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On Fri, Mar 27, 2020 at 6:11 PM Daniel Migault via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Daniel Migault
>

Thank you for your detailed review Daniel.

<mglt>describes</mglt>
>
>    These models do not
>    require any changes to the behavior of validating resolvers, nor do
>    they impose the new key management requirements on authoritative
>    servers not involved in multi signer configurations.
>
> <mglt>
>
> I am reading the last sentence as no changes are expected for servers not
> implementing. Maybe it would be clearer to say that changes are only
> expected
> on server implementing the multi signer described in this document. Of
> course
> this is only a suggestion.
>

Either way works in my opinion, but other reviewers specifically asked us
to point out the "no changes for others" characteristic of these models, so
I'm inclined to leave this as it is.

   The following descriptions consider the case of two DNS providers,
>    but the model is generalizable to any number.


> <mglt>
>
> The only justification for the use of two is that both is once used. I
> think
> this is not really needed with the current text.
>

Yes, I agree. This is probably a remnant of an earlier version of the draft
that specifically mentioned 2 signing providers. The current text in
Section 2 applies generally to any number. I will remove this sentence.

</mglt>
>
> 2.1.1.  Model 1: Common KSK, Unique ZSK per provider
>
> <mglt>
>
> The term Unique may not be appropriated as it could be interpreted as one
> single and not two ZSKs per providers. I think that Unique here means "per
> provider independent ZSK."
>

Yes, that's what it means (unique per provider). I'm thinking about how to
clarify and reword that.

One note also, I am also balanced by considering there is always multiple
> KSKs,
> ZSKs as this could be the case between the key roll overs. On the other
> hand, I
> do not know if it makes the text more complex to read.
>

Sorry, can you elaborate? For model 2, there are always multiple KSKs (at
least 1 per provider). For model 1, there is single KSK (or KSK set, if the
zone owner is rolling or pre-publishing). The section 2 description kind of
glosses over the fact that providers could have multiple keys for the sake
of simplicity, and assumes the reader understands that. The key rollover
section describes one multi-key per provider scenario. I guess one possible
change that might address this is to replace "KSK" with "KSK set" and "ZSK"
with "ZSK set".

I am wondering if it makes sense to also consider this model with one
> provider
> if the content owner wants to keep the ownership/control of the zone.
>

I had considered mentioning that possibility for model 1. (For model 2,
this would just degenerate to a standard configuration, so it isn't worth
describing).

In the early days of the draft, Dave Blacka pointed out to me that model 1
with a single provider is essentially how the DNS root is operated today
(ICANN -> zone owner, Verisign -> signing provider). In the end, I decided
the single signing provider configuration is probably an exceptional case
that we won't see too often in the field. So I left it out, to avoid
overcomplicating the draft. But I'm open to reconsidering. (Or maybe it's
already covered implicitly because it is just the degenerate case where
N=1).

</mglt>
>
>    o  Zone owner holds the KSK, manages the DS record, and is
>       responsible for signing the DNSKEY RRset and distributing the
>       signed DNSKEY RRset to the providers.
>
>    o  Each provider has their own ZSK which is used to sign data.
>
>    o  Providers have an API that owner uses to query the ZSK public key,
>       and insert a combined DNSKEY RRset that includes both ZSKs and the
>       KSK, signed by the KSK.
>
> <mglt>
>
> I believe the text could be clearer on who generates the DNSKEY RRset and
> describe the outputs in an uniform way - that is using RRsets for both
> outputs.
>

Ok.


> The text also seems to indicate the owner directly updates the zone.


The "data content" of the zone, yes.


> While this
> is the resulting outcome, I understood the insertion to the zone as being
> performed by the provider as in some cases a signature with the ZSK may
> also be
> performed.
>

Can you elaborate on what you mean here? The providers always have to
update the zone with new signatures (by their ZSK) for incoming data
changes.

Explanation may actually be more complex then the actual change. The text I
> would propose would be around the lines (assuming I am not missing
> anything):
>
> Providers have an API to enable the owner to retrieve the ZSKs public key
> from
> the providers, generate and return the appropriated DNSKEY and RRSIG
> RRsets.
> The DNSKEY RRset contains the ZSKs of the multiple providers and the KSKs.
> Its associated RRSIG RRset contains the signature of the DNSKEY RRset with
> the
> KSKs.
>

Ok, I'm pondering. Most of this is already covered in different parts of
the draft I believe. And the first sentence of your text above is correct
for model1, but not for model 2.


>
> </mglt>
>    o  Note that even if the contents of the DNSKEY RRset don't change,
>       the Zone owner of course needs to periodically re-sign it as
>       signature expiration approaches.  The provider API is also used to
>       thus periodically redistribute the refreshed DNSKEY RRset.
>
>    o  Key rollovers need coordinated participation of the zone owner to
>       update the DNSKEY RRset (for KSK or ZSK), and the DS RRset (for
>       KSK).
>
> <mglt>
> Unless I am missing something, I believe that the API operating regularly
> could
> proceed to a key roll over in an automated way.


Yes, for the first bullet point above, the action could be fully automated
(and that is what we were expecting would happen).


> The only additional step would
> consists in the publication of the DS RRSet. I am wondering if one is a
> specific key roll over or an emergency key roll over was considered there.
>

Key roll automation is trickier if it involves the DS, although Section 8
could help if specific conditions allow.

We don't specifically call out emergency key rollovers (I'm not sure this
document needs to do that, since it should generally be clear to operators
what needs to be done).

2.1.2.  Model 2: Unique KSK and ZSK per provider
>
>    o  Each provider has their own KSK and ZSK.
>
>    o  Each provider offers an API that the Zone Owner uses to import the
>       ZSK of the other provider into their DNSKEY RRset.
>
> <mglt>
> I think "Zone Owner" was used without capital letter before.
>

Ok, will address.

In this case I believe that the information is the ZSKs public key (as
> opposed
> as the DNSKEY RRset) and that each provider is responsible of publishing
> ZSKs
> of other providers and signing those with their own KSKs and eventually
> their
> own ZSKs. Maybe this could be detailed a bit more.
>

Yes, but I'm not seeing what is not clear in the current text. I will
ponder.

It might be clarifying to specify:
> "Each provider offers an API that the zone owner to import the ZSKs public
> key
> and export the ZSKs public keys of all providers. Each provider will
> generate
> the associated DNSSEY RRset."
>
> What is unclear to me is who generates the DNSKEY RRset. I have the
> impression
> each provider is generating its own DNSKEY.


It depends.

In model 1, is is the zone owner.

In model 2, each provider  updates their DNSKEY RRset with a ZSK (public
key) imported from the other provider(s). Then independently signs the
DNSKEY RRset with their own KSK(s). I will review the current text and see
if I can make this clearer.


> s/both/all/
>

Ok.


> </mglt>
>
>
> 3.  Validating Resolver Behavior
>
[...]

>
>    o  The resolver will not accept this response.  It may still be able
>       to ultimately authenticate the name by querying other nameservers
>       for the zone until it elicits a response from one of provider A's
>       nameservers.  But it has incurred the penalty of additional
>       roundtrips with other nameservers, with the corresponding latency
>       and processing costs.  The exact number of additional roundtrips
>       depends on details of the resolver's nameserver selection
>       algorithm and the number of nameservers configured at provider B.
>
> <mglt>
>
> With the use of geographic authoritative DNS for example, I have the
> impression we
> may also have one provider is only available in from one place and not
> from the
> other thus making the resolution possible probably only possible after
> flushing
> the cache.
>

I assume the other provider(s) would still be reachable, even if they were
geographically or topologically more distant. So if a resolver's nameserver
selection algorithm in this case tends to prefer the more proximal
provider, and none of them return a validatable response, it would
eventually move on to the other providers, or fail because of an aggregate
timeout or exceeding some retry limit. I'm not sure if we need to call out
such special cases explicitly, as we have a more general description that
covers many possible cases.

<mglt>
>
> I have the impression that the resolution does not consider the DS. I think
> that some text needs to be added to mention that all KSK must appropriately
> delegated.
>

Do we need to? In the resolver behavior section, it is implied that
providers have to have a working secure delegation. I suppose we could
mention that, but the section is focussed on what is fundamentally unique
in this configuration.

The DS configuration requirements for each model are described in the model
descriptions earlier in the document.


>
> <mglt>
>
> The Zone Owner deploys a DS RRset at the
>    parent zone that contains multiple DS records, each referring to a
>    distinct provider's KSK.  Hence it does not matter which provider's
>    nameservers the resolver obtains the DNSKEY RRset from, the signed DS
>    record in each model can authenticate the associated KSK.
>
> 4.  Signing Algorithm Considerations
>
>    DNS providers participating in multi-signer models need to use a
>    common DNSSEC signing algorithm.
>
> <mglt>
> I think the text is saying that providers needs to have a common algorithm
> which does not seem correct. The text also only mentions the use of a
> single
> algorithms which I believe is maybe too restrictive. I would propose
> something
> around the following lines:
>

Yeah, good point. We can expand the text to say that each provider needs to
use a common "set" of signing algorithms.

The providers MUST use the same algorithms for signing.
>

As discussed in an earlier thread on dnsop, we decided not to use RFC
2119/8174 keywords. So "must use" or "need to use".

Even though the document is informational, I do not think this prevents
> using
> normative language. Here I would think that a RECOMMENDED might be
> appropriated.
>

See above. But if there is a new consensus on the use of 2119/8174
keywords, we could go there.


>    methods.  This could make caching on the resolver side less efficient
>    and the authoritative servers may observe higher number of queries.
>    This aspect should be considered especially in context of Aggresive
>
> <mglt>
>
> Aggressive maybe?
>

Yes.


>
> The use of mixed method seems to me outside the design of DNSSEC with the
> publication of one zone. The impact on 8198 as well as the additional
> burden
> provided on resolvers seems to me sufficient to at least strongly
> discourage
> the mixed method.
>

I think we do implicitly discourage it, by calling out the deficiencies of
this approach. But yes, we could be more explicit about it.

6.1.  Model 1: Common KSK, Unique ZSK per provider
>
>    o  Key Signing Key Rollover: In this model, the two managed DNS
>       providers share a common KSK which is held by the Zone Owner.
>
> <mglt>
> The text seems confusing as the providers do not actually share the KSK but
> instead publish a common DNSKEY RRsets with the same public part of the
> KSK.
>
> My understanding of sharing a key means that the private part is shared.
> </mglt>
>

Ok. I will clarify.


>
> To
>       initiate the rollover, the Zone Owner generates a new KSK and
>       obtains the DNSKEY RRset of each DNS provider using their
>       respective APIs.  The new KSK is added to each provider's DNSKEY
>       RRset and the RRset is re-signed with both the new and the old
>       KSK.  This new DNSKEY RRset is then transferred to each provider.
>
> <mglt>
>
> At this point the KSK cannot be used so I am wondering if the DS that
> corresponds to the new KSK should not need to be added before the new KSK
> being
> added to the DNSKEY RRset.
>

There are some caveats here. Our text describes the more common Double
Signature KSK rollover model (see RFC 6781 for details). You are describing
the "Double DS KSK Rollover". The prefatory text in Section 6 says the
following:

 "The descriptions in this section assume that KSK rollovers employ the
   commonly used Double Signature KSK Rollover Method, and that ZSK
   rollovers employ the Pre-Publish ZSK Rollover Method, as described in
   detail in [RFC6781].  With minor modifications, they can also be
   easily adapted to other models, such as Double DS KSK Rollover or
   Double Signature ZSK rollover, if desired.

We are trying to avoid repeating lots of text in 6781 and mainly focussing
on the deltas needed to work with multi-signer.

12.  Security Considerations
>
>    The Zone key import APIs required by these models need to be strongly
>    authenticated to prevent tampering of key material by malicious third
>    parties.  Many providers today offer REST/HTTPS APIs that utilize a
>    number of authentication mechanisms (username/password, API keys
>    etc).  If DNS protocol mechanisms like UPDATE are being used for key
>    insertion and deletion, they should similarly be strongly
>    authenticated, e.g. by employing Transaction Signatures (TSIG)
>    [RFC2845].
>
> <mglt>
> I believe that some words should be provided on the security implied by
> the two
> models.  For the two models the providers signs and so is able to modify
> and
> alter the zone. The content is actually under the responsibility of the
> provider
> not the zone owner. In addition, the zone owner has little mean to check
> the
> appropriated content is being delivered.
>
[...]

Yes, it should be fairly obvious to most readers that having 3rd-party DNS
providers sign your zone data means delegating a huge amount of trust to
them. But I agree that this should be explicitly discussed in the Security
Considerations section, and contrasted with the "zone owner operated
signing master + zone transfer approach". I will work on some text for this.

Shumon Huque

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gault via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org">noreply@ietf.=
org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=3D=
"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(2=
04,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Reviewer: Daniel Migault<br></blockquote><div=
><br></div><div>Thank you for your detailed review Daniel.</div><div><br></=
div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;bor=
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&lt;mglt&gt;describes&lt;/mglt&gt;<br>
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or do<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0they impose the new key management requirements on authoritati=
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implementing. Maybe it would be clearer to say that changes are only expect=
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=C2=A0 =C2=A0The following descriptions consider the case of two DNS provid=
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&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
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k<br>
this is not really needed with the current text.<br></blockquote><div><br><=
/div><div>Yes, I agree. This is probably a remnant of an earlier version of=
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t in Section 2 applies generally to any number. I will remove this sentence=
.</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px=
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&lt;/mglt&gt;<br>
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2.1.1.=C2=A0 Model 1: Common KSK, Unique ZSK per provider<br>
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single and not two ZSKs per providers. I think that Unique here means &quot=
;per<br>
provider independent ZSK.&quot;<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Yes, th=
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4);padding-left:1ex">
One note also, I am also balanced by considering there is always multiple K=
SKs,<br>
ZSKs as this could be the case between the key roll overs. On the other han=
d, I<br>
do not know if it makes the text more complex to read.<br></blockquote><div=
><br></div><div>Sorry, can you elaborate? For model 2, there are always mul=
tiple KSKs (at least 1 per provider). For model 1, there is single KSK (or =
KSK set, if the zone owner is rolling or pre-publishing). The section 2 des=
cription kind of glosses over the fact that providers could have multiple k=
eys for the sake of simplicity,=C2=A0and assumes the reader understands tha=
t. The key rollover section describes one multi-key per provider scenario. =
I guess one possible change that might address=C2=A0this is to replace &quo=
t;KSK&quot; with &quot;KSK set&quot; and &quot;ZSK&quot; with &quot;ZSK set=
&quot;.</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"marg=
in:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1e=
x">
I am wondering if it makes sense to also consider this model with one provi=
der<br>
if the content owner wants to keep the ownership/control of the zone.=C2=A0=
<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I had considered mentioning that possi=
bility for model 1. (For model 2, this would just degenerate to a standard =
configuration, so it isn&#39;t worth describing).</div><div><br></div><div>=
In the early days of the draft, Dave Blacka pointed out to me that model 1 =
with a single provider is essentially how the DNS root is operated today (I=
CANN -&gt; zone owner, Verisign -&gt; signing provider). In the end, I deci=
ded the single signing provider configuration is probably an exceptional ca=
se that we won&#39;t see too often in the field. So I left it out, to avoid=
 overcomplicating the draft. But I&#39;m open to reconsidering. (Or maybe i=
t&#39;s already covered implicitly because it is just the degenerate case w=
here N=3D1).</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D=
"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-le=
ft:1ex">
&lt;/mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Zone owner holds the KSK, manages the DS record, and i=
s<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 responsible for signing the DNSKEY RRset and distribut=
ing the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 signed DNSKEY RRset to the providers.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Each provider has their own ZSK which is used to sign =
data.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Providers have an API that owner uses to query the ZSK=
 public key,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 and insert a combined DNSKEY RRset that includes both =
ZSKs and the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 KSK, signed by the KSK.<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
I believe the text could be clearer on who generates the DNSKEY RRset and<b=
r>
describe the outputs in an uniform way - that is using RRsets for both outp=
uts.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ok.</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockqu=
ote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px=
 solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
The text also seems to indicate the owner directly updates the zone. </bloc=
kquote><div><br></div><div>The &quot;data content&quot; of the zone, yes.</=
div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px =
0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Whil=
e this<br>
is the resulting outcome, I understood the insertion to the zone as being<b=
r>
performed by the provider as in some cases a signature with the ZSK may als=
o be<br>
performed. <br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Can you elaborate on what y=
ou mean here? The providers always have to update the zone with new signatu=
res (by their ZSK) for incoming data changes.</div><div><br></div><blockquo=
te class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px =
solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
Explanation may actually be more complex then the actual change. The text I=
<br>
would propose would be around the lines (assuming I am not missing anything=
): <br>
<br>
Providers have an API to enable the owner to retrieve the ZSKs public key f=
rom<br>
the providers, generate and return the appropriated DNSKEY and RRSIG RRsets=
.<br>
The DNSKEY RRset contains the ZSKs of the multiple providers and the KSKs.<=
br>
Its associated RRSIG RRset contains the signature of the DNSKEY RRset with =
the<br>
KSKs.=C2=A0<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ok, I&#39;m pondering. Most=
 of this is already covered in different parts of the draft I believe. And =
the first sentence of your text above is correct for model1, but not for mo=
del 2.</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"mar=
gin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1=
ex">
<br>
&lt;/mglt&gt;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Note that even if the contents of the DNSKEY RRset don=
&#39;t change,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 the Zone owner of course needs to periodically re-sign=
 it as<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 signature expiration approaches.=C2=A0 The provider AP=
I is also used to<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 thus periodically redistribute the refreshed DNSKEY RR=
set.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Key rollovers need coordinated participation of the zo=
ne owner to<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 update the DNSKEY RRset (for KSK or ZSK), and the DS R=
Rset (for<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 KSK).<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
Unless I am missing something, I believe that the API operating regularly c=
ould<br>
proceed to a key roll over in an automated way.</blockquote><div><br></div>=
<div>Yes, for the first bullet point above, the action could be fully autom=
ated (and that is what we were expecting would happen).</div><div>=C2=A0</d=
iv><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;bord=
er-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">The only additional st=
ep would<br>
consists in the publication of the DS RRSet. I am wondering if one is a<br>
specific key roll over or an emergency key roll over was considered there.<=
br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Key roll automation is trickier if it i=
nvolves the DS, although Section 8 could help if specific conditions allow.=
</div><div><br></div><div>We don&#39;t specifically call out emergency key =
rollovers (I&#39;m not sure this document needs to do that, since it should=
 generally be clear to operators what needs to be done).</div><div><br></di=
v><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;borde=
r-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
2.1.2.=C2=A0 Model 2: Unique KSK and ZSK per provider<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Each provider has their own KSK and ZSK.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Each provider offers an API that the Zone Owner uses t=
o import the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 ZSK of the other provider into their DNSKEY RRset.<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
I think &quot;Zone Owner&quot; was used without capital letter before.<br><=
/blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ok, will address.</div><div><br></div><bloc=
kquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:=
1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
In this case I believe that the information is the ZSKs public key (as oppo=
sed<br>
as the DNSKEY RRset) and that each provider is responsible of publishing ZS=
Ks<br>
of other providers and signing those with their own KSKs and eventually the=
ir<br>
own ZSKs. Maybe this could be detailed a bit more.=C2=A0<br></blockquote><d=
iv><br></div><div>Yes, but I&#39;m not seeing what is not clear in the curr=
ent text. I will ponder.</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quo=
te" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204=
);padding-left:1ex">
It might be clarifying to specify:<br>
&quot;Each provider offers an API that the zone owner to import the ZSKs pu=
blic key<br>
and export the ZSKs public keys of all providers. Each provider will genera=
te<br>
the associated DNSSEY RRset.&quot; <br>
<br>
What is unclear to me is who generates the DNSKEY RRset. I have the impress=
ion<br>
each provider is generating its own DNSKEY.</blockquote><div><br></div><div=
>It depends.</div><div><br></div><div>In model 1, is is the zone owner.</di=
v><div><br></div><div>In model 2, each provider=C2=A0 updates their DNSKEY =
RRset with a ZSK (public key) imported from the other provider(s). Then ind=
ependently signs the DNSKEY RRset with their own KSK(s). I will review the =
current text and see if I can make this clearer.</div><div>=C2=A0=C2=A0</di=
v><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;borde=
r-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
s/both/all/<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ok.</div><div>=C2=A0</div><=
blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-l=
eft:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
&lt;/mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
<br>
3.=C2=A0 Validating Resolver Behavior<br></blockquote><div>[...]</div><bloc=
kquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:=
1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 The resolver will not accept this response.=C2=A0 It m=
ay still be able<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 to ultimately authenticate the name by querying other =
nameservers<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 for the zone until it elicits a response from one of p=
rovider A&#39;s<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 nameservers.=C2=A0 But it has incurred the penalty of =
additional<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 roundtrips with other nameservers, with the correspond=
ing latency<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 and processing costs.=C2=A0 The exact number of additi=
onal roundtrips<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 depends on details of the resolver&#39;s nameserver se=
lection<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 algorithm and the number of nameservers configured at =
provider B.<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
With the use of geographic authoritative DNS for example, I have the impres=
sion we<br>
may also have one provider is only available in from one place and not from=
 the<br>
other thus making the resolution possible probably only possible after flus=
hing<br>
the cache.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I assume the other provider(=
s) would still be reachable, even if they were geographically or topologica=
lly more distant. So if a resolver&#39;s nameserver selection algorithm in =
this case tends to prefer the more proximal provider, and none of them retu=
rn a validatable response, it would eventually move on to the other provide=
rs, or fail because of an aggregate timeout or exceeding some retry limit. =
I&#39;m not sure if we need to call out such special cases explicitly, as w=
e have a more general description that covers many possible cases.</div><di=
v><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0=
.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
I have the impression that the resolution does not consider the DS. I think=
<br>
that some text needs to be added to mention that all KSK must appropriately=
<br>
delegated.=C2=A0<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Do we need to? In the=
=C2=A0resolver behavior section, it is implied that providers have to have =
a working secure delegation. I suppose we could mention that, but the secti=
on is focussed on what is fundamentally unique in this configuration.</div>=
<div><br></div><div>The DS configuration requirements for each model are de=
scribed in the model descriptions earlier in the document.</div><div>=C2=A0=
</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;b=
order-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
The Zone Owner deploys a DS RRset at the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0parent zone that contains multiple DS records, each referring =
to a<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0distinct provider&#39;s KSK.=C2=A0 Hence it does not matter wh=
ich provider&#39;s<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0nameservers the resolver obtains the DNSKEY RRset from, the si=
gned DS<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0record in each model can authenticate the associated KSK.<br>
<br>
4.=C2=A0 Signing Algorithm Considerations<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0DNS providers participating in multi-signer models need to use=
 a<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0common DNSSEC signing algorithm. <br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
I think the text is saying that providers needs to have a common algorithm<=
br>
which does not seem correct. The text also only mentions the use of a singl=
e<br>
algorithms which I believe is maybe too restrictive. I would propose someth=
ing<br>
around the following lines:<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Yeah, good =
point. We can expand the text to say that each provider needs to use a comm=
on &quot;set&quot; of signing algorithms.</div><div></div><div><br></div><b=
lockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-le=
ft:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
The providers MUST use the same algorithms for signing.<br></blockquote><di=
v><br></div><div>As discussed in an earlier thread on dnsop, we decided not=
 to use RFC 2119/8174 keywords. So &quot;must use&quot; or &quot;need to us=
e&quot;.</div><div><br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"mar=
gin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1=
ex">
Even though the document is informational, I do not think this prevents usi=
ng<br>
normative language. Here I would think that a RECOMMENDED might be<br>
appropriated.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>See above. But if there i=
s a new consensus on the use of 2119/8174 keywords, we could go there.</div=
><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px=
 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
=C2=A0 =C2=A0methods.=C2=A0 This could make caching on the resolver side le=
ss efficient<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0and the authoritative servers may observe higher number of que=
ries.<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This aspect should be considered especially in context of Aggr=
esive<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
Aggressive maybe?<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Yes.</div><div>=C2=A0=
</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;b=
order-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
The use of mixed method seems to me outside the design of DNSSEC with the<b=
r>
publication of one zone. The impact on 8198 as well as the additional burde=
n<br>
provided on resolvers seems to me sufficient to at least strongly discourag=
e<br>
the mixed method.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I think we do implici=
tly discourage it, by calling out the deficiencies of this approach. But ye=
s, we could be more explicit about it.</div><div><br></div><blockquote clas=
s=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid r=
gb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
6.1.=C2=A0 Model 1: Common KSK, Unique ZSK per provider<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0o=C2=A0 Key Signing Key Rollover: In this model, the two manag=
ed DNS<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 providers share a common KSK which is held by the Zone=
 Owner.<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
The text seems confusing as the providers do not actually share the KSK but=
<br>
instead publish a common DNSKEY RRsets with the same public part of the KSK=
.<br>
<br>
My understanding of sharing a key means that the private part is shared. <b=
r>
&lt;/mglt&gt;<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Ok. I will clarify.</div>=
<div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px =
0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
To<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 initiate the rollover, the Zone Owner generates a new =
KSK and<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 obtains the DNSKEY RRset of each DNS provider using th=
eir<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 respective APIs.=C2=A0 The new KSK is added to each pr=
ovider&#39;s DNSKEY<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 RRset and the RRset is re-signed with both the new and=
 the old<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 KSK.=C2=A0 This new DNSKEY RRset is then transferred t=
o each provider.<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
<br>
At this point the KSK cannot be used so I am wondering if the DS that<br>
corresponds to the new KSK should not need to be added before the new KSK b=
eing<br>
added to the DNSKEY RRset.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>There are so=
me caveats here. Our text describes the more common Double Signature KSK ro=
llover model (see RFC 6781 for details). You are describing the &quot;Doubl=
e DS KSK Rollover&quot;. The prefatory text in Section 6 says the following=
:</div><div><br></div><div>=C2=A0&quot;The descriptions in this section ass=
ume that KSK rollovers employ the</div>=C2=A0 =C2=A0commonly used Double Si=
gnature KSK Rollover Method, and that ZSK<br>=C2=A0 =C2=A0rollovers employ =
the Pre-Publish ZSK Rollover Method, as described in<br>=C2=A0 =C2=A0detail=
 in [RFC6781].=C2=A0 With minor modifications, they can also be<br>=C2=A0 =
=C2=A0easily adapted to other models, such as Double DS KSK Rollover or<br>=
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Double Signature ZSK rollover, if desired.</div><div class=3D"=
gmail_quote"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_quote">We are trying to avoid re=
peating lots of text in 6781 and mainly focussing on the deltas needed to w=
ork with multi-signer.</div><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><br></div><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px =
0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
12.=C2=A0 Security Considerations<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0The Zone key import APIs required by these models need to be s=
trongly<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0authenticated to prevent tampering of key material by maliciou=
s third<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0parties.=C2=A0 Many providers today offer REST/HTTPS APIs that=
 utilize a<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0number of authentication mechanisms (username/password, API ke=
ys<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0etc).=C2=A0 If DNS protocol mechanisms like UPDATE are being u=
sed for key<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0insertion and deletion, they should similarly be strongly<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0authenticated, e.g. by employing Transaction Signatures (TSIG)=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0[RFC2845].<br>
<br>
&lt;mglt&gt;<br>
I believe that some words should be provided on the security implied by the=
 two<br>
models.=C2=A0 For the two models the providers signs and so is able to modi=
fy and<br>
alter the zone. The content is actually under the responsibility of the pro=
vider <br>
not the zone owner. In addition, the zone owner has little mean to check th=
e <br>
appropriated content is being delivered. <br></blockquote><div>[...]=C2=A0<=
/div><div><br></div><div>Yes, it should be fairly obvious to most readers t=
hat having 3rd-party DNS providers sign your zone data means delegating a h=
uge amount of trust to them. But I agree that this should be explicitly dis=
cussed in the Security Considerations section,=C2=A0and contrasted with the=
 &quot;zone owner operated signing master + zone transfer approach&quot;. I=
 will work on some text for this.</div><div><br></div><div>Shumon Huque</di=
v><div><br></div></div></div>

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Vincent Roca           2020-01-30 draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16
Takeshi Takahashi      2020-02-06 draft-ietf-mmusic-t140-usage-data-channel-12
Sean Turner            None       draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-02
Paul Wouters          R2019-10-18 draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-11
Dacheng Zhang          2019-11-05 draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07
Dacheng Zhang          2020-03-12 draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo-01

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Vincent Roca
  Kyle Rose
  Joseph Salowey
  Rich Salz
  Stefan Santesson
  Yaron Sheffer
  Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
  Melinda Shore
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Reviewer: Stephen Farrell
Review result: Has Nits


Thanks for addressing my earlier secdir comments on -15. I think
the ones below remain but are, from my POV, nits:

- Abstract: This draft aims for proposed standard but is
updating a BCP (RFC8085/BCP145).  I'm happy to leave the
process-lawyering for that to others.

- 6.3: I am surprised that the QUIC description here is ready
to be an RFC before QUIC itself. I do see there are
normative references, but the potential for a breaking change
still exists, and seems a bit unwise. (I'd suggest, holding
this in the WG 'till the referenced QUIC drafts are in the RFC
editor queue, or else taking that bit out and putting it into
a new I-D.)



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Hi Ben,

With this social distancing situation, I'm finally catching up on open =
items myself.  I have made the changes as we have discussed and =
incorporated your suggestions.  I believe the changes are fully =
contained in the two paragraphs below:

Section 2 (last paragraph) - Clarification for octet count

(was)
In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
data, it is only necessary to specify the number of octets
containing the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is
presented in Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters [TSVCIS]. =20

(now)
In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
data, an octet count specifies the number of octets representing
the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is presented in
Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
configurations using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet
parameters in a standardized order [TSVCIS]. =20


Section 3.1 (first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for CODA, =
CODB

(was)
It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing bit.

(now)
It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an alternating 1/0
end-to-end framing bit. =20

Ben, I believe this addresses your comments and requests for =
clarifications as per our email discussion chain below.

Thanks for you comments and with your concurrence (and my home =
computer's cooperation), I will post a new draft hopefully acceptable =
for final approval.

Regards to all and stay on the good side of Darwin.

Victor


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Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: =
(with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Hi Barry,

As Victor notes, this one was/is waiting on me; he did reply (offlist) =
on
15 January but I seem to have missed it amid a deluge of other mail that =
arrived at that time.  Thanks for the reminder, and thanks Victor for =
re-sending the comments.
(inline)

On Fri, Feb 14, 2020 at 08:20:54AM -0500, victor.demjanenko@vocal.com =
wrote:
> HI Barry,
>=20
> Thanks for recalling this was still outstanding.  I had emailed Ben =
just after the holidays and did not realize we had no response.  The =
below is what we suggested to Ben to address concerns he raised.
>=20
> --------------------
> Hi Ben,
>=20
> Hope your holidays were good.  Our were both good and busy.  =
Deliveries for two NASA projects and the holidays kept us from =
responding sooner.  But we do want to get this draft completed.
>=20
> With your permission, I=E2=80=99d like to address your comments =
directly, resolve what changes we should make and then publish a new =
version with a summary of our out-of-band discussions.  We don=E2=80=99t =
have a lot of experience with drafting such documents and would like to =
know exactly what is needed to make this draft acceptable.
>=20
> I believe there are two comments/issues to address:
>=20
> 1)	CODA, CODB
>=20
> Your comment ends by stating:  =E2=80=9C(Or, of course, the use of =
CODB as an alternating 1/0 bit as the framing usage could be documented =
instead.)=E2=80=9D  We can do this as follows:
>=20
> (original)
> It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
>    the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing
>    bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being zero on its
>    own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate =
and
>    the use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP
>    timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
>=20
> (adding =E2=80=9Calternating 1/0=E2=80=9D)
> It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
>    the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an alternating 1/0 =
end-to-end framing
>    bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being zero on its
>    own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate =
and
>    the use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP
>    timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
>=20
> I think this change would be sufficient to address your concern about =
what to expect for CODB.

This looks like the minimal sufficient change, yes.  (I use "minimal"
because I would say more if I was writing it, but I don't think I can =
insist that you write it the way I would -- it's your document after =
all!)

> 2.    Packing and unpacking
>=20
> You are correct that I am trying to vaguely describe a middle layer =
shim that is neither RTP nor speech coder.  So it definitely does need =
to be clear.  The vagueness comes from the speech coder description =
being a FOUO document.  Its now unclassified so I can potentially say =
more (and I did make some enhancements of the parameter description =
already). =20
>=20
> So I am trying to understand exactly what you think is vague in our =
current description:
>=20
> TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from the signal processing
>    and data already performed by the MELPe speech coder.  For the
>    purposes of this specification, only the general parameter nature =
of
>    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth available
>    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS-specific speech
>    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first =
byte-packed
>    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
>=20
>    Byte packing of TSVCIS speech data into packed parameters is
>    processed as per the following example:
>=20
>       Three-bit field: bits A, B, and C (A is MSB, C is LSB)
>       Five-bit field: bits D, E, F, G, and H (D is MSB, H is LSB)
>=20
>            MSB                                              LSB
>             0      1      2      3      4      5      6      7
>         +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
>         |   H  |   G  |   F  |   E  |   D  |   C  |   B  |   A  |=20
>         +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
>=20
>    This packing method places the three-bit field "first" in the =
lowest
>    bits followed by the next five-bit field.  Parameters may be split
>    between octets with the most significant bits in the earlier octet.
>    Any unfilled bits in the last octet MUST be filled with zero.

[not actually relevant to the Discuss part, but if there is always =
exactly one 3-bit parameter and one 5-bit parameter, then this text =
allowing splitting across octets will never be used and is potentially =
confusing to mention.]

>    In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
>    data, it is only necessary to specify the number of octets =
containing
>    the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is presented=20
> in

I think the "only necessary to specify the number of octets" is the key =
stumbling point, for me -- I need to know the number of octets as well =
as the order of the parameters within the list, which is more =
information than just the number of octets.

>    Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
>    configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters [TSVCIS]. =20

I think I failed to internalize the "two configurations using 15 and 35 =
packed octet parameters" the first time I read the document, as this =
does help give the reader a clue that [TSVCIS] gives a good picture of =
what parameters go where.  So it seems like we could easily append to =
that, for "using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet parameters in a =
fixed order [TSVCIS]" and that would resolve my concerns.

> The speech coder description of the parameters is the following:
>=20
> =20
>=20
> So the three bit pitch is first (bits 56 to 58), followed by a five =
bit amplitude (bits 59 to 63) and then an array of spectral components, =
each 8-bit wide (starting at bit 64).

[And maybe TSVCIS specifes that the spectral components are derived from =
some fundamental harmonic decomposition that naturally quantizes to a =
number-of-parameters/accuracy tradeoff with a natural order.  If so, we =
could also rely on that instead of my proposed change above; let me know =
if you want to explore that path further.]

> Based on this information, I=E2=80=99m not sure what we should add to =
our=20
> draft to make the description of packing/unpacking clearer.  Can you=20
> make any suggestions or does this table help you with what you did not =

> know?  (I don=E2=80=99t think I should put this table into the draft =
RFC=20
> however.)

Hopefully the above helps to clarify.

Thanks, and sorry for the delay.

-Ben

> Thanks for your attention and comments.
>=20
> Victor & Dave
>=20
>=20
>=20
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
> Sent: Friday, February 14, 2020 7:38 AM
> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
> Cc: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; Roni Even (A) <roni.even@huawei.com>; =

> The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; Catherine Meadows=20
> <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>; IETF SecDir <secdir@ietf.org>;=20
> draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen=20
> <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org;=20
> Dave Satterlee (Vocal) <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>; IETF discussion=20
> list <ietf@ietf.org>;  draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.orgygv=20
> Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: =

> (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>=20
> This is still outstanding, since November.  Victor, where are we on =
this one?
>=20
> Barry
>=20
> On Mon, Nov 25, 2019 at 1:46 AM Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Victor,
> >
> > On Tue, Nov 19, 2019 at 03:14:21PM -0500, =
victor.demjanenko@vocal.com wrote:
> > > Hi Ben,
> > >
> > > Sorry I overlooked sending you a response.  I would like to=20
> > > address the two concerns you have by explaining what the speech =
coders are doing.
> >
> > Thanks for the extra clarifications.  To supply one of my own: I'm=20
> > not concerned that the protocol doesn't work as implemented, but=20
> > just want to make sure that the document includes enough information =

> > to admit new implementations without guesswork.  That is to say,=20
> > "either tell me how to do it or tell me where to look that tells me =
how to do it".
> >
> > > WRT to 600 bps MELP, there is one TSVCIS mode that uses one bit=20
> > > beyond the 54-bit frame for MELP 600 as a frame sync which =
alternates between frames.
> > > With two or more MELP 600bps frames in one RTP packet, if any=20
> > > frame indicates 600 bps by CODA being 0 and CODB being 1, then we=20
> > > know the stream is 600bps.  If there is a single frame in an RTP=20
> > > packet, you can still deduce this by looking at every other RTP=20
> > > packet (every other MELP 600bps
> > > frame) and by the timestamp advance.  Most likely the two ends=20
> > > would negotiate 600 bps in SDP anyways so there really should not=20
> > > be a problem.  I know it's not pretty but its workable.  I hope=20
> > > this explanation helps you with the concerns for this issue.
> >
> > In this case, the use as an "end-to-end framing bit" (i.e., the=20
> > alternating behavior you describe above) is not explicitly stated;=20
> > one might imagine a scheme where the framing usage is to have the=20
> > bit cycle through 1, 1, 0, and 0, or some other scheme.  I'd suggest =

> > to note in the document that if any instance of (CODA, CODB) =3D=3D =
(0,=20
> > 1) is observed, then the 600bps mode is in use.  It might also be=20
> > helpful to include the observation that two successive MELPe=20
> > payloads with CODA =3D=3D CODB =3D=3D 0 indicates the 2400bps mode =
(and that=20
> > seeing them in a single RTP packet is decisive, whereas additional=20
> > information about packet non-loss would be needed in the=20
> > one-MELPe-frame-per-RTP-packet case), but that would be a fair bit=20
> > of additional text and might be diminishing returns.  (Or, of=20
> > course, the use of CODB as an alternating 1/0 bit as the framing=20
> > usage could be documented
> > instead.)
> >
> > > As for the TSVCIS parameter packing/unpacking, this is really=20
> > > simple.  There is exactly on three bit parameter, exactly one five =

> > > bit parameter and a variable number of eight bit parameters.  In=20
> > > our view, the speech coder itself (or a wrapper for it) is=20
> > > responsible for preparing the block of octets.  RTP then just=20
> > > transports it.  On receive, the complementary wrapper reverses the =
packing operation.
> > > I hope this clarifies and explains the simplicity.
> >
> > That's exactly what I expected to happen; however, it's not what I=20
> > believe the current text of the document is describing. =20
> > Specifically, I think that the current text implies that the=20
> > "preparing the block of octets" and "complementary wrapper reverses=20
> > the packing operation" are supposed to be part of the RTP payload=20
> > format that this document describes, but this document does not have =

> > enough information to actually perform those operations reversibly.  =

> > If the packing is to be done in the speech coder, then this document =

> > doesn't need to talk about the packing at all (e.g., at the end of=20
> > Section 2); if we need to keep the packing/wrapper in this document=20
> > then we need to indicate that there's a defined priority order for=20
> > the (8-octet) TSVCIS parameters in the TSVCIS references, to allow =
the packing/unpacking to be deterministic.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Ben
> >
> > >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
> > > Sent: Thursday, October 31, 2019 8:12 PM
> > > To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
> > > Cc: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; Roni Even (A)=20
> > > <roni.even@huawei.com>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; Catherine=20
> > > Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>; IETF SecDir=20
> > > <secdir@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen=20
> > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org;=20
> > > avt@ietf.org; Dave Satterlee (Vocal) <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>;=20
> > > IETF discussion list <ietf@ietf.org>;=20
> > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.org
> > > Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > >
> > > I don't think so, unfortunately.
> > >
> > > I do see the clarification about CODB's potential for deviation=20
> > > from Table 1, that only the 600 bps MELPe is allowed to deviate,=20
> > > and that CODA gets us to "it's one of 2400 or 600 bps" and the RTP =

> > > timestamp disambiguates that
> > > 600 bps is in use.  But, it seems that this means that the=20
> > > recipient in general should not rely on CODB to differentiate 600=20
> > > from 2400 bps, and instead is more robustly implemented by=20
> > > *always* using the RTP timestamp to detect 600 bps, since that=20
> > > will always work and CODB will sometimes not work under conditions =

> > > not fully specified here.  So, if we are unwilling or unable to=20
> > > clarify what those conditions are (e.g., whether at a minimum=20
> > > mutual agreement is required), then I think we need to describe=20
> > > this procedure of consulting the RTP timestamp as the default =
behavior and avoid giving the impression that CODB should be used to do =
so.
> > >
> > > Additionally, I don't see anything to address my concern about=20
> > > TSVCIS parameter decoding.  To be clear, the procedure I see this=20
> > > document describing is that:
> > > - TSVCIS gives parameters (and their lengths in bits) to the codec
> > >   described in this document
> > > - this document specifies how to densely encode those parameters =
into a
> > >   byetstream
> > > - RTP transmits that encoded bytestream to the peer
> > > - the codec specified by this is responsible for turning that =
encoded
> > >   bystream back into a list of TSVCIS parameters (and their length =

> > > in bits)
> > >
> > > I don't see how that last step is attainable with only the=20
> > > information provided by this document.  I *assume* that one of the =

> > > TSVCIS specifications has a canonical (ordered) listing of=20
> > > parameters, and that the list of parmeters given to this codec in=20
> > > the first step will always be an initial prefix of that list, but=20
> > > that's just me guessing at how to make sense of the stated=20
> > > procedure given insufficient information.  I don't think it's=20
> > > appropriate to make the reader of an RFC guess at what to do; we=20
> > > need to either say how to do it or give a pointer to an external =
reference that does.
> > >
> > > -Ben
> > >
> > > On Tue, Oct 29, 2019 at 02:26:09PM -0400, Barry Leiba wrote:
> > > > Ben, does the -04 version address everything?
> > > >
> > > > Barry
> > > >
> > > > On Thu, Oct 24, 2019 at 1:42 PM <victor.demjanenko@vocal.com> =
wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > I forgot to address security comments in one email.  The =
changes are:
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 8, second paragraph - Suggested edit by reviewer
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    This RTP payload format and the TSVCIS decoder do not =
exhibit any
> > > > >    significant non-uniformity in the receiver-side =
computational
> > > > >    complexity for packet processing and thus are unlikely to =
pose a
> > > > >    denial-of-service threat due to the receipt of pathological =
data.
> > > > >    Additionally, the RTP payload format does not contain any =
active
> > > > >    content.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    This RTP payload format and the TSVCIS decoder, to the best =
of our
> > > > >    knowledge, do not exhibit any significant non-uniformity in =
the
> > > > >    receiver-side computational complexity for packet =
processing and thus
> > > > >    are unlikely to pose a denial-of-service threat due to the =
receipt of
> > > > >    pathological data. Additionally, the RTP payload format =
does not
> > > > >    contain any active content.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 8, third paragraph - Suggested edit by reviewer
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    Please see the security considerations discussed in =
[RFC6562]
> > > > >    regarding VAD and its effect on bitrates.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    Please see the security considerations discussed in =
[RFC6562]
> > > > >    regarding Voice Activity Detect (VAD) and its effect on =
bitrates.
> > > > >
> > > > > Victor
> > > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com=20
> > > > > <victor.demjanenko@vocal.com>
> > > > > Sent: Thursday, October 24, 2019 10:05 AM
> > > > > To: 'Roni Even (A)' <roni.even@huawei.com>; 'Benjamin Kaduk'
> > > > > <kaduk@mit.edu>; 'The IESG' <iesg@ietf.org>
> > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen'
> > > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org;=20
> > > > > avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'
> > > > > <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>
> > > > > Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > >
> > > > > Hi Everyone,
> > > > >
> > > > > First we want to thank everyone for their review and comments=20
> > > > > for this
> > > draft RFC.  We believe we reviewed all the comments and=20
> > > suggestions and incorporated them adequately in the next draft=20
> > > (04).  We'd like to send out this list of exact changes in case=20
> > > anyone has additional comments or thinks the clarifications are=20
> > > inadequate.  We would be most happy to address concerns before =
publishing draft 04 tomorrow.
> > > > >
> > > > > With so many emails from a half dozen or more reviewers, we=20
> > > > > apologize
> > > that we cannot address each sender individually.  We hope this=20
> > > detail is sufficient for everyone.
> > > > >
> > > > > Again, many thanks to all.
> > > > >
> > > > > Victor & Dave
> > > > >
> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > --
> > > > > ----
> > > > > --------------------------
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 1.1 - Suggested reference to RFC 8088 added.
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    Best current practices for writing an RTP payload format
> > > > >    specification were followed [RFC2736].
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    Best current practices for writing an RTP payload format
> > > > >    specification were followed [RFC2736] [RFC8088].
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 2, paragraphs 3 and 4 - Suggested edits by reviewers
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    In addition to the augmented speech data, the TSVCIS =
specification
> > > > >    identifies which speech coder and framing bits are to be =
encrypted,
> > > > >    and how they are protected by forward error correction =
(FEC)
> > > > >    techniques (using block codes).  At the RTP transport =
layer, only the
> > > > >    speech coder related bits need to be considered and are =
conveyed in
> > > > >    unencrypted form.  In most IP-based network deployments, =
standard
> > > > >    link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS 140 link =
encryptors or Type
> > > > >    1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to secure the RTP =
speech
> > > > >    contents.  Further, it is desirable to support the highest =
voice
> > > > >    quality between endpoints which is only possible without =
the overhead
> > > > >    of FEC.
> > > > >
> > > > >    TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from the signal =
processing
> > > > >    and data already performed by the MELPe speech coder.  For =
the
> > > > >    purposes of this specification, only the general parameter =
nature of
> > > > >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth =
available
> > > > >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS specific =
speech
> > > > >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first =
byte-packed
> > > > >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    In addition to the augmented speech data, the TSVCIS =
specification
> > > > >    identifies which speech coder and framing bits are to be =
encrypted,
> > > > >    and how they are protected by forward error correction =
(FEC)
> > > > >    techniques (using block codes).  At the RTP transport =
layer, only the
> > > > >    speech-coder-related bits need to be considered and are =
conveyed in
> > > > >    unencrypted form.  In most IP-based network deployments, =
standard
> > > > >    link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS 140 link =
encryptors or Type
> > > > >    1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to secure the RTP =
speech
> > > > >    contents.
> > > > >
> > > > >    TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from the signal =
processing
> > > > >    and data already performed by the MELPe speech coder.  For =
the
> > > > >    purposes of this specification, only the general parameter =
nature of
> > > > >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth =
available
> > > > >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS-specific =
speech
> > > > >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first =
byte-packed
> > > > >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3, last sentence paragraph 3 - Suggested edit by=20
> > > > > reviewer
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    When more than one codec data frame is
> > > > >    present in a single RTP packet, the timestamp is, as =
always, that of
> > > > >    the oldest data frame represented in the RTP packet.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    When more than one codec data frame is
> > > > >    present in a single RTP packet, the timestamp specified is =
that of
> > > > >    the oldest data frame represented in the RTP packet.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.1, last paragraph - Clarified permission for MELP=20
> > > > > 600 end-to-end framing bit
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    It should be noted that CODB for both the 2400 and 600 bps =
modes MAY
> > > > >    deviate from the values in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as =
an end-to-
> > > > >    end framing bit.  Frame decoding would remain distinct as =
CODA being
> > > > >    zero on its own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either =
rate and the
> > > > >    use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP =
timestamp
> > > > >    (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY =
deviate from
> > > > >    the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end =
framing
> > > > >    bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being =
zero on its
> > > > >    own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either 2400 or 600 =
bps rate and
> > > > >    the use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the =
RTP
> > > > >    timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.2, first paragraph - Clarifications requested by=20
> > > > > reviewers
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    The TSVCIS augmented speech data as packed parameters MUST =
be placed
> > > > >    immediately after a corresponding MELPe 2400 bps payload in =
the same
> > > > >    RTP packet.  The packed parameters are counted in octets =
(TC).  In
> > > > >    the preferred placement, shown in Figure 6, a single =
trailing octet
> > > > >    SHALL be appended to include a two-bit rate code, CODA and =
CODB,
> > > > >    (both bits set to one) and a six-bit modified count (MTC).  =
The
> > > > >    special modified count value of all ones (representing a =
MTC value of
> > > > >    63) SHALL NOT be used for this format as it is used as the =
indicator
> > > > >    for the alternate packing format shown next.  In a standard
> > > > >    implementation, the TSVCIS speech coder uses a minimum of =
15 octets
> > > > >    for parameters in octet packed form.  The modified count =
(MTC) MUST
> > > > >    be reduced by 15 from the full octet count (TC).  Computed =
MTC =3D TC-
> > > > >    15.  This accommodates a maximum of 77 parameter octets =
(maximum
> > > > >    value of MTC is 62, 77 is the sum of 62+15).
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    The TSVCIS augmented speech data as packed parameters MUST =
be placed
> > > > >    immediately after a corresponding MELPe 2400 bps payload in =
the same
> > > > >    RTP packet.  The packed parameters are counted in octets =
(TC).  The
> > > > >    preferred placement SHOULD be used for TSVCIS payloads with =
TC less
> > > > >    than or equal to 77 octets, is shown in Figure 6.  In the =
preferred
> > > > >    placement, a single trailing octet SHALL be appended to =
include a
> > > > >    two-bit rate code, CODA and CODB, (both bits set to one) =
and a six-
> > > > >    bit modified count (MTC).  The special modified count value =
of all
> > > > >    ones (representing a MTC value of 63) SHALL NOT be used for =
this
> > > > >    format as it is used as the indicator for the alternate =
packing
> > > > >    format shown next.  In a standard implementation, the =
TSVCIS speech
> > > > >    coder uses a minimum of 15 octets for parameters in octet =
packed
> > > > >    form.  The modified count (MTC) MUST be reduced by 15 from =
the full
> > > > >    octet count (TC).  Computed MTC =3D TC-15.  This =
accommodates a maximum
> > > > >    of 77 parameter octets (maximum value of MTC is 62, 77 is =
the sum of
> > > > >    62+15).
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.3, first paragraph - Suggested edit by reviewer
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    A TSVCIS RTP packet consists of zero or more TSVCIS coder =
frames
> > > > >    (each consisting of MELPe and TSVCIS coder data) followed =
by zero or
> > > > >    one MELPe comfort noise frame.  The presence of a comfort =
noise frame
> > > > >    can be determined by its rate code bits in its last octet.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    A TSVCIS RTP packet payload consists of zero or more =
consecutive
> > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames (each consisting of MELPe 2400 and =
TSVCIS coder
> > > > >    data), with the oldest frame first, followed by zero or one =
MELPe
> > > > >    comfort noise frame.  The presence of a comfort noise frame =
can be
> > > > >    determined by its rate code bits in its last octet.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.3, fourth paragraph - Clarification requested by=20
> > > > > reviewers
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet MAY be of =
different coder
> > > > >    bitrates.  With the exception for the variable length =
TSVCIS
> > > > >    parameter frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing byte =
identify
> > > > >    the contents and length as per Table 1.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet MAY have varying =
TSVCIS
> > > > >    parameter octet counts.  Its packed parameter octet count =
(length) is
> > > > >    indicated in the trailing byte(s).  All MELPe frames in a =
single RTP
> > > > >    packet MUST be of the same coder bitrate.  For all MELPe =
coder
> > > > >    frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing byte identify =
the
> > > > >    contents and length as per Table 1.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 4.1 - Editor note removed
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 4.1 - Change controller is now
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    Change controller: IETF, contact <avt@ietf.org>
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 5, first paragraph - Suggested edits by reviewers
> > > > >
> > > > > (was)
> > > > >    A primary application of TSVCIS is for radio communications =
of voice
> > > > >    conversations, and discontinuous transmissions are normal.  =
When
> > > > >    TSVCIS is used in an IP network, TSVCIS RTP packet =
transmissions may
> > > > >    cease and resume frequently.  RTP synchronization source =
(SSRC)
> > > > >    sequence number gaps indicate lost packets to be filled by =
PLC, while
> > > > >    abrupt loss of RTP packets indicates intended discontinuous
> > > > >    transmissions.
> > > > >
> > > > > (now)
> > > > >    A primary application of TSVCIS is for radio communications =
of voice
> > > > >    conversations, and discontinuous transmissions are normal.  =
When
> > > > >    TSVCIS is used in an IP network, TSVCIS RTP packet =
transmissions may
> > > > >    cease and resume frequently.  RTP synchronization source =
(SSRC)
> > > > >    sequence number gaps indicate lost packets to be filled by =
Packet
> > > > >    Loss Concealment (PLC), while abrupt loss of RTP packets =
indicates
> > > > >    intended discontinuous transmissions.  Resumption of voice
> > > > >    transmission SHOULD be indicated by the RTP marker bit (M) =
set to 1.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 10 - Added reference
> > > > >
> > > > > (added)
> > > > >    [RFC8088]  Westerlund, M., "How to Write an RTP Payload =
Format",
> > > > >               RFC 8088, DOI 10.17487/RFC8088, May 2017,
> > > > >               <http://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8088>.
> > > > >
> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > --
> > > > > ----
> > > > > -----------------------------
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: Roni Even (A) <roni.even@huawei.com>
> > > > > Sent: Sunday, October 6, 2019 2:09 AM
> > > > > To: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; 'Benjamin Kaduk'=20
> > > > > <kaduk@mit.edu>; 'The IESG' <iesg@ietf.org>
> > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen'
> > > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org;=20
> > > > > avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'
> > > > > <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>
> > > > > Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > >
> > > > > Hi,
> > > > > About the reference to TSVCIS.
> > > > > The RTP payload is about how to encapsulate the payload in an=20
> > > > > RTP
> > > packet. The objective is to define how an RTP stack can insert the =

> > > tsvcis frames and  extract the tsvcis frames from the RTP packet.
> > > Typically it is not required to understand the payload structure=20
> > > in order to be able to perform the encapsulation.
> > > > > This is why the reference to the payload is Informational and=20
> > > > > we did not require to have it publically available.  If there=20
> > > > > is a need to understand the payload itself for the=20
> > > > > encapsulating than we need more information in the RTP payload =

> > > > > specification and a publically available normative reference.=20
> > > > > I think this is not the case here
> > > > >
> > > > > Roni Even
> > > > >
> > > > > AVTCore co-chair (ex Payload)
> > > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com=20
> > > > > [mailto:victor.demjanenko@vocal.com]
> > > > > Sent: Saturday, October 05, 2019 12:18 AM
> > > > > To: 'Benjamin Kaduk'; 'The IESG'
> > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen';
> > > avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org; 'Victor Demjanenko, Ph.D.'; =

> > > 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'
> > > > > Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > >
> > > > > Everyone,
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks for the comments.  I think I mis-understood the=20
> > > > > ambiguity with
> > > respect to to changing rates within a RTP packet.  That was not=20
> > > plan.  An RTP packet must have MELP speech frames of the same =
rate.
> > > What is possible is that the amount of augmented TSVCIS speech=20
> > > data may vary from one speech frame to the next.  This allows for=20
> > > a dynamic VDR as suggested by the NRL paper.  So an RTP packet may =

> > > have varying TSVCIS data but must always have MELPe 2400 data.
> > > > >
> > > > > Again backwards parsing is necessary but the timestamp=20
> > > > > uniformly
> > > increments 22.5msec per combined MELP/TSVCIS speech frame.
> > > > >
> > > > > The NRL is a good public reference on the VDR aspects.  The=20
> > > > > actual
> > > TSVCIS spec we had was FOUO so we could not replicate its detail.  =

> > > (I believe a later spec is public or at least partially public.  I =

> > > am trying to get this.)  The opaque data is pretty obvious with =
the TSVCIS spec in hand.
> > > > >
> > > > > We will address the issues/concerns raised next week.  Other=20
> > > > > business
> > > had priority.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you and enjoy the weekend.
> > > > >
> > > > > Regards,
> > > > >
> > > > > Victor & Dave
> > > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> > > > > Sent: Wednesday, October 2, 2019 10:40 PM
> > > > > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen=20
> > > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org;=20
> > > > > ali.begen@networked.media; avt@ietf.org
> > > > > Subject: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on =
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03:
> > > > > (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > >
> > > > > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
> > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: Discuss
> > > > >
> > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply =

> > > > > to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel=20
> > > > > free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.)
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Please refer to
> > > > > https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> > > > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found =
here:
> > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis/
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > --
> > > > > ----
> > > > > --
> > > > > DISCUSS:
> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > --
> > > > > ----
> > > > > --
> > > > >
> > > > > I support Magnus' point about the time-ordering of adjacent=20
> > > > > frames in a
> > > packet.
> > > > >
> > > > > Additionally, I am not sure that there's quite enough here to=20
> > > > > be
> > > interoperably implementable.  Specifically, we seem to be lacking=20
> > > a description of how an encoder or decoder knows which TSVCIS=20
> > > parameters, and in what order, to byte-pack or unpack, =
respectively.
> > > One might surmise that there is a canonical listing in [TSVCIS],=20
> > > but this document does not say that, and furthermore [TSVCIS] is =
only listed as an informative reference.
> > > (I couldn't get my hands on my copy, at least on short notice.) =20
> > > If we limited ourselves to treating the TSVCIS parameters as an=20
> > > entirely opaque blob (codec, convey these N octets to the peer=20
> > > with the appropriate one- or two-byte trailer for payload type=20
> > > identification and framing), that would be interoperably=20
> > > implementable, since the black-box bits are up to some other codec =
to interpret.
> > > > >
> > > > > In a similar vein, we mention but do not completely specify=20
> > > > > the
> > > potential for using CODB as an end-to-end framing bit, in Section
> > > 3.1 (see Comment), which is not interoperably implementable =
without further details.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > --
> > > > > ----
> > > > > --
> > > > > COMMENT:
> > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > --
> > > > > ----
> > > > > --
> > > > >
> > > > > Where is [TSVCIS] available?
> > > > >
> > > > > Is [NRLVDR] the same as
> > > > > https://apps.dtic.mil/dtic/tr/fulltext/u2/a588068.pdf ?  A URL =

> > > > > in the
> > > references would be helpful.
> > > > >
> > > > > Is additional TSVCIS data only present after 2400bps MELPe and =

> > > > > the first
> > > thing to get dropped under bandwidth pressure?  The abstract and=20
> > > introduction imply this by calling out MELPe 2400 bps speech=20
> > > parameters explicitly, but Section 3 says that TSVCIS augments=20
> > > standard 600, 1200, and
> > > 2400 bps MELP frames.
> > > > >
> > > > > It's helpful that Section 3.3 gives some general guidance for=20
> > > > > decoding
> > > this payload type ("[t]he way to determine the number of=20
> > > TSVCIS/MELPe frames is to identify each frame type and length"),=20
> > > but I think some generic considerations would be very helpful to=20
> > > the reader much earlier, along the lines of "MELPe and TSVCIS data =

> > > payloads are decoded from the end, using the CODA and CODB (and,=20
> > > if necessary, CODC and others) bits to determine the type of =
payload.
> > > For MELPe payloads the type also indicates the payload length,=20
> > > whereas for TSVCIS data an additional length field is present, in=20
> > > one of two possible formats.  A TSVCIS coder frame consists of a=20
> > > MELPe data payload followed by zero or one TSVCIS data payload;=20
> > > after the TSVCIS payload's presence/length is determined, then the =

> > > preceding MELPe payload can be determined and decoded.  Per=20
> > > Section 3.3, multiple TSVCIS frames can be present in a single RTP =
packet."
> > > This (or something like it) would also serve to clarify the role =
of the COD* bits, which is otherwise only implicitly introduced.
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 1.1
> > > > >
> > > > > RFC 2736 is BCP 36 (but it's updated by RFC 8088 which is for=20
> > > > > some
> > > reason an Informational document and not part of BCP 36?!).
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 2
> > > > >
> > > > >    In addition to the augmented speech data, the TSVCIS =
specification
> > > > >    identifies which speech coder and framing bits are to be =
encrypted,
> > > > >    and how they are protected by forward error correction =
(FEC)
> > > > >    techniques (using block codes).  At the RTP transport =
layer, only the
> > > > >    speech coder related bits need to be considered and are =
conveyed in
> > > > >    unencrypted form.  In most IP-based network deployments,=20
> > > > > standard
> > > > >
> > > > > Am I reading this correctly that this text is just summarizing =

> > > > > what's in
> > > the TSVCIS spec in terms of what needs to be in unencrypted form,=20
> > > so the "only the speech coder related bits[...]" is not new=20
> > > information from this document?  I'm not sure I agree with the=20
> > > conclusion, regardless -- won't the
> > > (MELPe) speech coder bits be enough to convey the semantic content =

> > > of the audio stream, something that one might desire to keep =
confidential?
> > > > >
> > > > >    link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS 140 link =
encryptors or Type
> > > > >    1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to secure the RTP =
speech
> > > > >    contents.  Further, it is desirable to support the highest =
voice
> > > > >    quality between endpoints which is only possible without =
the overhead
> > > > >    of FEC.
> > > > >
> > > > > I think I'm missing a step in how this conclusion was reached.
> > > > >
> > > > >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth =
available
> > > > >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS specific =
speech
> > > > >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first =
byte-packed
> > > > >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > > > >
> > > > > Per the Discuss point, how do I know which parameters need to=20
> > > > > be
> > > transported, and in what order?
> > > > >
> > > > >    Byte packing of TSVCIS speech data into packed parameters =
is
> > > > >    processed as per the following example:
> > > > >
> > > > >       Three-bit field: bits A, B, and C (A is MSB, C is LSB)
> > > > >       Five-bit field: bits D, E, F, G, and H (D is MSB, H is
> > > > > LSB)
> > > > >
> > > > >            MSB                                              =
LSB
> > > > >             0      1      2      3      4      5      6      7
> > > > >         =
+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
> > > > >         |   H  |   G  |   F  |   E  |   D  |   C  |   B  |   A =
 |
> > > > >        =20
> > > > > +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
> > > > >
> > > > >    This packing method places the three-bit field "first" in =
the lowest
> > > > >    bits followed by the next five-bit field.  Parameters may =
be split
> > > > >    between octets with the most significant bits in the =
earlier octet.
> > > > >    Any unfilled bits in the last octet MUST be filled with =
zero.
> > > > >
> > > > > I agree with Adam that this is very unclear.  A is the MSB of=20
> > > > > the
> > > three-bit field but the LSB of the octet overall?
> > > > > We probably need an example of splitting a parameter across=20
> > > > > octets as
> > > well, to get the bit ordering right.
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.1
> > > > >
> > > > >    It should be noted that CODB for both the 2400 and 600 bps =
modes MAY
> > > > >    deviate from the values in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as =
an end-to-
> > > > >    end framing bit.  Frame decoding would remain distinct as=20
> > > > > CODA being
> > > > >
> > > > > Where is the use of CODB as an end-to-end framing bit defined? =
=20
> > > > > If we're
> > > going to provide neither a complete description of how to do it=20
> > > nor a reference to a better description, we probably shouldn't =
mention it at all.
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.2
> > > > >
> > > > >    RTP packet.  The packed parameters are counted in octets =
(TC).  In
> > > > >    the preferred placement, shown in Figure 6, a single =
trailing octet
> > > > >    SHALL be appended to include a two-bit rate code, CODA and=20
> > > > > CODB,
> > > > >
> > > > > I'd consider saying something about this being the preferred=20
> > > > > format
> > > > > ("placement") due to its shorter length than the alternative,=20
> > > > > and say
> > > that it "SHOULD be used for TSVCIS payloads with TC less than or=20
> > > equal to 77 octetes".
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3.3
> > > > >
> > > > > When a longer packetization interval is used, is that=20
> > > > > indicated by
> > > signaling or RTP timestamps or otherwise?
> > > > >
> > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet MAY be of =
different coder
> > > > >    bitrates.  With the exception for the variable length =
TSVCIS
> > > > >    parameter frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing byte =
identify
> > > > >    the contents and length as per Table 1.
> > > > >
> > > > > Maybe also note that the penultimate octet gives the length =
there?
> > > > >
> > > > >    Information describing the number of frames contained in an =
RTP
> > > > >    packet is not transmitted as part of the RTP payload.  The =
way to
> > > > >    determine the number of TSVCIS/MELPe frames is to identify =
each frame
> > > > >    type and length thereby counting the total number of octets =
within
> > > > >    the RTP packet.
> > > > >
> > > > > terminology nit: if a frame is the combination of MELPe and=20
> > > > > TSVCIS
> > > payload data units then there are two layres of decoding to get a=20
> > > length for the frame, since we have to get the TSVCIS length and =
then the MELPe length.
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 4.2
> > > > >
> > > > >    Parameter "ptime" cannot be used for the purpose of=20
> > > > > specifying the
> > > > >
> > > > > nit: missing article ("The parameter")
> > > > >
> > > > >    will be impossible to distinguish which mode is about to be =
used
> > > > >    (e.g., when ptime=3D68, it would be impossible to =
distinguish if the
> > > > >    packet is carrying one frame of 67.5 ms or three frames of =
22.5 ms).
> > > > >
> > > > > So how is the operating mode determined, then?
> > > > > (I think this is the same question I asked above)
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 4.4
> > > > >
> > > > >    For example, if offerer bitrates are "2400,600" and answer =
bitrates
> > > > >    are "600,2400", the initial bitrate is 600.  If other =
bitrates are
> > > > >    provided by the answerer, any common bitrate between the =
offer and
> > > > >    answer MAY be used at any time in the future.  Activation =
of these
> > > > >    other common bitrates is beyond the scope of this document.
> > > > >
> > > > > It seems important to specify whether this requires a new O/A=20
> > > > > exchange
> > > or can be done "spontaneously" by just encoding different frame =
types.
> > > > > (It seems like the latter is possible, on first glance, and=20
> > > > > this is implied by Section 3.3's discussion of mixing them in=20
> > > > > a single
> > > > > packet.)
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 5
> > > > >
> > > > > Please expand PLC at first use (not second).
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 6
> > > > >
> > > > > I don't understand the PLC usage.  Is the idea that a=20
> > > > > receiver, on
> > > seeing an SSRC gap, constructs fictitious PLC frames to "fill the =
gap"
> > > > > and passes the resulting stream to the decoder?
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 8
> > > > >
> > > > >    and important considerations in [RFC7201].  Applications =
SHOULD use
> > > > >    one or more appropriate strong security mechanisms.  The =
rest of this
> > > > >    section discusses the security-impacting properties of the =
payload
> > > > >    format itself.
> > > > >
> > > > > I thought we described TSVCIS itself (much earlier in the
> > > > > document) as
> > > requiring encryption for some data; wouldn't that translate to a =
"MUST"
> > > > > here and not a "SHOULD"?
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > >
> =20

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<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Hi =
Ben,</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">With this =
social</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"> <FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">distancing situation, I'm finally catching up on open =
items myself.&nbsp; I have made the changes as we have discussed and =
incorporated</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">your =
suggestions.&nbsp; I believe the changes are fully contained in the two =
paragraphs below:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Section 2 (last =
paragraph) - Clarification for octet count</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">(was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">In order to =
accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented =
speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">data,</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">it =
is only necessary to specify the number of octets</FONT></U></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">containing =
the packed TSVCIS parameters</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">.&nbsp; The encoding to do so =
is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">presented in =
Section 3.2.&nbsp; TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in =
two</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">configurations =
using</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">15 =
and 35 packed octet parameters</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri"> [TSVCIS].&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">(now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">In order to =
accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented =
speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">data,</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">an =
octet count specifies the number of octets =
representing</FONT></U></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">the packed =
TSVCIS parameters</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">.&nbsp; The encoding to do so is presented =
in</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Section =
3.2.&nbsp; TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">configurations =
using</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">a =
fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet</FONT></U></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">parameters =
in a</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">standardized</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"><U><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri"> order</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri"> [TSVCIS].&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>
<BR>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Section 3.1 =
(first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for CODA, =
CODB</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">(was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">It should be =
noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate =
from</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">the value in =
Table 1 when bit 55 is used</FONT></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">as an end-to-end framing =
bit</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">(now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">It should be =
noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate =
from</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">the value in =
Table 1 when bit 55 is used</FONT></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"><U> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">as an alternating =
1/0</FONT></U></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><U><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">end-to-end =
framing bit</FONT></U></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">.&nbsp; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Ben, I believe =
this addresses your comments and requests for clarifications as per our =
email discussion chain be</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">low.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Thanks for you =
comments and with your concurrence (and my home computer's cooperation), =
I will post a new draft hopefully acceptable for final =
approval.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Regards to all =
and stay</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"> <FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">on =
the good side of Darwin.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">Victor</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN></P>
<BR>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">-----Original =
Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">From: Benjamin =
Kaduk &lt;kaduk@mit.edu&gt; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Sent: Friday, =
February 14, 2020 2:43 PM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">To: =
victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; 'Barry Leiba' =
&lt;barryleiba@computer.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Cc: 'Roni Even =
(A)' &lt;roni.even@huawei.com&gt;; 'The IESG' &lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;; =
'Catherine Meadows' &lt;catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil&gt;; 'IETF =
SecDir' &lt;secdir@ietf.org&gt;; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; =
'Ali Begen' &lt;ali.begen@networked.media&gt;; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; =
avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)' &lt;Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com&gt;; =
'IETF discussion list' &lt;ietf@ietf.org&gt;; =
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.org</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Subject: Re: =
Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS =
and COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Hi =
Barry,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">As Victor =
notes, this one was/is waiting on me; he did reply (offlist) =
on</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">15 January but =
I seem to have missed it amid a deluge of other mail that arrived at =
that time.&nbsp; Thanks for the reminder, and thanks Victor for =
re-sending the comments.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">(inline)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">On Fri, Feb 14, =
2020 at 08:20:54AM -0500, victor.demjanenko@vocal.com =
wrote:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; HI =
Barry,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Thanks for =
recalling this was still outstanding.&nbsp; I had emailed Ben just after =
the holidays and did not realize we had no response.&nbsp; The below is =
what we suggested to Ben to address concerns he =
raised.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
--------------------</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Hi =
Ben,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Hope your =
holidays were good.&nbsp; Our were both good and busy.&nbsp; Deliveries =
for two NASA projects and the holidays kept us from responding =
sooner.&nbsp; But we do want to get this draft =
completed.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; With your =
permission, I=E2=80=99d like to address your comments directly, resolve =
what changes we should make and then publish a new version with a =
summary of our out-of-band discussions.&nbsp; We don=E2=80=99t have a =
lot of experience with drafting such documents and would like to know =
exactly what is needed to make this draft acceptable.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; I believe =
there are two comments/issues to address:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
1)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; CODA, CODB</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Your =
comment ends by stating:&nbsp; =E2=80=9C(Or, of course, the use of CODB =
as an alternating 1/0 bit as the framing usage could be documented =
instead.)=E2=80=9D&nbsp; We can do this as follows:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
(original)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; It should =
be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate =
from</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the value in Table 1 when bit 55 =
is used as an end-to-end framing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bit. Frame decoding would remain =
distinct as CODA being zero on its</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; own would indicate a 7-byte =
frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate and</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the use of 600 bps speech coding =
could be deduced from the RTP</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; timestamp (and anticipated by =
the SDP negotiations).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; (adding =
=E2=80=9Calternating 1/0=E2=80=9D)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; It should =
be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate =
from</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the value in Table 1 when bit 55 =
is used as an alternating 1/0 end-to-end framing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bit. Frame decoding would remain =
distinct as CODA being zero on its</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; own would indicate a 7-byte =
frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate and</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the use of 600 bps speech coding =
could be deduced from the RTP</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; timestamp (and anticipated by =
the SDP negotiations).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; I think =
this change would be sufficient to address your concern about what to =
expect for CODB.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">This looks like =
the minimal sufficient change, yes.&nbsp; (I use =
&quot;minimal&quot;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">because I would =
say more if I was writing it, but I don't think I can insist that you =
write it the way I would -- it's your document after =
all!)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
2.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Packing and unpacking</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; You are =
correct that I am trying to vaguely describe a middle layer shim that is =
neither RTP nor speech coder.&nbsp; So it definitely does need to be =
clear.&nbsp; The vagueness comes from the speech coder description being =
a FOUO document.&nbsp; Its now unclassified so I can potentially say =
more (and I did make some enhancements of the parameter description =
already).&nbsp; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; So I am =
trying to understand exactly what you think is vague in our current =
description:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; TSVCIS =
augmented speech data is derived from the signal =
processing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and data already performed by =
the MELPe speech coder.&nbsp; For the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; purposes of this specification, =
only the general parameter nature of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS will be =
characterized.&nbsp; Depending on the bandwidth =
available</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (and FEC requirements), a =
varying number of TSVCIS-specific speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; coder parameters need to be =
transported.&nbsp; These are first byte-packed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and then conveyed from encoder =
to decoder.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Byte packing of TSVCIS speech =
data into packed parameters is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; processed as per the following =
example:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Three-bit =
field: bits A, B, and C (A is MSB, C is LSB)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Five-bit =
field: bits D, E, F, G, and H (D is MSB, H is LSB)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
MSB&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
LSB</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 0&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
1&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
3&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 4&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
5&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 6&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
7</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+</FONT></SPAN></=
P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
|&nbsp;&nbsp; H&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; G&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; F&nbsp; =
|&nbsp;&nbsp; E&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; D&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; C&nbsp; =
|&nbsp;&nbsp; B&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; A&nbsp; | </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+</FONT></SPAN></=
P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This packing method places the =
three-bit field &quot;first&quot; in the lowest</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bits followed by the next =
five-bit field.&nbsp; Parameters may be split</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; between octets with the most =
significant bits in the earlier octet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Any unfilled bits in the last =
octet MUST be filled with zero.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">[not actually =
relevant to the Discuss part, but if there is always exactly one 3-bit =
parameter and one 5-bit parameter, then this text allowing splitting =
across octets will never be used and is potentially confusing to =
mention.]</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In order to accommodate a =
varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; data, it is only necessary to =
specify the number of octets containing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the packed TSVCIS =
parameters.&nbsp; The encoding to do so is presented </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
in</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">I think the =
&quot;only necessary to specify the number of octets&quot; is the key =
stumbling point, for me -- I need to know the number of octets as well =
as the order of the parameters within the list, which is more =
information than just the number of octets.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Section 3.2.&nbsp; TSVCIS =
specifically uses the NRL VDR in two</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; configurations using 15 and 35 =
packed octet parameters [TSVCIS].&nbsp; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">I think I =
failed to internalize the &quot;two configurations using 15 and 35 =
packed octet parameters&quot; the first time I read the document, as =
this does help give the reader a clue that [TSVCIS] gives a good picture =
of what parameters go where.&nbsp; So it seems like we could easily =
append to that, for &quot;using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet =
parameters in a fixed order [TSVCIS]&quot; and that would resolve my =
concerns.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; The speech =
coder description of the parameters is the following:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; So the =
three bit pitch is first (bits 56 to 58), followed by a five bit =
amplitude (bits 59 to 63) and then an array of spectral components, each =
8-bit wide (starting at bit 64).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">[And maybe =
TSVCIS specifes that the spectral components are derived from some =
fundamental harmonic decomposition that naturally quantizes to a =
number-of-parameters/accuracy tradeoff with a natural order.&nbsp; If =
so, we could also rely on that instead of my proposed change above; let =
me know if you want to explore that path further.]</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Based on =
this information, I=E2=80=99m not sure what we should add to our =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; draft to =
make the description of packing/unpacking clearer.&nbsp; Can you =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; make any =
suggestions or does this table help you with what you did not =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
know?&nbsp; (I don=E2=80=99t think I should put this table into the =
draft RFC </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
however.)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Hopefully the =
above helps to clarify.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">Thanks, and =
sorry for the delay.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">-Ben</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Thanks for =
your attention and comments.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Victor =
&amp; Dave</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
-----Original Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; From: =
Barry Leiba &lt;barryleiba@computer.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Sent: =
Friday, February 14, 2020 7:38 AM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; To: =
Benjamin Kaduk &lt;kaduk@mit.edu&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Cc: =
victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; Roni Even (A) &lt;roni.even@huawei.com&gt;; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; The IESG =
&lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;; Catherine Meadows </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&lt;catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil&gt;; IETF SecDir =
&lt;secdir@ietf.org&gt;; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&lt;ali.begen@networked.media&gt;; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; =
avt@ietf.org; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Dave =
Satterlee (Vocal) &lt;Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com&gt;; IETF discussion =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; list =
&lt;ietf@ietf.org&gt;;&nbsp; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.orgygv =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; Subject: =
Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; (with =
DISCUSS and COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; This is =
still outstanding, since November.&nbsp; Victor, where are we on this =
one?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
Barry</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; On Mon, =
Nov 25, 2019 at 1:46 AM Benjamin Kaduk &lt;kaduk@mit.edu&gt; =
wrote:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; Hi =
Victor,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; On =
Tue, Nov 19, 2019 at 03:14:21PM -0500, victor.demjanenko@vocal.com =
wrote:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Hi Ben,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Sorry I overlooked sending you a response.&nbsp; I would like to =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
address the two concerns you have by explaining what the speech coders =
are doing.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
Thanks for the extra clarifications.&nbsp; To supply one of my own: I'm =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; not =
concerned that the protocol doesn't work as implemented, but =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; just =
want to make sure that the document includes enough information =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; to =
admit new implementations without guesswork.&nbsp; That is to say, =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&quot;either tell me how to do it or tell me where to look that tells me =
how to do it&quot;.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
WRT to 600 bps MELP, there is one TSVCIS mode that uses one bit =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
beyond the 54-bit frame for MELP 600 as a frame sync which alternates =
between frames.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
With two or more MELP 600bps frames in one RTP packet, if any =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
frame indicates 600 bps by CODA being 0 and CODB being 1, then we =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
know the stream is 600bps.&nbsp; If there is a single frame in an RTP =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
packet, you can still deduce this by looking at every other RTP =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
packet (every other MELP 600bps</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
frame) and by the timestamp advance.&nbsp; Most likely the two ends =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
would negotiate 600 bps in SDP anyways so there really should not =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
be a problem.&nbsp; I know it's not pretty but its workable.&nbsp; I =
hope </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
this explanation helps you with the concerns for this =
issue.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; In =
this case, the use as an &quot;end-to-end framing bit&quot; (i.e., the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
alternating behavior you describe above) is not explicitly stated; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; one =
might imagine a scheme where the framing usage is to have the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; bit =
cycle through 1, 1, 0, and 0, or some other scheme.&nbsp; I'd suggest =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; to =
note in the document that if any instance of (CODA, CODB) =3D=3D (0, =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; 1) is =
observed, then the 600bps mode is in use.&nbsp; It might also be =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
helpful to include the observation that two successive MELPe =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
payloads with CODA =3D=3D CODB =3D=3D 0 indicates the 2400bps mode (and =
that </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
seeing them in a single RTP packet is decisive, whereas additional =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
information about packet non-loss would be needed in the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
one-MELPe-frame-per-RTP-packet case), but that would be a fair bit =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; of =
additional text and might be diminishing returns.&nbsp; (Or, of =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
course, the use of CODB as an alternating 1/0 bit as the framing =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; usage =
could be documented</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
instead.)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
As for the TSVCIS parameter packing/unpacking, this is really =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
simple.&nbsp; There is exactly on three bit parameter, exactly one five =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
bit parameter and a variable number of eight bit parameters.&nbsp; In =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
our view, the speech coder itself (or a wrapper for it) is =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
responsible for preparing the block of octets.&nbsp; RTP then just =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
transports it.&nbsp; On receive, the complementary wrapper reverses the =
packing operation.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
I hope this clarifies and explains the simplicity.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
That's exactly what I expected to happen; however, it's not what I =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
believe the current text of the document is describing.&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
Specifically, I think that the current text implies that the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&quot;preparing the block of octets&quot; and &quot;complementary =
wrapper reverses </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; the =
packing operation&quot; are supposed to be part of the RTP payload =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
format that this document describes, but this document does not have =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
enough information to actually perform those operations =
reversibly.&nbsp; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; If =
the packing is to be done in the speech coder, then this document =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
doesn't need to talk about the packing at all (e.g., at the end of =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
Section 2); if we need to keep the packing/wrapper in this document =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; then =
we need to indicate that there's a defined priority order for =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; the =
(8-octet) TSVCIS parameters in the TSVCIS references, to allow the =
packing/unpacking to be deterministic.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
Thanks,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
Ben</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
-----Original Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
From: Benjamin Kaduk &lt;kaduk@mit.edu&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Sent: Thursday, October 31, 2019 8:12 PM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
To: Barry Leiba &lt;barryleiba@computer.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Cc: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; Roni Even (A) </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&lt;roni.even@huawei.com&gt;; The IESG &lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;; Catherine =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Meadows &lt;catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil&gt;; IETF SecDir =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&lt;secdir@ietf.org&gt;; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&lt;ali.begen@networked.media&gt;; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
avt@ietf.org; Dave Satterlee (Vocal) &lt;Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com&gt;; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
IETF discussion list &lt;ietf@ietf.org&gt;; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.org</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and =
COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
I don't think so, unfortunately.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
I do see the clarification about CODB's potential for deviation =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
from Table 1, that only the 600 bps MELPe is allowed to deviate, =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
and that CODA gets us to &quot;it's one of 2400 or 600 bps&quot; and the =
RTP </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
timestamp disambiguates that</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
600 bps is in use.&nbsp; But, it seems that this means that the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
recipient in general should not rely on CODB to differentiate 600 =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
from 2400 bps, and instead is more robustly implemented by =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
*always* using the RTP timestamp to detect 600 bps, since that =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
will always work and CODB will sometimes not work under conditions =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
not fully specified here.&nbsp; So, if we are unwilling or unable to =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
clarify what those conditions are (e.g., whether at a minimum =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
mutual agreement is required), then I think we need to describe =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
this procedure of consulting the RTP timestamp as the default behavior =
and avoid giving the impression that CODB should be used to do =
so.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Additionally, I don't see anything to address my concern about =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
TSVCIS parameter decoding.&nbsp; To be clear, the procedure I see this =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
document describing is that:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
- TSVCIS gives parameters (and their lengths in bits) to the =
codec</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp; described in this document</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
- this document specifies how to densely encode those parameters into =
a</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp; byetstream</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
- RTP transmits that encoded bytestream to the peer</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
- the codec specified by this is responsible for turning that =
encoded</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp; bystream back into a list of TSVCIS parameters (and =
their length </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
in bits)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
I don't see how that last step is attainable with only the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
information provided by this document.&nbsp; I *assume* that one of the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
TSVCIS specifications has a canonical (ordered) listing of =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
parameters, and that the list of parmeters given to this codec in =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
the first step will always be an initial prefix of that list, but =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
that's just me guessing at how to make sense of the stated =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
procedure given insufficient information.&nbsp; I don't think it's =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
appropriate to make the reader of an RFC guess at what to do; we =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
need to either say how to do it or give a pointer to an external =
reference that does.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
-Ben</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
On Tue, Oct 29, 2019 at 02:26:09PM -0400, Barry Leiba =
wrote:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; Ben, does the -04 version address everything?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; Barry</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; On Thu, Oct 24, 2019 at 1:42 PM &lt;victor.demjanenko@vocal.com&gt; =
wrote:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I forgot to address security comments in one email.&nbsp; The =
changes are:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 8, second paragraph - Suggested edit by =
reviewer</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This RTP payload format and the TSVCIS =
decoder do not exhibit any</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; significant non-uniformity in the =
receiver-side computational</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; complexity for packet processing and thus =
are unlikely to pose a</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; denial-of-service threat due to the receipt =
of pathological data.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Additionally, the RTP payload format does =
not contain any active</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; content.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This RTP payload format and the TSVCIS =
decoder, to the best of our</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; knowledge, do not exhibit any significant =
non-uniformity in the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; receiver-side computational complexity for =
packet processing and thus</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; are unlikely to pose a denial-of-service =
threat due to the receipt of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; pathological data. Additionally, the RTP =
payload format does not</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; contain any active =
content.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 8, third paragraph - Suggested edit by =
reviewer</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Please see the security considerations =
discussed in [RFC6562]</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; regarding VAD and its effect on =
bitrates.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Please see the security considerations =
discussed in [RFC6562]</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; regarding Voice Activity Detect (VAD) and =
its effect on bitrates.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Victor</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; -----Original Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; From: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;victor.demjanenko@vocal.com&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Sent: Thursday, October 24, 2019 10:05 AM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; To: 'Roni Even (A)' &lt;roni.even@huawei.com&gt;; 'Benjamin =
Kaduk'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;kaduk@mit.edu&gt;; 'The IESG' =
&lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali =
Begen'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;ali.begen@networked.media&gt;; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and =
COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Hi Everyone,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; First we want to thank everyone for their review and comments =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; for this</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
draft RFC.&nbsp; We believe we reviewed all the comments and =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
suggestions and incorporated them adequately in the next draft =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
(04).&nbsp; We'd like to send out this list of exact changes in case =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
anyone has additional comments or thinks the clarifications are =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
inadequate.&nbsp; We would be most happy to address concerns before =
publishing draft 04 tomorrow.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; With so many emails from a half dozen or more reviewers, we =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; apologize</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
that we cannot address each sender individually.&nbsp; We hope this =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
detail is sufficient for everyone.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Again, many thanks to all.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Victor &amp; Dave</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
--------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></SP=
AN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --------------------------</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 1.1 - Suggested reference to RFC 8088 =
added.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Best current practices for writing an RTP =
payload format</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; specification were followed =
[RFC2736].</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Best current practices for writing an RTP =
payload format</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; specification were followed [RFC2736] =
[RFC8088].</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 2, paragraphs 3 and 4 - Suggested edits by =
reviewers</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In addition to the augmented speech data, =
the TSVCIS specification</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; identifies which speech coder and framing =
bits are to be encrypted,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and how they are protected by forward error =
correction (FEC)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; techniques (using block codes).&nbsp; At the =
RTP transport layer, only the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; speech coder related bits need to be =
considered and are conveyed in</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; unencrypted form.&nbsp; In most IP-based =
network deployments, standard</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS =
140 link encryptors or Type</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to =
secure the RTP speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; contents.&nbsp; Further, it is desirable to =
support the highest voice</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; quality between endpoints which is only =
possible without the overhead</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; of FEC.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from =
the signal processing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and data already performed by the MELPe =
speech coder.&nbsp; For the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; purposes of this specification, only the =
general parameter nature of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS will be characterized.&nbsp; =
Depending on the bandwidth available</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (and FEC requirements), a varying number of =
TSVCIS specific speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; coder parameters need to be =
transported.&nbsp; These are first byte-packed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and then conveyed from encoder to =
decoder.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In addition to the augmented speech data, =
the TSVCIS specification</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; identifies which speech coder and framing =
bits are to be encrypted,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and how they are protected by forward error =
correction (FEC)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; techniques (using block codes).&nbsp; At the =
RTP transport layer, only the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; speech-coder-related bits need to be =
considered and are conveyed in</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; unencrypted form.&nbsp; In most IP-based =
network deployments, standard</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS =
140 link encryptors or Type</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to =
secure the RTP speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; contents.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from =
the signal processing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and data already performed by the MELPe =
speech coder.&nbsp; For the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; purposes of this specification, only the =
general parameter nature of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS will be characterized.&nbsp; =
Depending on the bandwidth available</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (and FEC requirements), a varying number of =
TSVCIS-specific speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; coder parameters need to be =
transported.&nbsp; These are first byte-packed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and then conveyed from encoder to =
decoder.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3, last sentence paragraph 3 - Suggested edit by =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; reviewer</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; When more than one codec data frame =
is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; present in a single RTP packet, the =
timestamp is, as always, that of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the oldest data frame represented in the RTP =
packet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; When more than one codec data frame =
is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; present in a single RTP packet, the =
timestamp specified is that of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the oldest data frame represented in the RTP =
packet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.1, last paragraph - Clarified permission for MELP =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; 600 end-to-end framing bit</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; It should be noted that CODB for both the =
2400 and 600 bps modes MAY</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; deviate from the values in Table 1 when bit =
55 is used as an end-to-</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; end framing bit.&nbsp; Frame decoding would =
remain distinct as CODA being</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; zero on its own would indicate a 7-byte =
frame for either rate and the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; use of 600 bps speech coding could be =
deduced from the RTP timestamp</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (and anticipated by the SDP =
negotiations).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 =
bps mode MAY deviate from</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as =
an end-to-end framing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as =
CODA being zero on its</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either =
2400 or 600 bps rate and</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the use of 600 bps speech coding could be =
deduced from the RTP</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP =
negotiations).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.2, first paragraph - Clarifications requested by =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; reviewers</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The TSVCIS augmented speech data as packed =
parameters MUST be placed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; immediately after a corresponding MELPe 2400 =
bps payload in the same</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; RTP packet.&nbsp; The packed parameters are =
counted in octets (TC).&nbsp; In</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the preferred placement, shown in Figure 6, =
a single trailing octet</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; SHALL be appended to include a two-bit rate =
code, CODA and CODB,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (both bits set to one) and a six-bit =
modified count (MTC).&nbsp; The</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; special modified count value of all ones =
(representing a MTC value of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 63) SHALL NOT be used for this format as it =
is used as the indicator</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; for the alternate packing format shown =
next.&nbsp; In a standard</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; implementation, the TSVCIS speech coder uses =
a minimum of 15 octets</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; for parameters in octet packed form.&nbsp; =
The modified count (MTC) MUST</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; be reduced by 15 from the full octet count =
(TC).&nbsp; Computed MTC =3D TC-</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 15.&nbsp; This accommodates a maximum of 77 =
parameter octets (maximum</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; value of MTC is 62, 77 is the sum of =
62+15).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The TSVCIS augmented speech data as packed =
parameters MUST be placed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; immediately after a corresponding MELPe 2400 =
bps payload in the same</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; RTP packet.&nbsp; The packed parameters are =
counted in octets (TC).&nbsp; The</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; preferred placement SHOULD be used for =
TSVCIS payloads with TC less</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; than or equal to 77 octets, is shown in =
Figure 6.&nbsp; In the preferred</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; placement, a single trailing octet SHALL be =
appended to include a</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; two-bit rate code, CODA and CODB, (both bits =
set to one) and a six-</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bit modified count (MTC).&nbsp; The special =
modified count value of all</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; ones (representing a MTC value of 63) SHALL =
NOT be used for this</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; format as it is used as the indicator for =
the alternate packing</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; format shown next.&nbsp; In a standard =
implementation, the TSVCIS speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; coder uses a minimum of 15 octets for =
parameters in octet packed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; form.&nbsp; The modified count (MTC) MUST be =
reduced by 15 from the full</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; octet count (TC).&nbsp; Computed MTC =3D =
TC-15.&nbsp; This accommodates a maximum</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; of 77 parameter octets (maximum value of MTC =
is 62, 77 is the sum of</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 62+15).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.3, first paragraph - Suggested edit by =
reviewer</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; A TSVCIS RTP packet consists of zero or more =
TSVCIS coder frames</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (each consisting of MELPe and TSVCIS coder =
data) followed by zero or</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; one MELPe comfort noise frame.&nbsp; The =
presence of a comfort noise frame</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; can be determined by its rate code bits in =
its last octet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; A TSVCIS RTP packet payload consists of zero =
or more consecutive</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS coder frames (each consisting of =
MELPe 2400 and TSVCIS coder</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; data), with the oldest frame first, followed =
by zero or one MELPe</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; comfort noise frame.&nbsp; The presence of a =
comfort noise frame can be</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; determined by its rate code bits in its last =
octet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.3, fourth paragraph - Clarification requested by =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; reviewers</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet =
MAY be of different coder</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bitrates.&nbsp; With the exception for the =
variable length TSVCIS</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; parameter frames, the coder rate bits in the =
trailing byte identify</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the contents and length as per Table =
1.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet =
MAY have varying TSVCIS</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; parameter octet counts.&nbsp; Its packed =
parameter octet count (length) is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; indicated in the trailing byte(s).&nbsp; All =
MELPe frames in a single RTP</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; packet MUST be of the same coder =
bitrate.&nbsp; For all MELPe coder</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing =
byte identify the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; contents and length as per Table =
1.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 4.1 - Editor note removed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 4.1 - Change controller is now</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Change controller: IETF, contact =
&lt;avt@ietf.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 5, first paragraph - Suggested edits by =
reviewers</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (was)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; A primary application of TSVCIS is for radio =
communications of voice</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; conversations, and discontinuous =
transmissions are normal.&nbsp; When</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS is used in an IP network, TSVCIS RTP =
packet transmissions may</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; cease and resume frequently.&nbsp; RTP =
synchronization source (SSRC)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; sequence number gaps indicate lost packets =
to be filled by PLC, while</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; abrupt loss of RTP packets indicates =
intended discontinuous</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (now)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; A primary application of TSVCIS is for radio =
communications of voice</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; conversations, and discontinuous =
transmissions are normal.&nbsp; When</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS is used in an IP network, TSVCIS RTP =
packet transmissions may</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; cease and resume frequently.&nbsp; RTP =
synchronization source (SSRC)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; sequence number gaps indicate lost packets =
to be filled by Packet</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Loss Concealment (PLC), while abrupt loss of =
RTP packets indicates</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; intended discontinuous transmissions.&nbsp; =
Resumption of voice</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; transmission SHOULD be indicated by the RTP =
marker bit (M) set to 1.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 10 - Added reference</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (added)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; [RFC8088]&nbsp; Westerlund, M., &quot;How to =
Write an RTP Payload Format&quot;,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp; RFC 8088, DOI 10.17487/RFC8088, May =
2017,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &lt;<A =
HREF=3D"http://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8088">http://www.rfc-editor.org=
/info/rfc8088</A>&gt;.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
--------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></SP=
AN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; -----------------------------</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; -----Original Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; From: Roni Even (A) =
&lt;roni.even@huawei.com&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Sent: Sunday, October 6, 2019 2:09 AM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; To: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; 'Benjamin Kaduk' =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;kaduk@mit.edu&gt;; 'The IESG' =
&lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali =
Begen'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;ali.begen@networked.media&gt;; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and =
COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Hi,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; About the reference to TSVCIS.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; The RTP payload is about how to encapsulate the payload in an =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; RTP</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
packet. The objective is to define how an RTP stack can insert the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
tsvcis frames and&nbsp; extract the tsvcis frames from the RTP =
packet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Typically it is not required to understand the payload structure =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
in order to be able to perform the encapsulation.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; This is why the reference to the payload is Informational and =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; we did not require to have it publically available.&nbsp; If =
there </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; is a need to understand the payload itself for the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; encapsulating than we need more information in the RTP payload =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; specification and a publically available normative reference. =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I think this is not the case here</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Roni Even</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; AVTCore co-chair (ex Payload)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; -----Original Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; From: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; [<A =
HREF=3D"mailto:victor.demjanenko@vocal.com">mailto:victor.demjanenko@voca=
l.com</A>]</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Sent: Saturday, October 05, 2019 12:18 AM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; To: 'Benjamin Kaduk'; 'The IESG'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali =
Begen';</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org; 'Victor Demjanenko, Ph.D.'; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and =
COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Everyone,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Thanks for the comments.&nbsp; I think I mis-understood the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ambiguity with</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
respect to to changing rates within a RTP packet.&nbsp; That was not =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
plan.&nbsp; An RTP packet must have MELP speech frames of the same =
rate.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
What is possible is that the amount of augmented TSVCIS speech =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
data may vary from one speech frame to the next.&nbsp; This allows for =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
a dynamic VDR as suggested by the NRL paper.&nbsp; So an RTP packet may =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
have varying TSVCIS data but must always have MELPe 2400 =
data.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Again backwards parsing is necessary but the timestamp =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; uniformly</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
increments 22.5msec per combined MELP/TSVCIS speech =
frame.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; The NRL is a good public reference on the VDR aspects.&nbsp; =
The </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; actual</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
TSVCIS spec we had was FOUO so we could not replicate its detail.&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
(I believe a later spec is public or at least partially public.&nbsp; I =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
am trying to get this.)&nbsp; The opaque data is pretty obvious with the =
TSVCIS spec in hand.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; We will address the issues/concerns raised next week.&nbsp; =
Other </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; business</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
had priority.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Thank you and enjoy the weekend.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Regards,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Victor &amp; Dave</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; -----Original Message-----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; From: Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker =
&lt;noreply@ietf.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Sent: Wednesday, October 2, 2019 10:40 PM</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; To: The IESG &lt;iesg@ietf.org&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; &lt;ali.begen@networked.media&gt;; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ali.begen@networked.media; avt@ietf.org</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Subject: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on =
draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position =
for</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: Discuss</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; free to cut this introductory paragraph, =
however.)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Please refer to</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; <A =
HREF=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html">https:=
//www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html</A></FONT></SPAN></P>=


<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT =
positions.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found =
here:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; <A =
HREF=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis/">http=
s://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis/</A></FONT></SPAN>=
</P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
--------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></SP=
AN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; DISCUSS:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
--------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></SP=
AN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I support Magnus' point about the time-ordering of adjacent =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; frames in a</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
packet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Additionally, I am not sure that there's quite enough here to =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; be</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
interoperably implementable.&nbsp; Specifically, we seem to be lacking =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
a description of how an encoder or decoder knows which TSVCIS =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
parameters, and in what order, to byte-pack or unpack, =
respectively.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
One might surmise that there is a canonical listing in [TSVCIS], =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
but this document does not say that, and furthermore [TSVCIS] is only =
listed as an informative reference.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
(I couldn't get my hands on my copy, at least on short notice.)&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
If we limited ourselves to treating the TSVCIS parameters as an =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
entirely opaque blob (codec, convey these N octets to the peer =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
with the appropriate one- or two-byte trailer for payload type =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
identification and framing), that would be interoperably =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
implementable, since the black-box bits are up to some other codec to =
interpret.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; In a similar vein, we mention but do not completely specify =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
potential for using CODB as an end-to-end framing bit, in =
Section</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
3.1 (see Comment), which is not interoperably implementable without =
further details.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
--------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></SP=
AN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; COMMENT:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
--------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></SP=
AN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; ----</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; --</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Where is [TSVCIS] available?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Is [NRLVDR] the same as</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; <A =
HREF=3D"https://apps.dtic.mil/dtic/tr/fulltext/u2/a588068.pdf">https://ap=
ps.dtic.mil/dtic/tr/fulltext/u2/a588068.pdf</A> ?&nbsp; A URL =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; in the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
references would be helpful.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Is additional TSVCIS data only present after 2400bps MELPe and =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; the first</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
thing to get dropped under bandwidth pressure?&nbsp; The abstract and =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
introduction imply this by calling out MELPe 2400 bps speech =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
parameters explicitly, but Section 3 says that TSVCIS augments =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
standard 600, 1200, and</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
2400 bps MELP frames.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; It's helpful that Section 3.3 gives some general guidance for =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; decoding</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
this payload type (&quot;[t]he way to determine the number of =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
TSVCIS/MELPe frames is to identify each frame type and length&quot;), =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
but I think some generic considerations would be very helpful to =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
the reader much earlier, along the lines of &quot;MELPe and TSVCIS data =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
payloads are decoded from the end, using the CODA and CODB (and, =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
if necessary, CODC and others) bits to determine the type of =
payload.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
For MELPe payloads the type also indicates the payload length, =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
whereas for TSVCIS data an additional length field is present, in =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
one of two possible formats.&nbsp; A TSVCIS coder frame consists of a =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
MELPe data payload followed by zero or one TSVCIS data payload; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
after the TSVCIS payload's presence/length is determined, then the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
preceding MELPe payload can be determined and decoded.&nbsp; Per =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
Section 3.3, multiple TSVCIS frames can be present in a single RTP =
packet.&quot;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
This (or something like it) would also serve to clarify the role of the =
COD* bits, which is otherwise only implicitly =
introduced.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 1.1</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; RFC 2736 is BCP 36 (but it's updated by RFC 8088 which is for =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; some</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
reason an Informational document and not part of BCP =
36?!).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 2</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; In addition to the augmented speech data, =
the TSVCIS specification</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; identifies which speech coder and framing =
bits are to be encrypted,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and how they are protected by forward error =
correction (FEC)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; techniques (using block codes).&nbsp; At the =
RTP transport layer, only the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; speech coder related bits need to be =
considered and are conveyed in</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; unencrypted form.&nbsp; In most IP-based =
network deployments, </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; standard</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Am I reading this correctly that this text is just summarizing =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; what's in</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
the TSVCIS spec in terms of what needs to be in unencrypted form, =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
so the &quot;only the speech coder related bits[...]&quot; is not new =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
information from this document?&nbsp; I'm not sure I agree with the =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
conclusion, regardless -- won't the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
(MELPe) speech coder bits be enough to convey the semantic content =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
of the audio stream, something that one might desire to keep =
confidential?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS =
140 link encryptors or Type</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to =
secure the RTP speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; contents.&nbsp; Further, it is desirable to =
support the highest voice</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; quality between endpoints which is only =
possible without the overhead</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; of FEC.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I think I'm missing a step in how this conclusion was =
reached.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS will be characterized.&nbsp; =
Depending on the bandwidth available</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (and FEC requirements), a varying number of =
TSVCIS specific speech</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; coder parameters need to be =
transported.&nbsp; These are first byte-packed</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and then conveyed from encoder to =
decoder.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Per the Discuss point, how do I know which parameters need to =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; be</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
transported, and in what order?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Byte packing of TSVCIS speech data into =
packed parameters is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; processed as per the following =
example:</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Three-bit field: bits A, =
B, and C (A is MSB, C is LSB)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Five-bit field: bits D, E, =
F, G, and H (D is MSB, H is</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; LSB)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
MSB&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
LSB</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; =
&gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp; 0&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
2&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 3&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
4&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 5&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
6&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 7</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+</FONT></SPAN></=
P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; =
H&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; G&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; F&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; =
E&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; D&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; C&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; =
B&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; A&nbsp; |</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; =
+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+</FONT></SPAN></=
P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This packing method places the three-bit =
field &quot;first&quot; in the lowest</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bits followed by the next five-bit =
field.&nbsp; Parameters may be split</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; between octets with the most significant =
bits in the earlier octet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Any unfilled bits in the last octet MUST be =
filled with zero.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I agree with Adam that this is very unclear.&nbsp; A is the =
MSB of </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
three-bit field but the LSB of the octet overall?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; We probably need an example of splitting a parameter across =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; octets as</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
well, to get the bit ordering right.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.1</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; It should be noted that CODB for both the =
2400 and 600 bps modes MAY</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; deviate from the values in Table 1 when bit =
55 is used as an end-to-</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; end framing bit.&nbsp; Frame decoding would =
remain distinct as </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; CODA being</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Where is the use of CODB as an end-to-end framing bit =
defined?&nbsp; </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; If we're</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
going to provide neither a complete description of how to do it =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
nor a reference to a better description, we probably shouldn't mention =
it at all.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.2</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; RTP packet.&nbsp; The packed parameters are =
counted in octets (TC).&nbsp; In</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the preferred placement, shown in Figure 6, =
a single trailing octet</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; SHALL be appended to include a two-bit rate =
code, CODA and </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; CODB,</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I'd consider saying something about this being the preferred =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; format</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (&quot;placement&quot;) due to its shorter length than the =
alternative, </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; and say</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
that it &quot;SHOULD be used for TSVCIS payloads with TC less than or =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
equal to 77 octetes&quot;.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 3.3</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; When a longer packetization interval is used, is that =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; indicated by</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
signaling or RTP timestamps or otherwise?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet =
MAY be of different coder</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bitrates.&nbsp; With the exception for the =
variable length TSVCIS</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; parameter frames, the coder rate bits in the =
trailing byte identify</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the contents and length as per Table =
1.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Maybe also note that the penultimate octet gives the length =
there?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Information describing the number of frames =
contained in an RTP</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; packet is not transmitted as part of the RTP =
payload.&nbsp; The way to</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; determine the number of TSVCIS/MELPe frames =
is to identify each frame</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; type and length thereby counting the total =
number of octets within</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the RTP packet.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; terminology nit: if a frame is the combination of MELPe and =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; TSVCIS</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
payload data units then there are two layres of decoding to get a =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
length for the frame, since we have to get the TSVCIS length and then =
the MELPe length.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 4.2</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Parameter &quot;ptime&quot; cannot be used =
for the purpose of </FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; specifying the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; nit: missing article (&quot;The =
parameter&quot;)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; will be impossible to distinguish which mode =
is about to be used</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; (e.g., when ptime=3D68, it would be =
impossible to distinguish if the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; packet is carrying one frame of 67.5 ms or =
three frames of 22.5 ms).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; So how is the operating mode determined, =
then?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (I think this is the same question I asked =
above)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 4.4</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; For example, if offerer bitrates are =
&quot;2400,600&quot; and answer bitrates</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; are &quot;600,2400&quot;, the initial =
bitrate is 600.&nbsp; If other bitrates are</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; provided by the answerer, any common bitrate =
between the offer and</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; answer MAY be used at any time in the =
future.&nbsp; Activation of these</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; other common bitrates is beyond the scope of =
this document.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; It seems important to specify whether this requires a new O/A =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; exchange</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
or can be done &quot;spontaneously&quot; by just encoding different =
frame types.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; (It seems like the latter is possible, on first glance, and =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; this is implied by Section 3.3's discussion of mixing them in =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; a single</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; packet.)</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 5</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Please expand PLC at first use (not second).</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 6</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I don't understand the PLC usage.&nbsp; Is the idea that a =
</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; receiver, on</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
seeing an SSRC gap, constructs fictitious PLC frames to &quot;fill the =
gap&quot;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; and passes the resulting stream to the =
decoder?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; Section 8</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and important considerations in =
[RFC7201].&nbsp; Applications SHOULD use</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; one or more appropriate strong security =
mechanisms.&nbsp; The rest of this</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; section discusses the security-impacting =
properties of the payload</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; format itself.</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; I thought we described TSVCIS itself (much earlier in =
the</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; document) as</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
requiring encryption for some data; wouldn't that translate to a =
&quot;MUST&quot;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt; here and not a &quot;SHOULD&quot;?</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; &gt; =
&gt; &gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt; &gt; =
&gt;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P DIR=3DLTR><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT =
FACE=3D"Calibri">&gt;</FONT></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN =
LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT FACE=3D"Arial" SIZE=3D2 =
COLOR=3D"#000000"> &lt;&lt;...&gt;&gt; </FONT></SPAN><SPAN =
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Section 2 (first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for octet count

(was)
In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
data, it is only necessary to specify the number of octets
containing the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is
presented in Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters [TSVCIS].  

(now)
In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
data, an octect count specifies the number of octets representing
the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is presented in
Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
configurations using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet
parameters in a fixed order [TSVCIS].  


Section 3.1 (first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for CODA, CODB

(was)
It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing bit.

(now)
It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an alternating 1/0
end-to-end framing bit.  



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Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. 
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This one is ready, and the Security Considerations section is remarkably
well-written.



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Reviewer: Sandra Murphy
Review result: Has Nits

This is a secdir review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08 (DMARC (Domain-based Message
Authentication, Reporting, and Conformance) Extension For PSDs (Public Suffix
Domains))

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document presents an extension to DMARC for Public Suffix Domains (PSD)
(and their operators (PSO)), which are domains that are not organizational
domains and are not subject to DMARC processing.  In DMARC, these PSD domains
can not publish policy or receive feedback for subdomains.  The extension
allows PSDs to express policy for organizational domain that are not themselves
implementing policy.  It also provides a new tag that covers non-existing
subdomains.

I find the document to be well written and well laid out (even in the face of a
few comments below).

Note:  I am not conversant with DMARC and have only read the underlying
normative references to the extent necessary to review this document.  Consider
the source in reading these comments.

The security considerations section states that it does not change the security
considerations of the base DMARC specification RFC7489.  That is common in
extensions to existing protocols.  But the authors, to their credit, note that
this extension increases some of the risks identified in the security
considerations of rFC7489.  I wish more authors of extensions to existing
protocols did similar analysis.

The security considerations section points in particular to Section 12.5 of
RFC7489, which describes the risks of external reporting addresses.  Section 4
of this document describes the privacy concerns of feedback reports leaking
information outside an organizational domain.  Section 12.5 of RFC7489 of
RFC7489 points to a verification mechanism in Section 7.1 of RFC7489.  Section
7.1 presents a detailed procedure to verify that a feedback reporting address
is safe to report to, particularly for rua or ruf tags.  Question to the
authors:  has the correctness of that procedure in the presence of this
extension been considered?  I can't tell.

Some wordsmithing comments:

Section 4.1 page 9

   o  Multi-organization PSDs (e.g., ".com") that do not mandate DMARC
      usage: Privacy risks for Organizational Domains that have not
      deployed DMARC within such PSDs are significant.  For non-DMARC
      Organizational Domains, all DMARC feedback will be directed to the
      PSO.  PSD DMARC is opt-out (by publishing a DMARC record at the
      Organizational Domain level) vice opt-in, which would be the more
      desirable characteristic.  This means that any non-DMARC
      organizational domain would have its feedback reports redirected
      to the PSO.  The content of such reports, particularly for
      existing domains, is privacy sensitive.

The sentences
                                                          "For non-DMARC
      Organizational Domains, all DMARC feedback will be directed to the
      PSO.
and
                                "This means that any non-DMARC
      organizational domain would have its feedback reports redirected
      to the PSO."
seem to say the same thing.  Are they redundant?  Or is there a difference
there that I am not seeing?

Section A page 11

              If the experiment shows that PSD DMARC solves a real
   problem and can be used at a large scale, the results could prove to
   be useful in removing constraints outside of the IETF that would
   permit broader deployment.

I would read "removing constraints ... that would permit broader deployment" as
meaning constraints that permit deployment are being removed.  The "that" would
in ordinary reading refer to "contraints".  I think the intended meaning is
"removing constraints ... where those constraints hamper broader deployment" or
"removing constraints ... thereby permitting broader deployment"

And I'm not sure whether "outside of the IETF" means that the removing occurs
outside the IETF or that the constraints exist outside the IETF.  I suspect
both, but I don't know that it makes much difference.

Section A.1 page 12

This section concerns the privacy concerns arising from the external reporting
described in Section 4.1.  In Section 4.1, the privacy risk exists for
"non-DMARC organizational domains" under a multi-organizational PSD (presumably
PSD DMARC participating, right?) that does not mandate DMARC usage for its
registrants.

Section A.1 states that knowing which PSDs do not present this risk would be
beneficial and describes an experiment to produce that knowledge.

Desirable attributes for such a mechanism includes the following:

   o  List PSDs that either mandate DMARC for their registrants or for
      which all lower level domains are controlled by the PSO and that
      the relevant PSO has indicated a desire for the PSD to participate
      in PSD DMARC

I get the "mandate DMARC" part - the risk exists in the case the PSD does not
mandate DMARC - if the PSD mandates DMARC, it does not produce the privacy risk.

I do not get the next part:
                                                               or for
      which all lower level domains are controlled by the PSO and that
      the relevant PSO has indicated a desire for the PSD to participate
      in PSD DMARC"

I do not see how the desire of the PSO that the PSD should participate in PSD
DMARC would help alleviate the privacy risk for the PSD's registrant
organizational domains.  In the first place, what does the PSO's desire got to
do with alleviating risk?  In the second place, this mechanism is supposed to
produce a list of PSDs that do not produce the risk.  The risk in Section 4.1
assumes (or so I thought) that the PSD participates in PSD DMARC.  So if the
PSD is not participating in PSD DMARC, then it is therefore not producing risk,
but it obeys the PSO desire, then the PSD becomes in the category of producing
the risk, not alleviating risk.

I suspect I am just confused here.

--Sandy Murphy



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Hi Victor,

On Wed, Apr 08, 2020 at 11:48:26AM -0400, victor.demjanenko@vocal.com wrote:
> Hi Ben,
> 
> With this social distancing situation, I'm finally catching up on open items myself.  I have made the changes as we have discussed and incorporated your suggestions.  I believe the changes are fully contained in the two paragraphs below:
> 
> Section 2 (last paragraph) - Clarification for octet count
> 
> (was)
> In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
> data, it is only necessary to specify the number of octets
> containing the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is
> presented in Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
> configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters [TSVCIS].  
> 
> (now)
> In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
> data, an octet count specifies the number of octets representing
> the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is presented in
> Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
> configurations using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet
> parameters in a standardized order [TSVCIS].  
> 
> 
> Section 3.1 (first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for CODA, CODB
> 
> (was)
> It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing bit.
> 
> (now)
> It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an alternating 1/0
> end-to-end framing bit.  
> 
> Ben, I believe this addresses your comments and requests for clarifications as per our email discussion chain below.

I also believe that :)

> Thanks for you comments and with your concurrence (and my home computer's cooperation), I will post a new draft hopefully acceptable for final approval.

Okay, I'll keep an eye out.

> Regards to all and stay on the good side of Darwin.

You, too!  (And that phrasing brought a smile to my face, which I
appreciate especially in these trying times.)

Thanks,

Ben

> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> 
> Sent: Friday, February 14, 2020 2:43 PM
> To: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; 'Barry Leiba' <barryleiba@computer.org>
> Cc: 'Roni Even (A)' <roni.even@huawei.com>; 'The IESG' <iesg@ietf.org>; 'Catherine Meadows' <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>; 'IETF SecDir' <secdir@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen' <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)' <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>; 'IETF discussion list' <ietf@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> 
> Hi Barry,
> 
> As Victor notes, this one was/is waiting on me; he did reply (offlist) on
> 15 January but I seem to have missed it amid a deluge of other mail that arrived at that time.  Thanks for the reminder, and thanks Victor for re-sending the comments.
> (inline)
> 
> On Fri, Feb 14, 2020 at 08:20:54AM -0500, victor.demjanenko@vocal.com wrote:
> > HI Barry,
> > 
> > Thanks for recalling this was still outstanding.  I had emailed Ben just after the holidays and did not realize we had no response.  The below is what we suggested to Ben to address concerns he raised.
> > 
> > --------------------
> > Hi Ben,
> > 
> > Hope your holidays were good.  Our were both good and busy.  Deliveries for two NASA projects and the holidays kept us from responding sooner.  But we do want to get this draft completed.
> > 
> > With your permission, I’d like to address your comments directly, resolve what changes we should make and then publish a new version with a summary of our out-of-band discussions.  We don’t have a lot of experience with drafting such documents and would like to know exactly what is needed to make this draft acceptable.
> > 
> > I believe there are two comments/issues to address:
> > 
> > 1)	CODA, CODB
> > 
> > Your comment ends by stating:  “(Or, of course, the use of CODB as an alternating 1/0 bit as the framing usage could be documented instead.)”  We can do this as follows:
> > 
> > (original)
> > It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> >    the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing
> >    bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being zero on its
> >    own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate and
> >    the use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP
> >    timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
> > 
> > (adding “alternating 1/0”)
> > It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> >    the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an alternating 1/0 end-to-end framing
> >    bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being zero on its
> >    own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate and
> >    the use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP
> >    timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
> > 
> > I think this change would be sufficient to address your concern about what to expect for CODB.
> 
> This looks like the minimal sufficient change, yes.  (I use "minimal"
> because I would say more if I was writing it, but I don't think I can insist that you write it the way I would -- it's your document after all!)
> 
> > 2.    Packing and unpacking
> > 
> > You are correct that I am trying to vaguely describe a middle layer shim that is neither RTP nor speech coder.  So it definitely does need to be clear.  The vagueness comes from the speech coder description being a FOUO document.  Its now unclassified so I can potentially say more (and I did make some enhancements of the parameter description already).  
> > 
> > So I am trying to understand exactly what you think is vague in our current description:
> > 
> > TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from the signal processing
> >    and data already performed by the MELPe speech coder.  For the
> >    purposes of this specification, only the general parameter nature of
> >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth available
> >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS-specific speech
> >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first byte-packed
> >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > 
> >    Byte packing of TSVCIS speech data into packed parameters is
> >    processed as per the following example:
> > 
> >       Three-bit field: bits A, B, and C (A is MSB, C is LSB)
> >       Five-bit field: bits D, E, F, G, and H (D is MSB, H is LSB)
> > 
> >            MSB                                              LSB
> >             0      1      2      3      4      5      6      7
> >         +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
> >         |   H  |   G  |   F  |   E  |   D  |   C  |   B  |   A  | 
> >         +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
> > 
> >    This packing method places the three-bit field "first" in the lowest
> >    bits followed by the next five-bit field.  Parameters may be split
> >    between octets with the most significant bits in the earlier octet.
> >    Any unfilled bits in the last octet MUST be filled with zero.
> 
> [not actually relevant to the Discuss part, but if there is always exactly one 3-bit parameter and one 5-bit parameter, then this text allowing splitting across octets will never be used and is potentially confusing to mention.]
> 
> >    In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
> >    data, it is only necessary to specify the number of octets containing
> >    the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is presented 
> > in
> 
> I think the "only necessary to specify the number of octets" is the key stumbling point, for me -- I need to know the number of octets as well as the order of the parameters within the list, which is more information than just the number of octets.
> 
> >    Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
> >    configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters [TSVCIS].  
> 
> I think I failed to internalize the "two configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters" the first time I read the document, as this does help give the reader a clue that [TSVCIS] gives a good picture of what parameters go where.  So it seems like we could easily append to that, for "using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet parameters in a fixed order [TSVCIS]" and that would resolve my concerns.
> 
> > The speech coder description of the parameters is the following:
> > 
> >  
> > 
> > So the three bit pitch is first (bits 56 to 58), followed by a five bit amplitude (bits 59 to 63) and then an array of spectral components, each 8-bit wide (starting at bit 64).
> 
> [And maybe TSVCIS specifes that the spectral components are derived from some fundamental harmonic decomposition that naturally quantizes to a number-of-parameters/accuracy tradeoff with a natural order.  If so, we could also rely on that instead of my proposed change above; let me know if you want to explore that path further.]
> 
> > Based on this information, I’m not sure what we should add to our 
> > draft to make the description of packing/unpacking clearer.  Can you 
> > make any suggestions or does this table help you with what you did not 
> > know?  (I don’t think I should put this table into the draft RFC 
> > however.)
> 
> Hopefully the above helps to clarify.
> 
> Thanks, and sorry for the delay.
> 
> -Ben
> 
> > Thanks for your attention and comments.
> > 
> > Victor & Dave
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
> > Sent: Friday, February 14, 2020 7:38 AM
> > To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
> > Cc: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; Roni Even (A) <roni.even@huawei.com>; 
> > The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; Catherine Meadows 
> > <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>; IETF SecDir <secdir@ietf.org>; 
> > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen 
> > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org; 
> > Dave Satterlee (Vocal) <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>; IETF discussion 
> > list <ietf@ietf.org>;  draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.orgygv 
> > Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: 
> > (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > 
> > This is still outstanding, since November.  Victor, where are we on this one?
> > 
> > Barry
> > 
> > On Mon, Nov 25, 2019 at 1:46 AM Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
> > >
> > > Hi Victor,
> > >
> > > On Tue, Nov 19, 2019 at 03:14:21PM -0500, victor.demjanenko@vocal.com wrote:
> > > > Hi Ben,
> > > >
> > > > Sorry I overlooked sending you a response.  I would like to 
> > > > address the two concerns you have by explaining what the speech coders are doing.
> > >
> > > Thanks for the extra clarifications.  To supply one of my own: I'm 
> > > not concerned that the protocol doesn't work as implemented, but 
> > > just want to make sure that the document includes enough information 
> > > to admit new implementations without guesswork.  That is to say, 
> > > "either tell me how to do it or tell me where to look that tells me how to do it".
> > >
> > > > WRT to 600 bps MELP, there is one TSVCIS mode that uses one bit 
> > > > beyond the 54-bit frame for MELP 600 as a frame sync which alternates between frames.
> > > > With two or more MELP 600bps frames in one RTP packet, if any 
> > > > frame indicates 600 bps by CODA being 0 and CODB being 1, then we 
> > > > know the stream is 600bps.  If there is a single frame in an RTP 
> > > > packet, you can still deduce this by looking at every other RTP 
> > > > packet (every other MELP 600bps
> > > > frame) and by the timestamp advance.  Most likely the two ends 
> > > > would negotiate 600 bps in SDP anyways so there really should not 
> > > > be a problem.  I know it's not pretty but its workable.  I hope 
> > > > this explanation helps you with the concerns for this issue.
> > >
> > > In this case, the use as an "end-to-end framing bit" (i.e., the 
> > > alternating behavior you describe above) is not explicitly stated; 
> > > one might imagine a scheme where the framing usage is to have the 
> > > bit cycle through 1, 1, 0, and 0, or some other scheme.  I'd suggest 
> > > to note in the document that if any instance of (CODA, CODB) == (0, 
> > > 1) is observed, then the 600bps mode is in use.  It might also be 
> > > helpful to include the observation that two successive MELPe 
> > > payloads with CODA == CODB == 0 indicates the 2400bps mode (and that 
> > > seeing them in a single RTP packet is decisive, whereas additional 
> > > information about packet non-loss would be needed in the 
> > > one-MELPe-frame-per-RTP-packet case), but that would be a fair bit 
> > > of additional text and might be diminishing returns.  (Or, of 
> > > course, the use of CODB as an alternating 1/0 bit as the framing 
> > > usage could be documented
> > > instead.)
> > >
> > > > As for the TSVCIS parameter packing/unpacking, this is really 
> > > > simple.  There is exactly on three bit parameter, exactly one five 
> > > > bit parameter and a variable number of eight bit parameters.  In 
> > > > our view, the speech coder itself (or a wrapper for it) is 
> > > > responsible for preparing the block of octets.  RTP then just 
> > > > transports it.  On receive, the complementary wrapper reverses the packing operation.
> > > > I hope this clarifies and explains the simplicity.
> > >
> > > That's exactly what I expected to happen; however, it's not what I 
> > > believe the current text of the document is describing.  
> > > Specifically, I think that the current text implies that the 
> > > "preparing the block of octets" and "complementary wrapper reverses 
> > > the packing operation" are supposed to be part of the RTP payload 
> > > format that this document describes, but this document does not have 
> > > enough information to actually perform those operations reversibly.  
> > > If the packing is to be done in the speech coder, then this document 
> > > doesn't need to talk about the packing at all (e.g., at the end of 
> > > Section 2); if we need to keep the packing/wrapper in this document 
> > > then we need to indicate that there's a defined priority order for 
> > > the (8-octet) TSVCIS parameters in the TSVCIS references, to allow the packing/unpacking to be deterministic.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > >
> > > Ben
> > >
> > > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
> > > > Sent: Thursday, October 31, 2019 8:12 PM
> > > > To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
> > > > Cc: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; Roni Even (A) 
> > > > <roni.even@huawei.com>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; Catherine 
> > > > Meadows <catherine.meadows@nrl.navy.mil>; IETF SecDir 
> > > > <secdir@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen 
> > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; 
> > > > avt@ietf.org; Dave Satterlee (Vocal) <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>; 
> > > > IETF discussion list <ietf@ietf.org>; 
> > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis.all@ietf.org
> > > > Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > >
> > > > I don't think so, unfortunately.
> > > >
> > > > I do see the clarification about CODB's potential for deviation 
> > > > from Table 1, that only the 600 bps MELPe is allowed to deviate, 
> > > > and that CODA gets us to "it's one of 2400 or 600 bps" and the RTP 
> > > > timestamp disambiguates that
> > > > 600 bps is in use.  But, it seems that this means that the 
> > > > recipient in general should not rely on CODB to differentiate 600 
> > > > from 2400 bps, and instead is more robustly implemented by 
> > > > *always* using the RTP timestamp to detect 600 bps, since that 
> > > > will always work and CODB will sometimes not work under conditions 
> > > > not fully specified here.  So, if we are unwilling or unable to 
> > > > clarify what those conditions are (e.g., whether at a minimum 
> > > > mutual agreement is required), then I think we need to describe 
> > > > this procedure of consulting the RTP timestamp as the default behavior and avoid giving the impression that CODB should be used to do so.
> > > >
> > > > Additionally, I don't see anything to address my concern about 
> > > > TSVCIS parameter decoding.  To be clear, the procedure I see this 
> > > > document describing is that:
> > > > - TSVCIS gives parameters (and their lengths in bits) to the codec
> > > >   described in this document
> > > > - this document specifies how to densely encode those parameters into a
> > > >   byetstream
> > > > - RTP transmits that encoded bytestream to the peer
> > > > - the codec specified by this is responsible for turning that encoded
> > > >   bystream back into a list of TSVCIS parameters (and their length 
> > > > in bits)
> > > >
> > > > I don't see how that last step is attainable with only the 
> > > > information provided by this document.  I *assume* that one of the 
> > > > TSVCIS specifications has a canonical (ordered) listing of 
> > > > parameters, and that the list of parmeters given to this codec in 
> > > > the first step will always be an initial prefix of that list, but 
> > > > that's just me guessing at how to make sense of the stated 
> > > > procedure given insufficient information.  I don't think it's 
> > > > appropriate to make the reader of an RFC guess at what to do; we 
> > > > need to either say how to do it or give a pointer to an external reference that does.
> > > >
> > > > -Ben
> > > >
> > > > On Tue, Oct 29, 2019 at 02:26:09PM -0400, Barry Leiba wrote:
> > > > > Ben, does the -04 version address everything?
> > > > >
> > > > > Barry
> > > > >
> > > > > On Thu, Oct 24, 2019 at 1:42 PM <victor.demjanenko@vocal.com> wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I forgot to address security comments in one email.  The changes are:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 8, second paragraph - Suggested edit by reviewer
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    This RTP payload format and the TSVCIS decoder do not exhibit any
> > > > > >    significant non-uniformity in the receiver-side computational
> > > > > >    complexity for packet processing and thus are unlikely to pose a
> > > > > >    denial-of-service threat due to the receipt of pathological data.
> > > > > >    Additionally, the RTP payload format does not contain any active
> > > > > >    content.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    This RTP payload format and the TSVCIS decoder, to the best of our
> > > > > >    knowledge, do not exhibit any significant non-uniformity in the
> > > > > >    receiver-side computational complexity for packet processing and thus
> > > > > >    are unlikely to pose a denial-of-service threat due to the receipt of
> > > > > >    pathological data. Additionally, the RTP payload format does not
> > > > > >    contain any active content.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 8, third paragraph - Suggested edit by reviewer
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    Please see the security considerations discussed in [RFC6562]
> > > > > >    regarding VAD and its effect on bitrates.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    Please see the security considerations discussed in [RFC6562]
> > > > > >    regarding Voice Activity Detect (VAD) and its effect on bitrates.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Victor
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > > From: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com 
> > > > > > <victor.demjanenko@vocal.com>
> > > > > > Sent: Thursday, October 24, 2019 10:05 AM
> > > > > > To: 'Roni Even (A)' <roni.even@huawei.com>; 'Benjamin Kaduk'
> > > > > > <kaduk@mit.edu>; 'The IESG' <iesg@ietf.org>
> > > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen'
> > > > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; 
> > > > > > avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'
> > > > > > <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>
> > > > > > Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Hi Everyone,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > First we want to thank everyone for their review and comments 
> > > > > > for this
> > > > draft RFC.  We believe we reviewed all the comments and 
> > > > suggestions and incorporated them adequately in the next draft 
> > > > (04).  We'd like to send out this list of exact changes in case 
> > > > anyone has additional comments or thinks the clarifications are 
> > > > inadequate.  We would be most happy to address concerns before publishing draft 04 tomorrow.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > With so many emails from a half dozen or more reviewers, we 
> > > > > > apologize
> > > > that we cannot address each sender individually.  We hope this 
> > > > detail is sufficient for everyone.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Again, many thanks to all.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Victor & Dave
> > > > > >
> > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > --------------------------
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 1.1 - Suggested reference to RFC 8088 added.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    Best current practices for writing an RTP payload format
> > > > > >    specification were followed [RFC2736].
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    Best current practices for writing an RTP payload format
> > > > > >    specification were followed [RFC2736] [RFC8088].
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 2, paragraphs 3 and 4 - Suggested edits by reviewers
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    In addition to the augmented speech data, the TSVCIS specification
> > > > > >    identifies which speech coder and framing bits are to be encrypted,
> > > > > >    and how they are protected by forward error correction (FEC)
> > > > > >    techniques (using block codes).  At the RTP transport layer, only the
> > > > > >    speech coder related bits need to be considered and are conveyed in
> > > > > >    unencrypted form.  In most IP-based network deployments, standard
> > > > > >    link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS 140 link encryptors or Type
> > > > > >    1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to secure the RTP speech
> > > > > >    contents.  Further, it is desirable to support the highest voice
> > > > > >    quality between endpoints which is only possible without the overhead
> > > > > >    of FEC.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from the signal processing
> > > > > >    and data already performed by the MELPe speech coder.  For the
> > > > > >    purposes of this specification, only the general parameter nature of
> > > > > >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth available
> > > > > >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS specific speech
> > > > > >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first byte-packed
> > > > > >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    In addition to the augmented speech data, the TSVCIS specification
> > > > > >    identifies which speech coder and framing bits are to be encrypted,
> > > > > >    and how they are protected by forward error correction (FEC)
> > > > > >    techniques (using block codes).  At the RTP transport layer, only the
> > > > > >    speech-coder-related bits need to be considered and are conveyed in
> > > > > >    unencrypted form.  In most IP-based network deployments, standard
> > > > > >    link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS 140 link encryptors or Type
> > > > > >    1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to secure the RTP speech
> > > > > >    contents.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    TSVCIS augmented speech data is derived from the signal processing
> > > > > >    and data already performed by the MELPe speech coder.  For the
> > > > > >    purposes of this specification, only the general parameter nature of
> > > > > >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth available
> > > > > >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS-specific speech
> > > > > >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first byte-packed
> > > > > >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3, last sentence paragraph 3 - Suggested edit by 
> > > > > > reviewer
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    When more than one codec data frame is
> > > > > >    present in a single RTP packet, the timestamp is, as always, that of
> > > > > >    the oldest data frame represented in the RTP packet.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    When more than one codec data frame is
> > > > > >    present in a single RTP packet, the timestamp specified is that of
> > > > > >    the oldest data frame represented in the RTP packet.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.1, last paragraph - Clarified permission for MELP 
> > > > > > 600 end-to-end framing bit
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    It should be noted that CODB for both the 2400 and 600 bps modes MAY
> > > > > >    deviate from the values in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-
> > > > > >    end framing bit.  Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being
> > > > > >    zero on its own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either rate and the
> > > > > >    use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP timestamp
> > > > > >    (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> > > > > >    the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing
> > > > > >    bit. Frame decoding would remain distinct as CODA being zero on its
> > > > > >    own would indicate a 7-byte frame for either 2400 or 600 bps rate and
> > > > > >    the use of 600 bps speech coding could be deduced from the RTP
> > > > > >    timestamp (and anticipated by the SDP negotiations).
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.2, first paragraph - Clarifications requested by 
> > > > > > reviewers
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    The TSVCIS augmented speech data as packed parameters MUST be placed
> > > > > >    immediately after a corresponding MELPe 2400 bps payload in the same
> > > > > >    RTP packet.  The packed parameters are counted in octets (TC).  In
> > > > > >    the preferred placement, shown in Figure 6, a single trailing octet
> > > > > >    SHALL be appended to include a two-bit rate code, CODA and CODB,
> > > > > >    (both bits set to one) and a six-bit modified count (MTC).  The
> > > > > >    special modified count value of all ones (representing a MTC value of
> > > > > >    63) SHALL NOT be used for this format as it is used as the indicator
> > > > > >    for the alternate packing format shown next.  In a standard
> > > > > >    implementation, the TSVCIS speech coder uses a minimum of 15 octets
> > > > > >    for parameters in octet packed form.  The modified count (MTC) MUST
> > > > > >    be reduced by 15 from the full octet count (TC).  Computed MTC = TC-
> > > > > >    15.  This accommodates a maximum of 77 parameter octets (maximum
> > > > > >    value of MTC is 62, 77 is the sum of 62+15).
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    The TSVCIS augmented speech data as packed parameters MUST be placed
> > > > > >    immediately after a corresponding MELPe 2400 bps payload in the same
> > > > > >    RTP packet.  The packed parameters are counted in octets (TC).  The
> > > > > >    preferred placement SHOULD be used for TSVCIS payloads with TC less
> > > > > >    than or equal to 77 octets, is shown in Figure 6.  In the preferred
> > > > > >    placement, a single trailing octet SHALL be appended to include a
> > > > > >    two-bit rate code, CODA and CODB, (both bits set to one) and a six-
> > > > > >    bit modified count (MTC).  The special modified count value of all
> > > > > >    ones (representing a MTC value of 63) SHALL NOT be used for this
> > > > > >    format as it is used as the indicator for the alternate packing
> > > > > >    format shown next.  In a standard implementation, the TSVCIS speech
> > > > > >    coder uses a minimum of 15 octets for parameters in octet packed
> > > > > >    form.  The modified count (MTC) MUST be reduced by 15 from the full
> > > > > >    octet count (TC).  Computed MTC = TC-15.  This accommodates a maximum
> > > > > >    of 77 parameter octets (maximum value of MTC is 62, 77 is the sum of
> > > > > >    62+15).
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.3, first paragraph - Suggested edit by reviewer
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    A TSVCIS RTP packet consists of zero or more TSVCIS coder frames
> > > > > >    (each consisting of MELPe and TSVCIS coder data) followed by zero or
> > > > > >    one MELPe comfort noise frame.  The presence of a comfort noise frame
> > > > > >    can be determined by its rate code bits in its last octet.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    A TSVCIS RTP packet payload consists of zero or more consecutive
> > > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames (each consisting of MELPe 2400 and TSVCIS coder
> > > > > >    data), with the oldest frame first, followed by zero or one MELPe
> > > > > >    comfort noise frame.  The presence of a comfort noise frame can be
> > > > > >    determined by its rate code bits in its last octet.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.3, fourth paragraph - Clarification requested by 
> > > > > > reviewers
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet MAY be of different coder
> > > > > >    bitrates.  With the exception for the variable length TSVCIS
> > > > > >    parameter frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing byte identify
> > > > > >    the contents and length as per Table 1.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet MAY have varying TSVCIS
> > > > > >    parameter octet counts.  Its packed parameter octet count (length) is
> > > > > >    indicated in the trailing byte(s).  All MELPe frames in a single RTP
> > > > > >    packet MUST be of the same coder bitrate.  For all MELPe coder
> > > > > >    frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing byte identify the
> > > > > >    contents and length as per Table 1.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 4.1 - Editor note removed
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 4.1 - Change controller is now
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    Change controller: IETF, contact <avt@ietf.org>
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 5, first paragraph - Suggested edits by reviewers
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (was)
> > > > > >    A primary application of TSVCIS is for radio communications of voice
> > > > > >    conversations, and discontinuous transmissions are normal.  When
> > > > > >    TSVCIS is used in an IP network, TSVCIS RTP packet transmissions may
> > > > > >    cease and resume frequently.  RTP synchronization source (SSRC)
> > > > > >    sequence number gaps indicate lost packets to be filled by PLC, while
> > > > > >    abrupt loss of RTP packets indicates intended discontinuous
> > > > > >    transmissions.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (now)
> > > > > >    A primary application of TSVCIS is for radio communications of voice
> > > > > >    conversations, and discontinuous transmissions are normal.  When
> > > > > >    TSVCIS is used in an IP network, TSVCIS RTP packet transmissions may
> > > > > >    cease and resume frequently.  RTP synchronization source (SSRC)
> > > > > >    sequence number gaps indicate lost packets to be filled by Packet
> > > > > >    Loss Concealment (PLC), while abrupt loss of RTP packets indicates
> > > > > >    intended discontinuous transmissions.  Resumption of voice
> > > > > >    transmission SHOULD be indicated by the RTP marker bit (M) set to 1.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 10 - Added reference
> > > > > >
> > > > > > (added)
> > > > > >    [RFC8088]  Westerlund, M., "How to Write an RTP Payload Format",
> > > > > >               RFC 8088, DOI 10.17487/RFC8088, May 2017,
> > > > > >               <http://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8088>.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > -----------------------------
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > > From: Roni Even (A) <roni.even@huawei.com>
> > > > > > Sent: Sunday, October 6, 2019 2:09 AM
> > > > > > To: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com; 'Benjamin Kaduk' 
> > > > > > <kaduk@mit.edu>; 'The IESG' <iesg@ietf.org>
> > > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen'
> > > > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; 
> > > > > > avt@ietf.org; 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'
> > > > > > <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com>
> > > > > > Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Hi,
> > > > > > About the reference to TSVCIS.
> > > > > > The RTP payload is about how to encapsulate the payload in an 
> > > > > > RTP
> > > > packet. The objective is to define how an RTP stack can insert the 
> > > > tsvcis frames and  extract the tsvcis frames from the RTP packet.
> > > > Typically it is not required to understand the payload structure 
> > > > in order to be able to perform the encapsulation.
> > > > > > This is why the reference to the payload is Informational and 
> > > > > > we did not require to have it publically available.  If there 
> > > > > > is a need to understand the payload itself for the 
> > > > > > encapsulating than we need more information in the RTP payload 
> > > > > > specification and a publically available normative reference. 
> > > > > > I think this is not the case here
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Roni Even
> > > > > >
> > > > > > AVTCore co-chair (ex Payload)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > > From: victor.demjanenko@vocal.com 
> > > > > > [mailto:victor.demjanenko@vocal.com]
> > > > > > Sent: Saturday, October 05, 2019 12:18 AM
> > > > > > To: 'Benjamin Kaduk'; 'The IESG'
> > > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; 'Ali Begen';
> > > > avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org; 'Victor Demjanenko, Ph.D.'; 
> > > > 'Dave Satterlee (Vocal)'
> > > > > > Subject: RE: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on
> > > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Everyone,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thanks for the comments.  I think I mis-understood the 
> > > > > > ambiguity with
> > > > respect to to changing rates within a RTP packet.  That was not 
> > > > plan.  An RTP packet must have MELP speech frames of the same rate.
> > > > What is possible is that the amount of augmented TSVCIS speech 
> > > > data may vary from one speech frame to the next.  This allows for 
> > > > a dynamic VDR as suggested by the NRL paper.  So an RTP packet may 
> > > > have varying TSVCIS data but must always have MELPe 2400 data.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Again backwards parsing is necessary but the timestamp 
> > > > > > uniformly
> > > > increments 22.5msec per combined MELP/TSVCIS speech frame.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The NRL is a good public reference on the VDR aspects.  The 
> > > > > > actual
> > > > TSVCIS spec we had was FOUO so we could not replicate its detail.  
> > > > (I believe a later spec is public or at least partially public.  I 
> > > > am trying to get this.)  The opaque data is pretty obvious with the TSVCIS spec in hand.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > We will address the issues/concerns raised next week.  Other 
> > > > > > business
> > > > had priority.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thank you and enjoy the weekend.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Regards,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Victor & Dave
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > > From: Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> > > > > > Sent: Wednesday, October 2, 2019 10:40 PM
> > > > > > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> > > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis@ietf.org; Ali Begen 
> > > > > > <ali.begen@networked.media>; avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; 
> > > > > > ali.begen@networked.media; avt@ietf.org
> > > > > > Subject: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03:
> > > > > > (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
> > > > > > draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-03: Discuss
> > > > > >
> > > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply 
> > > > > > to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel 
> > > > > > free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.)
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Please refer to
> > > > > > https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> > > > > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> > > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis/
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
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> > > > > > --
> > > > > > DISCUSS:
> > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > --
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I support Magnus' point about the time-ordering of adjacent 
> > > > > > frames in a
> > > > packet.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Additionally, I am not sure that there's quite enough here to 
> > > > > > be
> > > > interoperably implementable.  Specifically, we seem to be lacking 
> > > > a description of how an encoder or decoder knows which TSVCIS 
> > > > parameters, and in what order, to byte-pack or unpack, respectively.
> > > > One might surmise that there is a canonical listing in [TSVCIS], 
> > > > but this document does not say that, and furthermore [TSVCIS] is only listed as an informative reference.
> > > > (I couldn't get my hands on my copy, at least on short notice.)  
> > > > If we limited ourselves to treating the TSVCIS parameters as an 
> > > > entirely opaque blob (codec, convey these N octets to the peer 
> > > > with the appropriate one- or two-byte trailer for payload type 
> > > > identification and framing), that would be interoperably 
> > > > implementable, since the black-box bits are up to some other codec to interpret.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > In a similar vein, we mention but do not completely specify 
> > > > > > the
> > > > potential for using CODB as an end-to-end framing bit, in Section
> > > > 3.1 (see Comment), which is not interoperably implementable without further details.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > COMMENT:
> > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------
> > > > > > --
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > --
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Where is [TSVCIS] available?
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Is [NRLVDR] the same as
> > > > > > https://apps.dtic.mil/dtic/tr/fulltext/u2/a588068.pdf ?  A URL 
> > > > > > in the
> > > > references would be helpful.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Is additional TSVCIS data only present after 2400bps MELPe and 
> > > > > > the first
> > > > thing to get dropped under bandwidth pressure?  The abstract and 
> > > > introduction imply this by calling out MELPe 2400 bps speech 
> > > > parameters explicitly, but Section 3 says that TSVCIS augments 
> > > > standard 600, 1200, and
> > > > 2400 bps MELP frames.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > It's helpful that Section 3.3 gives some general guidance for 
> > > > > > decoding
> > > > this payload type ("[t]he way to determine the number of 
> > > > TSVCIS/MELPe frames is to identify each frame type and length"), 
> > > > but I think some generic considerations would be very helpful to 
> > > > the reader much earlier, along the lines of "MELPe and TSVCIS data 
> > > > payloads are decoded from the end, using the CODA and CODB (and, 
> > > > if necessary, CODC and others) bits to determine the type of payload.
> > > > For MELPe payloads the type also indicates the payload length, 
> > > > whereas for TSVCIS data an additional length field is present, in 
> > > > one of two possible formats.  A TSVCIS coder frame consists of a 
> > > > MELPe data payload followed by zero or one TSVCIS data payload; 
> > > > after the TSVCIS payload's presence/length is determined, then the 
> > > > preceding MELPe payload can be determined and decoded.  Per 
> > > > Section 3.3, multiple TSVCIS frames can be present in a single RTP packet."
> > > > This (or something like it) would also serve to clarify the role of the COD* bits, which is otherwise only implicitly introduced.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 1.1
> > > > > >
> > > > > > RFC 2736 is BCP 36 (but it's updated by RFC 8088 which is for 
> > > > > > some
> > > > reason an Informational document and not part of BCP 36?!).
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 2
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    In addition to the augmented speech data, the TSVCIS specification
> > > > > >    identifies which speech coder and framing bits are to be encrypted,
> > > > > >    and how they are protected by forward error correction (FEC)
> > > > > >    techniques (using block codes).  At the RTP transport layer, only the
> > > > > >    speech coder related bits need to be considered and are conveyed in
> > > > > >    unencrypted form.  In most IP-based network deployments, 
> > > > > > standard
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Am I reading this correctly that this text is just summarizing 
> > > > > > what's in
> > > > the TSVCIS spec in terms of what needs to be in unencrypted form, 
> > > > so the "only the speech coder related bits[...]" is not new 
> > > > information from this document?  I'm not sure I agree with the 
> > > > conclusion, regardless -- won't the
> > > > (MELPe) speech coder bits be enough to convey the semantic content 
> > > > of the audio stream, something that one might desire to keep confidential?
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    link encryption methods (SRTP, VPNs, FIPS 140 link encryptors or Type
> > > > > >    1 Ethernet encryptors) would be used to secure the RTP speech
> > > > > >    contents.  Further, it is desirable to support the highest voice
> > > > > >    quality between endpoints which is only possible without the overhead
> > > > > >    of FEC.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I think I'm missing a step in how this conclusion was reached.
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    TSVCIS will be characterized.  Depending on the bandwidth available
> > > > > >    (and FEC requirements), a varying number of TSVCIS specific speech
> > > > > >    coder parameters need to be transported.  These are first byte-packed
> > > > > >    and then conveyed from encoder to decoder.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Per the Discuss point, how do I know which parameters need to 
> > > > > > be
> > > > transported, and in what order?
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    Byte packing of TSVCIS speech data into packed parameters is
> > > > > >    processed as per the following example:
> > > > > >
> > > > > >       Three-bit field: bits A, B, and C (A is MSB, C is LSB)
> > > > > >       Five-bit field: bits D, E, F, G, and H (D is MSB, H is
> > > > > > LSB)
> > > > > >
> > > > > >            MSB                                              LSB
> > > > > >             0      1      2      3      4      5      6      7
> > > > > >         +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
> > > > > >         |   H  |   G  |   F  |   E  |   D  |   C  |   B  |   A  |
> > > > > >         
> > > > > > +------+------+------+------+------+------+------+------+
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    This packing method places the three-bit field "first" in the lowest
> > > > > >    bits followed by the next five-bit field.  Parameters may be split
> > > > > >    between octets with the most significant bits in the earlier octet.
> > > > > >    Any unfilled bits in the last octet MUST be filled with zero.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I agree with Adam that this is very unclear.  A is the MSB of 
> > > > > > the
> > > > three-bit field but the LSB of the octet overall?
> > > > > > We probably need an example of splitting a parameter across 
> > > > > > octets as
> > > > well, to get the bit ordering right.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.1
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    It should be noted that CODB for both the 2400 and 600 bps modes MAY
> > > > > >    deviate from the values in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-
> > > > > >    end framing bit.  Frame decoding would remain distinct as 
> > > > > > CODA being
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Where is the use of CODB as an end-to-end framing bit defined?  
> > > > > > If we're
> > > > going to provide neither a complete description of how to do it 
> > > > nor a reference to a better description, we probably shouldn't mention it at all.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.2
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    RTP packet.  The packed parameters are counted in octets (TC).  In
> > > > > >    the preferred placement, shown in Figure 6, a single trailing octet
> > > > > >    SHALL be appended to include a two-bit rate code, CODA and 
> > > > > > CODB,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I'd consider saying something about this being the preferred 
> > > > > > format
> > > > > > ("placement") due to its shorter length than the alternative, 
> > > > > > and say
> > > > that it "SHOULD be used for TSVCIS payloads with TC less than or 
> > > > equal to 77 octetes".
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 3.3
> > > > > >
> > > > > > When a longer packetization interval is used, is that 
> > > > > > indicated by
> > > > signaling or RTP timestamps or otherwise?
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    TSVCIS coder frames in a single RTP packet MAY be of different coder
> > > > > >    bitrates.  With the exception for the variable length TSVCIS
> > > > > >    parameter frames, the coder rate bits in the trailing byte identify
> > > > > >    the contents and length as per Table 1.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Maybe also note that the penultimate octet gives the length there?
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    Information describing the number of frames contained in an RTP
> > > > > >    packet is not transmitted as part of the RTP payload.  The way to
> > > > > >    determine the number of TSVCIS/MELPe frames is to identify each frame
> > > > > >    type and length thereby counting the total number of octets within
> > > > > >    the RTP packet.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > terminology nit: if a frame is the combination of MELPe and 
> > > > > > TSVCIS
> > > > payload data units then there are two layres of decoding to get a 
> > > > length for the frame, since we have to get the TSVCIS length and then the MELPe length.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 4.2
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    Parameter "ptime" cannot be used for the purpose of 
> > > > > > specifying the
> > > > > >
> > > > > > nit: missing article ("The parameter")
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    will be impossible to distinguish which mode is about to be used
> > > > > >    (e.g., when ptime=68, it would be impossible to distinguish if the
> > > > > >    packet is carrying one frame of 67.5 ms or three frames of 22.5 ms).
> > > > > >
> > > > > > So how is the operating mode determined, then?
> > > > > > (I think this is the same question I asked above)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 4.4
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    For example, if offerer bitrates are "2400,600" and answer bitrates
> > > > > >    are "600,2400", the initial bitrate is 600.  If other bitrates are
> > > > > >    provided by the answerer, any common bitrate between the offer and
> > > > > >    answer MAY be used at any time in the future.  Activation of these
> > > > > >    other common bitrates is beyond the scope of this document.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > It seems important to specify whether this requires a new O/A 
> > > > > > exchange
> > > > or can be done "spontaneously" by just encoding different frame types.
> > > > > > (It seems like the latter is possible, on first glance, and 
> > > > > > this is implied by Section 3.3's discussion of mixing them in 
> > > > > > a single
> > > > > > packet.)
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 5
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Please expand PLC at first use (not second).
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 6
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I don't understand the PLC usage.  Is the idea that a 
> > > > > > receiver, on
> > > > seeing an SSRC gap, constructs fictitious PLC frames to "fill the gap"
> > > > > > and passes the resulting stream to the decoder?
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Section 8
> > > > > >
> > > > > >    and important considerations in [RFC7201].  Applications SHOULD use
> > > > > >    one or more appropriate strong security mechanisms.  The rest of this
> > > > > >    section discusses the security-impacting properties of the payload
> > > > > >    format itself.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I thought we described TSVCIS itself (much earlier in the
> > > > > > document) as
> > > > requiring encryption for some data; wouldn't that translate to a "MUST"
> > > > > > here and not a "SHOULD"?
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > >
> >  

> Section 2 (first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for octet count
> 
> (was)
> In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
> data, it is only necessary to specify the number of octets
> containing the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is
> presented in Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
> configurations using 15 and 35 packed octet parameters [TSVCIS].  
> 
> (now)
> In order to accommodate a varying amount of TSVCIS augmented speech
> data, an octect count specifies the number of octets representing
> the packed TSVCIS parameters.  The encoding to do so is presented in
> Section 3.2.  TSVCIS specifically uses the NRL VDR in two
> configurations using a fixed set of 15 and 35 packed octet
> parameters in a fixed order [TSVCIS].  
> 
> 
> Section 3.1 (first sentence in last paragraph) - Clarification for CODA, CODB
> 
> (was)
> It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an end-to-end framing bit.
> 
> (now)
> It should be noted that CODB for MELPe 600 bps mode MAY deviate from
> the value in Table 1 when bit 55 is used as an alternating 1/0
> end-to-end framing bit.  
> 
> 


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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.


Summary: I have found no issues with the document.



This I-D defines two new code points for encoding information in BGP-LS
messages. The code points are for maximum segment depth of nodes and links.
BGP-LS can deliver this information to a centralized controller that needs
it to compute a segment routing path. Without this information, the
centralized controller may compute routes that won't work.



As noted in Security Considerations, supplying incorrect information using
this protocol could cause a centralized controller to compute non-optimal
or non-working routes, but so could errors in many other fields of this
information. These new fields don't introduce any new security challenges
beyond those already present in BGP-LS.


Radia

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;fo=
nt-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">I have reviewed this document =
as part of the security
directorate&#39;s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being process=
ed by
the IESG.=C2=A0 These comments were written primarily for the benefit of th=
e
security area directors.=C2=A0 Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.</p><p class=3D"MsoNo=
rmal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,s=
ans-serif"><br></p><p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;=
font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Summary: I have found no iss=
ues with the document.</p>

<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font=
-family:Calibri,sans-serif">=C2=A0</p>

<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font=
-family:Calibri,sans-serif">This I-D defines two new code points for encodi=
ng
information in BGP-LS messages. The code points are for maximum segment dep=
th
of nodes and links. BGP-LS can deliver this information to a centralized
controller that needs it to compute a segment routing path. Without this
information, the centralized controller may compute routes that won&#39;t w=
ork.</p>

<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font=
-family:Calibri,sans-serif">As noted in Security Considerations, supplying =
incorrect
information using this protocol could cause a centralized controller to com=
pute
non-optimal or non-working routes, but so could errors in many other fields=
 of
this information. These new fields don&#39;t introduce any new security cha=
llenges
beyond those already present in BGP-LS.</p><p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"=
margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><br>=
</p><p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:11pt;=
font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Radia</p></div>

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Reviewer: Derrell Piper
Review result: Has Nits

Reviewer: Derrell Piper
Review result: Ready With Nits

I reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents entering the IESG.  These comments
are directed at the security area director(s).  Document editors and WG
chairs should treat these comments like any other last call comments.

This document defines a third-party token authentication scheme for
authentication to SIP services using "bearer" tokens from the OAuth 2.0
framework and the OpenID Connect Core 1.0 to support native application
assisted (or proxy-based) token-based authentication and authorization.

pp. 3, 1., nit

"...enables the single-sign-on features, which allows the user to..."

"...enables single sign-on, which allows the user to..."

pp. 5, last sentence

"previously" means "from the out-of-scope mechanism", just say that.

pp. 7, 2.1.1

"(or with invalid credentials)"

Why continue when a UAC presents invalid credentials?  [See below.]

pp. 8, 2.1.3

2.1.1 says if you get invalid credentials to go REGISTER, and here in
REGISTER, it says if you get invalid credentials, go to 2.1.1.  This
seems recursive though I'm assuming this ultimately terminates when all
the schemes are exhausted without success.

Derrell




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Catherine Meadows via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> writes:

> Reviewer: Catherine Meadows
> Review result: Has Issues

Hi Catherine,

Thanks for the review of the dnsop-extended-error draft.  [and sorry
for the delay in sending this]

> The Security Considerations section mentions some valid points, but it
> is not made clear how they apply to extended DNS error messages (as
> opposed to DNS error messages in general). It first makes the
> non-obvious point that a significant number of clients, when receiving
> a failure message about a DNS validation issue from a validated
> resolver, will seek out an unvalidated server instead.  It is not
> clear to me though whether you think that extending the types of DNS
> error messages available (thus giving more information to the client)
> would help address this problem.  You should say something about this.
> Secondly, it discusses the security implications of the fact that DNS
> error messages are unauthenticated.
> 
> In addition, in the paragraph about the security implications of DNS error
> messages being unauthenticated, you should say whether or not extending the
> types of DNS error messages would improve the situation,   make it worse, have
> no effect,  or is unclear.

You're right that we don't specify what to do in the security
considerations section, though we do earlier in the document.
Specifically it says (at least):

      Applications MUST continue to follow requirements from applicable
      specifications on how to process RCODEs no matter what EDE values
      are also received.

So maybe adding the following sentence to the security section addresses
your issue?

      EDE content should be treated only as diagnostic information for
      network operators and MUST NOT alter DNS protocol processing.

We could add a note as well about the scope of the document, though I
think it can be derived from the above sentence:

      EDE content is not attempting to address the lack security in DNS
      error messages.

-- 
Wes Hardaker
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Last calls:

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Dacheng Zhang          2019-11-05 draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07

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  Stefan Santesson
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Reviewer: Paul Wouters
Review result: Has Nits

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

The summary of the review is Has Nits

Compared to my last review (-09) a lot of text has been removed, reducing the
technical details and giving a briefer (but arguably cleaner) overview.

I do still have a personal preference of dropping CurveCP and MinimalT as I
don't really think these are anything but abandoned research items. I have
never seen or heard of these being deployed. I would be more tempted to list
openconnect (draft-mavrogiannopoulos-openconnect) which actually does see quite
some deployment. If the intent is really to show different kind of API's, than
there are other esoteric examples that could be included, such as
Off-The-Record(OTR) or Signal, which are mostly encrypted chat programs, but
with the ability to generate session keys for encrypted bulk transport (eg for
video/audio or file transfer)

Section 5.1

 "Session Cache Management (CM):" which does not include IKEv2/IPsec, even
 though it does have session resumption (RFC 5723). I guess this is because the
 section limits itself to "the application" that can restart the session. But
 for IKEv2/IPsec the same could be said. An application that after a long idle
 period sends a packet, triggers a kernel ACQUIRE, which triggers an IKEv2
 session resumption. WireGuard does not have this capability as there are no
 API/hooks for packet trigger tunnel events (AFAIK)

"Pre-Shared Key Import (PSKI):" lists WireGuard, but AFAIK it does not support
PSK based authentication - only public key based authentication. While I
understand the IKEv2 entry (PSKs are used for authentication of peers), I am
not sure the ESP entry should be here. ESP does not "authenticate peers",
unless you call "being able to decrypt and authenticate packets" as an instance
of "authenticating peer"

Section 5.2

This states "This can call into the application to offload validation.".  This
"can" is only not supported by WireGuard, as all of this is happening inside
the kernel. Maybe a note could be useful here?

"Source Address Validation" - It is a little unclear why TCP based protocols
are not listed here. They (implicitly) do source address validation. Perhaps
the introduction in this paragraph can state this more explicitly. Eg "for
those protocols that do not use TCP and therefor do not have builtin source
address validation ......."




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> On Apr 15, 2020, at 12:58 AM, Christer Holmberg =
<christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
>=20
> Hi Derrell,
>=20
> Thank You for the review! Please see inline.
>=20
>>   pp. 3, 1., nit
>>=20
>>   "...enables the single-sign-on features, which allows the user =
to..."
>>=20
>>   "...enables single sign-on, which allows the user to..."
>=20
> We can fix as suggested.
>=20
> ---
>=20
>>   pp. 5, last sentence
>>=20
>>   "previously" means "from the out-of-scope mechanism", just say =
that.
>=20
> I think that sounds a little "clumsy" to repeat it. Would it work if =
we said "obtained in the step above", or something like that?

=E2=80=9Cthe step above=E2=80=9D works too.

> ---
>=20
>>   pp. 7, 2.1.1
>>=20
>>   "(or with invalid credentials)"
>>=20
>>   Why continue when a UAC presents invalid credentials?  [See below.]
>>=20
>>=20
>>   pp. 8, 2.1.3
>>=20
>>   2.1.1 says if you get invalid credentials to go REGISTER, and here =
in
>>   REGISTER, it says if you get invalid credentials, go to 2.1.1.  =
This
>>   seems recursive though I'm assuming this ultimately terminates when =
all
>>   the schemes are exhausted without success.
>=20
> Section 2.1.1 defines generic procedures, while section 2.1.3 defines =
the procedures specific for the REGISTER request.
>=20
> Regards,
>=20
> Christer


Okay.

Derrell=

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On Tue, Apr 14, 2020 at 6:35 PM Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net> wrote:

> Catherine Meadows via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> writes:
>
> > Reviewer: Catherine Meadows
> > Review result: Has Issues
>
> Hi Catherine,
>
> Thanks for the review of the dnsop-extended-error draft.  [and sorry
> for the delay in sending this]
>
> > The Security Considerations section mentions some valid points, but it
> > is not made clear how they apply to extended DNS error messages (as
> > opposed to DNS error messages in general). It first makes the
> > non-obvious point that a significant number of clients, when receiving
> > a failure message about a DNS validation issue from a validated
> > resolver, will seek out an unvalidated server instead.  It is not
> > clear to me though whether you think that extending the types of DNS
> > error messages available (thus giving more information to the client)
> > would help address this problem.  You should say something about this.
> > Secondly, it discusses the security implications of the fact that DNS
> > error messages are unauthenticated.
> >
> > In addition, in the paragraph about the security implications of DNS
> error
> > messages being unauthenticated, you should say whether or not extending
> the
> > types of DNS error messages would improve the situation,   make it
> worse, have
> > no effect,  or is unclear.
>
> You're right that we don't specify what to do in the security
> considerations section, though we do earlier in the document.
> Specifically it says (at least):
>
>       Applications MUST continue to follow requirements from applicable
>       specifications on how to process RCODEs no matter what EDE values
>       are also received.
>
> So maybe adding the following sentence to the security section addresses
> your issue?
>
>       EDE content should be treated only as diagnostic information for
>       network operators and MUST NOT alter DNS protocol processing.
>

I have similar objections to this as the similar language that was in the
draft before it was changed to the "MUST continue to follow" language
referenced above.

Anything similar to "MUST NOT alter ... processing" is vague over what
constitutes an alteration to the processing.  I think everybody would agree
that you should be able to log EDEs, so it must be unambiguous that doing
so is allowed.  Lots of discretionary room for implementers (especially
stub implementers) to do various things with an EDE while still following
the specs on the important handling of the RCODE as the primary error code.


>
> We could add a note as well about the scope of the document, though I
> think it can be derived from the above sentence:
>
>       EDE content is not attempting to address the lack security in DNS
>       error messages.
>
> --
> Wes Hardaker
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr"><br></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">=
<div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Tue, Apr 14, 2020 at 6:35 PM Wes H=
ardaker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:wjhns1@hardakers.net">wjhns1@hardakers.net</a=
>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px=
 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Cat=
herine Meadows via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org" targ=
et=3D"_blank">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; writes:<br>
<br>
&gt; Reviewer: Catherine Meadows<br>
&gt; Review result: Has Issues<br>
<br>
Hi Catherine,<br>
<br>
Thanks for the review of the dnsop-extended-error draft.=C2=A0 [and sorry<b=
r>
for the delay in sending this]<br>
<br>
&gt; The Security Considerations section mentions some valid points, but it=
<br>
&gt; is not made clear how they apply to extended DNS error messages (as<br=
>
&gt; opposed to DNS error messages in general). It first makes the<br>
&gt; non-obvious point that a significant number of clients, when receiving=
<br>
&gt; a failure message about a DNS validation issue from a validated<br>
&gt; resolver, will seek out an unvalidated server instead.=C2=A0 It is not=
<br>
&gt; clear to me though whether you think that extending the types of DNS<b=
r>
&gt; error messages available (thus giving more information to the client)<=
br>
&gt; would help address this problem.=C2=A0 You should say something about =
this.<br>
&gt; Secondly, it discusses the security implications of the fact that DNS<=
br>
&gt; error messages are unauthenticated.<br>
&gt; <br>
&gt; In addition, in the paragraph about the security implications of DNS e=
rror<br>
&gt; messages being unauthenticated, you should say whether or not extendin=
g the<br>
&gt; types of DNS error messages would improve the situation,=C2=A0 =C2=A0m=
ake it worse, have<br>
&gt; no effect,=C2=A0 or is unclear.<br>
<br>
You&#39;re right that we don&#39;t specify what to do in the security<br>
considerations section, though we do earlier in the document.<br>
Specifically it says (at least):<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Applications MUST continue to follow requirements from=
 applicable<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 specifications on how to process RCODEs no matter what=
 EDE values<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 are also received.<br>
<br>
So maybe adding the following sentence to the security section addresses<br=
>
your issue?<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 EDE content should be treated only as diagnostic infor=
mation for<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 network operators and MUST NOT alter DNS protocol proc=
essing.<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I have similar objections to th=
is as the similar language that was in the draft before it was changed to t=
he &quot;MUST continue to follow&quot; language referenced above.</div><div=
><br></div><div>Anything similar to &quot;MUST NOT alter ... processing&quo=
t; is vague over what constitutes an alteration to the processing.=C2=A0 I =
think everybody would agree that you should be able to log EDEs, so it must=
 be unambiguous that doing so is allowed.=C2=A0 Lots of discretionary room =
for implementers (especially stub implementers) to do various things with a=
n EDE while still following the specs on the important handling of the RCOD=
E as the primary error code.</div><div>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gma=
il_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,2=
04,204);padding-left:1ex">
<br>
We could add a note as well about the scope of the document, though I<br>
think it can be derived from the above sentence:<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 EDE content is not attempting to address the lack secu=
rity in DNS<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 error messages.<br>
<br>
-- <br>
Wes Hardaker<br>
USC/ISI<br>
<br>
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Eric Orth <ericorth@google.com> writes:

> I have similar objections to this as the similar language that was in the=
 draft
> before it was changed to the "MUST continue to follow" language referenced
> above.
>=20
> Anything similar to "MUST NOT alter ... processing" is vague over what
> constitutes an alteration to the processing.=C2=A0 I think everybody woul=
d agree
> that you should be able to log EDEs, so it must be unambiguous that doing=
 so is
> allowed.=C2=A0 Lots of discretionary room for implementers (especially st=
ub
> implementers) to do various things with an EDE while still following the =
specs
> on the important handling of the RCODE as the primary error code.
> =C2=A0
>=20

Hi Eric,

Thanks for the (again) well thought out comments.  Do you have a counter
proposal sentence?


>=20=20=20=20
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Eric Orth <ericorth@google.com> writes:

> I have similar objections to this as the similar language that was in the=
 draft
> before it was changed to the "MUST continue to follow" language referenced
> above.
>=20
> Anything similar to "MUST NOT alter ... processing" is vague over what
> constitutes an alteration to the processing.=C2=A0 I think everybody woul=
d agree
> that you should be able to log EDEs, so it must be unambiguous that doing=
 so is
> allowed.=C2=A0 Lots of discretionary room for implementers (especially st=
ub
> implementers) to do various things with an EDE while still following the =
specs
> on the important handling of the RCODE as the primary error code.
> =C2=A0
>=20

Hi Eric,

Thanks for the (again) well thought out comments.  Do you have a counter
proposal sentence that could be added to the security seciton?

--=20
Wes Hardaker
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is ready with nits.

(nit) In section 3.1, I think "by changing the key used for integration 
protection" should say "integrity" instead of "integration"


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Reviewer: Tirumaleswar Reddy

Review result: Ready with issues





I reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effo=
rt to review all IETF documents entering the IESG.  These comments are dire=
cted at the security area director(s).  Document editors and WG chairs shou=
ld treat

these comments like any other last call comments.



This document provides a reference framework for OAM for SFC.



Comments:



1. The document in Section 8 discusses various attacks (including both secu=
rity and privacy) but does not discuss any protection mechanisms other than=
 proposing rate-limiting.  It is suggesting drafts proposing the OAM soluti=
on should address the attacks but I don't see any security

mechanisms discussed in draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh to address the attacks.



2. More discussion is required on the internal attacks.

(a) How are attack packets bypassing SFC detected and blocked ?

(b) How is sensitive information protected from eavesdroppers ?

(c) How is DoS/DDoS attack of misusing the OAM channel is mitigated ?

(d) Rate-limiting blocks both good and bad OAM probes and is a weak mitigat=
ion strategy. Anomaly detection (e.g., deep learning techinques) and identi=
fying the attacker look like a better strategy.



Cheers,
-Tiru

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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Reviewer: Tirumaleswar Reddy<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Review result: <strong><span style=3D"font-family=
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><strong><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Calibri&=
quot;,sans-serif"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></strong></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">I reviewed this document as part of the security =
directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents entering the IESG=
.&nbsp; These comments are directed at the security area director(s).&nbsp;=
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">these comments like any other last call comments.=
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">This document provides a reference framework for =
OAM for SFC.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Comments:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">1. The document in Section 8 discusses various at=
tacks (including both security and privacy) but does not discuss any protec=
tion mechanisms other than proposing rate-limiting. &nbsp;It is suggesting =
drafts proposing the OAM solution should
 address the attacks but I don&#8217;t see any security <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">mechanisms discussed in draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh t=
o address the attacks.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">2. More discussion is required on the internal at=
tacks. <o:p>
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">(a) How are attack packets bypassing SFC detected=
 and blocked ?
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">(b) How is sensitive information protected from e=
avesdroppers ?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">(c) How is DoS/DDoS attack of misusing the OAM ch=
annel is mitigated ?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">(d) Rate-limiting blocks both good and bad OAM pr=
obes and is a weak mitigation strategy. Anomaly detection (e.g., deep learn=
ing techinques) and identifying the attacker look like a better strategy.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">-Tiru<o:p></o:p></p>
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Hi Stephen,
(Dropping last-call, adding QUIC WG)

You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not ready, I t=
hink
the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to actua=
lly
move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport.=20

QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow draft-ietf-tsvwg=
-
datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays.=20

Cheers

Magnus Westerlund


On Sat, 2020-04-04 at 14:11 -0700, Stephen Farrell via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Stephen Farrell
> Review result: Has Nits
>=20
>=20
> Thanks for addressing my earlier secdir comments on -15. I think
> the ones below remain but are, from my POV, nits:
>=20
> - Abstract: This draft aims for proposed standard but is
> updating a BCP (RFC8085/BCP145).  I'm happy to leave the
> process-lawyering for that to others.
>=20
> - 6.3: I am surprised that the QUIC description here is ready
> to be an RFC before QUIC itself. I do see there are
> normative references, but the potential for a breaking change
> still exists, and seems a bit unwise. (I'd suggest, holding
> this in the WG 'till the referenced QUIC drafts are in the RFC
> editor queue, or else taking that bit out and putting it into
> a new I-D.)
>=20
>=20
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Cheers

Magnus Westerlund=20


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Hi Magnus,

Speaking as an individual because I have not conferred with other QUIC
chairs or list:

On Mon, Apr 20, 2020 at 2:21 PM Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund=
40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> Hi Stephen,
> (Dropping last-call, adding QUIC WG)
>
> You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not ready, I
> think
> the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to
> actually
> move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport.
>
> QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow
> draft-ietf-tsvwg-
> datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays.
>
>
My 2c: QUIC says endpoints SHOULD use DPLPMTUD or something else. So I
don't see including some more text as being a protocol design change.
However, it can't simply be copied verbatim and would need some editorial
work (for example, DPLPMTUD Section 6.3.3 includes a MUST NOT, which might
need some contextualization in the QUIC document). The migration would also
require an editorial pass in DPLPMTUD to make sure remaining use to QUIC
outside section 6.3 are correct. The QUIC editors are busy, so the proposal
is more palatable if you have a volunteer to put some effort into this.

Cheers
Lucas

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Hi Magnus,</div><div><br></div><div>=
Speaking as an individual because I have not conferred with other QUIC chai=
rs or list:<br></div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" =
class=3D"gmail_attr">On Mon, Apr 20, 2020 at 2:21 PM Magnus Westerlund &lt;=
magnus.westerlund=3D<a href=3D"mailto:40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org">40eric=
sson.com@dmarc.ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_=
quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,=
204);padding-left:1ex">Hi Stephen,<br>
(Dropping last-call, adding QUIC WG)<br>
<br>
You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not ready, I t=
hink<br>
the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to actua=
lly<br>
move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport. <br>
<br>
QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow draft-ietf-tsvwg=
-<br>
datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays. <br>
<br></blockquote><div><br></div><div>My 2c: QUIC says endpoints SHOULD use =
DPLPMTUD or something else. So I don&#39;t see including some more text as =
being a protocol design change. However, it can&#39;t simply be copied verb=
atim and would need some editorial work (for example, DPLPMTUD Section 6.3.=
3 includes a MUST NOT, which might need some contextualization in the QUIC =
document). The migration would also require an editorial pass in DPLPMTUD t=
o make sure remaining use to QUIC outside section 6.3 are correct. The QUIC=
 editors are busy, so the proposal is more palatable if you have a voluntee=
r to put some effort into this.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers</div><div>L=
ucas<br></div></div></div>

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Hi,

On 2020-4-20, at 16:19, Magnus Westerlund =
<magnus.westerlund=3D40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not =
ready, I think
> the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to =
actually
> move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport.
>=20
> QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow =
draft-ietf-tsvwg-
> datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays.

the chairs discussed this for a bit, and we're a bit hesitant to go this =
route.

IIRC, if both docs have mutual normative references to one another, they =
get clustered and published together anyway. Do we need more?

If we actually want to WGLC them together, TSVWG can maybe park -plpmtud =
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Hi Paul,

Thanks for the review! You can find an updated version of the document =
here:

=
https://ietf-tapswg.github.io/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security/draft-iet=
f-taps-transport-security.html =
<https://ietf-tapswg.github.io/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security/draft-ie=
tf-taps-transport-security.html>

Responses inline.


> On Apr 15, 2020, at 8:48 AM, Paul Wouters via Datatracker =
<noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>=20
> Reviewer: Paul Wouters
> Review result: Has Nits
>=20
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's  =
ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  =
These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area =
directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like =
any other
> last call comments.
>=20
> The summary of the review is Has Nits
>=20
> Compared to my last review (-09) a lot of text has been removed, =
reducing the
> technical details and giving a briefer (but arguably cleaner) =
overview.
>=20
> I do still have a personal preference of dropping CurveCP and MinimalT =
as I
> don't really think these are anything but abandoned research items. I =
have
> never seen or heard of these being deployed. I would be more tempted =
to list
> openconnect (draft-mavrogiannopoulos-openconnect) which actually does =
see quite
> some deployment. If the intent is really to show different kind of =
API's, than
> there are other esoteric examples that could be included, such as
> Off-The-Record(OTR) or Signal, which are mostly encrypted chat =
programs, but
> with the ability to generate session keys for encrypted bulk transport =
(eg for
> video/audio or file transfer)

We discussed for Signal and OTR. Our sense was that these protocols are =
more asynchronous application-layer protocols that are akin to MLS, that =
can be more independent from a transport layer.
>=20
> Section 5.1
>=20
> "Session Cache Management (CM):" which does not include IKEv2/IPsec, =
even
> though it does have session resumption (RFC 5723). I guess this is =
because the
> section limits itself to "the application" that can restart the =
session. But
> for IKEv2/IPsec the same could be said. An application that after a =
long idle
> period sends a packet, triggers a kernel ACQUIRE, which triggers an =
IKEv2
> session resumption. WireGuard does not have this capability as there =
are no
> API/hooks for packet trigger tunnel events (AFAIK)

Indeed, this refers to an explicit interface for cache management.

>=20
> "Pre-Shared Key Import (PSKI):" lists WireGuard, but AFAIK it does not =
support
> PSK based authentication - only public key based authentication.

We discussed that WireGuard uses the IKpsk2 Noise pattern (see =
https://www.wireguard.com/protocol/, and =
https://noiseexplorer.com/patterns/IKpsk2/), in which a responder uses =
its PSK to additionally authenticate a connection.

> While I
> understand the IKEv2 entry (PSKs are used for authentication of =
peers), I am
> not sure the ESP entry should be here. ESP does not "authenticate =
peers",
> unless you call "being able to decrypt and authenticate packets" as an =
instance
> of "authenticating peer"

We=E2=80=99ve changed the reference to be IPsec as a unit for IKEv2 + =
ESP in these lists.

>=20
> Section 5.2
>=20
> This states "This can call into the application to offload =
validation.".  This
> "can" is only not supported by WireGuard, as all of this is happening =
inside
> the kernel. Maybe a note could be useful here?

Switched to "This can offload validation or occur transparently to the =
application."
>=20
> "Source Address Validation" - It is a little unclear why TCP based =
protocols
> are not listed here. They (implicitly) do source address validation. =
Perhaps
> the introduction in this paragraph can state this more explicitly. Eg =
"for
> those protocols that do not use TCP and therefor do not have builtin =
source
> address validation ......."

We clarify here that:

"Of the protocols listed above that depend on the transport for message =
framing, some do have well-defined mappings for sending their messages =
over byte-stream transports like TCP.=E2=80=9D

Thanks,
Tommy
>=20
>=20
>=20
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<html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; =
charset=3Dutf-8"></head><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; =
-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=3D"">Hi =
Paul,<div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">Thanks for the review! You can find an updated version of the =
document here:</div><div class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div =
class=3D""><a =
href=3D"https://ietf-tapswg.github.io/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security/d=
raft-ietf-taps-transport-security.html" =
class=3D"">https://ietf-tapswg.github.io/draft-ietf-taps-transport-securit=
y/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security.html</a></div><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Responses inline.</div><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div><br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D"">On Apr 15, 2020, at 8:48 AM, =
Paul Wouters via Datatracker &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org" =
class=3D"">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:</div><br =
class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=3D""><div =
class=3D"">Reviewer: Paul Wouters<br class=3D"">Review result: Has =
Nits<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">I have reviewed this document as part =
of the security directorate's &nbsp;ongoing<br class=3D"">effort to =
review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. &nbsp;These<br =
class=3D"">comments were written primarily for the benefit of the =
security area directors.<br class=3D""> Document editors and WG chairs =
should treat these comments just like any other<br class=3D"">last call =
comments.<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">The summary of the review is Has =
Nits<br class=3D""><br class=3D"">Compared to my last review (-09) a lot =
of text has been removed, reducing the<br class=3D"">technical details =
and giving a briefer (but arguably cleaner) overview.<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">I do still have a personal preference of dropping CurveCP and =
MinimalT as I<br class=3D"">don't really think these are anything but =
abandoned research items. I have<br class=3D"">never seen or heard of =
these being deployed. I would be more tempted to list<br =
class=3D"">openconnect (draft-mavrogiannopoulos-openconnect) which =
actually does see quite<br class=3D"">some deployment. If the intent is =
really to show different kind of API's, than<br class=3D"">there are =
other esoteric examples that could be included, such as<br =
class=3D"">Off-The-Record(OTR) or Signal, which are mostly encrypted =
chat programs, but<br class=3D"">with the ability to generate session =
keys for encrypted bulk transport (eg for<br class=3D"">video/audio or =
file transfer)<br class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div>We discussed for Signal and OTR. Our sense was that =
these protocols are more asynchronous application-layer protocols that =
are akin to MLS, that can be more independent from a transport layer.<br =
class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><br class=3D"">Section 5.1<br class=3D""><br class=3D""> =
"Session Cache Management (CM):" which does not include IKEv2/IPsec, =
even<br class=3D""> though it does have session resumption (RFC 5723). I =
guess this is because the<br class=3D""> section limits itself to "the =
application" that can restart the session. But<br class=3D""> for =
IKEv2/IPsec the same could be said. An application that after a long =
idle<br class=3D""> period sends a packet, triggers a kernel ACQUIRE, =
which triggers an IKEv2<br class=3D""> session resumption. WireGuard =
does not have this capability as there are no<br class=3D""> API/hooks =
for packet trigger tunnel events (AFAIK)<br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>Indeed,=
 this refers to an explicit interface for cache =
management.</div><div><br class=3D""></div><blockquote type=3D"cite" =
class=3D""><div class=3D""><div class=3D""><br class=3D"">"Pre-Shared =
Key Import (PSKI):" lists WireGuard, but AFAIK it does not support<br =
class=3D"">PSK based authentication - only public key based =
authentication.</div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>We =
discussed that WireGuard uses the IKpsk2 Noise pattern (see&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://www.wireguard.com/protocol/" =
class=3D"">https://www.wireguard.com/protocol/</a>, =
and&nbsp;https://noiseexplorer.com/patterns/IKpsk2/), in which a =
responder uses its PSK to additionally authenticate a =
connection.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><div class=3D""> While I<br class=3D"">understand the IKEv2 =
entry (PSKs are used for authentication of peers), I am<br class=3D"">not =
sure the ESP entry should be here. ESP does not "authenticate peers",<br =
class=3D"">unless you call "being able to decrypt and authenticate =
packets" as an instance<br class=3D"">of "authenticating peer"<br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div><div>We=E2=80=
=99ve changed the reference to be IPsec as a unit for IKEv2 + ESP in =
these lists.</div><br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div=
 class=3D""><div class=3D""><br class=3D"">Section 5.2<br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">This states "This can call into the application to offload =
validation.". &nbsp;This<br class=3D"">"can" is only not supported by =
WireGuard, as all of this is happening inside<br class=3D"">the kernel. =
Maybe a note could be useful here?<br =
class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=3D""></div>Switched =
to "This can offload validation or occur transparently to the =
application."<br class=3D""><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div =
class=3D""><div class=3D""><br class=3D"">"Source Address Validation" - =
It is a little unclear why TCP based protocols<br class=3D"">are not =
listed here. They (implicitly) do source address validation. Perhaps<br =
class=3D"">the introduction in this paragraph can state this more =
explicitly. Eg "for<br class=3D"">those protocols that do not use TCP =
and therefor do not have builtin source<br class=3D"">address validation =
......."<br class=3D""></div></div></blockquote><div><br =
class=3D""></div>We clarify here that:</div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>"Of the protocols listed above that depend on the =
transport for message framing, some do have well-defined mappings for =
sending their messages&nbsp;over byte-stream transports like =
TCP.=E2=80=9D</div><div><br =
class=3D""></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Tommy<br class=3D""><blockquote =
type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D""><div class=3D""><br =
class=3D""><br class=3D""><br =
class=3D"">_______________________________________________<br =
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On Wed, 2020-04-22 at 15:03 +0300, Lars Eggert wrote:
> Hi,
>=20
> On 2020-4-20, at 16:19, Magnus Westerlund <
> magnus.westerlund=3D40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> > You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not ready,=
 I
> > think
> > the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to
> > actually
> > move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport.
> >=20
> > QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow draft-ietf-t=
svwg-
> > datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays.
>=20
> the chairs discussed this for a bit, and we're a bit hesitant to go this
> route.
>=20
> IIRC, if both docs have mutual normative references to one another, they =
get
> clustered and published together anyway. Do we need more?
>=20
> If we actually want to WGLC them together, TSVWG can maybe park -plpmtud =
for a
> bit?

So, this is basically the last issue before approving the document as a pro=
posed
standard. It has already been through IETF last call, IESG Evaluation. This
discussion is soley due to a late review.=20

The document do contain specification for other transport protocols I think
there are some point in getting it published. However, as long as QUIC WG i=
s not
gone delay to long I personally can have it hanging in the RFC-editor queue=
. I
am not expecting any significant change to the QUIC parts (PING and PADDING=
 (not
details) referenced from Section 6.3 in datagram-plpmtud draft.=20


Cheers

Magnus Westerlund=20


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Hi,

I need to apologize to Stephen Farrell for my statement that the review was 
late. The review was not late.

It was my failure to ensure  to address that particular aspect in the process 
to take it to the IESG. Which resurfaced due my desire to get the draft 
updated before approval.

Regards

Magnus Westerlund

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
> Sent: den 22 april 2020 20:08
> To: lars@eggert.org
> Cc: stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie; tsvwg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-
> plpmtud.all@ietf.org; secdir@ietf.org; quic@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-19
>
> On Wed, 2020-04-22 at 15:03 +0300, Lars Eggert wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > On 2020-4-20, at 16:19, Magnus Westerlund <
> > magnus.westerlund=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> > > You do have a point here. Considering that QUIC transport is not ready, 
> > > I
> > > think
> > > the alternative to have this document hang in RFC-editors queue is to
> > > actually
> > > move Section 6.3 into draft-ietf-quic-transport.
> > >
> > > QUIC WG what do you think of that solution? It would allow draft-ietf-
> tsvwg-
> > > datagram-plpmtud to be published without delays.
> >
> > the chairs discussed this for a bit, and we're a bit hesitant to go this
> > route.
> >
> > IIRC, if both docs have mutual normative references to one another, they
> get
> > clustered and published together anyway. Do we need more?
> >
> > If we actually want to WGLC them together, TSVWG can maybe park -
> plpmtud for a
> > bit?
>
> So, this is basically the last issue before approving the document as a
> proposed
> standard. It has already been through IETF last call, IESG Evaluation. This
> discussion is soley due to a late review.
>
> The document do contain specification for other transport protocols I think
> there are some point in getting it published. However, as long as QUIC WG is
> not
> gone delay to long I personally can have it hanging in the RFC-editor queue. 
> I
> am not expecting any significant change to the QUIC parts (PING and
> PADDING (not
> details) referenced from Section 6.3 in datagram-plpmtud draft.
>
>
> Cheers
>
> Magnus Westerlund
>
>
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For telechat 2020-04-24

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Vincent Roca           2020-01-30 draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-18

For telechat 2020-05-21

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Donald Eastlake       R2019-11-14 draft-ietf-hip-dex-18

Last calls:

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
John Bradley           2020-02-28 draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-07
Alan DeKok             2019-06-04 draft-ietf-netvc-testing-09
Donald Eastlake        2020-02-27 draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16
Donald Eastlake       R2019-11-14 draft-ietf-hip-dex-18
Daniel Franke          2020-03-09 draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-06
Aanchal Malhotra       2020-03-12 draft-ietf-bess-vpls-multihoming-05
Russ Mundy             2020-01-02 draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-08
Magnus Nystrom         2019-04-10 draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-11
Hilarie Orman          2020-04-29 draft-hodges-webauthn-registries-05
Francesca Palombini    2020-04-28 draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-11
Vincent Roca           2020-04-23 draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-05
Vincent Roca           2020-01-30 draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-18
Kyle Rose              2020-04-30 draft-ietf-idr-capabilities-registry-change-07
Joseph Salowey         2020-05-05 draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13
Rich Salz              2020-05-05 draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-11
Stefan Santesson       2020-05-04 draft-ietf-httpbis-header-structure-18
Yaron Sheffer          None       draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-03
Sean Turner            2020-05-06 draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-02
Dacheng Zhang          2020-03-12 draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo-01
Dacheng Zhang          2019-11-05 draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07

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  Melinda Shore
  Valery Smyslov
  Robert Sparks
  Takeshi Takahashi
  Tina Tsou
  Sean Turner
  Mališa Vučinić
  Carl Wallace
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Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
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The summary of the review is Ready.

This document provides an informational reference for examples of the Session
Description Protocol (SDP) Offer/Answer exchange mechanism, for the most common
Rtcweb use-cases.

The security considerations section points to documents describing the security
architecture for WebRTC as a whole, which is appropriate for such an
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Reviewer: Kyle Rose
Review result: Ready

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This document is ready. It describes a policy change regarding assignment of
BGP capability codes, with no novel security implications.



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       Security review of Registries for Web Authentication
      	       draft-hodges-webauthn-registries-05

Do not be alarmed.  I generated this review of this document as part
of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF
documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written
with the intent of improving security requirements and considerations
in IETF drafts.  Comments not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs
should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document establishes two registries required for the W3C Web
Authentication system.  The registries are for the WebAuthn
Attestation Statement Format Identifier and the WebAuthn Extension
Identifier.

When submitted, these entries must be approved by an "expert" based on
the specification that defines the parameters of the entry.  This
includes "security considerations", which is good.  I don't quite see
how submission of a request for a new entry gets routed to an expert,
how experts come into being, etc., but I suppose that is a W3C
procedure.

A couple of nits.

This url is listed twice in the URIs:
https://www.iana.org/assignments/webauthn
but it does not exist.  I expected at least a TBD message, unless the
address itself is a placeholder.

In 2.1
"The Experts(s) MAY also designate attestation
   statement formats as proprietary if they lack complete
   specifications, and will assign a prefix indicating as such to the
   identifier."  
It is not clear what the format of that prefix is or how indicates
"as such".  Is that an indication that it is proprietary or (and?)
that it is incomplete?

Hilarie


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Reviewer               LC end     Draft
Donald Eastlake       R2019-11-14 draft-ietf-hip-dex-18

Last calls:

Reviewer               LC end     Draft
John Bradley           2020-02-28 draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-08
Alan DeKok             2019-06-04 draft-ietf-netvc-testing-09
Donald Eastlake        2020-02-27 draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16
Donald Eastlake       R2019-11-14 draft-ietf-hip-dex-18
Daniel Franke          2020-03-09 draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-07
Aanchal Malhotra       2020-03-12 draft-ietf-bess-vpls-multihoming-05
Russ Mundy             2020-01-02 draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-08
Magnus Nystrom         2019-04-10 draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-11
Vincent Roca           2020-04-23 draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-05
Joseph Salowey         2020-05-05 draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13
Rich Salz              2020-05-05 draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12
Stefan Santesson       2020-05-04 draft-ietf-httpbis-header-structure-18
Yaron Sheffer          None       draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-03
Rifaat Shekh-Yusef     2020-05-13 draft-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis-04
Melinda Shore          2020-05-13 draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-09
Valery Smyslov         2020-05-13 draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-10
Robert Sparks          2020-05-11 draft-ietf-capport-api-07
Tina Tsou              2020-05-08 draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-13
Sean Turner            2020-05-06 draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-02
Dacheng Zhang          2020-03-12 draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo-01
Dacheng Zhang          2019-11-05 draft-ietf-mpls-ri-rsvp-frr-07

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  Mališa Vučinić
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  Samuel Weiler
  Brian Weis
  Klaas Wierenga
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Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
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This document is ready for publication as Proposed Standard RFC.

The document defines an HTTP json-based API for clients to use with a captive
portal API server. Discovery of the API server URL is defined in other capport
documents. Connection to the server uses TLS. Server authentication SHOULD use
OCSP stapling, and the network SHOULD provide permit connection to NTP servers
(or other time-sync mechanisms). The security considerations section calls out
the potential risk of look-alike characters being used in the server domain
name to mislead the user of the client of this API.




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Thanks for the review, Robert.

Barry

On Thu, Apr 30, 2020 at 11:00 AM Robert Sparks via Datatracker
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> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready
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> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
> were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document
> editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
>
> This document is ready for publication as Proposed Standard RFC.
>
> The document defines an HTTP json-based API for clients to use with a captive
> portal API server. Discovery of the API server URL is defined in other capport
> documents. Connection to the server uses TLS. Server authentication SHOULD use
> OCSP stapling, and the network SHOULD provide permit connection to NTP servers
> (or other time-sync mechanisms). The security considerations section calls out
> the potential risk of look-alike characters being used in the server domain
> name to mislead the user of the client of this API.
>
>
>


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Reviewer: Rich Salz
Review result: Ready

I am the SECDIR reviewer for this document; the security directorate tries to
review all documents before they go to the IESG. This content is intended
primarily for the SecAD's, anyone else should consider this like other
last-call comments.

This document is READY.

This is a short doument. It defines a way for MPLS routers to indicate that
they can handle additional meta-data, "entropy labels" and depth of them, to do
traffic routing.

The security implications of this are well-discussed.




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Reviewer: Joseph Salowey
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is ready from a security perspective.  The security
considerations section is adequate.


