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For telechat 2017-11-30

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
John Bradley           None       draft-ietf-acme-acme-08
Alan DeKok             2017-10-09 draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09
Daniel Gillmor         2017-10-17 draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-03
Watson Ladd           R2017-10-19 draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-12
Barry Leiba            2017-10-19 draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpcrypt-08
Chris Lonvick          2017-11-03 draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-06
Tina Tsou             R2017-06-29 draft-ietf-trill-arp-optimization-09

For telechat 2017-12-14

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Shaun Cooley           2017-10-11 draft-ietf-grow-bgp-gshut-12
David Mandelberg       2017-11-30 draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-13
Takeshi Takahashi     R2017-06-30 draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09

Last calls:

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Phillip Hallam-Baker   2017-10-13 draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-21
Russ Mundy             2017-09-14 draft-spinosa-urn-lex-11
Tim Polk               2017-09-11 draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-05
Tom Yu                 2017-02-20 draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-17
Dacheng Zhang          2017-10-13 draft-ietf-mile-rolie-13

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Catherine Meadows
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  Daniel Migault
  Matthew Miller
  Adam Montville
  Russ Mundy
  Sandra Murphy
  Yoav Nir
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is Ready. I couldn't find anything wrong
with it from either a stylistic or content perspective.

Sincerely,
Watson Ladd


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is Ready with nits.

This document affects routing within a trusted domain, and the security 
considerations section adequately talks about filtering at the border of 
a trusted domain.

I do have one question about something I didn't see in the document, 
what happens when SIDs change while packets are in transit? Here's a 
hypothetical situation that could be bad for security, but I'm not sure 
whether or not it could happen: 1. An internal node calculates an SR 
Policy and sends out a packet that will eventually egress towards a BGP 
peer. 2. Multiple links on the BGP router go down and then back up, but 
are allocated different PeerAdj SIDs than they had before. 3. The packet 
reaches the BGP router, but egresses to the wrong BGP peer because the 
original PeerAdj SID is now mapped to a different PeerAdj segment.

-- 
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Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security 
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these 
comments just like any other last call comments. The summary of the 
review is Ready with Nits.

The abstract describes the specification as: This document describes an 
Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) extension mapping for the 
provisioning and management of domain name registrations and 
applications during the launch of a domain name registry.

I am not familiar with this line of work. In my review, I found in the 
section of Conventions Used in this Document, several XML terms are 
defined with each containing an addendum similar to, "The XML namespace 
prefix [xxx] is used, but implementations MUST NOT depend on it and 
instead employ a proper namespace-aware XML parser and serializer to 
interpret and output the XML documents." I think that it would be 
appropriate to have a summary statement covering these in the Security 
Considerations section.

The Security Considerations section appears appropriate for the contents 
and normative references.

Regards,
Chris

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    I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
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    provisioning and management of domain name registrations and
    applications during the launch of a domain name registry.<br>
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    I am not familiar with this line of work. In my review, I found in
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The Software Updates for Internet of Things (suit) WG in the Security Area of
the IETF is undergoing rechartering. The IESG has not made any determination
yet. The following draft charter was submitted, and is provided for
informational purposes only. Please send your comments to the IESG mailing
list (iesg@ietf.org) by 2017-11-13.

Software Updates for Internet of Things (suit)
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Current status: BOF WG

Chairs:
  Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
  David Waltermire <david.waltermire@nist.gov>
  Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>

Assigned Area Director:
  Kathleen Moriarty <Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>

Security Area Directors:
  Kathleen Moriarty <Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>
  Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>

Mailing list:
  Address: suit@ietf.org
  To subscribe: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/suit
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Group page: https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/suit/

Charter: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-suit/

Vulnerabilities in Internet of Things (IoT) devices have raised the
need for a secure firmware update mechanism that is also suitable for
constrained devices.  Security experts, researchers, and regulators
recommend that all IoT devices be equipped with such a mechanism.  While
there are many proprietary firmware update mechanisms in use today, there
is a lack of a modern interoperable approach of securely updating the
software in IoT devices.

A firmware update solution consists of several components, including:
  *  A mechanism to transport firmware images to IoT devices.
  *  A manifest that provides meta-data about the firmware image
     (such as a firmware package identifier, the hardware the package
     needs to run, and dependencies on other firmware packages), as
     well as cryptographic information for protecting the firmware
     image in an end-to-end fashion.
  *  The firmware image itself.

RFC 4108 provides a manifest format that uses the Cryptographic Message
Syntax (CMS) to protect firmware packages.

More than ten years have passed since the publication of RFC 4108, and
greater experience with IoT deployments has led to additional
functionality, requiring the work done with RFC 4108 to be revisited.
This group will focus on defining a firmware update solution for Class
1 devices, as defined in RFC 7228, that is -- IoT devices with ~10 KiB
RAM and ~100 KiB flash.  The solution may apply to more capable devices
as well.  This group will not define any transport mechanisms.

In June of 2016 the Internet Architecture Board organized a workshop on
'Internet of Things (IoT) Software Update (IOTSU)', which took place at
Trinity College in Dublin, Ireland.  The main goal of the workshop was
to foster a discussion on requirements, challenges, and solutions for
bringing software and firmware updates to IoT devices. This workshop
also made clear that there are challenges with misaligned incentives
and complex value chains.  It is nevertheless seen as important to
create standard building blocks that help interested parties implement
and deploy a solid firmware update mechanism.

In particular this group aims to publish three documents, namely:
  *  An IoT firmware update architecture that includes a description of
     the involved entities, security threats, and assumptions.
  *  One or more manifest format specifications.

The initial focus of this group will be development of a manifest approach
based on CMS and the ASN.1 encoding. This work will result in a revision of
RFC 4108 that reflects the current best practices. Use of the ASN.1 encoding
is desirable due to existing ASN.1 support in crypto libraries used within
current IoT operating systems. The group may later adopt alternate manifest
formats using other serialization approaches (e.g., CBOR). This group does
not aim to create a standard for a generic software update mechanism for use
by rich operating systems, like Linux, but instead this group will focus on
software development practices in the embedded industry.  "Software update
solutions that target updating software other than the firmware binary (e.g.
updating scripts) are also out of scope.

This group will aim to maintain a close relationship with silicon vendors
and OEMs that develop IoT operating systems.

Milestones:

  Dec 2017 - Adopt RFC 4108bis document as WG item.

  Dec 2017 - Adopt "Architecture" document as WG item.

  Dec 2017 - Adopt "Manifest Format" specification as WG item.

  Jan 2018 - Adopt "Architecture" to the IESG for publication as an
  Informational RFC.

  Mar 2018 - Calendar item: Release initial version of the manifest creation
  tools as open source.

  Apr 2018 - Calendar item: Release first version of manifest test tools as
  open source.

  Jun 2018 - Calendar item: Release first IoT OS implementation of firmware
  update mechanisms as open source.

  Nov 2018 - Submit RFC 4108bis document to the IESG for publication as a
  Proposed Standard.

  Nov 2018 - Submit "Manifest Format" to the IESG for publication as a
  Proposed Standard.


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Reviewer: Barry Leiba
Review result: Has Issues

I’ve looked at Stephen Kent’s review and the discussion thereof, and have
little to add to that.  A couple of small things:

1. Section 3 says that the subsections “describes the tcpcrypt protocol at an
abstract level.”  There is no sense in which this description is abstract, and
I’d prefer that we not try to say it is, because that gives a reader an
expectation that it will be high-level, and perhaps even non-normative.  Maybe
this?:

NEW
   This section provides details of the operation of the tcpcrypt protocol.
   The wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.
END

2. In Section 7 (IANA), you say:

   Tcpcrypt's TEP identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA's
   "TCP encryption protocol identifiers" registry under the
   "Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry

I can find no such registry.  Can you help me here, maybe give me a URL?

Also, with respect to the new “tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry:

   Future assignments are to be made under the "RFC Required" policy

Note that that policy allows for assignments to be made in any RFC stream,
which includes the IRTF, the IAB, and the Independent Stream.  Do you really
want people to be able to send documents to the Independent Stream Editor, and
to have them published and make assignments with minimal review?

You might consider whether “IETF Review” is more appropriate.  That allows RFCs
of any type (Standards Track, Informational, Experimental, BCP), but requires
that they be in the IETF stream and have a formal IETF last call.

It will also help IANA if you make it clear what the valid range of values is
for the “Value” column.  Is 0x0000 valid?  Is 0xFFFF the maximum?  Explicitly
saying that values must be in the range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive will be
helpful.  (I say this with particular note that you changed how the Value field
is specified between -07 and -09, so this clearly has not even been clear to
the spec developers.)


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Barry,

Thank you for your review.

Kathleen

On Sun, Nov 12, 2017 at 12:16 AM, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> wro=
te:
> Reviewer: Barry Leiba
> Review result: Has Issues
>
> I=E2=80=99ve looked at Stephen Kent=E2=80=99s review and the discussion t=
hereof, and have
> little to add to that.  A couple of small things:
>
> 1. Section 3 says that the subsections =E2=80=9Cdescribes the tcpcrypt pr=
otocol at an
> abstract level.=E2=80=9D  There is no sense in which this description is =
abstract, and
> I=E2=80=99d prefer that we not try to say it is, because that gives a rea=
der an
> expectation that it will be high-level, and perhaps even non-normative.  =
Maybe
> this?:
>
> NEW
>    This section provides details of the operation of the tcpcrypt protoco=
l.
>    The wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.
> END
>
> 2. In Section 7 (IANA), you say:
>
>    Tcpcrypt's TEP identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA's
>    "TCP encryption protocol identifiers" registry under the
>    "Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry
>
> I can find no such registry.  Can you help me here, maybe give me a URL?
>
> Also, with respect to the new =E2=80=9Ctcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry:
>
>    Future assignments are to be made under the "RFC Required" policy
>
> Note that that policy allows for assignments to be made in any RFC stream=
,
> which includes the IRTF, the IAB, and the Independent Stream.  Do you rea=
lly
> want people to be able to send documents to the Independent Stream Editor=
, and
> to have them published and make assignments with minimal review?
>
> You might consider whether =E2=80=9CIETF Review=E2=80=9D is more appropri=
ate.  That allows RFCs
> of any type (Standards Track, Informational, Experimental, BCP), but requ=
ires
> that they be in the IETF stream and have a formal IETF last call.
>
> It will also help IANA if you make it clear what the valid range of value=
s is
> for the =E2=80=9CValue=E2=80=9D column.  Is 0x0000 valid?  Is 0xFFFF the =
maximum?  Explicitly
> saying that values must be in the range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive will b=
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> helpful.  (I say this with particular note that you changed how the Value=
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Dear Daniel,

thank you for performing this review. The following changes will be
implemented in version 9 of this I-D, to be released on Monday 11/13.
In particular,


Change the last paragraph in section 4,
from:
   The above threats may be mitigated by requiring the use of an AAA
   framework for all users to access the I2NSF environment. This could
   be further enhanced by requiring attestation to be used to detect
   changes to the I2NSF environment by authorized parties.

to:
   The use of authentication, authorization, accounting, and audit
   mechanisms is recommended for all users and applications to access
   the I2NSF environment. This can be further enhanced by requiring
   attestation to be used to detect changes to the I2NSF environment
   by authorized parties. The characteristics of these procedures will
   define the level of assurance of the I2NSF environment.

Change section 6.1
from:
6.1.  Network Connecting I2NSF Users and the I2NSF Controller

   ...
   Upon successful authentication, a trusted connection between the
   user and the I2NSF Controller (or an endpoint designated by it) will
   be established.  All traffic to and from the NSF environment ...

to:
6.1. Network Connecting I2NSF Users and the I2NSF Controller

   ...
   Upon successful authentication, a trusted connection between the
   user and the I2NSF Controller (or an endpoint designated by it) will
   be established. This means that a direct, physical point-to-point
   connection, with physical access restricted according to access
   control, must be used. All traffic to and from the NSF environment...

Change 6.2:
from:
6.2.  Network Connecting the I2NSF Controller and NSFs
   ...

to:
6.2.  Network Connecting the I2NSF Controller and NSFs

   ...
   Therefore, the transport mechanism used to carry the control messages
   and monitoring information should provide reliable message delivery.
   TCP is the obvious current choice, but others such as Multipath TCP
   (MPTCP) and the Stream Control Transmission Protocol (SCTP) would
   be applicable as well.  Latency requirements for control message delivery
   must also be evaluated.
   ...
   I2NSF needs to rely on the use of standard I2NSF interfaces to
   properly verify peer identities (e.g., through an AAA framework).
   The implementations of identity management functions, as well as
   the AAA framework, are out of scope for I2NSF.

to:
   ...
   Therefore, the transport mechanism used to carry management data and
   information must be secure. It does not have to be a reliable
   transport; rather, a transport-independent reliable messaging
   mechanism is required, where communication can be performed reliably
   (e.g., by establishing end-to-end communication sessions and by
   introducing explicit acknowledgement of messages into the
   communication flow). Latency requirements for control message
   delivery must also be evaluated. Note that monitoring does not
   require reliable transport.
   ...
   The network connection between the I2NSF Controller and NSFs will
   use the trusted connection mechanisms described in section 6.1.
   Following these mechanisms, the connections need to rely on the use
   of properly verified peer identities (e.g., through an AAA
   framework). The implementations of identity management functions, as
   well as the AAA framework, are out of scope for I2NSF.

In addition, please see other changes to this thread (yesterday and this
morning, local time Singapore)

best regards,
John

On Tue, Oct 24, 2017 at 3:48 PM, Daniel Franke <dafranke@akamai.com> wrote:

> Reviewer: Daniel Franke
> Review result: Not Ready
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
> comments
> were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
> Document
> editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last
> call
> comments.
>
> This document is too broad and too vague for any reasonable security
> review to
> be possible. It expresses a desire to define a framework which satisfies
> certain requirements and use cases, but does not actually define anything
> concrete. At its most specific, the document gives parametricity
> constraints
> that future definitions must satisfy, such as being agnostic to network
> topology. This doesn't give me much to go on.
>
> The security considerations section is brief, calling out the need for
> access
> control and for protecting the confidentiality and integrity of data.
> Again,
> with so few specifics, there's not much more to be said.
>
> I do not think it is useful to anyone to publish this document as an RFC,
> not
> even an informational one. It is perfectly fine, when specifying an
> intricate
> suite of protocols, to have a separate document that gives a broad
> architectural overview of them all without delving into the specifics
> necessary
> for implementation. RFC 4251, which outlines the SSH protocol, is a good
> example of this. But, crucially, RFC 4251 was published simultaneously with
> 4252-4256, which provided all those specifics. This document has nothing
> similar as a companion; everything it describes is simply aspirational. I
> do
> not see any value in publishing an RFC full of unfulfilled aspirations.
>
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John

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erforming this review. The following changes will be<br>implemented in vers=
ion 9 of this I-D, to be released on Monday 11/13.</div><div>In particular,=
<br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Change the last paragraph in s=
ection 4,</div><div>from:</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 The above threats may be m=
itigated by requiring the use of an AAA<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 framework for all u=
sers to access the I2NSF environment. This could<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 be further=
 enhanced by requiring attestation to be used to detect<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 cha=
nges to the I2NSF environment by authorized parties.<br></div><div><br></di=
v><div>to:</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 The use of authentication, authorization,=
 accounting, and audit<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 mechanisms is recommended for all us=
ers and applications to access<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 the I2NSF environment. This =
can be further enhanced by requiring<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 attestation to be used=
 to detect changes to the I2NSF environment<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 by authorized p=
arties. The characteristics of these procedures will<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 define=
 the level of assurance of the I2NSF environment.<br></div><div><br></div><=
div>Change section 6.1</div><div>from:</div><div>6.1.=C2=A0 Network Connect=
ing I2NSF Users and the I2NSF Controller</div><div><br></div><div>=C2=A0=C2=
=A0 ...</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 Upon successful authentication, a trusted co=
nnection between the<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 user and the I2NSF Controller (or an e=
ndpoint designated by it) will<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 be established.=C2=A0 All tr=
affic to and from the NSF environment ...</div><div><br></div><div>to:</div=
><div>6.1. Network Connecting I2NSF Users and the I2NSF Controller<br>=C2=
=A0<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 ...=C2=A0<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 Upon successful authenticatio=
n, a trusted connection between the<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 user and the I2NSF Cont=
roller (or an endpoint designated by it) will<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 be establishe=
d. This means that a direct, physical point-to-point<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 connec=
tion, with physical access restricted according to access<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 c=
ontrol, must be used. All traffic to and from the NSF environment...<br></d=
iv><div><br></div><div>Change 6.2:</div><div>from:</div><div>6.2.=C2=A0 Net=
work Connecting the I2NSF Controller and NSFs</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 ...</d=
iv><div><br></div><div>to:<br></div><div>6.2.=C2=A0 Network Connecting the =
I2NSF Controller and NSFs<br>=C2=A0<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 ...<br></div><div>=C2=
=A0=C2=A0 Therefore, the transport mechanism used to carry the control mess=
ages<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 and monitoring information should provide reliable mes=
sage delivery.<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 TCP is the obvious current choice, but other=
s such as Multipath TCP <br>=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0(MPTCP) and the Stream Contro=
l Transmission Protocol (SCTP) would <br>=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0be applicable as=
 well.=C2=A0 Latency requirements for control message delivery<br>=C2=A0=C2=
=A0 must also be evaluated.</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 ...</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=
=A0 I2NSF needs to rely on the use of standard I2NSF interfaces to<br>=C2=
=A0=C2=A0 properly verify peer identities (e.g., through an AAA framework).=
<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 The implementations of identity management functions, as w=
ell as<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 the AAA framework, are out of scope for I2NSF.<br>=
=C2=A0</div><div>to:</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 ...</div><div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0=
 Therefore, the transport mechanism used to carry management data and<br>=
=C2=A0=C2=A0 information must be secure. It does not have to be a reliable<=
br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 transport; rather, a transport-independent reliable messagi=
ng<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 mechanism is required, where communication can be perfor=
med reliably<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 (e.g., by establishing end-to-end communicatio=
n sessions and by<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 introducing explicit acknowledgement of m=
essages into the<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 communication flow). Latency requirements =
for control message<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 delivery must also be evaluated. Note t=
hat monitoring does not<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 require reliable transport.</div><d=
iv>=C2=A0=C2=A0 ...</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0 The network connection between t=
he I2NSF Controller and NSFs will<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 use the trusted connectio=
n mechanisms described in section 6.1.<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 Following these mech=
anisms, the connections need to rely on the use <br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 of properl=
y verified peer identities (e.g., through an AAA<br>=C2=A0=C2=A0 framework)=
.=C2=A0The implementations of identity management functions, as<br>=C2=A0=
=C2=A0 well as the AAA framework, are out of scope for I2NSF.<br></div><div=
><br></div></div><div>In addition, please see other changes to this thread =
(yesterday and this</div><div>morning, local time Singapore)<br></div><div>=
<br></div><div>best regards,</div><div>John</div></div><div class=3D"gmail_=
extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Tue, Oct 24, 2017 at 3:48 PM, Dani=
el Franke <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:dafranke@akamai.com" targ=
et=3D"_blank">dafranke@akamai.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote clas=
s=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;pad=
ding-left:1ex">Reviewer: Daniel Franke<br>
Review result: Not Ready<br>
<br>
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate&#39;s ong=
oing<br>
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comm=
ents<br>
were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Docu=
ment<br>
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last =
call<br>
comments.<br>
<br>
This document is too broad and too vague for any reasonable security review=
 to<br>
be possible. It expresses a desire to define a framework which satisfies<br=
>
certain requirements and use cases, but does not actually define anything<b=
r>
concrete. At its most specific, the document gives parametricity constraint=
s<br>
that future definitions must satisfy, such as being agnostic to network<br>
topology. This doesn&#39;t give me much to go on.<br>
<br>
The security considerations section is brief, calling out the need for acce=
ss<br>
control and for protecting the confidentiality and integrity of data. Again=
,<br>
with so few specifics, there&#39;s not much more to be said.<br>
<br>
I do not think it is useful to anyone to publish this document as an RFC, n=
ot<br>
even an informational one. It is perfectly fine, when specifying an intrica=
te<br>
suite of protocols, to have a separate document that gives a broad<br>
architectural overview of them all without delving into the specifics neces=
sary<br>
for implementation. RFC 4251, which outlines the SSH protocol, is a good<br=
>
example of this. But, crucially, RFC 4251 was published simultaneously with=
<br>
4252-4256, which provided all those specifics. This document has nothing<br=
>
similar as a companion; everything it describes is simply aspirational. I d=
o<br>
not see any value in publishing an RFC full of unfulfilled aspirations.<br>
<br>
______________________________<wbr>_________________<br>
I2nsf mailing list<br>
<a href=3D"mailto:I2nsf@ietf.org">I2nsf@ietf.org</a><br>
<a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf" target=3D"_blank" r=
el=3D"noreferrer">https://www.ietf.org/mailman/<wbr>listinfo/i2nsf</a><br>
</blockquote></div><br><br clear=3D"all"><br>-- <br><div class=3D"gmail_sig=
nature" data-smartmail=3D"gmail_signature"><div>regards,</div><div>John</di=
v></div>
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is Ready.

This document is a straightforward update of RFC 5653:

1. The draft modifies GSSException to support an embedded error token; as
specified in RFC 5653 a JGSS application throwing a GSSException could
not return an error token, a functional shortcoming in comparison with
the C bindings of GSS-API (see RFC 2744). The embedded error token
corrects this shortcoming. The document describes a compatibility strategy
for new JGSS programs that run with both RFC5653 and RFC5653bis Java
bindings.

2. The draft removes stream-based GSSContext methods.  These methods
cannot be implemented correctly where tokens have no self-framing or the
library has no knowledge of the token format.  The document states that
applications using input and output streams as the means to convey
authentication and per-message GSS-API tokens should also define the wire
protocol.  The reviewer infers that new applications using this design
strategy should be compatible with RFC5653 bindings, but that is not
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<pre class=3D"wiki">I have reviewed this document as part of the security d=
irectorate's =0A=
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the =0A=
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the =0A=
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat =0A=
these comments just like any other last call comments.=0A=
=0A=
The summary of the review is Ready.<br><br>This document is a straightforwa=
rd update of RFC 5653:<br><br>1.&nbsp;The draft modifies GSSException to su=
pport an embedded error token; as <br>specified in RFC 5653 a JGSS applicat=
ion throwing a GSSException could <br>not return an error token, a function=
al shortcoming in comparison with <br>the C bindings of GSS-API (see RFC 27=
44). The embedded error token<br>corrects this shortcoming. The document de=
scribes a compatibility strategy <br>for new JGSS programs that run with bo=
th RFC5653 and RFC5653bis Java <br>bindings. <pre class=3D"wiki">2. The dra=
ft removes stream-based GSSContext methods.  These methods <br>cannot be im=
plemented correctly where tokens have no self-framing or the <br>library ha=
s no knowledge of the token format.  The document states that<br>applicatio=
ns using input and output streams as the means to convey <br>authentication=
 and per-message GSS-API tokens should also define the wire<br>protocol.  T=
he reviewer infers that new applications using this design<br>strategy shou=
ld be compatible with RFC5653 bindings, but that is not <br>explicitly stat=
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Hilary: 

 

Your secdir-review was done on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-08 back in
January.   The WG and authors have been slow to respond to your careful
comments.  The I2RS WG appreciates your comments. 

 

The illustrative example in this draft have been reduced to OSPF.   Would
review the improved security considerations in this draft
(draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-12.txt)?  The security considerations
sections were added in -11.txt.   

 

This shepherd believes we have resolved the security issues you raised.
Please let me know if you agree. 

 

Susan Hares

I2rs document shepherd 


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Thanks for the review!

Barry Leiba wrote:
> Reviewer: Barry Leiba
> Review result: Has Issues
> 
> I’ve looked at Stephen Kent’s review and the discussion thereof, and have
> little to add to that.  A couple of small things:
> 
> 1. Section 3 says that the subsections “describes the tcpcrypt protocol at an
> abstract level.”  There is no sense in which this description is abstract, and
> I’d prefer that we not try to say it is, because that gives a reader an
> expectation that it will be high-level, and perhaps even non-normative.  Maybe
> this?:
> 
> NEW
>    This section provides details of the operation of the tcpcrypt protocol.
>    The wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.
> END

Good point, thanks -- for the next draft I've gone with
something very similar:

   This section describes the operation of the tcpcrypt protocol.  The
   wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.

> 2. In Section 7 (IANA), you say:
> 
>    Tcpcrypt's TEP identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA's
>    "TCP encryption protocol identifiers" registry under the
>    "Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry
> 
> I can find no such registry.  Can you help me here, maybe give me a URL?

Right, that registry is defined in TCP-ENO, which I
understand would be published in tandem with this draft.
Does that solve the problem, or ought we provide a reference
to TCP-ENO here?

For now, I've provided at least a hint by mentioning TCP-ENO
at the beginning of that sentence:

   For use with TCP-ENO's negotiation mechanism, tcpcrypt's TEP
   identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA's "TCP encryption
   protocol identifiers" registry under the "Transmission Control
   Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry, as in Table 4 below.  The
	 [...]

> Also, with respect to the new “tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry:
> 
>    Future assignments are to be made under the "RFC Required" policy
> 
> Note that that policy allows for assignments to be made in any RFC stream,
> which includes the IRTF, the IAB, and the Independent Stream.  Do you really
> want people to be able to send documents to the Independent Stream Editor, and
> to have them published and make assignments with minimal review?
> 
> You might consider whether “IETF Review” is more appropriate.  That allows RFCs
> of any type (Standards Track, Informational, Experimental, BCP), but requires
> that they be in the IETF stream and have a formal IETF last call.

Following the discussion about assignment policy in another
thread, I've updated this to use the same policy as TCP-ENO.
The paragraph on the "tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry now
reads:

   In Section 4.1, this document defines "sym_cipher" specifiers in the
   range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive, for which IANA is to maintain a new
   "tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry under the "Transmission Control
   Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry.  The initial values for this
   registry are given in Table 5 below.  The AEAD algorithms named there
   are defined in Section 6.  Future assignments are to be made upon
   satisfying either of two policies defined in [RFC8126]: "IETF Review"
   or (for non-IETF stream specifications) "Expert Review with RFC
   Required."  IANA will furthermore provide early allocation [RFC7120]
   to facilitate testing before RFCs are finalized.


> It will also help IANA if you make it clear what the valid range of values is
> for the “Value” column.  Is 0x0000 valid?  Is 0xFFFF the maximum?  Explicitly
> saying that values must be in the range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive will be
> helpful.  (I say this with particular note that you changed how the Value field
> is specified between -07 and -09, so this clearly has not even been clear to
> the spec developers.)

Thanks, I've added that as you can see above.

daniel


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All responses perfect; thanks.  I don=E2=80=99t think there=E2=80=99s a nee=
d for a formal
citation to TCP-ENO for the registry, as it won=E2=80=99t be needed once th=
e
registry is created.  It=E2=80=99s only needed for review now, so people li=
ke me
don=E2=80=99t scratch our heads.

Carry on...

Barry


On Fri, Nov 17, 2017 at 12:16 AM Daniel B Giffin <dbg@scs.stanford.edu>
wrote:

> Thanks for the review!
>
> Barry Leiba wrote:
> > Reviewer: Barry Leiba
> > Review result: Has Issues
> >
> > I=E2=80=99ve looked at Stephen Kent=E2=80=99s review and the discussion=
 thereof, and have
> > little to add to that.  A couple of small things:
> >
> > 1. Section 3 says that the subsections =E2=80=9Cdescribes the tcpcrypt =
protocol
> at an
> > abstract level.=E2=80=9D  There is no sense in which this description i=
s
> abstract, and
> > I=E2=80=99d prefer that we not try to say it is, because that gives a r=
eader an
> > expectation that it will be high-level, and perhaps even non-normative.
> Maybe
> > this?:
> >
> > NEW
> >    This section provides details of the operation of the tcpcrypt
> protocol.
> >    The wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.
> > END
>
> Good point, thanks -- for the next draft I've gone with
> something very similar:
>
>    This section describes the operation of the tcpcrypt protocol.  The
>    wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.
>
> > 2. In Section 7 (IANA), you say:
> >
> >    Tcpcrypt's TEP identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA's
> >    "TCP encryption protocol identifiers" registry under the
> >    "Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry
> >
> > I can find no such registry.  Can you help me here, maybe give me a URL=
?
>
> Right, that registry is defined in TCP-ENO, which I
> understand would be published in tandem with this draft.
> Does that solve the problem, or ought we provide a reference
> to TCP-ENO here?
>
> For now, I've provided at least a hint by mentioning TCP-ENO
> at the beginning of that sentence:
>
>    For use with TCP-ENO's negotiation mechanism, tcpcrypt's TEP
>    identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA's "TCP encryption
>    protocol identifiers" registry under the "Transmission Control
>    Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry, as in Table 4 below.  The
>          [...]
>
> > Also, with respect to the new =E2=80=9Ctcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registr=
y:
> >
> >    Future assignments are to be made under the "RFC Required" policy
> >
> > Note that that policy allows for assignments to be made in any RFC
> stream,
> > which includes the IRTF, the IAB, and the Independent Stream.  Do you
> really
> > want people to be able to send documents to the Independent Stream
> Editor, and
> > to have them published and make assignments with minimal review?
> >
> > You might consider whether =E2=80=9CIETF Review=E2=80=9D is more approp=
riate.  That
> allows RFCs
> > of any type (Standards Track, Informational, Experimental, BCP), but
> requires
> > that they be in the IETF stream and have a formal IETF last call.
>
> Following the discussion about assignment policy in another
> thread, I've updated this to use the same policy as TCP-ENO.
> The paragraph on the "tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry now
> reads:
>
>    In Section 4.1, this document defines "sym_cipher" specifiers in the
>    range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive, for which IANA is to maintain a new
>    "tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm" registry under the "Transmission Control
>    Protocol (TCP) Parameters" registry.  The initial values for this
>    registry are given in Table 5 below.  The AEAD algorithms named there
>    are defined in Section 6.  Future assignments are to be made upon
>    satisfying either of two policies defined in [RFC8126]: "IETF Review"
>    or (for non-IETF stream specifications) "Expert Review with RFC
>    Required."  IANA will furthermore provide early allocation [RFC7120]
>    to facilitate testing before RFCs are finalized.
>
>
> > It will also help IANA if you make it clear what the valid range of
> values is
> > for the =E2=80=9CValue=E2=80=9D column.  Is 0x0000 valid?  Is 0xFFFF th=
e maximum?
> Explicitly
> > saying that values must be in the range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive will
> be
> > helpful.  (I say this with particular note that you changed how the
> Value field
> > is specified between -07 and -09, so this clearly has not even been
> clear to
> > the spec developers.)
>
> Thanks, I've added that as you can see above.
>
> daniel
>
> --
Barry
--
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<div dir=3D"auto">All responses perfect; thanks.=C2=A0 I don=E2=80=99t thin=
k there=E2=80=99s a need for a formal citation to TCP-ENO for the registry,=
 as it won=E2=80=99t be needed once the registry is created.=C2=A0 It=E2=80=
=99s only needed for review now, so people like me don=E2=80=99t scratch ou=
r heads.</div><div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Carry on...</di=
v><div dir=3D"auto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Barry</div><div dir=3D"auto=
"><br></div><div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div>On Fri, Nov 17, 2017 a=
t 12:16 AM Daniel B Giffin &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:dbg@scs.stanford.edu">dbg@=
scs.stanford.edu</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" =
style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Tha=
nks for the review!<br>
<br>
Barry Leiba wrote:<br>
&gt; Reviewer: Barry Leiba<br>
&gt; Review result: Has Issues<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; I=E2=80=99ve looked at Stephen Kent=E2=80=99s review and the discussio=
n thereof, and have<br>
&gt; little to add to that.=C2=A0 A couple of small things:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; 1. Section 3 says that the subsections =E2=80=9Cdescribes the tcpcrypt=
 protocol at an<br>
&gt; abstract level.=E2=80=9D=C2=A0 There is no sense in which this descrip=
tion is abstract, and<br>
&gt; I=E2=80=99d prefer that we not try to say it is, because that gives a =
reader an<br>
&gt; expectation that it will be high-level, and perhaps even non-normative=
.=C2=A0 Maybe<br>
&gt; this?:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; NEW<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This section provides details of the operation of the tcp=
crypt protocol.<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 The wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4=
.<br>
&gt; END<br>
<br>
Good point, thanks -- for the next draft I&#39;ve gone with<br>
something very similar:<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This section describes the operation of the tcpcrypt protocol.=
=C2=A0 The<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0wire format of all messages is specified in Section 4.<br>
<br>
&gt; 2. In Section 7 (IANA), you say:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Tcpcrypt&#39;s TEP identifiers will need to be incorporat=
ed in IANA&#39;s<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 &quot;TCP encryption protocol identifiers&quot; registry =
under the<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 &quot;Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) Parameters&quot=
; registry<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; I can find no such registry.=C2=A0 Can you help me here, maybe give me=
 a URL?<br>
<br>
Right, that registry is defined in TCP-ENO, which I<br>
understand would be published in tandem with this draft.<br>
Does that solve the problem, or ought we provide a reference<br>
to TCP-ENO here?<br>
<br>
For now, I&#39;ve provided at least a hint by mentioning TCP-ENO<br>
at the beginning of that sentence:<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0For use with TCP-ENO&#39;s negotiation mechanism, tcpcrypt&#39=
;s TEP<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0identifiers will need to be incorporated in IANA&#39;s &quot;T=
CP encryption<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0protocol identifiers&quot; registry under the &quot;Transmissi=
on Control<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Protocol (TCP) Parameters&quot; registry, as in Table 4 below.=
=C2=A0 The<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0[...]<br>
<br>
&gt; Also, with respect to the new =E2=80=9Ctcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm&quot; r=
egistry:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Future assignments are to be made under the &quot;RFC Req=
uired&quot; policy<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; Note that that policy allows for assignments to be made in any RFC str=
eam,<br>
&gt; which includes the IRTF, the IAB, and the Independent Stream.=C2=A0 Do=
 you really<br>
&gt; want people to be able to send documents to the Independent Stream Edi=
tor, and<br>
&gt; to have them published and make assignments with minimal review?<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt; You might consider whether =E2=80=9CIETF Review=E2=80=9D is more appro=
priate.=C2=A0 That allows RFCs<br>
&gt; of any type (Standards Track, Informational, Experimental, BCP), but r=
equires<br>
&gt; that they be in the IETF stream and have a formal IETF last call.<br>
<br>
Following the discussion about assignment policy in another<br>
thread, I&#39;ve updated this to use the same policy as TCP-ENO.<br>
The paragraph on the &quot;tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm&quot; registry now<br>
reads:<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0In Section 4.1, this document defines &quot;sym_cipher&quot; s=
pecifiers in the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive, for which IANA is to maintai=
n a new<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0&quot;tcpcrypt AEAD Algorithm&quot; registry under the &quot;T=
ransmission Control<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Protocol (TCP) Parameters&quot; registry.=C2=A0 The initial va=
lues for this<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0registry are given in Table 5 below.=C2=A0 The AEAD algorithms=
 named there<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0are defined in Section 6.=C2=A0 Future assignments are to be m=
ade upon<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0satisfying either of two policies defined in [RFC8126]: &quot;=
IETF Review&quot;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0or (for non-IETF stream specifications) &quot;Expert Review wi=
th RFC<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Required.&quot;=C2=A0 IANA will furthermore provide early allo=
cation [RFC7120]<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0to facilitate testing before RFCs are finalized.<br>
<br>
<br>
&gt; It will also help IANA if you make it clear what the valid range of va=
lues is<br>
&gt; for the =E2=80=9CValue=E2=80=9D column.=C2=A0 Is 0x0000 valid?=C2=A0 I=
s 0xFFFF the maximum?=C2=A0 Explicitly<br>
&gt; saying that values must be in the range 0x0001 to 0xFFFF inclusive wil=
l be<br>
&gt; helpful.=C2=A0 (I say this with particular note that you changed how t=
he Value field<br>
&gt; is specified between -07 and -09, so this clearly has not even been cl=
ear to<br>
&gt; the spec developers.)<br>
<br>
Thanks, I&#39;ve added that as you can see above.<br>
<br>
daniel<br>
<br>
</blockquote></div></div><div dir=3D"ltr">-- <br></div><div class=3D"gmail_=
signature" data-smartmail=3D"gmail_signature">Barry<br>--<br>Barry Leiba =
=C2=A0(<a href=3D"mailto:barryleiba@computer.org" target=3D"_blank">barryle=
iba@computer.org</a>)<br><a href=3D"http://internetmessagingtechnology.org/=
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Reviewer: Barry Leiba
Review result: Ready

Version -10 (and the review discussion) addresses all my comments about version -09; thanks.


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Dear all,

The document remains ready. All my previous comments have been addressed.

Sincerely,
Watson Ladd


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Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Ready

The document seems ready with two minor editorial nits:

1. The first sentence is as follows:
  Often, servers generate various security tokens (e.g.  HTTP cookies, OAuth
  [RFC6749] tokens) If you reference the OAuth RFC, you should also reference
  the HTTP cookie RFC (RFC 6265)

2. The term "bound token" appears in section 2 without any definition. Perhaps
add something like "An application token contained in a token binding message
is called a bound token"

Other than that, the document is well written and the security issues are dealt
with well in sections 4 and 5 as well as the security considerations section
(7).


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Security review of
Transport Layer Security (TLS) Extension for Token Binding Protocol  Negotiation
draft-ietf-tokbind-negotiation-10

Do not be alarmed.  I have reviewed this document as part of the
security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily
for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and
WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

 From the abstract "This document specifies a Transport Layer Security
(TLS) extension for the negotiation of Token Binding protocol version
and key parameters."

Token binding assures that the necessary authentication information
for a TLS channel is bound solely to that one channel.  As a
preliminary to that binding, the two participants must agree on a
protocol version for establishing a token and the key parameters.  The
TLS extension for this negotiation in the HELLO messages is the
subject of the document under review.

The extension seems to me to be necessary, sufficient, secure, and Ready.

Hilarie


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

This document describes how to leverage the Automatic Control Plane (ACP)
in Automatic Networks (AN) to provide stable and secure connectivity for
Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) processes. The document is
intended to be *informational*.

The document is well written and has an adequate Security Considerations
section. I have no issues with this document. Minor nit: "encryption
protected" -> "encrypted."
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-- Magnus

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><br>I have reviewed this document as part of the security =
directorate&#39;s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being process=
ed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of th=
e security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat thes=
e comments just like any other last call comments.<div><br></div><div>This =
document describes how to leverage the Automatic Control Plane (ACP) in Aut=
omatic Networks (AN) to provide stable and secure connectivity for Operatio=
ns, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) processes. The document is intende=
d to be *informational*.</div><div><br></div><div>The document is well writ=
ten and has an adequate Security Considerations section. I have no issues w=
ith this document. Minor nit: &quot;encryption protected&quot; -&gt; &quot;=
encrypted.&quot;<br clear=3D"all"></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra">-- <br><=
div class=3D"gmail_signature">-- Magnus</div>
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Correcting email address.

On Sun, Nov 26, 2017 at 9:47 PM, Magnus Nystr=C3=B6m <magnusn@gmail.com> wr=
ote:

>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security are=
a
> directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments jus=
t
> like any other last call comments.
>
> This document describes how to leverage the Automatic Control Plane (ACP)
> in Automatic Networks (AN) to provide stable and secure connectivity for
> Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) processes. The document =
is
> intended to be *informational*.
>
> The document is well written and has an adequate Security Considerations
> section. I have no issues with this document. Minor nit: "encryption
> protected" -> "encrypted."
> --
> -- Magnus
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<div dir=3D"ltr">Correcting email address.<br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><b=
r><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sun, Nov 26, 2017 at 9:47 PM, Magnus Nystr=
=C3=B6m <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:magnusn@gmail.com" target=
=3D"_blank">magnusn@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D=
"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding=
-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><br>I have reviewed this document as part of th=
e security directorate&#39;s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents be=
ing processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the be=
nefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should=
 treat these comments just like any other last call comments.<div><br></div=
><div>This document describes how to leverage the Automatic Control Plane (=
ACP) in Automatic Networks (AN) to provide stable and secure connectivity f=
or Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) processes. The document=
 is intended to be *informational*.</div><div><br></div><div>The document i=
s well written and has an adequate Security Considerations section. I have =
no issues with this document. Minor nit: &quot;encryption protected&quot; -=
&gt; &quot;encrypted.&quot;<span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"#888888"><=
br clear=3D"all"></font></span></div><span class=3D"HOEnZb"><font color=3D"=
#888888"><div class=3D"gmail_extra">-- <br><div class=3D"m_-814403069071135=
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Reviewer: Adam Montville
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document is ready.

A very straightforward, short document defining a new value in
SIGNATURE_HASH_ALGORITHMS notification of IKE, so that non-hashing signature
methods (specifically the Edwards-curve digital signature algorithm) can be
used.

One nit: s/or/of/ in last sentence of second introduction paragraph, so that it
reads, "See section 8.5 of RFC 8032...".



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> On 27 Nov 2017, at 16:09, Adam Montville <adam.w.montville@gmail.com> =
wrote:
>=20
> Reviewer: Adam Montville
> Review result: Ready
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  =
These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area =
directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like =
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> last call comments.
>=20
> This document is ready.
>=20
> A very straightforward, short document defining a new value in
> SIGNATURE_HASH_ALGORITHMS notification of IKE, so that non-hashing =
signature
> methods (specifically the Edwards-curve digital signature algorithm) =
can be
> used.

Thanks, Adam.

>=20
> One nit: s/or/of/ in last sentence of second introduction paragraph, =
so that it
> reads, "See section 8.5 of RFC 8032=E2=80=A6=E2=80=9D

Unless something else comes up, I=E2=80=99ll leave this to AUTH48 =
(although the RFC Editor are likely to find it and fix it anyway).

Yoav=


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Review instructions and related resources are at:
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For telechat 2017-11-30

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Alan DeKok             2017-10-09 draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09
Daniel Gillmor         2017-10-17 draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-03
Watson Ladd           R2017-10-19 draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-17
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef    R2017-10-11 draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-09

For telechat 2017-12-14

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Shaun Cooley           2017-10-11 draft-ietf-grow-bgp-gshut-12
Phillip Hallam-Baker   2017-10-13 draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22
Catherine Meadows      2017-10-12 draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06
Russ Mundy             2017-11-30 draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-central-epe-07
Hilarie Orman         R2017-12-11 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13
Radia Perlman          2017-12-11 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18
Takeshi Takahashi     R2017-06-30 draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09
Klaas Wierenga        R2017-11-30 draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15

Last calls:

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
John Bradley           None       draft-ietf-acme-acme-08
Daniel Migault         2017-12-08 draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05
Matthew Miller         2017-12-08 draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-13
Russ Mundy             2017-09-14 draft-spinosa-urn-lex-12
Sandra Murphy          2017-11-30 draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04
Magnus Nystrom         2017-11-26 draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-07
Hilarie Orman          2017-11-27 draft-ietf-tokbind-negotiation-10
Derrell Piper          2017-11-23 draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2-21
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef    R2017-12-04 draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
Tina Tsou             R2017-06-29 draft-ietf-trill-arp-optimization-09
Tom Yu                 2017-02-20 draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Tim Polk
  Vincent Roca
  Kyle Rose
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Due to my mistake, the last assignment email did include reviews which were already done, but which were not marked as complete in the datatracker. I now marked them as done, and this version replaces the one send earlier. 

Review instructions and related resources are at:
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For telechat 2017-11-30

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Alan DeKok             2017-10-09 draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09
Daniel Gillmor         2017-10-17 draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-03
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef    R2017-10-11 draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-09

For telechat 2017-12-14

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Shaun Cooley           2017-10-11 draft-ietf-grow-bgp-gshut-12
Phillip Hallam-Baker   2017-10-13 draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22
Catherine Meadows      2017-10-12 draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06
Russ Mundy             2017-11-30 draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-central-epe-07
Hilarie Orman         R2017-12-11 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13
Radia Perlman          2017-12-11 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18
Takeshi Takahashi     R2017-06-30 draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09
Klaas Wierenga        R2017-11-30 draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15

Last calls:

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
John Bradley           None       draft-ietf-acme-acme-08
Daniel Migault         2017-12-08 draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05
Matthew Miller         2017-12-08 draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-13
Russ Mundy             2017-09-14 draft-spinosa-urn-lex-12
Sandra Murphy          2017-11-30 draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04
Derrell Piper          2017-11-23 draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2-21
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef    R2017-12-04 draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
Tina Tsou             R2017-06-29 draft-ietf-trill-arp-optimization-09
Tom Yu                 2017-02-20 draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Tim Polk
  Vincent Roca
  Kyle Rose
  Joseph Salowey
  Rich Salz
  Stefan Santesson
  Yaron Sheffer
  Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
  Melinda Shore
  Robert Sparks


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Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The document defines a YANG data model that defines service configuration
elements that can be used in communication protocols between customers
and network operators. Those elements can also be used as input to
automated control and configuration applications.

The authors addressed my comments on version -05 of the document.
I have not further comments on this version of the draft.

Regards.
 Rifaat



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Reviewer: Derrell Piper
Review result: ready with nits

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's =
ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments =
just
like any other last call comments.

This document describes a new version of tracroute designed for =
multicast.  In
the multicast environment, traceroute functions in reverse with each =
router on
the path back towards the client adding diagnostic information along the =
way.
This information can be used to diagnose a variety of network problems,
including packet loss (congestion) and configuration problems (TTL).

The security considerations section discusses a variety of requirements =
and
suggestions for multicast routers and the protocol includes an =
ADMIN_PROHIB
flag which can be used at a border router to prevent multicast =
traceroute from
being able to probe network topology or to perform traffic analysis.

This appears to be a useful diagnostic utility and the obvious security
concerns seem to have been addressed.

nits:

page 33, section 9.3 and 9.4

MAY should be capitalized in these two sections.

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[Apologies for the repost, hopefully this one doesn=E2=80=99t wrap.  I =
also didn=E2=80=99t
include the =E2=80=9C.all=E2=80=9D suffix on the previous email.]

Reviewer: Derrell Piper
Review result: ready with nits

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes a new version of tracroute designed for
multicast.  In the multicast environment, traceroute functions in
reverse with each router on the path back towards the client adding
diagnostic information along the way.  This information can be used to
diagnose a variety of network problems, including packet loss
(congestion) and configuration problems (TTL).

The security considerations section discusses a variety of requirements
and suggestions for multicast routers and the protocol includes an
ADMIN_PROHIB flag which can be used at a border router to prevent
multicast traceroute from being able to probe network topology or to
perform traffic analysis.

This appears to be a useful diagnostic utility and the obvious security
concerns seem to have been addressed.

nits:

page 33, section 9.3 and 9.4

MAY should be capitalized in these two sections.

Derrell


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Summary:  No security issues found

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

I am not an expert at the "YANG model".  This document introduces a YANG
model to represent networks and topologies.  As they point out in the
security considerations section, if there was no authentication of network
management traffic, people could do bad things, but the assumption is that
this will run over TLS or SSH.  Therefore, no security issues are raised by
this document.

Radia

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last call comments.</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br><=
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resent networks and topologies.=C2=A0 As they point out in the security con=
siderations section, if there was no authentication of network management t=
raffic, people could do bad things, but the assumption is that this will ru=
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ocument.</span></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div=
><div><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">Radia</span></div><div><span style=
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Review instructions and related resources are at:
http://tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview

For telechat 2017-11-30

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Alan DeKok             2017-10-09 draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09
Daniel Gillmor         2017-10-17 draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-03

For telechat 2017-12-14

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Shaun Cooley           2017-10-11 draft-ietf-grow-bgp-gshut-12
Phillip Hallam-Baker   2017-10-13 draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22
Catherine Meadows      2017-10-12 draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06
Russ Mundy             2017-11-30 draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-central-epe-07
Hilarie Orman         R2017-12-11 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13
Yaron Sheffer          2017-12-13 draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07
Takeshi Takahashi     R2017-06-30 draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09
Klaas Wierenga        R2017-11-30 draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15

For telechat 2018-01-11

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Sandra Murphy          2017-11-30 draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04
Tim Polk               None       draft-ietf-lwig-energy-efficient-08
Vincent Roca           None       draft-ietf-intarea-broadcast-consider-05
Kyle Rose              None       draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-10
Joseph Salowey         2017-12-12 draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10
Rich Salz              2017-12-12 draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
Stefan Santesson       2017-12-12 draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rip-06

Last calls:

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
John Bradley           None       draft-ietf-acme-acme-08
Daniel Migault         2017-12-08 draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05
Matthew Miller         2017-12-08 draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-13
Russ Mundy             2017-09-14 draft-spinosa-urn-lex-12
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef    R2017-12-04 draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
Tina Tsou             R2017-06-29 draft-ietf-trill-arp-optimization-09
Tom Yu                 2017-02-20 draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
  Melinda Shore
  Robert Sparks
  Takeshi Takahashi
  Tina Tsou
  Sean Turner
  Carl Wallace
  David Waltermire
  Samuel Weiler
  Brian Weis

