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Be ye not afraid...

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Version reviewed: draft-ietf-aqm-pie-06 - PIE: A Lightweight Control Scheme
To Address the
Bufferbloat Problem

Summary:
LGTM, Security AD attention not required.

Details:
No major issues, some nits. Feel free to integrate or ignore.

Notes:
>5 authors. Many of the authors are experienced, so they probably already
know the RFC Ed might make sad face at you.

Comments in [O]riginal, [P]roposed, [R]eason.


Abstract

Bufferbloat is a phenomenon where excess buffers in the network cause
[O] phenomenon where excess
[P] phenomenon in which excess
[R] grammar
high latency and jitter. As more and more interactive applications

[SNIP]

There is a pressing need to design
intelligent queue management schemes that can control latency and
jitter; and hence provide desirable quality of service to users.
[O] jitter; and hence
[P] jitter, and hence
[R] grammar

[SNIP]
The design does not
require per-packet timestamp, so it incurs very small overhead and is
[O] require per-packet timestamp,
[P] require per-packet timestamps,
[R] grammar
[O] incurs very small overhead
[P] incurs very little overhead
[R] word choice



1. Introduction

The explosion of smart phones, tablets and video traffic in the
Internet brings about a unique set of challenges for congestion
control. To avoid packet drops, many service providers or data center
operators require vendors to put in as much buffer as possible. With
rapid decrease in memory chip prices, these requests are easily
[O] With rapid decrease in memory chip price,
[P] Because of the rapid decrease in memory chip prices,
accommodated to keep customers happy. While this solution succeeds in
assuring low packet loss and high TCP throughput, it suffers from a
major downside. The TCP protocol continuously increases its sending
rate and causes network buffers to fill up. TCP cuts its rate only
when it receives a packet drop or mark that is interpreted as a
congestion signal. However, drops and marks usually occur when
network buffers are full or almost full. As a result, excess buffers,
initially designed to avoid packet drops, would lead to highly
elevated queueing latency and jitter. It is a delicate balancing act
to design a queue management scheme that not only allows short-term
burst to smoothly pass, but also controls the average latency in the
presence of long-running greedy flows.
[O] It is a delicate balancing act to design a queue management scheme that
not only allows short-term burst to smoothly pass, but also controls the
average latency in the presence of long-running greedy flows.
[P] Designing a queue management scheme that allows short-term bursts to
pass smoothly as well as controlling the average latency in the presence of
long-running greedy flows is a delicate balancing act.
[R] readability

[SNIP]

New algorithms are beginning to emerge to control queueing latency
directly to address the bufferbloat problem [CoDel]. Along these
lines, PIE also aims to keep the benefits of RED: such as easy
[O] the benefits of RED: such as easy
[P] the benefits of RED, including easy
[R] readability and grammar
implementation and scalability to high speeds. Similar to RED, PIE
randomly drops an incoming packet at the onset of the congestion. The
congestion detection, however, is based on the queueing latency
instead of the queue length like RED.

[SNIP]

In October 2013, CableLabs' DOCSIS 3.1 specification [DOCSIS_3.1]
mandated that cable modems implement a specific variant of the PIE
design as the active queue management algorithm. In addition to cable
specific improvements, the PIE design in DOCSIS 3.1 [DOCSIS-PIE] has
improved the original design in several areas, including de-
randomization of coin tosses and enhanced burst protection.

This draft separates the PIE design into the basic elements that are
MUST to be implemented and optional SHOULD/MAY enhancement elements.
[O] that are MUST to be implemented
[R] This is awkward, but maybe should be left as is? Or delete "are"?



4. The Basic PIE Scheme

As illustrated in Fig. 1, PIE conceptually comprises three simple MUST
[O] PIE conceptually comprises three simple
[P] PIE is comprised of three simple
[R] I think this is what is meant -- PIE is made of three MUST components,
not PIE makes those three components?

components: a) random dropping at enqueueing; b) periodic drop
probability update; c) latency calculation.

[SNIP]


5.2 Departure Rate Estimation

One way to calculate latency is to obtain the departure rate. The
draining rate of a queue in the network often varies either because
other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity fluctuates.
[O] because other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity
fluctuates.
[P] because other queues are sharing the link or because the link capacity
fluctuates.
[R] clarity



9. Security Considerations

This document describes an active queue management algorithm based
on implementations in Cisco products. This algorithm introduces no
specific security exposures.


10. IANA Considerations

There are no actions for IANA.


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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div><br></div><div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);fon=
t-size:13px">Be</span><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">=
=C2=A0</span><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">ye</span><s=
pan style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">=C2=A0</span><span style=
=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">not</span><span style=3D"color:rgb(=
33,33,33);font-size:13px">=C2=A0afraid...</span><br style=3D"color:rgb(33,3=
3,33);font-size:13px"><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><b=
r></span></div><div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">I ha=
ve reviewed this document as part of the security directorate&#39;s</span><=
br style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><span style=3D"color:rgb(33=
,33,33);font-size:13px">ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being p=
rocessed by the</span><br style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><spa=
n style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">IESG.=C2=A0 These comments w=
ere written primarily for the benefit of the</span><br style=3D"color:rgb(3=
3,33,33);font-size:13px"><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"=
>security area directors.=C2=A0 Document editors and WG chairs should treat=
</span><br style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><span style=3D"colo=
r:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">these comments just like any other last cal=
l comments.</span><br style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"></div><d=
iv><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><br></span></div><div=
><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">Version reviewed:=C2=A0=
</span><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">draft-ietf-aqm-pie-06</span><span st=
yle=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px;line-height:1.5">=C2=A0-=C2=A0</s=
pan><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">PIE: A Lightweight Control Scheme To Ad=
dress the</span></div><div>Bufferbloat Problem</div><div><br style=3D"color=
:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size=
:13px">Summary:</span><br style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><spa=
n style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">LGTM, Security AD attention=
=C2=A0</span><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">not</span><=
span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">=C2=A0required.</span><br=
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or:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><br></span></div><div><span style=3D"color=
:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">Details:</span></div><div><span style=3D"col=
or:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">No major issues, some nits. Feel free to i=
ntegrate or ignore.</span></div><div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);fon=
t-size:13px"><br></span></div><div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-=
size:13px">Notes:=C2=A0</span></div><div><font color=3D"#212121">&gt;5 auth=
ors. Many of the authors are=C2=A0experienced, so they probably already kno=
w the RFC Ed might make sad face at you.</font></div><div><font color=3D"#2=
12121"><br></font></div><div>Comments in [O]riginal, [P]roposed, [R]eason.<=
/div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Abstract</div><div><br></div><div>B=
ufferbloat is a phenomenon where excess buffers in the network cause</div><=
div>[O] phenomenon where excess</div><div>[P] phenomenon in which excess</d=
iv><div>[R] grammar</div><div>high latency and jitter. As more and more int=
eractive applications</div><div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">[SN=
IP]=C2=A0<br></div><div><span style=3D"line-height:1.5"><br></span></div><d=
iv><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">There is a pressing need to design</span=
><br></div><div>intelligent queue management schemes that can control laten=
cy and</div><div>jitter; and hence provide desirable quality of service to =
users.</div><div>[O] jitter; and hence</div><div>[P] jitter, and hence</div=
><div>[R] grammar</div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><div><span s=
tyle=3D"line-height:1.5">[SNIP]=C2=A0</span></div><div><span style=3D"line-=
height:1.5">The design does not</span><br></div><div>require per-packet tim=
estamp, so it incurs very small overhead and is</div><div>[O] require per-p=
acket timestamp,</div><div>[P] require per-packet timestamps,</div><div>[R]=
 grammar</div><div>[O] incurs very small overhead</div><div>[P] incurs very=
 little overhead</div><div>[R] word choice</div><div><br></div><div><br></d=
iv><div><br></div><div>1. Introduction</div><div><br></div><div>The explosi=
on of smart phones, tablets and video traffic in the</div><div>Internet bri=
ngs about a unique set of challenges for congestion</div><div>control. To a=
void packet drops, many service providers or data center</div><div>operator=
s require vendors to put in as much buffer as possible. With</div><div>rapi=
d decrease in memory chip prices, these requests are easily</div><div>[O] W=
ith rapid decrease in memory chip price,</div><div>[P] Because of the rapid=
 decrease in memory chip prices,</div><div>accommodated to keep customers h=
appy. While this solution succeeds in</div><div>assuring low packet loss an=
d high TCP throughput, it suffers from a</div><div>major downside. The TCP =
protocol continuously increases its sending</div><div>rate and causes netwo=
rk buffers to fill up. TCP cuts its rate only</div><div>when it receives a =
packet drop or mark that is interpreted as a</div><div>congestion signal. H=
owever, drops and marks usually occur when</div><div>network buffers are fu=
ll or almost full. As a result, excess buffers,</div><div>initially designe=
d to avoid packet drops, would lead to highly</div><div>elevated queueing l=
atency and jitter. It is a delicate balancing act</div><div>to design a que=
ue management scheme that not only allows short-term</div><div>burst to smo=
othly pass, but also controls the average latency in the</div><div>presence=
 of long-running greedy flows.</div><div>[O] It is a delicate balancing act=
 to design a queue management scheme that not only allows short-term burst =
to smoothly pass, but also controls the average latency in the presence of =
long-running greedy flows.</div><div>[P] Designing a queue management schem=
e that allows short-term bursts to pass smoothly as well as controlling the=
 average latency in the presence of long-running greedy flows is a delicate=
 balancing act.</div><div>[R] readability</div><div><br class=3D"Apple-inte=
rchange-newline">[SNIP]=C2=A0<br></div><div><br></div><div>New algorithms a=
re beginning to emerge to control queueing latency</div><div>directly to ad=
dress the bufferbloat problem [CoDel]. Along these</div><div>lines, PIE als=
o aims to keep the benefits of RED: such as easy</div><div>[O] the benefits=
 of RED: such as easy</div><div>[P] the benefits of RED, including easy</di=
v><div>[R] readability and grammar</div><div>implementation and scalability=
 to high speeds. Similar to RED, PIE</div><div>randomly drops an incoming p=
acket at the onset of the congestion. The</div><div>congestion detection, h=
owever, is based on the queueing latency</div><div>instead of the queue len=
gth like RED.=C2=A0</div><div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">[SNIP=
]=C2=A0<br></div><div><br></div><div>In October 2013, CableLabs&#39; DOCSIS=
 3.1 specification [DOCSIS_3.1]</div><div>mandated that cable modems implem=
ent a specific variant of the PIE</div><div>design as the active queue mana=
gement algorithm. In addition to cable</div><div>specific improvements, the=
 PIE design in DOCSIS 3.1 [DOCSIS-PIE] has</div><div>improved the original =
design in several areas, including de-</div><div>randomization of coin toss=
es and enhanced burst protection.</div><div><br></div><div>This draft separ=
ates the PIE design into the basic elements that are</div><div>MUST to be i=
mplemented and optional SHOULD/MAY enhancement elements.</div><div>[O] that=
 are MUST to be implemented</div><div>[R] This is awkward, but maybe should=
 be left as is? Or delete &quot;are&quot;?</div><div><br></div><div><br></d=
iv><div><br></div><div>4. The Basic PIE Scheme</div><div><br></div><div>As =
illustrated in Fig. 1, PIE conceptually comprises three simple MUST</div><d=
iv>[O] PIE conceptually comprises three simple</div><div>[P] PIE is compris=
ed of three simple</div><div>[R] I think this is what is meant -- PIE is ma=
de of three MUST components, not PIE makes those three components?</div><di=
v><br></div><div>components: a) random dropping at enqueueing; b) periodic =
drop</div><div>probability update; c) latency calculation.=C2=A0</div><br c=
lass=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">[SNIP]=C2=A0<div><br></div><div><br></di=
v><div>5.2 Departure Rate Estimation</div><div><br></div><div>One way to ca=
lculate latency is to obtain the departure rate. The</div><div>draining rat=
e of a queue in the network often varies either because</div><div>other que=
ues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity fluctuates.</div><div>[=
O] because other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity flu=
ctuates.</div><div>[P] because other queues are sharing the link or because=
 the link capacity fluctuates.</div><div>[R] clarity</div><div><br></div><d=
iv><br></div><div><br></div><div>9. Security Considerations</div><div><br><=
/div><div>This document describes an active queue management algorithm base=
d</div><div>on implementations in Cisco products. This algorithm introduces=
 no</div><div>specific security exposures.</div><div><br></div><div><br></d=
iv><div>10. IANA Considerations</div><div><br></div><div>There are no actio=
ns for IANA.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>-- END --</div><div><b=
r></div></div>

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
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security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready

The current revision of this document adequately addresses the comments
I made during a prior review.


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with nits

The security considerations section of this document seems substantial.
I approve of including a treatment of the lack of end-to-end security in
the protocol.  This is a topic to which authors of other documents
should pay more attention.

Editorial:

Page headers say "DOIC" instead of something like "DRMP"; is this
intentional?  Section 11.3 title "End-to End-Security Issues" should
probably be "End-to-End Security Issues".


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft specifies a version of Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) that
allows for better efficiencies in provisioning and path monitoring of network
node infrastructure.

The security considerations section does exist and asserts that the security
considerations that pertains to the base BFD protocol, RFC 5880, also applies
to this protocol.  The section continues with guidance on authenticating data,
replay, and DoS avoidance, specific to this protocol.  I agree with most of the
recommendations outlined and assertions presented in this section.  5880 is
forthcoming with the various vulnerabilities/limitations of the base protocol.
However, the draft does not cover the case where an attacker impersonates the
SBFDInitiator, but does cover the SBFDReflector scenario.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

s/Once above setup/Once the above setup/
s/it can quickly/can quickly/
s/and IS-IS will advertises/and IS-IS advertises/
s/then response S-BFD/then a response S-BFD/
s/allocated a same/allocated the same/
s/Remainder of this/The remainder of this/
s/for above suggestions/for the suggestions above/
s/that discriminator/that the discriminator/
s/for a same/for the same/
s/is to have following/has the following/
... I stopped after this.  Please have someone review the rest of the draft for
grammar.  It will be hard to read w/o these updates.

Shawn.
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Hi Donald,

2016-04-27, Donald Eastlake:
>
> The feature specified in this document is aimed at limiting one type 
> of denial of service, or at least at interference to some users by 
> others: denial or interference due to excessive control plane traffic 
> due to a high rate of multicast group membership change. Still, it 
> makes me a bit queasy that the document has not one word, even by 
> reference, about security for the setting or changing of the 
> parameters used at a node in the damping algorithm.

The document does not introduce a new way of controlling parameters on a 
router; so in this regard it does not introduces a new security issue.
But of course, I agree letting an attacker control configuration can 
lead to much havoc ; again, nothing specific to these specs.

> I suppose it is reasonable that it doesn't talk about how any of the 
> control messages involved are protected or authenticated since the 
> document is just about suppressing such messages...

Yes, precisely.


> The Security Considerations section has a reasonable discussion of how 
> and to what extent the mechanisms specified provide the services claimed.
>
> Page 15, Section 9 (Security Considerations), 1st paragraph starting 
> on this page: There are a number of things wrong with the following 
> sentence:
>
>            Note well that the two
>     mechanism may interact: state for which Prune has been requested may
>     still remain taken into account for some time if damping has been
>     triggered and hence result in otherwise acceptable new state from
>     being successfully created.
> I would guess it should be "result in preventing otherwise" or should 
> end with "state not being successfully created". Here is a suggested 
> replacement:
>
> The two mechanisms may interact as follows: if damping has
> been triggered, state for which Prune has been requested may remain
> and still be taken into account for some timeresulting in an
> otherwise acceptable new state notbeing created.

Your replacement text is much better, and will be incorporated in next 
revision.
Thanks.


> *Editorial:*
>
> This document is very heavy with acronymic jargon with no expansion or 
> definition in this document. However, most of it is defined in other 
> RFCs that are referenced.
>
> Although I am willing to accept that it is just a matter of style, 
> this document has lots of extra words that add nothing but verbosity. 
> Things that could be completely dropped with no loss, like starting a 
> sentence with "Additionally, it is worth nothing that ...". If it 
> wasn't worth noting, it presumably wouldn't be in the document.

Your style suggestions are appreciated.
In some cases, I'd keep the original formulation (see below), but I'd 
take your suggestions in others.

>
> Page 4, Section 3, 3rd paragraph: "...this technique will allow to 
> meet the goals..." -> "...this technique will meet the goals..."
>

Ok.


> Page 12, Section 7.2: "More specifically it is RECOMMENDED to 
> complement the existing ... (e.g. MRIB states): ..." -> "Complementing 
> the existing ... (e.g. MRIB states) is RECOMMENDED: ..."
>

Done.


> Page 13, Section 7.3, 2nd paragraph: What does "dimentioning" mean?

Corrected already based on OPS review.  That should be 'dimensioning'.

> Also "...state churn to go beyond what..." -> "...state churn going 
> beyond what..."

Ok.


>
> Page 14, Section 9, 3rd paragraph: The word "shall" is used. While not 
> capitalized, this word sounds quite mandatory to me but it is not used 
> in a mandatory requirement context... I suggest "shall rely upon" -> 
> "relies on".
>

Ok.

> Page 15, near the top: "should rely upon already" -> "should use already"

Ok.


> Finally, while I understand that others have a different opinion, I 
> find it objectionable that not a single first page author is willing 
> to list a telephone number of any sort in the Authors' Addresses 
> section. To my mind, this sort of corner cutting does not speak well 
> for the document.

I'm honestly surprised that someone finds these phone numbers in IETF 
specs !

If someone wants to contacts authors of a spec, he's much more likely to 
succeed with email, not only because it can talk to all of them at the 
same time.
I have a reasonable filter on my email for spam/commercial 
sollicitations, but not on my phone lines; this is a strong obstacle to 
providing phone numbers in the wild.
Emails can also be slightly more stable than phone numbers.
Last, if voice can end up being useful for some exchange, I think it is 
likely that time will have to be coordinated in advance via email -- the 
actual phone number to use can be provided at this time, and may end up 
being the more convenient phone number among a few possible ones, a 
confcall bridge or a login on video chat system...

So we aren't "cutting corners".
I think it simply reflects the reality that this is an obsolete practice.
In fact, I would suggest removing the postal address as well.

Thanks for your comments,

-Thomas


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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Hi Donald,<br>
      <br>
      2016-04-27, Donald Eastlake:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr"><br>
        <div>The feature specified in this document is aimed at limiting
          one type of denial of service, or at least at interference to
          some users by others: denial or interference due to excessive
          control plane traffic due to a high rate of multicast group
          membership change. Still, it makes me a bit queasy that the
          document has not one word, even by reference, about security
          for the setting or changing of the parameters used at a node
          in the damping algorithm. </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    The document does not introduce a new way of controlling parameters
    on a router; so in this regard it does not introduces a new security
    issue.<br>
    But of course, I agree letting an attacker control configuration can
    lead to much havoc ; again, nothing specific to these specs.<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>I suppose it is reasonable that it doesn't talk about how
          any of the control messages involved are protected or
          authenticated since the document is just about suppressing
          such messages...</div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Yes, precisely.<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>The Security Considerations section has a reasonable
          discussion of how and to what extent the mechanisms specified
          provide the services claimed.</div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr"><br>
        <div>
          <div>Page 15, Section 9 (Security Considerations), 1st
            paragraph starting on this page: There are a number of
            things wrong with the following sentence:</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>
            <pre class="" style="font-size:13.3333px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)">          Note well that the two
   mechanism may interact: state for which Prune has been requested may
   still remain taken into account for some time if damping has been
   triggered and hence result in otherwise acceptable new state from
   being successfully created.</pre>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>
            <pre class="" style="font-size:13.3333px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)">
</pre>
          </div>
          <div>I would guess it should be "result in preventing
            otherwise" or should end with "state not being successfully
            created". Here is a suggested replacement:</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>
            <pre class="" style="font-size:13.3333px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><font face="monospace, monospace">          The two mechanisms may interact as follows: i</font><span style="font-size:13.3333px;font-family:monospace,monospace">f damping has</span></pre>
            <pre class="" style="font-size:13.3333px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="font-size:13.3333px;font-family:monospace,monospace">   been triggered, </span><span style="font-family:monospace,monospace;font-size:13.3333px">state for which </span><span style="font-family:monospace,monospace;font-size:13.3333px">Prune has been requested may remain</span></pre>
            <pre class="" style="font-size:13.3333px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><span style="font-family:monospace,monospace;font-size:13.3333px">   and still be taken into account </span><font style="font-size:13.3333px" face="monospace, monospace">for some time</font><span style="font-size:13.3333px;font-family:monospace,monospace"> resulting in an</span></pre>
            <pre class="" style="font-size:13.3333px;margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"><font face="monospace, monospace">   otherwise acceptable new state not</font><span style="font-family:monospace,monospace;font-size:13.3333px"> being created.</span></pre>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Your replacement text is much better, and will be incorporated in
    next revision.<br>
    Thanks.<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr"><b>Editorial:</b>
        <div>
          <div><br class="">
            This document is very heavy with acronymic jargon with no
            expansion or definition in this document. However, most of
            it is defined in other RFCs that are referenced.</div>
        </div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>Although I am willing to accept that it is just a matter of
          style, this document has lots of extra words that add nothing
          but verbosity. Things that could be completely dropped with no
          loss, like starting a sentence with "Additionally, it is worth
          nothing that ...". If it wasn't worth noting, it presumably
          wouldn't be in the document.</div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Your style suggestions are appreciated. <br>
    In some cases, I'd keep the original formulation (see below), but
    I'd take your suggestions in others.<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>Page 4, Section 3, 3rd paragraph: "...this technique will
          allow to meet the goals..." -&gt; "...this technique will meet
          the goals..."</div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Ok.<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>Page 12, Section 7.2: "More specifically it is RECOMMENDED
          to complement the existing ... (e.g. MRIB states): ..." -&gt;
          "Complementing the existing ... (e.g. MRIB states) is
          RECOMMENDED: ..."</div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Done.<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>Page 13, Section 7.3, 2nd paragraph: What does
          "dimentioning" mean? </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Corrected already based on OPS review.  That should be
    'dimensioning'.<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>Also "...state churn to go beyond what..." -&gt; "...state
          churn going beyond what..."</div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Ok.<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>Page 14, Section 9, 3rd paragraph: The word "shall" is
          used. While not capitalized, this word sounds quite mandatory
          to me but it is not used in a mandatory requirement context...
          I suggest "shall rely upon" -&gt; "relies on".</div>
        <div><br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Ok.<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>Page 15, near the top: "should rely upon already" -&gt;
          "should use already"<br>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Ok.<br>
    <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAF4+nEGuRSm0zQCj44TEAu3h7KbbXj+MiOQqgJ7c4sHMKHooLw@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>Finally, while I understand that others have a different
          opinion, I find it objectionable that not a single first page
          author is willing to list a telephone number of any sort in
          the Authors' Addresses section. To my mind, this sort of
          corner cutting does not speak well for the document.</div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    I'm honestly surprised that someone finds these phone numbers in
    IETF specs !<br>
    <br>
    If someone wants to contacts authors of a spec, he's much more
    likely to succeed with email, not only because it can talk to all of
    them at the same time.<br>
    I have a reasonable filter on my email for spam/commercial
    sollicitations, but not on my phone lines; this is a strong obstacle
    to providing phone numbers in the wild.<br>
    Emails can also be slightly more stable than phone numbers. <br>
    Last, if voice can end up being useful for some exchange, I think it
    is likely that time will have to be coordinated in advance via email
    -- the actual phone number to use can be provided at this time, and
    may end up being the more convenient phone number among a few
    possible ones, a confcall bridge or a login on video chat system...<br>
    <br>
    So we aren't "cutting corners".<br>
    I think it simply reflects the reality that this is an obsolete
    practice.<br>
    In fact, I would suggest removing the postal address as well.<br>
    <br>
    Thanks for your comments,<br>
    <br>
    -Thomas<br>
    <br>
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Thanks Shawn for taking the time to read and review, and catching all =
those Editorials as part of the SecDir Review.

All fixed, =97 I am sure the RFC Editor will fix all the remaining ones, =
and the ones you might have missed.

=97 Carlos.

> On May 4, 2016, at 2:18 AM, Shawn M Emery <shawn.emery@oracle.com> =
wrote:
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the =
IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
> area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
> comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> This draft specifies a version of Bidirectional Forwarding Detection =
(BFD) that
> allows for better efficiencies in provisioning and path monitoring of =
network
> node infrastructure.
>=20
> The security considerations section does exist and asserts that the =
security
> considerations that pertains to the base BFD protocol, RFC 5880, also =
applies
> to this protocol.  The section continues with guidance on =
authenticating data,
> replay, and DoS avoidance, specific to this protocol.  I agree with =
most of the
> recommendations outlined and assertions presented in this section.  =
5880 is
> forthcoming with the various vulnerabilities/limitations of the base =
protocol.
> However, the draft does not cover the case where an attacker =
impersonates the
> SBFDInitiator, but does cover the SBFDReflector scenario.
>=20
> General comments:
>=20
> None.
>=20
> Editorial comments:
>=20
> s/Once above setup/Once the above setup/
> s/it can quickly/can quickly/
> s/and IS-IS will advertises/and IS-IS advertises/
> s/then response S-BFD/then a response S-BFD/
> s/allocated a same/allocated the same/
> s/Remainder of this/The remainder of this/
> s/for above suggestions/for the suggestions above/
> s/that discriminator/that the discriminator/
> s/for a same/for the same/
> s/is to have following/has the following/
> ... I stopped after this.  Please have someone review the rest of the =
draft for
> grammar.  It will be hard to read w/o these updates.
>=20
> Shawn.
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Hi.

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  =
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the =
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat  =
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Almost Ready

This document is an Informational discussion of packet routing within =
data centers. It describes existing practice with using layer-2 =
protocols such as STP or TRILL, hybrid setups, and layer-3 routing =
protocols, mostly IGPs. It finally recommends replacing these with EBGP =
and a Clos structure. The document is very clear and quite an =
interesting read.

The document does not deal with security questions such as what kind of =
damage a rogue node can do, and that is fine. That is not the subject of =
this document.=20

My one issue is with the Security Considerations section. Section 9 =
defers to the BGP RFCs (4271 and 4272) for the security considerations. =
This is a common pattern and it's usually fine, but in this case it is =
missing something. RFC 4271 requires the use of TCP-MD5 (RFC 2385) for =
authenticating the BGP connections between routers. RFC 4271 also =
mentions (but does not solve) the problem of key management. ISTM that =
in a large-scale and dynamically scalable data center, the problem of =
key management should be addressed. It might also be nice to use =
something less antiquated than TCP-MD5.=20

Now it's possible to decide that all elements within the data center are =
trusted and under the administrator's control, and that therefore no =
authentication is necessary as long as BGP is somehow blocked from =
outside the DC to internal nodes. But if these assumptions exist, I =
believe they should be stated.

Yoav=


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Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Rich Salz is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2016-05-05

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    T 2016-04-12 draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-ip-04
Chris Inacio           T 2016-04-26 draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04
Ben Laurie             T 2016-04-29 draft-ietf-idr-add-paths-13
Matthew Miller         T 2016-04-15 draft-ietf-sidr-as-migration-05
Eric Osterweil         T 2016-01-05 draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-03
Yaron Sheffer          T 2016-03-09 draft-ietf-v6ops-host-addr-availability-06
Dacheng Zhang          T 2016-03-28 draft-ietf-grow-route-leak-problem-definition-04


For telechat 2016-05-19

Sandy Murphy           T 2016-05-12 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-11
Magnus Nystrom         T 2016-05-09 draft-ietf-sidr-rpsl-sig-10


For telechat 2016-06-02

Vincent Roca           T 2016-05-16 draft-ietf-manet-rfc6779bis-05

Last calls and special requests:

Alan DeKok               2016-04-30 draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-08
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Hilarie Orman            2016-05-10 draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-04
Eric Osterweil           2016-05-26 draft-hardie-rfc6455-iana-clarification-
Radia Perlman            2016-05-12 draft-ietf-dime-e2e-sec-req-04
Hannes Tschofenig        2015-12-28 draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-07
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-network-time-security-13
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-cms-for-nts-message-06
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-04
Brian Weis             E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-07
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On 05/05/16 10:24 +0300, Yoav Nir wrote:

> The document does not deal with security questions such as what kind of damage a rogue node can do, and that is fine. That is not the subject of this document. 

Ack, and agreed.

> 
> My one issue is with the Security Considerations section. Section 9 defers to the BGP RFCs (4271 and 4272) for the security considerations. This is a common pattern and it's usually fine, but in this case it is missing something. RFC 4271 requires the use of TCP-MD5 (RFC 2385) for authenticating the BGP connections between routers. RFC 4271 also mentions (but does not solve) the problem of key management. ISTM that in a large-scale and dynamically scalable data center, the problem of key management should be addressed. It might also be nice to use something less antiquated than TCP-MD5. 

Since this a document describing what is possible to do in a real
design, I will try to avoid talking about something less antiquated than
TCP-MD5 since such things do not exist widely in implementations.  :-)

> 
> Now it's possible to decide that all elements within the data center are trusted and under the administrator's control, and that therefore no authentication is necessary as long as BGP is somehow blocked from outside the DC to internal nodes. But if these assumptions exist, I believe they should be stated.

Agreed and this is the reality of the matter.  We will update the
section to mention that MD5 may not be practical given key management
issues and that perimeter controls (ACLs) may be a more feasible option
in the design.  Expect a revision shortly (may wait a bit for AD/other
directorate feedback).

Thanks,

Jon


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Problem Statement and Architecture for Information Exchange
Between Interconnected Traffic Engineered Networks
draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-05.txt

Do not be alarmed.  I have reviewed this document as part of the
security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily
for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and
WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

The document includes the problem statement:
    A mechanism is required that allows TE-path computation in one
    domain to make informed choices about the TE-capabilities and exit
    points from the domain when signaling an end-to-end TE path that
    will extend across multiple domains. [TE is "traffic engineering".]

The document describes, in general terms, the need for exchanging
information about reachability between domains without revealing
the totality of routing information.  To this end, the document
anticipates the use of abstracted reachability information.  The
information suggests that a path might exist, but it is not a
guarantee of reachability.

The numerous examples definitely motivate the need for exchange of
"meta routing information" (my term), but my concern is about the
privacy of the information.  In fact, one reason for using abstracted
information may be to obscure the details because they are sensitive:

In section 3.2 "Confidentiality", 

   ... an operator of a domain may desire to keep confidential the
   details about its internal network topology and loading.  This
   information could be construed as commercially sensitive.

also 4.1.1

   While abstraction uses available TE information, it is subject to
   policy and management choices.  Thus, not all potential
   connectivity will be advertised to each client.  The filters may
   depend on commercial relationships, the risk of disclosing
   confidential information, and concerns about what use is made of
   the connectivity that is offered.

>From a security viewpoint, I wonder if the architecture should have
sensitivity labels for abstracted reachability information.  Although
one domain may be willing to share some partly redacted reachability
information with another domain with which it has a limited trust
relationship, the first domain might want the second domain to
refrain from disclosing that information to other domains.  Perhaps
the first domain might offer two records with different abstraction
levels, and the most abstracted one would be "shareable" while the
lesser abstraction would be "private."

I found the notion of situational address interpretation
disconcerting.  In "4.5.  Addressing Considerations", we learn that
"one address may mean one thing in the client network, yet the same
address may have a different meaning in the abstraction layer network
or the server network" and "human operators may well become confused."
Should addresses have labels that define the domain of interpretation?

The notion of some kind of anticipatory information being generated
and dispersed to neighboring networks was confusing.  Section 4.3
"Considerations for Dynamic Abstraction" discusses "fluidity".  The
second sentence is an impenetrable run-on word sequence.  However, it
is followed by something that is asserted to be more significant ---
it is apparently "stability".  Some wordsmithing for clarification
would be helpful.

Nits
----
1.1.9.  Abstraction Layer Network
   ... networks and one or more client network (should be networks)

3.2, last sentence
"understanding that less information that is made available the more"
should be "that the less ..."

3.5, last sentence
 "Thus, while the data shared in reduced," should be "is reduced"

Hilarie


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes a mechanism for digitally signing Routing Policy
Specification Language (RPSL) objects. The digital signatures are intended
to ensure authenticity and integrity protection of such objects when they
are transferred to and from resource databases.

- The signature scheme is a little unusual in that the signature attribute
lists the names of the attributes that are part of the signature rather
than just including those attributes (and their values) as part of the
signature attribute itself; I assume this is due to a need to preserve
established RPSL object syntax but it doesn't seem required for this
application which essentially is a transport format. The cost here is, of
course, the need to duplicate the names of the signed attributes in the
signed RPSL object (once for the regular attribute value and once for the
value in the signature attribute).
- There is an expectation that relying parties fetch the signer's
certificate based on a URL in the signature attribute. This may be a
dangerous practice, since the URL needs to be contacted before the
signature can be validated. A malicious party may insert a URL that will
lead to an attack. I suggest this be noted in the Security Considerations
section with some suggested best practice, e.g., only https and careful
parsing of the retrieved resource.
- The Signature Method field - how are new algorithms identified? Is there
no need for protocol action / IANA action to register new algorithm for use
with this memo?
-- As for the canonicalization, this is an inherently complicated field. It
does not, for example, seem as if the memo describes how to canonicalize
multi-valued attributes. The ordering of such values may well be
implementation-dependent post object parsing and thus, the canonicalization
should cover how to order sets or sequences of values.
- The last paragraph of the Security Considerations brings up an important
point but provides no guidance to an implementer how to handle this case /
detect the situation. Preferably some advice should be given here.

Editorial / questions:

Section 1:
- "This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Language
(RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim that
the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot." Two
points: First part of sentence likely misses a "that." Secondly, what's
referred to with "this" database?
- "A maintainer of such signed database objects MUST possess a relevant
resource certificate, which shows him/her as the legitimate holder of an
Internet number resource." Why does a maintainer of objects need to possess
a resource certificate? I think the party generating signed database
objects need such a certificate, but not necessarily all maintainers?

Section 2:
- "When verifying the signature of an object, the verifier has to check
whether the signature itself is valid, and whether all the specified
attributes are referenced in the signature." What "specified" attributes?
- It would be very helpful with a full example, not just an outline as in
2.3.
- Section 2.4 talks about multiple signatures. I believe this is the only
place where this is done, and it is also confusing given that earlier text
stated that each attribute (and the signature is an attribute too), must be
present "at most once"?

Section 5:
- The certificate shouldn't be used for more than one verification - was
the intent to say that the private key associated with the public key
present in the certificate shouldn't be used to sign more than one RPSL
object? It seems difficult to state that a certificate can be used for
verification only once - multiple relying parties may verify it, for
example (note: I am not too familiar with RFC 6487 so may be missing
something here).

-- Magnus

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra">I have reviewed this document a=
s part of the security directorate&#39;s ongoing effort to review all IETF =
documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primaril=
y for the benefit of the<br>
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these =
comments just like any other last call comments.<br><br></div><div class=3D=
"gmail_extra">This document describes a mechanism for digitally signing Rou=
ting Policy Specification Language (RPSL) objects. The digital signatures a=
re intended to ensure authenticity and integrity protection of such objects=
 when they are transferred to and from resource databases.<br><br></div><di=
v class=3D"gmail_extra">- The signature scheme is a little unusual in that =
the signature attribute lists the names of the attributes that are part of =
the signature rather than just including those attributes (and their values=
) as part of the signature attribute itself; I assume this is due to a need=
 to preserve established RPSL object syntax but it doesn&#39;t seem require=
d for this application which essentially is a transport format. The cost he=
re is, of course, the need to duplicate the names of the signed attributes =
in the signed RPSL object (once for the regular attribute value and once fo=
r the value in the signature attribute).<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra=
">- There is an expectation that relying parties fetch the signer&#39;s cer=
tificate based on a URL in the signature attribute. This may be a dangerous=
 practice, since the URL needs to be contacted before the signature can be =
validated. A malicious party may insert a URL that will lead to an attack. =
I suggest this be noted in the Security Considerations section with some su=
ggested best practice, e.g., only https and careful parsing of the retrieve=
d resource.<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">- The Signature Method fiel=
d - how are new algorithms identified? Is there no need for protocol action=
 / IANA action to register new algorithm for use with this memo?<br></div><=
div class=3D"gmail_extra">-- As for the canonicalization, this is an inhere=
ntly complicated field. It does not, for example, seem as if the memo descr=
ibes how to canonicalize multi-valued attributes. The ordering of such valu=
es may well be implementation-dependent post object parsing and thus, the c=
anonicalization should cover how to order sets or sequences of values.<br><=
/div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">- The last paragraph of the Security Consid=
erations brings up an important point but provides no guidance to an implem=
enter how to handle this case / detect the situation. Preferably some advic=
e should be given here.<br><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">Editorial /=
 questions:<br><br>Section 1:<br>- &quot;This means when downloading a   Ro=
uting Policy Specification Language (RPSL) object stored in this   database=
, one can reasonably safely claim that the object is   authentic, but for a=
n imported object one cannot.&quot; Two points: First part of sentence like=
ly misses a &quot;that.&quot; Secondly, what&#39;s referred to with &quot;t=
his&quot; database?<br>- &quot;A maintainer   of such signed database objec=
ts MUST possess a relevant resource   certificate, which shows him/her as t=
he legitimate holder of an   Internet number resource.&quot; Why does a mai=
ntainer of objects need to possess a resource certificate? I think the part=
y generating signed database objects need such a certificate, but not neces=
sarily all maintainers?<br><br>Section 2:<br>- &quot;When verifying the sig=
nature of an object, the verifier has to check   whether the signature itse=
lf is valid, and whether all the specified   attributes are referenced in t=
he signature.&quot; What &quot;specified&quot; attributes?<br></div><div cl=
ass=3D"gmail_extra">- It would be very helpful with a full example, not jus=
t an outline as in 2.3.<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">- Section 2.4 t=
alks about multiple signatures. I believe this is the only place where this=
 is done, and it is also confusing given that earlier text stated that each=
 attribute (and the signature is an attribute too), must be present &quot;a=
t most once&quot;?<br><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">Section 5:<br></=
div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">- The certificate shouldn&#39;t be used for =
more than one verification - was the intent to say that the private key ass=
ociated with the public key present in the certificate shouldn&#39;t be use=
d to sign more than one RPSL object? It seems difficult to state that a cer=
tificate can be used for verification only once - multiple relying parties =
may verify it, for example (note: I am not too familiar with RFC 6487 so ma=
y be missing something here).<br><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div =
class=3D"gmail_signature">-- Magnus</div>
</div></div>

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Hilarie, thanks!

> In section 3.2 "Confidentiality",
> 
>    ... an operator of a domain may desire to keep confidential the
>    details about its internal network topology and loading.  This
>    information could be construed as commercially sensitive.
> 
> also 4.1.1
> 
>    While abstraction uses available TE information, it is subject to
>    policy and management choices.  Thus, not all potential
>    connectivity will be advertised to each client.  The filters may
>    depend on commercial relationships, the risk of disclosing
>    confidential information, and concerns about what use is made of
>    the connectivity that is offered.
> 
> >From a security viewpoint, I wonder if the architecture should have
> sensitivity labels for abstracted reachability information.  Although
> one domain may be willing to share some partly redacted reachability
> information with another domain with which it has a limited trust
> relationship, the first domain might want the second domain to
> refrain from disclosing that information to other domains.  Perhaps
> the first domain might offer two records with different abstraction
> levels, and the most abstracted one would be "shareable" while the
> lesser abstraction would be "private."

While I understand the idea you are suggesting, I wonder how well it works in a
commercial world. You are suggesting that Company A might share information with
Company B on the condition that that information is not passed on to Company C.
Now, that could certainly be agreed between  A and B, and the data could be
flagged accordingly, but A will have no way of knowing whether the information
has been shared with C. Practically, the only way A can control what is shared
with C is to take direct responsibility for that interaction.

But this goes further. If we assume that the default position is that B must not
share any information from A into C then we have exactly the same problem.

Thus (I suggest) the only safe way for A to behave is to assume that any and all
of the information it shares with any party may be subsequently shared with any
other party.

But part of the value of abstraction is that it helps to hide the details of
reality. That is, the information shared by A can have only sparse relationship
to the network it actually operates. No-one can tell whether the existence of an
abstract link from x to y with bandwidth Z means that there is exactly that
bandwidth available on a single physical link, or many multiples of that
bandwidth available on a collection of LSPs that could be set up some time in
the future. Conversely, the absence of an abstract link from x to y may mean
nothing more than "I don't fancy letting you do that today".

> I found the notion of situational address interpretation
> disconcerting.  In "4.5.  Addressing Considerations", we  learn that
> "one address may mean one thing in the client network, yet the same
> address may have a different meaning in the abstraction layer network
> or the server network" and "human operators may well become confused."
> Should addresses have labels that define the domain of interpretation?

They do! The context is provided by IGP instance, AS, area, or level.

This is business as usual. Address spaces are re-used. Operators (and your home)
use private address spaces that are used by devices in other networks.

And, if you tried to manage a single network consisting of public addresses, the
addresses of the operators' nodes and links, and the addresses of a number of
homes and enterprises, "human operators would become confused."

> The notion of some kind of anticipatory information being generated
> and dispersed to neighboring networks was confusing.  Section 4.3
> "Considerations for Dynamic Abstraction" discusses "fluidity".  The
> second sentence is an impenetrable run-on word sequence.  However, it
> is followed by something that is asserted to be more significant ---
> it is apparently "stability".  Some wordsmithing for clarification
> would be helpful.

OK. Thanks for identifying that porridge. I'll rework the text.

> Nits
> ----
> 1.1.9.  Abstraction Layer Network
>    ... networks and one or more client network (should be networks)

Ah. Interesting catch.
Actually should be

   between one or more server
   network and one or more client network

:-)

> 3.2, last sentence
> "understanding that less information that is made available the more"
> should be "that the less ..."

Ack

> 3.5, last sentence
>  "Thus, while the data shared in reduced," should be "is reduced"

Ack

Once again, thanks.

Adrian


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Hi,

Thanks for the changes. This resolves my technical and editorial comments.

I also have one response at the end below which is unlikely to be of
interest to most people.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 4:42 AM, Thomas Morin <thomas.morin@orange.com> wrote:
> Hi Donald,
>
> 2016-04-27, Donald Eastlake:
>
>
> The feature specified in this document is aimed at limiting one type of
> denial of service, or at least at interference to some users by others:
> denial or interference due to excessive control plane traffic due to a high
> rate of multicast group membership change. Still, it makes me a bit queasy
> that the document has not one word, even by reference, about security for
> the setting or changing of the parameters used at a node in the damping
> algorithm.
>
>
> The document does not introduce a new way of controlling parameters on a
> router; so in this regard it does not introduces a new security issue.
> But of course, I agree letting an attacker control configuration can lead to
> much havoc ; again, nothing specific to these specs.
>
> I suppose it is reasonable that it doesn't talk about how any of the control
> messages involved are protected or authenticated since the document is just
> about suppressing such messages...
>
>
> Yes, precisely.
>
>
> The Security Considerations section has a reasonable discussion of how and
> to what extent the mechanisms specified provide the services claimed.
>
>
> Page 15, Section 9 (Security Considerations), 1st paragraph starting on this
> page: There are a number of things wrong with the following sentence:
>
>           Note well that the two
>    mechanism may interact: state for which Prune has been requested may
>    still remain taken into account for some time if damping has been
>    triggered and hence result in otherwise acceptable new state from
>    being successfully created.
>
> I would guess it should be "result in preventing otherwise" or should end
> with "state not being successfully created". Here is a suggested
> replacement:
>
>           The two mechanisms may interact as follows: if damping has
>
>    been triggered, state for which Prune has been requested may remain
>
>    and still be taken into account for some time resulting in an
>
>    otherwise acceptable new state not being created.
>
>
> Your replacement text is much better, and will be incorporated in next
> revision.
> Thanks.
>
>
> Editorial:
>
> This document is very heavy with acronymic jargon with no expansion or
> definition in this document. However, most of it is defined in other RFCs
> that are referenced.
>
> Although I am willing to accept that it is just a matter of style, this
> document has lots of extra words that add nothing but verbosity. Things that
> could be completely dropped with no loss, like starting a sentence with
> "Additionally, it is worth nothing that ...". If it wasn't worth noting, it
> presumably wouldn't be in the document.
>
>
> Your style suggestions are appreciated.
> In some cases, I'd keep the original formulation (see below), but I'd take
> your suggestions in others.
>
>
> Page 4, Section 3, 3rd paragraph: "...this technique will allow to meet the
> goals..." -> "...this technique will meet the goals..."
>
>
> Ok.
>
>
> Page 12, Section 7.2: "More specifically it is RECOMMENDED to complement the
> existing ... (e.g. MRIB states): ..." -> "Complementing the existing ...
> (e.g. MRIB states) is RECOMMENDED: ..."
>
>
> Done.
>
>
> Page 13, Section 7.3, 2nd paragraph: What does "dimentioning" mean?
>
>
> Corrected already based on OPS review.  That should be 'dimensioning'.
>
> Also "...state churn to go beyond what..." -> "...state churn going beyond
> what..."
>
>
> Ok.
>
>
>
> Page 14, Section 9, 3rd paragraph: The word "shall" is used. While not
> capitalized, this word sounds quite mandatory to me but it is not used in a
> mandatory requirement context... I suggest "shall rely upon" -> "relies on".
>
>
> Ok.
>
> Page 15, near the top: "should rely upon already" -> "should use already"
>
>
> Ok.
>
>
> Finally, while I understand that others have a different opinion, I find it
> objectionable that not a single first page author is willing to list a
> telephone number of any sort in the Authors' Addresses section. To my mind,
> this sort of corner cutting does not speak well for the document.
>
>
> I'm honestly surprised that someone finds these phone numbers in IETF specs
> !

I am not going to engage in a conversation about this but I will respond once.

> If someone wants to contacts authors of a spec, he's much more likely to
> succeed with email, not only because it can talk to all of them at the same
> time.

I agree it is convenient to have email addresses if you with to
shotgun a query to all the authors. I have not suggested leaving out
email addresses.

> I have a reasonable filter on my email for spam/commercial sollicitations,
> but not on my phone lines; this is a strong obstacle to providing phone
> numbers in the wild.

Most IETF participants can easily list a main number for a sponsor
which is, in effect, filtered. In any case, experience show this is
not a problem.

> Emails can also be slightly more stable than phone numbers.

Any of the three types of pointers can, in some cases, be much more
stable than the other two. Direct pointers for an individual can
change asynchronously from those via a sponsor. Of the three types of
information, any one could, in a particular case change more rapidly
than the others. It is more robust to list all three.

> Last, if voice can end up being useful for some exchange, I think it is
> likely that time will have to be coordinated in advance via email -- the
> actual phone number to use can be provided at this time, and may end up
> being the more convenient phone number among a few possible ones, a confcall
> bridge or a login on video chat system...

You seem to keep falsely implying I asked for email addresses to be
left out. I didn't.

> So we aren't "cutting corners".
> I think it simply reflects the reality that this is an obsolete practice.
> In fact, I would suggest removing the postal address as well.

Sure you are. You are trying to get by with the minimal author address
information you can get away with. It's not hard to include a bit
more. So when I see this, I wonder what other corners have been cut.

But, not to worry, I'm pretty sure you will find your opinion on this
being backed up by the IAB and IESG.

> Thanks for your comments,
> -Thomas


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Hi Magnus,
    Thanks for the review and comments. Responses are in-line...

On 5/9/16 2:55 AM, Magnus Nystr=C3=B6m wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ong=
oing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat th=
ese
> comments just like any other last call comments.
>=20
> This document describes a mechanism for digitally signing Routing Polic=
y
> Specification Language (RPSL) objects. The digital signatures are inten=
ded
> to ensure authenticity and integrity protection of such objects when th=
ey
> are transferred to and from resource databases.
>=20
> - The signature scheme is a little unusual in that the signature attrib=
ute
> lists the names of the attributes that are part of the signature rather=

> than just including those attributes (and their values) as part of the
> signature attribute itself; I assume this is due to a need to preserve
> established RPSL object syntax but it doesn't seem required for this
> application which essentially is a transport format. The cost here is, =
of
> course, the need to duplicate the names of the signed attributes in the=

> signed RPSL object (once for the regular attribute value and once for t=
he
> value in the signature attribute).

As noted in Section 2, this approach is similar to the one taken by
DKIM. It is designed to allow backwards compatibility with systems that
have not been upgraded to recognize the new signature attribute.

> - There is an expectation that relying parties fetch the signer's
> certificate based on a URL in the signature attribute. This may be a
> dangerous practice, since the URL needs to be contacted before the
> signature can be validated. A malicious party may insert a URL that wil=
l
> lead to an attack. I suggest this be noted in the Security Consideratio=
ns
> section with some suggested best practice, e.g., only https and careful=

> parsing of the retrieved resource.

It is unclear to the authors what "careful parsing" means here and
HTTPS-only in the context of RPKI-hosted certificates creates other
complications that may exceed the benefits.

I would suggest that we add a pointer to Section 7 of RFC 6487 to the
Security Considerations section of this draft. That portion of 6487
describes the certificate validation methodology for these certificates.

> - The Signature Method field - how are new algorithms identified? Is th=
ere
> no need for protocol action / IANA action to register new algorithm for=
 use
> with this memo?

We don't think so. This approach follows the approach of RFC 4055.

> -- As for the canonicalization, this is an inherently complicated field=
=2E It
> does not, for example, seem as if the memo describes how to canonicaliz=
e
> multi-valued attributes. The ordering of such values may well be
> implementation-dependent post object parsing and thus, the canonicaliza=
tion
> should cover how to order sets or sequences of values.

In my experience, RPSL servers do not modify the order of sets or
sequences when importing/exporting objects. The necessary
canonicalization text for such objects is mentioned in point #5 of
section 3.1.

If you think it would help, we could add something along the lines of
"The ordering of multi-valued attributes in c14n must preserve the
original ordering in the object" to point #5 in 3.1.

> - The last paragraph of the Security Considerations brings up an import=
ant
> point but provides no guidance to an implementer how to handle this cas=
e /
> detect the situation. Preferably some advice should be given here.

An entity is free to sign whatever attributes it wants. So, it is up to
the consumer to decide what attributes he/she cares about. Given that we
can add a sentence to the Security Considerations section saying that
consumers of signed RPSL objects may validate signed resource attributes
if methods exist to do so.

>=20
> Editorial / questions:
>=20
> Section 1:
> - "This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Language
> (RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim =
that
> the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot." Two
> points: First part of sentence likely misses a "that." Secondly, what's=

> referred to with "this" database?

Would the following be more clear?

OLD:

This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Language
(RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim
that the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot.

NEW:

This means that when a Routing Policy Specification Language (RPSL)
object is downloaded from a database, the consumer can reasonably claim
that the object is authentic if it was locally created, but cannot make
the same claim for an object imported from a different database.

> - "A maintainer of such signed database objects MUST possess a relevant=

> resource certificate, which shows him/her as the legitimate holder of a=
n
> Internet number resource." Why does a maintainer of objects need to pos=
sess
> a resource certificate? I think the party generating signed database
> objects need such a certificate, but not necessarily all maintainers?

Agreed that "a maintainer" can be changed to "the creator".

>=20
> Section 2:
> - "When verifying the signature of an object, the verifier has to check=

> whether the signature itself is valid, and whether all the specified
> attributes are referenced in the signature." What "specified" attribute=
s?

The list of signed attributes is identified by the "a" field in the
signature. The attributes listed in "a" need to be in the object.

> - It would be very helpful with a full example, not just an outline as =
in
> 2.3.

I will try and generate one.

> - Section 2.4 talks about multiple signatures. I believe this is the on=
ly
> place where this is done, and it is also confusing given that earlier t=
ext
> stated that each attribute (and the signature is an attribute too), mus=
t be
> present "at most once"?

This will be applicable when text removed in an earlier version is
restored that allows for multiple signatures.

>=20
> Section 5:
> - The certificate shouldn't be used for more than one verification - wa=
s
> the intent to say that the private key associated with the public key
> present in the certificate shouldn't be used to sign more than one RPSL=

> object? It seems difficult to state that a certificate can be used for
> verification only once - multiple relying parties may verify it, for
> example (note: I am not too familiar with RFC 6487 so may be missing
> something here).

Correct. This should be signature generation.

Thanks for the feedback.

Regards,
Brian



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Charlie,

thanks for your comments.

Some nits:



Section 3 talks about determining whether a TLS server is "false start
> compatible". I believe any server that correctly implements TLS (i.e.,
> following the specification) would be false start compatible. That does not
> imply that all would be, and it would be useful to do some testing to see
> whether most implementations in fact are. Publishing this as an
> experimental RFC is likely to encourage such an effort.


I'm truly not sure about this. By the TLS specification, servers wouldn't
have to expect early handshake messages, so arguably server behavior in
their presence is left unspecified -- however, I'd certainly not be
surprised if all server implementations that aren't false start compatible
are indeed strictly broken (I see no good reasons for TLS servers to *not*
tolerate handshake messages that arrive early).

In any case, I think the concept of a TLS server being "false start
compatible" is useful, so don't think I'd want to make a change to the
document there.

Section 2 paragraph 1 says that TLS requires two full protocol rounds
> before the handshake is complete. While technically this is true, it
> overstates the benefit of this enhancement because TLS rides atop TCP which
> has its own protocol round before it starts carrying application payloads.
> So this enhancement reduces that TLS startup time from three round trips to
> two rather than the more dramatic two to one.


I don't really agree that draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-01 overstates the
benefit, it's just that the round-trip time added by TCP is mostly an
orthogonal issue: RFC7413 (TCP Fast Open) addresses it. I'll discuss that
point and mention that RFC in draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-02.

Bodo

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Charlie,</div><div><br></div><div>thanks for your com=
ments.</div><div><br></div><blockquote style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;bor=
der:none;padding:0px"><div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margi=
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><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border=
-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid;=
padding-left:1ex">Some nits:=C2=A0</blockquote><blockquote class=3D"gmail_q=
uote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-c=
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;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style=
:solid;padding-left:1ex">Section 3 talks about determining whether a TLS se=
rver is &quot;false start compatible&quot;. I believe any server that corre=
ctly implements TLS (i.e., following the specification) would be false star=
t compatible. That does not imply that all would be, and it would be useful=
 to do some testing to see whether most implementations in fact are. Publis=
hing this as an experimental RFC is likely to encourage such an effort.=C2=
=A0</blockquote><div><br></div><div>I&#39;m truly not sure about this. By t=
he TLS specification, servers wouldn&#39;t have to expect early handshake m=
essages, so arguably server behavior in their presence is left unspecified =
-- however, I&#39;d certainly not be surprised if all server implementation=
s that aren&#39;t false start compatible are indeed strictly broken (I see =
no good reasons for TLS servers to *not* tolerate handshake messages that a=
rrive early).</div><div><br></div><div>In any case, I think the concept of =
a TLS server being &quot;false start compatible&quot; is useful, so don&#39=
;t think I&#39;d want to make a change to the document there.</div><div><br=
></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;=
border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:=
solid;padding-left:1ex">Section 2 paragraph 1 says that TLS requires two fu=
ll protocol rounds before the handshake is complete. While technically this=
 is true, it overstates the benefit of this enhancement because TLS rides a=
top TCP which has its own protocol round before it starts carrying applicat=
ion payloads. So this enhancement reduces that TLS startup time from three =
round trips to two rather than the more dramatic two to one.</blockquote><d=
iv><br></div><div>I don&#39;t really agree that draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-0=
1 overstates the benefit, it&#39;s just that the round-trip time added by T=
CP is mostly an orthogonal issue: RFC7413 (TCP Fast Open) addresses it. I&#=
39;ll discuss that point and mention that RFC in draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-=
02.</div><div><br></div><div>Bodo</div><div><br></div><div><blockquote clas=
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Charlie,

thanks for your comments.

Some nits:



Section 3 talks about determining whether a TLS server is "false start
> compatible". I believe any server that correctly implements TLS (i.e.,
> following the specification) would be false start compatible. That does not
> imply that all would be, and it would be useful to do some testing to see
> whether most implementations in fact are. Publishing this as an
> experimental RFC is likely to encourage such an effort.


I'm truly not sure about this. By the TLS specification, servers wouldn't
have to expect early handshake messages, so arguably server behavior in
their presence is left unspecified -- however, I'd certainly not be
surprised if all server implementations that aren't false start compatible
are indeed strictly broken (I see no good reasons for TLS servers to *not*
tolerate handshake messages that arrive early).

In any case, I think the concept of a TLS server being "false start
compatible" is useful, so don't think I'd want to make a change to the
document there.

Section 2 paragraph 1 says that TLS requires two full protocol rounds
> before the handshake is complete. While technically this is true, it
> overstates the benefit of this enhancement because TLS rides atop TCP which
> has its own protocol round before it starts carrying application payloads.
> So this enhancement reduces that TLS startup time from three round trips to
> two rather than the more dramatic two to one.


I don't really agree that draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-01 overstates the
benefit, it's just that the round-trip time added by TCP is mostly an
orthogonal issue: RFC7413 (TCP Fast Open) addresses it. I'll discuss that
point and mention that RFC in draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-02.

Bodo


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 style=3D"font-size:12.8px">Charlie,</div><div style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><=
br></div><div style=3D"font-size:12.8px">thanks for your comments.</div><di=
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x;margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:none;padding:0px"><blockquote class=3D"gma=
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8px;margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(20=
4,204,204);border-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">Some nits:=C2=A0</bloc=
kquote><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"font-size:12.8px;margin:0=
px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);b=
order-left-style:solid;padding-left:1ex">=C2=A0</blockquote><blockquote cla=
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r-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid=
;padding-left:1ex">Section 3 talks about determining whether a TLS server i=
s &quot;false start compatible&quot;. I believe any server that correctly i=
mplements TLS (i.e., following the specification) would be false start comp=
atible. That does not imply that all would be, and it would be useful to do=
 some testing to see whether most implementations in fact are. Publishing t=
his as an experimental RFC is likely to encourage such an effort.=C2=A0</bl=
ockquote><div style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></div><div style=3D"font-size:=
12.8px">I&#39;m truly not sure about this. By the TLS specification, server=
s wouldn&#39;t have to expect early handshake messages, so arguably server =
behavior in their presence is left unspecified -- however, I&#39;d certainl=
y not be surprised if all server implementations that aren&#39;t false star=
t compatible are indeed strictly broken (I see no good reasons for TLS serv=
ers to *not* tolerate handshake messages that arrive early).</div><div styl=
e=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></div><div style=3D"font-size:12.8px">In any cas=
e, I think the concept of a TLS server being &quot;false start compatible&q=
uot; is useful, so don&#39;t think I&#39;d want to make a change to the doc=
ument there.</div><div style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></div><blockquote cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"font-size:12.8px;margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;borde=
r-left-width:1px;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-style:solid=
;padding-left:1ex">Section 2 paragraph 1 says that TLS requires two full pr=
otocol rounds before the handshake is complete. While technically this is t=
rue, it overstates the benefit of this enhancement because TLS rides atop T=
CP which has its own protocol round before it starts carrying application p=
ayloads. So this enhancement reduces that TLS startup time from three round=
 trips to two rather than the more dramatic two to one.</blockquote><div st=
yle=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></div><div style=3D"font-size:12.8px">I don&#3=
9;t really agree that draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-01 overstates the benefit, =
it&#39;s just that the round-trip time added by TCP is mostly an orthogonal=
 issue: RFC7413 (TCP Fast Open) addresses it. I&#39;ll discuss that point a=
nd mention that RFC in draft-ietf-tls-falsestart-02.</div><div style=3D"fon=
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For telechat 2016-05-19

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Sandy Murphy           T 2016-05-12 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-11


For telechat 2016-06-02

Eric Osterweil         T 2016-05-26 draft-hardie-rfc6455-iana-clarification-02
Vincent Roca           T 2016-05-16 draft-ietf-manet-rfc6779bis-05
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Last calls and special requests:

Alan DeKok               2016-04-30 draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-08
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Radia Perlman            2016-05-12 draft-ietf-dime-e2e-sec-req-04
Yaron Sheffer            2016-05-23 draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef       2016-05-24 draft-ietf-mmusic-msid-13
Hannes Tschofenig        2015-12-28 draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-07
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-network-time-security-13
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-cms-for-nts-message-06
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-04
Brian Weis             E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-07
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: *Ready*

This is a Standard Track document that defines an RTP media streams
grouping mechanism in SDP.

The Security Consideration section clearly describes the potential attacks
introduced by this new mechanism, and points out the general issue of SDP
modification by untrusted entities, and potential issue with the buffering
required by mechanism suggested by the draft.

Regards,
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Thanks Brian,

On Wed, May 11, 2016 at 6:33 AM, Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net>
wrote:

> Hi Magnus,
>     Thanks for the review and comments. Responses are in-line...
>
> On 5/9/16 2:55 AM, Magnus Nystr=C3=B6m wrote:
> > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing
> > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> > comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> > security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these
> > comments just like any other last call comments.
> >
> > This document describes a mechanism for digitally signing Routing Polic=
y
> > Specification Language (RPSL) objects. The digital signatures are
> intended
> > to ensure authenticity and integrity protection of such objects when th=
ey
> > are transferred to and from resource databases.
> >
> > - The signature scheme is a little unusual in that the signature
> attribute
> > lists the names of the attributes that are part of the signature rather
> > than just including those attributes (and their values) as part of the
> > signature attribute itself; I assume this is due to a need to preserve
> > established RPSL object syntax but it doesn't seem required for this
> > application which essentially is a transport format. The cost here is, =
of
> > course, the need to duplicate the names of the signed attributes in the
> > signed RPSL object (once for the regular attribute value and once for t=
he
> > value in the signature attribute).
>
> As noted in Section 2, this approach is similar to the one taken by
> DKIM. It is designed to allow backwards compatibility with systems that
> have not been upgraded to recognize the new signature attribute.
>
> > - There is an expectation that relying parties fetch the signer's
> > certificate based on a URL in the signature attribute. This may be a
> > dangerous practice, since the URL needs to be contacted before the
> > signature can be validated. A malicious party may insert a URL that wil=
l
> > lead to an attack. I suggest this be noted in the Security Consideratio=
ns
> > section with some suggested best practice, e.g., only https and careful
> > parsing of the retrieved resource.
>
> It is unclear to the authors what "careful parsing" means here and
> HTTPS-only in the context of RPKI-hosted certificates creates other
> complications that may exceed the benefits.
>

Well, it seems to me that the ability to get agents to contact an
unverified URL is a potential risk and I would recommend some discussion
around this in the Sec Cons section..

>
> I would suggest that we add a pointer to Section 7 of RFC 6487 to the
> Security Considerations section of this draft. That portion of 6487
> describes the certificate validation methodology for these certificates.
>
> > - The Signature Method field - how are new algorithms identified? Is
> there
> > no need for protocol action / IANA action to register new algorithm for
> use
> > with this memo?
>
> We don't think so. This approach follows the approach of RFC 4055.
>
> > -- As for the canonicalization, this is an inherently complicated field=
.
> It
> > does not, for example, seem as if the memo describes how to canonicaliz=
e
> > multi-valued attributes. The ordering of such values may well be
> > implementation-dependent post object parsing and thus, the
> canonicalization
> > should cover how to order sets or sequences of values.
>
> In my experience, RPSL servers do not modify the order of sets or
> sequences when importing/exporting objects. The necessary
> canonicalization text for such objects is mentioned in point #5 of
> section 3.1.
>
> If you think it would help, we could add something along the lines of
> "The ordering of multi-valued attributes in c14n must preserve the
> original ordering in the object" to point #5 in 3.1.
>
> I would suggest this, since in general canonicalization should allow to
first parse a received message and then later do verification with a
successful result without relying on implicit expectations on behavior.

> - The last paragraph of the Security Considerations brings up an importan=
t
> > point but provides no guidance to an implementer how to handle this cas=
e
> /
> > detect the situation. Preferably some advice should be given here.
>
> An entity is free to sign whatever attributes it wants. So, it is up to
> the consumer to decide what attributes he/she cares about. Given that we
> can add a sentence to the Security Considerations section saying that
> consumers of signed RPSL objects may validate signed resource attributes
> if methods exist to do so.
>
> Yes, that may be helpful.


> >
> > Editorial / questions:
> >
> > Section 1:
> > - "This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Language
> > (RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim
> that
> > the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot." Two
> > points: First part of sentence likely misses a "that." Secondly, what's
> > referred to with "this" database?
>
> Would the following be more clear?
>
> OLD:
>
> This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Language
> (RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim
> that the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot.
>
> NEW:
>
> This means that when a Routing Policy Specification Language (RPSL)
> object is downloaded from a database, the consumer can reasonably claim
> that the object is authentic if it was locally created, but cannot make
> the same claim for an object imported from a different database.
>

Much better, thanks.

>
> > - "A maintainer of such signed database objects MUST possess a relevant
> > resource certificate, which shows him/her as the legitimate holder of a=
n
> > Internet number resource." Why does a maintainer of objects need to
> possess
> > a resource certificate? I think the party generating signed database
> > objects need such a certificate, but not necessarily all maintainers?
>
> Agreed that "a maintainer" can be changed to "the creator".
>
> >
> > Section 2:
> > - "When verifying the signature of an object, the verifier has to check
> > whether the signature itself is valid, and whether all the specified
> > attributes are referenced in the signature." What "specified" attribute=
s?
>
> The list of signed attributes is identified by the "a" field in the
> signature. The attributes listed in "a" need to be in the object.
>

I would suggest "all the attributes specified in the "a' field".

>
> > - It would be very helpful with a full example, not just an outline as =
in
> > 2.3.
>
> I will try and generate one.
>
> > - Section 2.4 talks about multiple signatures. I believe this is the on=
ly
> > place where this is done, and it is also confusing given that earlier
> text
> > stated that each attribute (and the signature is an attribute too), mus=
t
> be
> > present "at most once"?
>
> This will be applicable when text removed in an earlier version is
> restored that allows for multiple signatures.
>

Is that intended to be restored before publication? If not, suggest
removing.

>
> >
> > Section 5:
> > - The certificate shouldn't be used for more than one verification - wa=
s
> > the intent to say that the private key associated with the public key
> > present in the certificate shouldn't be used to sign more than one RPSL
> > object? It seems difficult to state that a certificate can be used for
> > verification only once - multiple relying parties may verify it, for
> > example (note: I am not too familiar with RFC 6487 so may be missing
> > something here).
>
> Correct. This should be signature generation.
>
> Thanks for the feedback.
>
> Thanks


> Regards,
> Brian
>
>
>


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<div dir=3D"ltr">Thanks Brian,<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote">On Wed, May 11, 2016 at 6:33 AM, Brian Haberman <span dir=
=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:brian@innovationslab.net" target=3D"_blank">=
brian@innovationslab.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmai=
l_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left=
:1ex">Hi Magnus,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Thanks for the review and comments. Responses are in-line...<=
br>
<span class=3D""><br>
On 5/9/16 2:55 AM, Magnus Nystr=C3=B6m wrote:<br>
&gt; I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate&#39;=
s ongoing<br>
&gt; effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These=
<br>
&gt; comments were written primarily for the benefit of the<br>
&gt; security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat t=
hese<br>
&gt; comments just like any other last call comments.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; This document describes a mechanism for digitally signing Routing Poli=
cy<br>
&gt; Specification Language (RPSL) objects. The digital signatures are inte=
nded<br>
&gt; to ensure authenticity and integrity protection of such objects when t=
hey<br>
&gt; are transferred to and from resource databases.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; - The signature scheme is a little unusual in that the signature attri=
bute<br>
&gt; lists the names of the attributes that are part of the signature rathe=
r<br>
&gt; than just including those attributes (and their values) as part of the=
<br>
&gt; signature attribute itself; I assume this is due to a need to preserve=
<br>
&gt; established RPSL object syntax but it doesn&#39;t seem required for th=
is<br>
&gt; application which essentially is a transport format. The cost here is,=
 of<br>
&gt; course, the need to duplicate the names of the signed attributes in th=
e<br>
&gt; signed RPSL object (once for the regular attribute value and once for =
the<br>
&gt; value in the signature attribute).<br>
<br>
</span>As noted in Section 2, this approach is similar to the one taken by<=
br>
DKIM. It is designed to allow backwards compatibility with systems that<br>
have not been upgraded to recognize the new signature attribute.<br>
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt; - There is an expectation that relying parties fetch the signer&#39;s<=
br>
&gt; certificate based on a URL in the signature attribute. This may be a<b=
r>
&gt; dangerous practice, since the URL needs to be contacted before the<br>
&gt; signature can be validated. A malicious party may insert a URL that wi=
ll<br>
&gt; lead to an attack. I suggest this be noted in the Security Considerati=
ons<br>
&gt; section with some suggested best practice, e.g., only https and carefu=
l<br>
&gt; parsing of the retrieved resource.<br>
<br>
</span>It is unclear to the authors what &quot;careful parsing&quot; means =
here and<br>
HTTPS-only in the context of RPKI-hosted certificates creates other<br>
complications that may exceed the benefits.<br></blockquote><div><br></div>=
<div>Well, it seems to me that the ability to get agents to contact an unve=
rified URL is a potential risk and I would recommend some discussion around=
 this in the Sec Cons section.. <br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote"=
 style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<br>
I would suggest that we add a pointer to Section 7 of RFC 6487 to the<br>
Security Considerations section of this draft. That portion of 6487<br>
describes the certificate validation methodology for these certificates.<br=
>
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt; - The Signature Method field - how are new algorithms identified? Is t=
here<br>
&gt; no need for protocol action / IANA action to register new algorithm fo=
r use<br>
&gt; with this memo?<br>
<br>
</span>We don&#39;t think so. This approach follows the approach of RFC 405=
5.<br>
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt; -- As for the canonicalization, this is an inherently complicated fiel=
d. It<br>
&gt; does not, for example, seem as if the memo describes how to canonicali=
ze<br>
&gt; multi-valued attributes. The ordering of such values may well be<br>
&gt; implementation-dependent post object parsing and thus, the canonicaliz=
ation<br>
&gt; should cover how to order sets or sequences of values.<br>
<br>
</span>In my experience, RPSL servers do not modify the order of sets or<br=
>
sequences when importing/exporting objects. The necessary<br>
canonicalization text for such objects is mentioned in point #5 of<br>
section 3.1.<br>
<br>
If you think it would help, we could add something along the lines of<br>
&quot;The ordering of multi-valued attributes in c14n must preserve the<br>
original ordering in the object&quot; to point #5 in 3.1.<br>
<span class=3D""><br></span></blockquote><div>I would suggest this, since i=
n general canonicalization should allow to first parse a received message a=
nd then later do verification with a successful result without relying on i=
mplicit expectations on behavior.<br><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_q=
uote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1e=
x"><span class=3D"">
&gt; - The last paragraph of the Security Considerations brings up an impor=
tant<br>
&gt; point but provides no guidance to an implementer how to handle this ca=
se /<br>
&gt; detect the situation. Preferably some advice should be given here.<br>
<br>
</span>An entity is free to sign whatever attributes it wants. So, it is up=
 to<br>
the consumer to decide what attributes he/she cares about. Given that we<br=
>
can add a sentence to the Security Considerations section saying that<br>
consumers of signed RPSL objects may validate signed resource attributes<br=
>
if methods exist to do so.<br>
<span class=3D""><br></span></blockquote><div>Yes, that may be helpful.<br>=
=C2=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8e=
x;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span class=3D"">
&gt;<br>
&gt; Editorial / questions:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Section 1:<br>
&gt; - &quot;This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Lan=
guage<br>
&gt; (RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim=
 that<br>
&gt; the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot.&quot; =
Two<br>
&gt; points: First part of sentence likely misses a &quot;that.&quot; Secon=
dly, what&#39;s<br>
&gt; referred to with &quot;this&quot; database?<br>
<br>
</span>Would the following be more clear?<br>
<br>
OLD:<br>
<span class=3D""><br>
This means when downloading a Routing Policy Specification Language<br>
(RPSL) object stored in this database, one can reasonably safely claim<br>
that the object is authentic, but for an imported object one cannot.<br>
<br>
</span>NEW:<br>
<br>
This means that when a Routing Policy Specification Language (RPSL)<br>
object is downloaded from a database, the consumer can reasonably claim<br>
that the object is authentic if it was locally created, but cannot make<br>
the same claim for an object imported from a different database.<br></block=
quote><div><br></div><div>Much better, thanks. <br></div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padd=
ing-left:1ex">
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt; - &quot;A maintainer of such signed database objects MUST possess a re=
levant<br>
&gt; resource certificate, which shows him/her as the legitimate holder of =
an<br>
&gt; Internet number resource.&quot; Why does a maintainer of objects need =
to possess<br>
&gt; a resource certificate? I think the party generating signed database<b=
r>
&gt; objects need such a certificate, but not necessarily all maintainers?<=
br>
<br>
</span>Agreed that &quot;a maintainer&quot; can be changed to &quot;the cre=
ator&quot;.<br>
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Section 2:<br>
&gt; - &quot;When verifying the signature of an object, the verifier has to=
 check<br>
&gt; whether the signature itself is valid, and whether all the specified<b=
r>
&gt; attributes are referenced in the signature.&quot; What &quot;specified=
&quot; attributes?<br>
<br>
</span>The list of signed attributes is identified by the &quot;a&quot; fie=
ld in the<br>
signature. The attributes listed in &quot;a&quot; need to be in the object.=
<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I would suggest &quot;all the attribut=
es specified in the &quot;a&#39; field&quot;. <br></div><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padd=
ing-left:1ex">
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt; - It would be very helpful with a full example, not just an outline as=
 in<br>
&gt; 2.3.<br>
<br>
</span>I will try and generate one.<br>
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt; - Section 2.4 talks about multiple signatures. I believe this is the o=
nly<br>
&gt; place where this is done, and it is also confusing given that earlier =
text<br>
&gt; stated that each attribute (and the signature is an attribute too), mu=
st be<br>
&gt; present &quot;at most once&quot;?<br>
<br>
</span>This will be applicable when text removed in an earlier version is<b=
r>
restored that allows for multiple signatures.<br></blockquote><div><br></di=
v><div>Is that intended to be restored before publication? If not, suggest =
removing. <br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0=
 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Section 5:<br>
&gt; - The certificate shouldn&#39;t be used for more than one verification=
 - was<br>
&gt; the intent to say that the private key associated with the public key<=
br>
&gt; present in the certificate shouldn&#39;t be used to sign more than one=
 RPSL<br>
&gt; object? It seems difficult to state that a certificate can be used for=
<br>
&gt; verification only once - multiple relying parties may verify it, for<b=
r>
&gt; example (note: I am not too familiar with RFC 6487 so may be missing<b=
r>
&gt; something here).<br>
<br>
</span>Correct. This should be signature generation.<br>
<br>
Thanks for the feedback.<br>
<br></blockquote><div>Thanks<br>=C2=A0<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_=
quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1=
ex">
Regards,<br>
Brian<br>
<br>
<br>
</blockquote></div><br><br clear=3D"all"><br>-- <br><div class=3D"gmail_sig=
nature">-- Magnus</div>
</div></div>

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: *Ready*

This is a Standard Track document that defines an RTP media streams
grouping mechanism in SDP.

The Security Consideration section clearly describes the potential attacks
introduced by this new mechanism, and points out the general issue of SDP
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Dear Tero,=20

Thanks a lot for your review. If you believe that your proposed changes on =
the references format should deserve changes in the document and a new ID, =
please let us know, we would try to integrate them ASAP.=20

Kind regards,

The authors.

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Objet=A0: Secdir review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.

Summary: ready with nits.

This document describes various criteria for doing characterizations of act=
ive queue management schemes. As this is not really a protocol document the=
re is not that much of security issues that could raise from here. The secu=
rity considerations section says

   Some security considerations for AQM are identified in [RFC7567].This
   document, by itself, presents no new privacy nor security issues.

and I agree with that.

As for nits, the document uses very heavily references in a format where it=
 makes document very hard to read. The references are used in such way, tha=
t if they are removed or hidden, the whole document comes completely unread=
able. I think the references should only provide extra information, and the=
 document should be readable even if you remove everything between [], but =
in this case the text comes like
this:

   An AQM scheme SHOULD adhere to the recommendations outlined in
   [], and SHOULD NOT provide undue advantage to flows with
   smaller packets [].

Also references style (i.e. whether it is [RFCxxxx] or [1]) should not affe=
ct the document readability, but in this case it makes things very hard to =
read when text is like:

   [1] separately describes the AQM algorithm implemented in a
   router from the scheduling of packets sent by the router.

When you are reading the document and you do not remember what [1] (or
[RFC7567]) actually is it forces you to go and check the reference section =
to see what this document is.

It would be better if the text would be expanded so that the actual text is=
 readable even if you remove all references, i.e. the first example would c=
ome:

   An AQM scheme SHOULD adhere to the recommendations outlined in Byte
   and Packet Congestion Notification document [RFC7141], and SHOULD
   NOT provide undue advantage to flows with smaller packets.

(I have no idea why the second reference was there at all, it might be usef=
ul if it provided section talking about that, but as the whole document is =
"IETF Recommendations Regarding Active Queue Management", I do not think it=
 relates only to the smaller packets.
--
kivinen@iki.fi


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Hi again,=20

FYI, attached to this email is what could be a new ID for the document.=20

Kind regards,

Nicolas



-----Message d'origine-----
De=A0: Kuhn Nicolas=20
Envoy=E9=A0: mardi 17 mai 2016 10:31
=C0=A0: 'Tero Kivinen'; iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-aqm-eval=
-guidelines.all@tools.ietf.org
Cc=A0: 'Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)'
Objet=A0: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11

Dear Tero,=20

Thanks a lot for your review. If you believe that your proposed changes on =
the references format should deserve changes in the document and a new ID, =
please let us know, we would try to integrate them ASAP.=20

Kind regards,

The authors.

-----Message d'origine-----
De=A0: Tero Kivinen [mailto:kivinen@iki.fi] Envoy=E9=A0: mercredi 27 avril =
2016 15:07 =C0=A0: iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guid=
elines.all@tools.ietf.org
Objet=A0: Secdir review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing=
 effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These co=
mments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area director=
s.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y other last call comments.

Summary: ready with nits.

This document describes various criteria for doing characterizations of act=
ive queue management schemes. As this is not really a protocol document the=
re is not that much of security issues that could raise from here. The secu=
rity considerations section says

   Some security considerations for AQM are identified in [RFC7567].This
   document, by itself, presents no new privacy nor security issues.

and I agree with that.

As for nits, the document uses very heavily references in a format where it=
 makes document very hard to read. The references are used in such way, tha=
t if they are removed or hidden, the whole document comes completely unread=
able. I think the references should only provide extra information, and the=
 document should be readable even if you remove everything between [], but =
in this case the text comes like
this:

   An AQM scheme SHOULD adhere to the recommendations outlined in
   [], and SHOULD NOT provide undue advantage to flows with
   smaller packets [].

Also references style (i.e. whether it is [RFCxxxx] or [1]) should not affe=
ct the document readability, but in this case it makes things very hard to =
read when text is like:

   [1] separately describes the AQM algorithm implemented in a
   router from the scheduling of packets sent by the router.

When you are reading the document and you do not remember what [1] (or
[RFC7567]) actually is it forces you to go and check the reference section =
to see what this document is.

It would be better if the text would be expanded so that the actual text is=
 readable even if you remove all references, i.e. the first example would c=
ome:

   An AQM scheme SHOULD adhere to the recommendations outlined in Byte
   and Packet Congestion Notification document [RFC7141], and SHOULD
   NOT provide undue advantage to flows with smaller packets.

(I have no idea why the second reference was there at all, it might be usef=
ul if it provided section talking about that, but as the whole document is =
"IETF Recommendations Regarding Active Queue Management", I do not think it=
 relates only to the smaller packets.
--
kivinen@iki.fi

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Kuhn Nicolas writes:
> Thanks a lot for your review. If you believe that your proposed
> changes on the references format should deserve changes in the
> document and a new ID, please let us know, we would try to integrate
> them ASAP.  

Current format makes the document hard to read, especially for those
who do are not very familiar with the area, as it is hard to remember
which rfc is which (7567, 5481, 2679 etc)

My recommendation would be to fix that, but this is my personal
preference on the matter.
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I agree with you: this format does not ease the reading.  This is however h=
ow it is done in, e.g. RFC 7567. This is more readable for someone aware of=
 the activity in the working group (for someone familiar with the mentioned=
 RFCs, seeing [RFC7567] is easier than [5]). It depends who is targeted by =
the draft. I think (hope?) that someone using these guidelines would have r=
ead RFC7567 first. =20

Nico

-----Message d'origine-----
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Envoy=E9=A0: mardi 17 mai 2016 14:08
=C0=A0: Kuhn Nicolas
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Objet=A0: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11

Kuhn Nicolas writes:
> Thanks a lot for your review. If you believe that your proposed=20
> changes on the references format should deserve changes in the=20
> document and a new ID, please let us know, we would try to integrate=20
> them ASAP.

> Current format makes the document hard to read, especially for those who =
do are not very familiar with the area, as it is hard to remember which rfc=
 is which (7567, 5481, 2679 etc)

> My recommendation would be to fix that, but this is my personal preferenc=
e on the matter.


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The document is readable, though a pass through for simple grammar would be
helpful.  However, a more important editorial comment is that AVP should be
defined under terminology and not wait until section 3 to expand the
acronym.

-----------

Some things are confusing to me.  For instance,

     Requirement #7:  The solution MUST support symmetric keys and
      asymmetric keys.

         Motivation: Symmetric and asymmetric cryptographic algorithms
         provide different security services.  Asymmetric algorithms,
         for example, allow non-repudiation services to be offered.

I'm not sure what the motivation was for putting this in. Why would
diameter need nonrepudiation?  And if it's using asymmetric, because it
wants nonrepudiation, why would it also need symmetric keys?  Indeed,
usually protocols that use asymmetric keys also use symmetric.  Or is it
saying that preshared secret keys, or Kerberos must be supported even if a
public key scheme is fully deployed? Why would that be?

--------

I found this sentence confusing:

      As an example, consider the Diameter EAP
      application [4] that allows the transport of keying material
      between the Diameter server to the Diameter client (using the EAP-
      Master-Session-Key AVP) for the protection of air interface
      between the end device and the network access server.

What is "air interface"?  Do you mean the wireless link?  Is the "diameter
client" the same as the "end device"?  What is the "network access
server"?  None of these things are in the diagram.

------------
Also,

   {AVP}k refers to an AVP that
   experiences security protection (using key "k") without further
   distinguishing between integrity and confidentiality protection.

I think it's a good idea to have different notation for confidentiality and
integrity, because sometimes things need one, and sometimes they need both.

---------

Radia

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Kuhn Nicolas writes:
> I agree with you: this format does not ease the reading.  This is
> however how it is done in, e.g. RFC 7567. This is more readable for
> someone aware of the activity in the working group (for someone
> familiar with the mentioned RFCs, seeing [RFC7567] is easier than
> [5]).=20

Yes, using "as specified in [RFC7567]" is better than using "as
specified in [5]", but using "as specified in the AQM recommendations
document [RFC7567]" is even better, and provides the RFC number for
those who knows those, but also tells those who just read this
document information what that document is without the need to go and
check the document title.

Also you have several references ot the RFC7567 even in the same
sentence:

   Not all endpoints (or applications) using TCP use the same flavor of=

   TCP.  Variety of senders generate different classes of traffic which=

   may not react to congestion signals (aka non-responsive flows
   [RFC7567]) or may not reduce their sending rate as expected (aka
   Transport Flows that are less responsive than TCP[RFC7567], also
   called "aggressive flows").  In these cases, AQM schemes seek to
   control the queuing delay.

IF those refer to the specific recommendations in the RFC7567 then
pointing the section number or similar would make this text much more
useful than just pointing to the same document multiple times in same
sentence.=20

> It depends who is targeted by the draft.

I have no idea who the intended audience for this draft is. I could
not find that from the draft.

> I think (hope=3F) that someone using these guidelines would have read=

> RFC7567 first.

That hope is completely unjustified. There are always several people
reading RFCs, who have no idea what the referenced document specifies.
Quite often it is someone pointing them out that the RFC xxxx in
section yyy says zzz, do something, and then the person starts reading
that RFC xxxx without any prior knowledge about the subject. He might
end up reading relevant RFCs later, but he has to start from
somewehere. I think it is better if we can make RFCs easier to
understand for persons who just start reading them.

Also architecture, recommendations, and guidelines documents are quite
often so that actual implementors are not that interested reading on
them until they are forced to do so. They are important while we are
writing the actual specifications, as that creates the base work for
making protocol design, but when you are implementing the actual bits
on the wire, implementors usually just go directly to the bits on wire
and try to make them work, ignoring as much of other documents as they
can.

> Nico
>=20
> -----Message d'origine-----
> De=A0: Tero Kivinen [mailto:kivinen@iki.fi]=20
> Envoy=E9=A0: mardi 17 mai 2016 14:08
> =C0=A0: Kuhn Nicolas
> Cc=A0: iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines=
.all@tools.ietf.org; Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)
> Objet=A0: RE: Secdir review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11
>=20
> Kuhn Nicolas writes:
> > Thanks a lot for your review. If you believe that your proposed=20
> > changes on the references format should deserve changes in the=20
> > document and a new ID, please let us know, we would try to integrat=
e=20
> > them ASAP.
>=20
> > Current format makes the document hard to read, especially for thos=
e who do are not very familiar with the area, as it is hard to remember=
 which rfc is which (7567, 5481, 2679 etc)
>=20
> > My recommendation would be to fix that, but this is my personal pre=
ference on the matter.
>=20
>=20
> --
> kivinen@iki.fi

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We seem to be piling up some early reviews (marked as E below). It
would be nice to clear at least some of those out. 

Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Tina TSOU is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2016-05-19

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Sandy Murphy           T 2016-05-12 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-11


For telechat 2016-06-02

Eric Osterweil         T 2016-05-26 draft-hardie-rfc6455-iana-clarification-02
Vincent Roca           T 2016-05-16 draft-ietf-manet-rfc6779bis-05
Rich Salz              T 2016-05-23 draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-13
Melinda Shore          T 2016-05-31 draft-ietf-geojson-02
Robert Sparks          T 2016-06-01 draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16

Last calls and special requests:

Alan DeKok               2016-04-30 draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-08
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Yaron Sheffer            2016-05-23 draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07
Takeshi Takahashi        2016-05-31 draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-11
Hannes Tschofenig        2015-12-28 draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-07
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-network-time-security-13
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-cms-for-nts-message-06
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-04
Brian Weis             E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-07
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  ongoin=
g effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the=20
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the securit=
y area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat  these comme=
nts just like any other last call comments.

Summary: this document is ready, perhaps with nits.

You might consider reducing the security considerations part, just to incre=
ase emphasis on the fact that while the data described by this schema is po=
tentially very privacy-impacting, it is the *protocol(s)* that need to addr=
ess those issues.    Perhaps adding an intro sentence like that to the Sec =
15 would be useful.

Thanks for the trip down my personal memory line.  Haven't deal with XML Sc=
hema since WS-star days :)

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Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate=E2=80=99=
s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments =
just
like any other last call comments.


Summary: ready

The security considerations section is a carbon copy of that of RFC 6779 =
published in 2012. The only modification is the addition of a reference =
to "Mobile Ad Hoc Network (MANET)".

As explained by the authors, information contained in this MIB is highly =
sensitive, both from the security and privacy point of views. This is =
all the most true when considering some of the target use-cases =
(emergency services or military tactical applications).

If I find this section globally well written. I'm just a bit surprised =
by the following sentence:
	"It is thus important to control even GET and/or NOTIFY access =
to these objects
	 and possibly to even encrypt the values of these objects when =
sending them
	over the network via SNMP."
I would rather say that it is essential to encrypt and verify the =
integrity of all the SNMP traffic. Here I find the style not =
sufficiently directive... But this is a detail.


Cheers,

  Vincent

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<html><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; =
-webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=3D"">Hello,<br =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">I have reviewed this document as part of the =
security directorate=E2=80=99s ongoing<br class=3D"">effort to review =
all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These<br =
class=3D"">comments were written primarily for the benefit of the =
security area<br class=3D"">directors. &nbsp;Document editors and WG =
chairs should treat these comments just<br class=3D"">like any other =
last call comments.<div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Summary:<b =
class=3D"">&nbsp;ready</b></div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">The security considerations section is a carbon copy of that =
of RFC 6779 published in 2012. The only modification is the addition of =
a reference to "Mobile Ad Hoc Network (MANET)".</div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">As explained by the authors, =
information contained in this MIB is highly sensitive, both from the =
security and privacy point of views. This is all the most true when =
considering some of the target use-cases (emergency services or military =
tactical applications).</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D"">If I find this section globally well written. I'm just a bit =
surprised by the following sentence:</div><div class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" style=3D"white-space:pre">	=
</span>"It is thus important to control even GET and/or NOTIFY access to =
these objects</div><div class=3D""><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" =
style=3D"white-space:pre">	</span>&nbsp;<b class=3D"">and possibly =
to even encrypt the values of these objects</b> when sending =
them</div><div class=3D""><span class=3D"Apple-tab-span" =
style=3D"white-space:pre">	</span>over the network via =
SNMP."</div></div><div class=3D"">I would rather say that it is =
essential to encrypt and verify the integrity of all the SNMP traffic. =
Here I find the style not sufficiently directive... But this is a =
detail.</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><div class=3D"">Cheers,</div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">&nbsp; =
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

(note: I was assigned the -02 revision of the document, but the -03
version was just issued and I am reviewing that).

Summary: this document is ready, with minor issues

This document describes a JSON format for representing geospatial
data.  It recommends a single coordinate reference system and does
not appear to be readily extensible to other coordinate reference
systems, but I'll assume that this has been addressed and resolved
by the responsible AD, etc. if it's actually a problem.

The security considerations section is brief and refers the reader
to the core JSON specification.  The second paragraph of the
security considerations sections may have minor issues in that it
says "if sensitive data requires privacy or integrity protection the
service must be provided externally."  It may be appropriate, and
provide additional clarity, to distinguish between protection of
data in flight and data at rest (the IETF does not typically deal
with protection of the latter).  It may be sufficient to make the
word "externally" go away and replace it with something more specific -
for example,
     "if sensitive data require privacy or integrity protection
     those must be provided by the transport, for example TLS or
     HTTPS."

Otherwise, looks ready.

Melinda


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Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

Brian Weis is next in the rotation.

For telechat 2016-06-02

Reviewer                 LC end     Draft
Eric Osterweil         T 2016-05-26 draft-hardie-rfc6455-iana-clarification-02
Robert Sparks          T 2016-06-01 draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16


For telechat 2016-06-16

Tina TSOU              T 2016-06-08 draft-ietf-ccamp-additional-signal-type-g709v3-03
Sean Turner            T 2016-06-03 draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-14
Carl Wallace           T 2016-06-22 draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb-02
David Waltermire       T 2016-06-07 draft-ietf-idr-ix-bgp-route-server-09

Last calls and special requests:

Alan DeKok               2016-04-30 draft-bradner-rfc3979bis-08
Daniel Kahn Gillmor    E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-08
Matthew Miller          R2016-06-01 draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-06
Yaron Sheffer            2016-05-23 draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07
Takeshi Takahashi        2016-05-31 draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-11
Hannes Tschofenig        2015-12-28 draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-07
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-network-time-security-13
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-cms-for-nts-message-06
Hannes Tschofenig      E None       draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-04
Brian Weis             E 2016-02-01 draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-07
-- 
kivinen@iki.fi


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Thanks for the feedback Melinda.  I put together a pull request with
your proposed changes:
https://github.com/geojson/draft-geojson/pull/205

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On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:15 AM, Melinda Shore <melinda.shore@gmail.com> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> (note: I was assigned the -02 revision of the document, but the -03
> version was just issued and I am reviewing that).
>
> Summary: this document is ready, with minor issues
>
> This document describes a JSON format for representing geospatial
> data.  It recommends a single coordinate reference system and does
> not appear to be readily extensible to other coordinate reference
> systems, but I'll assume that this has been addressed and resolved
> by the responsible AD, etc. if it's actually a problem.
>
> The security considerations section is brief and refers the reader
> to the core JSON specification.  The second paragraph of the
> security considerations sections may have minor issues in that it
> says "if sensitive data requires privacy or integrity protection the
> service must be provided externally."  It may be appropriate, and
> provide additional clarity, to distinguish between protection of
> data in flight and data at rest (the IETF does not typically deal
> with protection of the latter).  It may be sufficient to make the
> word "externally" go away and replace it with something more specific -
> for example,
>     "if sensitive data require privacy or integrity protection
>     those must be provided by the transport, for example TLS or
>     HTTPS."
>
> Otherwise, looks ready.
>
> Melinda


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On 5/26/16 7:11 AM, Tim Schaub wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback Melinda.  I put together a pull request with
> your proposed changes:
> https://github.com/geojson/draft-geojson/pull/205

Cool, thanks.  If text regarding data at rest is wanted
it may be sufficient to say something along the lines of
"There will be cases in which stored data need protection,
which is out of scope for this document."

Melinda



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On 26 May 2016 at 16:15, Melinda Shore <melinda.shore@gmail.com> wrote:
> This document describes a JSON format for representing geospatial
> data.  It recommends a single coordinate reference system and does
> not appear to be readily extensible to other coordinate reference
> systems, but I'll assume that this has been addressed and resolved
> by the responsible AD, etc. if it's actually a problem.

This was discussed - extensively - by the working group.  The lack of
specific extensions for CRS is a deliberate decision.


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Thanks for the suggestions. I have included them accordingly.

Best,

Rong

From: Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net<mailto:warren@kumari.net>>
Date: Monday, May 2, 2016 at 9:31 AM
To: IETF Security Directorate <secdir@ietf.org<mailto:secdir@ietf.org>>, "d=
raft-ietf-aqm-pie.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-aqm-pie.all@ietf.org>" <dr=
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Subject: SecDir review of draft-ietf-aqm-pie


Be ye not afraid...

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Version reviewed: draft-ietf-aqm-pie-06 - PIE: A Lightweight Control Scheme=
 To Address the
Bufferbloat Problem

Summary:
LGTM, Security AD attention not required.

Details:
No major issues, some nits. Feel free to integrate or ignore.

Notes:
>5 authors. Many of the authors are experienced, so they probably already k=
now the RFC Ed might make sad face at you.

Comments in [O]riginal, [P]roposed, [R]eason.


Abstract

Bufferbloat is a phenomenon where excess buffers in the network cause
[O] phenomenon where excess
[P] phenomenon in which excess
[R] grammar
high latency and jitter. As more and more interactive applications

[SNIP]

There is a pressing need to design
intelligent queue management schemes that can control latency and
jitter; and hence provide desirable quality of service to users.
[O] jitter; and hence
[P] jitter, and hence
[R] grammar

[SNIP]
The design does not
require per-packet timestamp, so it incurs very small overhead and is
[O] require per-packet timestamp,
[P] require per-packet timestamps,
[R] grammar
[O] incurs very small overhead
[P] incurs very little overhead
[R] word choice



1. Introduction

The explosion of smart phones, tablets and video traffic in the
Internet brings about a unique set of challenges for congestion
control. To avoid packet drops, many service providers or data center
operators require vendors to put in as much buffer as possible. With
rapid decrease in memory chip prices, these requests are easily
[O] With rapid decrease in memory chip price,
[P] Because of the rapid decrease in memory chip prices,
accommodated to keep customers happy. While this solution succeeds in
assuring low packet loss and high TCP throughput, it suffers from a
major downside. The TCP protocol continuously increases its sending
rate and causes network buffers to fill up. TCP cuts its rate only
when it receives a packet drop or mark that is interpreted as a
congestion signal. However, drops and marks usually occur when
network buffers are full or almost full. As a result, excess buffers,
initially designed to avoid packet drops, would lead to highly
elevated queueing latency and jitter. It is a delicate balancing act
to design a queue management scheme that not only allows short-term
burst to smoothly pass, but also controls the average latency in the
presence of long-running greedy flows.
[O] It is a delicate balancing act to design a queue management scheme that=
 not only allows short-term burst to smoothly pass, but also controls the a=
verage latency in the presence of long-running greedy flows.
[P] Designing a queue management scheme that allows short-term bursts to pa=
ss smoothly as well as controlling the average latency in the presence of l=
ong-running greedy flows is a delicate balancing act.
[R] readability

[SNIP]

New algorithms are beginning to emerge to control queueing latency
directly to address the bufferbloat problem [CoDel]. Along these
lines, PIE also aims to keep the benefits of RED: such as easy
[O] the benefits of RED: such as easy
[P] the benefits of RED, including easy
[R] readability and grammar
implementation and scalability to high speeds. Similar to RED, PIE
randomly drops an incoming packet at the onset of the congestion. The
congestion detection, however, is based on the queueing latency
instead of the queue length like RED.

[SNIP]

In October 2013, CableLabs' DOCSIS 3.1 specification [DOCSIS_3.1]
mandated that cable modems implement a specific variant of the PIE
design as the active queue management algorithm. In addition to cable
specific improvements, the PIE design in DOCSIS 3.1 [DOCSIS-PIE] has
improved the original design in several areas, including de-
randomization of coin tosses and enhanced burst protection.

This draft separates the PIE design into the basic elements that are
MUST to be implemented and optional SHOULD/MAY enhancement elements.
[O] that are MUST to be implemented
[R] This is awkward, but maybe should be left as is? Or delete "are"?



4. The Basic PIE Scheme

As illustrated in Fig. 1, PIE conceptually comprises three simple MUST
[O] PIE conceptually comprises three simple
[P] PIE is comprised of three simple
[R] I think this is what is meant -- PIE is made of three MUST components, =
not PIE makes those three components?

components: a) random dropping at enqueueing; b) periodic drop
probability update; c) latency calculation.

[SNIP]


5.2 Departure Rate Estimation

One way to calculate latency is to obtain the departure rate. The
draining rate of a queue in the network often varies either because
other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity fluctuates.
[O] because other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity fl=
uctuates.
[P] because other queues are sharing the link or because the link capacity =
fluctuates.
[R] clarity



9. Security Considerations

This document describes an active queue management algorithm based
on implementations in Cisco products. This algorithm introduces no
specific security exposures.


10. IANA Considerations

There are no actions for IANA.


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<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">I have reviewed thi=
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<span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">ongoing effort to review=
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33,33);font-size:13px">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">IESG.&nbsp; These commen=
ts were written primarily for the benefit of the</span><br style=3D"color:r=
gb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">security area directors.=
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<span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">these comments just like=
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<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">Version reviewed:&n=
bsp;</span><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">draft-ietf-aqm-pie-06</span><spa=
n style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px;line-height:1.5">&nbsp;-&nbsp=
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=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">
<span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">LGTM, Security AD attent=
ion&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">not</spa=
n><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">&nbsp;required.</span>=
<br style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">
</div>
<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">Details:</span></di=
v>
<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">No major issues, so=
me nits. Feel free to integrate or ignore.</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"color:rgb(33,33,33);font-size:13px">Notes:&nbsp;</span>=
</div>
<div><font color=3D"#212121">&gt;5 authors. Many of the authors are&nbsp;ex=
perienced, so they probably already know the RFC Ed might make sad face at =
you.</font></div>
<div><font color=3D"#212121"><br>
</font></div>
<div>Comments in [O]riginal, [P]roposed, [R]eason.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Abstract</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Bufferbloat is a phenomenon where excess buffers in the network cause<=
/div>
<div>[O] phenomenon where excess</div>
<div>[P] phenomenon in which excess</div>
<div>[R] grammar</div>
<div>high latency and jitter. As more and more interactive applications</di=
v>
<div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">
[SNIP]&nbsp;<br>
</div>
<div><span style=3D"line-height:1.5"><br>
</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">There is a pressing need to design</sp=
an><br>
</div>
<div>intelligent queue management schemes that can control latency and</div=
>
<div>jitter; and hence provide desirable quality of service to users.</div>
<div>[O] jitter; and hence</div>
<div>[P] jitter, and hence</div>
<div>[R] grammar</div>
<br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">
<div><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">[SNIP]&nbsp;</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"line-height:1.5">The design does not</span><br>
</div>
<div>require per-packet timestamp, so it incurs very small overhead and is<=
/div>
<div>[O] require per-packet timestamp,</div>
<div>[P] require per-packet timestamps,</div>
<div>[R] grammar</div>
<div>[O] incurs very small overhead</div>
<div>[P] incurs very little overhead</div>
<div>[R] word choice</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>1. Introduction</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>The explosion of smart phones, tablets and video traffic in the</div>
<div>Internet brings about a unique set of challenges for congestion</div>
<div>control. To avoid packet drops, many service providers or data center<=
/div>
<div>operators require vendors to put in as much buffer as possible. With</=
div>
<div>rapid decrease in memory chip prices, these requests are easily</div>
<div>[O] With rapid decrease in memory chip price,</div>
<div>[P] Because of the rapid decrease in memory chip prices,</div>
<div>accommodated to keep customers happy. While this solution succeeds in<=
/div>
<div>assuring low packet loss and high TCP throughput, it suffers from a</d=
iv>
<div>major downside. The TCP protocol continuously increases its sending</d=
iv>
<div>rate and causes network buffers to fill up. TCP cuts its rate only</di=
v>
<div>when it receives a packet drop or mark that is interpreted as a</div>
<div>congestion signal. However, drops and marks usually occur when</div>
<div>network buffers are full or almost full. As a result, excess buffers,<=
/div>
<div>initially designed to avoid packet drops, would lead to highly</div>
<div>elevated queueing latency and jitter. It is a delicate balancing act</=
div>
<div>to design a queue management scheme that not only allows short-term</d=
iv>
<div>burst to smoothly pass, but also controls the average latency in the</=
div>
<div>presence of long-running greedy flows.</div>
<div>[O] It is a delicate balancing act to design a queue management scheme=
 that not only allows short-term burst to smoothly pass, but also controls =
the average latency in the presence of long-running greedy flows.</div>
<div>[P] Designing a queue management scheme that allows short-term bursts =
to pass smoothly as well as controlling the average latency in the presence=
 of long-running greedy flows is a delicate balancing act.</div>
<div>[R] readability</div>
<div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">
[SNIP]&nbsp;<br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>New algorithms are beginning to emerge to control queueing latency</di=
v>
<div>directly to address the bufferbloat problem [CoDel]. Along these</div>
<div>lines, PIE also aims to keep the benefits of RED: such as easy</div>
<div>[O] the benefits of RED: such as easy</div>
<div>[P] the benefits of RED, including easy</div>
<div>[R] readability and grammar</div>
<div>implementation and scalability to high speeds. Similar to RED, PIE</di=
v>
<div>randomly drops an incoming packet at the onset of the congestion. The<=
/div>
<div>congestion detection, however, is based on the queueing latency</div>
<div>instead of the queue length like RED.&nbsp;</div>
<div><br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">
[SNIP]&nbsp;<br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>In October 2013, CableLabs' DOCSIS 3.1 specification [DOCSIS_3.1]</div=
>
<div>mandated that cable modems implement a specific variant of the PIE</di=
v>
<div>design as the active queue management algorithm. In addition to cable<=
/div>
<div>specific improvements, the PIE design in DOCSIS 3.1 [DOCSIS-PIE] has</=
div>
<div>improved the original design in several areas, including de-</div>
<div>randomization of coin tosses and enhanced burst protection.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>This draft separates the PIE design into the basic elements that are</=
div>
<div>MUST to be implemented and optional SHOULD/MAY enhancement elements.</=
div>
<div>[O] that are MUST to be implemented</div>
<div>[R] This is awkward, but maybe should be left as is? Or delete &quot;a=
re&quot;?</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>4. The Basic PIE Scheme</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>As illustrated in Fig. 1, PIE conceptually comprises three simple MUST=
</div>
<div>[O] PIE conceptually comprises three simple</div>
<div>[P] PIE is comprised of three simple</div>
<div>[R] I think this is what is meant -- PIE is made of three MUST compone=
nts, not PIE makes those three components?</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>components: a) random dropping at enqueueing; b) periodic drop</div>
<div>probability update; c) latency calculation.&nbsp;</div>
<br class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline">
[SNIP]&nbsp;
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>5.2 Departure Rate Estimation</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>One way to calculate latency is to obtain the departure rate. The</div=
>
<div>draining rate of a queue in the network often varies either because</d=
iv>
<div>other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capacity fluctuate=
s.</div>
<div>[O] because other queues are sharing the same link, or the link capaci=
ty fluctuates.</div>
<div>[P] because other queues are sharing the link or because the link capa=
city fluctuates.</div>
<div>[R] clarity</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>9. Security Considerations</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>This document describes an active queue management algorithm based</di=
v>
<div>on implementations in Cisco products. This algorithm introduces no</di=
v>
<div>specific security exposures.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>10. IANA Considerations</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>There are no actions for IANA.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>-- END --</div>
<div><br>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
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Hi Radia,

Sorry for the lag.. and thank you for the review. See some comments inline.

5/18/2016, 4:29 PM, Radia Perlman kirjoitti:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> The document is readable, though a pass through for simple grammar would
> be helpful.  However, a more important editorial comment is that AVP
> should be defined under terminology and not wait until section 3 to
> expand the acronym.

Ack.

>
> -----------
>
> Some things are confusing to me.  For instance,
>
>      Requirement #7:  The solution MUST support symmetric keys and
>       asymmetric keys.
>
>          Motivation: Symmetric and asymmetric cryptographic algorithms
>          provide different security services.  Asymmetric algorithms,
>          for example, allow non-repudiation services to be offered.
>
> I'm not sure what the motivation was for putting this in. Why would
> diameter need nonrepudiation?  And if it's using asymmetric, because it
> wants nonrepudiation, why would it also need symmetric keys?  Indeed,
> usually protocols that use asymmetric keys also use symmetric.  Or is it
> saying that preshared secret keys, or Kerberos must be supported even if
> a public key scheme is fully deployed? Why would that be?

In most cases one would be interested in just providing proof of the 
integrity and origin of AVPs. This is actually the most likely use case. 
For that purpose asymmetric cryptographic algorithms would fit well.

If confidentiality of AVPs is required then symmetric keys would most 
likely to be used for that purpose.

Regading the uses.. the used crypto-suites should/would eventually be 
described per Diameter application. In that situation we are likely to 
see both symmetric and asymmetric crypto be used in the same Diameter 
node that handles multiple applications.


>
> --------
>
> I found this sentence confusing:
>
>       As an example, consider the Diameter EAP
>       application [4] that allows the transport of keying material
>       between the Diameter server to the Diameter client (using the EAP-
>       Master-Session-Key AVP) for the protection of air interface
>       between the end device and the network access server.
>
> What is "air interface"?  Do you mean the wireless link?  Is the
> "diameter client" the same as the "end device"?  What is the "network
> access server"?  None of these things are in the diagram.

Air interface == wireless link, yes. End device is not the Diameter 
client. The end device could e.g., be a mobile phone whereas the 
Diameter client could be an access point or a base station.

Network access server would be a node with a Diameter client. We need to 
add that into the diagrams.

>
> ------------
> Also,
>
>    {AVP}k refers to an AVP that
>    experiences security protection (using key "k") without further
>    distinguishing between integrity and confidentiality protection.
>
> I think it's a good idea to have different notation for confidentiality
> and integrity, because sometimes things need one, and sometimes they
> need both.

Ack, agree in general with the usefullness of different notations. In 
the examples we got there was just no need to make difference between 
confidentiality and integrity protection.

Thanks,
	Jouni

>
> ---------
>
> Radia


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On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:05 PM, Melinda Shore <melinda.shore@gmail.com> w=
rote:
> On 5/26/16 7:11 AM, Tim Schaub wrote:
>>
>> Thanks for the feedback Melinda.  I put together a pull request with
>> your proposed changes:
>> https://github.com/geojson/draft-geojson/pull/205
>
>
> Cool, thanks.  If text regarding data at rest is wanted
> it may be sufficient to say something along the lines of
> "There will be cases in which stored data need protection,
> which is out of scope for this document."
>
> Melinda

Sounds good.

I've updated the pull request so the Security Considerations text now
finishes with this:

"If sensitive data requires privacy or integrity protection, those
must be provided by the transport =E2=80=94 for example TLS or HTTPS. There
will be cases in which stored data need protection, which is out of
scope for this document."

https://circle-artifacts.com/gh/geojson/draft-geojson/141/artifacts/0/home/=
ubuntu/draft-geojson/draft.html#rfc.section.10

https://github.com/geojson/draft-geojson/pull/205

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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document : draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070bis-22

Summary: This document has minor issues that should be addressed before 
publication as Proposed Standard

This document defines a document format for exchanging information between
operational security teams. It points out standardized mechanisms for
transporting the documents (RFC6545 and RFC6546), to provide 
confidentiality,
integrity, and authenticity, but does not restrict the use of the format to
within those protocols.  Instead, it provides a generic set of "Processing
Considerations" in section 4, which are augmented by the Security
Considerations in section 9.

There are some minor issues with this approach that should be addressed 
before
publication.

1) The document requires that implementations validate documents against the
schema, and reject any documents that fail validation.  In particular, 
Section
5.2 Item 4 requires rejecting documents with an unrecognized element in a
supported namespace as a syntax error. Section 4.3 requires 
implementations to
->dynamically generate the schema used for validation from IANA 
registries<-.
Section 5.2 Item 5 calls out that this dynamic generation has security and
performance implications, but does not describe them, and has a very vague
"SHOULD NOT download schemas at runtime" to guard against them.  I seem to
recall significant discussion in other contexts of the issues with 
generating
schema from IANA registries at runtime.  Perhaps the ADs can provide 
pointers
to material generated from those discussions that the group can reference.
Otherwise, the threats need to be described in more detail, and the 
operational
complexity of exercising these extension points (particularly given the
requirement to reject documents that do not validate against the content 
of the
registries) needs to be spelled out.

2) The document notes (in Section 9.1) that some fields in the document 
format
may contain executable content. It is not clear which fields are being
mentioned, or what _kind_ of executable content is being carried. Explicitly
calling out the fields that this document defines at this point, and
characterizing their content would help. The precautions you might need 
to take
against a regex are different from those you would take against arbitrary
bytecode the recipient might be asked to execute.

3) There are several fields that are characterized as "meaningful to the 
sender
and recipient". This implies that the document cannot be interpreted outside
some out-of-band prior arrangement defining the context in which those 
fields
are meaningful. The document should explicitly mention the need for such 
prior
arrangements in the Security Consideration section, and note the danger of
attempting to interpret those fields if the ability to ensure the 
message falls
within that pre-arranged context is suspect. The existing text around 
ensuring
proper authentication of the sender and recipient is a start, but is not
sufficient. While considering the problems with interpreting these fields in
the wrong context, the document should recognize the possibility that a 
given
sender/recipient pair might have _two different_ arrangements about what 
these
fields mean, especially given the passage of sufficient time.

Nits:

A) Section 2.11 calls out to RFC4519 to defined the syntax of telephone
numbers.  The document calls out to E.123, which provides guidelines for
representing phone numbers but does not define a rigorous format useful 
for a
protocol field.  If it's important to exchange phone numbers in an
interoperable way, consider pointing to something with more structure. 
Do you
want the string to conform to E.164?  Would it be useful to have 
something as
structured as a tel: URI?

B) Section 4.1 says a character encoding MUST be explicitly specified, 
but then
immediately shows an example of a document with no character encoding...

C) (micronit) The use of [RFC-ENUM] as a reference number is distracting.
Please change the reference tag to [RFC7495].

Note: I did _not_ verify that the schema was well formed or that it 
matched the
prose.


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
other last call comments.

[General summary]

This document is ready.

[Topic of this draft]

This draft talks about the UDP Usage Guidelines and replaces RFC 5405 (BCP).
It talks about how to use UDP, especially it pays attention to the fair use
of the network resourced and talks a lot on congestion control.

The RFC 5045 focuses on unicast case, but this bis document talks about
multicast, (anycast, broadcast, )and IP tunneling cases.

The content is useful, and I hope to see this draft to be published as an
RFC.

[Clarification question]

In Table 1 "Summary of recommendations", I wonder if the corresponding
section numbers are correct.

[Now]
"SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1
and 
"SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds to
Section 5.2

[New]
"SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1
and 
"SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds to
Section 5.1.2

I might be wrong, so please check.

Also I have seen several typos (especially, missing parentheses around
referenced section numbers) on this document, so please revise the texts
before the publication of this document.

Thank you.
Take




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Hi again, let me correct the following part of my previous email.

> [New]
> "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1
>
> and
>
> "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds
to Section 5.1.2

[New]
"SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1

and

"SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds to
Section 5.1

Thank you.
Take


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> draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis.all@ietf.org
> Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-13
> 
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
> other last call comments.
> 
> [General summary]
> 
> This document is ready.
> 
> [Topic of this draft]
> 
> This draft talks about the UDP Usage Guidelines and replaces RFC 5405
(BCP).
> It talks about how to use UDP, especially it pays attention to the fair
> use
> of the network resourced and talks a lot on congestion control.
> 
> The RFC 5045 focuses on unicast case, but this bis document talks about
> multicast, (anycast, broadcast, )and IP tunneling cases.
> 
> The content is useful, and I hope to see this draft to be published as an
> RFC.
> 
> [Clarification question]
> 
> In Table 1 "Summary of recommendations", I wonder if the corresponding
> section numbers are correct.
> 
> [Now]
> "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1
> and
> "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds
> to
> Section 5.2
> 
> [New]
> "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1
> and
> "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds
> to
> Section 5.1.2
> 
> I might be wrong, so please check.
> 
> Also I have seen several typos (especially, missing parentheses around
> referenced section numbers) on this document, so please revise the texts
> before the publication of this document.
> 
> Thank you.
> Take
> 
> 
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Take-san,

Many thanks for this review - we'll re-check Table 1 and make any necessary=
 corrections.

Thanks, --David (as draft shepherd)

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Takeshi Takahashi [mailto:takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp]
> Sent: Tuesday, May 31, 2016 6:15 AM
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> rfc5405bis.all@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-13
>=20
> Hi again, let me correct the following part of my previous email.
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> > [New]
> > "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1
> >
> > and
> >
> > "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" correspon=
ds
> to Section 5.1.2
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> [New]
> "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1
>=20
> and
>=20
> "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" corresponds=
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> Section 5.1
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> Thank you.
> Take
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> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: secdir [mailto:secdir-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Takeshi
> > Takahashi
> > Sent: Tuesday, May 31, 2016 7:06 PM
> > To: lars@netapp.com; iesg@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org;
> > draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis.all@ietf.org
> > Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-13
> >
> > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing
> > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> > These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security a=
rea
> > directors.
> > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like an=
y
> > other last call comments.
> >
> > [General summary]
> >
> > This document is ready.
> >
> > [Topic of this draft]
> >
> > This draft talks about the UDP Usage Guidelines and replaces RFC 5405
> (BCP).
> > It talks about how to use UDP, especially it pays attention to the fair
> > use
> > of the network resourced and talks a lot on congestion control.
> >
> > The RFC 5045 focuses on unicast case, but this bis document talks about
> > multicast, (anycast, broadcast, )and IP tunneling cases.
> >
> > The content is useful, and I hope to see this draft to be published as =
an
> > RFC.
> >
> > [Clarification question]
> >
> > In Table 1 "Summary of recommendations", I wonder if the corresponding
> > section numbers are correct.
> >
> > [Now]
> > "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1
> > and
> > "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" correspon=
ds
> > to
> > Section 5.2
> >
> > [New]
> > "SHOULD avoid using multiple ports"  corresponds to Section 5.1.1
> > and
> > "SHOULD use a randomized source port or equivalent technique" correspon=
ds
> > to
> > Section 5.1.2
> >
> > I might be wrong, so please check.
> >
> > Also I have seen several typos (especially, missing parentheses around
> > referenced section numbers) on this document, so please revise the text=
s
> > before the publication of this document.
> >
> > Thank you.
> > Take
> >
> >
> >
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Hello Rich,

> Summary: this document is ready, perhaps with nits.

Great!

> You might consider reducing the security considerations part, just to =
increase emphasis on the fact that while the data described by this =
schema is potentially very privacy-impacting, it is the *protocol(s)* =
that need to address those issues.    Perhaps adding an intro sentence =
like that to the Sec 15 would be useful.

No problem for us wrt to this. What do the chairs suggest?

> Thanks for the trip down my personal memory line.  Haven't deal with =
XML Schema since WS-star days :)

:-))

Cheers,

Simon

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