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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think the document co=
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e actual protocols used in the different integration scenarios should be gi=
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P LiveStreaming Client (P2PLS)=A1=B1? &nbsp;&nbsp;As an example,
 HTTP/TCP are the protocols used for web browsing.&nbsp; What were the prot=
ocols for P2PLS?&nbsp; Also some details for the protocols should be given =
even for the =A1=B0BitTorrent=A1=B1 example.&nbsp; As not all readers will =
have knowledge of how BitTorrent works.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e file/object naming scheme used in the different integration scenarios sho=
uld be given.&nbsp; This is a critical part of DECADE and the approached us=
ed in the experiments for naming must be
 given for a complete understanding of what was done.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In the Intro (and elsew=
here) there needs to be some clear references to DECADE WG documents such a=
s the Problem Statement, Requirements or Architecture (and the associated c=
oncepts defined in those documents).&nbsp;
 Note that there can be deviations from the concepts defined in the DECADE =
WG documents, but these need to be clearly explained.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
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<span style=3D"color:red">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some detailed comments =
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Abstract is a bit d=
etailed and it is hard to understand.&nbsp; For example there should not be=
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In section 2.9 (Remote =
Controller), I did not understand what =A1=B0a major operating platform=A1=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e =A1=B0limited connection slot=A1=B1 issue (sec. 4.2.1).&nbsp; My understa=
nding is that a DECADE client will have an association with a given DECADE =
server, and not every other possible server.&nbsp; Is
 this the assumption that was used in the integration?<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Editorial: The word DEC=
ADE is spelled incorrectly in Figure 2 and 3.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e relation between a DECADE client and server in the ALTO &#43; DECADE inte=
gration (section 6)?&nbsp; Does ALTO get invoked for both PUT and GET from =
a DECADE client?&nbsp; Or is it only for a GET?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-18.=
0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Wingdings"><=
span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=EC<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times =
New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Similarly, I did not un=
derstand the Performance Analysis of the ALTO&#43;DECADE Performance Analys=
is (section 8.2.3).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Should better define wh=
at a =A1=B0small instance=A1=B1 is in the Amazon EC2 framework (section 7.2=
.1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">A short Conclusion sect=
ion should be added to the document briefly summarizing the lessons learned=
 and some suggestions for the DECADE design.&nbsp; As right now the conclus=
ions are spread over several sections.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Security section (s=
ec. 9) should not be empty as there must have been some security related as=
sumptions in the integration.&nbsp; For example, was any DECADE client able=
 to read from any DECADE server without
 authentication?&nbsp; Yes or No?&nbsp; Either way this should be described=
.&nbsp; (In section 5.3, for example, there was a reference to an =A1=B0aut=
horization token=A1=B1).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-autospace:none"><span lang=3D"EN-US" s=
tyle=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;
</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:red">&nbsp;----good advice, we w=
ill &nbsp;perfect them next version.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:red">For the comment from Ning Zong, sure, there are some problem as follo=
wing, we will address them next version also.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I also have following comments =
&amp; suggestions:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 1 =A1=B0Intr=
oduction=A1=B1, it seems that only P2P live streaming is mentioned. We shou=
ld also mention file sharing application (e.g. Vuze) and Content Distributi=
on Platform for CP;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 2, =A1=B0DEC=
ADE Module=A1=B1 and =A1=B0DECADE Plugin=A1=B1 should be the same. We shoul=
d merge these two definition and use one term in the whole draft.<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">3=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 2, =A1=B0DEC=
ADE-Enabled Vuze=A1=B1 is covered by =A1=B0DECADE Client=A1=B1. In the whol=
e draft, we could either use two terms =A8C =A1=B0DECADE-enabled Vuze=A1=B1=
 &amp; =A1=B0DECADE-enable PPLS=A1=B1, or just use =A1=B0DECADE Client=A1=
=B1 for general purpose.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">4=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think Section 6 needs=
 more editorial work.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">5=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 6, I think w=
e=A1=AFd better to call it =A1=B0content distribution platform for CP=A1=B1=
 rather than =A1=B0ALTO&#43;DECADE platform=A1=B1, as we don=A1=AFt focus o=
n describing an ALTO&#43;DECADE architecture in this draft.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">6=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 6, we=A1=AFd=
 better to use DECADE service provider rather than ISP in Figure 4. We also=
 need more explanation to Figure 4, as the connections are unclear, e.g. ar=
e these data or signaling links? Do we
 need more components such as ALTO server and content origins?<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">7=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 7, test sett=
ings for distribution platform for CP is missing, e.g. how many and which t=
ypes of servers are used, which CPs are tested?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">8=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 8, I think w=
e=A1=AFd better to give a content distribution performance example, e.g. ho=
w long to complete a content distribution, to how many users, how about the=
 bandwidth usage?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt">
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0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;"> Songhaibin
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, December 23, 2011 5:06 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Rahman, Akbar'; decade@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: WG review of draft-ietf-decade-integration-example-02<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Hi Akbar,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Thanks for the comments. The authors please discuss/address these=
 comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">BR,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">-Haibin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt">
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0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;"> decade-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:decade-bounces@ietf.o=
rg]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Rahman, Akbar<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, November 29, 2011 3:17 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> decade@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [decade] WG review of draft-ietf-decade-integration-example=
-02<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">As per the request of the DECAD=
E chairs in IETF 82, I did a review of the =A1=B0Integration Examples of DE=
CADE System=A1=B1 (draft-ietf-decade-integration-example-02) and have the f=
ollowing comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Overall, I found the do=
cument very useful in providing excellent insights into how DECADE could be=
 used in a real network.&nbsp; Also, I took it as a good example of =A1=B0r=
unning code=A1=B1 for DECADE.&nbsp; Thanks for the good
 work!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think the document co=
uld generally be improved if the following information were added (or expan=
ded):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e actual protocols used in the different integration scenarios should be gi=
ven.&nbsp; For example, what were the underlying protocols for the =A1=B0P2=
P LiveStreaming Client (P2PLS)=A1=B1? &nbsp;&nbsp;As an example,
 HTTP/TCP are the protocols used for web browsing.&nbsp; What were the prot=
ocols for P2PLS?&nbsp; Also some details for the protocols should be given =
even for the =A1=B0BitTorrent=A1=B1 example.&nbsp; As not all readers will =
have knowledge of how BitTorrent works.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e file/object naming scheme used in the different integration scenarios sho=
uld be given.&nbsp; This is a critical part of DECADE and the approached us=
ed in the experiments for naming must be
 given for a complete understanding of what was done.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In the Intro (and elsew=
here) there needs to be some clear references to DECADE WG documents such a=
s the Problem Statement, Requirements or Architecture (and the associated c=
oncepts defined in those documents).&nbsp;
 Note that there can be deviations from the concepts defined in the DECADE =
WG documents, but these need to be clearly explained.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some detailed comments =
on specific sections:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Abstract is a bit d=
etailed and it is hard to understand.&nbsp; For example there should not be=
 a list (points 1-6) in an abstract.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In section 2.9 (Remote =
Controller), I did not understand what =A1=B0a major operating platform=A1=
=B1 meant?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e =A1=B0limited connection slot=A1=B1 issue (sec. 4.2.1).&nbsp; My understa=
nding is that a DECADE client will have an association with a given DECADE =
server, and not every other possible server.&nbsp; Is
 this the assumption that was used in the integration?<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
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r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Editorial: The word DEC=
ADE is spelled incorrectly in Figure 2 and 3.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e relation between a DECADE client and server in the ALTO &#43; DECADE inte=
gration (section 6)?&nbsp; Does ALTO get invoked for both PUT and GET from =
a DECADE client?&nbsp; Or is it only for a GET?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-18.=
0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Wingdings"><=
span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=EC<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times =
New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Similarly, I did not un=
derstand the Performance Analysis of the ALTO&#43;DECADE Performance Analys=
is (section 8.2.3).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Should better define wh=
at a =A1=B0small instance=A1=B1 is in the Amazon EC2 framework (section 7.2=
.1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">A short Conclusion sect=
ion should be added to the document briefly summarizing the lessons learned=
 and some suggestions for the DECADE design.&nbsp; As right now the conclus=
ions are spread over several sections.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Security section (s=
ec. 9) should not be empty as there must have been some security related as=
sumptions in the integration.&nbsp; For example, was any DECADE client able=
 to read from any DECADE server without
 authentication?&nbsp; Yes or No?&nbsp; Either way this should be described=
.&nbsp; (In section 5.3, for example, there was a reference to an =A1=B0aut=
horization token=A1=B1).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">That=A1=AFs all.<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Akbar<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think the document co=
uld generally be improved if the following information were added (or expan=
ded):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
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e actual protocols used in the different integration scenarios should be gi=
ven.&nbsp; For example, what were the underlying protocols for the =A1=B0P2=
P LiveStreaming Client (P2PLS)=A1=B1? &nbsp;&nbsp;As an example,
 HTTP/TCP are the protocols used for web browsing.&nbsp; What were the prot=
ocols for P2PLS?&nbsp; Also some details for the protocols should be given =
even for the =A1=B0BitTorrent=A1=B1 example.&nbsp; As not all readers will =
have knowledge of how BitTorrent works.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN=
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#0070C0">------HTTP is the protocol used for P2PLS. Some details for the pr=
otocol like =A1=B0BitTorrent=A1=B1 will be given in next version.<o:p></o:p=
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e file/object naming scheme used in the different integration scenarios sho=
uld be given.&nbsp; This is a critical part of DECADE and the approached us=
ed in the experiments for naming must be
 given for a complete understanding of what was done.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=3D"color:#0070C0">&nb=
sp;&nbsp;------We will give them in next version.<o:p></o:p></span></span><=
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In the Intro (and elsew=
here) there needs to be some clear references to DECADE WG documents such a=
s the Problem Statement, Requirements or Architecture (and the associated c=
oncepts defined in those documents).&nbsp;
 Note that there can be deviations from the concepts defined in the DECADE =
WG documents, but these need to be clearly explained.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some detailed comments =
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pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Abstract is a bit d=
etailed and it is hard to understand.&nbsp; For example there should not be=
 a list (points 1-6) in an abstract.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <span style=3D"color:#0070C0">
&nbsp;------Good advice, We will perfect the =A1=B0Abstract=A1=B1 in next v=
ersion<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In section 2.9 (Remote =
Controller), I did not understand what =A1=B0a major operating platform=A1=
=B1 meant?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------=A1=B0a m=
ajor operating platform=A1=B1 means: in the trail, we always use =A1=B0Remo=
te Controller=A1=B1 to control Vuze server and Vuze clients,<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:#0070C0">&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; We look Remote Controller as a=
 operating platform to start/stop a trail, and collect debug information.<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e =A1=B0limited connection slot=A1=B1 issue (sec. 4.2.1).&nbsp; My understa=
nding is that a DECADE client will have an association with a given DECADE =
server, and not every other possible server.&nbsp; Is
 this the assumption that was used in the integration?<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:9.0pt=
"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:#0070C0">------Yes, It is an assumpti=
on under the condition that if only one DECADE Server in storage network.<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:9.0pt=
"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Editorial: The word DEC=
ADE is spelled incorrectly in Figure 2 and 3.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <span style=3D"color:#0070C0">
&nbsp;------ We will perfect the =A1=B0Abstract=A1=B1 in next version<o:p><=
/o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e relation between a DECADE client and server in the ALTO &#43; DECADE inte=
gration (section 6)?&nbsp; Does ALTO get invoked for both PUT and GET from =
a DECADE client?&nbsp; Or is it only for a GET?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:9.0pt=
"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:#0070C0">------In principle, ALTO can=
 service both PUT and GET.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:9.0pt=
"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:#0070C0"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-18.=
0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Wingdings"><=
span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=EC<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times =
New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Similarly, I did not un=
derstand the Performance Analysis of the ALTO&#43;DECADE Performance Analys=
is (section 8.2.3).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp; <span style=3D"color:#0070C0">
&nbsp;------ The Performance Analysis present the using rate of bandwidth i=
n each DECADE Server and total online users can be support in One<o:p></o:p=
></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:#0070C0">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; DECADE Server.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Should better define wh=
at a =A1=B0small instance=A1=B1 is in the Amazon EC2 framework (section 7.2=
.1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------We will define it=
 in next version.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">A short Conclusion sect=
ion should be added to the document briefly summarizing the lessons learned=
 and some suggestions for the DECADE design.&nbsp; As right now the conclus=
ions are spread over several sections.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------We will add in ne=
xt version.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Security section (s=
ec. 9) should not be empty as there must have been some security related as=
sumptions in the integration.&nbsp; For example, was any DECADE client able=
 to read from any DECADE server without
 authentication?&nbsp; Yes or No?&nbsp; Either way this should be described=
.&nbsp; (In section 5.3, for example, there was a reference to an =A1=B0aut=
horization token=A1=B1).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------No, authenticatio=
n is needed, We will add it in next version.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN=
-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I also have following comments =
&amp; suggestions:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 1 =A1=B0Intr=
oduction=A1=B1, it seems that only P2P live streaming is mentioned. We shou=
ld also mention file sharing application (e.g. Vuze) and Content Distributi=
on Platform for CP;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:22.0pt">
<span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------We will perfect it=
 in next version.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph">
<span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 2, =A1=B0DEC=
ADE Module=A1=B1 and =A1=B0DECADE Plugin=A1=B1 should be the same. We shoul=
d merge these two definition and use one term in the whole draft.<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph">
<span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp; <span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------OK, We will perfect it in next v=
ersion.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph">
<span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">3=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 2, =A1=B0DEC=
ADE-Enabled Vuze=A1=B1 is covered by =A1=B0DECADE Client=A1=B1. In the whol=
e draft, we could either use two terms =A8C =A1=B0DECADE-enabled Vuze=A1=B1=
 &amp; =A1=B0DECADE-enable PPLS=A1=B1, or just use =A1=B0DECADE Client=A1=
=B1 for general purpose.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph">
<span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
 &nbsp;<span style=3D"color:#0070C0">------OK, We will perfect it in next v=
ersion.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph">
<span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">4=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think Section 6 needs=
 more editorial work.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<span style=3D=
"color:#0070C0">------OK, We will perfect it in next version.<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">5=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 6, I think w=
e=A1=AFd better to call it =A1=B0content distribution platform for CP=A1=B1=
 rather than =A1=B0ALTO&#43;DECADE platform=A1=B1, as we don=A1=AFt focus o=
n describing an ALTO&#43;DECADE architecture in this draft.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<span style=3D=
"color:#0070C0">------OK, We will perfect it in next version.<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">6=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 6, we=A1=AFd=
 better to use DECADE service provider rather than ISP in Figure 4. We also=
 need more explanation to Figure 4, as the connections are unclear, e.g. ar=
e these data or signaling links? Do we
 need more components such as ALTO server and content origins?<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<span style=3D"color=
:#0070C0">------OK, We will perfect it in next version.<o:p></o:p></span></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">7=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 7, test sett=
ings for distribution platform for CP is missing, e.g. how many and which t=
ypes of servers are used, which CPs are tested?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<span style=3D=
"color:#0070C0">------OK, We will add test setting in next version.<o:p></o=
:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">8=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 8, I think w=
e=A1=AFd better to give a content distribution performance example, e.g. ho=
w long to complete a content distribution, to how many users, how about the=
 bandwidth usage?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<span style=3D=
"color:#0070C0">------OK, We will perfect it in next version.</span><o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=
=CE=CC=E5">=B7=A2=BC=FE=C8=CB<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5"> decade-=
bounces@ietf.org [mailto:decade-bounces@ietf.org]
</span><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5">=B4=FA=
=B1=ED </span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-famil=
y:=CB=CE=CC=E5">Chenxiaohui<br>
</span><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5">=B7=A2=
=CB=CD=CA=B1=BC=E4<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></span></b><span lang=3D"EN-=
US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5"> 2012</span><span s=
tyle=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:=CB=CE=CC=E5">=C4=EA<span lang=3D"EN-U=
S">1</span>=D4=C2<span lang=3D"EN-US">11</span>=C8=D5<span lang=3D"EN-US">
 9:13<br>
</span><b>=CA=D5=BC=FE=C8=CB<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></b><span lang=3D"=
EN-US"> decade@ietf.org<br>
</span><b>=B3=AD=CB=CD<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US"=
> Lijiang Chen; Weihanyu; Hongqiang Liu; Andy Huang(Zhigang)<br>
</span><b>=D6=F7=CC=E2<span lang=3D"EN-US">:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US"=
> [decade] </span>=B4=F0=B8=B4<span lang=3D"EN-US">: WG review of draft-iet=
f-decade-integration-example-02<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Thanks for your comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think the document co=
uld generally be improved if the following information were added (or expan=
ded):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e actual protocols used in the different integration scenarios should be gi=
ven.&nbsp; For example, what were the underlying protocols for the =A1=B0P2=
P LiveStreaming Client (P2PLS)=A1=B1? &nbsp;&nbsp;As an example,
 HTTP/TCP are the protocols used for web browsing.&nbsp; What were the prot=
ocols for P2PLS?&nbsp; Also some details for the protocols should be given =
even for the =A1=B0BitTorrent=A1=B1 example.&nbsp; As not all readers will =
have knowledge of how BitTorrent works.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e file/object naming scheme used in the different integration scenarios sho=
uld be given.&nbsp; This is a critical part of DECADE and the approached us=
ed in the experiments for naming must be
 given for a complete understanding of what was done.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2;text-autospace:none">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;;color:red"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font=
:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In the Intro (and elsew=
here) there needs to be some clear references to DECADE WG documents such a=
s the Problem Statement, Requirements or Architecture (and the associated c=
oncepts defined in those documents).&nbsp;
 Note that there can be deviations from the concepts defined in the DECADE =
WG documents, but these need to be clearly explained.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;
<span style=3D"color:red">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some detailed comments =
on specific sections:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Abstract is a bit d=
etailed and it is hard to understand.&nbsp; For example there should not be=
 a list (points 1-6) in an abstract.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In section 2.9 (Remote =
Controller), I did not understand what =A1=B0a major operating platform=A1=
=B1 meant?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e =A1=B0limited connection slot=A1=B1 issue (sec. 4.2.1).&nbsp; My understa=
nding is that a DECADE client will have an association with a given DECADE =
server, and not every other possible server.&nbsp; Is
 this the assumption that was used in the integration?<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Editorial: The word DEC=
ADE is spelled incorrectly in Figure 2 and 3.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e relation between a DECADE client and server in the ALTO &#43; DECADE inte=
gration (section 6)?&nbsp; Does ALTO get invoked for both PUT and GET from =
a DECADE client?&nbsp; Or is it only for a GET?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-18.=
0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Wingdings"><=
span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=EC<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times =
New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Similarly, I did not un=
derstand the Performance Analysis of the ALTO&#43;DECADE Performance Analys=
is (section 8.2.3).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Should better define wh=
at a =A1=B0small instance=A1=B1 is in the Amazon EC2 framework (section 7.2=
.1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">A short Conclusion sect=
ion should be added to the document briefly summarizing the lessons learned=
 and some suggestions for the DECADE design.&nbsp; As right now the conclus=
ions are spread over several sections.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Security section (s=
ec. 9) should not be empty as there must have been some security related as=
sumptions in the integration.&nbsp; For example, was any DECADE client able=
 to read from any DECADE server without
 authentication?&nbsp; Yes or No?&nbsp; Either way this should be described=
.&nbsp; (In section 5.3, for example, there was a reference to an =A1=B0aut=
horization token=A1=B1).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-autospace:none"><span lang=3D"EN-US" s=
tyle=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;
</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:red">&nbsp;----good advice, we w=
ill &nbsp;perfect them next version.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:red">For the comment from Ning Zong, sure, there are some problem as follo=
wing, we will address them next version also.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I also have following comments =
&amp; suggestions:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">9=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 1 =A1=B0Intr=
oduction=A1=B1, it seems that only P2P live streaming is mentioned. We shou=
ld also mention file sharing application (e.g. Vuze) and Content Distributi=
on Platform for CP;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
0)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 2, =A1=B0DEC=
ADE Module=A1=B1 and =A1=B0DECADE Plugin=A1=B1 should be the same. We shoul=
d merge these two definition and use one term in the whole draft.<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
1)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 2, =A1=B0DEC=
ADE-Enabled Vuze=A1=B1 is covered by =A1=B0DECADE Client=A1=B1. In the whol=
e draft, we could either use two terms =A8C =A1=B0DECADE-enabled Vuze=A1=B1=
 &amp; =A1=B0DECADE-enable PPLS=A1=B1, or just use =A1=B0DECADE Client=A1=
=B1 for general purpose.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
2)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think Section 6 needs=
 more editorial work.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
3)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 6, I think w=
e=A1=AFd better to call it =A1=B0content distribution platform for CP=A1=B1=
 rather than =A1=B0ALTO&#43;DECADE platform=A1=B1, as we don=A1=AFt focus o=
n describing an ALTO&#43;DECADE architecture in this draft.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
4)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 6, we=A1=AFd=
 better to use DECADE service provider rather than ISP in Figure 4. We also=
 need more explanation to Figure 4, as the connections are unclear, e.g. ar=
e these data or signaling links? Do we
 need more components such as ALTO server and content origins?<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
5)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 7, test sett=
ings for distribution platform for CP is missing, e.g. how many and which t=
ypes of servers are used, which CPs are tested?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;text-align:justif=
y;text-justify:inter-ideograph;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4"=
>
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
6)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In Section 8, I think w=
e=A1=AFd better to give a content distribution performance example, e.g. ho=
w long to complete a content distribution, to how many users, how about the=
 bandwidth usage?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt">
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0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;"> Songhaibin
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, December 23, 2011 5:06 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Rahman, Akbar'; decade@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: WG review of draft-ietf-decade-integration-example-02<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Hi Akbar,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Thanks for the comments. The authors please discuss/address these=
 comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">BR,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">-Haibin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm =
4.0pt">
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0cm 0cm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fo=
nt-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;"> decade-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:decade-bounces@ietf.o=
rg]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Rahman, Akbar<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, November 29, 2011 3:17 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> decade@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [decade] WG review of draft-ietf-decade-integration-example=
-02<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">As per the request of the DECAD=
E chairs in IETF 82, I did a review of the =A1=B0Integration Examples of DE=
CADE System=A1=B1 (draft-ietf-decade-integration-example-02) and have the f=
ollowing comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Overall, I found the do=
cument very useful in providing excellent insights into how DECADE could be=
 used in a real network.&nbsp; Also, I took it as a good example of =A1=B0r=
unning code=A1=B1 for DECADE.&nbsp; Thanks for the good
 work!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I think the document co=
uld generally be improved if the following information were added (or expan=
ded):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e actual protocols used in the different integration scenarios should be gi=
ven.&nbsp; For example, what were the underlying protocols for the =A1=B0P2=
P LiveStreaming Client (P2PLS)=A1=B1? &nbsp;&nbsp;As an example,
 HTTP/TCP are the protocols used for web browsing.&nbsp; What were the prot=
ocols for P2PLS?&nbsp; Also some details for the protocols should be given =
even for the =A1=B0BitTorrent=A1=B1 example.&nbsp; As not all readers will =
have knowledge of how BitTorrent works.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some more details of th=
e file/object naming scheme used in the different integration scenarios sho=
uld be given.&nbsp; This is a critical part of DECADE and the approached us=
ed in the experiments for naming must be
 given for a complete understanding of what was done.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In the Intro (and elsew=
here) there needs to be some clear references to DECADE WG documents such a=
s the Problem Statement, Requirements or Architecture (and the associated c=
oncepts defined in those documents).&nbsp;
 Note that there can be deviations from the concepts defined in the DECADE =
WG documents, but these need to be clearly explained.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 leve=
l1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Sym=
bol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=A4<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;=
Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Some detailed comments =
on specific sections:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Abstract is a bit d=
etailed and it is hard to understand.&nbsp; For example there should not be=
 a list (points 1-6) in an abstract.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">In section 2.9 (Remote =
Controller), I did not understand what =A1=B0a major operating platform=A1=
=B1 meant?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e =A1=B0limited connection slot=A1=B1 issue (sec. 4.2.1).&nbsp; My understa=
nding is that a DECADE client will have an association with a given DECADE =
server, and not every other possible server.&nbsp; Is
 this the assumption that was used in the integration?<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Editorial: The word DEC=
ADE is spelled incorrectly in Figure 2 and 3.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">I did not understand th=
e relation between a DECADE client and server in the ALTO &#43; DECADE inte=
gration (section 6)?&nbsp; Does ALTO get invoked for both PUT and GET from =
a DECADE client?&nbsp; Or is it only for a GET?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:108.0pt;text-indent:-18.=
0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:Wingdings"><=
span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">=A1=EC<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times =
New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Similarly, I did not un=
derstand the Performance Analysis of the ALTO&#43;DECADE Performance Analys=
is (section 8.2.3).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">Should better define wh=
at a =A1=B0small instance=A1=B1 is in the Amazon EC2 framework (section 7.2=
.1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">A short Conclusion sect=
ion should be added to the document briefly summarizing the lessons learned=
 and some suggestions for the DECADE design.&nbsp; As right now the conclus=
ions are spread over several sections.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courie=
r New&quot;"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">o<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-US">The Security section (s=
ec. 9) should not be empty as there must have been some security related as=
sumptions in the integration.&nbsp; For example, was any DECADE client able=
 to read from any DECADE server without
 authentication?&nbsp; Yes or No?&nbsp; Either way this should be described=
.&nbsp; (In section 5.3, for example, there was a reference to an =A1=B0aut=
horization token=A1=B1).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">That=A1=AFs all.<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Akbar<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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The document draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 is held up due to a muc=
h deeper review I undertook as document shepherd. I need to communicate a l=
ot of changes and questions back to the authors as a result of this review.=
 I don't think this document is ready for your review at this time.

-- Rich


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Dear DECADE WG Chairs,

As I mentioned in a previous email, the Applications Area Directorate=20
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Rich, thanks for letting us know!

On 1/19/12 3:48 PM, Woundy, Richard wrote:
> The document draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 is held up due to a much deeper review I undertook as document shepherd. I need to communicate a lot of changes and questions back to the authors as a result of this review. I don't think this document is ready for your review at this time.
> 
> -- Rich
> 
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: S Moonesamy [mailto:sm+ietf@elandsys.com]
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> To: Haibin Song <haibin.song@huawei.com>; Woundy, Richard
> Cc: appsdir@ietf.org <appsdir@ietf.org>; decade@ietf.org <decade@ietf.org>
> Subject: RE: Apps review of DECADE drafts
> 
> Dear DECADE WG Chairs,
> 
> As I mentioned in a previous email, the Applications Area Directorate 
> has identified draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 and 
> draft-ietf-decade-reqs-05 for review.  Could you please tell me when 
> the revision of draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 will be submitted?
> 
> Regards,
> S. Moonesamy
> 
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate
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Dear DECADE WG Chairs,

As I mentioned in a previous email, the Applications Area Directorate 
has identified draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 and 
draft-ietf-decade-reqs-05 for review.  Could you please tell me when 
the revision of draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 will be submitted?

Regards,
S. Moonesamy

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Hi Rich,
At 14:48 19-01-2012, Woundy, Richard wrote:
>The document draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-04 is held up due 
>to a much deeper review I undertook as document shepherd. I need to 
>communicate a lot of changes and questions back to the authors as a 
>result of this review. I don't think this document is ready for your 
>review at this time.

Thanks for the quick reply.

Will draft-ietf-decade-reqs-05 and the revision of 
draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement be sent for IETF Last Call simultaneously?

Regards,
S. Moonesamy  


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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for
this draft (for background on APPSDIR, please see
=
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate)=
.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Gruesse, Carsten
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Document: draft-ietf-decade-arch-04
Title: DECADE Architecture
Reviewer: Carsten Bormann
Review Date: 2012-01-22


** Summary: This draft is not ready for publication as an
Informational RFC and should be revised before publication.

Note: I decided to review this by reading the architecture document
only, to see whether it is able to stand alone.  Note that this
implies that the review is likely incomplete.  Given the cluster of
entangled documents this is a part of, I recommend a concerted review
of the next version(s).


** Major Issues:

A1) General:

Although this is not explicitly said in the introduction, the
objective of this document appears to be both:
-- to provide an architecture that will constrain and guide the
   further work of DECADE;
-- to present the architecture in an introductory, reasonably
   accessible way, which will facilitate understanding the specific
   protocol specifications envisaged.

These two (prescriptive vs. descriptive) objectives of this document
do conflict, and the conflict is not always managed.

In particular, the document goes to considerable detail in describing
the protocols, but it is not clear whether this is just illustrating
the architecture (as I would expect in an architecture document) or
actually constraining the protocol design.  E.g.,
-- for the write-through PUT (section 7.1), it is specified that just
   one target server can be given to the intermediary.  Is this an
   accident or deliberate?
-- For GET, returning the data is optional (section 7.1)?
-- "DRP is specified as being carried through extension fields within
   an SDT (e.g., HTTP headers)." (section 6).  Is it always extension
   fields or is it sometimes the body?  (Well, the HTTP body could be
   called an extension field of HTTP, too.)  I think the point is that
   the DRP data are mostly piggy-backed on SDT.  Why not say that.

A1a)
There are a number of places where the architecture is not yet
explicit about the role of entities and data objects that it requires
to function.  Again, the document needs to decide for itself whether
these entities and objects are illustrative only or part of the
prescriptive elements of the architecture.

E.g.,
-- is the "abstract specification of ... operation" in 6.2.1 and
   6.2.2 only provided for illustration, or is the architecture limiting
   itself to exactly these two operations?
-- There appear to be some implicit parameters such as application
   context?
-- Or, for a PUT, how are metadata such as the expiration time
   established?
-- Is the introductory sentence of 7 intended to limit the
   server-to-server interaction to a pull model ("download")?
-- What is the semantics of a third-party (client-to-server-to-server)
   GET with respect to the middle server?  Is the initiating server
   supposed to execute a local PUT with the result?  Or what is its
   role?

A2) Terminology:

The architecture defines a number of terms quite deliberately (section
2), but misses out on a few important ones.
Some important roles in the architecture (such as the ticket
generating server) are only introduced cursorily, without considering
the implications of their existence to the architecture.

A2a)
"user" (4.5.2) appears to be a central concept of the architecture,
but is fleshed out only very thinly.  A related concept might or might
not be "account", which is only touched on, or "principal" (used in
the appendices only).

A2b)
4.5.2 introduces an "Application Provider" that is used nowhere else.
What is that?  Is that an important functional entity?

A2c)
The capability architecture (the "token" as a data structure, and its
interaction with various functional elements) is a central element of
the DECADE architecture.
-- See RFC 4949 with respect to the usage of the term "token".
-- The "token generating server" appears to be important, but is not
   called out in the list of functional elements in 2.
   How does a client select/find one?
-- The document repeatedly (5.4, 6.1.2) states that a DECADE client
   must trust the token generating server, but never indicates why.
-- Obviously, the DECADE servers need to trust the tokens.  This is
   not discussed.
-- The token is said to contain data object names, but then it is also
   meant to be useful for a "batch of operations", some of which may
   concern data the names of which we don't know yet.
-- How is it useful to "allow a DECADE Server to detect when a token
   is used multiple times" (what is the server supposed to do when it =
has
   detected that?)?
-- Do tokens need a revocation mechanism?

A2d)
Sections 4.3 and 6.1.3 use a concept called "application context".
Apparently application contexts are quite important for DECADE
operations (e.g., 6.1.3 makes clear that "objects" are always
associated with an application context); what are these application
contexts?  Who creates, deletes them?  Resource control, access
control for them?  (Some operations seem to have an application
context as an implicit parameter. Assumptions like these need to be
spelled out.)

A2e)
3.1: "Let S(A) denote A's DECADE storage server."  This concept of
ownership is never explained.  Is it important?

A3)
The appendices provide relatively raw existence proofs that are likely
to be overtaken by events in a year from now.  Much of these are
(overly) brief mini-tutorials for the relevant protocols.  Appendix
A.3 is about a protocol that itself does not seem to be fully cooked
at this point.
This is certainly useful material to collect for the WG, but it is not
clear that these should be part of this document.  There are lots of
additional issues in these appendices, e.g.:

A.1.1.1)
HTTPS (where is the reference?) is a security protocol, but does not
provide access control.
A.1.1.3)
This would need to (at least briefly) examine the interactions between
HTTP caching and DECADE protocol operation.
A.1.3)
This specifies (?) "In the reply, the hash is sent in an ETAG header."
What kind of response are we talking about? 304?  Is this really
part of the architecture?
A.1.5)
Why should the transfer protocol provide the complete access control
mechanism?  Access control is a local function.  Transfer protocols
just have to make sure the necessary parameters are in place (and/or
may be used for transferring the parameters in the first place).
When talking about OAUTH 2, add the relevant reference(s).

I have not undertaken to review the appendices in any detail.

A4)
Is the architectural thinking converged enough on issues of naming?
E.g.,
-- 4.3 seems to imply "resource identifiers" are being used that are
   the same between different servers.
-- 5.3.1 seems to support this by building names in a predictable way
   out of hashes.  In particular, "a DECADE client knows the
   name of a data object before it is completely stored at the DECADE
   server."
-- However, if DECADE is to be used for real-time interactions, some
   thought needs to be given on the point in time when hash-based data
   identifiers/names can be generated.  A DECADE client that PUTs
   video to a DECADE server may not have the complete byte-string of a
   slice in hand when it starts sending, so it can't send a hash-based
   name at the start.  This is likely to have some impact on the
   protocol mappings possible.  (It also makes it less clear that
   there is a good reason not to support name generation by the
   server right from the start.)
-- A.2.3 says "DECADE may find the concept of collections to be
   useful if there is a need to support directory like structures in
   DECADE.  It also discusses WebDAV's MOVE and COPY operations.
   What is the point when the name uniquely follows from the content?
-- 6.1.2 says tokens include "Permitted objects (e.g., names of data
   objects that may be read or written)" and "It is possible for DRP
   to allow tokens to apply to a batch of operations to reduce
   communication overhead required between DECADE Clients."  Does this
   require prescience on what the hash values of future slices will
   be?

A5)
Authorization based in IP addresses (6.1.2 "permitted clients") is
rarely appropriate.

A6)
Much of the information discussed in 6.1.3 will be PII.  The
architecture must discuss how the protocols will provide the
flexibility to cope with different data protection and surveillance
regulations.  For instance, the level of logging performed by a server
may be an important parameter that must be indicated to the client
before it starts operation, or some of it may conversely be
clandestine.

A7)
Please rewrite section 9 from scratch.  There is no need to explain
fundamentals of cryptographic data structures (assuming that the next
version will use terms that can be referenced properly).  Instead,
actual security considerations of the DECADE architecture must be
discussed, e.g., the cache discovery attack mentioned above.  More
importantly, there needs to be a discussion of the threat model, the
trust relationships envisaged, etc.  Please see RFC 3552.


** Minor Issues:

M1) Terminology

Beyond the problems listed above, the draft needs an overhaul in its
terminology. E.g.:

-- it uses "TTL" as a term for an object expiration time, without ever
   explaining the term.  (What is actually meant is an expiration
   time, *NOT* a lifetime/duration or hop count that would be
   analogous to IPv4's use of the abreviation.)

-- using "data object" as the term for the things saved in a DECADE
   server is highly confusing.  It is not always clear whether the raw
   byte string or the combination of this and certain metadata is
   meant.  Do NOT use "contents" in its plural form as a synonym for
   "data objects" (4.2).  Indeed, the document would improve by using
   "content" very sparingly, only in the overview sections, and being
   precise about data objects otherwise.  (It would be preferable to
   have a name for the "data objects" that is distinctive from the
   plain English meaning of that term.  E.g., slice.)
   E.g., while we learn about data objects that they are immutable and
   not all of the same size, we need consistent terms for the various
   kinds of metadata used, such as the DECADE metadata that are used in
   managing the localized storage vs. those metadata that would be
   visible in the SDT.
   "If an application wishes to store such metadata persistently
   within DECADE, it can be stored within data objects
   themselves."  (What does that mean?  New, separate objects?  Within
   the existing ones?  In the slice byte-string itself?)

-- "data transport protocol" contains the term "transport protocol"
   which means something different in the IETF.  We tend to use
   "transfer protocol" for the purpose intended.

-- 4.4 introduces a "location".  What is that?  A DECADE server?

-- "Traffic De-duplication" is a seriously misleading term for
   validated cache access.  The whole point of the validation protocol
   in 8.2.1.2 appears to be to protect the cache at S against a
   colluding pair of A and R, under the assumption that A is not
   authorized to access S' copy of the object but compensates by being
   authorized to access R's copy.  Since R can (1) indicate
   authorization and (2) prove to S it does have the data, both using
   the challenge-response protocol, S can fulfill the request for R.
   If that is the point, please say that.  Please note that, from this
   exchange, A and R can still extract the fact that S had a copy.
   Discuss security implications of this discovery.

4.1)
"However, the architecture may allow for more-than-one data transport
protocols to be used."
This *is* the architecture.  It either allows it or not.
(BTW, shouldn't the architecture also say something about
negotiation/capability discovery?)

4.5.1)
"The Storage Provider delegates the management of the resources at a
DECADE server to one or more applications."
What does that really mean?  (And are the latter "Content Distribution
Applications"?)

5.4)
Is this really a digital signature?
(Please reserve the term "digitally signed" for actual signatures, as
opposed to including a kind of peer entity authentication that is
directed towards a specific recipient.  See RFC 4949.)

6.1)
"...DRP allows one instance of such an application, e.g., an
application endpoint, to apply access control and resource sharing
policies on each of them." (them =3D DECADE servers.)  That last
sentence is rather ominous.  Is this completely trivial, or does it
actually mean anything?  Is DRP maybe a reliable multicast protocol
for control data?

6.1.4)
The term "MIME type" has been superseded by "media type" (please also
reference the relevant RFCs here).  It is also not clear to me what
that media type means in case of a slice of a larger resource
representation.  Why is a media type not copied with the object?

7.1)
"It is also assumed that the operation performed at the remote server
is the same as the operation in the original request."
Explain "the same" -- are all parameters identical?  Or is it just GET
vs. PUT?


** Nits: [list editorial issues such as typographical errors, preferably =
by section number]

1)
"Content Distribution Applications" in the first sentence is not
defined.  Point to 2.6.

4.2)
"are referred as" -> "are referred to as"

4.3)
"Objects that are stored in a DECADE storage server can be accessed by
DECADE content consumers by a resource identifier"
second by -> via

4.3)
"          Because a DECADE content consumer can access more than one =
storage
           server within a single application context, a data object =
that is
           replicated across different storage servers managed by a =
DECADE
           storage provider, can be accessed by a single identifier."
Non sequitur.
Change to:
>>
A DECADE content consumer may be able to access more than one storage
server within a single application context.  A data object that is
replicated across different storage servers managed by a DECADE
storage provider can still be accessed by a single identifier.
<<
[Now, it is still not quite clear from that sentance whether that is a
MUST (i.e., the whether the architecture mandates that all replicated
copies MUST have the same identifier).]

4.5.2)
"applications granted resources"?
applications being granted resources?
resources granted by applications?

5)
s/principals/principles/
(Just once in the first paragraph; otherwise, principle vs. principal
has been used correctly.)

6.2.2)
defered -> deferred

7.1)
"Note that when a DECADE client invokes a request a DECADE server with
these additional parameters" -- syntax.

8.2.1.1)
"When a DECADE client (A) indicates its DECADE account on a DECADE
server (S) to fetch an object from a remote entity (R) (a DECADE
server or DECADE client)..."  What?  The "account" is asked to fetch
from a "client"?

Ceterum censeo)
RFCs, as any kind of formal technical publication, should use units in
accordance with ISO/IEC 80000, in particular IEC 80000-13.
Replace Mbps by Mbit/s, KB by KiB.


** Random observations:

O1)
The proto writeup says:

> The document was reviewed by DECADE WG members, the WG Chairs, and
> key non-WG contributors, particularly by David E Mcdysan, Borje
> Ohlman, Akbar Rahman, Ning Zong and Dirk Kutscher.

Akbar Rahman and Dirk Kutscher are co-authors of this document, so I
sure hope they have reviewed this document.

O2)
The architecture does not give an argument why multiple SDTs are
needed when all of them are just HTTP anyway.  (Binding the SDT to
multiple underlying protocols creates a lot of headaches that may be
completely unnecessary.  At least they aren't motivated.)
But maybe it is not the job of the architecture document to actually
motivate this highly complexity-inducing generality.

E.g., A.2 alludes to a mapping to WebDAV, but then seems to go on
suggesting modifications to WebDAV to enable that layering.  This
doesn't seem consistent.  Indeed, it seems unlikely that DECADE can
layer cleanly on top of either WebDAV or CDMI.  A more productive view
of these protocols may be as a toolkit to take certain parts from, that
HTTP does not have, and that DECADE does not want to re-invent.
Special care must be taken not to create a chimera, though.

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The following is a (belated) review of
draft-ietf-decade-integration-example-02. Apologies for the delay in
getting this out:

In general, I think the draft has good content and after it is cleaned
up, it would be useful to have in order to record implementation
experience that would be useful for protocol design.

Abstract:
- It seems awkward for an integration examples draft to say that it
describes a DECADE client API (when mentioned in the abstract, it
sounds like that is one of the main ideas of the draft).  I understand
the rationale for discussing it to put the experiments, etc in
context. But I wouldn't mention it in the abstract. In the
introduction, perhaps just say that it is presented for completeness
since there is no standard DECADE Client API yet.
- If the goal is to discuss a general "ALTO+DECADE based file
distribution platform", that sounds like a topic for an entire draft
instead of buried in integration examples. Is that too ambitious to
mention in the abstract?  Perhaps better worded as something like "an
example integration of ALTO and DECADE to support file distribution".

Section 1:
- I'm not sure what "A DECADE server provides ... transport service
with interactive control to DECADE clients" means.  Is it possible to
stick to terminology used in other DECADE drafts where it is
available?
- The way it is stated, "P2PLS" sounds like the name of a client that
is commonly-known and publicly available.  Is it?  If it isn't and it
is something developed internally, then it would be better to state
that.  (I see later that this is specific explicitly in Section 2, but
might be better to reword the introduction along these lines too.)

Section 2:
- Should the section be named "Terminology"?
- Indicate what "storage strategies" means (not clear to me)
- It seems like DECADE Client in draft-ietf-decade-arch-04 is the same
as a DECADE Module in this draft? Would be good to align the
terminology.
- I'm not sure "Remote Controller" is a term that needs to be defined formally.

Section 3:
- Does Generate_Token generate the token locally, or ask the server to
generate the token?  Might be good to indicate that here.

Section 4:
- Opening paragraph does not seem complete.. missing the end of the sentence?
- Use "P2P Peer" instead of "DECADE Peer"?  I think "DECADE Peer" gets
across the wrong message.
- "Neither the DECADE server and the original client knows each
other."  Though I understand what is intended, this sentence is kind
of confusing and probably better left out.


Section 5:
- Why say "or at least not to hurt"?  If there was no benefit for the
application itself, it seems like it would not be adopted.
- The "Limited Connection Slot" section actually talks about 2 other
problems that seem to be distinct. Separate them or change the name of
the section?
- I somewhat disagree with saying that these will be harmful,
particularly when we don't even have a protocol written down yet (or
have been chartered to work on one).  These are very useful data
points to have, and things that should certainly be considered when
developing the protocol, but I'd be concerned that someone reading the
draft draws an incorrect conclusion that we've already written down a
protocol that has known issues with it.  Can that section be reworded
to indicate that these are important design considerations that should
be fed in to protocol development?
- Another thing that P2P software does is have many outstanding
download requests at a time, which reduces the impact of the
additional per-block latency.  It might be worth mentioning this.
- The message-level details (BT_Piece/BT_Request) in the "Interface
between DECADE plugin and Vuze client" paragraph are probably too
technical for the introduction to the technique. Perhaps describe that
part at a higher level... like "the DECADE plugin inserts itself into
the Vuze client by intercepting certain BitTorrent messages, and
adjusting their handling to send/receive data using DECADE instead"?
The following sections that you have fill in this detail already.
- Before discussing the technical details of 5.3, either give a
reference to relevant messages in the BitTorrent protocol, or give a
brief explanation of them here.
- In 5.3, it might be clearer to have a diagram of the traditional
BitTorrent message exchange, and then show the corresponding diagram
including DECADE. That would give the reader a better basis for
comparison (and would help explain the conclusions you draw earlier in
Section 5).

Section 6:
- In the introduction, give an overview of the role of ALTO is in this
architecture instead of jumping directly into the technical details.
- I would have expected an ALTO Server and ALTO Client labeled
somewhere in Figure 4?  In general, Section 6 doesn't indicate
anywhere explicitly where ALTO is used. The only thing I see is
"optimal DECADE server", so I'm assuming that part is decided by ALTO.
 In any case, the usage of ALTO should be documented in the diagrams
and the text.
- "DECADE Server will divide the file into many slides as long as the
length of file, and save them in different folder." -- why split put
each piece in a different folder?  That seems like too much
implementation detail for this.
- In 6.3, is the user using a normal web browser (the description
seems to say it does).  If so, then is the browser assumed to speak
the DECADE protocol?
- In Figure 6, why is the Publisher downloading the data?  Presumably
it was the one who originally put the data there :)  I think that is
supposed to be the end-user instead?


Section 7:
- Indicate why a flash-crowd scenario is used - is it to test
scalability?  or some other reason?  A flash-crowd may not be the
"typical" conditions, so it is worth noting why this was used.
- Indicate what "total supply bandwidth" means.
- "Test Controller" used here, but "Remote Controller" in previous sections?
- The lines in Figure 7 are kind of confusing since it is all squished
together. Is it possible to lay out the figure differently to make it
more clear?
- Figure 8: whats the FTP Server for?

Section 8:
- ".. is configured to the corresponding Ethernet port of DECADE
Server."  I tend to doubt that the link speed of the card was
configured.  IIRC, software was used to limit the maximum bandwidth?
- In 8.1.3, I'm still unclear on what "ALTO+DECADE based file
distribution platform" means. The text in that subsection seems to
have nothing to do with ALTO or DECADE?  (Similar comment for Section
8.2.3).
- "While in the native P2P live streaming system, more than 70% of
peers uploaded in a rate that is much more than streaming rate."  Can
that statement be made more precise?  I'm not sure what "much more"
means here.

Editorial:
- In general, the document could benefit from a thorough review for grammar.
