the =93.onion=94 TLD for special use by =
the TOR
project. The document is short and easy to read, went through the last =
call
process, and is probably ready to publish. I just wish there was a =
clearer
structure to the security section.=20

I am a bit puzzled by the way the security section is written. Since the
purpose of the draft is to reserve the =93.onion=94 TLD, I would expect =
the
security section to present the security issues mitigated or introduced =
by
this TLD reservation. As far as I understand, the main security issues =
come
from client confusion, which could cause =93.onion=94 names to be =
resolved
through the standard DNS process. A number of bad things happen then, =
from
simple information disclosure that a client is trying to access a TOR
service, to potential spoofing of secure TOR services. In fact, the main
reason for the registration request is to mitigate these security =
issues, by
requesting that standard DNS resolvers and servers recognize =
=93.onion=94
requests and refuse to forward them.

The security section makes all these points, but it also mixes in a
description of the structure of .onion names and their cryptographic
components. I believe the issues would be easier to understand if the =
main
body of the document included a short description of the TOR naming =
process
and name resolution.

The security section also does not explain how the =93leakage of =
names=94 issue
is mitigated for legacy systems. By definition, these systems have not =
been
updated and do not perform special treatment of =93.onion=94 names. The =
TLD
reservation probably helps somewhat, but this is not discussed.

Then, the security section also does not discuss how malicious name
resolvers could be deployed in order to attack the TOR network. For =
example,
if TOR security relies on DNS servers =93black holing=94 misrouted =
request to
resolve =93.onion=94 names, what happens if malicious servers replace =
the
suggested black-holing with some malicious tampering?

-- Christian Huitema

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process. A number of bad things happen then, from simple information =
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Hello,

With apologies for the delay, this is to let you know that early this
month, the W3C Advisory Committee Representatives received a Proposal
to revise the Web Accessibility Initiative (see the W3C Process
Document description of Activity Proposals [1]). This proposal
includes draft charters for the following groups:

1) WCAG WG:  Web Content Accessibility Guidelines WG
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/2015/04/draft-wcag-charter
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/

2) ATAG WG:  Authoring Tool Accessibility Guidelines WG
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/WAI/AU/2015/draft_auwg_charter.html
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/AU/

3) UAWG:  User Agent Accessibility Guidelines WG
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/WAI/UA/2015/draft_uawg_charter.html
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/UA/

4) APA WG:  Accessible Platform Architectures WG (formerly PFWG)
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/2015/04/draft-spec-charter
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/PF/ (current WG page, pre-split)

5) ARIA WG:  Accessible Rich Internet Applications Working Group
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/2015/04/draft-aria-charter
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/PF/ (current WG page, pre-split)

6) EOWG:  Education and Outreach WG
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/2015/charter6-2015
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/

7) WAI Interest Group
Proposed: http://www.w3.org/WAI/IG/charter5.html
WG Page: http://www.w3.org/WAI/IG/


As part of ensuring that the community is aware of proposed work
at W3C, this draft charter is public during the Advisory
Committee review period.

W3C invites public comments through 2015-07-30 on the
proposed charters. Please send comments to
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Other than comments sent in formal responses by W3C Advisory
Committee Representatives, W3C cannot guarantee a response to
comments. If you work for a W3C Member [2], please coordinate
your comments with your Advisory Committee Representative. For
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have your Advisory Committee Representative refer to it from his
or her formal review comments.

If you should have any questions or need further information, please
contact Judy Brewer, WAI Domain Lead <jbrewer@w3.org>.

Thank you,

Coralie Mercier, Acting Head of W3C Marketing & Communications

[1] http://www.w3.org/2014/Process-20140801/#ActivityCreation
[2] http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Member/List

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HyBi people,

Please respond to this thread if you want to keep the section as-is (or
with some improvement. texts welcome).

I plan to revise it by replacing with a warning (saying "don't change the
compression unless you don't know it") unless anyone objects to it.

Takeshi

On Tue, Jul 14, 2015 at 5:32 PM, Takeshi Yoshino <tyoshino@google.com>
wrote:

> On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 1:02 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>
> wrote:
>
>>  (adding the hybi list)
>>
>
> Hi Robert,
>
> Sorry for delay.
>
>
>>
>> It seems to me that this effectively adding an actor (the intermediary) ,
>> and defining (not as explicitly as I think it needs to be) protocol
>> mechanics for that actor in ways that the base specification did not
>> anticipate.
>>
>>
> Done more archaeology...
>
> This text originates from the intermediaries section introduced on update
> between
> draft-tyoshino-hybi-websocket-perframe-deflate-06 and
> draft-ietf-hybi-websocket-perframe-compression-00
>
> I couldn't find the original proposal which led to this text from my mail
> box. I thought someone made one on HyBi, but only found my comment on
> publish of -00.
>
> As far as I remember, we initially didn't intend to add any requirement,
> expectation, etc. to the main (RFC 6455) spec by this spec. The text now
> looks like an additional requirements to complement the main spec just
> unexpectedly (unexpectedly at least for me). I added this text just to note
> a fact that when one wants to change compression, handshake should be also
> altered appropriately, otherwise, it doesn't work. Maybe the following
> texts in RFC 6455 have a similar role.
>
>    o  As control frames cannot be fragmented, an intermediary MUST NOT ...
>
>    o  An intermediary MUST NOT change the fragmentation of a message if ...
>
>    o  An intermediary MUST NOT change the fragmentation of any message ...
>
>
>> I'm not comfortable that the consequences of these new mechanics
>> (specifically - that the intermediary can directly participate in the
>> extension negotiations, and change the results) are well understood.
>>
>
> Did you mean "not well understood"?
>
>
>> The additions to the text you propose will certainly help point out that
>> there might be some, and the message that the endpoint won't have insight
>> into how its messages are handled beyond the intermediary needs to be
>> prominent.
>>
>
> Yeah. But now I'm wondering if it's in the scope of protocol
> standardization or not. Seems the text should be changed to look like a
> warning (don't do this or your stack won't work) as discussed above.
>
>
>>
>> But I wonder if the mechanics of an intermediary _changing the protocol
>> signalling_ is something the working group should explicitly work on
>> writing down?
>>
>>
> I've been viewing the PMCE from the view point of a browser developer.
> Like fragmentation, permessage-deflate is also just a transport-level thing
> which is invisible/transparent to the final user of the communication (e.g.
> JavaScript using the WebSocket API). My comments are based on this idea.
> But with your comment, I just noticed that it's not trivial.
>
> Actually, the extensions under use is exposed to the user of the protocol
> via _Extensions in Use_. We should have been aware of that.
>
>
>> RjS
>>
>>
>> On 6/30/15 3:42 AM, Takeshi Yoshino wrote:
>>
>>  Thank you for review, Robert.
>>
>>  On Thu, Jun 25, 2015 at 6:18 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>>  I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
>>> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
>>> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
>>> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>>
>>> Summary: Ready with issues
>>>
>>> (fwiw, I also reviewed up through version -24).
>>>
>>> Section 7 (Intermediaries) should be more explicit that it's talking about an intermediary doing compression on one side and not (or doing different compression) on the other.
>>> (If that's not what it's trying to set up, please clarify).
>>>
>>>  OK. So, I'd like to change the text as follows:
>>
>>  When an intermediary proxies ... Per-message Compression of messages
>> received from one peer, and then forward the messages to the other peer, if
>> the intermediary ...
>>
>>
>>>  It's not clear from reading RFC6455 that the idea of intermediaries changing the contents of the websocket extension negotiation mechanism was considered - have I missed the text in that RFC that discusses that?
>>> Are there other extensions that suggest similar behavior? It's not immediately clear that the protocol mechanics do the right thing when the different negotiations on each side of the proxy fail differently.
>>>
>>>  It's not well discussed in RFC6455. Right. AFAIK, there's no such
>> extension defined, yet.
>>
>>  I understand that this text (intermediary section in the I-D) works
>> just not to disallow change of compression but there's nothing in RFC6455
>> that guarantees that such transformation doesn't cause any issue with other
>> infrastructure of the WebSocket protocol.
>>
>>  I believe that unless any extension that interferes with the other
>> negotiated extensions (e.g. counting the number of negotiated extensions,
>> relying on PMCE, etc.), the core WebSocket protocol (things defined in
>> RFC6455) should work. If such an extension is introduced, it would be just
>> considered to be incompatible with PMCEs, or that extension should describe
>> how to coordinate with change on PMCE in the intermediaries section of its
>> RFC.
>>
>>  I think this is more reasonable than prohibiting change on Per-message
>> Compression by intermediaries.
>>
>>>  This also seems to put an endpoint in a position where it has no say on what an intermediary does with the traffic on the other side of it. Is that worth discussing in the document?
>>>
>>>  Ah, right. Maybe some text like:
>>
>>  "It's not guaranteed that the PMCE which an endpoint has negotiated in
>> the opening handshake is preserved in the whole path to the peer endpoint."
>>
>>
>>>  It would be good to point to, or provide, a discussion of how the extension negotiation mechanism in WebSockets is meant to be protected.
>>>
>>>
>>  As a general discussion to cover other extensions (if they want. by
>> referring to this to-be-RFC) like the section defining terms to complement
>> RFC6455 [1]?
>>
>>  [1]
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3
>>
>>
>>
>>
>

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<div dir=3D"ltr">HyBi people,<div><br></div><div>Please respond to this thr=
ead if you want to keep the section as-is (or with some improvement. texts =
welcome).</div><div><br></div><div>I plan to revise it by replacing with a =
warning (saying &quot;don&#39;t change the compression unless you don&#39;t=
 know it&quot;) unless anyone objects to it.</div></div><div class=3D"gmail=
_extra"><br clear=3D"all"><div><div class=3D"gmail_signature">Takeshi</div>=
</div>
<br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 14, 2015 at 5:32 PM, Takeshi Yos=
hino <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:tyoshino@google.com" target=3D=
"_blank">tyoshino@google.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"=
gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-=
left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_q=
uote">On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 1:02 AM, Robert Sparks <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<=
a href=3D"mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com" target=3D"_blank">rjsparks@nostrum.c=
om</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"marg=
in:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,20=
4);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">
 =20
   =20
 =20
  <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    (adding the hybi list)<br></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Hi Rob=
ert,</div><div><br></div><div>Sorry for delay.</div><span class=3D""><div>=
=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    <br>
    It seems to me that this effectively adding an actor (the
    intermediary) , and defining (not as explicitly as I think it needs
    to be) protocol mechanics for that actor in ways that the base
    specification did not anticipate.<br>
    <br></div></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>Done more=C2=A0archae=
ology...</div><div><br></div><div>This text originates from the intermediar=
ies section introduced on update between</div><div>draft-tyoshino-hybi-webs=
ocket-perframe-deflate-06 and</div><div>draft-ietf-hybi-websocket-perframe-=
compression-00</div><div><br></div><div>I couldn&#39;t find the original pr=
oposal which led to this text from my mail box. I thought someone made one =
on HyBi, but only found my comment on publish of -00.</div><div><br></div><=
div>As far as I remember, we initially didn&#39;t intend to add any require=
ment, expectation, etc. to the main (RFC 6455) spec by this spec. The text =
now looks like an additional requirements to complement the main spec just =
unexpectedly (unexpectedly at least for me). I added this text just to note=
 a fact that when one wants to change compression, handshake should be also=
 altered appropriately, otherwise, it doesn&#39;t work. Maybe the following=
 texts in RFC 6455 have a similar role.</div><div><br></div><div><div>=C2=
=A0 =C2=A0o =C2=A0As control frames cannot be fragmented, an intermediary M=
UST NOT ...</div><div><br></div><div>=C2=A0 =C2=A0o =C2=A0An intermediary M=
UST NOT change the fragmentation of a message if ...</div><div><br></div><d=
iv>=C2=A0 =C2=A0o =C2=A0An intermediary MUST NOT change the fragmentation o=
f any message ...</div></div><span class=3D""><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote =
class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1=
px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:=
1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    I&#39;m not comfortable that the consequences of these new mechanics
    (specifically - that the intermediary can directly participate in
    the extension negotiations, and change the results) are well
    understood. </div></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>Did you mean =
&quot;not well understood&quot;?</div><span class=3D""><div>=C2=A0</div><bl=
ockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-lef=
t-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padd=
ing-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">The additions to th=
e text you propose will certainly
    help point out that there might be some, and the message that the
    endpoint won&#39;t have insight into how its messages are handled beyon=
d
    the intermediary needs to be prominent. <br></div></blockquote><div><br=
></div></span><div>Yeah. But now I&#39;m wondering if it&#39;s in the scope=
 of protocol standardization or not. Seems the text should be changed to lo=
ok like a warning (don&#39;t do this or your stack won&#39;t work) as discu=
ssed above.</div><span class=3D""><div>=C2=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D=
"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;borde=
r-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><di=
v bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
    <br>
    But I wonder if the mechanics of an intermediary _changing the
    protocol signalling_ is something the working group should
    explicitly work on writing down?<br>
    <br></div></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>I&#39;ve been viewing=
 the PMCE from the view point of a browser developer. Like fragmentation, p=
ermessage-deflate is also just a transport-level thing which is invisible/t=
ransparent to the final user of the communication (e.g. JavaScript using th=
e WebSocket API). My comments are based on this idea. But with your comment=
, I just noticed that it&#39;s not trivial.</div><div><br></div><div>Actual=
ly, the extensions under use is exposed to the user of the protocol via _Ex=
tensions in Use_. We should have been aware of that.</div><div><div class=
=3D"h5"><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:=
0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);=
border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"=
#000000">
    RjS<div><div><br>
    <div><br>
      On 6/30/15 3:42 AM, Takeshi Yoshino wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote type=3D"cite">
      <div dir=3D"ltr">
        <div class=3D"gmail_extra">
          <div class=3D"gmail_quote">Thank you for review, Robert.</div>
          <div class=3D"gmail_quote"><br>
          </div>
          <div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Thu, Jun 25, 2015 at 6:18 AM,
            Robert Sparks <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rjsparks@=
nostrum.com" target=3D"_blank">rjsparks@nostrum.com</a>&gt;</span>
            wrote:<br>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>I have reviewed this document as part of the security =
directorate&#39;s=20
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the=20
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat=20
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with issues

(fwiw, I also reviewed up through version -24).

Section 7 (Intermediaries) should be more explicit that it&#39;s talking ab=
out an intermediary doing compression on one side and not (or doing differe=
nt compression) on the other.
(If that&#39;s not what it&#39;s trying to set up, please clarify).
</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>OK. So, I&#39;d like to change the text as follows:</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>
              <div>When an intermediary proxies ... Per-message
                Compression of messages received from one peer, and then
                forward the messages to the other peer, if the
                intermediary ...</div>
            </div>
            <div>=C2=A0<br>
            </div>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>It&#39;s not clear from reading RFC6455 that the idea =
of intermediaries changing the contents of the websocket extension negotiat=
ion mechanism was considered - have I missed the text in that RFC that disc=
usses that?
Are there other extensions that suggest similar behavior? It&#39;s not imme=
diately clear that the protocol mechanics do the right thing when the diffe=
rent negotiations on each side of the proxy fail differently.
</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>It&#39;s not well discussed in RFC6455. Right. AFAIK,
              there&#39;s no such extension defined, yet.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I understand that this text (intermediary section in
              the I-D) works just not to disallow change of compression
              but there&#39;s nothing in RFC6455 that guarantees that such
              transformation doesn&#39;t cause any issue with other
              infrastructure of the WebSocket protocol.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I believe that unless any extension that interferes
              with the other negotiated extensions (e.g. counting the
              number of negotiated extensions, relying on PMCE, etc.),
              the core WebSocket protocol (things defined in RFC6455)
              should work. If such an extension is introduced, it would
              be just considered to be incompatible with PMCEs, or that
              extension should describe how to coordinate with change on
              PMCE in the intermediaries section of its RFC.</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>I think this is more reasonable than prohibiting change
              on Per-message Compression by intermediaries.</div>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>This also seems to put an endpoint in a position where=
 it has no say on what an intermediary does with the traffic on the other s=
ide of it. Is that worth discussing in the document?</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div>Ah, right. Maybe some text like:</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>&quot;It&#39;s not guaranteed that the PMCE which an endpo=
int
              has negotiated in the opening handshake is preserved in
              the whole path to the peer endpoint.&quot;</div>
            <div>=C2=A0</div>
            <blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-s=
tyle:solid;padding-left:1ex">
              <div bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#000000">
                <pre>It would be good to point to, or provide, a discussion=
 of how the extension negotiation mechanism in WebSockets is meant to be pr=
otected.</pre>
              </div>
            </blockquote>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>As a general discussion to cover other extensions (if
              they want. by referring to this to-be-RFC) like the
              section defining terms to complement RFC6455 [1]?</div>
            <div><br>
            </div>
            <div>[1] <a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hybi=
-permessage-compression-24#section-3" target=3D"_blank">https://tools.ietf.=
org/html/draft-ietf-hybi-permessage-compression-24#section-3</a></div>
            <div>=C2=A0</div>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
  </div></div></div>

</blockquote></div></div></div><br></div></div>
</blockquote></div><br></div>

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Security directorate: 

 

You reviewed our I2RS architecture document and provided really helpful
comments.  I2RS is preparing to work on the I2RS protocol - which is
Netconf/restconf + additions.   We have prepare two requirements documents: 

 

 <http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-hares-i2rs-auth-trans/>
draft-hares-i2rs-auth-trans-04  - security requirements for protocol 

 <http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-mglt-i2rs-security-requirements/>
draft-mglt-i2rs-security-requirements-00 - security requirements for
environment. 

 

The Netconf review expressed some concerns regarding whether these were
complete enough for the security directorate.   So, in parallel with doing a
WG adoption call I would like to request a QA review of these documents.
Also, if the person who does the review can read the secdir review of the
architecture document to determine if we have resolved in these documents
the questions from the architecture review. 

 

Due to the Netconf review, we would ask the person to review in 3 weeks from
now.  Could you let me know if this is possible?  As chairs, we really value
the advice of the security directorate.   

 

Sue Hares and Jeff Haas 

 

 


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Review instructions and related resources are at:
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Warren Kumari is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2015-08-06

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
John Bradley           T 2015-07-08 draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04
Alan DeKok             T 2015-07-09 draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6-11
Donald Eastlake        T 2015-07-13 draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-address-generation-privacy-07
Jeffrey Hutzelman      T 2015-07-23 draft-ietf-sidr-rfc6490-bis-04


For telechat 2015-08-20

Dan Harkins            T 2015-08-05 draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-07

Last calls and special requests:

Dave Cridland            2015-07-27 draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Tobias Gondrom         E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-11
Olafur Gudmundsson       2015-07-29 draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-05
Phillip Hallam-Baker     2015-07-20 draft-ietf-dime-4over6-provisioning-04
Steve Hanna              2015-08-04 draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-02
Sam Hartman              2015-07-23 draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05
Paul Hoffman             2015-07-27 draft-ietf-dime-ovli-08
Christian Huitema        2015-08-11 draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
Chris Inacio             2015-07-29 draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-08
Leif Johansson           2015-08-17 draft-iab-crypto-alg-agility-06
Simon Josefsson          2015-08-02 draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signal-compatibility-ospf-15
Charlie Kaufman          2015-08-04 draft-ietf-httpbis-cice-01
Scott Kelly              2015-08-04 draft-ietf-precis-mappings-11
Tero Kivinen             2014-06-06 draft-housley-implementer-obligations-02
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes the exceptations of implementers of IETF
protocols, and security consideration section properly points out that
following specifications might not be enough, maintenance is also
needed to fix issues found later. It also provides nice example why
security processing is exception to Postel's Law:

    For example, a password that is close, but not exactly right, is
    not sufficient to gain access.

I think this document is ready.
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Hello,

Today W3C Advisory Committee Representatives received a Proposal
to revise the Digital Publishing Activity [0] (see the W3C Process
Document description of Activity Proposals [1]). This proposal
includes a draft charter for the Digital Publishing Interest Group:
   http://www.w3.org/2015/09/digpubig

As part of ensuring that the community is aware of proposed work
at W3C, this draft charter is public during the Advisory
Committee review period.

W3C invites public comments through 2015-08-20 on the
proposed charter. Please send comments to
public-new-work@w3.org, which has a public archive:
   http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-new-work/

Other than comments sent in formal responses by W3C Advisory
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Greetings again. This document, "Diameter Overload Indication 
Conveyance", is a way for a Diameter server in a cluster to tell other 
servers in the cluster "don't send so many requests to me". It is pretty 
complex and fiddly, but seems sensible. The security considerations are 
numerous, but fairly well covered in the extensive Security 
Considerations section.

Note that there is not much that can really be done here to address the 
biggest concern of spoofing. As the document says:

    Diameter does not include features to provide end-to-end
    authentication, integrity protection, or confidentiality.  This may
    cause complications when sending overload reports between non-
    adjacent nodes.

(Nice use of "may" there...) So, there isn't much that can be demanded 
of this document without some obvious controls. Still, the Security 
Considerations section covers the likely attacks and problems.

--Paul Hoffman


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Hiya,

One of the things about being an AD is that it takes too
much time. The IESG are constantly trying to (find the time
to:-) figure out ways to reduce the time needed for doing
the AD gig. One of the things I'm going to try for a while
is to limit the time I spend on document review/balloting,
and you can maybe help a bit with that. Reviewing the on
average 366 pages of Internet draft for each telechat is one
of the most time-consuming parts of the AD job.

For a while (until IETF94 or until it has been seen to
not work), I'm going to not start reading documents for IESG
telechats until the day before. In my timezone that gives me
1.5 days to go over the lot. (I'll slide the 1.5 day window
about as needed when other stuff's going on.)

I'll try keep some measures and report back at IETF94. (Feel
free to suggest useful and easy things to measure.)

That's more likely to work out if you good folks can a) try a
little harder to make sure we've gotten a secdir review before
telechat-3 days, (that is, by the Monday before) either by doing
your review when assigned or by letting Tero know early you
can't get to it so he can assign someone else and b) if you can
try to write the reviews in such a way that I could just post
the review as a ballot (assuming the reviewer and I agree about
stuff, which is common), and (c) if you're willing to stay
copied on the discussion of the draft beyond the telechat that
can also really help. (Just note that in your review if you
remember to.)

Wrt point (a), if there is something we can change to make
the assignments more visible, please let us and Tero know so
you don't inadvertently drop one.

Point (b) means that the review text is better written so
as to be ok to send to say the WG that produced the draft
and so that the set of actions that'd be needed to address
the comment are as clear as possible and are such that someone
could relatively easily check if they've been done or not
when looking at a diff. (If you've time and can look at the
ballot history for some documents you've reviewed it'd be
great if you could better characterise those differences.)

WRT (c), as we said in Prague, it's entirely ok if you don't
want to or can't deal with extended discussion on a draft.
When that's the case, just let us know and we'll take care
of it.

Whilst I'm trying this Kathleen will be operating as normal
so we hope to not badly drop any balls no matter how this
works out. (If we do, blame me though:-)

Cheers,
S.


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Hi Stephen /Catherine,


Please lets us know if this text is sufficient to resolve this comment.


Slightly tweaking the text per Bernie=92s comment. Now including IPsec refe=
rence.

"The information elements that this draft is exposing is the client=92s acc=
ess-network information. These pertains to the access network to which the =
client is attached, such as Access Technology Type (Ex: WLAN, Ethernet=85et=
c), Access Point Identity (Name, BSSID), Operator Id/Realm. Exposing these =
information elements to an eavesdropper has no implication on the end-user =
security. But, in deployments where this information is considered secure a=
nd when such threat cannot be mitigated using IPsec [RFC4301] or other secu=
rity protocols, then the administrators have to consider disabling the capa=
bility specified in this document on the DHCP entities."



Regards
Sri





On 7/10/15, 10:43 AM, "Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com<mailto:volz@cisc=
o.com>> wrote:

I am not aware of such data. My guess is that most SPs place this kind of t=
raffic in what they hope to be an isolated network (i.e., behind firewalls,=
 ...).

Also, much of this data is pretty easy to find anyway ... SSIDs are mostly =
broadcast (or easy to snoop for), which mobile operator you use is probably=
 discoverable in seconds (heck I bet you=92d answer if I asked, or if I had=
 your number a google query would probably tell me ...). So, I'm not really=
 sure how critical this information tends to be. But, yet protecting it is =
better than not protecting it. But I think steps should have been taken for=
 the other data in DHCP (relay to server).

- Bernie

-----Original Message-----
From: Stephen Farrell [mailto:stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie]
Sent: Friday, July 10, 2015 1:28 PM
To: Bernie Volz (volz); Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)
Cc: draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draf=
t-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org>; iesg@ietf.org<mai=
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Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identi=
fier-08


Hiya,

On 10/07/15 17:27, Bernie Volz (volz) wrote:
IPsec should also hide this information from pervasive monitoring
(though how much IPsec is in use is an open question). Note also that
as this is relay to server (or relay to relay) communication, one
would hope that most SPs have taken measures to 'secure' this traffic
either by using IPsec or VPNs.

Do we have any data as to whether or not such protection does get deployed?=
 I'd not be surprised if there's not much public, but if there were it'd be=
 good to know.

I also believe we have had reported cases where pieces of the network infra=
structure of various kinds of operator have been targeted for PM purposes, =
so while yes, it is really strange that someone would want to do that, it s=
eems to be a real, and not notional, threat.

Ta,
S.


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<blockquote id=3D"MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style=3D"font-size: 1=
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t-width: 5px; border-left-style: solid; padding: 0px 0px 0px 5px; margin: 0=
px 0px 0px 5px;">
<div>I am not aware of such data. My guess is that most SPs place this kind=
 of traffic in what they hope to be an isolated network (i.e., behind firew=
alls, ...).</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Also, much of this data is pretty easy to find anyway ... SSIDs are mo=
stly broadcast (or easy to snoop for), which mobile operator you use is pro=
bably discoverable in seconds (heck I bet you=92d answer if I asked, or if =
I had your number a google query would
 probably tell me ...). So, I'm not really sure how critical this informati=
on tends to be. But, yet protecting it is better than not protecting it. Bu=
t I think steps should have been taken for the other data in DHCP (relay to=
 server).</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>- Bernie</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>-----Original Message-----</div>
<div>From: Stephen Farrell [<a href=3D"mailto:stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie">ma=
ilto:stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie</a>]
</div>
<div>Sent: Friday, July 10, 2015 1:28 PM</div>
<div>To: Bernie Volz (volz); Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)</div>
<div>Cc: <a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@too=
ls.ietf.org">
draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-identifier.all@tools.ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D=
"mailto:iesg@ietf.org">
iesg@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:secdir@ietf.org">secdir@ietf.org</a></=
div>
<div>Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-dhc-access-network-i=
dentifier-08</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Hiya,</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>On 10/07/15 17:27, Bernie Volz (volz) wrote:</div>
<blockquote id=3D"MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style=3D"BORDER-LEFT:=
 #b5c4df 5 solid; PADDING:0 0 0 5; MARGIN:0 0 0 5;">
<div>IPsec should also hide this information from pervasive monitoring </di=
v>
<div>(though how much IPsec is in use is an open question). Note also that =
</div>
<div>as this is relay to server (or relay to relay) communication, one </di=
v>
<div>would hope that most SPs have taken measures to 'secure' this traffic =
</div>
<div>either by using IPsec or VPNs.</div>
</blockquote>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Do we have any data as to whether or not such protection does get depl=
oyed? I'd not be surprised if there's not much public, but if there were it=
'd be good to know.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>I also believe we have had reported cases where pieces of the network =
infrastructure of various kinds of operator have been targeted for PM purpo=
ses, so while yes, it is really strange that someone would want to do that,=
 it seems to be a real, and not
 notional, threat.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Ta,</div>
<div>S.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
</blockquote>
</body>
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Hi,

I am curious if this is a security concern.
When an event is scheduled, the ID and its scheduled time
are sent out in a notification to potentially all clients.

notification netconf-scheduled-message {
        leaf schedule-id {
          type string;
          description
            "The ID of the scheduled message.";
        }

        leaf scheduled-time {
          type yang:date-and-time;
          description
            "The time at which the RPC is scheduled to be performed.";
        }

        description
          "Indicates that a scheduled message was received.";

        reference
          "draft-mm-netconf-time-capability
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-mm-netconf-time-capability>:
           Time Capability in NETCONF";
      }



Any client can get these notifications and know the ID (to cancel it)
and the scheduled time.

Is is a security issue that any client can get the schedule-id
and use it to cancel the scheduled RPC?


Andy


On Wed, Jul 29, 2015 at 2:15 PM, Olafur Gudmundsson <ogud@ogud.com> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> This document is ready for publication
> The document is well written.
>
> The security considerations are clear and accurate. I would like highlight
> one omission though.
> This capability allows an attacker once it has gained access to schedule
> events in the future even
> though attackers access has been detected and revoked.
>
> Olafur
>
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Hi,<div><br></div><div>I am curious if this is a security =
concern.</div><div>When an event is scheduled, the ID and its scheduled tim=
e</div><div>are sent out in a notification to potentially all clients.</div=
><div><br></div><div><pre class=3D"newpage" style=3D"font-size:13.333333015=
4419px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)">notification netc=
onf-scheduled-message {
        leaf schedule-id {
          type string;
          description
            &quot;The ID of the scheduled message.&quot;;
        }

        leaf scheduled-time {
          type yang:date-and-time;
          description
            &quot;The time at which the RPC is scheduled to be performed.&q=
uot;;
        }

        description
          &quot;Indicates that a scheduled message was received.&quot;;
</pre><pre class=3D"newpage" style=3D"font-size:13.3333330154419px;margin-t=
op:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)">        reference
          &quot;<a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-mm-netconf-tim=
e-capability">draft-mm-netconf-time-capability</a>:
           Time Capability in NETCONF&quot;;
      }</pre><pre class=3D"newpage" style=3D"font-size:13.3333330154419px;m=
argin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><br></pre><div class=3D"g=
mail_extra"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">Any client can get these n=
otifications and know the ID (to cancel it)</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"=
>and the scheduled time.</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br></div><div cla=
ss=3D"gmail_extra">Is is a security issue that any client can get the sched=
ule-id</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">and use it to cancel the scheduled R=
PC?</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><b=
r></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">Andy</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br=
></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Wed, Ju=
l 29, 2015 at 2:15 PM, Olafur Gudmundsson <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"=
mailto:ogud@ogud.com" target=3D"_blank">ogud@ogud.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:=
<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-lef=
t:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style=3D"word-wrap:break-word"><div=
 style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo">I have reviewed this=
 document as part of the security directorate&#39;s=C2=A0</div><div style=
=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo">ongoing effort to review a=
ll IETF documents being processed by the=C2=A0</div><div style=3D"margin:0p=
x;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo">IESG.=C2=A0 These comments were written=
 primarily for the benefit of the=C2=A0</div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-=
size:19px;font-family:Menlo">security area directors.=C2=A0 Document editor=
s and WG chairs should treat=C2=A0</div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:=
19px;font-family:Menlo">these comments just like any other last call commen=
ts.</div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo"><br></d=
iv><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo">This document=
 is ready for publication</div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font=
-family:Menlo">The document is well written.</div><div style=3D"margin:0px;=
font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo"><br></div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-s=
ize:19px;font-family:Menlo">The security considerations are clear and accur=
ate. I would like highlight one omission though. =C2=A0</div><div style=3D"=
margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo">This capability allows an atta=
cker once it has gained access to schedule events in the future even=C2=A0<=
/div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Menlo">though atta=
ckers access has been detected and revoked.=C2=A0</div><span class=3D"HOEnZ=
b"><font color=3D"#888888"><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-fam=
ily:Menlo"><br></div><div style=3D"margin:0px;font-size:19px;font-family:Me=
nlo">Olafur=C2=A0</div></font></span></div><br>____________________________=
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Hi Olafur,

Thanks for the feedback.

>This capability allows an attacker once it has gained access to schedule e=
vents in the future even
>though attackers access has been detected and revoked.

We will add a paragraph that describes this potential threat to the next ve=
rsion of the draft.

Thanks,
Tal.

From: Netconf [mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Olafur Gudmund=
sson
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To: ietf; netconf@ietf.org; draft-mm-netconf-time-capability.all@ietf.org
Cc: secdir@ietf.org
Subject: [Netconf] Sec-Dir Review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-05.tx

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document is ready for publication
The document is well written.

The security considerations are clear and accurate. I would like highlight =
one omission though.
This capability allows an attacker once it has gained access to schedule ev=
ents in the future even
though attackers access has been detected and revoked.

Olafur

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">&gt;This capability allows an attacker once it=
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span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We will add a paragraph t=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Tal.<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in =
4.0pt">
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Netconf =
[mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Olafur Gudmundsson<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, July 30, 2015 12:16 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> ietf; netconf@ietf.org; draft-mm-netconf-time-capability.all@iet=
f.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> secdir@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Netconf] Sec-Dir Review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-=
05.tx<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">I have reviewed this document as part of the s=
ecurity directorate's&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">ongoing effort to review all IETF documents be=
ing processed by the&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">IESG.&nbsp; These comments were written primar=
ily for the benefit of the&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">security area directors.&nbsp; Document editor=
s and WG chairs should treat&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">these comments just like any other last call c=
omments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">This document is ready for publication<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">The document is well written.<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">The security considerations are clear and accu=
rate. I would like highlight one omission though. &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">This capability allows an attacker once it has=
 gained access to schedule events in the future even&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">though attackers access has been detected and =
revoked.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:14.5pt;font-family:&quot;Me=
nlo&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;">Olafur&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</body>
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David Mandelberg is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2015-08-06

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
John Bradley           T 2015-07-08 draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04
Alan DeKok             T 2015-07-09 draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6-11
Donald Eastlake        T 2015-07-13 draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-address-generation-privacy-07
Phillip Hallam-Baker   T 2015-07-20 draft-ietf-dime-4over6-provisioning-04
Sam Hartman            T 2015-07-23 draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05
Jeffrey Hutzelman      T 2015-07-23 draft-ietf-sidr-rfc6490-bis-04
Simon Josefsson        T 2015-08-02 draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signal-compatibility-ospf-15


For telechat 2015-08-20

Dan Harkins            T 2015-08-05 draft-vinapamula-softwire-dslite-prefix-binding-07

Last calls and special requests:

Dave Cridland            2015-07-27 draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Tobias Gondrom         E None       draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-11
Steve Hanna              2015-08-04 draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-02
Chris Inacio             2015-07-29 draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-08
Leif Johansson           2015-08-17 draft-iab-crypto-alg-agility-06
Charlie Kaufman          2015-08-04 draft-ietf-httpbis-cice-01
Scott Kelly              2015-08-04 draft-ietf-precis-mappings-11
Warren Kumari            2015-08-11 draft-ietf-ippm-2679-bis-03
Ben Laurie               2015-08-11 draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-terminology-03
Matt Lepinski            2015-08-11 draft-ietf-dnsop-root-loopback-02
Chris Lonvick            2015-08-11 draft-ietf-ippm-2680-bis-03
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes GMPLS OSPF improvements to support WSON network
elements.  I don't find any security relevant matters in the document,
so I believe the document is Ready.

The Security Considerations section could refer to the remaining
normative references' Security Considerations for completeness, but
those documents does not add anything juicy, so I don't find this
particulary important.

/Simon

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These com=
ments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors=
. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any =
other last call comments.


This pleasantly short document proposes a small extension to http whereby a=
 server indicates to a client what encodings of the payload sent with the r=
equest would have been accepted=2C and is aimed mainly at allowing clients =
to learn whether the server supports gzip compression. I agree with the aut=
hors that the addition of this information does not introduce any new secur=
ity considerations. The information retrieved must be considered only a "hi=
nt" because the acceptable encodings can change at any time without notice=
=2C so the values returned are not a fully reliable indicator of what encod=
ings will be acceptable on a subsequent request.

There are some challenges associated with this method of delivering a confi=
guration hint. As the document notes=2C the acceptable encodings might not =
be global to a server=2C but rather might vary for different resources on t=
he same server=2C or even with different request methods for the same resou=
rce. In practice=2C clients are likely to guess the encodings supported acc=
ording to responses it has received for other resources and methods on the =
same server. If the client guesses wrong=2C it might end up wasting bandwid=
th by sending some large payload uncompressed when it could have been compr=
essed or - worse - compressed and subsequently uncompressed when the initia=
l request is rejected.


One way to avoid this possibility that might be worthwhile if the payload w=
ere large enough would be to first make a request with some "known bad" enc=
oding specified and an empty body. When the server rejected the request bas=
ed on the bad encoding=2C it would specify what encodings were acceptable. =
If would be architecturally cleaner is there were some reserved encoding na=
me that could be guaranteed never to be valid=2C though in practice clients=
 could choose an encoding name like UNSUPPORTED or INVALID and be pretty co=
nfident no one would ever standardize that as an encoding name.


While this specification recommends that the Accept-Encoding header only be=
 returned on successes and on failures where the problem was an invalid enc=
oding=2C clients can never count on that behavior because implementations t=
hat don't implement this specification will never return that header even i=
f it is a problem with the encoding.

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ents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for=
 the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs=
 should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.


This pleasantly short document proposes a small extension to http whereby a=
 server indicates to a client what encodings of the payload sent with the r=
equest would have been accepted=2C and is aimed mainly at allowing clients =
to learn whether the server supports gzip compression. I agree with the aut=
hors that the addition of this information does not introduce any new secur=
ity considerations. The information retrieved must be considered only a "hi=
nt" because the acceptable encodings can change at any time without notice=
=2C so the values returned are not a fully reliable indicator of what encod=
ings will be acceptable on a subsequent request.

There are some challenges associated with this method of delivering a confi=
guration hint. As the document notes=2C the acceptable encodings might not =
be global to a server=2C but rather might vary for different resources on t=
he same server=2C or even with different request methods for the same resou=
rce. In practice=2C clients are likely to guess the encodings supported acc=
ording to responses it has received for other resources and methods on the =
same server. If the client guesses wrong=2C it might end up wasting bandwid=
th by sending some large payload uncompressed when it could have been compr=
essed or - worse - compressed and subsequently uncompressed when the initia=
l request is rejected.


One way to avoid this possibility that might be worthwhile if the payload w=
ere large enough would be to first make a request with some "known bad" enc=
oding specified and an empty body. When the server rejected the request bas=
ed on the bad encoding=2C it would specify what encodings were acceptable. =
If would be architecturally cleaner is there were some reserved encoding na=
me that could be guaranteed never to be valid=2C though in practice clients=
 could choose an encoding name like UNSUPPORTED or INVALID and be pretty co=
nfident no one would ever standardize that as an encoding name.


While this specification recommends that the Accept-Encoding header only be=
 returned on successes and on failures where the problem was an invalid enc=
oding=2C clients can never count on that behavior because implementations t=
hat don't implement this specification will never return that header even i=
f it is a problem with the encoding.

--Charlie 		 	   		  </div></body>
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From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@greenbytes.de>
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On 2015-07-31 16:52, Charlie Kaufman wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
> area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
> comments just like any other last call comments. This pleasantly short
> document proposes a small extension to http whereby a server indicates
> to a client what encodings of the payload sent with the request would
> have been accepted, and is aimed mainly at allowing clients to learn
> whether the server supports gzip compression. I agree with the authors
> that the addition of this information does not introduce any new
> security considerations. The information retrieved must be considered
> only a "hint" because the acceptable encodings can change at any time
> without notice, so the values returned are not a fully reliable
> indicator of what encodings will be acceptable on a subsequent request.
> There are some challenges associated with this method of delivering a
> configuration hint. As the document notes, the acceptable encodings
> might not be global to a server, but rather might vary for different
> resources on the same server, or even with different request methods for
> the same resource. In practice, clients are likely to guess the
> encodings supported according to responses it has received for other
> resources and methods on the same server. If the client guesses wrong,

I disagree that this is likely.

> it might end up wasting bandwidth by sending some large payload
> uncompressed when it could have been compressed or - worse - compressed
> and subsequently uncompressed when the initial request is rejected. One
> way to avoid this possibility that might be worthwhile if the payload
> were large enough would be to first make a request with some "known bad"
> encoding specified and an empty body. When the server rejected the
> request based on the bad encoding, it would specify what encodings were
> acceptable. If would be architecturally cleaner is there were some

That would be one additional round trip with an unclear outcome on 
broken servers. If the additional round trip is acceptable, using 
OPTIONS might make more sense.

> reserved encoding name that could be guaranteed never to be valid,
> though in practice clients could choose an encoding name like
> UNSUPPORTED or INVALID and be pretty confident no one would ever
> standardize that as an encoding name. While this specification
> recommends that the Accept-Encoding header only be returned on successes
> and on failures where the problem was an invalid encoding, clients can
> never count on that behavior because implementations that don't
> implement this specification will never return that header even if it is
> a problem with the encoding. --Charlie

That is true, but I'm not sure what to make out of it. Do you have a 
specific text change in mind?

Best regards, Julian

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I've been assigned at the secdir reviewer for
draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05.

This document appears ready for publication.

This document describes a framework and requirements for the GMPLS
control plane for flexible grid DWDM optical transport networks.
The basic change is that rather than having a fixed grid of frequencies,
the frequency and slot widthof each media channel are parameters of the
control plane.


I read through section 1, 2, good chunks of section3, 4 and 7.

The authors claim in section 7 that the security implications are the
same between a flexible grid network and a fixed grip netwerk.

This seems to generally be true.
I think that the flexible grid network introduces new ways that attacks
can result.  As an example, the control plane might be able to loosen
restrictions on a filter so that an attacker was able to see more than
they should.  (my physics is entirely inadequate to the task of figuring
out whether this is interesting or would for example just create a DOS)
It might be harder to express this particular misconfiguration/attack in
a fixed network.
However it seems that the general issue is as the authors claim present
in the fixed grid network.

Which is to say, that I don't think the security is identical, but I
agree with the authors that the security considerations seem
substantially similar.
I don't see value for changes in the text in this document.

I did not read the cited references and confirm that the described
security considerations in those documents are adequate.

Thanks for a well-written document.

